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EBICO - Persephone [OsuMania]

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Frim4503
2,067 posts
Joined July 2013
Frim4503

Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7
M4M from your queue

General

  1. BG : ok
  2. Mp3 : ok
  3. Hitsound : ok
  4. Difficulty : ok
  5. AI Mod : ok
Standard
  1. 00:43:957 (43957|1) - i guess this must use double too since this 00:43:633 (43633|2,43633|4) - have double. also this 00:44:119 (44119|6,44119|4,44362|5,44362|1,44605|6,44605|2) -
  2. 00:48:660 (48660|3) - move to 6, then 00:48:822 (48822|2) - move to 2. cuz it's a difference sound and not like 00:49:146 (49146|3,49308|2) - also move this 00:49:308 (49308|2) - to 7 for better pattern and pitch.
  3. 00:51:092 (51092|4,51254|0) - better to move this to 2 for better pattern and have same sound.
  4. 00:52:389 (52389|3,52551|5) - ^move to 7 same reason
  5. 01:07:308 (67308|4,67389|2,67470|0) - I recommend to make this simple stari like putting it in 1,2,3 or 2,3,4

Hyper
  1. 01:37:146 (97146|3,97470|4) - swap col. cuz is easy to press this way :)
  2. 01:46:876 (106876|1) - i think this should end at 01:47:038 - cuz the sound is end here.

sorry for short mod due for my incapacity in modding 7k map.
Mod Done.
Ciel
170 posts
Joined March 2012
Ciel
Hi Takane! Unfortunately, the MMT has rejected your map for the following reason:
Patterning
Enecstacy
01:28:227 - and 01:48:984 - appear to be a blatant abuse of star rating. Maybe you can change this pattern into something more interesting, following the layering scheme of what is immediately before this?
Additional Notes:
Enecstacy
There are some minor consistency errors in layering, Ex. 01:32:119 - and 01:31:146 - have the same notes being played, but the first timestamp also has a crash associated with it.
The jacks located at 02:00:660 - are somewhat questionable, and are a significant difficulty spike compared to the remainder of the map.
Given the current star rating of this map, and the fact that it is easier than both Crackher and Pyanother (in my playtests), consider bumping up the HP on this diff (to something like 9).

Crackher
There are also some minor consistency errors here as well. Ex. 01:41:687 - vs.01:42:011 - should have the same sound/layering.

Pyanother
The LNs in the slow section starting from 00:48:011 - are of different lengths, even though the sounds are the same. They are also inconsistent within itself, with the LN at 01:08:119 - being shorter than the others.
Once you improve your map, you can always requeue again. Good luck!
PyaKura
2,084 posts
Joined January 2013
PyaKura
Pyanother : intended, the sounds are not exactly of the same length. Last "inconsistency" is just as intended, marking the end of this break part.
MEGAtive
1,656 posts
Joined August 2013
MEGAtive

FreeezeForward wrote:

F4W's Modding Notice

*From F4W's Mania Modding Queue


These following mods are just suggestions but mostly are recommended. If you reject some (all) of my mods, kindly explain it so I can understand.

1|2|3|4|5|6|7


Metadata
  1. HP Drain (HP): Maki'nother, and Pyanother must be 8; Enecstacy must be 8.2 (Too harsh to player if it exceeds from that). Maniera masterpiece has only and HP of 8.2
  2. Overall Difficulty (OD): Pyanother is more difficult than Maki'nother, but Maki'nother has an OD of 9.5 while Pyanother has only 8.5 Better adjust this. I would suggest to lower them both to 8 or 8.2
  3. Timing: Maki'nother had an extra kiai length/time which is not having in other difficulties. Probably unrankable.

MEGA's Insane
  1. 00:54:497 (54497|5) - Move to 5, so the pattern will be symmetrical to the first 2 chords. TBH symmetricity aren't that important. Anyway, not applied since this way the pattern are much comfortable to play.
Same as Hyper, not so much problems here, good map.

Kindly reply as soon as possible prior to my mod post above. If there are any questions related to this post, just ask. Happy Modding =w=)b
SpectorDG
1,167 posts
Joined June 2014
SpectorDG
Cute Rule.
Davin Fortune
584 posts
Joined June 2014
Davin Fortune
This song is fast modded >.>

WELL PLAY
PyaKura
2,084 posts
Joined January 2013
PyaKura
Going to wait for the MMT's rejection post before modding Persephone myself as well
Kamikaze
2,898 posts
Joined November 2012
Kamikaze
Ciel posted on behalf of MMT, so the post is done lol
Takane6
978 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Takane6
well i did do irc with ciel
and everything is fixed and i hope its better now @,@
UPDATED :D


btw crackher is not for ranked :V
its my fault to accidentally updated it :V
its should be in the creator word
ExPew
Elite Mapper
1,220 posts
Joined January 2011
ExPew
some Pya's pattern has similar problem with Takane's pattern too

01:28:876 - you need to fix following Takane's latest fixed on Ciel's point https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4293339 / or you can make another own pattern something you did like at 01:48:984 -

02:00:660 - this really too overnote comparing with higher diffs? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4293421
PyaKura
2,084 posts
Joined January 2013
PyaKura

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Ciel posted on behalf of MMT, so the post is done lol
Oh is Ciel part of the MMT? Didn't even notice. Well whatevs. The name didn't really ring a bell.

