4DGeneral: use ar 9.5. a four dimensions diff with ar 9? this aint FD4D man. also suits the velocity of the song
i've been getting a lot of opinions about suitable ar. I orginally had it as 9.5 but was recommended 9. So I'm going to try out 9.3 for now ahahah00:42:374 (3) - come on man you can do better than that!
changed with kibble's mod00:47:086 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - and similar parts. as from what youve seen from my hard diffs, i always keep the distance large enough for a follow line to be visible so they dont look so clustered/cluttered. try doing the same.
ok, i like it00:55:882 (5,6,7,8) - try doing this. it helps with emphasis
http://puu.sh/n7hLS/7ead2c7156.jpg done01:08:904 (2,3) - overmap
why did i even01:14:558 (10,11,12) - try doing this
http://puu.sh/n7hRI/181b1e723f.jpg coz you got that back and forth motion with the last two sliders. making a stack triple kinda kills the fun.
interesting, i'm a little bit iffy on the flow but I think it's better given the previous patterning as you said01:13:301 (6) - you forgot to NC i bet
i need to figure out the nc stuff01:14:715 (1) - also here if you didnt know
01:14:715 (12) - and here
01:19:270 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - pls make the same DS :c i dont see a reason as to why this isnt consistent
they look consistent to me; they were all snapped with 0.8x. There's like a variation of 0.04x here and there lol01:21:940 (8,9,10,11,1) - this stream feels too slow if you listen to the song. space em out!
http://puu.sh/n7i3V/e8b4215f2e.jpg i did that.
using the same ds as I did throughout the first kiai, 0.8x also 01:21:469 (6,1) - theres an overlap you couldve avoided so fix that as well.
yes01:34:820 (9) - NC coz downbeat
don't agree here because (9) is part of both the piano riff and the pattern01:36:076 (6) - NC coz new music part
agree01:39:374 (5) - at the speed of where your cursor is moving, i suggest to space this out more
http://puu.sh/n7i8W/c863d3b964.jpg moved01:44:872 (9) - NC
as above01:46:442 (4,7,10) - NC for that sweet emphasis coz
oh my god 01:50:526 (2,3,4,5) - try mapping to the piano instead. theyre more powerful
changed01:51:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - try dividing these streams into sets of 4, like this
http://puu.sh/n7iij/6623e471e0.jpg. fix any spacing issues that may arise. for that entire part, this is how i remade it
http://puu.sh/n7im7/188fb1d67a.jpg mm, I'm stressing the 3/4 accented pitches in the piano line01:54:767 (12) - this note seems kinda hard to read coz its covered by that last stream. the attention of the player wouldnt be on the stream but rather somewhere else such as forward. supporting my idea for this, try moving this here
http://puu.sh/n7iqf/d79c8c52a2.jpg flows alot better as well!
kibble mentioned this and i took your suggestion02:06:233 (1) - you did a 1/1 gap for 02:04:976 (1) - coz there was no beat to represent, so using a repeat slider would kinda be overmap lol. just put a hitcircle since thats the only thing that makes sense anyway.
there is a beat on the repeat, it's in the drum line.02:09:060 (2) - 1/8 slider pls
yeah, and manually stacked because of kibble's concern02:10:003 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - these are in beats of 4
as in kibble's mod, i don't agree02:12:516 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
^02:15:343 (2,3,4,1,2) - lmao these are random. why not do the same things as you did on the last part? remember; beats of 4.
i want to give the player a small break, but will definitely get more opinions02:21:626 (2,3,4,5) - lol whats with you and groups of 3 o-o use this rhythm
http://puu.sh/n7iNV/d755128570.jpg it's in the music man! ;w;02:22:804 (3) - make this into a kickslider so that the next note has emphasis
http://puu.sh/n7k7e/f5034b4681.jpg and
http://puu.sh/n7k7E/85a7969b63.jpg <-- shit examples
yes, remapped02:25:709 (1) - NC
disagree, but NC on (10)02:28:380 (8) - use a faster slider lol your streams are moving at sanic speed and then this slider is snail
uehue==there are alot of NC problems in this map so ill point them out in another notice box==
02:36:233 (1) - ctrl g'iing this is literally 200% better than what you have currently.
ayy lmao02:43:144 (7) - ctrl g this and place it here 183:288 coz this note has emphasis.
agree but stacked on (1)02:46:914 - totally mappable beat you couldnt mapped
idek how i missed all of these02:57:594 (1) - this position is super uncomfortable to play lol.. try placing it here
http://puu.sh/n7ja4/be8d38dd11.jpg stack it with 02:56:338 (1) -
ok 02:59:008 (1) - consider ctrl g'ing this
ya02:59:479 (2) - ^ apply this mod if you apply the above one, coz these work hand in hand for flow.
butt03:14:086 (1) - i would expect aLOT more spacing than this coz of the loudness of this part. try doing this
http://puu.sh/n7jkL/d72b868735.jpg spaced further away but didn't use the new slider03:20:054 (1) - AIRMAN AIRMAN
kek03:33:876 (3,4,5,6) - consider using a repeat slider for this coz the sound supporting this stream isnt that strong. (not strong enough for a full stream at least)
disagree here... personal preference and I've had this before03:35:368 (3) - place in here 03:35:447 - also arrange the notes so they look like this. apparently your positioning rn is illegal.
http://puu.sh/n7krU/31ac62ede9.jpg disagree with the timeline move but I did this with kibble's mod LOL03:35:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - and similar parts: it might be just me but this stream seems too fast for this part of the song lol. i mean the song is super quiet and calm and suddenly speed stream.
i think it's fine, but we'll see how this changes with more mods03:53:352 (2) - 1/16 slider pls
i cant even deal with u03:54:295 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1) - remember. these are 4 hit patters, not 3.
u LIE04:40:630 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - NC them in groups of 3, not 2.
http://puu.sh/n7jAw/9b1ee353bd.jpg oooo04:59:949 (1) - idk why but placing this note in 512:193 feels so much better
but symmetry ;w;