Done, Thanks Odaril
(although chaning the title caused a little problem... but it was fixed )
(although chaning the title caused a little problem... but it was fixed )
Thanks for the help.roflninja wrote:
Hi,
[easy]
00:11:539 (1) - end at 00:13:323 or 00:13:485 ? Fixed.
00:26:468 (2) - unsnapped Fixed.
00:29:458 (1,2) - move forward 1/4 tick so there on red ticks Fixed.
00:44:215 (1) - move forward 1/4 tick so it starts/ends on white ticks Fixed.
01:12:107 (2) - ^ Fixed.
[normal]
00:44:215 (1) - start at 00:44:296 and end at 00:45:918 ? It does sound alot better like that.
[hard]
00:35:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe do something like this? Fixed.
01:08:458 (x) - add something like this? Seems better.
[insane]
00:18:674 (5) - new combo? Sure, why not
00:19:161 (1) - if you do ^ no new combo?
00:23:782 (5) - start at 00:23:864 and end at the same time, and new combo? Fixed.
00:24:431 (1) - start at 00:24:350 and end at the same (and if you do the new combo on ^, no new combo?) Fixed.
00:29:458 (1) - move to 00:29:539 ? Sounds better.
00:34:080 (1) - no new combo? Fixed.
00:35:782 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - move forward 1/4 tick so (3) starts at 00:35:864 and (9) at 00:36:350 ? Fixed.
00:43:242 (3,4,5) - move forward 1/4 tick Fixed.
00:44:377 (6) - ^ Fixed.
00:57:836 (2) - ^ Fixed.
01:01:918 (5) - move to 01:01:972 ? Fixed.
01:02:350 (1) - move to 01:02:458 ? Fixed.
01:02:728 (2) - move to 01:02:782 ? Fixed.
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move forward 1/4 tick? Fixed.
01:14:620 (6) - end at 01:15:431 ? Fixed.
ThanksLeorda wrote:
Ohai
[General]
1) I think Audio Lead-in is 2, maybe? Please set the Lead-in 2, and make sure you set Lead-in 2 on each diff Fixed.
2) All bg need to resize to 800x600 Fixed.
3) Please remove the useless whistle and finish hitsound, it can be hurt player's ear Fixed.
[Easy]
00:36:999 (2) - The slider is too short for easy diff
00:39:755 (5) - ^
00:49:323 (4) - The slider is too short for easy diff
00:52:728 (2) - ^
01:02:782 (2,3) - Spacing error
01:30:026 (3) - The slider is too short for easy diff
Fixed.
[Normal]
Overall Difficulty +2
01:00:593 (2) - Move forward to red tick
01:16:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This sound is too loud
01:21:269 (3,4) - ^
Fixed.
[Hard]
00:04:080 (4) - Move 1 grid left?
01:27:431 (1,1) - Sound noisy to me
Fixed.
[Insane]
00:13:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move backward to white tick
00:21:918 (1,2,3,4) - Move forward to white tick
01:27:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This sound is too loud
Fixed.
Nice song
STAR
Thanks!I_Tatsuo_I wrote:
Hai, sorry for the long wait. Here's my mod.
[Overall]
Delete the .osb from your songs folder and full submit. Fixed.
[Hard]
I understand for your easier difficulties to map to the lyrics, but for this difficulty, you map too much to them, I suggest you fill in those empty spots with notes following the background music.
Distance snap is a bit low in this difficulty.
Fixed.
[Insane]
This difficulty makes me go blah.
This difficulty is okay.
01:07:512 (4) - Unsnapped LOL
01:07:674 (5) - ^
Fixed.
Solid mapset. Star.
*star*
[/quote]EvianBubble wrote:
Hai there :O The song ... is awesome, BTW XD
Easy
This is pretty hard for an easy ... maybe rename it Easy+? Fine to me.
I think slider velocity is pretty fast. I know it's slower than normal but it's because of your BPM. Lower it even more? Velocity seems fine to me.
I also think you should lower HP drain ... HP -1 Fixed.
Fix your green timing lines (inherited sections) - they're not on the beat Fixed.
Kiai time felt really long to me ... but during all of it the music felt right since it was obviously the chorus ... yea, just saying :S Kiai time is fine to me.
00:05:053 (4) - Move two grids right - your spacing seems to change a bit, so I'm going to choose the one that's closer together since this is an "easy" after all Seems fine the way it is.
00:13:972 (1) - This might just be me sucking at spinners (read: it probably is), but I missed the beginning of this. Repeatedly. Maybe start this at 00:14:134 (the white tick) instead? Its fine how it is.
00:15:269 (2, 3) - Unstack these. I thought they were a beat apart, but they're a beat and a half. Move (2) down until there's 2 grids in between it and (3) (that is, outside the yellow outer circle) (I'm not too sure about the space in between, but I suggest 2 or 3 grids). The spacing SHOULD help figure out when to hit (3) I believe that having these stacked is fine.
Normal
This is pretty hard for a normal too ... I can usually pass them on the first go and I was like T_T (but I'm kind of a noob at Osu! so ... that might be it XD) Call it Normal+? Its fine how it is...
Oh god. The HP drain D: especially with the random breaks. HP -1 Its fine...
01:06:674 - Please put Kiai time directly onto the beat here[Fixed.
