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Dailycare wrote:

#Project Korean Air

Down's Normal

00:03:617 (1) - 00:07:095 (1) - 뉴콤보를 해제하셔두 될 것 같은데.. ! 저번모딩에서도 나왔는데 안고쳤었네요.. fix
00:08:834 (1) - 블랭킷 흠..맞아보이는데
00:17:964 - 부터 00:19:703 - 까지가 좀 많이 허전해요. 00:12:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - 과 스피너를 이렇게 만드시고 스피너가 끝나는 부분을 일찍 앞당기신 다음 노트를 넣는게 어떨까요?! 그냥 제 생각이니까 참고만 해주세요 네.. 사실 앞당겨서 노트넣어보자고 생각도 했었는데 스피너가 끝나는자리가 그러면 너무 어색한자리밖에 없어서 그대로 둘려고 합니다.
00:37:529 (4) - ^ 이것은 뭘까욤
00:51:007 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제 fix
00:52:746 (1) - 블랭킷 모르겠어요 ㅠㅜ
00:56:224 (1,2,3) - 이 슬라이더들의 배치를 좀 더 이쁘게 해주세용.. 나름 고쳐봤습니다.
01:03:181 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제하는게 좋지않을까요? fix
01:04:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 음 제가 듣기에는 어색한 박자였습니다. 01:18:833 (1,2,3,4) - 이런 식으로 바꾸는 것도 한 번 생각해보세요 아마 (3)번슬라때문에 그렇게 느끼신건지도 몰라서 (3)번슬라와 (4)번 노트의 순서를 바꿧습니다.
01:23:181 (2) - 이것도 저는 01:24:920 (2,3) - 처럼 노트 두개를 놓는게 더 좋아보여요 그러면 살짝 지루해질것 같아서 두겠습니당



어.. 적용이 Down님 노말을 고친 걸로 바꿨다는 말인가요? 그렇다면 제가 친구 만나러 나가기 전에 모딩하는거라 다시 봐드릴 수가 없어서 죄송합니당.. ;w; //하지만 이때바뀐것이 얼마없다는것이 함정

Down wrote:

Dailycare wrote:

#Project Korean Air

Down's Normal

00:03:617 (1) - 00:07:095 (1) - 뉴콤보를 해제하셔두 될 것 같은데.. ! 저번모딩에서도 나왔는데 안고쳤었네요.. fix
00:08:834 (1) - 블랭킷 흠..맞아보이는데
00:17:964 - 부터 00:19:703 - 까지가 좀 많이 허전해요. 00:12:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - 과 스피너를 이렇게 만드시고 스피너가 끝나는 부분을 일찍 앞당기신 다음 노트를 넣는게 어떨까요?! 그냥 제 생각이니까 참고만 해주세요 네.. 사실 앞당겨서 노트넣어보자고 생각도 했었는데 스피너가 끝나는자리가 그러면 너무 어색한자리밖에 없어서 그대로 둘려고 합니다.
00:37:529 (4) - ^ 이것은 뭘까욤
00:51:007 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제 fix
00:52:746 (1) - 블랭킷 모르겠어요 ㅠㅜ
00:56:224 (1,2,3) - 이 슬라이더들의 배치를 좀 더 이쁘게 해주세용.. 나름 고쳐봤습니다.
01:03:181 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제하는게 좋지않을까요? fix
01:04:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 음 제가 듣기에는 어색한 박자였습니다. 01:18:833 (1,2,3,4) - 이런 식으로 바꾸는 것도 한 번 생각해보세요 아마 (3)번슬라때문에 그렇게 느끼신건지도 몰라서 (3)번슬라와 (4)번 노트의 순서를 바꿧습니다.
01:23:181 (2) - 이것도 저는 01:24:920 (2,3) - 처럼 노트 두개를 놓는게 더 좋아보여요 그러면 살짝 지루해질것 같아서 두겠습니당



어.. 적용이 Down님 노말을 고친 걸로 바꿨다는 말인가요? 그렇다면 제가 친구 만나러 나가기 전에 모딩하는거라 다시 봐드릴 수가 없어서 죄송합니당.. ;w; //하지만 이때바뀐것이 얼마없다는것이 함정

감사합니다~
http://puu.sh/m19Uh/c6fffb06b0.zip

Dailycare wrote:

헤헤 제가 이걸 나가기 전 30분 내에 하다보니.. 더군다나 노말을 마지막에 해서! 제가 봐도 정신이 없네요 .. 죄송합니다 ;w;

1. 00:06:225 (3,4) - It would be nice to add whistles here for the piano sounds. Same goes for 00:07:747 (2) - and 00:02:747 (3) - and 00:12:312 (1) -
2. 00:33:616 (4,1) - and 00:37:094 (4) - It's a bit of a waste really. There's so many piano notes that you miss out on sounding

1. 00:11:660 (4) - I suggest this pattern instead to better map to the vocals, where the circle is the piano note and the slider indicates the vocals.

1. 00:08:834 (1) - You can probably improve this blanket a lot more by only using 3 anchor points, rather than several more.
2. 00:37:529 (4) - Not sure if this is suggesting a blanket, but it's way off.
3. 00:58:833 - I would add a break here to keep in line with the rest of the difficulties

DahplA wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:06:225 (3,4) - It would be nice to add whistles here for the piano sounds. Same goes for 00:07:747 (2) - and 00:02:747 (3) - and 00:12:312 (1) -
   00:12:312 (1) I agree with this, so fixed. but I didn't used whistle in this section to emphasize something...
2. 00:33:616 (4,1) - and 00:37:094 (4) - It's a bit of a waste really. There's so many piano notes that you miss out on soundingif I followed piano sound mainly, It would be a real waste

[Hard]

1. 00:11:660 (4) - I suggest this pattern instead to better map to the vocals, where the circle is the piano note and the slider indicates the vocals. nice idea I think, so fixed

The only main problem I found was that there wasn't enough hitsound emphasis on the piano notes. Other than that, completely fine set. Good luck.

