Maakkeli wrote:

hei!

hard
i'm still learning to mod e/n/h diffs so bear with me
00:39:904 (1,2) - i really think there should be something on the red ticks too
01:03:779 (1) - shouldn't this be at x280 y160 to fit the storyboard
01:42:440 (3) - you suddenly decide to do custom stacks
02:25:019 (5) - i'm kinda sad that you decided to skip this part
03:07:754 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this might be a bit too hard for hard
06:21:793 - this is really random to skip this
06:27:186 - ^
06:32:579 - ^
06:37:972 - ^ pointed out all of these just to make my mod look lenghty
07:20:804 (4) - this triple would sound so much better at the previous red tick
07:21:501 (3) - and tbh it's kinda inconsisten that you did the triples previously and then you don't do them here
07:30:397 - there is a really audible sound here and you decided to skip it
07:43:478 (4) - 1/2 slider would emphasize better. Also unstack
08:05:950 (4) - idk this just didn't feel good to play

i'm a straight male sporty girls drop me a call

kricher wrote:

hard diff
00:29:001 (3) - the music on this slider is the almost same with the sliders before so you can make it 2 sliders
00:30:002 (2) - you can split this to be similar with this ^^^
00:31:002 (1) - make it to start 2 ticks earlier so you dont miss a beat
00:46:423 - this part could get mapped
01:03:779 (1) - you can make this a slider and make it finish at 01:04:250 -
01:06:292 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - get those 2 ticks earlier if this is meant to match with the voice and remove the last note so it wont overlap with the slider
01:08:805 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - the same but you dont have to remove the last note
01:12:103 - you miss a beat there
02:25:161 - this part could get mapped and be slow so you are not missing almost one song
02:46:529 (3,4) - get those 2 two ticks later
03:13:879 (3,4) - the same
03:39:612 - you miss a beat here
05:18:214 (1) - you can make this finish at 05:19:022 -
05:18:675 (2) - you can make this finish at 05:19:022 -
06:21:793 - add something here
06:26:821 - and here
06:32:074 - ^^
07:04:967 - you can map this break if you want
07:20:784 - add something here
rework a lot of the sliders on the last 2 halozy maps

Those are in my opinion

-Tochi wrote:

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  General

1. Difficulties have storyboard but [WidescreenStoryboard] is not set (check if this is intended (4:3 storyboard) Intendent
2. Inconsistency in [Tags] Fixed
3. Storyboard image file dimensions are more than allowed maximum ( 640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768): sb\burst.png (1100x1100) Intendent
   sb\glow.png (1300x800) Fixed
4. Unused hitsounds: drum-hitclap3.wav Deleted
5. Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms: normal-hitfinish4.wav Its fine o.O

1. Files unused:
   
   • sb\circle.png
     sb\weapon3.png
     sb\11t-fonts\3.png
     sb\11t-fonts\5.png
     sb\11t-fonts\6.png
     sb\11t-fonts\7.png
     sb\11t-fonts\8.png
     sb\11t-fonts\q1.png Deleted
   The world
2. Useless green line over red (no SV changes): Fixed
   07:58:519
3. Same volume should be on green-red lines (this is unrankable):
   00:00:319
   01:30:155
   03:56:038
   04:32:349
   04:48:183
   06:21:119
   06:42:711
   07:58:519
   Green timing line is unsnapped:
   
   ^

   • 00:33:636
     01:05:940
     01:16:672
     01:51:561
     01:51:847
     01:52:418
     01:55:561
     01:56:990
     02:00:704
     02:00:990
     02:06:704
     02:15:847
     02:20:133
     02:20:418
     02:31:844
     02:34:122
     02:44:371
     02:45:510
     02:46:080
     02:46:649
     03:00:315
     03:01:480
     07:14:172
     07:19:753
     07:58:907

   Fixed them all
   
   Most of these issues are unrankable, so please make sure to fix them.