Edit : Pyanother updated

Edit 2 : Okay so it's Yoshiap, nevermind.
Takane6
978 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Takane6

PyaKura wrote:

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Ciel posted on behalf of MMT, so the post is done lol
Oh is Ciel part of the MMT? Didn't even notice. Well whatevs. The name didn't really ring a bell.

Edit : Pyanother updated

Edit 2 : Okay so it's Yoshiap, nevermind.
Pya lol :v
Btw im gonna update this after school @_@

UPDATED :D
Kamikaze
2,898 posts
Joined November 2012
Kamikaze
Did a self-mod, changed SV a bit and fixed few inconsistencies
Update
Takane6
978 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Takane6

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Did a self-mod, changed SV a bit and fixed few inconsistencies
Update
!! :idea: :idea: :idea: !!
just noticed this :o

UPDATED :'D
ArcherLove
1,434 posts
Joined March 2013
ArcherLove
I don't think there is some rules that prevent someone gives kudosu to the same person 2x if the mod were useful though (?)
Niks
Beatmap Nominator
723 posts
Joined July 2013
Niks
Pyanother
01:18:822 - i think add 1 note (more sound)
but affect the pattern?
01:29:849 - add 1 note
01:30:822 - remove 1 note
01:31:795 - add 1 note
01:32:443 - add 1 note (but not good postion...)
01:33:741 - add 1 note
01:37:633 - add 1 note
01:44:524 - remove 1 note
01:43:470 - add 1 note
01:43:795 - remove 1 note
01:44:443 - remove 1 note
01:47:687 - add 1 note

MEGA's
00:51:254 (51254|0) - / 01:01:876 (61876|3) - / 01:04:308 (64308|3) - / 01:05:524 (65524|3) - not ghost note... but not good postion
so 00:53:119 - how about here 1 note?
01:54:822 - remove 1 note

nice nice ><
Takane6
978 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Takane6
fixed some pattern stuff
waiting for pya and mega :)
MEGAtive
1,656 posts
Joined August 2013
MEGAtive

Niks wrote:

MEGA's
00:51:254 (51254|0) - / 01:01:876 (61876|3) - / 01:04:308 (64308|3) - / 01:05:524 (65524|3) - not ghost note... but not good postion IDK, for me it's not a problem. Rearranged anyway.
so 00:53:119 - how about here 1 note? None is mapping these. And I don't really want to add note here since it's pretty awkward to play.
01:54:822 - remove 1 note Note that 01:52:227 - 01:57:416 - 02:00:011 - are having double. It should be consistent since they're playing same instruments here.
MEGA's Insane
PyaKura
2,084 posts
Joined January 2013
PyaKura

Takane6 wrote:

fixed some pattern stuff
waiting for pya and mega :)
woops

ok I'll take a look at it when possible

hate those kind of mods, probably why I forgot in the first place
Takane6
978 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Takane6
wew dat new ranking criteria :\

edit : o nevermind dat xD
Last edited by Takane6 , edited 1 time in total.
Kamikaze
2,898 posts
Joined November 2012
Kamikaze
and what did I tell you before?
genkicho
449 posts
Joined May 2013
genkicho
:) rlly good 7k map
Love the music
PyaKura
2,084 posts
Joined January 2013
PyaKura
Late as hell, but updated.
Takane6
978 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Takane6

PyaKura wrote:

Late as hell, but updated.
waw i almost dig a hole for bury this one :'v

UPDATED :>

im really busy irl right now because of exam... i may back a march around 8-12 march :>
Kuroshiki-
Kuroshiki-
Hello

Poor mod here

7K = 1~7
[Enecstacy]00:04:551 (4551|5) - should be end at 00:04:876 - then this LN 00:04:795 (4795|4) - should be start at 00:04:876 - like as this 00:07:146 (7146|4,7470|3) -
00:56:119 (56119|1,56281|3,56443|6,56605|4,56768|3,56930|1) - yang ginian ikut apaan si? ._.

[MRGA's Insane]00:34:714 - add buat clap?
01:39:173 - add. orang ini 01:39:660 (99660|2,99660|1,99822|1,99822|2) - aja double masa itu ngga?

[Hyper]00:29:362 - 00:29:687 - add note? 00:30:335 (30335|1,30335|5,30984|5,30984|1) - ini aja yg impactnya kurang ididouble masa yg tadi ngga?

