Hi there!

Easy
00:43:950 (4) Distance is too far from (3)

Normal
02:10:811 (8) Move up 1 grid? (Grid level 3)
03:44:541-3:45:000 (4,5,6) I think this is a bit confusing for normal... Change by bringing the slider down, perhaps?

BS Style
00:59:850 (10,11) Use distance snap on these.
01:20:700 (1,2,3) Too close, distance snap.
02:25:350 (2) Over 1 grid to the right

Very good map! I couldn't find much that bothered me enough to mention it I love the skin and clouds too, good luck~ Starred!

หลังจากนั่งเพ่งอยู่ เกือบๆ 1 ชม.จนเจอวิธี ทำแสงที่ว่า (ตอนแรกหาเกือบ ครึ่งชม ไฟล์ไหน ว้าาา ทำเอฟเฟคกระพริบหาไม่เจอ ใน OSB ก็ไม่มี OTL แย่แล้ว.

*** เทคนิคที่ว่า คือการ เปิดปิด kiai ในช่วงเวลา kiai mode สั้นๆ ให้มีแสงกระพริบ (ใช่ทีเหอะ ไม่ใช่หน้าแหกหมอไม่รับเย็บ)

มันมีกฎ ตรงนี้อยู่
Do not overuse kiai time (general rule is one toggle per minute of playable length). Do not use kiai time just for fountains unless you are doing this extremely rarely. Kiai time is meant to accent chorus sections. You can toggle it off and on halfway through the chorus if that looks good, but using it constantly every 4-8 beats is just stupid.

ไอ้เปิดปิด kiai แต่ ไม่เคยเห็นเคสนี้ ถาม BAT ก่อนดีกว่ามั้ง

ส่วนเรื่อง SB

คำว่า backstep มันทึบๆๆ ดูแล้วไม่ค่อยเ้ข้ากับBG สักเท่าไหร่

นี่ลองทำมาดู ไม่สวยเท่าไหร่ ยังงงว่าทำไม มันมืดมากๆ

SPOILER (click to toggle)
Image


ถ้าทำแล้วก่อนส่งตรวจ เอา bs.png ให้เหลือสักอันเดียวไฟล์ไหนที่ไม่ใช้ลบทิ้งด้วยนะ

Goodluck


******** ทำ สตอรี่บอร์ดพิเศษ กับ DIFF easy เพราะ โน๊ตหมดแล้วแต่เพลงยังรันต่อไปเพราะ Storyboard ติดต่อหลังไมค์โลด เดี๋ยวสอน

Hi!! regenz told me to check this map, and ah~ such a nice song he gave me xP

Let's see... really nice map overall, those clouds are so beautiful (and maybe you'd like to disable letterboxes on breaks to not to ruin the atmosphere xP) The map flows really well, but I'd say to get rid of all those 1/4 notes on Normal and maybe make them sliders...

Also about the kiai, someone probably will tell you to reduce it a bit, and maybe reducing the star2 size and brightness will make the fountains a bit less confusing, because if they cover the hitcircles it will be hard to see, since they're transparent. Also don't make too many stacks with this kind of hitcircles, it will be confusing to follow too xP

Not going to get more deep modding on this because I don't take requests for now but I just wanted to give you some advices :3 Hope it helps.

Take a star, this s looking so nice so far

Title: Natsukage (Instrumental)
other: HP Bar looks not full at startingline lol
not give me kudosu.

Oh thank ,but Natsukage translate in English is Summer Light

• • Source: Air

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Overall Difficulty: 3

• • Offset: 34.200

Quick Recheck.

A really good job, to be honest o.o
I only have a request about the SB in Easy: when the map ends, every object just disappears from the screen. Can you add some fade transitions? (The description says you're going to fix the SB, so i hope this is what you mean)
Tiny SB error in 03:06:975 [Hard] too. Oh thank,sorry I'm not add some fade in Easy. (I mean check SB wrong.)

