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KEDAMA - Hajimari no Sakamichi

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Zekira
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Zekira
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010-01-30 at 17:14

Artist: KEDAMA
Title: Hajimari no Sakamichi
Source: OHK
Tags: Touhou Chen MAD Oh!kun OH!K Epic Storyboard :D
BPM: 110.05
Filesize: 16534kb
Play Time: 03:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Gekiretsu ni CHEEEN (4.49 stars, 277 notes)
  2. Kakan ni CHEEN (2.88 stars, 188 notes)
  3. Karei ni CHEEEEN (4.84 stars, 315 notes)
Download: KEDAMA - Hajimari no Sakamichi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2010-01-27 20:35: Redownload if you downloaded before this date. Fixed the SB.

Chen Takes on the Largest Hill! CHEEEEEEEEN

IT'S DONE YEEEEEEAH

This is the first ever time I took SBing to a higher level. And I must say this is some hard work I've done here~

The concept of this storyboard was taken from this video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BpmhJ_Y82lA . As you may see I actually got the screenshots from said vid too.

This song isn't Touhou related in much anyway; the video I posted above is actually a MAD one. The original music video can be found here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oTghEeS46uY. This is a music video for one of the mascots of the OHK TV Network in Japan, OH!?? (Oh!Kun).

Yes I may have left some hard-to-fix flaws here on the SB, but hey, this is a good start of taking SB to a higher level.

2010-01-26 08:27: Gekiretsu ni CHEEEN done. Just need Kakan ni CHEEN before it's good to go~
2010-01-26 22:13: Kakan ni CHEEN done. Moving to Pending.
2010-01-26 23:06: Deleted the extra .osb. Added Kiai time (hopefully it fits the mood...)
2010-01-27 20:35: Fixed up .osb stuffs as Breeze pointed out. Also some minor adjustments to the notes.
2010-01-27 20:54: Minor stuff
2010-01-29 09:52: Hitsound set change.
2010-01-30 17:14: Fixes again
Last edited by Zekira , edited 9 times in total.
heintsi
1,126 posts
Joined January 2009
heintsi
And proud you should be :) really cute SB, song and good map :)

Starring this ~
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
Cheeeeeeeenn
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Zekira
Oops, I accidentally pressed the Give Kudosu button on Nacho's lol... can someone deny that for me

EDIT: yey thanks
Last edited by Zekira , edited 2 times in total.
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by NoHitter , edited 1 time in total.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Heya Zekira! Nice SB <3
I love nicely done SB map~
Different SB reslut of different playing result, really great "story"board!

[SB]
  1. 00:06:612 - 00:08:793 Captured\video.mp4_000010266.jpg - I can see rough edge in this image, I think you shoud fix that
  2. 00:24:740 Captured\YEEEEEEEEEEEAH.png - I prefer to make a fade lead-in and lead-out about to it <3, it looked better
    code like this
    M,0,24740,,322,262
    F,0,24740,25285,0,1
    F,0,25285,28556,1
    F,0,28556,29102,1
  3. 01:01:405 - 01:02:223 Captured\ChenDiagonal.png - it's in the front of background character, maybe you should use individual sprite of front charcter, and put it upper layer of Captured\ChenDiagonal.png
  4. 03:29:020 Captured\video.mp4_000209933.jpg - it get bigger suddenly o.o you make it on purpose? and I alos suggest a fade lead-in
  5. 03:30:110 Captured\video.mp4_000210233.jpg - fade lead-in? XD
[General]
  1. Mabe you set whistle for taiko mode, but it's really sounds bad to me, maybe you should reduce hitsound, or just use soft hitsound
others looked fine to me

I love this map!
have my blue and purple star!
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
MoonFragrance
[Kakan ni CHEEN]
00:37:689 (3) - spacing

[Gekiretsu ni CHEEEN]
Good :3

[Karei ni CHEEEEN]
00:42:732 (3) - one grid up on grid lv3

Nice map, and nice SB.
Star >w<~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Ah..... Kumusta Dr. Zekira! Gratitude in unadvanced, lol

[Kakan ni CHEEN]
00:35:508 (3) - It's looks not symetric, make this slider symetric
03:58:188 (4) - ^

[Gekiretsu ni CHEEEN]
01:32:891 (5) - Move 1 grid down?
02:10:510 (1) - It's looks not symetric, make this slider symetric
02:29:592 (5) - ^
03:41:015 (5) - ^
03:43:741 (5) - Move 1 grid down?

[Karei ni CHEEEEN]
02:51:401 (6) - Move 1 grid down?

[Overall]
I think this a authentic map?

GREAT MAP!
STAR
-SiN-
osu! Alumni
1,722 posts
Joined May 2008
-SiN-
no offense but for me, its like a video..

its good.. but i think you can do better by re-trace the video instead capturing

Q: its hard
A: YES! that's the way for those who playing around with graphic..