SkinnyJommy wrote:

NM from my queue ayyyyyy

[Insane]

1. 00:19:486 (7,1) - ugly overlap here D: I agree... but It's stacked with previous slider... I agree, but It's also a stacked with previous slider..
   
2. 00:28:398 (1,4) - you should stack these!if you do this you would need to move 00:29:485 (6) - to 192. 164fix
   
3. 00:58:833 (3) - you could move this to 431, 347 because it creates a triangular sort of shape between the sliders! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4180543slider head, circle triangle
   
   [Hard]
   
4. 00:04:269 (2) - I think this would be better if you changed this to a 1/1 slider that extends to the next red tick that would be nice too, but It's hard to fix now(maybe I should fix almost entire map)and it's okay now i think
   
5. 00:39:703 (2,3,4) - 1/3 spacing like this is going to be really hard to read here... i wuold just stick to a 1/3 slider and leave that sort of pattern for insanes/extras oh, everybody thinks it's not good.. so this time I fixed
   
6. 00:41:442 (2,3,4) - same

well thats it for my mod! the background looks so high quality holy moly

gl with this

-Nya- wrote:

Heya~ From my M4M queue~

General:

1. Not sure why but I see two mp3’s and two OSB files in the song’s folder: fixed
   
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   This may be a problem at my side or not. If it’s not, I’m not sure if this is allowed. Rather doublecheck with a QAT or BN.
2. It looks like the normal-hitclap2 soundfile has a delay: now I'm checking... ->fixed
   
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   It would be a good idea to check with someone else as well and confirm this, since it’s unrankable if there is a delay.

Insane:

1. 00:08:182 (3,2) –Try to stack this by moving 00:08:834 (1,2) –around a bit.fix
2. 00:12:964 (2,4) –I don’t really think it’s a good idea to stack notes like this since it prevents smooth flow, so I rather suggest you space the circles out normally. There are more of these that are similar but I’m not going to point out every single one. fix
3. 00:21:008 (6,1) –Personally I would perfect this stack. first, I didn't. But to have consistency, I fixed.
4. 00:56:224 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –This rhythm choice might throw players off guard. I suggest using sliders as well to make that pattern more readable.well...I don't want to touch this pattern...if it can really be problem, I will then.
5. 01:05:790 (3,6) –This doesn’t look nice. I suggest you perfect the stack. fix
6. 01:27:528 (9) – Placing a new combo here might be a cool idea, since there’s a very strong and distinct beat here. If you decide to follow this suggestion then remember to do this in the other diffs as well. fix

Hard:

1. 00:11:660 (4,5) –Perfect this stack. It looks weird. lol why I did like that.. fix
2. 00:21:224 (4) –Same thing as Insane about the stacking thing. fix
3. 00:23:181 (1) –I would maybe place a small jump here since that beat on the head of the slider is quite strong. fix
4. 00:36:442 (3,1) –Rather not curve these sliders too much. They tend to look ugly then. fix
5. 00:41:442 (2) –The tail of this slider is grazing the HP bar slightly. I suggest you lower it a bit. fix as I can
6. 01:26:224 (3,2) –Bleh, perfect the stack.fix

Nice mapset overall.
Good Luck~!

DahplA wrote:

[Down's Normal]

1. 00:08:834 (1) - You can probably improve this blanket a lot more by only using 3 anchor points, rather than several more.
2. 00:37:529 (4) - Not sure if this is suggesting a blanket, but it's way off. fix
3. 00:58:833 - I would add a break here to keep in line with the rest of the difficulties fix

SkinnyJommy wrote:

NM from my queue ayyyyyy

[Down's Normal]

[*]00:05:356 (1,2) - the blanket at the head of 2 is a bit off Yes.. but It is hard to fix

[*]00:36:442 (2,3) - This will definitely be confusing for beginner players, its a really big tempo increase from the long sliders before this, and on top of that its a stack, which is even more harder to read :C I think it's okay

[*]00:36:659 (3,4) - Fix blanket! fix

[*]00:43:181 (3,4,5) - Keep the same distance snap between everything in normal's / easy's PLEASEEEEEEE fix

[*]00:56:224 (1,2,3) - please no overlaps at all either, this is really bad Can't follow the beat if so. [/list]

well thats it for my mod! the background looks so high quality holy moly

gl with this

-Nya- wrote:

Heya~ From my M4M queue~

Down’s Normal:

1. Not sure if 4.5 as an approach rate would be fine for the easiest diff. I remember one of my maps getting DQ’s because I set the AR to 5. An AR of 4 is definitely acceptable though. You can doublecheck this with a QAT though, just to make sure 4.5 is safe. fix to ar4
2. 00:08:834 (1) –Uhh, ugly shape. I understand that you absolutely want to perfect that blanket but I think you can still make a nice blanket with a normal curved slider as well. Rather not make ugly curved sliders to perfect a blanket. I don't think this is ugly. The deployment of this way my mapping style.
3. 00:14:486 (1,1) –There has to be four beats between the spinner and the next note in the easiest diff. I think right now there are 3 beats. To be safe you can end the spinner here: 00:17:530 – fix
4. 01:06:659 (4) –Ugly shape. I agree. fix
5. 01:23:181 (2) –I think it’s better to end the slider here: 01:23:616 – fix

Nice mapset overall.
Good Luck~!