Other things:
[Normal] 01:47:100 (5) - 01:51:900 (5) - 01:56:700 (8) - stack correctly
[Normal] 01:50:100 (3) - this slider is not snapped. It's too long and goes over the white line, please remake it. Since i feel this may have been happened to other sliders, please do a "Timing - Recalculate slider lenghts" and recheck everything.
[Hard] Why is the offset different from the other sections?
[Hard] 03:36:600 (9) - stack correctly Some fixed. ^^"

Nice nice, it's good to see this map improving so much ^^

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• Source: Air

[Easy]

• HP Drain Rate: 3
• Overall Difficulty: 3

[Hard]

• Offset: 34.200

All fixed. Thank for mod & 7 stars.

เจ๋งเลย สวย + สนุกมาก > w <b

จะ Rank แล้วสู้ๆน้อ~

 F,0,139200,139800,1,0.01999985
 F,0,139800,140400,0.01999985,1

 F,0,139200,139800,1,0
 F,0,139800,140400,0,1

Hi~
Here a little mod

[SB]
-Open u .osb file and fix lines like the next:
Code:
F,0,139200,139800,1,0.01999985
F,0,139800,140400,0.01999985,1

lines like that need be something like this
Code:
F,0,139200,139800,1,0
F,0,139800,140400,0,1


Only that :3
Nice song =)
Star~

according to these

the general translate should be "summer lights"xD

สไลเดอร์ด้วยกันเองยังห่างไม่เท่ากัน ความเร็วของสไลด์ไม่เท่ากันเลยห่างกันคับ

ช่วยเลือกตัวอย่างที่ดีแล้วเอาไปปรับแก้ให้เหมือนกันให้หมดทั้งเพลงเน่อ คือจะ mod ให้แก้ไม่รู้จะใช้แพทเทิร์นไหน(ห่าง 1 ห่าง 2 รึว่าให้ติดกัน เพราะมันเดี๋ยวใกล้เดี๋ยวไกล)

01:47:100 - disable grid snap แล้วก็ซ้อนให้มันเนียนๆ เด้อ
01:51:900 - ^
02:04:800 - spacing(ใกล้ไป)
04:10:425 - (แซว)ทำไมเสียงปรบมือมันมาตอนนี้ละเนี่ย(ปล่อยเม้าส์เรียบร้อย นึกว่าจบแล้ว T^T)
All fixed.

[General]
Diff lengths are inconsistent!

[StoryBoard]
You should probably finish cloud-02.png movement when it exits the screen
cloud-02.png stops movement abruptly and looks like it freezes on:02:31:800 intentional?
at: 02:31:800 more clouds magically appear on top of the previous ones overriding their fade values, intentional?
your osb contains a lot of code, try using loops to reduce the ammount of lines?

[Hard]
Nice, i like it!

[Normal]
Looks fine

[Easy]
This diff is too short!

Well i'll give the star, i hope you take in mind the SB stuff i pointed out, nice map

Thank all fixed. ^^" (I'm sorry for new rule this.I don't know. )

[General]
Offset: I think the offset should delay 10ms.( Just my mind, you can keep your offset) Yeah I think so.
Volume: No Problem
SB: Awesome ><
[Easy]
I think the slider is too fast for Easy Difficulty. Try to use 1.0x.
04:08:00 (Break) - it is not work...Ok all fixed.
[Normal]
I think the slider is too fast for Normal Difficulty. Try to use 1.4x. Sorry my difficulty have slider a lot. I don't have freetime for fixed it.

