Sallad4ever wrote:

GREAT SB

[General]
- Don't use image with dimension bigger than 800x600 for SB element, its too heavy. Please re-size them (AIR-shadow_BG0~1)
- Re-size the slider score point to 32x32 and maybe make it more visible? it's kinda transparent and hard to see or is this intentional?
- I have a hitcirclesb.png on the song folder, I didn't see it being used anywhere so remove it please
- Add a cursor trail and also a section fail, you can use the default one if you want
- Geki or "g" only appear on 300, so you don't need 100g, please remove it. Read this if you want to know about Geki and Katu
- 300k and 300g are similar, please make them different. You can change the color of font in 300g in to pink or add another feather
- Remove the number "1" from soft-sliderslide1 and normal-sliderslide1, the name is wrong that's why I can still hear the slider slide
- The thanksb, shouldn't it be "thanks for playing" ?

[Easy]
I'm not sure calling this an easy, but seeing I'm the only one complaining just ignore me
Decrease CS (circle size) by 1?
01:03:290 (5,6) - unstack these
02:48:590 (1) - add a timing section in the spinner with 30% volume
03:50:990 (2,3) - these continuous short slider is not very good for easy diff imo
03:08:990 (3,1) - unstack this
04:02:390 (1) - please move this, the current position under 04:01:190 (2,3,4) is not good

[Normal+]
02:48:590 (1) - rise the volume in this timing section by 3 tick, please don't make it absolute silence

[Hard]
I still prefer the soft hitsound better
02:48:590 (1) - same spinnner issue as above
03:36:590 (1) - it's better if you use normal sound here imo, so delete the three timing sections in this slider
[Timing section mod]
Read this for more information on timing section

SPOILER

02:00:890 - move this timing section 1/4 beat backward (previous blue tick)
02:02:990 - remove this timing section cause it's not needed
02:12:290 - add a timing section here with the same audio setup as 02:12:590, but without kiai
02:51:290 ~ 02:59:540 - there are some misplaced timing section, I'm guessing you want to mix normal and soft sound? if that's the case do this :
02:51:440 - move this timing section back to blue tick
02:52:340 - move this timing section forward to the end of the slider
02:56:090 - move this timing section back to 02:55:640
02:57:290 - move this timing section forward to 02:57:590

The song is quite long but it's not a big problem, beside it's very shooting
Well mostly technical problem, for me the map is already good
Be sure to full submit after you make changes as I've said in [General]
Good Luck ~STAR

Hey, awesome mapping, I think you outdid my map

Your storyboard is sweet and I can't find any flaws atm. Star~

backstep wrote:

Hey, awesome mapping, I think you outdid my map

Your storyboard is sweet and I can't find any flaws atm. Star~

Thank for star. ><"
P.S. I think me and your map is the same song.

tsunamayo wrote:

I love this song!xD
star~

termerys wrote:

เอาดาวผมไปก่อนละกัน เดี๋ยวคืนนี้เทสให้ ><
btw, very impressive first map >< (i really shock when i know that this is ur first map and it's maybe better than my present map >w<)
NICE JOB!

termerys wrote:

เอ่ ขอเช็คนิดๆหน่อยๆละกัน ไม่รู้จะม็อดอะไรดี :3
ถ้ามีอะไรไม่ชอบใจ ก็ไม่ต้องแก้ก็ได้นะครับ ><

Easy: อยากทำอีซี่ให้ได้อย่างงี้มั่งจัง ><
02:15:440 - ขยับ (4) and (5) ขึ้นข้างบนหนึ่งช่อง ไปทางซ้ายอีกหนึ่งช่อง ให้ตัว (2,4,5) ขนานกัน แล้วก็ขยับตัว (6) ไปข้างบนหนึ่งช่อง แล้วก็ไปทางซ้ายอีกสองช่อง
03:02:990 - ขยับ (2) ไปข้างล่างหนึ่งช่อง แล้วทางขวาอีกหนึ่งช่อง ให้ระยะห่างมันเท่ากัน ว่างๆเดี๋ยวพี่ดูละกัน :3

Normal: ไม่รู้จะม็อดอะไร แต่ผมคิดว่า สไลเดอร์เร็วไปนิดนึงนะ แต่ไม่เปนไรหรอก(มั้ง) ไม่เร็วก็ไม่ใช่ Normal+ จิ ~

