CaffeAmericano wrote:

모딩 Queue 에서 온 카페입니다 :3

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  Down's Normal

1. 00:34:920 (4) - 이지/노멀 매핑할 때마다 궁금했던 점인데, 여기서 시작하는 소리가 없는데 노트를 넣어도 되는건가요? 그렇다고 빼기에는 너무 허전해서요.. 일단 고려해보겠습니다.
   
2. 00:45:790 (1,4) - 스텍 하셔도 될 듯. 넵 블랭킷도 새로했습니다.

조금이라도 도움이 됬으면 좋겠네요. 굳럭!!

CaffeAmericano wrote:

모딩 Queue 에서 온 카페입니다 :3

• 
  General

1. 랭맵( https://osu.ppy.sh/b/328941 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/129080 )에서 테그 가져다 쓰면 될것 같네요

지금 시간이 부족해서 돌아와서 보고 갖다써보겠습니다

• 
  Hard

1. 00:09:704 - 개인적으로 여기 노트 추가하는게 더 자연스러울 것 같아요좀 느슨하게 갈 부분이라...
   
2. 00:39:703 (2,3,4) - 00:41:442 (2,3,4) - 파란 틱이라 리듬 읽기 힘들 것 같은데, 반복 슬라이더로 처리하는게 어떨까요? 인센에서 하신 것 처럼이건 포기하기가 좀 힘든 거 같습니다.. 순서를 바꾸긴 했는데
   
3. 00:57:963 (3,4,5) - 여기는 요런 식으로 해도 괜찮을듯... ( http://puu.sh/lYHZD/1839ffd69b.jpg ) 그리고 하드에서 어려운 리듬은 완전 스택 하지 않는게 읽기 쉬울것 같아요. 인센도 이렇게 쓰시면 보컬, 악기 둘다 커버 되겠네요. 굳이 문제점이라면 00:58:290 - 가 슬라이더 꼬리로 덮기엔 좀 강한데... 함 고려해 보시길 ㅋㅋ 네 수정했습니다
   
   
4. 01:03:616 (2,3) - DS를 크게 쓰셨는데, 개인적으로 01:04:050 - 가 그렇게 강조될 소리 같지는 않어요 네 수정했습니다[/

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  Insane

1. 00:06:225 (3,1) - 조금 방향만 틀면 담요 쓰실수 있을 듯 뒤 노트 놓기가 좀 안 이뻐질거 같네요..
2. 00:25:355 (1,3) - 담요 살짝 삐뚤

네 수정했습니다조금이라도 도움이 됬으면 좋겠네요. 굳럭!!

UnLock- wrote:

Project Touhou air (?)

Normal
노말은 모든 노트의 거리가 일정해야 합니다! Ctrl Shift A 를 확인해주세요 ? 더이상 문제가 없다네요
00:14:051 (1) - 차라리 스피너를 포기하고 00:17:964 - 여기서부터 노트를 넣어주세요, 완벽한 언더매핑입니다 ㅠㅠ 일단 보류할께염..
00:21:442 (1) - 슬라이더의 스타일을 살려봅시다, http://puu.sh/lYJQv/3d66a13732.jpg 00:19:703 (1) - 일부러 이거랑 평행 맞춘겁니당
00:33:616 (2,3,4) - 박자 오류, http://puu.sh/lYJTp/fe6f26b533.jpg 추천 fix
00:55:355 (1,2) - 서로 뉴콤보 변경 fix
00:57:963 (1) - 뉴콤 제거 fix
01:01:007 - 노트 추가해보세요 넹

UnLock- wrote:

Project Touhou air (?)

