cause my 1-line posts get ignored (probably would've done that myself lel)
[TK'S Inner Oni]
I would like to hear explanations for why all your 1/6 are 1/6? None of the sounds is actually 1/6 and they also cause inconsistency in a quite consistent and solid map:
00:23:690 (178,179,180,181) - This sound goes until 00:24:065 - actually. It doesn't increase until here, but it last until here. Additionally you find this 00:31:690 - here and 00:32:940 - here. But those aren't 1/6. (Note this is the least disturbing 1/6 in the map because quite honestly in those two last spots it would have played awfully so it makes sense that it's not consistent).
01:17:190 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - 01:20:315 (150,151,152,153) - These are the other 1/6. These too are also just quarter notes that change their pitch but they are not even 1/4 (and yes the rest isn't neither). What happens in the kiai is, that spots like 01:19:940 - are not mapped as 1/6 though, for no reason. And actually /all/ voice samples should be mapped as 1/6 because nothing is different between them.
01:21:815 (167,168,169,170) - This 1/6 also should not exist as the song gives very clear 1/4 here, like in many other spots (01:16:315 - to name one xample). Same with 01:37:815 (350,351,352,353) - , that's clear 1/4, what is different about it from other 1/4 sounds in the song?
also more stuff below:
00:35:440 (287) - Could try kat on this to have the melody like 00:34:940 (283,284,286) - , I don't think the melody going down should change this to a don. Makes a clearer difference.
If applied, obviously change 00:37:440 (305) - 00:39:440 (324) - 00:41:440 (342) -
00:43:440 (363,364) - Same as above, but it's probably better to change these two notes instead of just the first one..
00:59:565 (6,7) - I think you could delete these notes so melody AND drums are emphasized better 00:59:440 (5,8) - here (01:01:565 - there is no note here either)
01:01:815 (17) - Also delete if done above
01:03:814 (28) - ^
01:10:815 (67,68,69) - Suddenly playing against melody ugh. 01:10:815 (67) - Flows pretty badly with the big note before and the hi-hat rhythm does not start here, so you could delete this. 01:11:440 - Maybe add a don here to follow the melody more?
01:38:190 (355,356,357,358,359,360,361) - You should REALLY consider toning this down a little bit because this is pretty calm compared to the rest of the kiai, yet it's a long 1/4! 01:38:252 (356,360,361) - I'd suggest to remove these three notes. You are pretty much forcing density here.
01:42:690 - Generally I find this stream okay, what disturbs me is that I think that there should be a few cuts (like 01:43:002 (415) - 01:43:502 (423) - 01:44:002 (431) - 01:44:502 (439) - ) so that the final part starting 01:44:690 - here gets more attention.
Otherwise nice map
Good luck
[TK'S Inner Oni]
I would like to hear explanations for why all your 1/6 are 1/6? None of the sounds is actually 1/6 and they also cause inconsistency in a quite consistent and solid map:
00:23:690 (178,179,180,181) - This sound goes until 00:24:065 - actually. It doesn't increase until here, but it last until here. Additionally you find this 00:31:690 - here and 00:32:940 - here. But those aren't 1/6. (Note this is the least disturbing 1/6 in the map because quite honestly in those two last spots it would have played awfully so it makes sense that it's not consistent).
01:17:190 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - 01:20:315 (150,151,152,153) - These are the other 1/6. These too are also just quarter notes that change their pitch but they are not even 1/4 (and yes the rest isn't neither). What happens in the kiai is, that spots like 01:19:940 - are not mapped as 1/6 though, for no reason. And actually /all/ voice samples should be mapped as 1/6 because nothing is different between them.
01:21:815 (167,168,169,170) - This 1/6 also should not exist as the song gives very clear 1/4 here, like in many other spots (01:16:315 - to name one xample). Same with 01:37:815 (350,351,352,353) - , that's clear 1/4, what is different about it from other 1/4 sounds in the song?
also more stuff below:
00:35:440 (287) - Could try kat on this to have the melody like 00:34:940 (283,284,286) - , I don't think the melody going down should change this to a don. Makes a clearer difference.
If applied, obviously change 00:37:440 (305) - 00:39:440 (324) - 00:41:440 (342) -
00:43:440 (363,364) - Same as above, but it's probably better to change these two notes instead of just the first one..
00:59:565 (6,7) - I think you could delete these notes so melody AND drums are emphasized better 00:59:440 (5,8) - here (01:01:565 - there is no note here either)
01:01:815 (17) - Also delete if done above
01:03:814 (28) - ^
01:10:815 (67,68,69) - Suddenly playing against melody ugh. 01:10:815 (67) - Flows pretty badly with the big note before and the hi-hat rhythm does not start here, so you could delete this. 01:11:440 - Maybe add a don here to follow the melody more?
01:38:190 (355,356,357,358,359,360,361) - You should REALLY consider toning this down a little bit because this is pretty calm compared to the rest of the kiai, yet it's a long 1/4! 01:38:252 (356,360,361) - I'd suggest to remove these three notes. You are pretty much forcing density here.
01:42:690 - Generally I find this stream okay, what disturbs me is that I think that there should be a few cuts (like 01:43:002 (415) - 01:43:502 (423) - 01:44:002 (431) - 01:44:502 (439) - ) so that the final part starting 01:44:690 - here gets more attention.
Otherwise nice map
Good luck
