Kyubey wrote:

Hi.

00:37:994 (4,1) - this jump feels very huge and uncomfortable for this kinda calm part, maybe reduce the distance? k ctrl g the slider
00:39:679 (5,1) - also you could increase spacing here, beats are same did the same thing xD
00:50:129 (7,2) - how about stacking them to make some connection and something like "continued movement later", idk how to express? it https://qb.s-ul.eu/bdS9Bvwc.jpg ooh nice idea, done
01:14:398 (4,1) - isn't it overdone a bit? 01:12:881 (3,1) - slider-note jump is much easier than note-note, and it's almost like the fullscreen jump ya
02:39:174 (2) - i feel like making this slider faster than previous would look cool i tried, but i couldn't come up with something i liked x.x
03:17:601 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this moment doesn't feel different to 01:59:398 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this one for me, so maybe keep the same spacing? well i hear that screeching but imo it's better to leave only the third pattern like this with spacing increased make "the last kiai harder" tru
04:52:994 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - got ya the pp pattern. are you sure you need such a huge diff peak here? honestly it looks just like a sr-boosting pattern, song doesn't sound that intense/agressive to have 7x jumps, really well, i changed it a bit, but im not sure if its really fixed lol. i feel like the jumps work here though because the song builds up intensity here x.x
05:20:297 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i'd say about spacing but last kiais tend to be harder so it's ok, if you change the second moment 03:17:601 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - here to make the third special changed it anyway xD

Shioi wrote:

random mod for my son

jk

Okorin wrote:

congrats, but what exactly is the gimmick in this map, i don't see it. the whole thing seems fairly normal to me