No problem after the slider problem.
[Hard]
The setting of Easy Difficulty and Normal Difficulty sound is "SOFT"
Why do you use "Normal" sound on this diff? Ha Ha ~ because I would like to focus on drums. ^^"
If you use Normal Sound, please put the volume smaller. OK all fixed.
02:01:800(1) - I think "Normal - hitfinish.wav" which is not match on it. ok
02:11:250(7) - Whistle ok
02:11:850(8) - Whistle ok

Hope Your Map Can Be Ranked Early.
Good Luck~ Star~ =]

Actually, Saturio is one of our "HKOSP" member, so I no need to mod anymore :3
but I really love the song, also , your map have a big change from the beginning!
I see this map when you first upload it, I think it's fine , and now, with the new SB, it's awesome!
that's way I want to mod~ and hope your map can be better~

[General]
1) seems those "scorebar-ki" are too big, I can't see it's ear.
2) the volume is too loud ...really, please turn down the volume...I think 60 to 70% is enough.
3) may be silence the slider-side is better.
4) kiai time should start and end with a hitobject,
4.1) so move the timing section at 02:30:600 to 02:31:800 ? (for [Easy])
4.2) also, move 03:34:200 to 03:34:800 ? (for [Easy] and [Normal])
5) the break at 04:08:100 is too short .... better to remove it (for [Easy] and [Hard] )
6) I can see several timing sectinos, but most of them are useless, may be use them to make more volume changes ?
7) timing section (I don't mean those kiai time) should start before a note to avoid miss hit ( spinner and slider is not affected by this rule) e.g. 00:35:400 in [Easy] should move to 00:35:100

[Easy]
02:48:600 (1,1) - the slider is too near the spinner, so remove the slider and add a note with whistle at 02:51:600 ?

[Normal]
there should not be so many 1/4 combos in [Normal], so use slider with reverse to replace them?
00:43:200 (2,3) ^
00:54:900 (4,5,6) ^
01:17:100 (6,7) ^
01:17:100 (6,7) ^
01:26:700 (4,5) ^
01:54:900 (4,5,6) ^
02:14:850 (4,5) ^
02:28:800 (5,6,7) ^
also the rest of the part.. I can't point out all of them
01:45:600 add whistle here?
01:48:000 ^
01:50:400 ^
01:52:800 ^
01:55:200 ^
01:57:600 ^
02:48:600 (1,1) the slider is too near the spinner

[Hard]
please check the timing sections in this diff, they should set before the note...
e.g.
00:34:500 - move this timing section to 00:34:350
00:36:600 - move to 00:36:300
....and more, please check them
Thank you. All fixed.

overall,
Star + Kd star!
Looking forward to see the map in ranked list!

P.S. wmfchris would like to ask you if you need a taiko difficulty of this map.
I'd like mode Taiko is just.

Pink words:You have to fix these,they are mistakes.
Black words:Just suggestions.

[General]
I think first kiai section is not necessary,but it's up to you.(And lots of players are not fans of long total kiai time._.)
And,use a blank wav to silence the sliders?

[Easy]
01:15:600 01:17:400 01:18:600 01:32:700 - whistle
01:17:400 (3,1) - spacing

[Normal]
00:41:400 (1) - try to make this more symmetrical
01:11:400 (1) - a bit ugly to me, how about move and change shape like this.

[Hard]
00:39:300 (7) - new combo
00:44:100 (8) - ^
00:58:200 (7) - ^
01:03:300 (7) - ^
01:12:900 (8) - ^
02:15:000 (9) - ^
02:20:400 (6) - up 1 grid,left 1 grid
03:08:100 (11) - new combo
03:36:600 (9) - ^
03:42:150 (10) - ^
03:53:700 (9) - ^

Great map~ especially hitsounds and SB Star

All fixed thank.

Sorry,I was so cared ._.
Yours' song is Haru - Summer Shadows (Instrumental)
this one is Haru - Summer Lights (Instrumental)

And pink star!!~

backstep wrote:

**Summer Light is length 5:22 ? and Summer Shadow this song?

aabc271 wrote:

Hi~
Here is my Taiko mod~
Taiko mod request from wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[General]
Fine~
I like the song & SB~