이 노래의 배경이 되는 곡이 카와시로 니토리의 테마곡인데 감히 비봉캐릭이 나와서 비추 52개 드립니다추천 52개 받을거라서 ㄱㅊ

no kds (short modding)

Insane
00:13:834 (1,2) - 뉴콤보 서로 바꿔주세요 FIX
00:57:963 (1,2,3) - 박자 틀림, http://puu.sh/lYJEc/7b58636411.jpg 이거 그박자로 하니까 시시해지드라고요.. 비트쪽 따라감

감사합니다~


이 노래의 배경이 되는 곡이 카와시로 니토리의 테마곡인데 감히 비봉캐릭이 나와서 비추 52개 드립니다

bigjoe97 wrote:

queue stuff


hard

00:12:312 (1,2) - can you get these two to blanket each other?I tried, but it was not nice...

other than that I didn't see much, nice work

insane

00:30:137 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - this is a really long stream for the star difficulty. maybe kicksliders? I think it's easy stream
00:42:746 (2,3) - remove overlap fixed

the map overall looked good, but there were a lot of streams, and at 3.8 stars they might be too much. just something to keep in mind

bigjoe97 wrote:

queue stuff

down's normal

please use distance snap for normal diff. i really liked the slider shapes and blankets you had, but you're going to have to rework them to fit DS for the whole map.

1. 01:33:398 - 스핀 여기서 끝나시는게...
2. 상관은 없다만은... 소스 東方Project로 적으시고 Touhou는 태그에다 적으시는게 어떨까요?

1. 00:03:617 (1), 00:07:095 (1) - 이 뉴콤은 빼는게 어떨까요?
2. 00:08:834 (1) - Ctrl + G 하시고 00:11:443 (2) 노트 디스턴스 맞게 옮기는 게 더 예뻐 보이네요. 그리고 3점 슬라이더 쓰셔도 될 거 같은데...
3. 00:12:964 (2) - 삭제
4. 00:17:964 - 여기에 노트 놓으실 거 아니시면 스핀 여기까지 하는게 좋지 않을까요.
5. 그 이후로는 딱히 지적할 건 안보입니다 :3

1. 00:12:312 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/lZXaF/723e881232.jpg 이 모양 어떠신가요?
2. 00:31:007 (3) - 4시 방향으로 놔두는 게 좋을 듯? 합니다.
3. 00:39:703 (2,3,4) - 하드에서 굳이 헷갈리게 할 필요는 없을 듯... 슬라이더로 바꾸시는 게 좋을 거 같습니다.
4. 00:41:442 (2,3,4) - ↑
5. 01:26:877 (2) - 01:26:224 (3) 위치랑 똑같게 놔두시는 건 어떠신지? 덤으로 직선 모양으로 하지 말고 오른쪽으로 살짝 꺾어주시면...

1. 00:12:964 (2) - 00:13:182 (3) 에 두시는 것도 괜찮을 거 같습니다.
2. 00:17:964 (1,2) - 슬라이더 곡선이 더 좋을 거 같습니다...
3. 00:29:050 (4) - http://puu.sh/lZXtq/c4d5f74773.jpg 여기 어떤가요?
4. 00:44:050 (1) - 00:45:355 스핀 여기서 끝나는 게 박자에 맞는 거 같네요.
5. 00:57:963 (1,2,3) - 간격을 좁히시거나 2,3번 슬라이더를 바꾸시던가 해야 될 듯... 갑자기 확 어렵네요.
6. 01:06:007 (4) - 3번 노트 오른쪽에 위치해 있는게 좋을 거 같네요.

UnLock- wrote:

이 노래의 배경이 되는 곡이 카와시로 니토리의 테마곡인데 감히 비봉캐릭이 나와서 비추 52개 드립니다

PostScr1pt wrote:

늅늅 모딩하려고 왔습니다

[General]

[Down's Normal]

1. 00:03:617 (1), 00:07:095 (1) - 이 뉴콤은 빼는게 어떨까요? 그거2개랑 뒤에2개도 묶었어요.
2. 00:08:834 (1) - Ctrl + G 하시고 00:11:443 (2) 노트 디스턴스 맞게 옮기는 게 더 예뻐 보이네요. 그리고 3점 슬라이더 쓰셔도 될 거 같은데...ㅠㅠ그렇게 고치기는 어려울듯하네용..
3. 00:12:964 (2) - 삭제 가사가 들려서 두겠습니다.
4. 00:17:964 - 여기에 노트 놓으실 거 아니시면 스핀 여기까지 하는게 좋지 않을까요. fix
5. 그 이후로는 딱히 지적할 건 안보입니다 :3

