ExUsagi wrote:

schwarzvgrune wrote:

i don't know why a BN even requested a mod from my queue but...
sorry if it didn't help // xD don't worry, i appreciate all mods i've got, and btw i still regular mappers & players afterall..


general
suggestions given for
hand balancing - note relevancy.

1 2 3 4

Baozi // hmm.. i will consider to rename to Basic "Baozi"

for a stand alone word in chinese we rarely use 1 character / syllable. its something minor o.o (linguistically we prefer 2 / 4 or any even numbers of a set of characters)
包 = yes its 'bun' but when we refer to the 'bun' itself we use 包子 instead of 包.

SPOILER

00:25:840 (25840|3,26012|2,26183|1) - drag 1x to the left? become 1 2 3 // ok

00:46:069 (46069|1,46583|2,47098|2) - ctrl H? and the 1st note move to 4? so the way to press it becomes left hand right hand, left hand right hand, a good way for beginner to learn? // nice catch.. ok
a lot of your pattern follows a streaming line? why not make it more varied? // for Basic sake.. =~=)a

01:26:526 -

// ok, abit flipped but i catch your idea.. :3

egg roll

SPOILER

no issue found

stir-fried seafood

SPOILER

00:26:869 (26869|2) - move to 2? // 00:26:183 (26183|2,26526|2,26869|2,27212|2) - for this, keep

00:46:069 (46069|3,46412|2) - exchange them to 3 4? the pitch rise here,

// ok

01:01:155 (61155|1,61326|2) - move to 3 and 4? the pitch is medium - high - low (LN is the lowest)
// the LN moved to 1.. :3 ok

saucy meatball

SPOILER

no issue

fried rice

SPOILER

00:09:898 (9898|1,9983|2,10069|3,10069|0) - you're following that BG sound,
but why not here
00:10:669 (10669|0,10755|3,10755|1) - // i want to make a variation rhythm, that focused at vary instrument..

00:55:498 (55498|3,55583|3,55669|1,55669|0,55840|3,55840|2,55926|0,56012|1,56012|0) -
the pitch for the beat, is not consistent? why dont you follow the earlier pattern?
if you follow the pitch it should be like (IGNORE THE PLACEMENT) you know where to place if you decide to implement that // ^^; yes, thanks for noticing.. fixed

you follow that accurately for the rest of the song, here for example
01:00:640 (60640|0,60726|2,60726|0,60812|3,60812|1,60983|2,61069|2,61155|0,61155|1) -

01:19:498 (79498|2,79583|3,79669|1,79669|2) - pitch is different with 01:18:983 (78983|2,79069|3,79155|1,79155|2) -
consider adjusting? // ok

01:12:983 (72983|2,73069|2,73155|1,73155|3,73326|0,73326|2,73498|1,73583|1,73669|0,73669|2) -
pitch is different why do you stack those 2 1/4 SN? // considering this is the hardest diff in this mapset, and i don't really follow PR at all (without breaking the feel of the music), i just trying to make even something odd.. :3

01:15:726 (75726|0,75812|0,75898|1,75898|2,76069|3,76069|0,76240|3,76326|3,76412|1,76412|2) - ^ also the same
ignore this if you follow the beat. its correct if you follow the beat. but its very faint in the background, and
your part here01:19:498 (79498|2,79583|3,79669|1,79669|2) - pitch is different with 01:18:983 (78983|2,79069|3,79155|1,79155|2) -
consider adjusting? << suggest that you're following the melody ?? maybe you can pick one for the rest of the phase just for consistency?
// disagree, i using Inverted / Reversed PR.. no changes, but i will consider to change later.. thanks for noticing :3

that's all, sorry if it's not helpful

also, if you do the chinese restaurant, why not the china dress >_<
i love china dress from meme... make it pls

xD geez, thanks for the mod, it's really helpful dude, so next time if you have a time, i might need your help again.. :3

[GraveChaos] wrote:

[MOD Check]

Basic "Bao" and Easy "Egg-roll" OD = 7 while HP DR = 7. Since as stated in AiMOD and as i can see in these diffs..
Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood" OD = 7.5 HP DR = 7
"Noodles" of Insanity OD = 8.5 HP DR = 8
Burst!ng "Fried Rice" OD = 8.5 HP DR = 8.5

