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Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido

Desperate-kun wrote:

[Alarido's Mark]

  1. Disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks, as these are obviously not needed here.
  2. It would be nice to set the Stack Leniency to 9, for consistency with the other diffs.
  3. 00:03:144 - You could make this slidertick use N:C2 sampleset (like Crytalmask did for some sliderticks in his Easy + Normal), because you are missing the clap here, as you are mapping vocals.
  4. 00:06:289 (2) - Add a clap. It's clearly hearable in the music.
  5. 00:08:225 (2) - ^
  6. 00:08:709 (4) - I'd add a clap + Drum Additions here, to get a nice transition to the triplet afterwards.
  7. 00:13:063 (5,6,1) - It looks very ugly that you used different spacings on this triplet. Consider to move 00:13:184 (6) to x:121 y:305, to make it look like this:
    Example
  8. 00:14:031 (2) - Add a clap, as it's hearable in the music.
  9. 00:15:967 (2,3,4,5) - Add claps to these, as they sound very special and have to emphasized with hitsounds. Then, to have a difference to 00:16:935 (6), add Drum Additions on (6).
  10. 00:17:176 (1) - Add a finish at the head? Because it's the start of a new section and it is very emphasized in the music.
  11. 00:30:967 (1) - Add a clap at the head, because it is basically the same sound as 00:31:209 (2). It just sounds good with a clap on it.
  12. 00:31:692 (4) - I'd add a clap + Drum Additions on this note, because it is very emphasized, but it has to differ from 00:31:209 (2) these claps hitsound-wise.
  13. 00:32:418 (7) - Here, I'd also add a clap + Drum Additions at the head, as it would make up a nice transition to the following section.
  14. 00:32:660 (1) - This needs a finish at the head. You can hear it loudly in the music!
  15. 00:33:870 (3) - Add a clap at the head and remove the one at the tail. If you listen carefully to the music, you can hear that this placement of claps would be better. The same applies for the whole section, you always have to move the clap from the white line to the red line before. I'll just list the places for you that need claps:
  16. 00:35:805 - 00:37:741 - 00:39:676 - 00:41:612 - 00:43:547 - 00:45:483 - 00:47:418
  17. 00:48:144 (1) - I'd add a finish at the beginning, as you can loudly hear it.
  18. 00:55:886 (1) - Add a clap on this spinner? It fits with your clap pattern and sounds good.
  19. 00:58:789 (4,5) - I think this rhythm doesn't really fit. There's no stress on that blue line at 00:59:152, so I don't see a reason to map it. In addition, the blue line at 00:58:668 feels like you should (probably) map it. I suggest the following rhythm, or if you disagree, the second rhthm would also be okay: ► Following the Rhythm 2, so it'll not put harshness levels so high. Thanks ^^
    Rhythm 1
    Rhythm 2
  20. 01:11:612 - I think the audio volume of 40% is here for no reason. Change it to 50% to fit better. Also, add a clap at the head, because it is the same sound as 01:11:854 (3).
  21. 01:12:580 (6) - Add a clap here as well (at the head), because of the cymbal sound.
  22. 01:12:822 (7) - I'd suggest you to put a clap + Drum Additions on head + reverse + tail. It makes a nice transition to the following chorus.
  23. 01:13:305 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm seems out of place, as you never simplified the rhythm like that in the previous choruses. What I mean is, you should add a note at 01:13:668, for consistency, because you always did that. ► Added by stacking it with the previous sliderhead.
  24. 01:28:789 (1) - The speed of this slider was not inuitive at all. Basically, your other speed-up sliders worked well, but this one doesn't. There's no easy method to fix it though, without deleting the (beautiful) slidershape... Well, one version would be, just make it x1.0 instead of 2.0 and let the slider end at 01:29:515, because that's basically where the background noise ends. If you build up a nice fade out in audio volume, it should work well. If you don't want to do that, consider to delete the slider ;w; Sorry, but I think it's not readable and I usually can read things. ► Friendlised the SV and turned slider into a little, incipient spiral.

Very impressive mapset! The song sounds hard to map and you've done a good job ^^ The rhythm is nice and it plays fine. I found some issues here and there but overall it's really nice.

Good luck :3
@Crystalmask: The updated file >>> http://puu.sh/8nz4T.zip

@Desperate: Thanks !!!! Fixed every items, pointed in blue the most complex.