Sangzin wrote:

[Down's normal]

• 
  키아이타임.....키아이타임이 필요합니다......!! 키아이 어디갔징
  00:14:051 (1) - 이 뒤가 너무 어중간하다고 생각이 듭니다. 차라리 이걸 슬라아트로 만들어서 뒤에 곡 분위기 바뀌는 곳을 메꾸는 게 좋다고 생각합니다. 슬라아트는 너무 어렵고.. 그냥 분위기바뀌는곳 까지 스피너를 끌고왔습니다. 어프로치 안보이더라구요
  00:01:878 (1,1,1,1) - 2개씩 묶어서 뉴콤 두번만 쓰는 것도 괜찮지 않을까요? 넵
  00:12:964 (2,3) - 이것만 DS가 0.1 높네요. 수정해주세요 fix
  00:23:181 (1) - 여기 뉴콤은 필요 없다고 생각하네요. fix
  00:33:616 (2,3) - 이렇게 짧은 슬라이더가 있는 이유를 모르겠습니다. 슬라 끝에 그렇게 강조되는 음도 없는 거 같고 1/1슬라로 만드는 게 차라리 나아보인다고 생각합니다. 1/1슬라 + 노트 + 노트로 간단하게 바꿔봤습니다.
  01:01:007 (1,1) - 스택? 스택!
  01:20:572 (3) - 2점을 쓰기보단 그냥 1점으로 써서 커브 만들어주는 게 좋다고 생각하네요.이해를 못했지만 전 그대로 둬도 괜찮다고 생각해요..

UnLock- wrote:

이 노래의 배경이 되는 곡이 카와시로 니토리의 테마곡인데 감히 비봉캐릭이 나와서 비추 52개 드립니다

이미 이곡 나온 시점에서 니토리는 존재감 없어졌...../me run ㄹㅇ

PostScr1pt wrote:

늅늅 모딩하려고 왔습니다

[General]

1. 01:33:398 - 스핀 여기서 끝나시는게...fix
2. 상관은 없다만은... 소스 東方Project로 적으시고 Touhou는 태그에다 적으시는게 어떨까요?fix

[Hard]

1. 00:12:312 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/lZXaF/723e881232.jpg 이 모양 어떠신가요? 음..굳이 겹치게 하는건 지양하는 편이라...
2. 00:31:007 (3) - 4시 방향으로 놔두는 게 좋을 듯? 합니다.fiiiix
3. 00:39:703 (2,3,4) - 하드에서 굳이 헷갈리게 할 필요는 없을 듯... 슬라이더로 바꾸시는 게 좋을 거 같습니다. 앞모딩서도 나왔던 내용이지만 우선은 이대로 두고 싶습니다...앞 슬라이더로 3/4를 사용할거라는걸 알렸으니
4. 00:41:442 (2,3,4) - ↑
5. 01:26:877 (2) - 01:26:224 (3) 위치랑 똑같게 놔두시는 건 어떠신지? 덤으로 직선 모양으로 하지 말고 오른쪽으로 살짝 꺾어주시면...방향은 꺾었습니다. 근데 스택 안시킨거는 리딩 잘되라고 반스택만 시켜놨습니다

[Insane]

1. 00:12:964 (2) - 00:13:182 (3) 에 두시는 것도 괜찮을 거 같습니다.일관성을 유지하기 위해 두겠습니다
2. 00:17:964 (1,2) - 슬라이더 곡선이 더 좋을 거 같습니다...읔 이거에 대해서는 조금 더 생각해보겠습니다
3. 00:29:050 (4) - http://puu.sh/lZXtq/c4d5f74773.jpg 여기 어떤가요? 삼각형 두번 돌리는 패턴으로 만든거라...
4. 00:44:050 (1) - 00:45:355 스핀 여기서 끝나는 게 박자에 맞는 거 같네요.fix
5. 00:57:963 (1,2,3) - 간격을 좁히시거나 2,3번 슬라이더를 바꾸시던가 해야 될 듯... 갑자기 확 어렵네요. 간격을 좁혔습니다
6. 01:06:007 (4) - 3번 노트 오른쪽에 위치해 있는게 좋을 거 같네요.fix