[Wmf's Taiko]
Change the title to "Summer Shadow" by using notepad so that the title is same with others. You may also need to add the BG and SB into the Taiko diff.
Fixed~
The SV of this diff is 2.0. I know you did this because this can make the 1/8 notes become less packed together. But to be honest, i think it is inappropriate to have so many 1/8 in this diff since the song is relaxing and soft. Having so many 1/8 will definitely ruin the epic of the song imo. Also, 1/8 in a 100 BPM song = 1/4 in a 200 BPM song, which is quite tiring to play. Therefore, i suggest you removing some 1/8 notes. If you do so, maybe change the SV to 1.4 or 1.6? Actually 1/4 streams in this song can be challenging too since players need to identify between red and blue notes without any rests. Sometimes it is not necessary to put so many notes to make it challenging. I am not disagreeing your mapping style, but i believe that removing some 1/8 will improve this diff.
Changed to 1.8 since there'll be difficulty in reading 1/8 notes for 1.4 / 1.6.
Since the plaing time of this song is over 4mins. Consider adding a break time?
Sorry I can't find a place to put break time T_T (BTW, I think the notes density is not so high~
00:34:490 (2~6) Remove the finishes?
I think it's fine~
00:35:690 (8~10) Change to ddk?
Fixed~
03:29:690 (171~173) Move these 3 notes to 03:29:840, :915 and :990?
03:30:290 (174~176) Move these 3 notes to 03:30:440, :515 and :590?
03:30:890 (177~180) Delete no.180, and move the 3 other notes to 03:31:040, :115 and :190?
These 3 are the same and fixed (that's my mistake XD)
03:33:890 (191~193) Change to dkd?
Changed, but kept finishes.
04:09:590 (331~332) Change these 2 notes into X0.5 speed?
I don't like BPM changes in taiko songs to sorry~
Nice overall. No errors found~
Thanks
Nice song and SB~
Star~

[Easy]
00:36:590 (3) - New combo. Fixed.~

[Normal+]
02:02:990 (1) - DS is out,so how about putting further or stacking with 02:00:590 (5)? I don't change it sorry.

[Hard]
Can't spot anything wrong with it.

Great job! Also,SB is really cute.

Star~

hey backstep! ^.^
star!good luck with this!

Sallad4ever wrote:

GREAT SB

[General]
- Don't use image with dimension bigger than 800x600 for SB element, its too heavy. Please re-size them (AIR-shadow_BG0~1)
- Re-size the slider score point to 32x32 and maybe make it more visible? it's kinda transparent and hard to see or is this intentional?
- I have a hitcirclesb.png on the song folder, I didn't see it being used anywhere so remove it please
- Add a cursor trail and also a section fail, you can use the default one if you want
- Geki or "g" only appear on 300, so you don't need 100g, please remove it. Read this if you want to know about Geki and Katu
- 300k and 300g are similar, please make them different. You can change the color of font in 300g in to pink or add another feather
- Remove the number "1" from soft-sliderslide1 and normal-sliderslide1, the name is wrong that's why I can still hear the slider slide
- The thanksb, shouldn't it be "thanks for playing" ?

[Easy]
I'm not sure calling this an easy, but seeing I'm the only one complaining just ignore me
Decrease CS (circle size) by 1?
01:03:290 (5,6) - unstack these
02:48:590 (1) - add a timing section in the spinner with 30% volume
03:50:990 (2,3) - these continuous short slider is not very good for easy diff imo
03:08:990 (3,1) - unstack this
04:02:390 (1) - please move this, the current position under 04:01:190 (2,3,4) is not good

[Normal+]
02:48:590 (1) - rise the volume in this timing section by 3 tick, please don't make it absolute silence

[Hard]
I still prefer the soft hitsound better
02:48:590 (1) - same spinnner issue as above
03:36:590 (1) - it's better if you use normal sound here imo, so delete the three timing sections in this slider
[Timing section mod]
Read this for more information on timing section

SPOILER

02:00:890 - move this timing section 1/4 beat backward (previous blue tick)
02:02:990 - remove this timing section cause it's not needed
02:12:290 - add a timing section here with the same audio setup as 02:12:590, but without kiai
02:51:290 ~ 02:59:540 - there are some misplaced timing section, I'm guessing you want to mix normal and soft sound? if that's the case do this :
02:51:440 - move this timing section back to blue tick
02:52:340 - move this timing section forward to the end of the slider
02:56:090 - move this timing section back to 02:55:640
02:57:290 - move this timing section forward to 02:57:590

