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ohello
One more thing I'd like to point out, the simple additions for the storyboard just makes the map feel so much more unique to me, good job on that.
With that said, good luck!

Rokkea wrote:

ohello

Beginner

1. 00:54:725 (1,2) - Try to space the red nodes further apart, the music doesn't sound that powerful. (same applies to 02:22:675 (3,4) - ) Fixed~
2. 01:26:029 (1,2) - The hook shape plays out just like a typical cane shaped slider. Also, there's no blanket that warrants that hook shape, so might as well change it to a cane for cleanliness sake. Fixed~
3. 01:46:899 (3,4) - Move this to x:348 y:336 for a nice triangle spacing. Fixed~
4. 03:04:042 - Maybe add a circle here, as there's where the last vocal is. I lengthened the previous slider instead.

Easy

1. 00:45:781 (1) - Another one of those weird-moving sliders. Fixed~
2. 00:47:644 (2) - The reverse part of this slider sounds like a strong note, maybe try to make it clickable? Fixed~
3. 01:00:688 (1) - A lil pointless, but move it to x:312 y:192 for a perfect blanket. Fixed~
4. Your patterns in kiai mode (the 1st part at least) feels so empty.. I mean, isn't kiai mode like the hypest part of the song? I really recommend adding for beats, for example parts similar to : 01:14:104 (1,2) - could be a 1/1 reverse slider, 01:19:694 could have an extra note added in, 01:23:048 (1) - screams 1/1 slider instead. I didn't do exactly those things, but I did add more notes in both kiais.
5. 01:30:129 (5) - Strong beat is at slider end, similarly, try to make it clickable. Fixed~
6. 01:39:446 (1) - No point in the NC imo. (also you didn't do it at 01:43:918 (1,2) - ) Fixed~
7. 01:55:843 (1) - End spinner at 01:58:824 ? (just like how you did it at Beginner) Fixed~

Normal

1. 00:24:911 (1,2,3,4) - Why curve the sliders if the movement is a straight line? Fixed~
2. 00:31:992 (2) - Remove this note if possible as the sound here is the same as 00:24:911 (1,2,3,4) - . Fixed~
3. 00:57:334 - I feel like having a note here feels better. Fixed~
4. 01:10:936 (4,5) - This rhythm/circle order has been repeated twice already, I feel this could be more interesting if it's a slider instead of 2 circles. Fixed~
5. 02:07:396 (6) - Is that not a 1/2 rhythm, just like at 02:08:887 (2) - ? I think it's fine as it is. If I were to add it, it would look messy.

Hard

1. 00:17:458 (5,6,1) - Yoooooo, obey distance spacing please, try to keep everything at 1.0x (which is what you normally use). Fixed~
2. 01:11:682 (5,6,7,1) - Confusing spacing again, 4->5 and 5->6 has same spacing but one is 1/1 while the other is 1/2. 6->7 and 7->1 is 1/1 but with different spacing too. Also 01:12:241 (7) - can be a 1/4 buzz slider too if you want. Fixed, but what's a buzz slider?
3. 01:12:986 (1,2,1,1,2) - NC makes the pattern look a lot more confusing that it should be. Also this pattern suffers the same spacing issues, so perhaps this might be better. Fixed~
4. 01:34:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is definitely too hard for a 2.9 star map. Like legit, this is Insane-tier with it's full screen jumps and everything. Fixed by switching some objects around.
5. 01:37:769 - Sounds like a piano key to me. Fixed~
6. 01:42:427 (4,5,6,7) - Gah, this is the same thing as ^. Fixed~
7. 02:27:893 (1) - Over here, the NC is pretty okay, except for this one which I feel can be removed. Fixed~
8. 02:34:228 (6) - There's no 1/4 rhythm here I believe, just keep it at 1/2 and it should be fine. Fixed~

Insane

1. At the beginning, I think you can keep the rhythm consistent with the one you had at the start, 00:12:986 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - (maybe remove 00:14:663 (2) - ). The reason is that those sounds are the strongest at this time, where's no lyrics. That really causes rhythm/patterns like 00:15:967 (1,2,3,4) - to make no sense. From 00:18:949 (1) - onwards the rhythm is pretty good though, no need to change that. Fixed a bit.
2. 00:24:166 (2) - A 1/1 slider fits this part better. Fixed~
3. 00:27:893 (1,2) - Same spacing issue I mention in Hard. Fixed~
4. 00:29:197 (5) - Maybe move this to x:264 y:20 for a nice straight line. This got changed.
5. 00:33:483 (3) - Same issue as mentioned ^. This might also cause the player to mistake 00:33:856 (1,2,3,4) - as a 1/1 rhythm, not 1/2. Fixed~
6. 00:38:700 (2) - Consider ctrl+g'ing this for a nice circular flow. Fixed~
7. 00:42:520 (4,5) - God this triplet makes me uncomfortable.. I feel like even stacking them under the slider end will be better. (or at least reduce the distance spacing) Fixed~
8. 00:49:135 (2,3) - SAME ISSUE. (i'll stop pointing these out now, i do hope you understand how important this issue really is) Fixed, I looked through the map and couldn't find any others.
9. 01:01:060 (2) - imo placing this under circle 3 plays out better. tooo many circles
10. 01:03:576 (1) - This sounds like 1/4, but a kickslider does not fit I feel. In fact, I don't think kicksliders fit this map at all. It doesn't sound like it to me anyway. (maybe i'm just dumb owell) Fixed, you're not dumb, my map is just really strange...
11. 01:13:917 (1) - IT'S TOO HIGH. Stacked with 01:14:104 (1) - this.
12. 01:36:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Triplets over here play out so much fun than this.. thing, I don't know what to call it. (same applies to every other similar pattern) Fixed~
13. 01:37:769 - Sounds like a piano key to me. Fixed~
14. 02:27:893 (1) - Maybe remove NC here, just like in Hard. Fixed~

One more thing I'd like to point out, the simple additions for the storyboard just makes the map feel so much more unique to me, good job on that.
With that said, good luck! Thank youuu~!!

Thanks for modding!!

Hi from my modding queue

Good luck for ranked ~ It's a neat song and quite a good map already

-NikoNiko- wrote:

Hi from my modding queue

General

I don't care what all others say, blankets are my favorite patterns <3 That's why I like this map already Yesss! Thank you! this map is like 90% blankets!

Insane

It's really rare that I find maps with this cs, but I love smaller circles ^.^
I would also suggest you open AI mod with ctrl+shift+A, it will tell you 3 things I fixed the unsnapped note, but I don't think the kiai is a really a problem.
00:27:893 (1) - I would suggest putting this circle over the start of 00:28:265 (2) - mainly because it's more readable. Not necessary though. Fixed, I totally agree with that ^_^
00:42:520 (4) - Same here, but that might just be my contempt of this pattern since it has messed me up too many times already. Changed a bit~
00:44:663 (2,4) - Since those 2 sliders are exactly the opposite, I would 00:45:222 (3) - in the middle of them to make it look a lot cleaner It doesn't really make it look cleaner. The pattern is still readable. I want to give 00:45:408 (4) - this emphasis, so I'll make it the bigger jump.
00:47:644 (1) - Could also be placed a circle There's no reason. Besides, I love this slider ;_;
01:03:576 (5) - THE HATE, alright I will stop with that Fixed~
01:05:160 (1) - I don't quite get the NC here I used a NC every measure. So I'm pretty certain about them.
01:18:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is really confusing, I would suggest you to replace it Fixed, even though I liked that pattern ;_;
01:30:501 (1,2,3) - The angle here differs from the angle right afterwards 01:30:874 (3,4,5) - Is that bad?
01:41:682 (3,4,5,6) - I would suggest making it more bent that it flows a lot better Fixed, I think~
01:44:663 (3,4,5,6) - I would suggest using DS here that the distance between 4 and 5 is the same as 3-4 and 5-6 for the flow I don't think that will really help flow, and I like the emphasis on (5).
01:55:843 (1) - I would make the spinner a little bit shorter that it's easier to catch the next circle Fixed~
02:21:930 (3) - Move this one closer to 2 and the 4 a tiny bit to the right Fixed~
02:33:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really really confusing, I would suggest using more common patterns for this or go with the vocals with sliders Fixed~
03:03:855 (9) - I don't understand the purpose of this 9 here, but you can leave it there There's a piano note there. I made the pattern there a bit more neat too.