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  The World

1. 00:41:789 (1,2,3) - These 1/2's are kinda confusing, maybe make them either smaller or more spaced so they don't touch each other. Sure, I've got a lot of problems with this pattern
2. 01:00:951 (1,2) - Why not stack as before too? Fixed
3. 01:48:440 (1,2,3,4) - This jump looks kinda random, and it flows too well here 01:48:726 (3,4,5) - for the beat. I think a back and forth kinda beat would fit more like: http://puu.sh/nDKwW/1eb7410295.jpg Nice idea
4. 02:54:078 (3) - NC here to reduce the hard reading, since the sliders before are almost on same place. Meh meh, you're right buty I didn't place NC on similar patterns and that would be inconsistent
5. 04:40:548 (3,4) - So, this isn't too far away from 04:40:266 (1,2) - ? Fixed
6. 05:33:982 (1) - Mute spinner end? Oups
7. 06:47:792 (8) - Ctrl+G maybe? Yeah, sure. This is the second time some1 wants to Ctrl + G that so I'll have to do this
8. 08:13:879 (2) - Ctrl+G and 08:14:231 (4) - would be better tbh.

08:13:703 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is like the harder version of the previous one and it doesn't need any change imo

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  Feedback

  
  Nice map, nice SB - Good luck!

teko8 wrote:

From my NM modding queue, though this is a really short one since there's not much I can see wrong with the diffs at the moment.

General Modding

ReFaller's Hard:

03:07:754 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Distance Spacing: 1.2x->1.1x/1.0x it will force me to remap, i would wait for better idea

The World:

03:20:891 (2) - NC here.
04:16:184 (4,5) - I would move these objects closer to where 04:15:617 (2) - is or at least 04:16:184 (4) - (would change spacing).

Possible Other Changes

ReFaller's Hard:

01:46:012 (4) - I feel like this isn't supposed to be here but that's probably just me . like highlighted part
07:21:152 (1,2,3,1,2) - These patterns seems too slow in comparison to the previous at 07:19:757 (1,2,3,4) - and the next one at 07:23:943 (1,2,3,4) - . Maybe add a beat to the previous combo at 07:20:978 - while moving 07:20:804 (4) - to 07:20:629 - ? i feel that i might do more bad than it is

The World:

OD7.4->OD7.5
AR9.4->AR9.5
HP5.4->HP5.5
Reason for above: Rounding preference though these values may have been intentional
01:02:993 (4) - Could move this note on top of 01:03:150 (1) - instead and make the curvature of 01:03:150 (1) - point up instead.
03:31:128 (2) - NC here.
03:36:783 (5) - Extend to 03:37:346 - replacing 03:37:346 (6) - .
07:29:176 (5,6) - Swap these. Not sure if correct because then 07:45:571 (3,4,5,6) - becomes inconsistent.


SB: I was going to say to add BPM markers but I don't think that's necessary for this seeing as the map doesn't have too many breaks;
SB Load goes over 5.00x at times which can effect low-end computers (osu! Ranking Criteria Guidelines last line)

Fantastic mapset. Really hope you can get this ranked. Good luck~ Have a Star

teko8 wrote:

From my NM modding queue, though this is a really short one since there's not much I can see wrong with the diffs at the moment.

General Modding

ReFaller's Hard:

03:07:754 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Distance Spacing: 1.2x->1.1x/1.0x

The World:

03:20:891 (2) - NC here. Its not audible enough
04:16:184 (4,5) - I would move these objects closer to where 04:15:617 (2) - is or at least 04:16:184 (4) - (would change spacing). Sure, why not?

Possible Other Changes

ReFaller's Hard:

01:46:012 (4) - I feel like this isn't supposed to be here but that's probably just me .
07:21:152 (1,2,3,1,2) - These patterns seems too slow in comparison to the previous at 07:19:757 (1,2,3,4) - and the next one at 07:23:943 (1,2,3,4) - . Maybe add a beat to the previous combo at 07:20:978 - while moving 07:20:804 (4) - to 07:20:629 - ?

The World:

OD7.4->OD7.5
AR9.4->AR9.5
HP5.4->HP5.5 AR 9.5 seems a bit too extreme for 5.63. For the others, there is no reason to change
Reason for above: Rounding preference though these values may have been intentional
01:02:993 (4) - Could move this note on top of 01:03:150 (1) - instead and make the curvature of 01:03:150 (1) - point up instead. Moved the note, slider seems fine imo
03:31:128 (2) - NC here. Okay
03:36:783 (5) - Extend to 03:37:346 - replacing 03:37:346 (6) - . This little double is pretty audible
07:29:176 (5,6) - Swap these. Not sure if correct because then 07:45:571 (3,4,5,6) - becomes inconsistent. It would destroy the rotative motion