Sangzin wrote:

K--A--P
o--i-- r
r --r--o
e-----j
a-----e
n-----c
------t
정작 해보니 이상하네실은 처음에 못알아봤다 하드라

[General]

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  일단 아는건 그렇게 없지만, 요새 소스를 touhou가 아닌　凍方project 라고 쓰는게 일반적이라네요.
  이거 아티스트가 세냐가 아니고 유페 세틀라이트(幽閉サテライト, Yuuhei Satellite)라네요...?
  로마자 제목은 해석된 제목이 아닌 일본어 발음을 적는겁니다. 즉 로마자에 Iro wa Nio e do Chiri Nuru o로 바꿔주셔야 할 겁니다. 사실 지금 퀄파된 맵셋에서 가져온거라 카더라 추가하고 수정하겠습니다 vocal은 senya가 맞네요 Circles항목에 yuuhei satellite가 뜸
  순수 백색 콤보컬러는 언랭에 해당됩니다. 회색 계역 쓰시는 걸 추천합니다.엌..저는 삼색충인데..잘못 들어간듯 fix

[SB]

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  SGL 가르쳐주세요 헣헣SGL은 다운님 영역..제가 한건 가사,간단한 효과 뿐...
  일단 주관적인 느낌으로 이렇게 하면 좋겠다! 라는 것만 할테니 그냥 무시하셔도 상관은 없습니다.
  
  가사가 순수 하얀색이다보니 읽는 데 문제가 있는 거 같습니다. 아에 광선효과를 만들어 읽기 더 쉽게 만드는 게 좋을 거 같습니다. 고치는 게 귀찮을 지도 모르지만 투명화 잘못해서 가사 50개 다시 하고 통일시키느라 또 다시하고 막판에 날려먹는 것 보다는 좋잖아요 그리고 이 상황은 저라는 게 함정
  초반부터 배경까지 싹다 해서 Fade out(검은화면) 만들어보는 건 어떨까요?fade out은 넣도록 하겠지만 다른건 윽...
  00:31:877 - 여기서 나오는 회색배경 배경이랑 크기가 안맞는데...? 입체효과같이 만들어 보려고 일부러 크게 만들었습니다
  01:27:529 - 이쯤에서 뭔가 강조효과같은거 넣어봤으면 좋겠네요. (화면 커지면서 사라지는거 같은거)시간날때 추가해볼게요

[Insane]

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  00:15:791 - 이 뒤에 브레이크타임이 오기에는 좀 그런 거 같은데....스피너 넣어두는 걸 추천합니다.스토리보드 보여주기위한 수작 fix
  00:24:812 (11,1) - 왜 이것만 거리가...?! fix
  00:28:289 (13,1) - ^fix
  00:31:006 (9) - BPM이 그렇게 빠르지 않은데 여기다 NC넣는게 좋은거 같네요. fix
  00:31:006 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 그리고 이쯤 어딘가에 숏슬 넣어봤으면 좋을 거 같네요. 어울릴듯?연타는 두는게 좋을 거 같습니다
  00:31:768 (16,1) - 그전에 이건 변속땜에 표시상으로는 DS같지만 실질적으로는 아니니 수정ㄱㄱ fix
  00:44:050 (1) - 흠.....스피너 나올 타이밍이 아니라고 생각되네요. 그렇게 스피너와 어울리는 음도 없는거 같고...이건 건드리기 싫은데...한번 더 지적받으면 고치겠습니다
  00:57:963 (1,2,3) - 이패턴 리딩에 조금 힘들거 같다고 생각이 드네요. (2)랑 (3)이랑 위치 바꿔보는게?이런방법이 있었네요
  00:59:703 - 아까 언급한대로 스피너나 뭐좀 추가해줬으면 좋겠네요.음...