Hard

02:52:303 (11) - I would remove this note because it can be really confusing if there is a triple and a double straight afterwards It may be hard to hear, but there is a piano note there, so I can't really remove it. Instead, I can unstack it.
01:12:986 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern might lead to confusion Fixed a bit~

Normal

01:42:427 (4,5,6,7) - Might go with something simpler than that to not confuse the newbs :^) It's just 4 circles, what makes that confusing?
02:18:949 (5,6,1) - This difficulty has a lot of times where you mapped a lot on red and white ticks, I would suggest keeping it only on the white ticks or once white tick-red tick since it's easier to press, it's alright if you want to keep it though This actually happens a lot in Normal. If it didn't, it would be too similar to Easy.
For parts like 02:34:601 (1,2,3) - It's alright to map like this Good to know.

Easy

00:26:029 (2) - You should make a circle here Fixed, I think~
00:32:179 (2) - Vocal already begins on the red tick, I would suggest something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4794717 and don't forget underworld monarchy :^) Fixed, but not not like that.
01:14:104 (4) - NC here I forgot XD Fixed~
01:18:576 (3) - Also weird since you don't map to the vocals (if you set playback to 50% or 25%) Fixed~
01:29:011 (1) - I would suggest back and forth slider because of vocals But it's okay how it is, and I like the way it looks.
01:55:843 (1) - Not sure about easy slider times but I think this one might be too short I'll see if someone else mentions it. I'm sure it'll be fine though.

Beginner

00:45:781 (3) - I would suggest a back and forth slider here Fixed~

Good luck for ranked ~ It's a neat song and quite a good map already

Thanks for modding~!!

[insane]
01:29:383 (2,4) - how about ctrl + g ?

no kds
i can't mod this map.. it's too perfect ;w; sorry, i'll shoot a star for you

[C u r i] wrote:

[insane]
01:29:383 (2,4) - how about ctrl + g ? Fixed~

no kds
i can't mod this map.. it's too perfect ;w; sorry, i'll shoot a star for you

Thanks for the star!
Thanks for modding!

from my modding queue. decided to mod this mapset instead of your other one because that one is pretty perfect


nice mapset, good luck with it

Silverboxer wrote:

from my modding queue. decided to mod this mapset instead of your other one because that one is pretty perfect

Easy

00:26:775 (3) - bad blanket Fixed~
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know why but this pattern feels too cramped. maybe move sliders 3 and 4 to the left and rotate. also I think sliders 3 and 4 should touch a bit further apart: http://puu.sh/nYOOJ/5c0e9792c5.jpg Fixed~
02:32:924 (3,4) - this could look a bit cleaner. either ctrl+j slider 4 or move it to x:296 y:296 I moved it.
02:48:017 (3,4) - fix this blanket. the sliders curve too much for it to work Fixed a bit. This is hard to notice.

Normal

01:28:452 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - this is really cluttered for a normal diff, especially one on the easier side as far as normal diffs go. maybe ctrl+h notes 3, 4 and 5 so everything isn't so close together. Fixed differently~
01:31:060 (6,7) - I don't think this is good in a normal diff either. maybe if they were only 1/2 apart it wouldn't be confusing Fixed by making the previous slider repeat~

Hard

00:17:085 (4,5) - much larger spacing than anything else in this section Fixed~
01:02:551 (6,1) - spacing too small here. seems awkward Fixed~
01:13:545 (3,4,5,1) - maybe distance snap here is too big as well? goes from 1.0 most of the map to 2.0 all of the sudden here. I know why this spacing is larger but this might be too much (especially after a stack of notes) Would unstacking fix the problem? I'll unstack it. It also makes the jump smaller.
01:21:557 (5,6,7) - this shouldn't be symmetrical because of the timing difference on these notes Fixed~
01:23:793 (3,4,5,6) - make these a tiny bit further apart. although ds is 1.0 here it looks much smaller than the rest of the section's notes http://puu.sh/nYPT6/461d0041c7.jpg Fixed~
01:42:427 (4,5,6,7) - when you have patterns like this it feels like it should be its own combo. most of the map has a nc every 2 measures or whatever but I don't know. maybe consider it for other patterns like this Or I could make the pattern less dramatic.
02:03:297 (5,6) - circle should not be here if it's 1/1 apart from the slider Fixed~
02:08:887 (2,3) - fix blanket Fixed~
02:14:477 (4,5) - too close together Fixed~
02:19:508 (8,1) - fix blanket Fixed~
02:32:738 (3,4) - maybe too large of a jump in ds here Fixed~

Insane

00:12:986 (1,2) - I think this rhythm could also be mapped like this: http://puu.sh/nYRak/0aa39d912e.jpg maybe replace some of these patterns with a rhythm like this? I think it fits the music better and can be good in some spots It kinda sounds strange, but I guess so...

I can't help much with the placement of notes on this difficulty because this mapping style is hard for me to give advice on. but certain parts are not mapped to the actual music very well. for example: 01:18:203 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is just a bunch of circles even though the music doesn't sound like 8 separate notes being played: http://puu.sh/nYRwr/89ff2973eb.jpg
in my opinion this part should be changed to something like this: http://puu.sh/nYRuB/43b2cd7ca2.jpg
make some random notes in the rhythm I showed and see if you like how it matches the music more. Okay, I fixed this one. I see what you mean. I looked through both kiais and improved the rhythm wherever I could.

this is the only real advice I can give on insane. hope you understand my point

nice mapset, good luck with it

Thanks so much for your mod~!!

Hey, interesting style ! m4m.


Good luck !

6th wrote:

Hey, interesting style ! m4m.

SPOILER

[Beginner]
00:30:874 (1) - Move it a bit up ? For flow, right? Fixed~
02:12:241 (4) - Too far away from previous object Fixed~

Nice diff. Try adding more breaks. I don't think it's necessary.

[Easy]
Try adding more breaks I still don't think it's necessary.
00:21:930 (1) - Repeat this and add a circle on next white tick instead That doesn't really change the rhythm. Besides, I don't think I could without ruining flow or DS.
00:30:874 (1) - CTRL+H Fixed~
00:32:179 (2,3) - Doesn't fit to easy Fixed~
01:18:390 (3,4) - ^ Fixed~
02:32:924 (3,4) - ^ Fixed~
00:54:725 (1) - Place it under 00:51:744 (1) - I did the opposite. I placed the other over it.
01:49:880 - Add a circle here ? I wanna keep this part consistent. Adding a circle here would be inconsistent.
02:56:961 (2,3) - 4 circles instead I don't want to remove these blankets. Besides, that would be a bit hard for Easy.
03:03:297 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4843434 Fixed~

[Normal]
00:24:911 (1,2,3,4) - What do you follow here ? The lyrics, but only emphasized lyrics. I'll add some stuff to make it make it more clear.
00:56:216 - Use same pattern as at 00:54:725 - I changed it a bit.
01:12:241 (6) - Convert to 2 circles I don't want emphasis 01:12:613 - here.
01:19:135 (5) - Move it up Fixed~
01:47:831 (3,4) - CTRL+G I don't see how this improves the map.
01:55:843 (1) - Considering that there is only 1 break I think this spinner is too tiring Shortened~
02:05:160 (2) - CTRL+H I'd rather have it point at the next object.
02:23:048 (2,3,4,5) - Hard to follow Fixed~
03:04:228 - Add a circle here Fixed~
02:34:601 (1,2) - Why does it look so familiar... :/ I see what you mean, fixed~
02:37:582 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:13:545 - Slider here I want the rhythm in Hard to be relatively simple and easy to understand.
00:15:036 - ^ ^
00:16:526 - etc ^
00:17:458 (5,6) - 4 circles instead ? Fixed~
00:39:446 - You should map this too Fixed~
02:27:147 - ^ I don't think it's necessary.
03:03:297 - ^ Fixed~
00:57:334 - ^ Fixed~
01:14:104 (1) - It is too sudden I think I fixed it.
01:23:048 (1) - Move to (216;192) That ruins the blanket.
01:28:452 (6) - Spacing issue Fixed~
01:37:396 (7,8,9) - CTRL+G I don't think that helps.
02:27:520 (1) - Make it parallel to next sliders ? ^

Good luck !