SB: I was going to say to add BPM markers but I don't think that's necessary for this seeing as the map doesn't have too many breaks;
SB Load goes over 5.00x at times which can effect low-end computers (osu! Ranking Criteria Guidelines last line) Its rankable if this is not constant

Fantastic mapset. Really hope you can get this ranked. Good luck~ Have a Star

Alphabet wrote:

Hey, M4M

It's a pretty short mod because I can't find anything major
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ReFaller's hard

1. 00:09:991 - how about a spinner here to emphasize the next song? I made cut break espacially for don't repeating like exile-'s diff
2. 00:29:668 (1) - This look better if you flip it vertically, it doesn't matter to me, just some fliping
   
3. 01:42:440 (3) - Overlap with 01:42:297 (2) , it looks better manual stacking gives here better flow
4. 02:46:101 (2) - Overlap with the start of 02:44:962 (2) - lol fixed
5. 03:35:656 (1) - If you're going to start here it's a bit random, why not map the rest of the break before it? Some break after tiring xi/m-flo
6. 04:11:360 (2,3) - This isn't following the vocals (I'm assuming you're mapping by the vocals because the rest of the map pretty much is.) woke up too late
7. 04:29:520 (2,3) - ^ ^
8. 05:16:368 (1,2,3,4) - Why not use the same hitsounds as 05:12:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - because from 05:16:xxx sounds terrible
9. 07:19:757 (1,2,3,4) - I think it flows much better if it went like this: flow inludes only playfield, not timeline
   
10. 07:58:903 (1) - I think you ought to remove the bit of sb here lol fireworks Kappa Every storyboard issues notice to Exile- pls, i'm not storyboarder

[/notice]

gl hf ^_^

Alphabet wrote:

Hey, M4M

It's a pretty short mod because I can't find anything major
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Mapperino

General

1. Sometimes the SB load exceeds 5.00x, how about tone down the sb at some parts? ( especially 05:49:599 - and 07:58:903 - The SB load goes to 8.00x. ) Yeah but It's rankable as long as it's not constant
2. 01:06:292 - On the storyboard you missed out the "+" in t+pazolite. I'm aware of that but I can't find the "+" from t11 fonts.
3. Tags conflict with ReFaller's GD Fixed

The World

1. 00:50:585 (5) - NC (Idk i think it looks nice) I didn't use NC on similar patterns
2. 01:04:407 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's confusing to read because it's hidden in the slider. Its not that confusing and high AR allows you to read it
3. 01:51:869 (1) - This slider looks ugly here because it doesn't fit in. You're right, fixed
4. 02:05:155 (4) - You were following the vocals and now you suddenly change to the background music just for this slider? B-but... this slider follows the vocal
5. 02:19:869 (1,2) - Imo I don't like the change of flow here. Curved it a bit
6. 02:43:252 (1) - There's nothing in the map here to represent Astrosexy I had not play the original map before I created this map xD
7. 06:53:202 (1) - I don't like the placement of this note, it doesn't look right. Sure, fixed

gl

Microsoft Vista wrote:

[The World]
probably gonna get pooped on for asking but why the low od? bumping up to 8.0 isn't too much to ask i don't think
i suck too much to find anything with this

Microsoft Vista wrote:

[Hard]
00:33:622 (1,2) - maybe these notes are a bit of a surprise rhythmically for a hard player, remove or make them a slider? and the normal sampleset out of nowhere is a little aggressive so let's keep it aggressive, slider totally doesn't fit when there are two hard kick drums
00:37:391 (1) - maybe replace with a reverse of 00:36:135 (1) ? overlaps are cute i don't know what i should do there
01:51:869 (1,2) - the tail of 2 could be brought a little closer to 1, try x476? okay? no serious reason
02:57:497 (2) - looks better to me as a straight slider for some reason, maybe tilt to the right a little so, only for you

