19:24 grumd: http://i.imgur.com/d7LHsCa.png
19:24 grumd: 00:06:073 (2) -
19:24 grumd: make it like that
19:24 Secretpipe: sure
19:25 Secretpipe: im not good with sliderz orz
19:25 Secretpipe: done
19:25 grumd: 00:28:016 (1,2) - i don't approve this, better to have only 1/1 and 1/2 sliders, 3/4 for some reason feel bad for me here
19:25 Secretpipe: yeah me too
19:25 grumd: 00:37:616 (5) - this SV change is stupid, music didn't change
19:26 Secretpipe: There's some mistakes in the map atm tho
19:26 Secretpipe: i know them
19:26 grumd: 00:50:645 (3,4) - here you have from left to right 1/1 move
19:26 Secretpipe: 00:37:616 (5) - Well I wanted to emphasize the violin smh
19:26 Secretpipe: let's remove it
19:26 grumd: 00:52:702 (5,6) - but here it's again from left to right
19:26 grumd: i would want 00:52:702 (5,6) - to be from right to left
19:27 grumd: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4605084
19:27 grumd: or something like that
19:27 grumd: maybe stack (6) on the next slider
19:28 grumd: 01:06:416 (1) - because of the previous slider shape it feels like this circle fits better in the top of the screen, maybe like that http://i.imgur.com/W9bgSgK.png
19:28 Secretpipe: It'll get a better flow right?
19:28 grumd: maybe
19:28 grumd: 01:20:623 (3) - i hate it when small 1/4 sliders are curved, i always make them straight because they are too small for pretty curves
19:29 grumd: just my style tho
19:29 grumd: 01:22:080 (3,4) - just badly placed
19:29 grumd: 01:23:451 (3,4) - same
19:30 Secretpipe: 01:20:623 (3) - ahah i remember that you don't like smalll curved sliders
19:30 grumd: 01:28:166 (1,1) - these are awesome
19:30 Secretpipe: Like Aka
19:30 Secretpipe: xD
19:30 grumd: 01:42:737 (3,5) - these two are too close to each other
19:30 Secretpipe: badly placed ? you mean , spacin or rhythm?
19:30 grumd: 01:49:080 (4,2,3) - you can blanked better
19:31 grumd: badly placed in terms of... they need to be parallel to the slider
19:31 grumd: they aren't
19:31 Secretpipe: 01:42:737 (3,5) - nice catch!
19:31 grumd: this is better http://i.imgur.com/ksF5x7U.png
19:31 Secretpipe: oh okay , I thought the rhythm was shit xD
19:31 Secretpipe: let's fix !
19:32 grumd: 01:59:108 - i would love to see a cricle here
19:32 Secretpipe: yeah
19:32 Secretpipe: oh yeah about the circle here
19:32 grumd: 02:17:022 - and here, but maybe something more interesting than just a circle
19:33 Secretpipe: I was about to add a 5x stream
19:33 Secretpipe: but you know
19:33 Secretpipe: it would be repetitive
19:33 grumd: you can emphasize the music change with some patters
19:33 Secretpipe: so i just added jumps
19:33 Secretpipe: since there's a lot of streams in that part
19:33 Secretpipe: fixed!
19:33 grumd: right now the lack of note there is just uncomfortable
19:34 grumd: 02:39:651 (1,2,3,4) - very slow 1/2 spacing, but very fast SV
19:34 grumd: it doesn't fit
19:34 grumd: i would not increase SV that much
19:34 grumd: and would add more jumps
19:34 Secretpipe: 02:17:022 - well , the rhythm is stoppin' here
19:34 grumd: 02:51:308 (4,5) - this for example is even smaller than 1.0x
19:35 grumd: as i told you, you can emphasize the rhythm stop with some interesting pattern choice, not with a lack of notes
19:35 Secretpipe: Alright
19:35 Secretpipe: About the SV you're right
19:36 grumd: 03:00:051 - i would still add the drum notes in the beginning of this spinner
19:36 Secretpipe: I should reduce it then ?
19:36 grumd: okay that's all
19:36 grumd: yeah reduce the sv and add some jumps
19:36 grumd: since the section is indeed kinda faster than the rest
19:36 Secretpipe: it's 1.5 atm