m4m reply
good luck with this, nice relaxing song
General
- your soft hitfinish is really weird, as it is delayed by a few ms, but only on the left channel, making it feel a bit strange (at least for me).
I edited it for you and also cut off some wasted silence from the ending of it, making it smaller and removed a slight delay from soft-hitwhistle - also your silended sliderslides are actually "soft-sliderslider" which makes the game ignore them, they have to be named "sliderslide" (wirthout the r at the end) => unused and thus unrankable. and you should use the "official" blank file provided in the ranking criteria, since yours are not even close to 100ms long => also unrankable.
=> here are all four fixed files, just replace them and delete "soft-sliderslider" and "soft-sliderslider3":
http://puu.sh/mkRnF/f21d95ef54.zip - please add the source of the background http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php? ... d=53304441 to your description to give credits to the artist, thanks
Lunatic
- 00:08:244 (1) - it's your choice how you draw sliders, but you can do the same thing cleaner/simpler with only two or three nodes, making it way easier to be perfectly symmetrical and look nicer: http://i.imgur.com/lNV1Agd.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/tJhPsxt.jpg
- 00:14:862 (7) - is there any reason to suddenly double the spacing? Don't think the music supports such a huge increase
- 00:17:068 (1,2) - why is the" 1/4 - after slider 3/4" pattern suddenly stacked? you never did it before and after
- 01:13:539 (1,2) - ^here you actually do it again, only having it twice and on not remarkably differen sounds feels so random. just space them like all others (or maybe stack more of the, lol)
- 00:19:936 (2) - could be stacked with 00:19:936 (2) - , not noticeable during gameplay, but why not?
- 00:18:392 (6) - I know it belongs to the pattern, but having the spacing on this that low, when it's actually emphasized in the music seems wrong, you could try ~90% overlapping 00:19:053 (2) - like this http://i.imgur.com/gCzrvQZ.jpg would play really nice imo and fit with the music
- 00:25:892 (1,5) - 00:26:333 (2,4) - perfectly stack?
- 00:36:369 - why ignore 1/4 after mapping them just before? maybe make 00:36:259 (7) - a kickslider?
- 00:49:494 (3,4) - stack leniency 5 might be much nicer for stuff like this
- 01:02:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - - http://i.imgur.com/9XiEDCz.png this movement doesn't feel very intuitive to me, with how you transition the sldier into those wide angles. you could for example move 01:03:392 (2,3,4) - more right or do sth with the slider
- 01:04:274 (9) - maybe nc to go well with addition of strong piano?
117
- 00:28:539 (2,3,4) - patterns like this are abit stupid to read for hard imo and having stacked 1/4 right after this at 00:30:303 (3,4,5) - makes it even worse ./
- 00:49:936 (2,3,1) - yeah, so pattern with way different rhythm but all stacked the same, seems not that great for a hard
- 00:51:480 (3,4,1) -
- the rhythms and most patterns seem nice, but those weird stacks that I can't grasp the logic behind are not
kwan
- 00:32:509 (4) - those would be nicer without curving I think, they are so minimally curved that it just feels weird
- 00:49:274 (4) - only having a click here would be better fitting, like this http://i.imgur.com/0VnzWLJ.jpg
- 01:31:186 (3) - feels strange as 01:31:847 - is much stronger than the sliderend. maybe try http://i.imgur.com/8uzrRMB.jpg