Thanks so much for modding!

M4M

M4M



[Beginner]

[Easy]

[Normal]

Good luck men!
and remember: adjust the storyboard

Green = Fixed.
Blue = Questions & Comments. Somewhat fixed.
Red = Not Fixed.

Nephroid wrote:

M4M

SPOILER

Insane Diff

Replay: http://puu.sh/ocJrd/427b36c033.osr
General Thoughts: A bit slower than what I'm used to playing, but it was fun. It might be cool to have a few more combo colors that you use only when background changes color.

00:14:663 - 00:15:781 - It feels like there should be circles here. Added in both places~

00:24:166 (2) - 00:48:017 (2) - Just a personal preference, but it feels more satisfying when a clap plays at the same time as you hit something. (Change slider into two circles instead.) I think both claps are important there.

00:32:365 (1) - Move new combo to 00:33:483 (3) and remove new combo at 00:33:856 (1). It would make more sense with the music. (Though keeping symmetric colors might be more important (?). That would be inconsistent with what I have done. I used a NC every measure in Insane.

00:35:346 (1) - Remove clap on end of slider. Add claps to 00:36:092 (2,3,4) instead. Fixed, except there is already a clap on (4), and a clap on (3) would be too much.

00:47:272 (1) - Add clap. I don't think it needs that much emphasis imo.

00:51:744 (1) - 01:03:669 (1) - Add the hitsound from 00:48:762 (1). The finish? There isn't a finish noise (cymbal clash) in the music here, and there's no need to add one.

00:56:216 (1) - 01:08:141 (1) - Add the hitsound from 00:54:725 (1). ^

01:09:632 (1) - 01:10:377 (3) - A personal preference, but the almost-but-not-quite-right angle bothers me. Right angles in mapping bother me. No change.

01:10:377 (3) - 02:16:713 (1) - Not sure if intended, but the background changes size here. I'll fix this later.

01:12:613 (1,2) - I thought these sliders looked weird because they were too close together. I see what you mean, fixed~

01:21:371 (4) - Doesn't quite match up with the next slider. Not sure if intended. Adjusted a bit.

01:21:371 (4) - Feels empty without something here. I see what you mean, but it's intended because of the sudden pause in the lyrics.

01:49:880 - Add a circle with clap. That would make the start of the break inconsistent.

02:07:396 (4) - Clap here. That wouldn't really go with the music imo.

02:09:259 (1) - Add hitsound from 02:07:769 (1). There isn't a finish noise in the music here, and there's no need to add one.

02:16:713 (1) - Feels like it's missing a hitsound.It has a whistle, that should be enough.

02:48:762 (3) - Missing clap (?). Fixed~

02:52:489 (1) - Add clap. I added a finish.

Trent83 wrote:

M4M

Metadata

nothing yay~

[Beginner]

Beginner Diff

*This is a stupid advice but put the circle size in 1 it will be better in a beginner xDD I agree that CS should be as small as possible in Beginner. However, it's too late to change as it would create a loooot of overlaps. (btw, I think most mappers don't change CS unless it's unrankable.)

00:15:967 (3) -Why not create a full blanket? it will be better That is a full blanket. It's just not circular.
00:17:458 (4) - put this a little up for keep the flow The flow looks fine to me.
00:20:439 (2,3) - Fix this blanket The blanket looks fine. I made a slight adjustment.
00:30:874 (1,2) - try to use curve sliders for keep the flow its better (and the rect sliders doesn't look good in an easy or a normal for me xDD) Fixed, although it only helps flow a bit.
00:33:856 (3,4) - I think it will be better O.I.O.I.X.I.- (O= circle, I= a beat with nothing, X= Slider, -=End of the slider if isn't clear here is a puush xDD http://puu.sh/odVk0/1b9565003a.jpg&#41; Fixed~
00:37:955 (2) - Add a note? Not in beginner~
00:40:564 (5) - Add a note? ^
01:12:613 (5) - snap the timing and try to adjust the storyboard, add more scale, try to add pulses or take practice making storyboards I'll fix this later. I'll probably need you to help me in-game with this.
01:55:843 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit with the song Yes it does.
02:36:092 (2,3) - Weird flow This part was changed with another mod.
02:45:036 (4,1) - Fix flow It's not that bad here though.
02:49:508 (3,1) - Overlap I'm too lazy to fix this.

[Easy]

Easy Diff

00:15:967 (1) - Stack this on object 1 gives better flow Fixed~
00:15:967 (1,2,3) - Weird flow ^^^
00:20:066 (2,3) - this feels kinda weird It feels fine when I play it.
00:24:911 (1) - i recommend a 4 repeat slider You shouldn't use 4 repeating sliders though. They looks messy. Also, certain beats must not be mapped in Easy to maintain it being Easy, and 00:26:029 - this doesn't need to be mapped. In other words, not in Easy~
00:29:011 (2) - add a note ^
00:32:179 (2) - Snap this to the strong beat The vocal is the strong beat.
00:45:781 (1) - try to use the strong beat and reduce the time of this slider It's fine because it has points on all of the strong vocals.
***After there you must FIX A LOT OF STRONG BEATS I'm going by the vocals though...
01:12:613 (4) - note Fixed (with another mod)
01:18:390 (3,4) - weird flow and put the object 3 in the strong beat part changed with another mod
01:55:843 (1) - doesn't fit Yes it does.
02:10:750 (1,2,3,4,1) - weird flow I see what you mean. It's a circular flow done with linear sliders, which makes no sense at all. Silly me. Fixed~
02:13:732 (1,2) - Weird flow Fixed with previous.
02:25:657 (1) - Spinner I don't want to cover the sb.
02:29:756 (3) - add a note Not in Easy~
02:30:129 (4) - the arrow isn't necessary It feels necessary to me.
02:32:924 (3,4) - weird flow and snap the object 3 to the strong beat Same thing I said about lyrics. It is a strong beat.
02:34:601 (1,2) - Weird flow Adjusted slightly~
03:04:042 (5) - this isn't necessary please snap this to the next beat Emphasis at the end of the song.

[Normal]

Normal Diff

00:12:986 (1) - remember the inherit point Oh, Actually, there isn't supposed to be an inherited point there. I'm not changing the volume, SV, hitsounds, or anything, so it would be pointless. I'll remove it in other difficulties.
00:13:918 (2) - this is unnecesary It's there mostly for polarity.
00:15:408 (4) - Same ^
00:16:899 (2) - same ^
00:19:880 (2) - same ^
00:36:092 (4) - Ctrl+G for a better flow That makes the ds to the next object off. In fact, it points the wrong direction.
00:36:837 (1,2,3) - bad flow I made a slight adjustment. It's not really noticeable though.
00:43:918 (2) - use a combination of 2 circles Fixed~
00:53:234 (4,5) - Weird flow Fixed~
00:58:824 (2) - Add a note I think you meant 00:58:824 - here. Fixed~
01:16:526 (4) - No necessary it is for polarity
01:24:166 (3) - doesn't fit with the music Yes it does. Listen closely.
01:55:843 (1) - same It's a spinner.
02:38:328 (2) - same Adjusted slightly.
03:01:433 (1,2) - Weird flow Fixed~
03:04:228 (4) - try to erase this circle and re-snap the slider because the circle doesn't fit with the music That would be inconsistent. It's fine as it is.

Good luck men!
and remember: adjust the storyboard

Thank you for modding~!!

Trent83 wrote:

Hello Page 2

Storyboard as Requested

SB Images

Osb txt

I really was trying to create an easy and fast storyboard so there you go!

Applied. I'll update this soon. Thank you so much~

From the worst modding queue. This is probably the first old styled map I actually like.

The reason I am not mapping some of your difficulties is because NM requests on my modding queue have a 9 minute limit, and the map is 3 minutes long, which means only 3 difficulties.

Bold is unrankable.
Red should really be fixed.
Orange should be changed.
Blue is just a suggestion.




Good luck getting rank! Here's a star.

I hope my mod is of some use at least.