1. 00:27:667 (3,4) - what do think about cntrl G these ones and break the mirror, to make the rise in tone on (3) more emphasized and for a bit better flow into 00:28:334 (1) -
2. 00:30:669 (7) - x248/y60 for the same ds
3. 00:33:003 (1) - clap maybe?
4. 00:40:847 (3,4) - would actually make this a smaller square so the DS decreases from (2,3) and increases back from (3,4) fits the music more
5. 00:43:046 (5,1) - swap NC
6. 01:03:779 (3) - curve this a bit better so the next combo is completly stacked with it
7. 01:11:004 (4,5,6) - hitsound these
8. 01:22:784 in the storyboard the lyric here is "Had" instead of "ad" go dutchies!
9. 01:30:155 (1,2) - Would change this pattern into the ones you did afterwards, dunno why you made (2) clickable here and not the end of(1)
10. 02:07:869 (1) - Cntrl h + cntrl g here for the singing tone
11. 02:39:620 (6) - If you're gonna make this clickable I'd also make 02:39:477 clickable
12. 02:51:229 (1,2) - You could add a whistle on the first beats here
13. 04:12:495 (3,4) - increase in ds a bit so the square becomes bigger and (3,4) will play like it has more ds than the rest, to emphasize the louder usaTEI or do like you did at 07:16:966 (1,2,3,4) -
14. 04:16:468 (1,2,3) - Rotate (2) by 225° way too many angles and ds change for that's essentianaly 3 times the same sound, rotating 2 would make it 3 times the same movement so it fits better here imo
15. 04:20:724 (7) - add clap
16. 04:49:320 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - blanket this better
17. 04:59:291 (6) - splitting this into 2 circles sounds better here imo
18. 05:02:752 (4,5,6,7) - right back at you for polarity would follow this instead, otherwise no one will know (5) starts on a 1/8
    
19. 06:21:793 (3) - 06:27:186 (3) - any reason why these are so low spaced? Feel these could be emphasized more because there the highest point of the song
20. 08:16:522 (8) - 08:17:931 (8) - 2.0 sv pls, you got all the sliders and kicksliders from the last 20 seconds on 2.0 aswell, this is just frustrating to play because you need to make that extra movent on 2.5 coming from the whole previous part

Wishkey wrote:

Refaller incoming tomorrow hopefully (also is this spread rankable?)

ReFaller wrote:

Wishkey wrote:

Refaller incoming tomorrow hopefully (also is this spread rankable?)

Yes, spread is rankable because it's a marathon.

Wishkey wrote:

Heya! From the M4M

Really awesome map seems almost ready to go!


The World

1. 00:27:667 (3,4) - what do think about cntrl G these ones and break the mirror, to make the rise in tone on (3) more emphasized and for a bit better flow into 00:28:334 (1) - Yeah, sure
2. 00:30:669 (7) - x248/y60 for the same ds Okay
3. 00:33:003 (1) - clap maybe? On the downbeat? I dont think so
4. 00:40:847 (3,4) - would actually make this a smaller square so the DS decreases from (2,3) and increases back from (3,4) fits the music more Meh, it would create an overlap and there is no real reason for it anyways. The DS is pretty decent
5. 00:43:046 (5,1) - swap NC Why? It still follows the previous sound. I would rather place it 00:43:360 (7) - here but it still doesn't fit
6. 01:03:779 (3) - curve this a bit better so the next combo is completly stacked with it Fixed I think
7. 01:11:004 (4,5,6) - hitsound these I've hitsounded 01:10:690 (1) - this slider before them. I think its enough
8. 01:22:784 in the storyboard the lyric here is "Had" instead of "ad" go dutchies! Oups! You're right. Nice catch!
9. 01:30:155 (1,2) - Would change this pattern into the ones you did afterwards, dunno why you made (2) clickable here and not the end of(1) Fixed!
10. 02:07:869 (1) - Cntrl h + cntrl g here for the singing tone Nice idea
11. 02:39:620 (6) - If you're gonna make this clickable I'd also make 02:39:477 clickable Naah, it also follows the second sound
12. 02:51:229 (1,2) - You could add a whistle on the first beats here Sure, why not?
13. 04:12:495 (3,4) - increase in ds a bit so the square becomes bigger and (3,4) will play like it has more ds than the rest, to emphasize the louder usaTEI or do like you did at 07:16:966 (1,2,3,4) - But there is no reason to change DS while it follows the same TEI sound
14. 04:16:468 (1,2,3) - Rotate (2) by 225° way too many angles and ds change for that's essentianaly 3 times the same sound, rotating 2 would make it 3 times the same movement so it fits better here imo I like your idea ^_^
15. 04:20:724 (7) - add clap Oups
16. 04:49:320 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - blanket this better Sure
17. 04:59:291 (6) - splitting this into 2 circles sounds better here imo Okay
18. 05:02:752 (4,5,6,7) - right back at you for polarity would follow this instead, otherwise no one will know (5) starts on a 1/8
    
