1. Hard - 4Key (2.81 stars, 678 notes)
2. Insane - 4Key (4.04 stars, 1133 notes)
3. Normal - 4Key (1.91 stars, 448 notes)
4. Valedict's Another - 4Key (4.84 stars, 1504 notes)

NlHIL wrote:

At least one diff must 2 stars↓ for ranked.
So make Easy or easinalize Normal...

Pls put the last LNs to the same length
4K=|1|2|3|4|
[Normal]
00:12:261 (12261|2,12261|3) - If you want so, ok.

00:49:385 (49385|1) - move to 4 and 00:49:724 (49724|2) - move to 1?
[Hard]
01:29:137 (89137|2,89137|3) - 01:30:493 (90493|0,90493|3) - If you want so, ok.
[Insane]
00:39:808 (39808|3,39808|1,40062|1,40062|2,40316|2,40316|1) - If you want so, ok.
00:41:164 (41164|3,41164|1,41418|3,41418|2,41672|2,41672|3) - ^
01:09:219 - 'w'
[Valedict]
01:09:388 (69388|1,69388|0) - I can't hear 2 noer
01:12:270 (72270|3,72609|2,73118|1,73626|2,73965|0,74304|0,74813|3,75321|2,75830|1) - why short LN?
01:16:169 (76169|3,76508|0,76677|2,77016|2,77694|2,78034|1,78542|2,79051|3,79390|1,79898|3,80237|1) - ^
sorry, I didn't know "It's not for ranked"

nice map! nothing seemed wrong!

erlinadewi- wrote:

hello

change BPM to 177

Normal OD 7 HP 7
Hard OD 7,5 HP 7,5
Insane OD 8 HP 8

4K Coloum |1|2|3|4|

Normal

00:07:259 - add note
00:07:768 - ^
00:08:615 - ^
00:09:124 - ^
00:12:259 - ghost note
00:36:497 (36497|3) - move to 1
00:44:463 (44463|0,44632|1) - ctrl j then 00:44:802 (44802|0) - move to 2

Hard

00:07:769 (7769|1) - move to 3
00:17:855 (17855|3,17855|0) - how about triple note?
00:23:276 - ^
00:34:124 - ^
00:39:548 - ^
00:42:598 (42598|3) - move to 3
01:01:243 - double note
01:02:598 - ^

sorry can mod 2 diff~

GOODLUCK with your map >W<)9

Etsu wrote:

Hello! my modding...

Key: 1|2|3|4

Normal:
00:06:988 (6988|2) - I think suits you best as well as a small stairs: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4793741
00:08:853 (8853|1) - move in key 4
00:09:107 (9107|2) - move in key 2
00:09:870 - delete note?
00:09:954 (9954|0) - add note?
00:10:039 (10039|2) - delete note? (those part have to listen well sound)
00:35:802 (35802|1) - 00:36:141 (36141|2) - I hear loud sound
00:44:785 (44785|1) - You should put a note and 00:44:785 (44785|1) - here 00:44:954 -
01:33:598 (93598|2) - here does not fit well ... you should do the same previous step

Insane:
00:28:175 (28175|1) - add note in key 1
00:29:870 (29870|0,29870|1) - add note?
00:33:937 - add note in key 3
00:34:107 (34107|3,34107|0,34107|1) - add note?
00:36:649 (36649|1) - add note?
00:44:446 (44446|3) - I think you would read better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4793862
00:47:663 - add note?
00:48:344 - ^
00:49:361 - ^
00:51:395 - ^
00:53:090 - ^
01:12:412 - add note?
01:13:768 - add note?
01:33:598 (93598|0,93598|3) - well I say here should create a better timing to finish or not to finish it shortens the old best

This was my basic modding...

Good luck

Raveille wrote:

OSU! NEEDS MORE JUBEAT! I mean...nothing. Let's go.

|1|2|3|4|

Normal

00:12:412 - triple for strong beat Applied
01:32:073 (92073|3) - to 2 Applied

01:33:768 - tap note (1 maybe, I don't think 2 notes would fit here) Applied

Hard

00:12:412 - triple for strong beat Applied

00:28:683 - triple for strong beat too Applied

00:31:395 - ^ Applied

01:33:768 - hold here just like in Insane. Applied

Insane

00:36:480 - triple due to sounds Applied

00:38:514 - ^ Applied

00:39:192 - ^ Applied

01:24:276 - 1 and 4, then 01:24:192 - move to 2 Applied

01:25:632 - can be 1 and 4 too Kept the same. I felt like the 1,4 combo was going to be heavily used in the last few seconds so I didn't want to use it too much
01:26:988 - same with 1:24