01:19:972 (2) - What is with the design of this slider? Why does it awkwardly go up before going down? Remove that slider point. Also, end this slider at 01:20:620 (white tick)Fixed.
01:21:269 (3) - New comboFixed.
Ugh. I wrote so much. So yea, I only got through 2 difficulties today (not sure I'd be much help on the others actually, since I fail at insanes). I'll check them with my recheck (assuming you update this by tomorrow) XD
So yea, good luck with your map!
Thanks~wmfchris wrote:
[insane]
0:02:782 (1) The vocal lasts 1/2 beats but this is a 3/4 beat slider... strange. Same as 0:04:080 Fixed.
0:05:215 (3,4,1) uneven spacing between these 3 notes. (1) left 1 grid.
0:10:566 (x) Refer to vocal add one here?
0:38:945 (3,4,5,6) make a stright line. e.g., (5) left+down 1 grid, (6) left+down 2 grids
0:50:296 (3) minor spacing problem, right 1 grid
.Fixed.
[hard]
0:23:864 (1) Adjust the ending point so that it ends on the y-axis.Fixed.
(Maybe need some breaks like hard :109 2:69, and some other in insane?)
star.
I will delete this difficulty!DiamondCrash wrote:
Normal;
01:30:026 (3) - I don't like 1/4 repeat sliders in a normal, make into a single 1/2 long slider.
Fixed.
Hard;
00:55:809 (3) - End on the white tick.
01:02:377 (1,2) - 1/4 forward.
01:04:972 (3) - ^
Fixed.
Insane;
This is stupid. None of the 1/4 notes fit or are needed. Personally, I'd delete this difficulty. Nonetheless...
00:07:728 (6) - Delete, and put the clap on the previous circle.
00:41:864 (3) - No repeat...
00:42:350 (X) - ...and put a circle here.
01:28:728 (1) - End on the red tick, like the other difficulties.
Fixed.Mashley wrote:
Offset should be 1,815. I think the difficulty names should all be shifted up.
The current combo colours look awkward against the backgrounds. Pick some more fitting ones.
Fixed.
Easy
Such a low res background here... could you use a higher quality one please?
01:08:296 - Stick some notes here, or a break? It's weird to have this empty space.
Fixed.
Normal
00:33:918 - Break here, like on easy
01:08:620 - Empty space again :
Fixed.
Hard
00:01:161 (1) - Add another reverse
00:30:674 (1) - Remove new combo
00:32:296 (1) - ^
00:36:999 (1) - ^
00:37:647 (3) - Add new combo
00:38:134 (1) - Remove new combo
00:39:431 (1) - ^
00:47:539 (1) - Remove new combo
00:51:188 (4) - Move 1/4 earlier and lengthen by 1/4
00:52:891 (1) - Remove new combo
00:53:701 (1) - ^
00:58:080 (1) - ^
00:59:377 (1) - ^
01:00:188 (12) - Add new combo
01:00:836 (14) - Shorten by 1/4
01:04:161 (1) - Remove new combo
01:07:485 (1) - ^
Thanks~0_o wrote:
Easy
00:15:274 (2,3) - Stacked notes like this are pretty tricky for newbies since the hitcircle of the bottom one is obscured. I would recommend unstacking them.
00:16:733 (1) - Remove new combo
01:08:463 (1) - Recovering after spinners is one of the trickiest techniques to get down for new players. Personally I think it plays fine to remove this and make this into a little break.
01:25:490 (1,1,2,3) - Same as above. Although personally, I would map the spot where you have the spinner now, and have a spinner from 01:27:436 - 01:28:733 to finish the map. Makes a better ending imo.
Fixed.
Normal
00:02:139 (2,3) - Perhaps make these a vertical flip of each other? Also I would move 3 over to the right and up a little bit to line it up with 2 and to avoid the ugly overlap.
01:09:923 (1) - Hmm, this sounds better ending 1/2 later, but that would make it too long.. maybe make this into a 1/1 length repeat slider?
01:25:652 - Same advice as Easy
Fixed.
Hard
00:34:896 (1) - Extend by 1/2
00:48:517 (1,2,3) - Spacing ;_;
01:09:274 - Why the empty space?>_< Dammit I knew I was missing something there!
Fixed.
^_^
*
Thanks~SadKangaroo wrote:
[Easy]
01:10:896 (1) - I suggest you to start Kiai from here. Its fine where it starts now.
[Normal]
00:11:058 (3) - 1 grid right?
00:33:112 (3) - End it at 00:33:436.
Fixed.
[Hard]
00:27:598 (6) - Something wrong with it.How about using these notes:(00:27:598,00:28:085,00:28:571)
Fixed.
Oh,and one more thing: Think of reducing hitsound volume a bit.
Thanks~Garven wrote:
As per your request:
[Normal]
Wow, pretty fast slider speed on a Normal - especially compared to the easy slider speed (.8 vs 1.4?)
00:43:652 (2) - Why is this ending on a blue tick?
Other than the crazy slider speed, not bad.
I remapped this diff...lowered the slider velocity.
[Hard]
00:18:679 (1) - Another one ending on a blue tick? Sounds odd.
00:23:869 (1) - ^
00:50:301 (3) - ^
01:10:571 - I was kind of expecting a note Here.
Fixed.