Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Memme - Chinese Restaurant [OsuMania]

Sorry i have to pop this bubble due some reasons below:

[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: 128
- AiMod: Basic's diff got a lot of problems on timing conflicts, due the offset curently is 1500, and other diffs is 1498, so fix the offset with the check Offset // Some notes not yet snapped
- Tags: Sounds good
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: Okay
- Hitsound: Checked, no delay
- Timing: Okay
- Source: Should be Pump It Up Prime (Remove 2015) // all done

- Diffname conflict:
On this name: Why using like Basic "Bao" or Easy "Egg-roll", use both seems hue ...
1. Only use diffname like as: Basic - Easy - Normal - ... etc.
2. Use the food name, but its must make senses together: like as Bao is cheap ... and ... and Fried Rice is most expensive or yummy-est // :U please

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“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And dont forget my kuds if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~
means I will come back

[Basic]

SPOILER

1. This is a very easy diff, some parts with this: 00:31:671 (31671|3,32014|3,32357|2,32700|2,33042|1,33385|1,33728|0) - is seems very hard for the beginner, like as jackhammer, make it more easier? // i guess 1/1 beat is not that hard.. it would be hard for 1/2 indeed
2. 00:36:471 (36471|1) - end on 00:36:471 (36471|1) - // what.. o_O i guess you pasted wrong time stamp, reduced 1/2 beat
3. 01:07:328 - to 01:10:757 - i didnt heat the sounds so loud, and its very small, and long note or a single note is enough // there's a finish.. ==a keep
4. 01:34:414 - missing notes? since you added 2 notes on 01:23:442 - //added

[Easy]

SPOILER

1. Basic is Easy diff, its same, dont know you make two diffs for ... but meh ... hue // :p should i rename basic to beginner?
2. 00:10:926 (10926|1) - Sound ends at 00:11:955 -
3. Those 1/2 jacks ... hard for beginner too, actually, those mostly should be on Normal instead // ==a its easy, 175 bpm should fair enough
4. 01:25:155 (85155|2) - move to 1 is better // 2

[Normal]

SPOILER

1. 00:31:669 - to 00:33:040 - this part not snap with the long, must be: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3169414 // rearranged
2. 01:46:069 (106069|1) - here, you ends on 01:46:069 (106069|1) - in both easy, why you end on 1/2 on normal? End on: 01:46:412 - // done

[Intermediate]

SPOILER

1. 01:11:183 (71183|0) - ghost note // D: i can hear clear sound even with speaker.. the beat is sightly weird if removed too

[Hard]

SPOILER

1. 00:56:955 (56955|2) - Ghost note ; 00:57:983 (57983|1) - ghost note // removed
   
2. 01:07:926 - no sound
3. 01:08:783 - have sound on here but no sound on 01:08:955 -
4. 01:09:469 - no sound
5. 01:11:183 - no sound // keep
   
6. 00:13:155 - to 00:13:326 - is 1/6 parts, no sound on 1/4, its for conflict and note snap

[Extra]

SPOILER

1. Wrong diff name in here: Should be Extra "Noodles"// renamed.. huehue
   But mostly suggestion to choose 1 or 2 on the Generals Check
   
2. 00:34:669 - 00:35:183 - 00:35:698 - i didnt understand on this part: why added 2 notes on 1/4 but not in 1/2? like as 00:36:126 - its same sound
3. 00:56:482 (56482|2) - this note is not snapped, move this to 00:56:440 -
4. 00:57:983 (57983|2) - ??? why two notes? same sounds like as 00:57:812 - 00:57:983 - // following the synth
5. 01:04:669 (64669|3) - this should be on 01:04:583 -
6. 01:07:926 - no sound
7. 01:09:726 (69726|2) - no sound // ==a are you sure?
8. 00:56:955 - no sound ; 00:57:983 - no sound ; // ==a keep
9. 01:47:569 (107569|0,107612|1) - i didnt think Whistle is fit with this, remove the hitsound is most better
10. 00:13:155 - to 00:13:326 - is 1/6 parts, no sound on 1/4, its for conflict and note snap

[Insanity]

