Sky Future wrote:

하.. 모아님 영어 겁나 잘하시네
좀 알려주세요. 뭐 수업이라던지 강의라던지 문제집이나 책 참고하는거면 관두고
영어는 그냥 야매로하는게 최고^^

Easy

*00:04:195 (5,1) - 블랭킷fix

*00:04:595 (1,2) - 2서클을 밑으로 살짝 내림으로써 자연스레 연결시켜주세요fix

*00:14:995 (2,3) - 2슬라가 직선이니 3슬라도 받아들이는것으로 이런 느낌으로 해두시는게 느낌있어요
http://puu.sh/npeuN/eced2777fb.jpg 그리고 3슬라의 배치가 살짝 밑으로 가있네요 이미지와 같이 정확한 직선으로 맞춰주세요fix

*00:32:995 (4,1) - 블랭킷fix

*00:39:795 (1,2) - 일부러 블랭킷 안맞추신건 알고있는데 지그재그인 느낌으로 가다가 갑자기 내려가는 컨셉은 이지로서 조금 어렵다고 생각하네요
블랭킷을 함으로써 지그재그가 덜 느끼게 해주세요 괜찮다고봄

*00:42:995 (1) - 슬라 구부림을 반대로 해주세요 ?? 지금이 훨남

*00:50:195 (2) - ctrl + h 하시면 3서클에 자연스레 연결이 될겁니다. 배치는 그대로구요 블랭킷 노린거라 ㅈㅅ

*00:53:595 - 00:55:195 - 00:56:795 - 박자에 여유도 있고 노트를 안넣으시니 가사에 어색함이 느껴지는데 퀄리티를 생각하시더라도 노트를 추가해주세요
원래는 있엇는데 모딩과 난이도조절때문에 없앳네여 BN도 괜찮다하는거같으니 우선 보류

*00:58:595 - 여기 피니시사운드 터지는데 노트 넣어야 마땅할듯 여기엔 슬픈 전설이있습니다 원래는 저기 서클이있엇는데 어렵다는 평이많아서 손닉님 모딩에서 지우게된..

*01:00:195 (2,3) - 블랭킷 fix

*01:11:395 - 여기에 피니시 사운드가 들리니 노트를 넣어주시면 하는데 두가지 제한이 있어요. 01:11:395 - 여기에 그대로 서클을 적당히 배치할지
01:10:395 (3) - 이것을 서클로 바꾸고 01:10:795 - 여기부터 슬라를 추가해서 01:11:395 - 까지 늘린다던지 - 여기엔 슬픈 전설이있습니다 원래는 저기 서클이있엇는데 어렵다는 평이많아서 손닉님 모딩에서 지우게된..

*01:22:195 (2,3) - 블랭킷 ? 잘되잇음

Cappuccino

난이도명 이거 치노쨩을 노리신거면 Cappuchino 로 하시는게 귀욤
헤헤 카푸치노의 원래 스펠링을 따왓죠 노림수임

*00:30:195 (1,3,8) - 1과8서클이 겹치던데 3개로 이어가듯이 서클을 그려주세요
http://puu.sh/npghZ/5fe8c9c630.jpg 1,8 겹치게한게 노림수

*01:14:195 (3,5) - 5서클을 3슬라꼬리와 겹치게 해주세요 - 원래 5서클이 다른부분에있엇는데 스택이 낫다해서 옮김
3슬라꼬리에있어서 애매한 점프주기보단 스택이낫다고 보네요

모딩 감사해엽! m4m이지만말임


제가 태양님 노트에 따라가려면 어느정도 더 시간이 있어야할듯
찝을건 많지만 제 지식이 불확실한 요점이 아주 많음
맵셋도 그렇고 잘 만드셨네요

Rose Pacifica wrote:

00:57 Rose Pacifica: 카푸키노
00:57 *Moa is away: 저 겨울잠 자여 개꿀
00:57 Moa: 하-이
00:57 Moa: 넹
00:57 Moa: 님
00:57 Moa: 모딩좀
00:57 Moa: 해주실수이씀?
00:57 Moa: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:58 *Moa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/878360 Petit Rabbit's - Daydream cafe (TV Size) [Cappuccino]]
00:58 Rose Pacifica: 님
00:58 Rose Pacifica: 제가
00:58 Moa: 모딩이넘나 필요한것
00:58 Moa: 넹
00:58 Rose Pacifica: 제일 잘하는것이
00:58 Rose Pacifica: 모딩 거절하기인데
00:58 Moa: 모딩이져?
00:58 Rose Pacifica: ㅋㅋ
00:58 Moa: 아 님
00:58 Moa: 서로 돕고살아야져
00:58 Moa: ㅠㅠ
00:58 Moa: 제버블을위해 모딩좀해주셈
00:58 Rose Pacifica: 돕는건
00:58 Rose Pacifica: 좋은데
00:58 Moa: ㅇㅅㅇ?>
00:58 Moa: 그럼모딩해죠양
00:59 Rose Pacifica: 흐음
00:59 Rose Pacifica: ㅋㅋ
01:00 *Moa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/878360 Petit Rabbit's - Daydream cafe (TV Size) [Cappuccino]]
01:00 Moa: 아주조쏘
01:00 Rose Pacifica: 님
01:00 Rose Pacifica: IRC라면
01:00 Rose Pacifica: 생각해볼순
01:00 Moa: 넹
01:00 Rose Pacifica: 있음
01:00 Moa: IRC해여?
01:01 Rose Pacifica: 아마..
01:01 Moa: ...
01:01 Moa: irc오랜만에
01:01 Moa: 받아본당
01:02 Rose Pacifica: 그래서
01:02 Rose Pacifica: 받으실?
01:02 Moa: 넹
01:02 Moa: ㄱㄱ
01:02 Rose Pacifica: 우선
01:02 Rose Pacifica: 도입부
01:02 Moa: 써두시면
01:02 Moa: 좀따확인하께여
01:02 Rose Pacifica: 00:00:795 (1,2) - 
01:02 Rose Pacifica: 어색함
01:02 Rose Pacifica: 타임라인 서로 바꿔주시는거 권장합니다
01:03 Rose Pacifica: 00:02:195 (2,3,1) - 여기랑 일관성 걱정되시면 어짜피 타임라인달라서 괜찮은부분
01:03 Moa: 00:00:795 (1,2) -
01:03 Moa: 이건
01:03 Moa: 코 - 코로라
01:03 Moa: 서클 슬라
01:03 Moa: 햇음
01:03 Rose Pacifica: 오히려
01:03 Rose Pacifica: 코코- 로 로 끊는게
01:04 Rose Pacifica: 더 자연스러울거같음
01:04 Moa: 단어가
01:04 Moa: 코 코로
01:04 Moa: 아닌감
01:04 Rose Pacifica: ㅋㅋ
01:04 Moa: 아
01:04 Moa: 단어랜다
01:04 Rose Pacifica: 이부분은
01:04 Rose Pacifica: 그럼
01:04 Moa: 말하는게
01:04 Rose Pacifica: 해석차이인걸로
01:04 Rose Pacifica: 생각하고 넘어가도록함
01:04 Rose Pacifica: 00:03:395 (2,3,4) -  갑자기 하드급 단타
01:04 Rose Pacifica: 00:06:595 (2,3,4,5) - 
01:05 Rose Pacifica: 너무 비교됨
01:05 Moa: 00:06:595 (2,3,4,5) -
01:05 Moa: 여기는
01:05 Moa: 분위기가
01:05 Moa: 밝아지는부분
01:05 Moa: 00:03:395 (2,3,4) -
01:05 Moa: 잔잔한부분
01:05 Rose Pacifica: 오히려
01:05 Rose Pacifica: 음은 더낮은데
01:05 Rose Pacifica: 제가듣기엔
01:06 Rose Pacifica: 그럼
01:06 Moa: 우선
01:06 Rose Pacifica: 그것도 넘어가셈
01:06 Moa: 답않할테니
01:06 Moa: 쭉
01:06 Moa: 말씀해주세여
01:06 Rose Pacifica: 00:10:395 (4,5,6) - 
01:06 Rose Pacifica: 살짝 어색해보이네요
01:06 Rose Pacifica: 점프가
01:06 Rose Pacifica: 00:11:995 (5,1) - 
01:06 Rose Pacifica: 벌려주는개
01:07 Rose Pacifica: 좋다고생각합니다
01:07 Rose Pacifica: 00:12:395 (1,3) - 안겹치게 수정하는개 보기도 좋을듯합니다
01:09 Rose Pacifica: 00:24:195 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 
01:09 Rose Pacifica: 점점
01:09 Rose Pacifica: 늘어나는것보다
01:10 Rose Pacifica: 점점 줄어드는개 어울려보임
01:11 Rose Pacifica: 00:26:995 (1,2,3,4,5) -  00:33:395 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
01:11 Rose Pacifica: 음은 같은데 패턴이 다르네요 제가보기엔 00:33:395 (1,2,3,4,5) - 패턴이 좀더 자연스러운거같음
01:12 Rose Pacifica: 00:35:395 (2,3,4,5,6) - 부자연스러워 보이는데.. 저만 그렇게 보일진 저도 잘은 모르겟네용
01:12 Rose Pacifica: 00:25:395 (1,2,3) -  00:37:995 (1,2,3) - 한쪽은 점프 한쪽은 스택?
01:13 Rose Pacifica: 00:42:195 (5,7) - 이것처럼00:41:395 (1,3) - 이것도 수정하시는게..
01:15 Rose Pacifica: 00:46:995 (3,4) - 인세인이라지만 음이하나밖에없는데 너무 강조됫다고 생각해요
01:16 Rose Pacifica: 00:57:795 (2,3) - 여기가 강조되야하는데 00:50:395 (3,4) - 00:54:495 (2,3) - 여기들이 너무 크지않을까요?
01:16 Rose Pacifica: 00:57:795 (2,3) - 을 키우시거나 다른부분들을 줄이시는걸 추천
01:17 Rose Pacifica: 00:54:595 (3) - 이건 줄여주시는게 좋을듯
01:18 Rose Pacifica: 01:17:995 (5,1) - 조금 띄어주시는건 어떨까요?>
01:19 Rose Pacifica: 01:19:395 (5) - 억지로 스택하는것보단 01:19:195 (4) - 슬라로바꿔주시는게 플레이 하기도편할거같네요
01:20 Rose Pacifica: 01:27:995 (1,2,3) - 마무리인데 너무 허전해용...
01:20 Rose Pacifica: 일단
01:20 Rose Pacifica: 대충한번봤습니다
01:22 Moa: 옼힠
01:22 Moa: 스레드
01:22 Moa: 올려주시면쿧오스드림
01:22 Moa: 00:10:395 (4,5,6) - ㅇ ㅣ건고침
01:22 Moa: 고쳐야겟음
01:22 Moa: 븐도 말햇고 고쳐야된다고생각햇음