    Yeah but I cant do anything about it. The original gangsta has the same issue. I think the spacing here is reasonable enough to make it possible to read.
19. 06:21:793 (3) - 06:27:186 (3) - any reason why these are so low spaced? Feel these could be emphasized more because there the highest point of the song Fixed
20. 08:16:522 (8) - 08:17:931 (8) - 2.0 sv pls, you got all the sliders and kicksliders from the last 20 seconds on 2.0 aswell, this is just frustrating to play because you need to make that extra movent on 2.5 coming from the whole previous part Changed back again to 2.0

Hope it was helpful and Good luck man awesome map!

Refaller incoming tomorrow hopefully (also is this spread rankable?)

ByBy13 wrote:

not really.Even if it is a marathon,there must be a place for Insane difficulty because imagine: don't you think that the spread gap between Hard and Extra is really huge? An Insane here would make the spread more better in my opinion.Moreover,no all players are really good at streaming (when it comes about Extra difficulties).The Insane difficulties are for improving your streaming skills I suppose.In my point of view,the spread is not rankable at all.

ReFaller wrote:

Microsoft Vista wrote:

[Hard]
00:33:622 (1,2) - maybe these notes are a bit of a surprise rhythmically for a hard player, remove or make them a slider? and the normal sampleset out of nowhere is a little aggressive so let's keep it aggressive, slider totally doesn't fit when there are two hard kick drums
00:37:391 (1) - maybe replace with a reverse of 00:36:135 (1) ? overlaps are cute i don't know what i should do there
01:51:869 (1,2) - the tail of 2 could be brought a little closer to 1, try x476? okay? no serious reason
02:57:497 (2) - looks better to me as a straight slider for some reason, maybe tilt to the right a little so, only for you

Try find better issues next time...

1. 00:30:002 (2) - why not place it like this, it'll have the same affect but flows better
   
2. 00:44:145 (3) - rotate this one to the left a bit for some better readability, I like the 1 slider thing you're going for but might be too much together with the 1/6s that'll prob throw people off a bit
3. 01:02:365 (4,1) - Space this more, keeping the same ds here with such a dropoff just feels weird
4. 01:33:012 (2) - Wouldn't skip the red tick here, its the only time in this segment that it's skipped so map this aswell
5. 04:02:848 (1,2,3,1,2) - Would switch the ds between the 1's and 2's here, don't see any reason for the background vocals/softer drum to more emphasized then the main ones same for 04:08:238 (2,1) - and the copy pasted parts
6. 04:06:253 (5) - why not flip this so its in the same direction as (6) since this is a paired sound
7. 04:24:413 (5) - ^
8. 07:23:943 (1,3) - Can see what you're following but what about reducing these by 1 kick and place a cirlce instead sounds a bit better with the other instruments
9. 07:30:397 - Why skip this beat? It just sounds off now, just go with what you did with 07:33:710 (1,2,3) - and change the kickslider in circles if you want some buildup
   

ByBy13 wrote:

My apologies about spread.Was concerned on spread gap because I saw hard a little bit easier and the extra harder.I know it's a marathon map but I thought HX is not acceptabile.Sorry again...

Wishkey wrote:

Part 2, no kd

Refallers hard

Really nice diff. Hard to find something that's really worth changing without remapping a lot but here it goes

1. 00:30:002 (2) - why not place it like this, it'll have the same affect but flows better my opinion is it looks another, but flow is the same, i don't feel to change it
   