Hi,M4M from ur queue
btw, nice song~

[Beginner]
seems clear,sry, i havent mod a diff below Easy

[Easy]
00:30:874 (1,2,3) - rhythm not good here,u can just put 1/1 slider
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4) - same ^
02:31:620 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Normal]
01:14:849 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm here strange
02:46:526 (1,2,3,4) - this is kinda hard to read ,fix it
02:52:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - remake rhythem here like this?

[Hard]
00:29:197 (4,5) - seems better to remake like this
02:27:147 - add note or reverse slider to here，coz hard to read a 3/2 space for players
02:46:154 (1,2,3,4) - how about put rhythm here like this？
03:03:949 (2) - is this the only 1/4 in diff？

[Insane]
00:14:849 (3,4) - this music sounds good to put a anti-jump here, just suggestion.
00:23:421 (1,2,1) - fill the space ，it has a lot of sounds to follow
00:29:197 (4,1) - its looks a little crooked
00:38:700 (2) - need fix a little
00:47:644 - i think i can guess why u space here, but u can also reduce the volume,to make it quite. so mb add a note here for the clearly vocal sound?
01:25:843 - Can add a drum here( default finish), to connect 2 kiai.
01:21:371 (4,1) - these stack?
02:46:154 - here has a moe vocal like “kia”，i'd like to make a curve slider here with a little faster SV.
02:50:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - only this part is kinda hard，seems little hard for 4 star diff
as a symmetry map, its good
about hit sound,i suggest to use a drum sound instead of whistle in KIAI time.

GL

Cirno-baka9 wrote:

From the worst modding queue. This is probably the first old styled map I actually like.

The reason I am not mapping some of your difficulties is because NM requests on my modding queue have a 9 minute limit, and the map is 3 minutes long, which means only 3 difficulties.

Bold is unrankable.
Red should really be fixed.
Orange should be changed.
Blue is just a suggestion.

That leaves just a few colors:
Green=Fixed
Purple=Not Fixed

Advanced

00:33:856 (1,2,3) - Sort of boring to play. Fixed~
01:20:067 (1,2,3) - These sliders look bad in my opinion. Fixed~
02:22:675 (1,2) - Turns are too sharp in my opinion. Fixed~
02:39:818 (6) - CTRL+G? I don't see why.
02:40:564 (1) - I hate 90 degree or near 90 degree sharp turns. Stretched out a bit.
02:46:154 (6) - I suggest you stack this on the beginning of the next slider. But... It is stacked on the next slider.
02:55:470 (1,2) - Could blanket better. This wasn't intended to be a blanket, but fixed somewhat~
Sorry for the terrible mod on this difficulty.

Hard

00:18:576 (8,9,1) - You shouldn't have 3 hitcircles in a straight line like this, make it a bit like the image below. Why not? It works well with the straight sliders it's around.

00:45:781 (1,2,3) - I dislike three of the exact same sliders going down, so I suggest changing this. Fixed~
01:43:918 (1) - Slider isn't very visually appealing. Maybe not, but it looks infinitely better than the alternative.
01:49:135 (1) - Curve on this could be improved, maybe something like the image below. Not that big of a change, but looks better. Fixed, I think.

Sorry for the terrible mod on this difficulty...again.

Insane

00:17:085 (5) - The only time I ever believe a slider that looks like this ever fits in a song is in a dubstep song, so I recommend changing, but that's only my opinion. I would, but I think the way it is now encourages flow more.
00:29:383 (1,2,3) - I dislike three of the exact same sliders going down, but this one is different than normal so I don't know what to say about it. Fixed~
00:42:800 (1,3) - I don't really like these sliders, but that's only my opinion. I'll see if anyone else says anything.
00:53:980 (3,4) - Again, these kinds of sliders don't really fit the song. Fixed and improved the flow~
00:56:216 (1,2,3) - Not really creative if you repeat the exact same thing two times. Fixed to something much better: a blanket~
01:09:632 (1,2,3) - I dislike sliders with such a sharp turn, but that's only my opinion. Fixed a bit~
01:17:085 (1) - Curve is so small that you can barely make it out, I suggest changing it so it's more like the image below. Fixed~

02:12:986 (3,4) - Sliders could be better. (Yes, it took me almost a whole minute to find another thing.) It's for flow, as mentioned above.
02:24:166 (1,2,3,4) - Could blanket better. Those are nooot blankets.
02:28:638 (1,2,3) - Again, these kinds of sliders don't really fit the song. Fixed, since it's not helping flow.
02:43:545 (1,3) - Sliders could be improved. If you mean that you want them more curved, then fixed~

Good luck getting rank! Here's a star. Thank youuu~

I hope my mod is of some use at least. It was very helpful lol ^^

rs_fadeaway wrote:

Hi,M4M from ur queue
btw, nice song~

[Beginner]
seems clear,sry, i havent mod a diff below Easy

[Easy]
00:30:874 (1,2,3) - rhythm not good here,u can just put 1/1 slider
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4) - same ^
02:31:620 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed all~

[Normal] I think this should have been Advanced...
01:14:849 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm here strange Fixed~
02:46:526 (1,2,3,4) - this is kinda hard to read ,fix it I don't think it is.
02:52:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - remake rhythem here like this? Fixed~

[Hard]
00:29:197 (4,5) - seems better to remake like this Fixed~
02:27:147 - add note or reverse slider to here，coz hard to read a 3/2 space for players Fixed~
02:46:154 (1,2,3,4) - how about put rhythm here like this？ Fixed~
03:03:949 (2) - is this the only 1/4 in diff？Fixed~

[Insane]
00:14:849 (3,4) - this music sounds good to put a anti-jump here, just suggestion. I don't want anti-jumps.
00:23:421 (1,2,1) - fill the space ，it has a lot of sounds to follow Fixed~
00:29:197 (4,1) - its looks a little crooked Fixed, I think~
00:38:700 (2) - need fix a little Fixed~
00:47:644 - i think i can guess why u space here, but u can also reduce the volume,to make it quite. so mb add a note here for the clearly vocal sound? Fixed~
01:25:843 - Can add a drum here( default finish), to connect 2 kiai. Fixed~
01:21:371 (4,1) - these stack? Yes
02:46:154 - here has a moe vocal like “kia”，i'd like to make a curve slider here with a little faster SV. Fixed somewhat
02:50:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - only this part is kinda hard，seems little hard for 4 star diff Fixed~
as a symmetry map, its good
about hit sound,i suggest to use a drum sound instead of whistle in KIAI time. I'll look at hitsounds in more detail later.

GL
Thank you so much! I'll mod your map ASAP.

Thank you both for modding!

M4M from my queue, totally not late or anything :3:

7 DIFFS, HOLY

[Beginner]

1. 00:42:800 (1,2,3) - maybe move that to the middle, so 2 is on the y-axis
2. 01:14:104 (1) - this section seems kinda monotone, maybe add some 4/1 sliders/more repeatsliders for variation
3. 02:04:787 (3) - move that to center, stacking with 02:01:806 (1) -
4. 02:28:638 (1) - same as in the prior Kiai, it just feels kinda boring like this, however i may not be able to judge that properly, since i rarely play beginners anymore

[Easy]

1. 00:26:402 (2,3) - i'd remove that and make it a repeatslider, gives Starters more leeway to misstime their clicks
2. 01:15:595 (3,4) - same here, these are killers if you just started
3. 01:17:831 (2) - with this your bound to feel off because you skip the downbeat after - sure, stupid to fix that without 1/2 use, but like this it feels very weird to me ;w;
4. 02:32:365 (2) - uknoukno, same as before

[Normal]

1. 00:27:520 - are you sure about still skipping downbeats when youre already at Normal? - Sure, your decision, but I think you could expect players to be able to hit that by now ;3 - Not gonna mention others, to avoid cluster
2. 02:05:160 (2) - for this one maybe use 02:02:179 (2) - and mirror it? would look kinda sweet :3

[Advanced]
Should be good

[Hard]

1. 00:41:495 (3) - this is kinda unexpected, there should be something on 00:41:309 - for sure, so either move it, add another one, or rework it
2. 02:34:042 - i'd add a note here
3. 03:04:042 (2) - you have that as a clickable object in Advanced, consider making it circles here too

[Light Insane]

1. 02:39:446 (2,3,4,5,6) - WOAH, now that was kinda unexpected - Expect getting a ton of people failing here, this is quite the diffspike
2. 02:49:135 (3,1) - This is evil, consider ctrl+g'ing on 02:49:508 (1,2) -
3. 03:04:042 (4) - once more, please make that end hittable

[Insane]

1. 00:22:862 (4) - make that 1 repeat maybe

That's about it!
Solid map, nice to see some old styled maps again
GL

Asonate wrote:

M4M from my queue, totally not late or anything :3:

7 DIFFS, HOLY now no one can call me lazy

[Beginner]

1. 00:42:800 (1,2,3) - maybe move that to the middle, so 2 is on the y-axis Fixed~
2. 01:14:104 (1) - this section seems kinda monotone, maybe add some 4/1 sliders/more repeat sliders for variation I'll think about it. There's nothing that really stands out to me though.
3. 02:04:787 (3) - move that to center, stacking with 02:01:806 (1) - I don't see how is helping, but fixed anyway~
4. 02:28:638 (1) - same as in the prior Kiai, it just feels kinda boring like this, however i may not be able to judge that properly, since i rarely play beginners anymore Same response.