DreaM117er wrote:

mod req~

[General]

1. Remove "TV Size" from title, no need that. You can add it on Tags.
2. Unused hitsounds "soft-sliderslide3", I suggest you can rename to "soft-sliderslide" to fit all set.
3. BG "ReGochiUsa2" and "ReGochiUsa9" are both 1365x768, you know that
4. Finish for all diff
   00:14:195 - add finish
   00:20:595 - ^
   00:26:995 - ^
   00:33:395 - ^
   01:05:395 - ^
   01:08:595 - ^
   01:19:595 - ^
   01:20:395 - ^
   01:21:395 - ^
   01:22:795 - ^
   01:26:195 - ^ ALL FIX
   

[Easy]

• 
  00:36:595 (1,2,3) - try it, only this suggestion, good job sorry it's consistency

[Insane]

1. reduce some jump or spacing, it's a large gap between Hard and Insane. (ex: 01:22:595 (6,7) - )
   00:32:995 (5,6) - woo, no need this space, weird and hard to read this. i don't think that
   00:36:495 - add circle?? I heard a sound here ok fix
   00:56:395 (4,5) - slider better than 2 circles jump. sorry i like 2 circles than slider
   01:25:595 (3,4) - these can get close, I think too far. fix

Good luck

Thanks for mod!

Kyle Y wrote:

SPOILER

22:25 Kyle Y: hi
22:25 Moa: Hi
22:25 *Kyle Y is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/892515 Petit Rabbit's - Daydream cafe [Taeyang's Hard]]
22:25 Kyle Y: I am reading your mapset
22:25 Moa: oh Thanks for mod
22:25 Kyle Y: just reading atm
22:26 Moa: ok
22:26 Kyle Y: I think, guest diff mapper is quite important, really
22:27 Moa: yes Xd
22:27 Kyle Y: just think, Dailycare's normal is not reach other diff's standard
22:27 Moa: what means?
22:27 Kyle Y: I think his map quite random in term of pattern
22:28 Moa: with easy gap?
22:28 Kyle Y: diff spread is rankable atm
22:28 Moa: um it's vocal mapped
22:29 Kyle Y: maybe I playtest once first
22:29 Moa: ok
22:36 Kyle Y: can't you find BN?
22:36 Moa: yes T_t
22:36 Moa: T_T
22:37 Kyle Y: if you find some BN with lower requirement, I think it can be rank
22:37 Moa: oh really?
22:37 Moa: thanks
22:38 Kyle Y: then you still want my modding?
22:38 Moa: yes i want
22:38 Kyle Y: if you don't want to map a really high quality, but enough for mod, then I think no need still okay
22:39 Moa: but i want high quality in my performance
22:39 Moa: than i want more mod
22:40 Kyle Y: sorry for my poor playtest first
22:40 Kyle Y: I haven't pick up me pen to play any map for nearly 3 months
22:40 Moa: no it's ok
22:40 Moa: lol
22:40 Kyle Y: then, which diff you want to improve
22:40 Moa: but you would be make map
22:41 Moa: cappuccino
22:41 Moa: insane diff
22:41 Kyle Y: okay
22:42 Kyle Y: in fact no major problem in the map
22:42 Moa: than trivial problem?
22:43 Kyle Y: yup.... maybe just some slider drawing maybe? some of them really not well in looking
22:44 Kyle Y: 00:01:395 (1) - I prefer curving more, for example
22:44 Kyle Y: yup.... these are not must-fix modding
22:45 Moa: nazi modding
22:45 Moa: iwant
22:45 Moa: umm slider fix that
22:45 Moa: 00:01:395 (1) -
22:46 Kyle Y: just one question, do you like extented slider?
22:47 Moa: umm it means long slider
22:47 Moa: ?
22:47 Moa: or straight?
22:47 Kyle Y: 3/4 slider
22:47 Moa: no i don't like
22:47 Kyle Y: okay
22:48 Kyle Y: 00:02:395 (3,1) - this pattern really great if you draw it more round http://puu.sh/nqXbH/9403b33dc9.jpg
22:49 Moa: ok i'll move that
22:49 Kyle Y: after reading your map, I somehow want to map this song
22:50 Moa: lol
22:50 Moa: XD
22:50 Kyle Y: I redraw your slider, in fact. anyway
22:50 Kyle Y: 00:04:195 (5,1) - it is great if a jump here
22:51 Moa: I like harp straight like http://puu.sh/nqXiL/f49a1af82e.jpg this
22:51 Moa: so many that slider
22:51 Kyle Y: just curving more?
22:52 Moa: yes i like few curve
22:52 Kyle Y: if you don't like extented slider, then I think all of 1/1 slider should curve more
22:52 Moa: umm
22:52 Kyle Y: um... too straight feel a little bit weird for me, seem that slider too long
22:53 Kyle Y: maybe it is my illusion
22:53 Moa: umm it's subjective
22:54 Kyle Y: that's why my modding always rejected by others
22:56 Moa: lol it's ok modding is Originally my think
22:56 Moa: umm i'm not good at english
22:56 Moa: so it's not accurate grammar
22:56 Kyle Y: mine is not that good also
22:56 Kyle Y: english not my mother language also
22:57 Kyle Y: 00:04:195 (5,1) - jump here is suggested
22:57 Moa: Come to think of that you live in hong kong
22:58 Moa: yeh
22:58 Kyle Y: becasue 00:04:595 - strong beat here
22:58 Kyle Y: not all hong kong people are good at english
22:58 Moa: yes i know that
22:59 Kyle Y: 00:08:995 (5,1) - larger jump, similar ds with 4->5
23:00 Moa: ok fixed
23:01 Kyle Y: 00:12:395 - still I think your jump is too kind
23:02 Moa: lol
23:03 Kyle Y: btw, emphasising strong beat you can either making a anti jump or large jump, still, you can break the flowing
23:03 Kyle Y: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4638212
23:03 Kyle Y: just like this
23:05 Moa: umm
23:05 Moa: it's so far 00:11:595 (4,5) -
23:06 Kyle Y: 00:11:195 (2,3) - then I should say you place these circle too far
23:09 Kyle Y: 00:13:795 - http://puu.sh/nqYdJ/c9d3dcb181.jpg I think this rhythme look better
23:11 Moa: umm i don't like use blue tick
23:11 Moa: so i think it's ok
23:11 Kyle Y: ah... I forget
23:11 Moa: sorry
23:12 Kyle Y: I just think you sometime use large ds, but sometime small ds
23:13 Kyle Y: therefore, the feeling for the song cannot figure out most of the time
23:13 Moa: yes it's my mistake
23:13 Moa: T_T
23:14 Kyle Y: don't worry, this problem is quite common
23:15 Moa: oh that's really?
23:16 Kyle Y: yup, if you have more experience, this problem will be fixed
23:16 Kyle Y: at least, this problem is not causing unrankable
23:16 Moa: oh thanks advice
23:17 Kyle Y: in fact I just a little bit worry about normal diff
23:17 Kyle Y: not about rankable or not, just not quite good in looking. really make me sad
23:18 Moa: umm for example?
23:18 Kyle Y: 00:00:795 (1,4) - not really a good overlap
23:19 Kyle Y: but not a big problem
23:19 Kyle Y: you can say it is not a problem
23:20 Moa: umm it's not my normal
23:20 Moa: so
23:20 Kyle Y: just when I map, I will avoid using the used area few second before
23:20 Moa: i say for dailycare
23:20 Kyle Y: no need in fact, just about my mapping style
23:21 Moa: ok
23:21 Kyle Y: but in your easy, find one issue may casue disqualify
23:21 Kyle Y: 00:10:995 - slider end problem
23:21 Kyle Y: this is a strong beat and generally need to place clickable objects
23:21 Moa: yes i'll fix that
23:21 Kyle Y: p/4694342
23:23 Moa: fixed two circles
23:23 Kyle Y: okay...
23:23 Moa: lol bn 's particular
23:24 Kyle Y: you can ask BN in your country first
23:24 Kyle Y: btw, can I take your mp3 and timing?
23:25 Moa: it's ok
23:25 Moa: you can take video
23:25 Kyle Y: this song is not hard to map
23:26 Moa: yes so i'm mapped this song #1 ranked
23:26 Kyle Y: my first ranked song is this one
23:26 *Kyle Y is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/689156 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki]
23:27 Kyle Y: really hard to hard, even you can find 1/6 snapped slide
23:27 Kyle Y: hard to map*
23:27 Moa: i loved that anime
23:27 Kyle Y: yup.... I like anime also
23:28 Kyle Y: but after this map, I changed my mapping style
23:29 Kyle Y: btw, I just post this log in the forum first