The song is quite long but it's not a big problem, beside it's very shooting
Well mostly technical problem, for me the map is already good
Be sure to full submit after you make changes as I've said in [General]
Good Luck ~STAR

Hey, awesome mapping, I think you outdid my map

Your storyboard is sweet and I can't find any flaws atm. Star~

backstep wrote:

Hey, awesome mapping, I think you outdid my map

Your storyboard is sweet and I can't find any flaws atm. Star~

Thank for star. ><"
P.S. I think me and your map is the same song.

tsunamayo wrote:

I love this song!xD
star~

termerys wrote:

เอาดาวผมไปก่อนละกัน เดี๋ยวคืนนี้เทสให้ ><
btw, very impressive first map >< (i really shock when i know that this is ur first map and it's maybe better than my present map >w<)
NICE JOB!

termerys wrote:

เอ่ ขอเช็คนิดๆหน่อยๆละกัน ไม่รู้จะม็อดอะไรดี :3
ถ้ามีอะไรไม่ชอบใจ ก็ไม่ต้องแก้ก็ได้นะครับ ><

Easy: อยากทำอีซี่ให้ได้อย่างงี้มั่งจัง ><
02:15:440 - ขยับ (4) and (5) ขึ้นข้างบนหนึ่งช่อง ไปทางซ้ายอีกหนึ่งช่อง ให้ตัว (2,4,5) ขนานกัน แล้วก็ขยับตัว (6) ไปข้างบนหนึ่งช่อง แล้วก็ไปทางซ้ายอีกสองช่อง
03:02:990 - ขยับ (2) ไปข้างล่างหนึ่งช่อง แล้วทางขวาอีกหนึ่งช่อง ให้ระยะห่างมันเท่ากัน ว่างๆเดี๋ยวพี่ดูละกัน :3

Normal: ไม่รู้จะม็อดอะไร แต่ผมคิดว่า สไลเดอร์เร็วไปนิดนึงนะ แต่ไม่เปนไรหรอก(มั้ง) ไม่เร็วก็ไม่ใช่ Normal+ จิ ~

Hard: จะมีอะไรให้ม็อดหละ หนุกมาก แต่ไม่รู้สิ อาจจะง่ายไปนิด มีคนใส่ DT+HD แน่เลย >< มันง่ายขนาดนั้นเลยหรอ ?- -

แค่นี้แหละมั้ง อืม แค่นี้หละ หาที่ผิดไม่เจอ ><

lovhin456 wrote:

Requested mod ~

This color means is important

General;
- I like the rhythm ~ Star ~
- Since you have a section-pass you should have a section-fail as well

Easy;
- Is okk ~

Normal+;
- Is okk ~

Hard;
- Is okk ~

* Sorry I can't mod taiko
* LOL I can't mod your map, is very well done ~ Sorry

lepidopodus wrote:

As a request from backstep... Ok, basically it's suggestions, so don't mind this too much. I don't mind even if you ignore this completely

Wmf's Taiko
Just to mention a few things...
- There are several 1/8 streams in this map. Usually 1/8 isn't that much used cause most case it doesn't suit the music (I don't mean this one) and kinda hard to read, but this one has low BPM and you set SV=1.8. One thing for sure is using 1/8 isn't prohibitted or something so that would be mapper's & player's choice. (And seems 1/8 sound actually appears with some part of this song, so don't mind this too much.)
- Hitburst is kinda bad for playing Taiko, but we can't do something current system of skinning, so no way to fix it for now. (At least this one is kinda transparent)
- There are big notes stream with 1/4. It's kinda tricky to decide this one is ok or not cause SV=1.8 and this one has BPM 100 and most importantly we don't have any strict standard about this yet.
01:24:590 (254) - Maybe d? (aka r)
02:24:590 (557) - ^
02:28:190 (573) - ^
03:16:190 (100) - ^
03:50:840 (257) - add d? (aka r)
04:10:340 (1) - lol loooooong spinner (np with me though~)