Goodluck :D
Takane6
978 posts
Joined June 2014
Topic Starter
Takane6

Kuroshiki- wrote:

Hello

Poor mod here

7K = 1~7
[Enecstacy]00:04:551 (4551|5) - should be end at 00:04:876 - then this LN 00:04:795 (4795|4) - should be start at 00:04:876 - like as this 00:07:146 (7146|4,7470|3) - alrite
00:56:119 (56119|1,56281|3,56443|6,56605|4,56768|3,56930|1) - yang ginian ikut apaan si? ._. //ikut piano om

[MRGA's Insane]00:34:714 - add buat clap?
01:39:173 - add. orang ini 01:39:660 (99660|2,99660|1,99822|1,99822|2) - aja double masa itu ngga?

[Hyper]00:29:362 - 00:29:687 - add note? 00:30:335 (30335|1,30335|5,30984|5,30984|1) - ini aja yg impactnya kurang ididouble masa yg tadi ngga?yang (30335|1,30335|5,30984|5,30984|1) - karena harusnya jadi 2 note stream (kick) tapi dibikin 1-2-1-2 note... otomatis yang 00:29:362 - 00:29:687 - harus tetep 1 note aja biar ada beda sama yg tadi

Goodluck :D
Thanks :'D

UPDATED
FrenzyLi
258 posts
Joined April 2015
FrenzyLi
Here is the response from FrenzyLi's osu!mania Instrumental Queue!
General
💬 Comment
  • column convention - | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 |

    H/R - hold/release
✎ My2Cents
  • 🔍 Beatmap Metadata / Options
    Looks good.