Another

00:24:276 (24276|3,24446|3,24615|3,24785|3,24954|3,25124|3,25293|3,25463|3,25632|3,25802|3,25971|3) - stress on this col, can reduce and swap with others Applied

01:18:514 (78514|0,78683|0,78853|0,79022|0,79192|0,79361|0,79531|0,79700|0,79870|0) - same here too Applied

01:24:615 (84615|0,84785|0,84954|0,85124|0,85293|0,85463|0,85632|0,85802|0,85971|0,86141|0,86310|0,86480|0,86649|0) - this too, very stressful for col 1. Applied

01:33:768 - hold here just like in Insane. Applied

Pretty well done here. Good luck

Kernaus wrote:

Hello from my modding queue !

i wasn't able to find anything to say about Valedict's Another and the Normal diff so here's my mod on the other diffs.

Insane

1. 00:20:548 missing a note for the crash here according to earlier patterns
2. 01:06:649 to 01:09:022 Could be a difficulty spike with a handstream, not necessary but i think it'd add so much to this part
3. 01:12:073 to 01:19:870 too much empty space here imo, try adding single notes to mark the beat
4. 01:22:920 to 01:33:259 i think putting jumps based on the main melody would be much funnier to play than a simple on-beat jumpstream.

Hard

1. 00:08:005 - 00:08:175 really unsure what those jumps are for, i suggest getting rid of them and replacing them with singles
2. 00:09:361 - 00:09:531 ^
3. 01:29:107 missplaced, should be 1/4 later, unless you're NOT mapping it to the main melody, in wich case, the whole ending is really confusing
4. 01:29:954 missplaced, should be 1/4 earlier

That's all i was able to find, great mapset overall, hope you found this helpful and good luck o/


EDIT : about Valedict's another.

01:09:531 to 01:11:734 i know it would be overmapping but i was really hoping/expecting a 1/8 stream here LOL

Syadow- wrote:

hi Lucky from Ly0 and Sya MANiA QUEUE
Feel Free to Reject

[Hard]

00:09:276 (9276|1) - remove cuz u use 1/4 for this part
00:14:870 (14870|3,15039|1) - maybe remove cuz u use 1/2 beat for this part
00:16:819 (16819|0) - move to col 3
00:17:581 (17581|3,17751|1) - same as above
00:20:293 (20293|0,20463|2) - ^
00:34:446 - this part is same as 00:23:598 -
00:34:785 - missing note ?
00:35:124 - ^
00:36:988 - ^
00:37:497 - ^
00:37:836 - ^ same like 00:38:175 -
00:39:870 (39870|3) - move to 00:39:785 -
00:40:378 (40378|0) - move to 00:40:293 -
00:40:548 - missing ?
00:41:056 (41056|3,41226|0,41395|1,41565|3,41734|2,41903|3) - plz remove all and re arrange cuz not fit with the sound! i suggest to use 50% playback rate
00:42:073 - Missing again
00:42:412 - ^
00:42:497 - ^
00:42:581 (42581|1) - remove no sound there
00:42:666 - missing again
00:42:920 - 00:43:005 - 00:43:175 - ^
00:44:785 (44785|0) - LN start here 00:44:954 -
01:06:988 - 01:07:327 - 01:07:666 - 01:08:005 - 01:08:344 - 01:08:683 - 01:09:022 - same like 01:06:649 -
01:28:514 (88514|1) - move to 01:28:598 -
01:29:870 (89870|1) - move to 01:29:954 -