Really, I've put a poor hitsounding (while having good symmetries). { Usually, my hitsound sux, so I should attend some classes with Gens and LuigiHann urgently -- what I feel you did it well (: } In addition, I've mapped the diff in a few days (rushing a bit) and with no inspiration (I wanna learn how to map songs that don't make my heart sing, so I would take part on MBC and more).
Thanks for you attention, and hope see you as a BAT member someday (:

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10crystalmask01
Topic Starter
10crystalmask01
Updated.

Oh, I also forgot to mention @Alarido I changed the offset, and timing points in your diff while fixing the map set. And I've already fixed the combo colors, widescreen and any other issues concerning with the song setup and such.

And is it alright if you post the file using [code][/code] here instead next time? I'm not a big fan on opening .zip files... :|
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Updated.

Oh, I also forgot to mention @Alarido I changed the offset, and timing points in your diff while fixing the map set. And I've already fixed the combo colors, widescreen and any other issues concerning with the song setup and such.

And is it alright if you post the file using [code][/code] here instead next time? I'm not a big fan on opening .zip files... :|
Sure (:
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Hi,10mask,M4M here.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Disable the Widescreen Support on all of the difficulties since it's not needed.(Check Easy diff)

[Easy]

Fine.

[Normal]

Fine,too (sorry I couldn"t find any problem.)

[Hard]

00:31:217 (2,3,4,5) - change 1/4 slider reverse? Continuous 5 streams at hard diff is not common,imo.
00:32:184 (7,8,9,10) - ^
01:12:709 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^

[Alarido's Mark]

00:02:547 (3) - Forget add a note? Because this blue line have a vocal here.
00:11:862 (3,4) - This rhythm have a bit strange,I think this rhythm is the same 00:04:362 (4,5) ,suggest can copy the rhythm to place it.
00:39:805 (7) - Follow the vocal,I think you can add a note here,have a rap feeling.(Make this diff like ins diff.)
00:41:741 (4) - ^
00:43:434 (8) - ^
00:45:128 (4) - ^
00:42:346 (5) - If 00:40:410 (1) have add clap in end,then I think this should be place clap in end here.
00:50:813 (5) - Add a reverse follow the rap vocal?
01:22:023 (3) - ^
01:00:491 (3) - As the same 00:11:862. (Or you can add a note this here)
01:28:797 (4) - Because have a speed change,so I think set NC is good better.

Overall so good (escp Ez and Nm diff),so I shoot one star for you.Good luck ranked !

this is my map (no my signature map) : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/168253
10crystalmask01
Topic Starter
10crystalmask01

smallboat wrote:

Hi,10mask,M4M here.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Disable the Widescreen Support on all of the difficulties since it's not needed.(Check Easy diff) Oops, fixed.

[Easy]

Fine.

[Normal]

Fine,too (sorry I couldn"t find any problem.) XD

[Hard]

00:31:217 (2,3,4,5) - change 1/4 slider reverse? Continuous 5 streams at hard diff is not common,imo. It's fine.
00:32:184 (7,8,9,10) - ^ ^
01:12:709 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ ^

this is my map (no my signature map) : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/168253
Thank you, I'll get to your map ASAP. ;)
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido

smallboat wrote:

Hi,10mask,M4M here.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Disable the Widescreen Support on all of the difficulties since it's not needed.(Check Easy diff)

(....)

[Alarido's Mark]

00:02:547 (3) - Forget add a note? Because this blue line have a vocal here.
00:11:862 (3,4) - This rhythm have a bit strange,I think this rhythm is the same 00:04:362 (4,5) ,suggest can copy the rhythm to place it. ► Done something else, but in pursue if same rhythm suggestion.
00:39:805 (7) - Follow the vocal,I think you can add a note here,have a rap feeling.(Make this diff like ins diff.)
00:41:741 (4) - ^
00:43:434 (8) - ^ ► Changed rhythms here and near, so this place got filled.
00:45:128 (4) - ^
00:42:346 (5) - If 00:40:410 (1) have add clap in end,then I think this should be place clap in end here.
00:50:813 (5) - Add a reverse follow the rap vocal?
01:22:023 (3) - ^ ► The same feels not applying here, since it speaks something like "bo-tsu-ka" or "ho-tsu-ka", the "bo" (or "ho") feels falling at end of 01:22:023 (3) - while the "tsu" feels falling at the begin of 01:22:507 (4) - and between them has no voice burst (consonant sound). Therefore, not added.
01:00:491 (3) - As the same 00:11:862. (Or you can add a note this here)
01:28:797 (4) - Because have a speed change,so I think set NC is good better.