    🕐 Timing Sections
    Looks good enough.
Storyboard
💬 Comment
  • This is how the BG looks on one of my computers with screen 1920x1200.
✎ My2Cents
  • I suggest redoing the BG such that the "Persephone" as well as other important texts are not cut off.
Rivals_7's Beginner (7K)
💬 Comment
  • Map structure is overall very good but this will make a fairly difficult beginner level-- it looks more like a typical Easy~Easy+ diff due to hold + notes.
✎ My2Cents
  • There are two sections where I believe you have not mapped all of the important percussion: 00:35:038 - 00:45:416 and 01:51:578 - 02:01:957 . And then, I realized these two parts are the only two kiais of the map. Thus, I would suggest you to try out my mod for these two sessions and increase the density by a little bit.
➳ Difficulty Settings
  • HP 7.0 (7.0)
    OD 7.0 (7.0)
💊 Note Placement
  1. 00:14:930 (14930|4,15254|1,15578|5) - Move to 4,4,6.
    Reference 00:17:524 (17524|2,17849|2) - these two finishes are on the same colums.
  2. 00:35:038 (35038|0) - Release at 00:
    00:36:578 - Add note on 2
    00:36:822 (36822|1) - Move to 0
    00:36:984 - Add note on 4
    00:37:308 (37308|4) - Move to 2
    00:38:119 (38119|5,38443|3) - Move to 4,6
    00:38:768 - Release at 00:38:768
    00:38:768 - Add note on 3
    00:39:173 - Add note on 2
    00:39:578 - Add note on 2
    00:40:227 (40227|2) - R 00:41:362
    00:41:362 - Add note on 0
    00:41:768 - Add note on 2
    00:42:173 - Add note on 6
    00:42:822 (42822|3) - R at 00:43:957
    00:43:957 - Add note on 4
    00:44:362 - Add note on 2
    00:44:605 (44605|2) - Move to 4
    00:44:768 - Add note on 2
    You might also want to fix this part which feels very empty: 01:51:578 - 02:01:957
  3. 00:55:795 (55795|6) - Add LN on 0 R at 00:57:092
    Reference 00:50:605 (50605|0,50605|2)
  4. 01:11:200 (71200|4,71200|1,71362|2,71362|5) - This would really be hard for beginners after expericing a long break of 2433 ms. Consider changing to 15,15
  5. 01:24:011 (84011|2) - Move to 6
    Reference: 01:21:092 (81092|1,81416|5)
  6. 01:44:768 (104768|4) - Works better on 6.
Standard (7K)
💬 Comment
  • This is a well layered difficulty and is great for practing beginner level chords and simple streams.
✎ My2Cents
  • My input would be to make the map more aesthetically pleasing. There are also a few adjustments, so I hope you try them out.
➳ Difficulty Settings
  • HP 7.2 (7.2)
    OD 7.2 (7.2)
💊 Note Placement
  1. 00:22:714 (22714|5) - Move to 4
    00:23:038 (23038|6) - Move to 5
    00:23:362 (23362|4) - Move to 0
    00:23:362 (23362|2) - Move to 6
    00:24:660 (24660|5,24660|4) - Move to 2,4
  2. 00:33:416 (33416|2) - Move to 3?
  3. 00:48:984 (48984|4) - Remove.
  4. 01:06:173 (66173|4) - Move to 2
    01:19:633 (79633|3) - Move to 2.
    01:19:795 (79795|0,80119|0) - Move to 3,3.
    01:19:795 (79795|2) - Move to 0.
    01:21:741 (81741|6,81984|4,82227|3,82389|2) - Move to 5,4,2,1
    01:22:389 (82389|0,82714|0) - Move to 3,3.
  5. 01:24:335 (84335|1) - Move to 0?
    01:26:768 (86768|1) - Move to 3?
  6. 01:44:524 - Add note on 2 (Clap)
    01:44:768 (104768|0) - Move to 2.
  7. 02:01:957 (121957|5) - Make this into a regular note because most diffs do not end here with LN.
Hyper (7K)
💬 Comment
  • Good LN diff.
✎ My2Cents
  • You might want to add a few notes (but not adding them is okay). Also tried to move a lot of notes to make the map look more beautiful but with the same level of technical challenge. You also want a consistent ending across all difficulties and please reference Enecstacy diff for a modified ending.
➳ Difficulty Settings
  • HP 7.5 (7.5)
    OD 7.8 (7.8)
💊 Note Placement
  1. 00:04:876 (4876|1) - Move to 2.
    00:09:741 (9741|1,10065|0) - Move to 0,1.