[Easy]

1. 00:26:402 (2,3) - I'd remove that and make it a repeat slider, gives Starters more leeway to mistime their clicks Fixed, I'll miss that pattern though.
2. 01:15:595 (3,4) - same here, these are killers if you just started
3. 01:17:831 (2) - with this your bound to feel off because you skip the downbeat after - sure, stupid to fix that without 1/2 use, but like this it feels very weird to me ;w;
4. 02:32:365 (2) - uknoukno, same as before Fixed all~

[Normal]

1. 00:27:520 - are you sure about still skipping downbeats when you're already at Normal? - Sure, your decision, but I think you could expect players to be able to hit that by now ;3 - Not gonna mention others, to avoid cluster
2. 02:05:160 (2) - for this one maybe use 02:02:179 (2) - and mirror it? would look kinda sweet :3 Fixed all~

[Advanced]
Should be good

[Hard]

1. 00:41:495 (3) - this is kinda unexpected, there should be something on 00:41:309 - for sure, so either move it, add another one, or rework it
2. 02:34:042 - i'd add a note here
3. 03:04:042 (2) - you have that as a clickable object in Advanced, consider making it circles here too Fixed all~

[Light Insane]

• 
  This was mapped yesterday... It'll probably be the worst.

1. 02:39:446 (2,3,4,5,6) - WOAH, now that was kinda unexpected - Expect getting a ton of people failing here, this is quite the diffspike Fixed, I decreased the spacing a tiny bit lol.
2. 02:49:135 (3,1) - This is evil, consider ctrl+g'ing on 02:49:508 (1,2) - I moved (3) instead.
3. 03:04:042 (4) - once more, please make that end hittable Fixed~

[Insane]

1. 00:22:862 (4) - make that 1 repeat maybe Fixed~

That's about it!
Solid map, nice to see some old styled maps again
GL

Thanks for modding, I'll mod your map ASAP!

NM from my Queue


I'm tired atm xDDDD sorry for the short mod fun song i said no 3 minute song even your drain time is under it xD you remind me of Gero & Andrea's maps, SYMMETRY! but there is a consideration goodluck

Janpai wrote:

NM from my Queue

General

1. Your preview point is unsnapped idk if it really matters It doesn't matter. It was intentional.

Easy

1. 00:48:017 - Two timing points at the same time is unrankable imo Fixed~
2. 00:31:992 (2) - Remove this note ? since you don't have one in 00:24:911 (1,2) - Fixed~
3. 00:33:483 - I think you should a note here since the vocal something like "seno" is strong Fixed~
4. 01:08:141 (2) - Move to x:331 y:222 ? so that it could be diagonally linear with 01:06:651 (1) - Fixed~
5. In the first chorus part, idk why you put gaps on it, the instrumentals are clearly don't stop at the same time there is a vocal there, I think it wouldn't be a problem if you fill out those I filled in a few, but I like simple rhythms.
6. 01:31:247 (4) - Bring down to the tail of (3) cuz personally I really don't like this kind of flow I don't like how that looks.
7. 01:34:228 (4) - Straight this up like (3) ? since 01:34:974 (1) - is a angled slider then why putting such curve on that slider Fixed~
8. 01:48:390 (2) - Make this a slider because the instrumental is still going on the next white tick or just move 01:49:135 (3) - to 01:48:762 then add a note on the next tick since that is the last tick before break, i prefer that it must be clickable I added the slider, but I kept the clicking.
9. 02:48:017 (3,4) - Blanketing them is not the best choice I don't see why.
10. 02:57:706 (3,1) - If this is a blanket fix it Fixed~

Normal

1. 00:13:918 (2,3) - It is audible that there is a sound at redtick, Make (2) a reverse slider of just add a note at red tick? do the same way to the following beats that are the same with this Fixed as much as possible~
2. 00:22:862 (2,3) - Stack them? That would be one of the only stacks in this diff.
3. 00:26:029 (3,4,5) - Maybe put 00:27:147 (5) - on the red tick and add a note on 00:27:520 because for the vocals and also fits in the instrumental I prefer the current rhythm.
4. 01:16:526 (4) - There is no sound in this red tick but it is at 01:16:899 move this note to 01:16:713 ? There is a sound there.
5. 01:18:516 - why did you ignore this strong downbeat? for vocals
6. 01:23:793 (2,3,4) - I think is better if you make the start of 01:24:166 (3) - a note then add a 1/1 slider at the redtick because it's really obvious that you are following the vocals here that's a good thing though
7. 01:55:843 (1) - This spinner, why it's not equal with the easy diff? easy ends 1 downbeat earlier maybe extend the spinner in easy because the time recovery that you put in this is already enough for the recovery of the easy Fixed~
8. 02:14:849 (3) - Downbeat must be clickable imo. Fixed~

I'm tired atm xDDDD sorry for the short mod fun song i said no 3 minute song even your drain time is under it xD you remind me of Gero & Andrea's maps, SYMMETRY! but there is a consideration goodluck

Thanks for modding!!

Hello~

M4M.

Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you!








I actually don't have much to say about this map. Sorry. ;; At least the symmetry is nice. (:

Ayyri wrote:

Hello~

M4M.

Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you!

Beginner

Looks fine. (ノ^∇^)

Easy

Looks fine. (ノ^∇^)

Normal

Looks fine. (ノ^∇^)

Advanced

02:49:135 (6,1) - I feel like this would be kind of bad for a newer player to read, since it's the same pattern right after at 02:50:067 (2,3) -
Consider moving 02:49:135 (6) - somewhere inbetween 02:48:017 (5) - and 02:49:508 (1) - I changed the pattern a bit.

Hard

Looks fine. (ノ^∇^)

Lightly Insane

Looks fine. (ノ^∇^)

Insane

Looks fine. (ノ^∇^)

I actually don't have much to say about this map. Sorry. ;; At least the symmetry is nice. (:

Thanks for modding~!!

Famously

00:20:812 (2) - circle then 1/2 slider instead? Weird that you dont make 00:20:998 - clickable.
00:23:421 (1,2) - Spacing is going to be confused for 1/2 even tho this is 1/1.... Try making 1 a 1/2 slider instead.
00:27:334 (4,1) - Again about spacing. Compare with the spacing at 00:26:402 (1,2) - . You're lacking a spacing concept that properly identifies what's 1/2 and whats 1/1 so it creates a confusing spacing for players.
00:32:738 (2,3) - ^ Maybe add a circle on 00:33:297 - .
00:34:228 (2) - 00:35:346 (1,2) - etc... Spacing really needs work.
01:18:762 (2,3,4) - Put emphasis onto 4 instead of 3 with your spacing.
02:04:042 (3,4) - Why the jump here? You don't emphasize the note elsewhere... its like your emphasis isn't consistent either.
02:05:346 (4,5) - ^Like why no jump here?
02:12:241 (1,2,3,4) - You use a much larger spacing for 3 and 4 but theres nothing really emphasized. this is a poor use of symmetry xP.
02:26:961 - and 02:27:147 - Why not make those drum beats clickable?