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Overall Difficulty should be:
9-10 when using mainly notes and just a few amount of holds
7-8 when using a mix a balanced notes and holds
5-6 when using mostly holds

Check AiMOD for snapped problems in Easy "Egg-roll"
Epilepsy warning in Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"

As for i MOD the diffs i'll prioritize on patterns

// responding about the OD & HP, I prefer to starts the Basic diff with 6 & 6, since it's targeted for 'Basic' players.. hence, Basic though..
// well, since i made full spread diff with calculated diff curve / gap, i think i set everything 'as it is' (according to the diff name..)

|1|2|3|4|
[Basic "Bao"]
00:05:955 (5955|2,6298|3) - Ctrl + G for better pattern and hand balance/relaxation. In this way of pattern it gives more relaxation to the hand and since this is an easy diff. Newbies will feel more relax. in addition when you hear it's rhythm it sounds like entering/centering . // keep, le PR

00:28:926 (28926|0,29269|0,29612|1,29955|1,30298|2,30640|2) - As for my opinion in here this shouldn't be stacked it's because as i hear it closely/clearly their beats isn't the same to be stacked. So just ignore this if not necessary or you've followed something or if necessary change pattern. // keep, as you see the stacking is only on this phase, as the whole phase aren't stacked.. so it's more like patter vice versa

00:47:955 (47955|3,48126|2) - Move to |1| - |3| for better pattern. 00:47:440 (47440|3,47955|3) - Notice this first before applying this as you can hear in this 2 notes their sounds/beats/rhythm isn't the same so it's necessary to be like this (The one i suggested). Move it to |1|- |2| makes the pattern balance. // okkie.. ==a abit rearranged

[Easy "Egg-roll"]
01:25:155 (85155|3) - Move to |2| for pattern since this 01:24:812 and 01:25:155 don't have the same sound/beat/rhythm. In addition this makes it consistent notice this column 01:24:126 (84126|1,84640|1) - same pattern as before/previous patterns // i don't rely PR this time... ==a well i re-arranged them 'at least' following PR more correctly / no stacking.. ;~;

[Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"]
00:02:355 (2355|0) - Move to |2|? or do you actually intended to make that pattern? Couz' it's OP in there //slapped // keep

00:50:355 (50355|3) - Move to |3| it's better in here couz' the sound/beat/rhythm in here is like right left right/outside inside outside rhythmic pattern

01:45:555 (105555|1) - Move to |3| for more balance pattern and hand balance/relaxation pattern. In addition not necessary to be stack with the SN couz' the pitch/rhythm/beat change. // ok

[Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"]
Nein!

[Hard "Grilled Chicken"]
Nein!

["Noodles" of Insanity]
01:03:898 Add SN in |1| this is necessary because of the beat here is louder than 01:04:069 <Remove SNs and as your pattern // disagree, i only follow the beat from the heavier synthesizers...

[Burst!ng "Fried Rice"]
Nein!

As for the next MODDER or BN who'll check this. Pls give higher priority in "Noodles" of Insanity and Burst!ng "Fried Rice" (Last 2 diffs)

Slap me for i failed as a BN TwT
Nice map!~
Good luck hope i'll get rank soon!~ =w=)b

1. 00:01:840 (1840|2) - move to 4?
2. 00:02:012 (2012|1) - move to 3?
3. 00:02:526 (2526|2) - move to 2?
4. 00:03:040 (3040|1) - move to 4?
5. 00:05:440 - add note?
6. 00:06:640 (6640|3,6983|2,6983|0,7326|1,7669|2,8012|1) - ctrl+h ?
7. 00:15:898 (15898|2) - move to 4?
8. 00:20:698 (20698|1) - move to 3?
9. 00:28:240 (28240|1,28326|0) - delete and move LN start in here?
10. 00:30:298 (30298|3) - delete?

1. 00:01:498 (1498|2) - delete?
2. 00:18:469 (18469|2) - move to 2?
3. 00:18:812 - add note in 3?
4. 00:18:983 - add note in 2?
5. 00:19:155 (19155|1) - move to 4?
6. 00:23:955 (23955|0) - move to 2?
7. 00:28:240 - 00:28:926 - i prefer change to LN ?
8. 01:08:355 (68355|3) - move to 3?
9. 01:34:412 (94412|1,94412|2) - move to 1 and 4
10. 01:43:498 (103498|1) - move to 1
11. 01:43:669 (103669|2,103669|0) - geser dikit ke kanan?