neonat wrote:

Taeyang's Hard

00:07:795 (1) - finish on slider start
00:10:995 (1) - ^
00:34:395 (4) - use 2 sliders instead of 1? The repeat slider repeats at 00:34:795 where the beat is pretty strong and honestly deserves to be clicked instead, just like what you did at 00:27:995 (3,4)

SPOILER

all fixed
good luck

Sky Future wrote:

Hard

*00:42:195 (8) - ctrl + g 해주세요 7슬라덕에 연결되는 아름다운 장면을 보고싶네요

DreaM117er wrote:

[Hard]

• 
  00:05:595 (2) - remove circle?? I feel this hiding circle unnecessary, no follow sounds well. Or add circle here 00:05:795 - .
  00:09:795 (4) - no hiding plz, stacking on next slider's head
  00:12:395 (5) - NC
  00:19:595 (6) - remove the dot at 281|267, weird
  00:37:995 (5) - NC
  00:57:195 (5) - ^

Good luck

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Countdown: 0
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WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Daydream cafe
TitleUnicode:Daydream café
Artist:Petit Rabbit's
ArtistUnicode:Petit Rabbit's
Creator:Moa
Version:Taeyang's Hard
Source:ご注文はうさぎですか？
Tags:Tv size manga time kirara MAX Gochuumon wa Usagi desuka? Gochiusa opening Is the order a rabbit? hoto cocoa sakura ayane kafuu chino minase inori tedeza rize taneda risa ujimatsu chiya  satou satomi kirima syaro uchida maaya ごちうさ Taeyang Dailycare
BeatmapID:892515
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104,325,86195,6,0,P|165:354|227:328,1,140,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,260,86795,2,0,B|305:232|305:232|405:239,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,304,87395,2,0,P|489:236|456:173,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,161,87995,5,6,0:0:0:0:
230,194,88195,1,6,0:0:0:0:
335,309,88395,1,6,0:0:0:0:

-Kahuu Chino- wrote:

Cappuccino

00:06:595 (2,3,4,5) - 2번을 5번에 스택해주는게 더좋을것같습니다.