Anyway, here's star.

lepidopodus wrote:

W, wait, I didn't ask to remove that spinner ㅇㅅㅇ I said 'no problem with me'

wmfchris wrote:

It's just requested by other modders :3

gowww wrote:

nice song & nice map XD

Faust wrote:

Well...I TRIED to mod it.
And then I was wondering why your Beatmap was sort of...flawless. Then I came into this thread and then lolwtfstars.

This mapset is fine as it is. It conforms, and it's playable. That SB is pretty and well-done. I can only give you praise.
It's good to go, in my opinion.

arien666 wrote:

Very good mapsets ;_;

Good luck :3...

chamelepeace710 wrote:

ahhhhh.... so beautiful....

Hard
00:48:596 (6) add new combo
00:50:246 (1) remove combo
00:51:296 (4) add new combo
00:52:946 (1) remove combo
00:53:696 (3) add combo
01:07:796 (6) add combo
01:09:446 (1) remove combo
01:10:196 (2) add combo
02:53:396 (7) add combo
03:19:196 (1) remove combo
03:20:096 (2) add combo

great job....... and star!

edit: almost forgot, take a look at the storyboard in the taiko diff. if you really have to, change the Beatmap By Backstep to Taiko Map By Wmf.

Sumea wrote:

I liked the hard difficulty.
Had nice fast pace to it but was not hard to follow - I did miss a few initially but it is more for own mistake, I think by now the map if pretty much spot on!

Enjoy to see more Haru songs in osu!.

James2250 wrote:

-You have an empty osb file in your folder, delete it ok.
-Include a hit circle approach circle from the template skin in your folder ok.
-Kiai time needs to start and end at the same places on Easy/Normal/Hardok.
-Looking at your spinner around the center it seems to move around alot, do you intend for this? (otherwise fix) I intend it,I don't change it.
-Maybe make the spinner approach circle a darker blue so it is easier to see? ok.
-Change "Thank for playing" to "Thanks for playing" Now I don't have photoshop.if I have freetime,I'll fix.
-Your sb load goes over 5 for certain parts of the map (for more than a few seconds) try and lower this if possible
-Combo burst 0 and 1 looks better flipped horizontally in my opinion
-A few of the combo bursts could have some some transparency (look at them carefully) example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/29218

Easy:
00:57:596 (2) - might not be good for an easy (alot of repeats)
01:13:196 (4,5,1) - align?
01:15:596 (2,3) - might not be good for an easy
01:47:996 (4) - add note?
01:52:796 (3) - ^
01:57:596 (1) - remove new combo
02:10:796 (4,5,1) - make sure spacing stays equal
03:16:196 (3) - could be slightly more symmetrical
03:35:996 (2,4) - align
04:22:196 (1,3) - ^

Normal:
00:41:396 (1) - could be slightly more symmetrical
00:41:396 (1,3) - align these two and put 00:43:196 (2) in the middle of them
01:10:196 (2,3,4,5,1) - align both sides of this?
02:01:796 (7,1) - try and avoid anti jumps
03:04:496 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a nicer pattern?
03:22:196 (2) - could be slightly more symmetrical (go though and check all of these..nazi though)
03:42:296 (6,1) - would look better centered on the curve

Hard:
Kind of low stats for a Hard (I suggest +1 to HP/OD/AR)
03:30:596 - add break here
03:35:996 (8,1) - stacking is off

Taiko:
01:11:096 (181,182,183) - don't have a finish at the end here
Only error I see
Thanks for a lot suggestion all note fixed.
Maps are looking nice but I don't think you are quite ready for bubble yet

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Revived!!

cheukhin1985 wrote:

yay it's revived!!!!! <3
i luv this beatmap~