  2. 00:29:524 (29524|4,29605|3,29687|4,29768|5,29849|6) - This is technically good, but I would like to see these notes as 6,5,4,5,6
  3. 00:34:470 - Add note on 6
    00:34:551 - Add notes on 2,5
    Reference 00:33:984 (33984|1,33984|6,34065|4,34065|3)
    00:35:687 - Add note on 4?
    00:38:281 - Add note on 2?
    00:40:876 - Add note on 4?
    00:43:470 - Add note on 2?
    01:52:227 - Add note on 1?
    01:54:822 - Add note on 5?
    01:57:416 - Add note on 1?
    02:00:011 - Add note on 5?
  4. 00:48:984 (48984|5) - Move to 2, 3 or 6
    00:54:011 (54011|6,54173|4,54335|2,54497|1) - Move to 4,2,0,3?
  5. 00:55:795 (55795|5) - Move to 4?
    00:56:281 (56281|1,56281|3) - Move to 35?
    00:57:578 (57578|3,57578|1,57741|6,57741|4) - Move to 06,24?
  6. 01:26:930 (86930|3) - Move to 2.
    01:27:903 (87903|5,87984|6) - Move to 6,5.
    01:28:389 (88389|2,88470|1,88551|3,88633|4,88714|1,88795|0) - Move to 0,1,3,4,0,1
  7. 01:44:524 (104524|6,104524|4,104605|3,104768|4,104930|5,105092|6,105254|5,105416|4,105254|5) - Move to 35,4,6,5,4,6
  8. 02:01:997 (121997|3,122038|6) - Remove
    02:01:997 - Add note on 2
    02:02:038 - Add note on 4
    02:02:078 - Add note on 6
    Reference: MEGA's Insane, Enecstacy
MEGA's Insane (7K)
💬 Comment
  • ✎ My2Cents
    [list:1337]
➳ Difficulty Settings
  • HP 7.8 (7.8)
    OD 8.0 (8.0)
💊 Note Placement
  1. 00:04:551 (4551|5,4795|4) - Snapping error. R of 1 st note and H of 2nd note should be on 00:04:876
    Reference 00:07:146 (7146|5,7470|3) as well as same time on all other diffs.
  2. 00:05:200 (5200|5,5200|4,5362|6,5849|6,6335|6,6822|6,7146|4) - Move to 56,4,4,4,4,6
  3. 00:48:984 (48984|5) - Not continuous with the piano stairs so move to any column that is not 3,4 or 5.
  4. 01:11:362 (71362|3,71362|4) - Move to 02.
  5. 01:19:633 (79633|1) - Snapping error. Hold at 01:19:795.
    01:19:633 - Add LN release at 01:19:795 on column 2.
    01:19:795 (79795|2) - Move to 0.
  6. 01:21:578 (81578|6,81660|5,81741|3) - Move to 4,3,6
  7. 01:22:227 (82227|0) - Snapping error. LN hold at 01:22:389.
    01:22:227 - Add LN release at 01:22:389 on column 2.
    01:22:389 (82389|1) - Move to 6.
    01:22:551 (82551|5) - Move to 4.
  8. 01:30:497 (90497|3) - Move to 5.
    01:30:660 (90660|6) - Move to 3.
  9. 01:31:795 (91795|0,91795|1) - Move to 12.
    Reference 01:30:822 (90822|5,90822|4)
  10. 01:43:308 (103308|6) - Move to 5
    Reference 01:40:714 (100714|5,100876|3,100876|4,100876|6)
  11. 01:44:443 (104443|4,104524|5) - Move to 5,4?
  12. 01:45:578 (105578|3) - Change to single note. This LN is 89 ms long-- too short to acc.
  13. 01:48:173 (108173|0) - Change to single note.
  14. 01:48:335 - Add LN release at 01:48:984 on 0
    Reference 01:45:578 (105578|3,105741|3)
  15. 01:50:281 (110281|6) - Turn to LN release at 01:51:578
  16. 02:00:578 (120578|3) - Move to 1.
    02:00:741 - Add note on 3.
    02:00:903 (120903|4,120984|5,121065|6) - Move to 6,5,4.
Pyanother (7K)
💬 Comment
  • Wow I'm impressed.
✎ My2Cents
  • Pya's diff never let me down I guess. You might want to add a note on 02:02:078 and that's all I can say at the moment.
➳ Difficulty Settings
  • HP 8.8 (8.8)
    OD 8.6 (8.6)
💊 Note Placement
  1. 02:02:078 - Reference the ending of Enecstacy and add a note.
Maki'nother (7K)
💬 Comment
  • Maki's diff amazes me. **** me senpai.
✎ My2Cents
  • Nothing to add except to improve consistency of all diffs.
➳ Difficulty Settings
  • HP 8.5 (8.5)
    OD 9.5 (9.5)
💊 Note Placement
  1. 00:48:984 (48984|4) - Move to 2.
  2. 02:02:078 - Reference the ending of Enecstacy and add a note.
Final Notes: Music choice 100%. Enecstacy is modded to death. I love the structure of the map and hope I can play this one day. I guess this mod is the only thing I can do for your mapset after all. o,o
Rivals_7
Beatmap Nominator
2,978 posts
Joined July 2014
Rivals_7

