thx for modding~!Yohanes wrote:
Hi, m4m
General
Honestly, imo your BG is quite NSFW lol oh pls, it is nothing NSFW lol
La La La
- Why CS 3.5? Makes it CS 4 to differ this diff with Hard, and try AR 8.5 AR 8 is ok for me, CS change to 3.7 to make a difference
- 00:02:239 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - this doesn't flow very well. notice how (2) and (3) has 0,88x ds and (3) to (4) has 1,66x even though they both has equally strong music. Try http://puu.sh/mfuOp/d7b540a51b.jpg this way, every notes are properly emphasized and have better flow. Anyway, that's just an example, try to make even better pattern yourself fixed
- 00:18:008 - For me, this slowdown doesn't fit too well with the map, which makes it quite awkward when playing, better remove it well, I like that
- 00:19:546 (4) - NC fixed
- 00:32:238 (3,4,5) - tons better if you make it like this http://puu.sh/mftJV/1a8ca4a8a0.jpg ok take a try
Hard
- AR 7 for better spread, I think doesn't make much difference so no change
- 00:15:123 (4) - rhythm like this fits better http://puu.sh/mftUv/2f232717f2.jpg I think it's ok
- 00:18:008 - same as Insane same?
- 00:22:623 (3,4) - swap rhythm http://puu.sh/mftXF/0110013afb.jpg same rhythm with the part before so I prefer current one
For me, this set need more improvement to take it into rankable state. Mostly because of odd patterns and overall cleanliness of two higher diff.
Well, good luck and Happy New Year
cant believe I forgot that, fixed ofc~Underforest wrote:
@cHelli
Title should be 颯爽登場!寧子さん
Romanised Title should be Sassou Toujou!Neko-san
Artist should be 黒羽寧子(CV 種田梨沙)
Romanised Artist should be Kuroha Neko (CV Taneda Risa)
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