Actively

00:28:265 (2,3) - This visual just looks really poor for me because the slider directions don't match with the flow.
00:28:638 (3,1) - No jump here?
00:39:446 (6,1) - More spacing because this looks really close to 00:38:141 (1,2) - in terms of spacing.
00:50:067 (5,1) - No jump here? You map a jump elsewhere like 00:53:048 (5,1) -
01:03:669 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is really confusing. 3>4...

Going to stop... you really need to work on how you spacing things out xP. I would mod more, but this spacing problem is continues to occur. It's hard to mod anything else with this issue.

M4M from my queue

In general, I don't really see the need for so many 3* difficulties. If you're going to have so many difficulties, I'd suggest you at least make the final difficulty harder than 4.11. The difficulty doesn't even make the minimum star rating for insane.



I feel bad for not really finding anything wrong with your map. Probably just a repeat of what Monstrata-sama modded, so you don't need to give me kudosu if you don't want to.

Good luck!

Monstrata wrote:

Famously

00:20:812 (2) - circle then 1/2 slider instead? Weird that you dont make 00:20:998 - clickable.
00:23:421 (1,2) - Spacing is going to be confused for 1/2 even tho this is 1/1.... Try making 1 a 1/2 slider instead.
00:27:334 (4,1) - Again about spacing. Compare with the spacing at 00:26:402 (1,2) - . You're lacking a spacing concept that properly identifies what's 1/2 and whats 1/1 so it creates a confusing spacing for players.
00:32:738 (2,3) - ^ Maybe add a circle on 00:33:297 - .
00:34:228 (2) - 00:35:346 (1,2) - etc... Spacing really needs work.
01:18:762 (2,3,4) - Put emphasis onto 4 instead of 3 with your spacing.
02:04:042 (3,4) - Why the jump here? You don't emphasize the note elsewhere... its like your emphasis isn't consistent either.
02:05:346 (4,5) - ^Like why no jump here?
02:12:241 (1,2,3,4) - You use a much larger spacing for 3 and 4 but theres nothing really emphasized. this is a poor use of symmetry xP.
02:26:961 - and 02:27:147 - Why not make those drum beats clickable?

Actively

00:28:265 (2,3) - This visual just looks really poor for me because the slider directions don't match with the flow.
00:28:638 (3,1) - No jump here?
00:39:446 (6,1) - More spacing because this looks really close to 00:38:141 (1,2) - in terms of spacing.
00:50:067 (5,1) - No jump here? You map a jump elsewhere like 00:53:048 (5,1) -
01:03:669 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is really confusing. 3>4...

Going to stop... you really need to work on how you spacing things out xP. I would mod more, but this spacing problem is continues to occur. It's hard to mod anything else with this issue.

Spacing

A spacing issue simply means that your spacing is not reflective of the time gap in between objects. Please alter the spacing so that visually, players are able to recognize which objects are 1/2 spaced and which ones are 1/1 spaced. Lets look at some examples if you are unsure!



As you see, visually, this pattern seems straight-forward. Everything looks evenly spaced visually. But wait! 3>4 is not actually 1/2 spaced in timeline, it's 1/1. But because the pattern is arranged like this, players are very likely to click 4 too early, causing them to miss. This is generally confusing to players, and is a spacing issue. You can remedy this by increasing the spacing between 3>4 to make it more obvious to players that there is a 1/1 gap instead of a normal 1/2 gap.

Something like this would work! Now it's obvious that there is more time in between 3 and 4.

Thank you for your mod Monstrata~!!
I think remapping would be the most effective way of fixing the spacing problem, so I'll do that.

Kami-senpai wrote:

M4M from my queue

In general, I don't really see the need for so many 3* difficulties. If you're going to have so many difficulties, I'd suggest you at least make the final difficulty harder than 4.11. The difficulty doesn't even make the minimum star rating for insane.

Famously

00:14:663 (2,3) - blanket properly
00:20:812 (2) - the sound at the slider end is emphasized, so I suggest changing to two single circles to map to that
00:21:930 (1,2,3) - Too close together. Keep in mind that this is the hardest difficulty
00:23:421 (1,2,3) - In the back there are the piano taps in the music. I'd suggest you map to that instead
00:29:197 (4,1) - Make into one long slider if you're mapping to vocals
00:29:383 (1,3) - Blanket properly
00:32:738 (2) - The end of the slider is on an emphasized sound. Strongly recommend that you turn it into a normal slider and a circle
00:36:092 (2,3,4) - Not really mapped to anything I can hear
01:03:856 (2,3) - Blanket slightly off
01:07:210 (2,3) - ^
01:15:036 (4,5) - I suggest you ctrl g this to make it flow better
01:15:595 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe map to music more? I don't really hear anything that warrants these sliders
01:18:017 (4,5) - There's a change in tone for vocals so don't stack these
01:18:576 (1,2) - ^
There's a sound at 1:49:694 that you should map to
01:55:843 (1) - You should actually map here instead of putting a spinner
There's a drum sound at 2:27:147 that's really obvious. Please map to that
02:32:924 (5,1) - Change in pitch = don't stack I'll give you the star because I was unaware of this before you modded. I'll be sure to remember that when remapping and mapping in the future.
02:37:023 (4) - I would make this a jump instead since the vocals are emphasized
02:51:744 (7,8,9,10,11) - Make this curve a bit smoother

Actively

00:31:992 (4,1) - Spacing too far
00:49:321 (3,4) - Spacing
00:52:303 (3,4) - ^

Welp, looking at your changelog, it looks like you're remapping all of them based off spacing, so good luck on that.

I feel bad for not really finding anything wrong with your map. Probably just a repeat of what Monstrata-sama modded, so you don't need to give me kudosu if you don't want to. Noononononononoon don't feel bad. You did nothing wrong. It's my fault for requesting a mod on a WIP mapset and not telling you. Your mod was helpful. KD for you~

Good luck!

Thanks for your mod~!!

Hello! I was directed here by your queue. Apologies for taking so long. Poking around, it looks like you have that remap finished, so I'll assume I'm good to go.

General:
- In this mapset, (at least to me) it looks like you're focusing more on making cool patterns than on the music, especially in the higher difficulties like Actively and Famously. Not that you can't have patterns, but it seems to me like you're forcing the music to fit the patterns, not the other way around.
- Your hitsounds are pretty loud. Where they're at 100% volume, they should probably be somewhere around 75% at most.
- 01:55:843 (1) - This spinner was fine for the first two difficulties, but I'd say start substituting it for other things in all the other difficulties.
- 02:25:657 - I'd try to emphasize the vocal directly right here.

Slowly:

- Honestly, this difficulty seems a little redundant. I don't know about you, but if I had a map that was 1.36 stars, I wouldn't see the need for a map that's 1.11 stars. Although the map does look pretty clean.

Easily:

- 02:25:657 (4) - I'd suggest either making this a slider, or putting in a break afterward. It's extremely abnormal for an Easy to have a pause for that long. That's the only thing I'd suggest, though.

Normally:

- 00:57:706 (1) - I suggest making this a 1/1 slider with a reverse arrow, given that the entire song, you've been matching up with vocals.
- 01:42:241 (4,5,6,7,8) - Long chains of circles like this probably shouldn't be in a Normal difficulty.

Moderately:

- 00:24:166 (4) - Watch your spacing here. This object is really close to (3).

Quickly:

- Your spacing is still all over the place in this difficulty. It's especially prevalent in the Kiai sections.
- 01:43:918 (1) - Weird 3/4 sliders are weird. I'm assuming this wasn't intentional.
- 01:47:644 (3,4,5) - I can't tell what part of the song you're following here.
- 02:33:110 (4) - Ctrl-G this slider to improve flow.
- 02:58:079 (7,1) - A prime and rather obnoxious example of your spacing gone rampant. Jumps like this probably shouldn't be in a Hard difficulty.

Actively:

- 01:42:427 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of making these 1/4 sliders with reverse arrows, try having them be just plain circles with jumps.
- 01:48:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These streams don't seem to follow anything. It seems overmapped to me.
- 03:02:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - See above.