UnLock- wrote:

사실 배경이 니토리 아니더라도 상관없음 ㅎ

• [Down's Normal]

1. 00:19:268 - 서클 여기서부터 시작해도 될거같네요.
2. 00:36:442 (2,3) - 노멀 난이도에서 스택서클은 추천하지 않습니다. 큰 문제는 없겠지만 스택 푸시는걸 권장합니다.
3. 00:44:050 (4) - 뉴콤보 넣어주세요
4. 00:48:398 (5) - 뉴콤보
5. 00:49:268 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제
6. 00:55:355 (5) - 뉴콤보
7. 00:56:224 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제
8. 00:56:224 (1) - 뉴콤보
9. 01:25:790 (1,2,1,2) - 최하위 난이도 에서 이건좀 어렵다고 생각되는 패턴이네요. 1/2슬라이더로 하지마시고
   01:25:790 - 01:26:224 - 01:26:659 - 01:27:094 - 여기다가 서클 하나씩만 놔주시면 될거같아요.

• 
  [Hard]

1. 00:03:617 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
2. 00:04:921 (3) - 뉴콤
3. 00:05:356 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
4. 00:07:095 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
5. 00:08:182 (4) - 뉴콤
6. 00:08:834 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
7. 00:09:921 (3) - 뉴콤
8. 00:10:573 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
9. 00:11:660 (4) - 뉴콤
10. 00:33:616 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
11. 00:37:094 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
12. 00:37:963 (4) - 뉴콤
13. 00:38:833 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
14. 00:55:355 (3) - 리피트 슬라이더 2개만 줄여주세요 오버매핑같습니다.

• 
  [Insane]

1. 00:04:921 (4) - 뉴콤
2. 00:05:356 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
3. 00:07:095 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
4. 00:08:182 (3) - 뉴콤
5. 00:08:834 (1) - 뉴콤풀어주세요
6. 00:09:921 (3) - 뉴콤
7. 00:58:290 - 제생각엔 여기 서클 하나 필요할거같은데 패턴상 넣기가 애매하네요. 가능하시다면 여기다가 서클하나 추가해주세요.
8. 01:03:616 (2) -
   이렇게 해보세요

   
9. 01:11:007 (5,6,7,8) - 패턴이 부자연스럽고 어색하네요. 추천드리는 모양은 삼각형이나 완벽한 사각형입니다. 시도해보세요.
   지적드린 뉴콤이외에도 신경쓸 부분이 보이니 뉴콤보 전체난이도 신경써주세요.

VTC wrote:

From my queue.

• [Down's Normal]

1. 00:19:268 - 서클 여기서부터 시작해도 될거같네요. 아까 BN이와서 슬라후에 4비트 비어두라고 하셔서 넣을수가 없겠네요..
2. 00:36:442 (2,3) - 노멀 난이도에서 스택서클은 추천하지 않습니다. 큰 문제는 없겠지만 스택 푸시는걸 권장합니다. 블랭킷도 되어있어서 고치기가 어려울것 같습니다. 큰 문제가 없다고하시니 일단 두겠습니다.
3. 00:44:050 (4) - 뉴콤보 넣어주세요 fix
4. 00:48:398 (5) - 뉴콤보 fix
5. 00:49:268 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제 fix
6. 00:55:355 (5) - 뉴콤보 fix
7. 00:56:224 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제 fix
8. 00:56:224 (1) - 뉴콤보 fix
9. 01:25:790 (1,2,1,2) - 최하위 난이도 에서 이건좀 어렵다고 생각되는 패턴이네요. 1/2슬라이더로 하지마시고
   01:25:790 - 01:26:224 - 01:26:659 - 01:27:094 - 여기다가 서클 하나씩만 놔주시면 될거같아요. fix

MERRY CHRISTMAS !

VTC wrote:

From my queue.

• 
  [Hard]

1. 00:03:617 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
2. 00:04:921 (3) - 뉴콤fix
3. 00:05:356 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
4. 00:07:095 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
5. 00:08:182 (4) - 뉴콤fix
6. 00:08:834 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
7. 00:09:921 (3) - 뉴콤fix
8. 00:10:573 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
9. 00:11:660 (4) - 뉴콤fix
10. 00:33:616 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
11. 00:37:094 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
12. 00:37:963 (4) - 뉴콤fix
13. 00:38:833 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
14. 00:55:355 (3) - 리피트 슬라이더 2개만 줄여주세요 오버매핑같습니다.지금 시간이 늦어져서 스피커를 못켭니다...낮에 듣고 해볼게요

• 
  [Insane]

1. 00:04:921 (4) - 뉴콤fix
2. 00:05:356 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
3. 00:07:095 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
4. 00:08:182 (3) - 뉴콤fix
5. 00:08:834 (1) - 뉴콤풀어주세요fix
6. 00:09:921 (3) - 뉴콤fix
7. 00:58:290 - 제생각엔 여기 서클 하나 필요할거같은데 패턴상 넣기가 애매하네요. 가능하시다면 여기다가 서클하나 추가해주세요.힘들듯하네요ㅠㅠ
8. 01:03:616 (2) -
   이렇게 해보세요

   
   현재가 동선 고려해볼때 더 나은 것 같습니다.
9. 01:11:007 (5,6,7,8) - 패턴이 부자연스럽고 어색하네요. 추천드리는 모양은 삼각형이나 완벽한 사각형입니다. 시도해보세요. 공간 상황상 힘들 것 같습니다...조금더 동선 자연스럽게 수정해봤어요.
   지적드린 뉴콤이외에도 신경쓸 부분이 보이니 뉴콤보 전체난이도 신경써주세요.넵 이것도 낮에 전부 체크해볼게요.

MERRY CHRISTMAS !