SPOILER

1. Doesnt after Insane is Extra? (Follow star difficulties) // following broken system... you could play it by yourself, the noodle is extra harder than the fried rice.. i wont blame anyone, but i believe the diff spread is totally fine
2. 00:01:669 (1669|1,1755|2,1755|0,1840|1) - ==a etou ... same with 00:02:183 (2183|3,2183|1,2269|2,2355|3,2355|1) - but what the heck you add two notes on 1/4? Its for the song // lel
3. And 00:02:698 (2698|1,2783|0,2783|2,2869|1) - this is accepted
4. 00:13:155 - to 00:13:326 - 1/6 part i mention with Hard and Extra's diff // yes
5. 00:56:955 - no sound ; 00:57:983 - no sound ; // ==a keep
6. 01:01:498 (61498|3,61555|2,61612|1,61669|3,61669|0,61712|2,61755|1,61798|0) - mostly suggest on long notes, and seems its not snap with the song // keep, its snapped
7. 01:01:926 (61926|1) - no sound
8. 01:07:926 - no sound
9. 01:09:726 (69726|2) - no sound // these stream has cue sound per every 1/4
10. 01:41:955 - to 01:42:126 - snapping conflict, its 1/6 // i believe this part is 1/8, resnapped all other diffs
11. 01:47:569 (107569|1) - remove this hitsound
12. 01:08:355 - a object is overwrite on here // lel removed

[Overall]
Srsly, im modding this map while hungry D:
Last part, remove the hitsound: 01:47:612 - the hitnormal is fit with it
But anyway, nice map with good song
Dunno why you make 7 diffs for 4K but hue ... next time please make 7K too
Anyway, i will recheck soon, good luck ~

ExUsagi wrote:

welcome back

ajeemaniz wrote:

updated, hope it sufficient enough for re-bubble :3a

DE-CADE wrote:

Since KK popped 9 months ago, let me help u for it

[Beginner "Baozi"]

00:36:985 (36985|2) - End here 00:38:013

01:33:728 - http://puu.sh/nhRI5/97d65b786c.jpg // applied without any double note..

[Easy "Spring Roll"]

00:04:585 - add to 3
00:04:928 - add to 2
00:05:270 - add to 3 // sure

00:18:642 (18642|3) - Move to 2 // ok

[Normal "Asian Stir-Fried Seafood"]

00:10:928 (10928|1) - End 00:11:956

00:36:985 (36985|3) - End 00:38:185

01:38:699 (98699|1) - End 01:39:556

// ok

[Intermediate "Saucy Meatball"]

00:41:442 - Add to 2

00:46:413 - Add to 3
00:46:928 - ^ // changed whole ambiguous structure

01:41:613 - Add to 3 for crash

[Hard "Grilled Chicken"]

00:14:013 - http://puu.sh/nhTxD/f821ff1e22.jpg // ok

01:27:813 (87813|2) - Move to 4
01:27:899 - Move to 3 // o.o there's no note here
01:36:299 (96299|2) - Change to normal note

it's not end yet

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

so i will pick qualify? alright

1234

[All diffs]
hitsound is quite unable to hear, you may want to increase the volume

[Baozi]
00:06:642 - missed a clap on here // keep, i like more spacing for basic diff
00:16:928 - move like this for pitch: http://puu.sh/nooMm/690165717f.jpg // ok
01:11:956 (71956|0) - appearancely it's different from 01:11:442 (71442|0) - // ok

[Spring Roll]
00:24:642 (24642|1) - move to 1 for balance

[Asian Stir-Fried Seafood]
00:17:785 (17785|1,17785|2) - move them to the left 1 column for balance
00:20:528 (20528|3) - mvoe to 3 for balance, also it's would be nice for pitch
01:39:899 (99899|2) - lost a clap // all ok

[Saucy Meatball]
00:28:328 (28328|0) - move to 3 would be more comfortable because if you keep it on 1st column, ppl will think it's 1/2
00:31:499 - my suggestion for this part http://puu.sh/nopWM/6e15709522.jpg // half done, keep the last 2stairs

[Grilled Chicken]
00:55:928 - how about add a note on 1st column, it will fit the rhythm
01:07:928 - no sound here // apply to all other diffs as well

[Noodles]
00:08:185 - i think this part is 1/6
00:58:328 - hmm ... this part is quite lower than 00:58:670 - , so one note is fit with that // my bad, removed
01:15:385 - make like this will fit with music then, also for patterns: http://puu.sh/noqoQ/db00d3f5e0.jpg
01:35:956 - 1/6 here too // all done

[Fried Rice]
00:27:899 - http://puu.sh/noqw4/9cc970f271.jpg
01:07:928 - no sound here
01:07:156 - this hihat is quite lower than the other, it worth with only 1 note // removed some ghost notes in that part, ok

the rest are fine, call me back soon

Kyousuke- wrote:

i still remember dat 'fried rice' 9,5 HP lol

AncuL wrote:

Kyousuke- wrote:

i still remember dat 'fried rice' 9,5 HP lol

fried rice was HP10 though