Taeyang wrote:

-Kahuu Chino- wrote:

Cappuccino

00:06:595 (2,3,4,5) - 2번을 5번에 스택해주는게 더좋을것같습니다.

아니 쿠도수두개를 한줄로 드시다니!! ㅂㄷㅂㄷ

• General

1. ReGochiUsa9.jpg / ReGochiUsa2.jpg 두 bg가 16:9 에 맞지 않네요. 비율맞춰 수정한거 링크 올려둘게요
   >> https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/PsVyP8c.jpg
   >> https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/0touYsi.jpg
2. tags에 보면 "chiya"와 "satou"사이에 스페이스 하나 더 들어가 있네요 이름고유특징아니면 지워주세요

• Easy

1. 00:07:795 (1,2,3) - 이 부분 전에는 보컬로 오다가(00:05:995 (3) - ) 갑자기 리듬형식으로 바뀌니 조금 혼란스러운데요. 1/1공백으로 꾸준히 가실거 아닌이상 타임라인 조금 변경해서 앞부분과 통일시키는게 게임할때 더 편할거에요. 타임라인 올려두고 갈게요~
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 치기 정말편해요

• Dailycare's Normal

1. 01:18:195 (1) - 머리에 휘슬정도만이라고 넣어주심 좋겠네요 전부분인 01:05:395 (1) - 와 비교하여 너무 빈 느낌이 나네요.
2. 맵이 흠잡을 곳없이 훌륭해요. 저기 힛사만 좀 넣어주세요~

• Taeyang's Hard

1. 00:53:795 (4) - 이거 별다르게 음향이 커지는 부분도 아니고 00:54:595 (6,8,2,4) - 얘네처럼 1.18~1.20 사이로 디스턴스 맞추는게 낫지 않을까싶어요
2. 솔직히 말해 1플만에 하락풀콤인데 엎어놔도 풀콤잘되는 이 맵에 따로 고칠게 없는거같아요 자잘한 1~3그리드 스택문제나 블랭킷은 안잡을게요 알아서 랭크전 잘 고치시리라 믿기에.

• Cappuccino

1. 00:23:695 (6) - 제가 듣기엔 음이 희미한데 그냥 지우시고 작은 점프처리하시는거 어떠세요
2. 00:26:395 (3) - 1/8인거 감안하고 봐도 차라리 조금 옆에다 위치시키는게 리딩에 도움줄거같아요 60l64주위로 다시 배치해보시는거 추천드릴게요.
3. 00:36:395 (6,7,1) - 셋 (4)랑 오버랩 시키기 보다 (3) 과 (5)처럼 비슷한 선상에 두시는게 더 가독성 좋을거같은데 어떠세요
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:42:895 (9) - 여길 살려 3타로 넣으실거면 같은 음인 00:42:695 - 이부분도 같이 넣어야 할거 같아요. 아님 아예 (9)를 지우시던지..
5. 00:58:995 (1,2,3) - 매우 애매한 부분인데요, 보컬을 죽이기로 결정하셨으면 00:59:695 - 여기 소릴 강조하셔야 하는거 아닌가 생각드네요 25%로 두어번 들어보심 제가 말씀드리고자 하는거 아실거에요. 저 부분 추천 예시로 두개정도 드려볼게요
   
   SPOILER

   
   
6. 01:14:795 (5,1) - 전에 같은 파트(01:01:795 (6,1) - )에선 이런 안티점프가 없었는데 나타나니까 잠깐 혼돈이 올 수 있는부분이라 생각들어요 01:14:795 (5) - 를 01:13:795 (2) - 의 꼬리나 그 근처로 넣어서 점프형식으로 대체해버리시는게 더 나을거같아요.
7. 저번보다 맵 더 이뻐졌네요 어서 bn구하세요~

Euny wrote:

came from my queue❤

• General

1. ReGochiUsa9.jpg / ReGochiUsa2.jpg 두 bg가 16:9 에 맞지 않네요. 비율맞춰 수정한거 링크 올려둘게요
   >> https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/PsVyP8c.jpg
   >> https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/0touYsi.jpg - 감사합니다 ㅠㅠ 사진수정할줄몰라서 지적와도 그대로둿던것들인데 ㅠㅠ 넘나감사드림
2. tags에 보면 "chiya"와 "satou"사이에 스페이스 하나 더 들어가 있네요 이름고유특징아니면 지워주세요 - fix

• Easy

1. 00:07:795 (1,2,3) - 이 부분 전에는 보컬로 오다가(00:05:995 (3) - ) 갑자기 리듬형식으로 바뀌니 조금 혼란스러운데요. 1/1공백으로 꾸준히 가실거 아닌이상 타임라인 조금 변경해서 앞부분과 통일시키는게 게임할때 더 편할거에요. 타임라인 올려두고 갈게요~ - '강조 될만한 백그라운드 음악이 없는이상' 전부 보컬 위주 매핑했습니당 저부분도 보컬매핑인데...? 00:10:995 (1,2,3,4) - 이런부분만 리듬 배치
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 치기 정말편해요 - 감사합니다!!!!