-Troke- wrote:

Hello ExUsagi
as requested
i just only suggest move and add a note because im new in modding
dont give me kds if my mod didnt help // ssshh...
1|2|3|4
[Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"]

1. 00:01:840 (1840|2) - move to 4?
2. 00:02:012 (2012|1) - move to 3?
3. 00:02:526 (2526|2) - move to 2?
4. 00:03:040 (3040|1) - move to 4? // keep
5. 00:05:440 - add note?
6. 00:06:640 (6640|3,6983|2,6983|0,7326|1,7669|2,8012|1) - ctrl+h ? // not going to reverse the PR.. keep
7. 00:15:898 (15898|2) - move to 4? // keep
8. 00:20:698 (20698|1) - move to 3? // 00:20:698 (20698|1,21040|1,21383|1,21726|1) - keep, to make these notes has same column
9. 00:28:240 (28240|1,28326|0) - delete and move LN start in here? // ooo i guess it's easy enough for normal.. rearranged
10. 00:30:298 (30298|3) - delete?

[Easy "Egg-roll"]

1. 00:01:498 (1498|2) - delete? // keep, we already got Basic diff for easier note placement.. :3
   
   // continue later //
   
2. 00:18:469 (18469|2) - move to 2? // keep
3. 00:18:812 - add note in 3? // ^
4. 00:18:983 - add note in 2? // ^
5. 00:19:155 (19155|1) - move to 4? // ^
6. 00:23:955 (23955|0) - move to 2? // ^
7. 00:28:240 - 00:28:926 - i prefer change to LN ? // i prefer simplicity for EZ diff.. keep
8. 01:08:355 (68355|3) - move to 3? // hngg keep... ==a
9. 01:34:412 (94412|1,94412|2) - move to 1 and 4 // ok
10. 01:43:498 (103498|1) - move to 1
11. 01:43:669 (103669|2,103669|0) - geser dikit ke kanan? // done

cuma segitu om ;w;

YunoFanatic wrote:

00:04:926 (4926|1,5098|0) - saucy

fakurebbit gonna repay mi sumtime heheheheheheheheehehehee // will do

[Basic Bao]
00:05:442 (5442|1,5957|2,6300|3) - would suggest to you to ctrl j these, so the pattern itself can connect to 00:04:071 (4071|2,6985|0) -
00:20:357 (20357|1,20528|3) - for easier pattern, you should just make these one a stair instead like 00:25:842 (25842|2,26014|1,26185|0) - or ctrl j. can confuse beginners sometime.
00:50:185 (50185|2) - move 4th column for better pattern : V
00:56:700 (56700|1,57042|2,57385|3,57728|0,58071|2,58414|1,58757|0) - after you did something like 00:50:871 (50871|1,51214|2,51557|1,51900|0,52242|1,52585|2,52928|1,53271|0,53614|2,53957|3,54300|2,54642|1,54985|2,55328|3,55671|2) - WHICH IS REPEATED. your not doing it on 00:59:100 (59100|2) - ? fakkk uuuuuuuuuuuuu bonnnieeeeeee
01:01:842 (61842|1) - would want to put 4th column, much relatable to the patturn.
01:42:985 (102985|0,102985|1,103671|3,103671|2) - what?! after everything you'll do a 2 noted?!!?!? specially appearing at the end? youre joking me right? delete 1 !!!

// almost all done.. i lost the reply orz..