2. 00:44:145 (3) - rotate this one to the left a bit for some better readability, I like the 1 slider thing you're going for but might be too much together with the 1/6s that'll prob throw people off a bit right, but i apply only change into 1/6 slider,
3. 01:02:365 (4,1) - Space this more, keeping the same ds here with such a dropoff just feels weird i moved it a little just for fix the triangle pattern between 01:02:836 (2,3)
4. 01:33:012 (2) - Wouldn't skip the red tick here, its the only time in this segment that it's skipped so map this aswell it's the same situation like 01:37:583 (2) - but i did it to avoid follow only drums
5. 04:02:848 (1,2,3,1,2) - Would switch the ds between the 1's and 2's here, don't see any reason for the background vocals/softer drum to more emphasized then the main ones same for 04:08:238 (2,1) - and the copy pasted parts how to switch?
6. 04:06:253 (5) - why not flip this so its in the same direction as (6) since this is a paired sound i'm not sure what do you mean, but this is exception when i hear 5th word "usa" in this part
7. 04:24:413 (5) - ^ ^
8. 07:23:943 (1,3) - Can see what you're following but what about reducing these by 1 kick and place a cirlce instead sounds a bit better with the other instruments i think it should be nice for Normal difficulty, but it will not be here
9. 07:30:397 - Why skip this beat? It just sounds off now, just go with what you did with 07:33:710 (1,2,3) - and change the kickslider in circles if you want some buildup the first in preparation for nearing downbeat, the second isn't a kickslider lol
   

ByBy13 wrote:

My apologies about spread.Was concerned on spread gap because I saw hard a little bit easier and the extra harder.I know it's a marathon map but I thought HX is not acceptabile.Sorry again...

Thought the same, can't think of a 2 diff marathon map that didn't follow the spread. But you can always wait 1 week if this becomes a prob so

• [General]

1. why your BG doent include pensamento tipico de esquerda caviar and silent voyage to eternity BG lol?
2. plz dont copy HW's style in Genryuu Kaiko and PLAZMA part, since his map got SB to support his slider at 08:21:455 - but you dont, and i dont really like copy others people style
3. map something more interesting at pensamento part, it seems like you are copying BD's map
4. pensamento and worldwide choppers part is actually 260 bpm, plz change it
5. used AR9 instead of 9.4
6. you map got too many straight jumps, linear flows, and these are really hard to play imo
7. stop mapping random stack jumps like 04:06:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 04:19:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 04:34:893 (2,3) - , i mean 04:33:480 (1,2,3,4) - this is good, since it match the music, but the rest just seems so random, althought doest effect the plays but this just makes the map boring

• [The World]
  test play

1. 00:00:319 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a nicer star shape
2. 00:35:820 (1) - this should be 2 notes or 2 1/4 kicksliders
3. 00:41:789 (1,2,3,4) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general, plz avoid
4. 00:45:873 (1) - this should be 2 notes or 2 1/4 kicksliders
5. 00:52:470 (1,2,3,4,5) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general
6. 00:56:239 (1) - this slider could be map more interesting
7. 01:11:004 (4) - nc
8. 01:39:583 (2,3,4,5) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general
9. 01:42:297 (3) - change place (suggestion, wont effect the plays
10. 02:14:155 (3) - stick with 02:13:012 (3) -
11. 02:15:155 - add a note, is really weird when you play, sound
12. 02:19:869 (1,2,3) - this should be large spacing
13. 02:35:132 (1,2,3) - this is just so random
14. 02:52:939 (6,7,8,9,1) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general
15. 02:55:788 (1,2,3) - ^
16. 02:57:782 (5,6) - should be smaller spacing then 02:57:497 (3,4) - or the same spacing, shouldnt be larger
17. 03:02:056 (3,4,5,6) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general
18. 03:07:754 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - change to notes since slider really doesnt fit the song
19. 03:56:889 (4,5) - shouldnt be stack...
20. 04:04:550 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the stream stop at 04:04:834 - , kinda overmap
21. 04:22:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same 04:04:550 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -, stop at 04:22:994 -
22. 05:42:906 (5,6,7,1) - kinda overmap
23. 05:44:752 (4,5,6,1) - ^
24. 06:24:489 (3,4,5,6,1) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general
25. 06:25:669 (3) - if you arent emphasizing something with this slider then make this more nicer
26. 07:24:641 (1,2,3,4,5) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general
27. 07:41:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - streams and kickslider are defenitlly not fit with the music here

• [overall]

1. weill no mod from 07:58:519 - since it just seems you are copying HW's mapping style so no problem was found
2. there are still lots of place with random stack jumps and straight jumps, linear flows that i didnt mention in my mod so you may have to find yourself
3. still got lots of spacing problem, although i mention some part in my mod but still need to find more mods for it

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue
well i dont usually mod app song tho..
but since i have mapped the same somg with you so i will mod it

• [General]