Famously:

- There are a whole ton of beats here that should be clickable, but aren't. 00:26:961 (3) - This slider is a fantastic example. The tail of the slider has a strong vocal on it, but what does the head have? As far as I can tell, maybe a weak drum beat. When it comes to sliders, especially in higher difficulties like this, the stronger beats should always be clickable over the weaker ones. This encompasses a lot of the problems I have with this particular difficulty.
- 00:35:533 (2) - There's absolutely nothing in the music right here, yet there's a circle right here. This is what I mean by "forcing the music to fit the patterns." Unfortunately, the music alters itself for no one.
- 02:18:949 (3,4,5,6) - Generally, having the players move in a straight line isn't a good idea. It's less comfortable to play than one would think.

And that's it for me! The lower difficulties look very polished to me! My best advice would be to focus more on the strong beats in the higher difficulties, and adjust your rhythm to emphasize those. Good luck!

The Ash Raichu wrote:

Hello! I was directed here by your queue. Apologies for taking so long. Poking around, it looks like you have that remap finished, so I'll assume I'm good to go.

General:
- In this mapset, (at least to me) it looks like you're focusing more on making cool patterns than on the music, especially in the higher difficulties like Actively and Famously. Not that you can't have patterns, but it seems to me like you're forcing the music to fit the patterns, not the other way around. I'll keep that in mind.
- Your hitsounds are pretty loud. Where they're at 100% volume, they should probably be somewhere around 75% at most. Lowered in most places~
- 01:55:843 (1) - This spinner was fine for the first two difficulties, but I'd say start substituting it for other things in all the other difficulties. I don't think mapping it will be an improvement. Having it mapped in some difficulties and skipped in others looks lazy.
- 02:25:657 - I'd try to emphasize the vocal directly right here. You mean the "ooooooo"? Fixed in some difficulties.

Slowly:

- Honestly, this difficulty seems a little redundant. I don't know about you, but if I had a map that was 1.36 stars, I wouldn't see the need for a map that's 1.11 stars. Although the map does look pretty clean. True, but it's not really causing a problem to have a few more difficulties than necessary. It's much better than not having them. I'll see if anyone else mentions this.

Easily:

- 02:25:657 (4) - I'd suggest either making this a slider, or putting in a break afterward. It's extremely abnormal for an Easy to have a pause for that long. That's the only thing I'd suggest, though. I added another circle.

Normally:

- 00:57:706 (1) - I suggest making this a 1/1 slider with a reverse arrow, given that the entire song, you've been matching up with vocals. Fixed~
- 01:42:241 (4,5,6,7,8) - Long chains of circles like this probably shouldn't be in a Normal difficulty. Fixed very slightly.

Moderately:

- 00:24:166 (4) - Watch your spacing here. This object is really close to (3). Fixed~

Quickly:

- Your spacing is still all over the place in this difficulty. It's especially prevalent in the Kiai sections.
- 01:43:918 (1) - Weird 3/4 sliders are weird. I'm assuming this wasn't intentional.
- 01:47:644 (3,4,5) - I can't tell what part of the song you're following here.
- 02:33:110 (4) - Ctrl-G this slider to improve flow.
- 02:58:079 (7,1) - A prime and rather obnoxious example of your spacing gone rampant. Jumps like this probably shouldn't be in a Hard difficulty. Fixed all~

Actively:

- 01:42:427 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of making these 1/4 sliders with reverse arrows, try having them be just plain circles with jumps. I'm not going to ignore the drums here.
- 01:48:390 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These streams don't seem to follow anything. It seems overmapped to me. ^
- 03:02:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - See above. ^

Famously:

- There are a whole ton of beats here that should be clickable, but aren't. 00:26:961 (3) - This slider is a fantastic example. The tail of the slider has a strong vocal on it, but what does the head have? As far as I can tell, maybe a weak drum beat. When it comes to sliders, especially in higher difficulties like this, the stronger beats should always be clickable over the weaker ones. This encompasses a lot of the problems I have with this particular difficulty. I was following the instruments there. Hmm. Maybe I should still include the stronger vocals. I'll switch around a few things.
- 00:35:533 (2) - There's absolutely nothing in the music right here, yet there's a circle right here. This is what I mean by "forcing the music to fit the patterns." Unfortunately, the music alters itself for no one. Fixed. This was a mistake. I wasn't trying to overmap it.
- 02:18:949 (3,4,5,6) - Generally, having the players move in a straight line isn't a good idea. It's less comfortable to play than one would think. Fixed~

And that's it for me! The lower difficulties look very polished to me! My best advice would be to focus more on the strong beats in the higher difficulties, and adjust your rhythm to emphasize those. Good luck!

Thanks for modding~ ^^

Hi there~

General
Did you map the all diffs? Have you looked through p/4892052? I think some BNs take issue with multiple diffs by same mapper.

Slowly

1. Spacing is inconsistent. I believe all the easy maps should same same spacing throughout? Examples: 00:29:383 (4,1) - spacing decreases, and 00:35:346 (5,1) - increases again

Quickly

1. I noticed some inconsistencies. For the most part, rhythm is identical, but placing four 1/2 circles is much more difficult than placing two 1/2 sliders. Some examples: ( 01:37:955 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:52:489 (1,2,3,4) - ) These have identical music. The way you mapped it, hitsound will place at same beats, but 01:37:955 (1,2,3,4,5) - is more difficult than 02:52:489 (1,2,3,4) -. I don’t think this is non-negligible. Repeating same flow/pattern will be boring, but I still think we could use more consistency.
   
2. Along the same line, 01:17:085 (1,2,3) - 02:31:620 (1) - has same beats, but they will play very differently.
   
3. 01:18:576 (6,7,8,9,10) - 02:33:110 (4,5,6,7) - Same here, 01:18:576 (6,7,8,9,10) - feels non-negligibly more difficult. Sometimes maps are repetitive and boring, other times inconsistent and confusing. I am not sure where the boundary exactly lies, but I think this diff definitely crossed that boundary toward being inconsistent and confusing.
   
4. And as the final words on this: If one chorus is to be more difficult than other, I think it should be the second chorus. In this diff, first chorus has more clicks, which makes it more difficult to acc and aim.
   
5. 01:39:073 (3,4,5) - 5 is different from 3,4, so I think they shouldn’t be symmetric

Actively

1. 00:55:657 (2,3,4) - 01:07:582 (2,3,4) - I don’t think triangle with same distance fits here nicely here. Symmetric shape with same DS yells identical emphasis, but (based on the music) I think 2 should be emphasized most, 3, and lastly 1.
   
2. 01:02:924 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 01:05:905 (3,4,5,6) - I think this is more difficult than it deserves
   
3. 01:23:980 (4,5,6,1) - I think flow could be improved. Relatively big jump with with no sharp turn is awkward to hit at this level.
   
4. 01:23:980 (4,5,6,1) - I see a lot of similar patterns in the map, and they almost feel lazy to me. These patterns are frankly just variations of symmetric sliders. I don’t think any of them were terribly misused, but definitely overused IMO. (00:17:458 (1,2,3,4) - 00:48:762 (1,2,3,4) - 01:04:415 (4,5,1,2) - 01:37:955 (1,2,3,4) - etc).
   
5. 01:36:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 02:50:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Too much single tapping, a triple, and stacked notes. This part needs emphasis, but I think it might be too challenging compared to rest of the map.
   
6. 02:35:346 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this is little too much 1/2 beats, especially compared with 01:20:067 (1,2,3,4,1) -
   
7. 03:03:669 (7,8,9,10,11) - Intentionally wriggly slider? I don’t think it was very effective here.
   
8. 03:02:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider making these repeating sliders because 1) these 1/4 beats are rather small compared to 03:03:669 (7,8,9,10,11) - , and 2) difficulty reasons.

I mainly focused on Quickly and Actively, because my attention span doesn't last much longer than 1 hour xD

This mod was had more subjective stuff than most other mods I give. I hope you'll find at least some of them helpful /w\. Good luck!

CaffeAmericano wrote:

Hi there~

General
Did you map the all diffs? Have you looked through p/4892052? I think some BNs take issue with multiple diffs by same mapper. I'll remove Slowly and Moderately and add them to the map's description.

Slowly

1. Spacing is inconsistent. I believe all the easy maps should same same spacing throughout? Examples: 00:29:383 (4,1) - spacing decreases, and 00:35:346 (5,1) - increases again Fixed, but this difficulty is being removed.