[EZ Eggroll]
00:04:069 (4069|3,4069|2) - make them move to the middle for consisten pattern.
00:10:755 (10755|2) - would suggest that you stick to your pattern, move to 4th.
00:11:783 (11783|2) - imo this doesnt make sense. delete, 1 weird 2 doesnt need 3 no sound 4 ayy lmao.
00:11:783 (11783|2,15726|2) - lol this isnt needed here the only one that should have a single note is 00:16:412 (16412|1) - because this is where the sound is much outstanding, the one earlier has a very very silent sound which doesnt suited to have a note imo.
00:21:040 (21040|2) - 10/10 would stick to the pattern instead switching everything around. move to 4th.
00:25:840 (25840|1) - whyyyy is thisss in here aaaaaa would suggest you to move this to 3rd instead.
00:29:269 (29269|0,29440|1,29612|2,29955|3,30126|1,30469|3,30640|2,30812|1,30983|0,31155|1,31326|2,31498|3) - in here i definitely follow the sound that has more appealing to the ear which is the electric thingy sound, make this easier follow the sound such as 00:29:269 (29269|0,29612|2,29955|3,30640|2,30983|0,31326|2) -
00:29:269 (29269|0,29612|2,29955|3,30640|2,30983|0,31326|2,43326|1,43669|3,43840|2) - overated for ez in my point of view its hard to catch, would delete the single note then.
01:25:155 (85155|0) - would move to 3rd regardless of the overlap tho, stich thee pattern not wuush wuush wuush.

// same, all done i guess

[Normal seafood please name too long aaa]
00:02:869 (2869|2,3040|0,3040|1) - make this like 00:01:840 (1840|3,2012|0,2012|2,2355|0,2526|3,2526|1) - it will really suit well with them + with 00:03:383 (3383|1,3555|2,3555|3) -
00:13:498 (13498|1) - move to 3rd has overlap with the last ln and it weird. cause 3rd is open as a donut.
00:21:898 (21898|0) - why not ln instead or atleast move this to 3rd column and move 00:22:412 (22412|2) - to 4th or better patter.
00:29:269 (29269|2) - move to 2nd so it has a flow with 00:29:440 (29440|0,29612|3,29955|2) -
00:42:640 (42640|3) - move to 1st cause why not its open and only has 1 overlap than the current.
00:49:326 (49326|1) - 3rd ^

// all done too..


[Hard chicken]
00:04:926 (4926|1,5098|0) - ctrl j for better flow for 00:05:269 (5269|2,5440|1) -
00:06:298 (6298|3) - loud enough to be doubled. // x_x
00:38:183 (38183|0) - ^ add another note to here so the pattern is consistent to with 00:38:355 (38355|0,38355|3) - would suggest to add it on 2 // added
01:32:012 (92012|3) - only a ln here? // x_x

// some rejected

[Burst]
00:00:812 (812|0,983|1,1069|0,1155|0,1155|2,1326|0,1326|3,1498|0,1498|3,1498|1,1669|1,1755|0,1755|2,1840|1) - naziiii pattern should re arrange please. // pls keep
00:11:955 (11955|1,11955|2) - it suits here much more if you move them 1 column left. // ok
00:17:612 (17612|3,17612|1,17612|2) - this only needs 2 noted imo the one that should be highlighted with triple is 00:17:783 (17783|0,17783|1,17783|2) - because it has more appealing sound. // ok
01:07:155 (67155|1,67155|0,67240|2,67240|3,67326|0,67326|3,67326|1) - bonnie y u du dis, the sound in here isnt really loud! like really loud! to be doubled. // ok

sory not modding ur ln henti diff huihaihsiadhioasdhapsifhpasiofhp

Harbyter wrote:

IRC

10:17 Harbyter: that igor song gonna be dq
10:17 Harbyter: for sure
10:17 Harbyter: there are lot of worng snaps ,i doubt qat will ignore
10:17 ExUsagi: inb4 snapping
10:17 Harbyter: lol
10:17 ExUsagi: is it?
10:18 ExUsagi: ugh
10:18 Harbyter: yes
10:18 ExUsagi: idk then.. ;w; its my old map too
10:18 ExUsagi: i forgot to re-snap, i just leave everything to yuno
10:18 ExUsagi: but yeah, yuno wont mind
10:19 Harbyter: lol
10:19 Harbyter: wanna qualify my tsuki?
10:19 Harbyter: xD
10:19 Harbyter: shana will bubble it
10:20 ExUsagi: link
10:20 *Harbyter is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/646605 Kozato - Tsuki -Yue- [MX]]
10:21 ExUsagi: weew
10:21 ExUsagi: wait
10:21 ExUsagi: can you check my chinese restaurant? :^)
10:21 Harbyter: aahhhh
10:21 Harbyter: i will
10:21 Harbyter: xD
10:22 *ExUsagi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/579709 Memme - Chinese Restaurant]
10:22 ExUsagi: there
10:22 ExUsagi: waiting these M4M modders took too long
10:22 Harbyter: are all those custom name accetable
10:22 ExUsagi: yes
10:22 ExUsagi: i put easy normal hard insane and last diff is (burst) which it's custom
10:23 ExUsagi: like my..
10:23 *ExUsagi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/384381 LAST ALLIANCE - HEKIREKI (TV Size)]
10:24 Harbyter: let me check now
10:24 Harbyter: that snap
10:24 Harbyter: remember?
10:24 Harbyter: xD
10:25 ExUsagi: ok
10:25 ExUsagi: brb
10:28 *Harbyter is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/579709 Memme - Chinese Restaurant [Burst!ng "Fried Rice"]]
10:28 Harbyter: 00:01:155 - 1/12
10:29 Harbyter: 00:01:326 -
10:29 Harbyter: 1/16
10:29 Harbyter: wanna put the 1/6 stream and a 1/8 stream?
10:32 ExUsagi: wait
10:32 ExUsagi: there's someone here huehue
10:32 Harbyter: kk
10:32 ExUsagi: ooh i leave it empty.. for purpose
10:32 Harbyter: but is awkward
10:32 ExUsagi: you know, build-up theory
10:33 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/huSBL/dc744d9cb2.jpg
10:33 Harbyter: build-up ?
10:33 Harbyter: wut?xd
10:33 Harbyter: xD
10:33 ExUsagi: you know
10:33 ExUsagi: the beginning is easier, to middle abit hard, and insane ending
10:33 Harbyter: ahhhhhhh
10:33 ExUsagi: to gain a climax
10:33 Harbyter: okok
10:34 Harbyter: yea it's kinda something i'm doing on my marathon
10:34 Harbyter: the furioso melodia
10:34 Harbyter: xD
10:34 ExUsagi: 01:11:398 (71398|3,71440|2,71440|1,71440|0) - although this is the climax part huehue
10:34 Harbyter: 00:07:898 (7898|3,7955|2) -
10:34 Harbyter: i think this is a 1/8
10:35 Harbyter: first sound start here 00:07:926 -
10:35 ExUsagi: oo 00:07:926 -
10:35 ExUsagi: ok
10:40 Harbyter: mmmm
10:40 Harbyter: wait
10:40 Harbyter: maybe is a 1/6
10:40 Harbyter: is weird only that a 1/8
10:40 Harbyter: lol
10:41 ExUsagi: 1/8
10:41 Harbyter: sound start between the 1/6 and the 1/4
10:41 ExUsagi: rip
10:42 Harbyter: put a simple 1/4?
10:42 Harbyter: lol
10:42 ExUsagi: i believe it's 1/8
10:42 Harbyter: ok
10:42 ExUsagi: clear enough, and i blame the synthesizer distort
10:43 ExUsagi: :U
10:43 Harbyter: xD
10:43 Harbyter: btw afk
10:43 Harbyter: some customer
10:43 Harbyter: x.x
10:43 Harbyter: i'm at work
10:43 ExUsagi: xD
10:43 ExUsagi: ok
10:43 ExUsagi: its soo quiet here.. no customer
10:57 Harbyter: 00:25:283 (25283|0) -
10:57 Harbyter: nothing here
10:57 ExUsagi: ==a
10:57 ExUsagi: removed
11:01 Harbyter: 01:01:498 -
11:01 Harbyter: like at the start
11:02 Harbyter: 1/12
11:02 Harbyter: 01:01:669 - 1/16
11:02 Harbyter: 01:01:540 (61540|2,61583|1,61626|0) - snap in 1/6?
11:03 ExUsagi: screenie pls
11:03 ExUsagi: harder pls
11:04 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/huTB2/ecd660e95a.jpg
11:04 ExUsagi: 1/6 & 1/8?
11:04 Harbyter: yes
11:04 ExUsagi: ok
11:04 ExUsagi: done
11:05 ExUsagi: and the last burst part
11:05 ExUsagi: which why i called this fried rice
11:05 Harbyter: 01:10:069 -
11:05 Harbyter: mmm
11:06 ExUsagi: rip
11:06 Harbyter: those roll are unaudible
11:06 Harbyter: xD
11:06 ExUsagi: last time even worst
11:06 Harbyter: sugges to make a 1/4 stream with triple
11:07 Harbyter: where you can hear the cymbal
11:07 ExUsagi: ok
11:07 ExUsagi: ;w;
11:07 ExUsagi: goodbye fried rice
11:08 Harbyter: http://puu.sh/huTJw/b701a1fa51.jpg
11:08 Harbyter: something like this
11:09 Harbyter: 01:19:926 (79926|1) -
11:09 Harbyter: remove?
11:09 Harbyter: this section you put notes only where there are the synth
11:10 ExUsagi: 01:11:140 (71140|2,71183|1,71226|0,71267|1,71269|3,71312|2,71355|1,71398|3,71440|1,71440|0,71440|2) - i heard 1/8 here
11:10 ExUsagi: ;w; yeah, almost everything on lead synth
11:10 Harbyter: 01:11:312 -
11:10 Harbyter: i can hear only here
11:12 Harbyter: 01:35:669 (95669|1,95726|2) - 1/8?
11:12 ExUsagi: 1/8
11:12 Harbyter: 01:42:012 (102012|1,102069|3) -
11:13 ExUsagi: 1/8
11:14 ExUsagi: 01:10:069 - don't you hear 1/8 drum roll with 100% playback rate?
11:15 Harbyter: can't hear well here x.x
11:15 ExUsagi: orz
11:15 Harbyter: mmm
11:15 Harbyter: maybe is a 1/8
11:15 ExUsagi: ;w; it is
11:16 Harbyter: well keep the 1/8
11:16 Harbyter: xD
11:16 ExUsagi: rip me
11:16 ExUsagi: i forgot the formation aaaa
11:17 Harbyter: something like haelequin
11:18 Harbyter: 1234 123 1
11:18 Harbyter: then 4321 432 4
11:18 Harbyter: 00:13:240 -
11:18 Harbyter: here now that i notice
11:18 Harbyter: 1/6?
11:18 Harbyter: follow that synth?
11:21 ExUsagi: yeah
11:21 ExUsagi: 1/6 or 1/8?
11:21 ExUsagi: rip customer
11:21 Harbyter: 1/6
11:21 Harbyter: ok
11:22 ExUsagi: done
11:24 Harbyter: dafonz
11:24 Harbyter: last two notes
11:24 Harbyter: noticed now
11:24 Harbyter: lol
11:24 Harbyter: 1/8
11:25 ExUsagi: 01:47:569 (107569|1,107612|2) - ?
11:25 ExUsagi: ok
11:25 Harbyter: yes
11:25 ExUsagi: i could use this diff for snapping reference to the other diffs
11:25 Harbyter: yep
11:25 Harbyter: just this atm