Left wrote:

메리 크리스마스~

1. 00:07:747 (9) - can be put right after 00:07:095 (8) - this slider so it make flow there a bit better imo , put (9) at x160 y112 q:
2. 00:11:877 (1) - why nc ? I don't think it really need nc , nothing change much here
3. 00:26:659 (1,2,3,4) - swap place of these notes so it will make flow here 00:26:224 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - better ?
4. 01:22:311 (1) - mm I think straight slider would fit here better and would make flow here 01:22:311 (1,2) - nice imo

1. 00:16:525 - I think spinner fit better than the break o.o
2. 00:30:137 (1,2,3,4) - spaced 1/4 reverse slider maybe a bit too hard , I thikn better use lower spacing like 0.7x would be better here
3. 00:31:877 (1,2,3) - mm I'm thinking that maybe if this get consistent spacing maybe it will make flow here better imo
4. 00:33:616 (3,4,1) - same
5. 01:13:616 (1,2,3) - similiar to 00:30:137 (1,2,3,4) -
   
   overall somehow idk why you change spacing a lots lol like first it 1.1x then it's go 1.2x on next note then back to 1.1x or go to 1.3x
   I think using same spacing for some notes that not sound emphasized would make thing looks a bit better imo

1. 00:08:834 (1) - I think ctrl+g this make flow here 00:07:095 (2,1,2) - better
2. 01:05:355 - it feels weird to ignore this snare , I think if you end 01:04:920 (1) - at white tick instead it will make rhythm sound better

CelsiusLK wrote:

as requested
[down]

1. 00:08:834 (1) - I think ctrl+g this make flow here 00:07:095 (2,1,2) - better fix
2. 01:05:355 - it feels weird to ignore this snare , I think if you end 01:04:920 (1) - at white tick instead it will make rhythm sound better fix

good luck

CelsiusLK wrote:

as requested

[insane]

1. 00:07:747 (9) - can be put right after 00:07:095 (8) - this slider so it make flow there a bit better imo , put (9) at x160 y112 q:fix
2. 00:11:877 (1) - why nc ? I don't think it really need nc , nothing change much herefix
3. 00:26:659 (1,2,3,4) - swap place of these notes so it will make flow here 00:26:224 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - better ?fix
4. 01:22:311 (1) - mm I think straight slider would fit here better and would make flow here 01:22:311 (1,2) - nice imofix

[hard]

1. 00:16:525 - I think spinner fit better than the break o.ofix
2. 00:30:137 (1,2,3,4) - spaced 1/4 reverse slider maybe a bit too hard , I thikn better use lower spacing like 0.7x would be better herefix
3. 00:31:877 (1,2,3) - mm I'm thinking that maybe if this get consistent spacing maybe it will make flow here better imofix
4. 00:33:616 (3,4,1) - samefix
5. 01:13:616 (1,2,3) - similiar to 00:30:137 (1,2,3,4) - fix
   
   overall somehow idk why you change spacing a lots lol like first it 1.1x then it's go 1.2x on next note then back to 1.1x or go to 1.3x
   I think using same spacing for some notes that not sound emphasized would make thing looks a bit better imoI'm trying to fix now but It takes too many change..

good luck

Really Thanks for accepting my request and Thank you again for modding!

1. 00:57:963 (1) - Why new combo

1. 00:04:921 (1) - Should remove NC and move to 00:05:356 (2) - because big white tick is important to make new combo
2. 01:22:963 - You miss something here

Chibi Maruko wrote:

From my queue

Hard

1. 00:57:963 (1) - Why new combofix

Insane

1. 00:04:921 (1) - Should remove NC and move to 00:05:356 (2) - because big white tick is important to make new combofix
2. 01:22:963 - You miss something herewell...

This map too great, I can mod like short ;_;
Ok, gl with ur map \:D/

byfar wrote:

Hello, from mod queue

General

Normal

• 
  looks fine

Hard

1. 01:03:181 (1,2) - super cramped (almost touching even), spread out a little fix
2. 00:51:877 (3,4) - ^well...
3. 01:04:050 (3,4,5) - - i'd swap this rhythm here. you should make this 01:04:050 (3,4) - a 1/2 slider and this 01:04:485 (5) - 2 1/2 circles. this emphasizes the rhythm better. the vocals lands over here 01:04:485 (5) -, so you want to emphasize that. fix

Insane

1. 00:09:921 (1,2,3,4) - space this out like you did over here? in my opinion the stacks don't fit here fix
2. 00:23:182 (1,2) - perhaps these two sliders can be spaced out more for aesthetic purposes? so that it doesn't look super cramped. http://puu.sh/mf69J/440061cce1.jpg fix
3. 00:25:791 (3,4) - same reason as above^ I have no idea how to move it..
4. 00:37:963 (7,8) - ^ for DS...
5. 00:42:311 (1,2,3,4) - ^ since the visual distance (as in spacing between sliders) is larger here 00:39:485 (2,3,4,5,6) - , why does the visual distance suddenly decrease with no indication from the music? compare http://puu.sh/mf6iY/c62937beb4.jpg to http://puu.sh/mf6jC/b6689af039.jpg fix
6. 00:29:485 (6) - make it more in the center of the triangle? fix
7. 00:48:181 (1,2) - try something like this? http://puu.sh/mf6lH/ffae785451.jpg i think it flows better this way since the cursor motion is more zigzagged whereas your pattern before was quite linear. fix
8. 00:53:398 (3) - kind of confusing to read, space out like this? http://puu.sh/mf6pd/0ca788ceec.jpg fix
9. 00:54:703 (2) - make it face the flow direction like this? http://puu.sh/mf6tm/21cae90837.jpg fix
10. 00:55:137 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - the flow is a bit off here. as a tip, try to imagine the 1/4 sliders as a 1/2 circle and see if it will flow. fix
11. 01:04:920 (1,2) - very cramped fix
12. 01:03:181 (1,2) - ^ well..
    
    cool diff

gl

amusing_zero wrote:

my browser reset my mod, i'm crying ...