Hard: จะมีอะไรให้ม็อดหละ หนุกมาก แต่ไม่รู้สิ อาจจะง่ายไปนิด มีคนใส่ DT+HD แน่เลย >< มันง่ายขนาดนั้นเลยหรอ ?- -

แค่นี้แหละมั้ง อืม แค่นี้หละ หาที่ผิดไม่เจอ ><

lovhin456 wrote:

Requested mod ~

This color means is important

General;
- I like the rhythm ~ Star ~
- Since you have a section-pass you should have a section-fail as well

Easy;
- Is okk ~

Normal+;
- Is okk ~

Hard;
- Is okk ~

* Sorry I can't mod taiko
* LOL I can't mod your map, is very well done ~ Sorry

lepidopodus wrote:

As a request from backstep... Ok, basically it's suggestions, so don't mind this too much. I don't mind even if you ignore this completely

Wmf's Taiko
Just to mention a few things...
- There are several 1/8 streams in this map. Usually 1/8 isn't that much used cause most case it doesn't suit the music (I don't mean this one) and kinda hard to read, but this one has low BPM and you set SV=1.8. One thing for sure is using 1/8 isn't prohibitted or something so that would be mapper's & player's choice. (And seems 1/8 sound actually appears with some part of this song, so don't mind this too much.)
- Hitburst is kinda bad for playing Taiko, but we can't do something current system of skinning, so no way to fix it for now. (At least this one is kinda transparent)
- There are big notes stream with 1/4. It's kinda tricky to decide this one is ok or not cause SV=1.8 and this one has BPM 100 and most importantly we don't have any strict standard about this yet.
01:24:590 (254) - Maybe d? (aka r)
02:24:590 (557) - ^
02:28:190 (573) - ^
03:16:190 (100) - ^
03:50:840 (257) - add d? (aka r)
04:10:340 (1) - lol loooooong spinner (np with me though~)

Anyway, here's star.

lepidopodus wrote:

W, wait, I didn't ask to remove that spinner ㅇㅅㅇ I said 'no problem with me'

wmfchris wrote:

It's just requested by other modders :3

gowww wrote:

nice song & nice map XD

Faust wrote:

Well...I TRIED to mod it.
And then I was wondering why your Beatmap was sort of...flawless. Then I came into this thread and then lolwtfstars.

This mapset is fine as it is. It conforms, and it's playable. That SB is pretty and well-done. I can only give you praise.
It's good to go, in my opinion.

arien666 wrote:

Very good mapsets ;_;

Good luck :3...

chamelepeace710 wrote:

ahhhhh.... so beautiful....

Hard
00:48:596 (6) add new combo
00:50:246 (1) remove combo
00:51:296 (4) add new combo
00:52:946 (1) remove combo
00:53:696 (3) add combo
01:07:796 (6) add combo
01:09:446 (1) remove combo
01:10:196 (2) add combo
02:53:396 (7) add combo
03:19:196 (1) remove combo
03:20:096 (2) add combo

great job....... and star!

edit: almost forgot, take a look at the storyboard in the taiko diff. if you really have to, change the Beatmap By Backstep to Taiko Map By Wmf.

Sumea wrote:

I liked the hard difficulty.
Had nice fast pace to it but was not hard to follow - I did miss a few initially but it is more for own mistake, I think by now the map if pretty much spot on!

Enjoy to see more Haru songs in osu!.

James2250 wrote:

-You have an empty osb file in your folder, delete it ok.
-Include a hit circle approach circle from the template skin in your folder ok.
-Kiai time needs to start and end at the same places on Easy/Normal/Hardok.
-Looking at your spinner around the center it seems to move around alot, do you intend for this? (otherwise fix) I intend it,I don't change it.
-Maybe make the spinner approach circle a darker blue so it is easier to see? ok.
-Change "Thank for playing" to "Thanks for playing" Now I don't have photoshop.if I have freetime,I'll fix.
-Your sb load goes over 5 for certain parts of the map (for more than a few seconds) try and lower this if possible
-Combo burst 0 and 1 looks better flipped horizontally in my opinion
-A few of the combo bursts could have some some transparency (look at them carefully) example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/29218