Overall so good (escp Ez and Nm diff),so I shoot one star for you.Good luck ranked !

this is my map (no my signature map) : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/168253
@smallboat > Thanks (:

@Crystalmask > The update below ▼ ↓

:: Alarido's Mark ::
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: ~Asterisk~ (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57580
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.9
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
Timestamp: 201404261328

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 1693,17176,32660,48144,57822,69434,73305,88789
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:*~Asterisk~
TitleUnicode:*~アスタリスク~
Artist:Orange Range
ArtistUnicode:Orange Range
Creator:10crystalmask01
Version:Alarido's Mark
Source:Bleach
Tags:Opening 1 Ichigo Rukia Orihime Uryū Chad TV Size Alarido
BeatmapID:409540
BeatmapSetID:167694

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:2.1
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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206,190,42346,2,0,P|256:203|306:190,2,105,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,108,43071,2,0,P|92:100|60:104,1,52.5
84,172,43313,2,0,P|61:183|41:208,1,52.5
106,241,43555,2,0,P|98:265|122:349,1,105
225,278,44039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,348,44281,6,0,L|380:336,1,52.5
388,272,44523,2,0,L|440:260,1,52.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,196,44765,2,0,P|451:144|429:97,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,58,45128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,52,45249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,136,45491,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,176,45733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,52,45975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,12,46217,6,0,P|128:32|96:68,1,105
72,192,46700,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,280,46942,2,0,P|256:316|352:280,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,47668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,68,47910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,48152,6,0,L|188:56,1,52.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,120,48394,2,0,L|324:120,1,52.5
240,188,48636,2,0,L|188:188,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,252,48878,2,0,L|324:252,1,52.5
212,296,49120,2,0,P|164:324|116:324,1,105
36,224,49604,6,0,L|56:176,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,148,49846,2,0,L|132:100,1,52.5
188,72,50088,2,0,L|208:24,1,52.5
264,52,50330,2,0,P|276:100|324:124,1,105,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,92,50813,2,0,L|496:72,5,52.5
323,124,51539,2,0,P|284:168|276:212,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,312,52023,6,0,P|395:268|403:224,1,105,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,88,52507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,88,52628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,88,52749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,52991,2,0,L|256:108,2,52.5
124,88,53475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,88,53596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,88,53717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,208,53959,6,0,P|96:256|148:264,1,105
256,208,54442,2,0,L|256:260,2,52.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,265,54926,2,0,P|415:256|428:208,1,105
312,152,55410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,104,55531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,152,55652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55894,12,8,57346,0:0:0:0:
116,120,57830,22,0,P|172:124|204:92,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,58192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,92,58313,2,0,P|346:127|397:121,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,58797,2,0,P|210:193|192:244,1,105
256,308,59281,2,0,P|302:287|320:236,1,105
216,104,59765,6,0,L|172:72,1,52.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,44,60007,2,0,P|56:72|60:112,1,105,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,60491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,209,60612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
59,272,60733,2,0,P|61:322|108:340,1,105
173,310,61096,2,0,L|216:280,1,52.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,192,61459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,80,61700,6,0,L|392:32,2,52.5,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,144,62184,2,0,L|476:120,2,52.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,240,62668,2,0,L|476:264,2,52.5
364,304,63152,2,0,L|392:352,2,52.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,172,63636,2,0,L|312:120,1,52.5
236,120,63878,2,0,L|184:136,1,52.5
184,212,64120,2,0,L|200:264,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,264,64362,2,0,L|328:248,1,52.5
392,212,64604,5,0,0:0:0:0:
392,144,64725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,88,64846,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,56,64967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,56,65088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,88,65209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,144,65330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,212,65450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,276,65571,6,0,B|116:308|148:300|176:292|204:296|204:296|224:308|224:324|212:336,1,157.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,324,66055,2,0,B|288:324|288:308|308:296|308:296|336:292|364:300|396:308|424:276,1,157.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,204,66539,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,66781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,80,67023,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,204,67265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,280,67507,6,0,P|200:296|164:320,2,52.5,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,140,67991,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,140,68112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,140,68233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,280,68475,2,0,P|312:296|348:320,2,52.5
180,200,68959,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,200,69200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,60,69442,6,0,B|430:60|430:60|462:104,2,105,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,140,70168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,60,70410,2,0,B|81:60|81:60|49:104,2,105,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,140,71136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,244,71378,6,0,L|112:284,1,52.5
216,292,71620,2,0,L|200:349,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,292,71862,2,0,L|311:349,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,244,72104,2,0,L|400:284,1,52.5
352,156,72346,2,0,L|408:144,1,52.5
160,156,72588,2,0,L|104:144,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,92,72830,2,0,L|256:36,2,52.5,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,244,73313,6,0,P|173:290|128:306,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,140,73676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,140,73797,2,0,P|338:93|383:77,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,140,74281,2,0,P|173:93|128:77,1,105
304,244,74765,2,0,P|338:290|383:306,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,195,75249,6,0,P|462:144|430:104,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,56,75733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,136,75975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,136,76217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,56,76459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,104,76700,2,0,P|50:144|52:196,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,276,77184,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,292,77305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,308,77426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,77668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,332,77789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,77910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,276,78152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,292,78273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,308,78394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,78636,6,0,L|380:180,1,52.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,192,78878,2,0,L|132:180,1,52.5
300,112,79120,2,0,L|340:72,1,52.5
212,112,79362,2,0,L|172:72,1,52.5
256,240,79604,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,128,79846,2,0,P|376:80|332:36,1,105
172,39,80330,2,0,P|137:76|132:128,1,105,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,80813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,296,81055,6,0,L|438:248,3,52.5,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,176,81539,2,0,P|444:132|400:92,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,60,82023,2,0,L|256:116,2,52.5
110,92,82507,2,0,P|71:126|56:176,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,280,82991,6,0,P|172:280|216:252,1,105
306,131,83475,2,0,P|256:117|206:131,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,252,83959,2,0,P|340:280|392:280,1,105
455,175,84442,2,0,P|444:128|404:92,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,84926,6,0,L|256:140,2,52.5
132,192,85410,2,0,L|204:192,2,52.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,85894,2,0,L|256:244,2,52.5
380,192,86378,2,0,L|308:192,2,52.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,86862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,152,87104,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,220,87225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,87346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,288,87467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,272,87588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,220,87709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,152,87830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,88071,6,0,L|152:48,2,52.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,92,88555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,128,88676,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,192,88797,22,0,B|208:261|232:311|305:326|350:295|344:240|276:216|292:256,1,236.250009012223,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
10crystalmask01
Topic Starter
10crystalmask01
Update, thank you :)