So ... I write the mod again.
Firstly, try to make one more kiai here 01:15:355 - well...


Hard is ok, but
01:26:007 (2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5,6) - is confusing, so try to change it as it is very difficult to play I think it's okay..

Insane could be more difficult if you weren't trying to hide the notes
00:13:834 (4) - is the example I changed another one.
00:08:399 (2,3) - ^
ask for more examples if you need to
also in some places combos are too long (check streams)

amusing_zero wrote:

my browser reset my mod, i'm crying ...

Normal:
00:01:878 (1) - end it here and put a note on the white tick
00:03:617 (2) - start this slider here and make it shorter as the first
00:04:921 - put smth here
00:08:834 (1) - separate it onto 2 sliders
00:17:964 - put a note here pls
00:23:833 (3) - move it to the white tick and shorten the slider a bit
00:27:963 (3) - remove it to solve the similar problem and move the previous slider
00:34:485 (3,4) - a slider instead of them
00:41:442 (3,4) - maybe it's the same
00:42:963 (2) - you can remove it to make the map easier
00:44:703 - a note here pls
00:51:007 (5) - end it at this time
01:08:398 (1) - make the slider twice shorter and then repeat the slider
01:10:137 (1) - the same?
01:13:616 (3) - the same

[C u r i] wrote:

노말 irc

19:40 [C u r i]: 님 맵만 모딩하고 공짜쿠도스 먹을래야
19:40 [C u r i]: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
19:40 Down: ㄷㄷ
19:41 Down: 쿠도스먹기엔
19:41 [C u r i]: 우선 초반에 슬라모양좀 뜯어 고치는게 어떰..
19:41 Down: 빼애애액
19:41 Down: 전 좋은뎅
19:41 [C u r i]: 00:05:356 - 여기부터 00:10:573 - 까지..
19:42 [C u r i]: 담요를 쓰겠다는건 알겠고
19:42 [C u r i]: 다괜찮은데
19:42 [C u r i]: 너무 억지로 만든감이있음
19:42 Down: 00:08:834 (1) -
19:42 Down: 이건
19:42 Down: 자꾸 막 걸고늘어지는분들이 많은데
19:42 Down: 답이없음..
19:42 [C u r i]: 점 저렇게 많이 안찍어도
19:42 [C u r i]: 충분히 담요 됨
19:42 [C u r i]: 2점으로도 저거보다
19:42 [C u r i]: 확실한 담요 나옴
19:43 Down: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4279137
19:43 Down: 이렇게박으면 될려나요...?
19:43 [C u r i]: 그냥 1점 슬라로 박는게 
19:43 [C u r i]: 더 이뻐보임 차라리
19:45 Down: 흠
19:46 [C u r i]: 00:43:181 (3,1,2) - 요즘 매핑은 사각형보다는 원을 더 좋아함
19:47 [C u r i]: 00:56:224 (1,2,3) - 이지가 없이 최하난이도로 노말이기때문에 파란선은 쓰지않는게 좋음
19:47 Down: (나름 원이라고 만든건데)
19:48 [C u r i]: 하이라이트에 빨간선에서 시작되거나 끝나는 노트가 없는데
19:48 [C u r i]: 굉장히 박자똑으로 보면
19:48 [C u r i]: 지루하다고 생각해볼수있음
19:49 Down: 저번에 몇개있었는데
19:49 Down: BN이 치워버림
19:49 [C u r i]: 00:38:833 (1) - 점 너무 많이 찍는것도 좋진않음
19:49 [C u r i]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4279158
19:50 [C u r i]: 점을 최대한 줄여쓰는게 모딩받을때 편함
19:51 Down: 엌
19:51 Down: S자를 노린게 아니지만
19:51 Down: 바꿔볼께용
19:51 [C u r i]: 01:11:877 (1,2,3) - 이런것도 원으로 잡아주는게 좋음
19:51 Down: 오옹
19:51 [C u r i]: 쉬운난이도기때문에 무빙하기 쉽게 잡아야됨
19:52 Down: 크흑
19:52 Down: 디스턴스 다꼬일듯
19:52 Down: 천천히 바꿔보죠
19:54 Down: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4279171
19:54 Down: 1번을 살짝올려서 디스턴스조정했는데
19:54 Down: 원같아요?
19:54 Down: 아닌감..
19:55 [C u r i]: 원만들기가 어려우면
19:55 [C u r i]: 대충 타원으로 맞춰도 ㅗ딤
19:55 [C u r i]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4279181
19:56 Down: ㅇㅎ
19:56 [C u r i]: 01:04:920 (1,2,3,4) - 이것도
19:56 [C u r i]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4279185
19:56 [C u r i]: 이렇게 하면 훨씬 무빙하기 쉽잖
19:57 Down: 엌
19:57 Down: 최대한 비슷하게 맞춰봄
19:58 [C u r i]: 그냥 쉬운난이도 잘찍는법은
19:59 [C u r i]: 남의 맵 보면 됨
19:59 [C u r i]: 어려운난이도는 남 맵 봐도 따라하는게 어려운데
19:59 [C u r i]: 쉬운맵은 따라하는것도 쉬움
19:59 Down: ㅇㅋㅇㅋ
19:59 Down: 렢님이 쿠도스줄지는 모르겠지만
20:00 Down: 스레드 ㄱㄱ
20:00 [C u r i]: 01:14:485 (4,1) - 
20:00 [C u r i]: 아직 한밯ㄹ
20:00 [C u r i]: 남았다
20:00 [C u r i]: 01:14:485 (4) - 얘는 직선인데
20:00 [C u r i]: 01:15:355 (1) - 얘는 왜 곡선임
20:00 Down: !
20:00 Down: 왜그럴까요
20:01 [C u r i]: 그러게요 왜그럴까요
20:02 Down: 진짜 왜그럴까요
20:02 [C u r i]: 님 혹시 컨셉임?
20:02 [C u r i]: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
20:02 Down: 설마...
20:02 Down: 그럴리가
20:02 Down: 스레드에 올려주셔야
20:02 Down: 그전에 올라온 모딩도
20:02 Down: 같이 인용시켜서
20:02 Down: 고친줄알겠죠
20:03 [C u r i]: 이제 올리러감