• Dailycare's Normal

1. 01:18:195 (1) - 머리에 휘슬정도만이라고 넣어주심 좋겠네요 전부분인 01:05:395 (1) - 와 비교하여 너무 빈 느낌이 나네요. - 전과같이 피니시 넣엇습니다
2. 맵이 흠잡을 곳없이 훌륭해요. 저기 힛사만 좀 넣어주세요~

• Moa만의 Cappuccino

1. 00:23:695 (6) - 제가 듣기엔 음이 희미한데 그냥 지우시고 작은 점프처리하시는거 어떠세요 - 이~타즈라 이렇게 이~ 이가사를 길게 끌어서 괜찮다고봅니다
2. 00:26:395 (3) - 1/8인거 감안하고 봐도 차라리 조금 옆에다 위치시키는게 리딩에 도움줄거같아요 60l64주위로 다시 배치해보시는거 추천드릴게요. - 고췸
3. 00:36:395 (6,7,1) - 셋 (4)랑 오버랩 시키기 보다 (3) 과 (5)처럼 비슷한 선상에 두시는게 더 가독성 좋을거같은데 어떠세요 - fix!
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:42:895 (9) - 여길 살려 3타로 넣으실거면 같은 음인 00:42:695 - 이부분도 같이 넣어야 할거 같아요. 아님 아예 (9)를 지우시던지.. - 42:695엔 3연타 넣을만한게 없는거같은데..
5. 00:58:995 (1,2,3) - 매우 애매한 부분인데요, 보컬을 죽이기로 결정하셨으면 00:59:695 - 여기 소릴 강조하셔야 하는거 아닌가 생각드네요 25%로 두어번 들어보심 제가 말씀드리고자 하는거 아실거에요. 저 부분 추천 예시로 두개정도 드려볼게요 - 아예 배치를 바꾸고 3연타 넣엇습니당
   
   SPOILER

   
   
6. 01:14:795 (5,1) - 전에 같은 파트(01:01:795 (6,1) - )에선 이런 안티점프가 없었는데 나타나니까 잠깐 혼돈이 올 수 있는부분이라 생각들어요 01:14:795 (5) - 를 01:13:795 (2) - 의 꼬리나 그 근처로 넣어서 점프형식으로 대체해버리시는게 더 나을거같아요. - 고쳣습니당
7. 저번보다 맵 더 이뻐졌네요 어서 bn구하세요~ 핡 혼토니 아리가또!

난이도들이 다 재밌고 좋아요. 왜 모딩을 더 구하시는지 모르겠네요 ㅎㅎ 잡을게 없어 별다른거 안적고 제너럴 bg랑 태그 스페이스만 좀 적어두고갑니다
감사합니다~!

• [Cappuccino]

1. well i think the offset is a little but wrong, since i played this with original offset, and this with the offset -20m/s, so i think you should try offset -225 instead of -205
2. 00:06:975 (4,5) - could change to 1/1 slider to match the vocal (suggestion
3. 00:11:575 (4,5) - the ds should be bigger imo cause the vocal is getting higher
4. 00:17:775 (3,4) - awkward spacing, try 00:18:175 (4,5) - crtl + G to consist the spacing with 00:18:575 (6,7,1) -
5. 00:24:775 (5,6,7) - the spacing 6>7 should be smaller then the spacing 5>6, and 7>1 should be samller then 6>7
6. 00:40:175 (2) - move a little bit right to make the sliderend stick with 00:39:575 (7) -
7. 00:42:775 (8,9) - i wont map here, just like you do it at 00:43:475 - (suggestion
8. 00:44:975 (2,3,4) - make spacing bigger imo, to consist the whole pattern
9. 00:46:575 (2,3) - ^
10. 00:58:975 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - really awkward sapcing since you map 1>2 and 4>5 with small spacing but 5>1 is big, i cant hear the music should be emphasizing 5>1, should be the same imo
11. 01:01:595 (5) - stick with 01:00:395 (1) - sliderend
12. 01:02:195 (1,2) - same problem i mention at 00:44:975 (2,3,4) -
13. 01:06:395 (4) - stick with 01:05:195 (6) - maybe?
14. 01:06:595 (5,1) - this should be emphasize more, make bigger spacing
15. 01:28:195 (2) - move a little bit left to stick with 01:26:795 (2) - sliderend
16. 01:27:995 (1,2,3) - i would make the sapcing bigger then other part (suggestion

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

as you request :3
ill still do the test play anyway

• [Cappuccino]

1. well i think the offset is a little but wrong, since i played this with original offset, and this with the offset -20m/s, so i think you should try offset -225 instead of -205 - my offset is get in rank map so i think it's ok
2. 00:06:975 (4,5) - could change to 1/1 slider to match the vocal (suggestion - sorry i like now
3. 00:11:575 (4,5) - the ds should be bigger imo cause the vocal is getting higher - 00:11:595 (4,5,1) - it's get higher DS so it's ok and that part is hhighlight
4. 00:17:775 (3,4) - awkward spacing, try 00:18:175 (4,5) - crtl + G to consist the spacing with 00:18:575 (6,7,1) - fix~
5. 00:24:775 (5,6,7) - the spacing 6>7 should be smaller then the spacing 5>6, and 7>1 should be samller then 6>7 - fix
6. 00:40:175 (2) - move a little bit right to make the sliderend stick with 00:39:575 (7) - that stack miss is editor's error
7. 00:42:775 (8,9) - i wont map here, just like you do it at 00:43:475 - (suggestion - fix i'll add circles 00:43:595 (3,4) - here
8. 00:44:975 (2,3,4) - make spacing bigger imo, to consist the whole pattern - fix
9. 00:46:575 (2,3) - ^ - nope
10. 00:58:975 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - really awkward sapcing since you map 1>2 and 4>5 with small spacing but 5>1 is big, i cant hear the music should be emphasizing 5>1, should be the same imo - i don't think so 01:00:195 (5,1) - that part is finished vocal part so i make some jump but 00:58:995 (1,2,3,4,5) - that's not
11. 01:01:595 (5) - stick with 01:00:395 (1) - sliderend - ok
12. 01:02:195 (1,2) - same problem i mention at 00:44:975 (2,3,4) -
13. 01:06:395 (4) - stick with 01:05:195 (6) - maybe? - nope
14. 01:06:595 (5,1) - this should be emphasize more, make bigger spacing - fix
15. 01:28:195 (2) - move a little bit left to stick with 01:26:795 (2) - sliderend - that stack miss is editor's error
16. 01:27:995 (1,2,3) - i would make the sapcing bigger then other part (suggestion - sorry that's stack with slider head,tail so small

