kind of forgot about this, but i am here now!IamKwaN wrote:
Want to push this forward, can you apply Lanturn's mod first?
thank you for the mod, it helped plentyLanturn wrote:
random mod. I like this song and actually have had your map for awhile so I wanted to drop some things on it.
Your uninherited timing should start at 00:01:295 - to be on the correct starting measure. is this necessary? tho I did it anyways
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:04:605 (1,2) - I really think some symmetry could do wonders for this. Please consider it! ok owo
- 00:33:984 (4) - I would personally delete this. There isn't really much in the song to support this note anyways. it sounds significant enough to me imo
- 01:09:571 (4,5) - Try swapping these so it goes circle slider and then I also suggest adding a whistle to 01:09:984 - cool, did this
[Advanced]
- 00:09:571 (3,4) - Rhythm you can try to make it a bit different from easy. This works with almost all the other similar places as well, maybe half and half or something could work:ok
- 00:36:881 (6) - Try a horizontal flip so it flows nicely into the upcoming slider! ok
- 00:40:191 (5,6,1,2) - like your previous pattern similar to this? huh?
- 01:00:467 (4) - Tail isn't really necessary imo as the only thing it hits is some very minor and forgettable vocals. Try using a reverse on the (3) instead. wanted 4 to be clickable so just made it a circle instead
[Hard]
- 00:14:329 (8) - I suggest removing this as it doesn't hit anything powerful, much like 00:11:019 - ok
- 00:19:915 (1) - remove NC yes
- 00:21:364 (2) - slider instead? doesn't feel like a clickable note it's a slider already? lol
- 00:50:950 (1,2) - 1/1 slider instead of two 1/2s feels better with two 1/2 imo
- 01:00:467 (9) - Change to a single circle for more air. keep for vocals
- 01:06:674 (7,8,9) - 01:06:674 (7,8,9) - I would personally remove the triangle and send them down more so it doesn't feel so cluttered: ok
- 01:20:536 (8) - same as 14 seconds. Leaves much desired 1/1 anyways. vocals kick in there i think it is fine here
[Insane]
- 00:21:364 (2) - same as advanced ok
- 00:32:329 (3,4) - 1/2 slider personally, since it's the same as 00:31:915 (2) - okay
- 00:29:433 (1,2,3,4,1) - Ideas. The main thing here is that (4,1) feels a bit too big. otherwise I love what you did here. Might need to adjust 00:31:915 (2) - a little afterwards lowered spacing
- 00:36:881 (4,5,6) - would have made more sense as a continued copy of the 00:36:053 (1,2,3) - pattern you were doing. yes
- 00:40:812 (5,1) - a bit forced and big for this diff imo. Something like this maybe? changed, its very similar
- 00:45:984 (1,2) - Try either two 1/2s or two circles since they sound the same. 00:46:398 (2) is a circle cause i wanted a little pause there before the stream thingy idk i mainly wanted it to be different from advanced, i think it is fine
- 01:06:260 (2,3,4,5) - Jump would make more sense off (3,4,5) instead of (2,3) much like you did it for 01:00:053 (4,5,6) - yess
- 01:17:226 (4) - and 01:23:846 (5) - remove? mm, keep
Good luck o/ Hope to see this ranked soon.
- 00:11:019 (6) - forced, not a good note to jump on. No sound to back it up.
- The main issue here is that you chose to emphasize on the above instead of where I believe 00:09:571 (1,2,3) - should have been emphasized on more, and continue it for this whole section. So you basically, in my opinion, did it backwards and emphasized jumps on the wrong notes. Just wanted to mention this.
after reading this, i fully agree here, i changed it up, including the end of the map as well Also 00:07:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - has low spacing cause i want the player to get familiar with the rhythm before the jumps, which feels fine to me- 00:17:846 (1,2,3) - as such to the above, this stopping on these notes makes it awkard as well since it pretty much kills the momentum when I feel it should be going at full force. same
- 00:53:019 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - example of what I mean actually. you did this one right
- 01:02:743 (2) - stack on 4? i feel the spacing would be too low from 1 to 2 so i'll keep
- 01:08:122 (4) - jump felt a bit forced here. Try reducing it some re-arranged
I also fixed some stuff myself that I saw necessary.