FrenzyLi wrote:

Here is the response from FrenzyLi's osu!mania Instrumental Queue!
General
💬 Comment
  • column convention - | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 |

    H/R - hold/release
✎ My2Cents
  • 🔍 Beatmap Metadata / Options
    Looks good.

    🕐 Timing Sections
    Looks good enough.
Storyboard
💬 Comment
  • This is how the BG looks on one of my computers with screen 1920x1200.
✎ My2Cents
  • I suggest redoing the BG such that the "Persephone" as well as other important texts are not cut off.
Rivals_7's Beginner (7K)
💬 Comment
  • Map structure is overall very good but this will make a fairly difficult beginner level-- it looks more like a typical Easy~Easy+ diff due to hold + notes.
✎ My2Cents
  • There are two sections where I believe you have not mapped all of the important percussion: 00:35:038 - 00:45:416 and 01:51:578 - 02:01:957 . And then, I realized these two parts are the only two kiais of the map. Thus, I would suggest you to try out my mod for these two sessions and increase the density by a little bit.
➳ Difficulty Settings
  • HP 7.0 (7.0)
    OD 7.0 (7.0)
💊 Note Placement
  1. 00:14:930 (14930|4,15254|1,15578|5) - Move to 4,4,6.
    Reference 00:17:524 (17524|2,17849|2) - these two finishes are on the same colums. They're in the same col because that section have a an LN for a piano roll. Unlike the first one you highlighted. I'm also quite unsure to move those into 4,4,6. might be uncomfortable to the newer 7k player Because they have to hit those in the same hand. and usually the newer 7k players are practicing how to finger independence.
  2. 00:35:038 (35038|0) - Release at 00: ?Timestamp error?
    00:36:578 - Add note on 2
    00:36:822 (36822|1) - Move to 0
    00:36:984 - Add note on 4
    00:37:308 (37308|4) - Move to 2
    00:38:119 (38119|5,38443|3) - Move to 4,6
    00:38:768 - Release at 00:38:768
    00:38:768 - Add note on 3
    00:39:173 - Add note on 2
    00:39:578 - Add note on 2
    00:40:227 (40227|2) - R 00:41:362
    00:41:362 - Add note on 0
    00:41:768 - Add note on 2
    00:42:173 - Add note on 6
    00:42:822 (42822|3) - R at 00:43:957
    00:43:957 - Add note on 4
    00:44:362 - Add note on 2
    00:44:605 (44605|2) - Move to 4
    00:44:768 - Add note on 2
    You might also want to fix this part which feels very empty: 01:51:578 - 02:01:957 Reject everything above. After i applied it, this diff going above 1,5*. which is N Icon. This is why i want to keep this part easy and to balance the diff spread. its not really looking good if this was N icon when the diff says "Easy"
  3. 00:55:795 (55795|6) - Add LN on 0 R at 00:57:092 Agreed, applied
    Reference 00:50:605 (50605|0,50605|2)
  4. 01:11:200 (71200|4,71200|1,71362|2,71362|5) - This would really be hard for beginners after expericing a long break of 2433 ms. Consider changing to 15,15 Made it one note instead, 1|5
  5. 01:24:011 (84011|2) - Move to 6 Ok
    Reference: 01:21:092 (81092|1,81416|5)
  6. 01:44:768 (104768|4) - Works better on 6. Nice catch! Also moving some note to make it balanced
Final Notes: Music choice 100%. Enecstacy is modded to death. I love the structure of the map and hope I can play this one day. I guess this mod is the only thing I can do for your mapset after all. o,o
Thanks for mod, Frenzy :D

