hi
[General]
some scrolling images exceed the maximum file dimensions, try resize these
sb\Lihui\1.png (768x1052)
sb\Lihui\1.1.png (768x1052)
sb\Lihui\1.2.png (768x1052)
sb\Lihui\1.3.png (768x1052)
sb\Lihui\3.png (1200x1644)
also unused files
sb\ame2.png
sb\whitepot.png
sb\BG\bg3.jpg
sb\Lihui\2.3.png
sb\particle\yh2.png
do you have metadata source? the artist doesn't look right since you have a double space between つぼみ and (Long Version)
also if you have jubeat in tags why isn't it a source? just curious
[Knospe]
00:13:235 - how come you skipped this? the drums/guitar is still there
00:13:643 (3) - clap?
00:13:562 - it seems a lot of the blue ticks drums are ignored yet you have triplets where there aren't actually triplets like 00:13:806 (4,5,6) - isn't actually a triplet in the music since the guitar trill is on 00:14:051
00:17:148 - pretty loud drum here and there is no need to make 00:17:230 (1) - a triple since theres no sound on the blue tick there. something like
http://puu.sh/rQx7C/a1961dac8c.jpg works fine
00:17:475 - sound is here not 00:17:638
00:18:616 - 00:19:268 - some other drums u might want to include
00:26:687 (1) - is nc really needed?
00:51:306 (4) - should have nc somewhere around here
00:55:627 - same kinda problem with the triplets here imo, the drum triplets land on the 2nd red tick of every measure eg. 00:56:931 - 00:58:235 - 00:59:540 - yet they dont seem to be mapped, and instead you add extra triplets that aren't in the music like 00:55:953 - 00:59:866 - so it doesn't really follow the music that well..
01:08:752 (5,6,7,8) - doesn't really have much emphasis on important beats here since u use same ds. 01:08:589 (3,6,8) - are the most powerful notes so why not make them stand out more with higher spacing
01:09:648 (4) - i dont think this note exists in the music
01:17:882 (1) - stick to standard nc patterns here? i don't really see the need for variation when this is the same as something like 00:57:013 (3,4,5,6,1)
01:31:578 (1,2) - ctrl g. triple is on 01:31:822
imo u could self mod the rest of your map with the things i mentioned to improve overall quality and make it follow the music more closely.
one more thing:
04:56:360 -
sb load is ridiculously high here and peaks at 8.88x at 05:06:469 - so try optimise ur sb to have an sb load under 5.0xpopped for sb/metadata/quality
good luck!