Quickly

1. I noticed some inconsistencies. For the most part, rhythm is identical, but placing four 1/2 circles is much more difficult than placing two 1/2 sliders. Some examples: ( 01:37:955 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:52:489 (1,2,3,4) - ) These have identical music. The way you mapped it, hitsound will place at same beats, but 01:37:955 (1,2,3,4,5) - is more difficult than 02:52:489 (1,2,3,4) -. I don’t think this is non-negligible. Repeating same flow/pattern will be boring, but I still think we could use more consistency.
   
2. Along the same line, 01:17:085 (1,2,3) - 02:31:620 (1) - has same beats, but they will play very differently.
   
3. 01:18:576 (6,7,8,9,10) - 02:33:110 (4,5,6,7) - Same here, 01:18:576 (6,7,8,9,10) - feels non-negligibly more difficult. Sometimes maps are repetitive and boring, other times inconsistent and confusing. I am not sure where the boundary exactly lies, but I think this diff definitely crossed that boundary toward being inconsistent and confusing.
   
4. And as the final words on this: If one chorus is to be more difficult than other, I think it should be the second chorus. In this diff, first chorus has more clicks, which makes it more difficult to acc and aim.
   
5. 01:39:073 (3,4,5) - 5 is different from 3,4, so I think they shouldn’t be symmetric Fixed All~!!

Actively

1. 00:55:657 (2,3,4) - 01:07:582 (2,3,4) - I don’t think triangle with same distance fits here nicely here. Symmetric shape with same DS yells identical emphasis, but (based on the music) I think 2 should be emphasized most, 3, and lastly 1. Fixed, I think~
   
2. 01:02:924 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 01:05:905 (3,4,5,6) - I think this is more difficult than it deserves Fixed~
   
3. 01:23:980 (4,5,6,1) - I think flow could be improved. Relatively big jump with with no sharp turn is awkward to hit at this level. Fixed~
   
4. 01:23:980 (4,5,6,1) - I see a lot of similar patterns in the map, and they almost feel lazy to me. These patterns are frankly just variations of symmetric sliders. I don’t think any of them were terribly misused, but definitely overused IMO. (00:17:458 (1,2,3,4) - 00:48:762 (1,2,3,4) - 01:04:415 (4,5,1,2) - 01:37:955 (1,2,3,4) - etc). This will take some time. >> I'll reduce the frequency of the patterns you mentioned.
   
5. 01:36:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 02:50:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Too much single tapping, a triple, and stacked notes. This part needs emphasis, but I think it might be too challenging compared to rest of the map. Fixed~
   
6. 02:35:346 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this is little too much 1/2 beats, especially compared with 01:20:067 (1,2,3,4,1) - Fixed~
   
7. 03:03:669 (7,8,9,10,11) - Intentionally wriggly slider? I don’t think it was very effective here. Changed~
   
8. 03:02:924 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider making these repeating sliders because 1) these 1/4 beats are rather small compared to 03:03:669 (7,8,9,10,11) - , and 2) difficulty reasons. Fixed~

I mainly focused on Quickly and Actively, because my attention span doesn't last much longer than 1 hour xD

This mod was had more subjective stuff than most other mods I give. I hope you'll find at least some of them helpful /w\. Good luck!

Thanks so much for modding~!! I'll get to your mod as soon as I can.

Hi, sorry for being late.

[Easy]

Generally , this map feels very center heavy. press Ctrl+A to see what I mean; the entire top left and top right corners are ignored. Not sure if this is just your style or something, but it makes the map feel like a donut at times, where you just kinda wrap around the center.

01:17:831 (2,3) - This blanket looks thinner on the right than on the left

01:49:880 - I suggest mapping this downbeat.

01:55:843 (1) - end this on the drum at 01:59:942 - ?

02:36:092 (2,1) - this blanket changes width, keep the distance between the sliders consistent for neatness

Overall, this diff is rather fine but consider the corners thing I mentioned earlier.

[Normal]

This map similarly has the centered feel to it (ctrl+a to see the ignored corners) but its not a huge deal to be honest. I'm not really one to think that it's a problem but beware others may believe so.

00:19:880 (2,3) - not a fan of the way you map this since you're ignoring 00:20:253's sound which you don't do in the other parts

00:23:793 - Why ignore this sound?

01:48:762 - Shouldn't ignore this drum imo

01:49:880 - just like in easy, consider mapping this downbeat

01:55:843 (1) - I suggest ending this at 01:59:942

[Rough]

00:23:793 - as in the other diff I don't think you should ignore this drum

00:41:309 - don't ignore this sound! it's prominent. a hit circle would be great here

01:49:880 - same as other diffs, map this! If you do this, remove the nc on 01:49:135 (1) -

01:55:843 (1) - again as with other diffs, end this on 02:00:688 -

Eh, can't really find a lot with this diff. I disagree with the fact that you mostly mapped vocals because I think the background melody of this song is great and deserves to have the priority when mapping, but that's purely subjective.

For what it is, this diff is rather good.

[Intense]

cs 4.6! woah

Anything I mentioned in previous diffs that applies to all diffs applies to this one as well.

00:47:644 - map this vocal?

Nothing else for this diff specifically.

Good luck!

Hobbes2 wrote:

Hi, sorry for being late.

[Easy]

Generally , this map feels very center heavy. press Ctrl+A to see what I mean; the entire top left and top right corners are ignored. Not sure if this is just your style or something, but it makes the map feel like a donut at times, where you just kinda wrap around the center. Yeah, it is a problem. If I claimed that this is my style, it would be like saying my style is boring to play. I adjusted the pattern during the start of the kiais, but that's all I can do now besides remapping.

01:17:831 (2,3) - This blanket looks thinner on the right than on the left adjusted very slightly

01:49:880 - I suggest mapping this downbeat. That's inconsistent, and since it's a break, it's optional.

01:55:843 (1) - end this on the drum at 01:59:942 - ? Fixed~

02:36:092 (2,1) - this blanket changes width, keep the distance between the sliders consistent for neatness Fixed~

Overall, this diff is rather fine but consider the corners thing I mentioned earlier. Definitely will keep this in mind.

[Normal]

This map similarly has the centered feel to it (ctrl+a to see the ignored corners) but its not a huge deal to be honest. I'm not really one to think that it's a problem but beware others may believe so. I want to fix this, but there's little I can do now except remapping.

00:19:880 (2,3) - not a fan of the way you map this since you're ignoring 00:20:253's sound which you don't do in the other parts Fixed~

00:23:793 - Why ignore this sound? because I'm not following that instrument

01:48:762 - Shouldn't ignore this drum imo ^

01:49:880 - just like in easy, consider mapping this downbeat same reason as easy

01:55:843 (1) - I suggest ending this at 01:59:942 I'd rather follow the lyrics, like most of the map. It can be harder because it's not Easy.

[Rough]

00:23:793 - as in the other diff I don't think you should ignore this drum Fixed, it's more consistent in this difficulty this way ^^

00:41:309 - don't ignore this sound! it's prominent. a hit circle would be great here lyrics

01:49:880 - same as other diffs, map this! If you do this, remove the nc on 01:49:135 (1) - same reason as easy

01:55:843 (1) - again as with other diffs, end this on 02:00:688 - same reason as Normal

Eh, can't really find a lot with this diff. I disagree with the fact that you mostly mapped vocals because I think the background melody of this song is great and deserves to have the priority when mapping, but that's purely subjective. You're right. I should have thought about that when mapping. >> It's too late now.

For what it is, this diff is rather good.

[Intense]

cs 4.6! woah Fixed to 4 what was I thinking?

Anything I mentioned in previous diffs that applies to all diffs applies to this one as well.

00:47:644 - map this vocal? Fixed, but this all has to be stacked on 00:48:017 (3) - this now for spacing

Nothing else for this diff specifically.

Good luck!

Cupholder
Thank you for modding~!!
I'm considering remapping because it would fix the concentration on the middle and the lyrics, but I like the way the map is now, and I don't want to remap again.

Hihi! Nm req from my queueueue

Sorry being late!



Took a quick look at the others and it seems fine.
GL!