Rivals_7's Beginner
Kamikaze
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Joined November 2012
Kamikaze
Added that note at the end, didn't move the other one, but made some brackets easier hmu frenzy tbh
update
Takane6
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Topic Starter
Takane6
me and mega are in really busy because of an exam... will be back soon ;w;

Edit : still in busy but i've applied the mod and its 85% of it are accepted :'D
Thanks frenzy
Wait for pya n mega
Takane6
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Takane6
RESSURECTED from the eternal slumber :'v
MEGAtive
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Joined August 2013
MEGAtive

FrenzyLi wrote:

Here is the response from FrenzyLi's osu!mania Instrumental Queue!
General
💬 Comment
  • column convention - | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 |

    H/R - hold/release
✎ My2Cents
  • 🔍 Beatmap Metadata / Options
    Looks good.

    🕐 Timing Sections
    Looks good enough.
Storyboard
💬 Comment
  • This is how the BG looks on one of my computers with screen 1920x1200.
✎ My2Cents
  • I suggest redoing the BG such that the "Persephone" as well as other important texts are not cut off.
Rivals_7's Beginner (7K)
💬 Comment
  • Map structure is overall very good but this will make a fairly difficult beginner level-- it looks more like a typical Easy~Easy+ diff due to hold + notes.
✎ My2Cents
  • There are two sections where I believe you have not mapped all of the important percussion: 00:35:038 - 00:45:416 and 01:51:578 - 02:01:957 . And then, I realized these two parts are the only two kiais of the map. Thus, I would suggest you to try out my mod for these two sessions and increase the density by a little bit.
➳ Difficulty Settings
  • HP 7.0 (7.0)
    OD 7.0 (7.0)
💊 Note Placement
  1. 00:14:930 (14930|4,15254|1,15578|5) - Move to 4,4,6.
    Reference 00:17:524 (17524|2,17849|2) - these two finishes are on the same colums.
  2. 00:35:038 (35038|0) - Release at 00:
    00:36:578 - Add note on 2
    00:36:822 (36822|1) - Move to 0
    00:36:984 - Add note on 4
    00:37:308 (37308|4) - Move to 2
    00:38:119 (38119|5,38443|3) - Move to 4,6
    00:38:768 - Release at 00:38:768
    00:38:768 - Add note on 3
    00:39:173 - Add note on 2
    00:39:578 - Add note on 2
    00:40:227 (40227|2) - R 00:41:362
    00:41:362 - Add note on 0
    00:41:768 - Add note on 2
    00:42:173 - Add note on 6
    00:42:822 (42822|3) - R at 00:43:957
    00:43:957 - Add note on 4
    00:44:362 - Add note on 2
    00:44:605 (44605|2) - Move to 4
    00:44:768 - Add note on 2
    You might also want to fix this part which feels very empty: 01:51:578 - 02:01:957
  3. 00:55:795 (55795|6) - Add LN on 0 R at 00:57:092
    Reference 00:50:605 (50605|0,50605|2)
  4. 01:11:200 (71200|4,71200|1,71362|2,71362|5) - This would really be hard for beginners after expericing a long break of 2433 ms. Consider changing to 15,15
  5. 01:24:011 (84011|2) - Move to 6
    Reference: 01:21:092 (81092|1,81416|5)
  6. 01:44:768 (104768|4) - Works better on 6.
Standard (7K)
💬 Comment
  • This is a well layered difficulty and is great for practing beginner level chords and simple streams.
✎ My2Cents
  • My input would be to make the map more aesthetically pleasing. There are also a few adjustments, so I hope you try them out.
➳ Difficulty Settings
  • HP 7.2 (7.2)
    OD 7.2 (7.2)
💊 Note Placement
  1. 00:22:714 (22714|5) - Move to 4
    00:23:038 (23038|6) - Move to 5
    00:23:362 (23362|4) - Move to 0
    00:23:362 (23362|2) - Move to 6
    00:24:660 (24660|5,24660|4) - Move to 2,4
  2. 00:33:416 (33416|2) - Move to 3?
  3. 00:48:984 (48984|4) - Remove.
  4. 01:06:173 (66173|4) - Move to 2
    01:19:633 (79633|3) - Move to 2.
    01:19:795 (79795|0,80119|0) - Move to 3,3.
    01:19:795 (79795|2) - Move to 0.
    01:21:741 (81741|6,81984|4,82227|3,82389|2) - Move to 5,4,2,1
    01:22:389 (82389|0,82714|0) - Move to 3,3.
  5. 01:24:335 (84335|1) - Move to 0?
    01:26:768 (86768|1) - Move to 3?
  6. 01:44:524 - Add note on 2 (Clap)
    01:44:768 (104768|0) - Move to 2.
  7. 02:01:957 (121957|5) - Make this into a regular note because most diffs do not end here with LN.
Hyper (7K)
💬 Comment
  • Good LN diff.
✎ My2Cents
  • You might want to add a few notes (but not adding them is okay). Also tried to move a lot of notes to make the map look more beautiful but with the same level of technical challenge. You also want a consistent ending across all difficulties and please reference Enecstacy diff for a modified ending.
➳ Difficulty Settings
  • HP 7.5 (7.5)
    OD 7.8 (7.8)
💊 Note Placement
  1. 00:04:876 (4876|1) - Move to 2.
    00:09:741 (9741|1,10065|0) - Move to 0,1.
  2. 00:29:524 (29524|4,29605|3,29687|4,29768|5,29849|6) - This is technically good, but I would like to see these notes as 6,5,4,5,6
  3. 00:34:470 - Add note on 6
    00:34:551 - Add notes on 2,5
    Reference 00:33:984 (33984|1,33984|6,34065|4,34065|3)
    00:35:687 - Add note on 4?
    00:38:281 - Add note on 2?
    00:40:876 - Add note on 4?
    00:43:470 - Add note on 2?
    01:52:227 - Add note on 1?
    01:54:822 - Add note on 5?
    01:57:416 - Add note on 1?
    02:00:011 - Add note on 5?
  4. 00:48:984 (48984|5) - Move to 2, 3 or 6
    00:54:011 (54011|6,54173|4,54335|2,54497|1) - Move to 4,2,0,3?
  5. 00:55:795 (55795|5) - Move to 4?
    00:56:281 (56281|1,56281|3) - Move to 35?
    00:57:578 (57578|3,57578|1,57741|6,57741|4) - Move to 06,24?
  6. 01:26:930 (86930|3) - Move to 2.
    01:27:903 (87903|5,87984|6) - Move to 6,5.
    01:28:389 (88389|2,88470|1,88551|3,88633|4,88714|1,88795|0) - Move to 0,1,3,4,0,1
  7. 01:44:524 (104524|6,104524|4,104605|3,104768|4,104930|5,105092|6,105254|5,105416|4,105254|5) - Move to 35,4,6,5,4,6
  8. 02:01:997 (121997|3,122038|6) - Remove
    02:01:997 - Add note on 2
    02:02:038 - Add note on 4
    02:02:078 - Add note on 6
    Reference: MEGA's Insane, Enecstacy
MEGA's Insane (7K)
💬 Comment
  • ✎ My2Cents
    [list:1337]
➳ Difficulty Settings
  • HP 7.8 (7.8)
    OD 8.0 (8.0)
💊 Note Placement
  1. 01:30:497 (90497|3) - Move to 5.
    01:30:660 (90660|6) - Move to 3. Current pattern flows better for me
  2. 01:31:795 (91795|0,91795|1) - Move to 12.
    Reference 01:30:822 (90822|5,90822|4) IDK maybe you're using symmetrical method here, but I think that plays awkward
  3. 01:48:335 - Add LN release at 01:48:984 on 0
    Reference 01:45:578 (105578|3,105741|3) Lol please merge this mod with previous mod I was confused
  4. 01:50:281 (110281|6) - Turn to LN release at 01:51:578 Giving a time to rest. LN still makes you pressing button even though it's one LN.
  5. 02:00:578 (120578|3) - Move to 1.
    02:00:741 - Add note on 3. I don't really following that high-pitched Piano as double. Those double ahead are additional for Drums.
    02:00:903 (120903|4,120984|5,121065|6) - Move to 6,5,4.
Pyanother (7K)
💬 Comment
  • Wow I'm impressed.
✎ My2Cents
  • Pya's diff never let me down I guess. You might want to add a note on 02:02:078 and that's all I can say at the moment.
➳ Difficulty Settings
  • HP 8.8 (8.8)
    OD 8.6 (8.6)
💊 Note Placement
  1. 02:02:078 - Reference the ending of Enecstacy and add a note.
Maki'nother (7K)
💬 Comment
  • Maki's diff amazes me. **** me senpai.
✎ My2Cents
  • Nothing to add except to improve consistency of all diffs.
➳ Difficulty Settings
  • HP 8.5 (8.5)
    OD 9.5 (9.5)
💊 Note Placement
  1. 00:48:984 (48984|4) - Move to 2.
  2. 02:02:078 - Reference the ending of Enecstacy and add a note.
Final Notes: Music choice 100%. Enecstacy is modded to death. I love the structure of the map and hope I can play this one day. I guess this mod is the only thing I can do for your mapset after all. o,o
Thanks for modding. Really great mod. God those BBcodes parade really reminds me on Verniy's mods
MEGA's Insane
Amethyst507
179 posts
Joined October 2015
Amethyst507
Got kinda lazy to explain things very clearly cuz i will be busy on several mods besides that, so I just summarize the mods i will apply
However, I will not interfere with any notes or whatsoever, just gonna remind these notes have problem and you fix it as how as you like:


Enecstacy
-Add new timing points for reading
-"SVs" from 00:29:849 - to 00:32:119 - on LN sections
- 00:45:416 - slowed down, because the song's got slower (Beginning section too)
{I recommend setting the timing sections as written above on other difficulties as well as Enectasy only}
Jacks from 01:45:092 - to 01:47:687 - are too stacky, because some beats have different pitch.
-Extending the LNs to 02:07:146 - ??

Before applying the timings below, consider backing up just in case it destroyed the map
Paste these in the TimingPoints section of the .osu notepad(Enecstacy ONLY)
[TimingPoints]
2606,324.324324324324,4,1,1,25,1,0
23362,-25,4,1,1,25,0,0
23524,-31.25,4,1,1,25,0,0
23687,-41.6666666666667,4,1,1,25,0,0
23849,-62.5,4,1,1,25,0,0
24011,-125,4,1,1,25,0,0
24173,-250,4,1,1,25,0,0
24335,-500,4,1,1,25,0,0
24497,-1000,4,1,1,25,0,0
24660,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
35038,-100,4,2,1,35,0,1
45416,-125,4,2,1,35,0,0
66173,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,35,0,0
67470,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
89524,-100,4,2,1,35,0,1
110281,-25,4,2,1,35,0,0
110443,-31.25,4,2,1,35,0,0
110605,-41.6666666666667,4,2,1,35,0,0
110768,-62.5,4,2,1,35,0,0
110930,-125,4,2,1,35,0,0
111092,-250,4,2,1,35,0,0
111254,-500,4,2,1,35,0,0
111416,-1000,4,2,1,35,0,0
111578,-100,4,2,1,35,0,1
121957,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0

Maki'nother
-Kiai 01:29:524 - conflicts on other diffs
-Speed chaanges 00:23:362 - and 01:50:281 - seems pokey, consider remove???

Pyanother - 00:07:714 - , should be double, cause the beat sound as hard as the notes next to it.

Well, that's all for now, we'll talk about it more in-game
Ichigaki
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Joined February 2013
Ichigaki
ecstasy
01:09:092 (69092|1) - make it just 1/2 beat, i think it's clear enough
01:29:524 (89524|6,89687|0) - combine it just like what you did before
01:45:092 - 01:46:389 - why don't make it same like 01:46:389 - 01:47:687 - ? well, the second part seems match for the nearly end of the song

i know it won't really help, sorry
doing this in-game much better x.x
Kamikaze
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Joined November 2012
Kamikaze
what is this gay diff and why is it mine

Amethyst507 wrote:

Maki'nother
-Kiai 01:29:524 - conflicts on other diffs That's not an issue, especially since this is a GD and I want to emphasize that part with kiai since it's important to me in the whole scheme
-Speed chaanges 00:23:362 - and 01:50:281 - seems pokey, consider remove??? Hell naw, those SVs are looking exactly how I want them to look, given my interpretation of this sound. I might change it in the future to a diffrent SV, but I will not remove it.

Well, that's all for now, we'll talk about it more in-game
Welp, no update I guess
Amethyst507
179 posts
Joined October 2015
Amethyst507

-Kamikaze- wrote:

what is this gay diff and why is it mine
Maki'nother
-Kiai 01:29:524 - conflicts on other diffs That's not an issue, especially since this is a GD and I want to emphasize that part with kiai since it's important to me in the whole scheme
-Speed chaanges 00:23:362 - and 01:50:281 - seems pokey, consider remove??? Hell naw, those SVs are looking exactly how I want them to look, given my interpretation of this sound. I might change it in the future to a diffrent SV, but I will not remove it.
Im just giving my opinion, don't have to be that angry about it...

BTW, applying is u and Ene's decision, i have no opportunity to apply anything nor to force any of u to do it :\
Kamikaze
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Joined November 2012
Kamikaze
I wonder why is it that everytime I reply to a mod I rejected and explain why in a casual way people assume that I'm angry lmao
Amethyst507
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Joined October 2015
Amethyst507

-Kamikaze- wrote:

I wonder why is it that everytime I reply to a mod I rejected and explain why in a casual way people assume that I'm angry lmao
Er... the way of expressing what ur saying i guess
But never mind about that... people misunderstand sometime :/
Takane6
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Takane6
asdsahcbuadsb wait i just noticed this xD
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