328,200,14051,6,0,B|312:184|288:176|264:184|247:199|247:199|215:228|215:228|180:258|119:266|81:233|56:192|45:143|81:93|127:75|127:75|145:70,1,462.187508815527
158,159,15791,1,0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:14:051 (1) - change beat to http://puu.sh/mpfu8/91ac6225af.jpg

Milan- wrote:

hi
normal
-00:14:486 (1) - i'd extend it till 00:17:964 - , otherwise that beat is left unclickable and end sounding pretty awkward fix
-00:23:833 (3) - prefer circle+1/1 slider, sounds the best cuz as right now you pass over 00:24:050 - which doesnt sound well fix
-01:01:007 - this note is quite hard to hear, use higher volumen or add some addition to it I turned the volume up.
-00:44:050 (1) - 00:55:355 (1) - these nc are prob unintentional? fix
-kiai could use some more variation on the rhythms. especially for a normal and low bpm, pure 1/1 isnt really fun i guess

cool stuff tho
gl

Taeyang wrote:

랜덤모딩
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

• Down's Normal

1. 00:01:878 (1,2) - 개인적으론 아래와 같은 흐름 추천
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:05:356 (1,2) - 오버랩 슬라담요로 이렇게 다듬으면 더 좋을것 같습니다. 00:08:834 (1) - 여기 담요도 더 다듬고요
   아래 코드 첨부했습니다 이패턴 원하시면 메모장열어서 그래도 복붙하시면됩니다. 이부분에 대한 모딩이 엄청많던데.. 복붙해서 가져가겠습니다.
   

   218,122,1878,6,0,P|359:144|232:230,1,360
   179,197,3617,2,0,P|71:291|223:296,1,360
   252,242,5356,6,0,B|360:237|448:298|448:298|490:221|472:142,1,360
   473,66,7095,2,0,B|464:125|426:193|426:193|329:147|207:165,1,360
   197,249,8834,6,0,P|120:166|194:80,2,240
   344,160,11443,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:27:311 (2) - 너무 슬라만 나오면 밋밋하니 직선슬라도 섞어줄 필요도 있다고 생각합니다. fix
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:31:877 (1,2,3) - 리듬 추천 참고만 할께용
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:36:442 (2,3) - 이지가 없는 노말은 왠만하면 이지규정을 따라가는게 좋습니다.;가능한 맵셋전체적으로 스택 해제 해주세요 언랭사유가 될시에 고치겠습니다. 딱히 생각나는 패턴이 없네요.
6. 00:38:398 (5) - 지우고 00:37:529 (4) - 컨쥐해서 리버스리버스 00:38:833 (1) - 그후 잘담요시켜주세요 자세한건 아래 사진첨부 확인 fix
   
   SPOILER

   
   
7. 00:44:050 (1) - 뉴콤 제거하고 배치추천 좋은 배치라서 따라하다가 DS때문에 머리터질뻔ㅋㅋ 암튼 fix
   
   SPOILER

   
   
8. 00:48:398 (1) - 뉴콤 제거하고 00:49:268 (2) - 뉴콤 ;다운비트가 00:49:268 (2) - 여기네요 일정한주기로 뉴콤을 박는것을 추천해드립니다. fix
9. 00:55:355 (1) - 뉴콤 제거 이유는 위와같음 fix

Milan- wrote:

hi
insane
-00:05:356 (1) - i'd add whistle on here cuz your whole intro sounds empty due to the lack of hsfix
-00:07:095 - to 00:10:573 - didnt get why the nc pattern changed tbhfix
-00:23:943 (3) - makes more sense to start the stream from 00:24:050 - instead. since that's where the sound you're trying to cover startsfixed
-there's clear triple here 00:48:507 - but instead you map 00:48:290 - , which is really weird i'd say...I mapped vocal mainly, then drum in here
-00:56:550 (2,2) - i'd space these a bit more so it's easier to read the 3/4 gap, as right it's like your usual spacingfix
-00:57:963 (1) - this should end at 00:58:290 - it's just to clear. need to redo the pattern yesfix
-01:15:246 - i'd add a triple here instead of 01:14:811 (8) - , sounds more fitting fix
-i dont agree with several streams/triples like 00:50:245 (4,6) - , 00:55:246 (4) - , this whole thing 01:07:529 - is like overmapping the same sound that repeats before 01:04:050 - and after, and even 01:25:790 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - sounds more like http://puu.sh/mstxG/2cb4f54c0e.jpg. stuff like those arent really supported by the song imo fix

hard
-00:14:051 (1,1) - rather use the same rhythm as insane. sounds bit better i guess will be fixed by Unlock-
-01:14:485 (3,4) - i'd unstack these so it's easier to play and read for this level fix

dunno if the sb is done but:
i was wondering how precise the spectrum is, like this break 00:59:703 - shouldn't have much variation, but it has.. uhhh
also this shouldn't happen . one way to make it work is to fade in everytime you need a group of leaves instead of just moving them in
or having like 3 layers (bg, and 2 blackbg) at the beginning
not sure if it's on purpose or not but your black pics dont fit the original bg size. so no idea if you wanted to add a scale effect at the beginning and end but forgot to scale it back or wat
sakura2.png seems unused, which is good , but delete it from the folder. same with black.png

cool stuff tho
gl

Taeyang wrote:

랜덤모딩
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

• General

1. 전체적으로 특별한 이유가 없다면 다운비트에 맞추서 매핑해주세요 노말은 2다운비트 하드,인센은 1다운비트
   
   SPOILER

   

• Hard

1. 00:03:182 (3,4,5,6) - 모양 흐름 추천;00:03:617 (4) - 리버스 지우고00:02:747 (2) - 여기에 담요 시킨후
   00:04:051 (5) - 이걸 00:03:182 (3) - 여기 꼬리에 스택시켜서 00:03:617 (4,5) - 점프 만들면 더 좋을것 같습니다.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   fix
2. 00:04:704 (7) - 가능하면 이부분 서클 추가 했으면 좋겠네요 넣을 수는 있겠지만, 리딩이 불편해질 것같습니다.
3. 00:12:312 (1) - 뉴콤 제거하고 00:11:877 (1) -여기서 부터 시작; 흐름 모양 제안
   
   SPOILER

   
   fix
4. 00:20:572 (3,1) - 담요 더 잘맞춰줄수 있어요fix
   
   SPOILER

   

• Insane

1. 00:05:356 (1,2) - 00:06:660 (5,6) - 나지;스택 삐뚤어짐fix
2. 00:11:443 - 여기 보컬도 피아노도 아무소리도 없기에, 비워두는게 느낌상 더 좋아보이네요fix
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:14:051 (1) - 그저 롱슬라는 너무 밋밋해보이는데 하트라던가 모양 잡아보시느건 어떤가요? 아래껀 제 제안입니다.
   그게 아니라면 아주느린 변속(0.5sv)을 사용하셔도 될것같습니다.언락님 올려주신거대로 고치면 괜찮은 모양이 나올듯합니다

Satellite wrote:

diffname Insane changed Lunatic better.

Touhou song Insane = Lunatic is more better fit =w=

1. ?
   
2. "Iro wa Nio e do Chiri Nuru o" is not needed in tags, add tags"幽閉サテライト Mayumi Morinaga 森永真由美"

1. 00:36:442 (2,3) - since it's the only normal diff and the lowest sr diff, stack is not recommended here
2. 01:01:007 (1,1) - ^

1. od-0.5
2. 00:06:225 (3) - whistle? it quite fits for me. or using default whistle here
3. 00:46:659 (2) - too high and overlapped with the score at the right top: http://puu.sh/mLhyb/6f861fd958.jpg

1. od-0.5?
2. just fine.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

• 
  Down's Normal
  

1. 00:36:442 (2,3) - since it's the only normal diff and the lowest sr diff, stack is not recommended here
2. 01:01:007 (1,1) - ^

Minakami Yuki wrote:

1. Just some complaints.
2. My personal suggestions.
3. Highly recommended.
4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General

1. ?
   fixed
2. "Iro wa Nio e do Chiri Nuru o" is not needed in tags, add tags"幽閉サテライト Mayumi Morinaga 森永真由美"fixed

Hard

1. od-0.5 fixed
2. 00:06:225 (3) - whistle? it quite fits for me. or using default whistle here fixed
3. 00:46:659 (2) - too high and overlapped with the score at the right top: http://puu.sh/mLhyb/6f861fd958.jpg
   fixed like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413091

Lunatic

1. od-0.5? fix
2. just fine.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

when a BN left a star on your map, it means he/she gonna have a recheck after you telling him you have fixed the mods.

looks fine to me now, Bubbled!

Moly wrote:

[Down's Normal]

00:14:051 (5) - 살짝 내려주세요 http://puu.sh/mRnrl/7bf80723ee.jpg 이정도? 제 의도랑은 다른것 같아서 두겠습니다.
00:17:964 - 스핀 줄이시고 여기 슬라 하나 넣으셔야 할 것 같아요. 최하위 난이도에서는 스피너 회전중에 어프로치 서클이 보이면 언랭요소가 됩니다. 그래서 스핀을 거기까지 둔겁니다. 만약 스피너를 줄여서 어프로치 서클이 안보인다고 해도 상당히 어색하게 들릴것 같습니다.
01:01:007 (1) - 01:02:746 (2) - 얘랑 붙이시는 것도 괜찮을듯. 최하위 난이도에서 스택 또한 위험합니다. 저번에는 붙였었는데 BN이 위험하니까 분리하라고 하더라구요.

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hello! A mod in return~ Sorry for the huge delay ;n;

[> Down's Normal <]

1. 00:37:529 (4,1) - The spacing here is pretty low, while mainly using 0.7x on this calm part. Recorrecting it would suffice.
2. 00:40:572 (2) - Optional objective: Maybe a bit of curve on the tail of the slider? It'd improve bit of the flowing structure when it'd head towards the next note directly, which would make it a little comfortable for the beginner players to guide their cursor easily and smoothly. But if the current one is what you want, it'll still be fine as long as it's rankable and in an average aesthetics.
3. 01:20:572 (3) - Seems pretty minor, but you could at least make this little blanket more accurate for some aesthetical improvement, when giving it a try. Sth like this would do:
   
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4. 01:23:181 (2) - On slider's tail, replace the whistle to clap. It sounds clunky and noisy over the emphasis with the song.