Wow, you update really fast!
luxoDeh
1,497 posts
Joined February 2012
luxoDeh
EASY

00:38:475 (2) - maybe just move the last point of this slider one grid up to make t point perfectly to the next note
00:55:410 (4) - move one grid right to place it exactly in the y axe
00:59:765 (2,1) - this blancket can be enphatized a bit better
01:08:475 (4,1) - blancket can be improved
01:10:410 (2,3) - these have not exactly the same inclination
Nice diff :3

NORMAL

00:37:749 (3,4) - make them with the same inclination?
01:02:426 (2) - maybe this should end at 01:02:910 - to fit the vocals better?

HARD

00:36:297 (4,1) - I suggest to ctrl+g these in this way for a better flow:
SPOILER
01:01:459 (6,1) - make a better blancket
good diff, fun to play too :3

ALARIDO'S MARK

01:00:491 (3,4,5,6) - try this rhythm, it's more clear imo.
SPOILER
01:28:797 (1) - you sure this should not end at 01:29:039 - ? :/

not much to say, the map is good :)
good luck
10crystalmask01
Topic Starter
10crystalmask01

luxoDeh wrote:

EASY

00:38:475 (2) - maybe just move the last point of this slider one grid up to make t point perfectly to the next note Alright.
00:55:410 (4) - move one grid right to place it exactly in the y axe No ._.
00:59:765 (2,1) - this blancket can be enphatized a bit better ^
01:08:475 (4,1) - blancket can be improved Not going to bother sorry.
01:10:410 (2,3) - these have not exactly the same inclination Ok, it should bee good now.
Nice diff :3

NORMAL

00:37:749 (3,4) - make them with the same inclination? Nah.
01:02:426 (2) - maybe this should end at 01:02:910 - to fit the vocals better? Did something else here.

HARD

00:36:297 (4,1) - I suggest to ctrl+g these in this way for a better flow:
SPOILER
No, it makes a really bad drop flow here.
01:01:459 (6,1) - make a better blanket Meh, looks good enough.
good diff, fun to play too :3

not much to say, the map is good :)
good luck
Thank you! ;)
Lari
367 posts
Joined June 2013
Lari
Hai~
From modding queue

[Easy]
00:09:442 (1) - move x: 108 / y :152
00:52:023 (1) - DS
01:06:055 (1) - move x: 216 y:288

[Normal]
00:07:749 (5) - DS
00:10:168 (2) - ^
00:13:313 (1) - ^
00:21:055 (1) - move x:164 y:208
00:32:184 (4) - DS
00:51:055 (5) - move x:404 y:196 + 00:51:781 (6) - move x: 352 y:96
01:01:700 - change Rhythm ?
★