Please Check again in Normal and Insane diff
Good luck >w<

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there modsu

dadon

key=1/2/3/4
[Insane]
00:07:836 (7836|1,7920|0) - move one collumn to the right it's easier to read and better to catch up for the flow imho :3
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00:13:175 (13175|1) - this should be double according to : 00:14:446 (14446|3,14446|2,14531|1,14531|0) -
same suggestion for thoose
00:15:802 (15802|0,15802|3,15887|2) -
00:18:514 (18514|3,18514|2,18598|0) -
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00:23:090 (23090|0) - you could make this one jack in 2 cause of pitch , and according to this aswell 00:28:514 (28514|3,28514|2) -
00:43:429 (43429|2) - what do you think about making this note a simple note instead of a LN ? the LN rythm seems to really start here : 00:43:598 (43598|0) - here so , up to you
01:27:836 (87836|1) - if you feel like making all this a bit more spicy , you could add a note here on 2 in between the chords
[Hard]
00:07:666 (7666|1) - add a note here according to your overall pattern in this section
00:09:022 (9022|1) - add a note in 2 ^ same reason , the little instru sound is also here
00:22:327 (22327|2,22412|3) - Ctrl+J ? then 00:22:497 (22497|2,22581|1) - Ctrl+J aswell , makes a cool pattern imo
00:29:446 (29446|1) - should be a double , according to : 00:30:802 (30802|1,30802|0) -
00:35:293 (35293|1) - move to 1 according to pitch , and to this : 00:37:666 (37666|2,38005|2) -
00:40:717 (40717|1) - move to 1 then move the next chord (or re arrange the whole pattern)
01:28:514 (88514|1) - move to the blue line (uper one) , the sound is actually here : 01:28:598 (88598|1) -
01:29:870 (89870|1) - ^ same move, here : 01:29:954 (89954|1) -
[Normal]
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00:31:565 (31565|2,31734|1,31903|2) - I suggest to follow the main drum sounds here , rather tham 1/2 ing ,
00:31:565 (31565|2,31734|1) - remove thoose , and add a note here : 00:31:649 (31649|1) -
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01:32:581 (92581|2,92920|2,93259|2,93598|2) - move all of them to another collumn , because 01:32:242 (92242|2) - this isn't the same pitch as all of the next notes (suggest in 4)

Good Luck :3

LastExceed wrote:

Hey there, coming from your moding queue ^.^

Columns: 0|1|2|3

Insane

HP:8 OD:8 is a bit much for 3.6* maybe use 7 or 7.5Applied
00:09:700 - This feels weird. The music is getting more intense but the beatmap becomes easier. Maybe use short sliders? Made it more intense with js pattern
00:11:056 - same again. I know you don't want to increase the note density so why not use a broken pattern that forces the player to tap instead? same as before
00:12:242 - single Applied
00:13:175 - i dont see why this is a double. make it single instead (this appears everywhere in this diff, won't point out all occasions) the doubles after each other was to represent that in the music but i changed it now
00:15:124 - random triple? double should be enough (these also appear all across the map) Applied
00:09:700 - same as before (won't point out the the other occasions, I'm sure you get what I mean) Applied
00:32:073 - why are the first 4 doubles while the other 4 are singles? its the exact same sound Changed
00:43:768 - (43768|1,44107|2,44446|3,44785|0) - add singles next to these left them single ln's, i didnt want to make dense ln's
00:58:514->01:06:649 - this part feels repitive. the patterns are good but you need to shuffle them It supposed to be repetitive as its the same sound
01:12:412 (72412|2) - either delete this one or add singles between all the other triples too Applied
01:13:768 (73768|1) - ^
01:18:514 (78514|2,78514|3,78514|1,79022|3,79022|2,79022|1) - these shouldn't be the sameApplied

That's it for now, might mod more diffs depending on how much you'll mod of my map:

Map link: F-777 - Space Battle
Keys=4
Length: 5:18 (full diffspread!)
Diffs to mod: EZ/NM/HD/MX/SC/SHD/END take your picks, whatever you prefer. the harder the better.

Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.

Song:
Number of difficulties modded in my map:

Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.

• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.

• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, do not forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note. This is because I only mod the notes and with that, I do not pay attention on the hitsounds placements.

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK! but it would be better if its on the default resolutions such as: 800x600 / 1024x768 / 1366x768 Working on it
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:10:378 (10378|3) - Suggesting to remove as there is no additional sound occured here. Not like 00:11:056 (11056|0,11056|1) - and 00:12:073 (12073|0,12073|1) - which has additional sounds while treble roll is occuring. Hard does not have double note here as well.

00:11:226 - Suggesting: http://puu.sh/rsPZq/5882e1f010.png
• Hand balance
• This is to differ the double 00:11:056 (11056|1,11056|0) - to double at 00:12:073 -

00:24:276 (24276|2) - move to column 4 so it can be spread and balance more since 00:23:937 (23937|2,24276|2,24615|2) -

00:39:192 - add double note on column 3 and 4 since you note the same sound at 00:38:514 (38514|2,38514|1) - and it is too inconsistent without it.

00:41:226 (41226|3,41226|1,41565|0,41565|2,41903|3,41903|1) - This is quite weird as it doesn't follow the strong beat that we can hear on the music. Also Normal uses doubles while Hard is not. I suggest you to follow that strong beat or the synthesizer of 1/2s instead as it is more consistent.