Easy:
00:57:596 (2) - might not be good for an easy (alot of repeats)
01:13:196 (4,5,1) - align?
01:15:596 (2,3) - might not be good for an easy
01:47:996 (4) - add note?
01:52:796 (3) - ^
01:57:596 (1) - remove new combo
02:10:796 (4,5,1) - make sure spacing stays equal
03:16:196 (3) - could be slightly more symmetrical
03:35:996 (2,4) - align
04:22:196 (1,3) - ^

Normal:
00:41:396 (1) - could be slightly more symmetrical
00:41:396 (1,3) - align these two and put 00:43:196 (2) in the middle of them
01:10:196 (2,3,4,5,1) - align both sides of this?
02:01:796 (7,1) - try and avoid anti jumps
03:04:496 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a nicer pattern?
03:22:196 (2) - could be slightly more symmetrical (go though and check all of these..nazi though)
03:42:296 (6,1) - would look better centered on the curve

Hard:
Kind of low stats for a Hard (I suggest +1 to HP/OD/AR)
03:30:596 - add break here
03:35:996 (8,1) - stacking is off

Taiko:
01:11:096 (181,182,183) - don't have a finish at the end here
Only error I see
Thanks for a lot suggestion all note fixed.
Maps are looking nice but I don't think you are quite ready for bubble yet

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Revived!!

cheukhin1985 wrote:

yay it's revived!!!!! <3
i luv this beatmap~

Teta wrote:

Remove "Instrumental" from tags, since it's already in the title.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

But what's "viotex" in the tags? °° Album.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

What's this map doing still here °°

I see lots of improvements since the first time i had a look at the map, I'm glad
I'd like to instabubble because everything is enjoyable, but:

Unsnapped notes on taiko ;~;
Also, about Taiko's storyboard: maybe you can end the mapper's name's storyboard when the map ends? It's not that useful to have it until the end of the song.

Everything else is fine, so call me back as soon as you fix it and i'll bubble.

But what's "viotex" in the tags? °°

EDIT: oh and a kudosu star because this map impressed me, even if it won't raise the priority that much.

Thanks a lot Card'NForce
Now I studying in school when I come back to home I'll fix it.
Kudosu award!

Seems like we're finally done with fixing this beauty :3

Bubble~

regenz wrote:

Take this for your high effort of mapper. My pink star.

Gratz

Mafiamaster wrote:

Hello! "thank for playing.png" isn't being used in the storyboard.
If you could fix that and fix the sentence (should be... "Thanks for playing")
Other than that, I don't see anything else wrong with this map set. I'd be happy to rank it once that's fixed.

Edit : please bubble and rank again. (unbubble when I updated.)

regenz wrote:

เรื่องนี้สอนให้รู้ว่าการได้ฟองแล้วทำการอัพเดทแมปด้วยกรณีใดก็ตาม ฟองแตกนะจ๊ะ
เคสทดลองหมายเลข 1

Mafiamaster wrote:

Great!

Ranked. Awesome map set and SB btw.

chamelepeace710 wrote:

It's about time!!!! Great Job!!

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hooray~
finally ranked
Congratz backstep

indyinyou wrote:

ยินดีด้วย ~ แร้งแล้ว

dNextGen wrote:

10/10

nice song and relaxing map

Xgor wrote:

Sorry for being such a bother but... Shouldn't this have Natsukage (Instrumental) as the title
Makes little sense that two maps with the same song has different titles...
(Yes I know that Natsukage = Summer Shadow in English but it's still pretty weird.)

regenz wrote:

ยินดีด้วย จบคลาสแล้ว !!

No more things to teach you please help newbie how makking a map also.

ซึ๊ง ศิษย์ตูแร้งแล้ว คนที่2แล้วเ้ห้ย

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Natsukage means Summer Shadow (afaik)

Oops nevermind, i didn't read all of the post :X

Anyway, grats on your first rank, backstep ^^

backstep wrote:

regenz wrote:

ยินดีด้วย จบคลาสแล้ว !!

No more things to teach you please help newbie how makking a map also.

ซึ๊ง ศิษย์ตูแร้งแล้ว คนที่2แล้วเ้ห้ย

Rank ตั้งแต่เที่ยงละ - -

กะจะบอกแต่ดันไม่ออนเอ็ม

ปล. เกลียด Hacker ว่ะ แมร่งให้แร้งค์โวทน่าถีบมาก 1/10,4/10,5/10 งี้อ่ะ
PS.I hate hacker when vote my beatmap (exsample. 1/10,4/10,5/10 )