some IRC

Click me

Burst!ng

O.O

00:10:583 - Missing note? i heard a beat here. Well at least you put an LN start - 00:10:412 - if you following that chinese instruments.
00:13:840 - ^
00:11:098 - ^
00:13:840 - ^
00:13:069 (13069|3) - Delete. no sound and - 00:12:983 (12983|2) - Better be a long note.
00:08:183 - Add LN somehow, maybe?
Seems like you following the chinese instruments here. But there's some long tunes there. and I think it should be LN.
Surely you can find it by yourself


Easy

00:18:469 (18469|2,19669|3,20526|2,23955|0,25155|0) - is it really necessary to put jack notes on Easy?
HP and OD to 7

Basic

Unherited Timing points with others
OD 8

Random testplay :3

Nice diff


It's 3,11 stars. Why I can't pass it? T_T

ExUsagi wrote:

going to re-map the insane diff.. back to wip

@rivals, wait until i finish remapping the diff

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Memme - Chinese Restaurant [OsuMania]

Sorry i have to pop this bubble due some reasons below:

[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: 128
- AiMod: Basic's diff got a lot of problems on timing conflicts, due the offset curently is 1500, and other diffs is 1498, so fix the offset with the check Offset // Some notes not yet snapped
- Tags: Sounds good
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: Okay
- Hitsound: Checked, no delay
- Timing: Okay
- Source: Should be Pump It Up Prime (Remove 2015) // all done