well good luck ><

1. 00:22:795 (3,4) - can neat more
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:53:195 (4,5) - imo clap on these slider head are noisy, i suggest place clap on 00:52:995 - 00:53:795 -
3. 00:54:795 (4,5) - same
4. 00:58:595 (2) - i think you can use s:c1 hitclap here
5. 00:59:795 (4) - head whistle
6. 01:00:395 (1) - ^
7. 01:18:195 (1) - head finish

1. 00:25:395 (5) - nc? rhythm be sparse here

Rizia wrote:

[General]
you should move preview point to 00:58:295 - , so we can listen more preview time fix

[Cappuccino]

1. 00:22:795 (3,4) - can neat more
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:53:195 (4,5) - imo clap on these slider head are noisy, i suggest place clap on 00:52:995 - 00:53:795 -
3. 00:54:795 (4,5) - same
4. 00:58:595 (2) - i think you can use s:c1 hitclap here
5. 00:59:795 (4) - head whistle
6. 01:00:395 (1) - ^
7. 01:18:195 (1) - head finish all fix

[Taeyang's Hard]

1. 00:25:395 (5) - nc? rhythm be sparse here

nice song
good luck

Karen wrote:

hello. m4m with Taeyang.

[Easy]

1. 01:28:395 - increase volume here, the finish sound is hard to hear, also it's unnecessary to mute the spinner. (same for Normal) fix with normal

[Taeyang's Hard]

1. OD6 is enough, 6,2 looks weird
2. 00:05:595 (2) - delete this note or move it to 00:05:795 - , it sounds unnecessary here
3. 00:12:195 (4) - whistle?

[Cappuccino]

1. 00:01:395 (1,2,3) - notice the spacing of these objects, you can find that 00:02:195 (2,3) - this 1/2 rhythm spacing is the same with 00:01:395 (1,2) - this 1/1 rhythm spacing, i suggest to avoid it defer
2. 00:17:395 (1,2,3) - a bit uncomfortable to play i think, that blanket looks forced, suggestion:
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:46:595 (2,3,4) - forced blanket again, suggestion:
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:05:395 (1) - try ctrl+g, looks more comfortable
5. overall this diff needs more improvements on details, like those unnatural blankets and stacks, try to make a balance between flow and aesthetics, but playability always has more priority. all fix others

cute BGs ww
Good luck~

1. 00:00:795 (1,2) - I think that such part should use sliderslide of the long silence.
2. 00:02:795 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
3. 00:04:195 (5) - 00:05:995 (1) - same as above.
4. 00:07:395 (6,8) - add whistle.
5. 00:07:795 (1) - I think remove whistle add finish better.
6. 00:09:195 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
7. 00:10:995 (1) - same as 00:07:795 (1) -
8. 00:11:395 (3,4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try an arrange like this.
   
9. 00:13:595 (5) - add clap and whistle on slider end.
10. 00:13:995 (6) - add whistle.
11. 00:16:395 (3,4) - add whistle on slider head. and remove whistle on slider end at 00:16:395 (3) -
12. 00:17:195 (5) - 00:18:795 (7) - add whistle.
13. 00:19:595 (2) - remove whistle on slider end. and add whistle on slider head.
14. 00:19:995 (3,7) - add whistle.
15. 00:21:795 (5) - add whistle on slider end.
16. 00:22:795 (3,4) - same as 00:16:395 (3,4) -
17. 00:23:595 (5) - 00:25:195 (7) - add whistle
18. 00:27:395 (2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try an arrange like this. please check on you are pattern 00:33:795 (2,3) -
    
19. 00:29:995 (6) - add whistle
20. 00:30:595 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
21. 00:31:595 (1) - 00:34:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
22. 00:36:395 (6) - add whistle
23. 00:36:995 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
24. 00:36:995 (2) - This spacing is really awkward. so move x479 y233 at 00:37:395 (3) -
25. add whistle 00:39:195 - and 00:39:395 - and 00:39:595 -
26. 00:42:795 (8) - 00:43:595 (3) - add whistle
27. 00:45:995 (5) - add whistle
28. 00:47:595 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
29. 00:50:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and remove whistle on slider end.
30. 00:51:195 (2,5) - add whistle
31. 00:52:395 (1) - 00:53:995 (1) - 00:55:595 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
32. 00:58:395 (1,3) - add whistle
33. 01:01:195 (3) - add whistle
34. 01:01:795 (6) - add whistle on slider end.
35. 01:03:195 (4) - changed 1/4 slider repeat more better much.
    
