Hey~ Hollow Wings and I did M4M so here I am.
Remember that some of the stuff that I mentioned here applies to other similar cases as well.
Overall, I think that the map can still be polished.
Good Luck~!
Drawing Ag:
- Your BG is not the correct resolution. The best resolutions are 1366X768 or 1024X768.
- Check this:
You will have to fix those. - Your normal-hitclap has a delay which is unrankable.
This one is fine: http://puu.sh/mwz6I/e77baf8979.wav - Why not add kiai times at the choruses: 01:14:391 - 02:58:391 - 04:06:390 -
- 00:07:391 (5,1) –I’m not sure if it’s a good idea to overlap like this since a part of the slider gets hidden behind the circle so it may cause confusion during game-play.
- 00:31:058 (5,6,7,8,1) –This flow is a bit weird since everything is in a straight line. Perhaps try something like this instead:
- 00:31:391 (1) –Remove new combo here and add new combo here: 00:31:724 (2) – since the strong finish sound is on (2).
- 00:31:724 (2,5) –It plays a bit weird if both these sliders go in the same direction. I suggest Ctrl+G’ing (5).
- 00:39:058 (6,7,8) –Rather stack these for better flow from 00:38:891 (5) –
- 00:41:391 (7) –Try not to place a circle right behind the previous slider since it’s not the best flow. Move (7) upwards a bit.
- 00:42:224 –This feels empty. Place a circle there.
- 00:42:391 (1,2,3,4) –These jumps look too big for a part in the song that’s not so intense. I highly suggest you make the spacing between them less.
- 00:43:724 (5) –Same as 00:41:391 (7) – There may be similar cases but I’m not gonna point out all of them.
- 00:45:058 (1,2,3) –Not the best flow since the triple is going straight up. I suggest either stacking or placing them like this:
- 00:45:557 (5,7,8) –Same thing here. Try to place them in a curve or something for better flow.
- 00:46:558 (2,3) –This jump looks pretty big and since the rhythm is so fast it makes it even more difficult, so I highly suggest you try to make these spacings: 00:46:391 (1,2,3,4) – similar and smaller.
- 00:53:724 (3) –Try not to stack like this since it prevents smooth flow.
- 00:55:224 (7,8) –Rather place this triple here: 00:55:141 – and 00:55:224 – Like this:
The reason for this is because I can hear drums there in the background. - 00:57:724 –Rather not leave this empty. Place a note there.
- 01:04:558 (5,6) –I don’t understand these SV changes at all. Imo the only time when there should be SV changes in the middle of a pattern is when there’s a big change/difference in the vocals or music to support a SV change. In this case it doesn’t fit and will just cause confusion during game-play.
- 01:13:724 (1,2,3,4) –Rather not make a stack here and then unstack the rest of the stream since it’s very confusing to know when the stream actually starts and it looks a bit ugly. Just unstack the entire stream.
- 01:35:224 (4) –This stream looks weird since (4) is sticking out like a sore thumb.
- 01:45:558 (4,1) –There’s a long pause between these two objects so either stack them or make the spacing bigger to prevent confusion.
Remember that some of the stuff that I mentioned here applies to other similar cases as well.
Overall, I think that the map can still be polished.
Good Luck~!