- Diffname conflict:
On this name: Why using like Basic "Bao" or Easy "Egg-roll", use both seems hue ...
1. Only use diffname like as: Basic - Easy - Normal - ... etc.
2. Use the food name, but its must make senses together: like as Bao is cheap ... and ... and Fried Rice is most expensive or yummy-est // :U please

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means I will come back

[Basic]

SPOILER

1. This is a very easy diff, some parts with this: 00:31:671 (31671|3,32014|3,32357|2,32700|2,33042|1,33385|1,33728|0) - is seems very hard for the beginner, like as jackhammer, make it more easier? // i guess 1/1 beat is not that hard.. it would be hard for 1/2 indeed
2. 00:36:471 (36471|1) - end on 00:36:471 (36471|1) - // what.. o_O i guess you pasted wrong time stamp, reduced 1/2 beat
3. 01:07:328 - to 01:10:757 - i didnt heat the sounds so loud, and its very small, and long note or a single note is enough // there's a finish.. ==a keep
4. 01:34:414 - missing notes? since you added 2 notes on 01:23:442 - //added

[Easy]

SPOILER

1. Basic is Easy diff, its same, dont know you make two diffs for ... but meh ... hue // :p should i rename basic to beginner?
2. 00:10:926 (10926|1) - Sound ends at 00:11:955 -
3. Those 1/2 jacks ... hard for beginner too, actually, those mostly should be on Normal instead // ==a its easy, 175 bpm should fair enough
4. 01:25:155 (85155|2) - move to 1 is better // 2

[Normal]

SPOILER

1. 00:31:669 - to 00:33:040 - this part not snap with the long, must be: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3169414 // rearranged
2. 01:46:069 (106069|1) - here, you ends on 01:46:069 (106069|1) - in both easy, why you end on 1/2 on normal? End on: 01:46:412 - // done

[Intermediate]

SPOILER

1. 01:11:183 (71183|0) - ghost note // D: i can hear clear sound even with speaker.. the beat is sightly weird if removed too

[Hard]

SPOILER

1. 00:56:955 (56955|2) - Ghost note ; 00:57:983 (57983|1) - ghost note // removed
   
2. 01:07:926 - no sound
3. 01:08:783 - have sound on here but no sound on 01:08:955 -
4. 01:09:469 - no sound
5. 01:11:183 - no sound // keep
   
6. 00:13:155 - to 00:13:326 - is 1/6 parts, no sound on 1/4, its for conflict and note snap

[Extra]

SPOILER

1. Wrong diff name in here: Should be Extra "Noodles"// renamed.. huehue
   But mostly suggestion to choose 1 or 2 on the Generals Check
   
2. 00:34:669 - 00:35:183 - 00:35:698 - i didnt understand on this part: why added 2 notes on 1/4 but not in 1/2? like as 00:36:126 - its same sound
3. 00:56:482 (56482|2) - this note is not snapped, move this to 00:56:440 -
4. 00:57:983 (57983|2) - ??? why two notes? same sounds like as 00:57:812 - 00:57:983 - // following the synth
5. 01:04:669 (64669|3) - this should be on 01:04:583 -
6. 01:07:926 - no sound
7. 01:09:726 (69726|2) - no sound // ==a are you sure?
8. 00:56:955 - no sound ; 00:57:983 - no sound ; // ==a keep
9. 01:47:569 (107569|0,107612|1) - i didnt think Whistle is fit with this, remove the hitsound is most better
10. 00:13:155 - to 00:13:326 - is 1/6 parts, no sound on 1/4, its for conflict and note snap

[Insanity]

SPOILER

1. Doesnt after Insane is Extra? (Follow star difficulties) // following broken system... you could play it by yourself, the noodle is extra harder than the fried rice.. i wont blame anyone, but i believe the diff spread is totally fine
2. 00:01:669 (1669|1,1755|2,1755|0,1840|1) - ==a etou ... same with 00:02:183 (2183|3,2183|1,2269|2,2355|3,2355|1) - but what the heck you add two notes on 1/4? Its for the song // lel
3. And 00:02:698 (2698|1,2783|0,2783|2,2869|1) - this is accepted
4. 00:13:155 - to 00:13:326 - 1/6 part i mention with Hard and Extra's diff // yes
5. 00:56:955 - no sound ; 00:57:983 - no sound ; // ==a keep
6. 01:01:498 (61498|3,61555|2,61612|1,61669|3,61669|0,61712|2,61755|1,61798|0) - mostly suggest on long notes, and seems its not snap with the song // keep, its snapped
7. 01:01:926 (61926|1) - no sound
8. 01:07:926 - no sound
9. 01:09:726 (69726|2) - no sound // these stream has cue sound per every 1/4
10. 01:41:955 - to 01:42:126 - snapping conflict, its 1/6 // i believe this part is 1/8, resnapped all other diffs
11. 01:47:569 (107569|1) - remove this hitsound
12. 01:08:355 - a object is overwrite on here // lel removed