36. 01:03:595 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
37. 01:04:395 (3,6) - add whistle.
38. 01:06:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
39. 01:07:595 (3) - add whistle on slider head and remove whistle on slider end.
40. 01:08:995 (3,4,5) - same as 00:11:395 (3,4,5) -
41. 01:11:195 (4,5) - same as 00:13:595 (5,6) -
42. 01:13:195 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
43. 01:14:795 (5) - 01:15:595 (3) - add whistle
44. 01:16:395 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
45. 01:17:995 (5) - add whistle
46. 01:23:195 (1,4) - add whistle
47. 01:25:595 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:25:995 (4) - add whistle

Satellite wrote:

Hello.
some hitsound modding

[Cappuccino]

1. 00:00:795 (1,2) - I think that such part should use sliderslide of the long silence.
2. 00:02:795 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
3. 00:04:195 (5) - 00:05:995 (1) - same as above.
4. 00:07:395 (6,8) - add whistle.
5. 00:07:795 (1) - I think remove whistle add finish better.
6. 00:09:195 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
7. 00:10:995 (1) - same as 00:07:795 (1) -
8. 00:11:395 (3,4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try an arrange like this.
   - sorry it's follow vocal
9. 00:13:595 (5) - add clap and whistle on slider end.
10. 00:13:995 (6) - add whistle.
11. 00:16:395 (3,4) - add whistle on slider head. and remove whistle on slider end at 00:16:395 (3) -
12. 00:17:195 (5) - 00:18:795 (7) - add whistle.
13. 00:19:595 (2) - remove whistle on slider end. and add whistle on slider head.
14. 00:19:995 (3,7) - add whistle.
15. 00:21:795 (5) - add whistle on slider end.
16. 00:22:795 (3,4) - same as 00:16:395 (3,4) -
17. 00:23:595 (5) - 00:25:195 (7) - add whistle
18. 00:27:395 (2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try an arrange like this. please check on you are pattern 00:33:795 (2,3) -
    
19. 00:29:995 (6) - add whistle
20. 00:30:595 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
21. 00:31:595 (1) - 00:34:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
22. 00:36:395 (6) - add whistle
23. 00:36:995 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
24. 00:36:995 (2) - This spacing is really awkward. so move x479 y233 at 00:37:395 (3) -
25. add whistle 00:39:195 - and 00:39:395 - and 00:39:595 -
26. 00:42:795 (8) - 00:43:595 (3) - add whistle
27. 00:45:995 (5) - add whistle
28. 00:47:595 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
29. 00:50:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and remove whistle on slider end.
30. 00:51:195 (2,5) - add whistle
31. 00:52:395 (1) - 00:53:995 (1) - 00:55:595 (1) - add whistle on slider end.
32. 00:58:395 (1,3) - add whistle
33. 01:01:195 (3) - add whistle
34. 01:01:795 (6) - add whistle on slider end.
35. 01:03:195 (4) - changed 1/4 slider repeat more better much.
    
36. 01:03:595 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
37. 01:04:395 (3,6) - add whistle.
38. 01:06:795 (1) - add whistle on slider head and end.
39. 01:07:595 (3) - add whistle on slider head and remove whistle on slider end.
40. 01:08:995 (3,4,5) - same as 00:11:395 (3,4,5) - - sorry it's follow vocal
41. 01:11:195 (4,5) - same as 00:13:595 (5,6) -
42. 01:13:195 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
43. 01:14:795 (5) - 01:15:595 (3) - add whistle
44. 01:16:395 (1) - add whislte on slider head and end.
45. 01:17:995 (5) - add whistle
46. 01:23:195 (1,4) - add whistle
47. 01:25:595 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:25:995 (4) - add whistle

GL ~

Karen wrote:

Recheck, don't kudosu this post.

Cappuccino

1. 00:01:395 (1,2,3) - uh this is so noticable but you rejected it in my previous mod so up to you, 00:02:195 (2,3) - such a big jump isn't needed i think
2. 00:05:995 (1) - try ctrl+g, more fun imo.
3. 00:19:595 (2,3) - enlarge the spacing since it looks so small comparing with your large spacings before this 00:18:595 (6,7,1,2) -
4. 00:27:395 (2,3) - this looks too near while you made a jump at 00:27:795 (3,4) - this
5. 00:32:395 (3) - the rhythm here is strange, you added clap on 00:32:595 - and also the vocal which should be emphasized is on 00:32:595 - this tick too, so try another rhythm like
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:32:895 (6) - remove this note since it's badly overmapped i think
7. 00:33:295 - then why skip this?
8. 00:48:595 (3,5) - this looks ugly, try overlap them less or just stack them
9. 00:55:595 (1,2,3) - stack them as well for consistency with 00:52:395 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
10. 01:01:595 (5) - i know you wanted to stack this with a slider tail but that destroys the flow i think, moving this to another place like (368,322) would be better i think
11. 01:01:595 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - in this part, your flows are all with the same direction (from left to right), which is kinda weird to play, try to use various kinds of flows to make your map more interesting instead of spamming one
12. 01:26:195 (1,2,3) - just personal opinion, these 3 sliders skipped some interesting 1/4 beats ;w; .. i like now sorry... bb
13. 00:22:795 (3) - remove the slider body whistle

hmm flow still has the space of being improved i my opinion, but this map has reached the standard of ranked maps in my opinion, so poke me back after you reply this mod, let's see what we can do.

Karen wrote:

pyon pyon~

Satellite wrote:

recheck and looks good! so Qualified!

Congrats on 1st <3

Shioi wrote:

앙 모아띠

Taeyang wrote:

굳 츄카츄카~!