1. why your BG doent include pensamento tipico de esquerda caviar and silent voyage to eternity BG lol? i can't fit every song background into here.
2. plz dont copy HW's style in Genryuu Kaiko and PLAZMA part, since his map got SB to support his slider at 08:21:455 - but you dont, and i dont really like copy others people style Since when I can't inspire from other mappers? The purpose of this mashup is to recall the most popular maps in the game so players should feel like they're playing the original one. Also these sliders don't need any SB support since they fit to the rhythm very well.
3. map something more interesting at pensamento part, it seems like you are copying BD's map ^
4. pensamento and worldwide choppers part is actually 260 bpm, plz change it Change BPM? BPM is correct here
5. used AR9 instead of 9.4 Higher AR allows you to read alternate tapping parts like Gangsta or read a lot of overlaps. No change
6. you map got too many straight jumps, linear flows, and these are really hard to play imo Straight jumps are very basic. How are they supposed to be hard?
7. stop mapping random stack jumps like 04:06:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 04:19:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 04:34:893 (2,3) - , i mean 04:33:480 (1,2,3,4) - this is good, since it match the music, but the rest just seems so random, althought doest effect the plays but this just makes the map boring These stack jumps represent the quiet tei sounds. I could place normal 1/2 sliders here but that would be even more boring imo

• [The World]
  test play

1. 00:00:319 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a nicer star shape Sure
2. 00:35:820 (1) - this should be 2 notes or 2 1/4 kicksliders There had been 2 notes originally but I changed them and now it plays a lot better for testers.
3. 00:41:789 (1,2,3,4) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general, plz avoid I changed this pattern million times. It would be very hard to read If I place some kind of jumps here.
4. 00:45:873 (1) - this should be 2 notes or 2 1/4 kicksliders Same above
5. 00:52:470 (1,2,3,4,5) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general Whats wrong with them? Everyone prefer his own type of flow.
6. 00:56:239 (1) - this slider could be map more interesting It looks cool, it is a blanket, seems fine to me
7. 01:11:004 (4) - nc Im not sure about this but I will change it since it is improving the readablity
8. 01:39:583 (2,3,4,5) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general This time I agree with you since I dont like the flow here. Changed
9. 01:42:297 (3) - change place (suggestion, wont effect the plays Yeah, this pattern doesn't belong
10. 02:14:155 (3) - stick with 02:13:012 (3) - Oups
11. 02:15:155 - add a note, is really weird when you play, sound Im following the vocal like before so there is no reason to place a note. And since I have done that break before it would be really inconsistent to have only one of them in this part
12. 02:19:869 (1,2,3) - this should be large spacing The music slows down here. From 02:20:155 - there is almost no sound.
13. 02:35:132 (1,2,3) - this is just so random Im just mapping what I hear
14. 02:52:939 (6,7,8,9,1) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general This is a very basic pattern to build an emphasize
15. 02:55:788 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
16. 02:57:782 (5,6) - should be smaller spacing then 02:57:497 (3,4) - or the same spacing, shouldnt be larger Im also constantly increasing the spacing to build up an emphasize for the next note.
17. 03:02:056 (3,4,5,6) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general Same
18. 03:07:754 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - change to notes since slider really doesnt fit the song It would be so slow because they're snapped on 1/3. Im pretty sure most of the players would not be able to read that.
19. 03:56:889 (4,5) - shouldnt be stack... You're right. Changed
20. 04:04:550 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - the stream stop at 04:04:834 - , kinda overmap Are we listening to the same song? The second part of the stream sounds basically the same as the first one!
21. 04:22:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same 04:04:550 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -, stop at 04:22:994 - ^
22. 05:42:906 (5,6,7,1) - kinda overmap I just noticed that these streams are actually triples. Thank you!
23. 05:44:752 (4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
24. 06:24:489 (3,4,5,6,1) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general Whats wrong with them..
25. 06:25:669 (3) - if you arent emphasizing something with this slider then make this more nicer I am emphasizing but changed it a bit anyways
26. 07:24:641 (1,2,3,4,5) - straight jumps, linear flows i had mention in general Ehh...
27. 07:41:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - streams and kickslider are defenitlly not fit with the music here Listen to this carefully (withour hitsounds). There is a very audible drum sound starting from 07:41:734 - .