EDIT: lag on Ge Force 5200FX PC
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
I think that the Soft sample set would fit to this song more but thats maybe just me.


[Kakan ni CHEEN]

These are just suggestions that would make the map easier to read for a newcomer
00:39:869 (4) - I would prefer this 1/4 later and 1/4 shorter becuse it's a bit tricky for an Easy/Normal
00:48:593 (5) - ^
01:36:571 (2,3) - Remove (3) and move (2) 1/4 foward on the timelind and make it 1/4 longer
02:15:826 (3) - Move this 1/4 backwards on the timeline and make it 1/4 longer
02:55:081 (2,3) - The same as 01:36:571 (2,3) "Remove (3) and move (2) 1/4 foward on the timelind and make it 1/4 longer"
03:47:421 (2,3) - ^

[Gekiretsu ni CHEEEN]
:)

[Karei ni CHEEEEN]
Was somewhat similar in difficulty as Gekiretsu ni CHEEEN but with harder difficulty settings and some short 1/4 stacks.

I kinda wish that it was a Easy/Beginner to this but thats maybe just me :P

It always great to see EBA/Ouendan like storyboards so a star with no doubt
*star*
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
[Gekiretsu ni CHEEEN]
02:35:590 (5) - repeating the patterns are not so bad but you could give some change like adding a whistle at the end of the this slider.
Actually it is not that repeatitive.

Don't give me kudos for this post plz (well you wouldn't anyway :D since I wrote nothing down)

YES! EBA style SBing. It is so much better to watch the SB during the break rather then missing all the work during the game :)
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
Really nice map.
Good work with the SB.

I don't find any problems so even though I dont know too much of StoryBoard im going ahead and P-Bubble this, nice done!
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze

Xgor wrote:

I think that the Soft sample set would fit to this song more but thats maybe just me.
Zekira, I do thinks soft sound and soft whistle fit
Thinks about that :roll:
Randy96
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Joined August 2009
Randy96
You get my star.
I kind of agree with -SiN- that it still looks like a video.
Zekira
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Zekira
The insane lack of text and the way the images used are making it seem like it. I understand where you're coming from, but as of now the resources I have with this thing is limited. I promise the next time I'll do something like this, I'll do it less like a vid. Another plausible reason why it does seem like it is because I did just follow the vid almost exactly how it looked like :P Not a creative move, I know, but still. :\
-SiN-
osu! Alumni
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Joined May 2008
-SiN-

Zekira wrote:

The insane lack of text and the way the images used are making it seem like it. I understand where you're coming from, but as of now the resources I have with this thing is limited. I promise the next time I'll do something like this, I'll do it less like a vid. Another plausible reason why it does seem like it is because I did just follow the vid almost exactly how it looked like :P Not a creative move, I know, but still. :\
don't worry about that. my Neko Miko Reimu was retraced from youtube video 8-)

/me doing my hand drawing SB now ;)
Sushi
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Sushi
[Kakan]
01:22:532 (1,3) - symetry
02:41:042 (1,3) - ^

[Gekiretsu]
00:32:373 (1,2,3,4) - center 2 and 4 better?
00:42:050 (2,3) - curve (2) a little more to align ?
01:16:807 (4,6) - align?
02:35:317 (6,8) - ^

[Karei]
00:32:373 (1,2,3,4) - center 2 and 4 better?
01:16:807 (6,8) - align?
02:35:317 (6,8) - ^

imo, karei and gekiretsu look Very similar.

<3
DJPop
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DJPop
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Zekira
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Zekira
FrionelPOST: You just had to put Mystia and Alice together didn't you, Zekira?
Randy96
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Joined August 2009
Randy96

Zekira wrote:

FrionelPOST: You just had to put Mystia and Alice together didn't you, Zekira?
I don't get it.. :?
Zekira
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Zekira
...the freaking hell Frionel, get out of my beatmap thr~ hey what is that? Gimmegimme
James
osu! Hall of Famer
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James
30 second break?

thats my only complain...
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
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Zekira
...but it's SB'd :( Ah w/e, your choice. I'll patiently wait then.
Jinxy
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Jinxy
Nothing finds.
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Kakan]
looks good

[Gekiretsu]
looks great

[Karei]
well done

bubbled <3
yaya
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yaya
good
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Breeze
osu! Alumni
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Breeze
Congratulations~
Nicely done SB and pure map, NEAT! :3
Zekira
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Zekira
Pffft I just realized that second youtube link in description has a better quality audio file hahahaha. Guess it doesn't matter now/too late.

Also feel like making a harder difficulty for this. promise it won't be WTFINSANE
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