[Hard]
00:51:539 (3,1) - change?
★



[Alarido's Mark]
00:10:894 (5) - move x:140 y:276
00:37:507 (4) - move x:232 y:148
00:58:797 (4) - move x:256 y:148 + 00:59:765 (1) - move x:204 y:92


:arrow: i'm sorry that do modding few diffs

Good luck ヾ(๑╹◡╹)ﾉ
10crystalmask01
Topic Starter
10crystalmask01

[ Karen ] wrote:

Hai~
From modding queue

[Easy]
00:09:442 (1) - move x: 108 / y :152 Fine =_=
00:52:023 (1) - DS What about it? o.o
01:06:055 (1) - move x: 216 y:288 No.

[Normal]
00:07:749 (5) - DS Fixed.
00:10:168 (2) - ^ ???
00:13:313 (1) - ^ Fixed.
00:21:055 (1) - move x:164 y:208 No.
00:32:184 (4) - DS What about it? o.o
00:51:055 (5) - move x:404 y:196 + 00:51:781 (6) - move x: 352 y:96 Doesn't make a difference imo.
01:01:700 - change Rhythm ? Did something else here.
★



[Hard]
00:51:539 (3,1) - change? As in angle these notes more right? Sure, makes the overlap look neater anyways.
★

:arrow: i'm sorry that do modding few diffs

Good luck ヾ(๑╹◡╹)ﾉ
It's alright :) I know English isn't your primary language, so it's no biggie.

Thanks a lot for taking a look at my beat map!
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~
thanks for M4M!

[General]
  1. artst: ORANGE RANGE
  2. Combocolor 1 and 4 are too similar to distinguish
  3. combocolor 2 and 3 are same as above
  4. outro is too short, imo...
[Easy]
  1. 00:35:088 (3) - 1/1 rhythm is better, imo
[Normal]
  1. 00:02:426 (2,3) - I prefer the following pattern
  2. 00:10:168 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:42:346 (4,5,6) - it is better to make parallel
    SPOILER

    324,188,42346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    359,236,42588,2,0,L|393:285,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    500,229,43313,2,0,L|430:131,1,120
  4. 01:02:668- add a note
  5. 01:15:249 (4,5) - I prefer the same rhythm as 01:13:313 (1,2,3) -
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:701 (1) - I prefer the pattern following vocal
  2. 00:09:442 (1) - ^
  3. 00:57:830 (1) - ^
  4. 01:05:571 (1) - ^
  5. 01:13:313 (1) - ^
  6. 01:21:055 (1) - ^
  7. 00:04:483 (3) - I prefer the pattern following vocal
  8. 00:12:346 (3) - ^
  9. 01:00:733 (3) - ^
  10. 01:16:217 (3) - ^
  11. 00:17:184 (1) - x:88 y:56
  12. 00:35:934- add a note
[Alarido's Mark]
  1. 00:50:813 (5) - instead of reverse slider, I prefer the 1/4slider's chain like 00:49:604 (1,2,3) -
  2. 01:04:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - fine!
long-forgotten tune :D
~Good Luck~
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
rip
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,799 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
...So has the creator vanished from history?
Vhy
678 posts
Joined November 2012
Vhy
what? where is the mapper?
im about to mod this map ;w;
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
uh...
chichigi
83 posts
Joined May 2012
chichigi
Hello from my queue

Nice mapset and well done

[Easy]
SPOILER

really nice and good for beginners. I know because I'm used to watch my 4-yrs old brother play osu lol I know how he hits notes and such

[Normal]

SPOILER

also really nice

[Hard]

good, well-made. nice job there
SPOILER

[Alarido's Mark]
SPOILER

why the sudden SV change? I think it's a bit confusing and a bit uncomfortable for 124 bpm map, where insanes are relatively easy insanes.

well that's what I can tell you, good luck on your map! I used to love this song, but it's really long ago I already forgot the lyrics. >,<
Krfawy
1,374 posts
Joined March 2012
Krfawy
What the hell happened to the modder-mapper? o.o
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
It feels she was wiped from the osu!world.... like in a rapture ><

Now my Insane got orphan ><

(Unless I get three mappers to make easy/normal/hard or at least two mappers to make normal/hard (and I'll make the easy)
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
This map will never rebirth... unless

> I become Andrea (by ranking two maps every month); or
> the mapper's ban be revoked

The former feels clearly easier, even though it's harder.
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
Good memories. Sad memories.

If it was possible, I could take the map to me for getting it ranked, without losing any mods.
BanchoBot
w00t p00t
34,830 posts
Here since the beginning
BanchoBot
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