• [overall]

1. weill no mod from 07:58:519 - since it just seems you are copying HW's mapping style so no problem was found
2. there are still lots of place with random stack jumps and straight jumps, linear flows that i didnt mention in my mod so you may have to find yourself
3. still got lots of spacing problem, although i mention some part in my mod but still need to find more mods for it

well this is my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/402774 I know this map ^_^
you can consult some part of my maps like Genryuu Kaiko and PLAZMA part or pensamento part
anyway GL~

Exile- wrote:

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

• [General]

1. you map got too many straight jumps, linear flows, and these are really hard to play imo Straight jumps are very basic. How are they supposed to be hard?

Shyotamaze wrote:

The World

1. 00:27:000 (1,2,3,4) - Fix blankets I like them the way they are now
2. 00:58:752 (1) - You could make a better shape with less dots if you make the dots symmetrical but maybe it's intended Fixed, at least tried to fix...
3. 01:15:087 (1,1) - Fix blanket It should be okay now

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, M4M from my modding queue

ReFaller's Hard

1. 00:33:622 (1,2) - It's a bit weird, if you're still mapping to the Cres song here you should put a 1/2 slider instead, if you're mapping to Brain Power why would you map 2 beats from it but not the rest here 00:33:936 to 00:34:721 ? If you're mapping to Brain Power then do like you did here 00:34:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - Explain me, what is Brain Power.
2. 03:35:656 (1) - to here 03:52:661 (2) - Reduce the spacing a bit more since it's a really slow part and it's more spaced than the highest diff lol, I know this might be annoying to redo that part but it's important imo Hey, this part should have higher spacing and it's small enough, i can't believe that spacing here is too huge for you, winner of the Oscar Award.

ReFaller wrote:

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, M4M from my modding queue

ReFaller's Hard

1. 00:33:622 (1,2) - It's a bit weird, if you're still mapping to the Cres song here you should put a 1/2 slider instead, if you're mapping to Brain Power why would you map 2 beats from it but not the rest here 00:33:936 to 00:34:721 ? If you're mapping to Brain Power then do like you did here 00:34:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - Explain me, what is Brain Power.
2. 03:35:656 (1) - to here 03:52:661 (2) - Reduce the spacing a bit more since it's a really slow part and it's more spaced than the highest diff lol, I know this might be annoying to redo that part but it's important imo Hey, this part should have higher spacing and it's small enough, i can't believe that spacing here is too huge for you, winner of the Oscar Award.

You made my day happy, you gave me great fun for modding this, thank you very much!! I love you!!!

Chiyuyu wrote:

[The World]

00:00:319 (1) - hmmm.... you need to change this slider. i suggest it http://puu.sh/nOK1Z/9973eb1d22.jpg (the first node - x64 y288 , lower node x204 y325, upper x160 y232 , the last node x300 y264 ) Nah, I dont want this slider to flow like that but fixed his appearance anyways
00:58:752 (1) - http://puu.sh/nOKBG/04c49f0f55.jpg x304 y168 I changed this a bit from the previous mod
01:14:459 (1) - http://puu.sh/nOKOh/00715e074c.jpg left arrow x208 y104, right arrow x320 y84 Sure
01:48:726 (3,4) - why not symmetrically with 01:48:440 (1,2) - ? if so intended, then no complaints If you want me to flip it horizontally then no because I don't like the jump on linear flow but changed it a bit so it looks a bit better
01:54:583 (4) - x136 y376 Looks good
tut-tutuuu! Mayushi-desu
02:05:155 (4) - no, it just will not do! please change it :< Why not? Looks cool with the previous sliders
02:20:155 (3) - http://puu.sh/nOLmU/00b32fc07b.jpg Sure!
02:49:520 (3,4) - it should not be symmetrically 02:48:950 (1,2) - this? if so, there is np Doesn't need to be
03:10:317 (5) - nnonononononono! change please Fine xD. Should be better now
03:19:754 - FROM THAT MOMENT COMES THE MASTHEAD SONG FOR ALL MARATHON <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
06:00:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make of this six-pointed star Remapped this part because I forgot to emphasize one note
06:29:545 (2) - x232 y224, because I do not like the way they stand back to back Looks good!
07:53:245 (1) - you really like it? Do you have any other ideas?

I'm sorry to have written so little. In my opinion, she was well enough to do to be ranked.

Good luck !