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

[> Hard <]

1. 00:25:355 (2,3) - The jump here is quite a small sudden, nothing hits intense on the song track but downbeats(snares). So maybe equalizing objects with the music regarding the spacing, how about moving slider (2) somewhere near x:360|y:338 or around it? The gap would only be 0.20x, so it wouldn't take too much stress on "clicking" up the downbeat.fix
2. 00:27:094 (2,3) - I think making this part a passive pattern isn't very well or wise. A matching rhythm for this part is to Ctrl+G these two notes on the timeline, and it'll surely sound better than the current. As if it's applied, you can try another passive pattern like below pic for example. The circle stacks on the other slider for an indication of the music, can make it more interesting tbh:fix
   
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[> Lunatic <]

1. 01:17:094 (1) - Why not replace this onto another grid for a greater spacing? At least around/nearby x:216|y:65 would give a perfect 1.7x spacing as you usually spaced for the kiai time.fix

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Overall, the mapset is great. If it were only the storyboard elements were organized correctly, I would've planned to qualify this. Well, ended up being popped for rankability reasons.

Anyways, get me back once everything's done!

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Recheck, no kudosu

Hard
- HP Drain 5 for a balanced dissemination with the rest of the difficulties. Which would spread alike 3⁺² > 5⁺² > 7.fix
01:15:355 (1) - Add finish on slider's head, it would've done with the Lunatic diff. Just a bit hitsounding consistency.fix

Just a few things, and hopefully ready to be rebubbled. Get me back again once done.

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Everything seems alright, including the storyboard. I guess this beatmap is ready for sure. A rebubble, you deserve!

Satellite wrote:

Next bn : add 神々が恋した幻想郷 The Gensokyo the Gods Loved 河城にとり kawashiro nitori to tag please
and BG not fit this song Q.Q It is music of Kawashiro Nitori. Therefore BG of Kawashiro Nitori is preferable.

Satellite wrote:

Next bn : add 神々が恋した幻想郷 The Gensokyo the Gods Loved 河城にとり kawashiro nitori to tag please
and BG not fit this song Q.Q It is music of Kawashiro Nitori. Therefore BG of Kawashiro Nitori is preferable.

UnLock- wrote:

Satellite wrote:

Next bn : add 神々が恋した幻想郷 The Gensokyo the Gods Loved 河城にとり kawashiro nitori to tag please
and BG not fit this song Q.Q It is music of Kawashiro Nitori. Therefore BG of Kawashiro Nitori is preferable.

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I already pointed out about it LOL

Down wrote:

어쩃든 태그 추가땜시 어쩔 수 없이 터트려야할듯
BG는 뭐랄까.. 선택사항?

Minakami Yuki wrote:

no kd

just feel that the pattern in lunatic diff 00:24:920 (1,2,3,4) - plays quite awfulI can't know why..
and remove nc at 00:50:137 (1) - fix
stack? 00:57:746 (3,3) - fix

and those tags mentioned by satellitefix

Minakami Yuki wrote:

i remember this map and ?why not call me back to qualify
you cant find a suitable bg?

1. 00:13:834 (4) - 노트 제거 고려해주세요. 00:12:964 (2)와 달리 가사가 있는 것도 아니고, 1/2 박자가 너무 연속되면 강조 효과도 약해져요.
2. 00:26:659 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요. 여기만 콤보 주기가 짧네요.
3. 00:36:442 (2,3) - 박자가 너무 자의적입니다. 박자를 재구상해주세요.
4. 01:01:007 (1) - 굳이 필요한 노트인지는 의문입니다만, 유지를 원하시면 01:01:442 (1) 뉴콤 푸는거 고려해주세요. 너무 뜬금없는 단일 콤보 느낌입니다.
5. 01:10:137 (1) - 01:24:050 (1) - 콤보 풀어주세요.

1. 00:15:791 (1) - 스택이라서 뉴콤 효과가 다소 약한데, 콤보 푸는건 어때요?
2. 00:22:529 (5,6) - 연타 시작은 그렇다 쳐도 여기는 간격이 어긋난듯 하네요.
3. 00:31:442 (4,1) - 숫자상으로 일정한 간격입니다만, 이는 변속 때문으로 실제 간격은 다릅니다. 일정하게 유지시키는게 외관상 좋을듯 하네요.
4. 00:40:572 (1,2) - 블랭킷이 2% 부족해보이는 ㅋㅋ
5. 01:01:007 (1) - 볼륨이 과하게 낮은데, 40%정도라도. 루나틱도
6. 01:03:616 - 클랩
7. 01:27:094 (3,4,5,6) - 간격

1. 00:54:485 (1,3) - 다소 어색한 메뉴얼 스택인듯요.
2. 00:56:007 (7) - 간격이 (4,5,6)과 다르네요.
3. 01:03:181 (1,2,3) - 간격 신경써주세요. ctrl+G 활용하시면 균형잡힌 간격 만드실 수 있을겁니다.
4. 01:26:659 (5,1) - (5)에서 콤보 시작하고 마지막 뉴콤 지우는게 별 패턴이랑 1/4 슬라 패턴을 구별하는데 도움을 줄겁니다.

Sonnyc wrote:

스피너 01:33:561 - 에 끝내시는거 어때요? 지금 엔딩은 너무 애매한 스팟 같네요.
[Down's Normal]

1. 00:13:834 (4) - 노트 제거 고려해주세요. 00:12:964 (2)와 달리 가사가 있는 것도 아니고, 1/2 박자가 너무 연속되면 강조 효과도 약해져요. Fixed.
2. 00:26:659 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요. 여기만 콤보 주기가 짧네요. Fixed.
3. 00:36:442 (2,3) - 박자가 너무 자의적입니다. 박자를 재구상해주세요. 슬라이더 하나로 이었습니다.
4. 01:01:007 (1) - 굳이 필요한 노트인지는 의문입니다만, 유지를 원하시면 01:01:442 (1) 뉴콤 푸는거 고려해주세요. 너무 뜬금없는 단일 콤보 느낌입니다. 노트를 제거했습니다.
5. 01:10:137 (1) - 01:24:050 (1) - 콤보 풀어주세요. Fixed.

Dailycare wrote:

랭크 ㅊㅋㅊㅋ