01:10:717 (70717|3,70802|2,70887|0,70971|1,71056|3,71141|2,71226|0,71310|1,71395|3,71480|2,71565|0,71649|1) - This is the spike of the Normal Difficulty. It is actually quite hard to execute for beginners. Suggesting atleast to make like you did at 01:21:565 (81565|0) - to be more consistent on that part. Your choice sir.

01:20:887 (80887|2) - Suggesting to remove as there is no more beat sound to make it double note.

01:33:598 (93598|2) - Reduce the length until 01:34:107 - since the Another and Insane ends on that line and to make consistent on every difficulty.

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:12:412 (12412|3,12581|0) - ctrl H so the double note at 00:12:412 - differs to 00:12:073 - since they are different sounds. Also the new patterns fits with 00:13:768 (13768|2,13937|3,14107|2,14276|3) -

00:34:107 (34107|1) - move to 4 so it can be more comfortable to execute and avoid that mini jack on column 2

00:36:819 (36819|1) - move to 3 so it can differ to 00:36:480 (36480|1,36480|0) -

00:39:361 (39361|2) - remove, no additional occured here besides the synth. It is the same sound density as 00:39:022 (39022|2) -

00:41:903 (41903|3) - move to 2, to feel the flow more.

00:44:785 - add note to 3 or 4 to feel that impact sound. Synth + long sound.

01:04:192 (64192|1,64446|1,64870|0,65124|0,65548|3,65802|3,66226|2,66480|2) - I understand why you did this but it seems inconsistent with the doubles you have starting at 00:58:514 - . It feels awkward since it has the same sound e.g 01:02:836 (62836|2,62836|3,63090|3,63090|1,63344|0,63344|1) - then suddenly becomes single. I suggest to make them double notes as well for consistency.

01:17:242 (77242|1,77412|1) - remove, as the Insane difficulty do not have notes on these 1/4 blue lines. If applied, move 01:17:327 (77327|2) - to 2. This is the spike of the difficulty as well.

01:33:598 (93598|1,93768|0) - same reason at Normal. Reduce Length.

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:20:548 (20548|1) - remove as there is no cymbal sounds to make this tri ple note. Another does only double note here.

00:21:903 (21903|3) - ^

00:28:090 - add note to 4, strong beat like 00:28:259 (28259|3,28259|0,28344|2,28344|1) -

00:28:683 - until 00:30:802 - this part quite awkward as the triple notes are not fitted with the sounds occuring. They are not strong, impact sounds to be tripled. I suggest to keep following the melody and note for the beat for doubles. You can see Another's part here for reference.

00:32:073 (32073|0,32073|1,32158|3,32158|2,32242|1,32242|0,32327|3,32327|2,32412|1,32412|0,32497|2,32497|3,32581|0,32581|1,32666|3,32666|2,32751|0,32751|1) - This part should be at 00:32:751 - I recommend to swap them with 00:32:751 (32751|0,32751|1,32836|3,32920|1,32920|2,33005|0,33090|2,33090|3,33175|1,33259|0,33259|3,33344|2,33429|1,33429|0,33514|2,33598|0,33598|3,33683|1,33683|2,33768|0,33768|3) - since the later sounds are stronger.

00:44:785 - add note to 2 for long sound + synth.

[Valedict's Another]

SPOILER

00:28:090 (28090|2) - move to 00:28:005 - so you can emphasize the beat without removing any note density here.

00:28:344 (28344|2) - move to 00:28:259 - same reason above.

00:31:226 - add note here beat sound as well. double note.

00:44:785 (44785|3) - Suggesting to extend until 00:47:666 - like the other difficulties did for that long sound.

01:30:802 - add note to 2 beat sound as well same as 01:30:717 (90717|2,90717|3,90887|2,90887|3) -

It is actually nice though I am worried on some part as they are quite heavy. (especially on the jack parts with triples)

[Overall]
Nice song choice! though I wonder why the title is like that haha.


Thank you so much for the contract, Good luck and I will contact you the time I will need your mod. 100% of Mod Applied

Please vote here as feedback for my M4M modding performance: t/372334 Done
~ END OF CONTRACT ~
Thank you for the mod, remember to let me know when to mod your map

aytoms29 wrote:

Honestly I love it. Great map.

(it's funny because you have to find out what nm a green laser is to find the map which I like)

Valedict wrote:

Didn't know you still had intentions to rank this, here's a quick fix up of my GD: https://www.dropbox.com/s/h5rrx0muk3373 ... D.osu?dl=0

If it's too late to update that's fine, it just fixes a couple of technical things I missed a while ago and haven't updated yet.