[Overall]
Srsly, im modding this map while hungry D:
Last part, remove the hitsound: 01:47:612 - the hitnormal is fit with it
But anyway, nice map with good song
Dunno why you make 7 diffs for 4K but hue ... next time please make 7K too
Anyway, i will recheck soon, good luck ~

ExUsagi wrote:

welcome back

ajeemaniz wrote:

updated, hope it sufficient enough for re-bubble :3a

DE-CADE wrote:

Since KK popped 9 months ago, let me help u for it

[Beginner "Baozi"]

00:36:985 (36985|2) - End here 00:38:013

01:33:728 - http://puu.sh/nhRI5/97d65b786c.jpg // applied without any double note..

[Easy "Spring Roll"]

00:04:585 - add to 3
00:04:928 - add to 2
00:05:270 - add to 3 // sure

00:18:642 (18642|3) - Move to 2 // ok

[Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"]

00:10:928 (10928|1) - End 00:11:956

00:36:985 (36985|3) - End 00:38:185

01:38:699 (98699|1) - End 01:39:556

// ok

[Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"]

00:41:442 - Add to 2

00:46:413 - Add to 3
00:46:928 - ^ // changed whole ambiguous structure

01:41:613 - Add to 3 for crash

[Hard "Grilled Chicken"]

00:14:013 - http://puu.sh/nhTxD/f821ff1e22.jpg // ok

01:27:813 (87813|2) - Move to 4
01:27:899 - Move to 3 // o.o there's no note here
01:36:299 (96299|2) - Change to normal note

it's not end yet

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

so i will pick qualify? alright

1234

[All diffs]
hitsound is quite unable to hear, you may want to increase the volume

[Baozi]
00:06:642 - missed a clap on here // keep, i like more spacing for basic diff
00:16:928 - move like this for pitch: http://puu.sh/nooMm/690165717f.jpg // ok
01:11:956 (71956|0) - appearancely it's different from 01:11:442 (71442|0) - // ok

[Spring Roll]
00:24:642 (24642|1) - move to 1 for balance

[Asian Stir-Fried Seafood]
00:17:785 (17785|1,17785|2) - move them to the left 1 column for balance
00:20:528 (20528|3) - mvoe to 3 for balance, also it's would be nice for pitch
01:39:899 (99899|2) - lost a clap // all ok

[Saucy Meatball]
00:28:328 (28328|0) - move to 3 would be more comfortable because if you keep it on 1st column, ppl will think it's 1/2
00:31:499 - my suggestion for this part http://puu.sh/nopWM/6e15709522.jpg // half done, keep the last 2stairs

[Grilled Chicken]
00:55:928 - how about add a note on 1st column, it will fit the rhythm
01:07:928 - no sound here // apply to all other diffs as well

[Noodles]
00:08:185 - i think this part is 1/6
00:58:328 - hmm ... this part is quite lower than 00:58:670 - , so one note is fit with that // my bad, removed
01:15:385 - make like this will fit with music then, also for patterns: http://puu.sh/noqoQ/db00d3f5e0.jpg
01:35:956 - 1/6 here too // all done

[Fried Rice]
00:27:899 - http://puu.sh/noqw4/9cc970f271.jpg
01:07:928 - no sound here
01:07:156 - this hihat is quite lower than the other, it worth with only 1 note // removed some ghost notes in that part, ok

the rest are fine, call me back soon

Kyousuke- wrote:

i still remember dat 'fried rice' 9,5 HP lol

AncuL wrote:

Kyousuke- wrote:

i still remember dat 'fried rice' 9,5 HP lol

fried rice was HP10 though