[Hard]

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  00:12:312 (1,2) - 뭔가 좀 아쉽다고 생각이 드는데 저도 적당한 방법이....아까 나왔던 지적인데 이걸 건드리면 상당히 복잡하고 모양도 안이뻐서...
  00:14:051 (1,1) - 스택이 재데로가 아닙니다아아아아빼액 진짜다아아아아
  00:26:442 (1,2) - 뉴콤 넣는 타이밍이 잘못되신 듯? (2)에다가 뉴콤 (그리고 (1)이랑 스택이 잘 안되어있으니 그것도)fix
  00:32:746 (2) - 약간의 커브 넣어보는것도 좋을 듯 하네요. 음...
  00:39:703 (2,3,4) - 이런 안티점프 패턴보다는 아까처럼 슬라로 만드는게 더 좋다고 생각이 듭니다.이것도 계속 나오는 지적인데 아무래도 담번에 또나오면 바꿀게요
  00:41:442 (2,3,4) - ^
  00:43:616 (4,1) - 블랭캣 fix
  01:01:007 (1,1) - 키아이 들어가는 타이밍이니까 거리 벌려볼 가치는 있다고 생각하네요 fix
  01:20:572 (1,4) - 으아 스택으아 픽스

UnLock- wrote:

이 노래의 배경이 되는 곡이 카와시로 니토리의 테마곡인데 감히 비봉캐릭이 나와서 비추 52개 드립니다

이미 이곡 나온 시점에서 니토리는 존재감 없어졌...../me run

1. Nice storyboard
2. 00:17:964 - I feel like there's too many whistles for a song that isn't very fast or intense. I'd remove the whistles that aren't on the downbeats

1. 00:09:486 (2) - ctrl+j and reposition for better flow from (1) imo
2. 00:12:312 (1) - feels slightly overemphasized. maybe move to [199, 244] and flatten slider? also helps with flow
3. 00:14:051 (1) - make a more interesting shape? http://puu.sh/m0mcA/8b22d0147d.jpg
4. 00:18:834 (3,4,5) - generally should end triplets on a white tick mark unless you have good reason. move 00:18:943 (4) to 00:19:159 and restack accordingly
5. 00:23:616 (2) - break into two circles so player can start clicking stream on red tick
6. 00:26:877 (2,3,4) - move to (303, 239) to fix triangle pattern
7. 00:36:007 (2) - curve this slider to avoid overlap. looks better http://puu.sh/m0n0b/ca6e5bc306.jpg
8. 00:45:790 (1) - finish here?
9. 00:52:746 (1) - slightly curve this slider
10. 00:55:355 (5,6,7,8) - kick sliders are overkill imo, even if this is the most intense part of the song. how about this? http://puu.sh/m0niI/371b27895b.jpg
11. 01:06:985 (2,3) - unstack to keep flow circling to (4)
12. 01:17:855 - add note for triplet

1. 00:03:617 (1) - curve this slightly so slider points at (2) ?
2. 00:07:747 (3) - I think it plays better if you unstack and move to [221, 266]
3. 00:11:008 (2,3) - unstack to match 00:08:834 (1,2) -
4. 00:11:660 (4) - start slider at 00:11:877 instead to follow vocal?
5. 00:13:182 (2) - looks strange since it is very close to touching 00:12:312 (1) - maybe try this? http://puu.sh/m0pQq/f36a838cf5.jpg
6. 00:39:703 (2,3,4) - DS would be better imo
7. 00:45:790 (1) - ctrl+g and then 00:46:659 (2) - ctrl+ g for better flow
8. 00:51:442 (2) - move this up a couple grid spaces so there's a little more room between 00:51:007 (1) -
9. 00:52:746 (1,2,1) - flow feels a little forced
10. 00:57:094 (2) - place whistle on slider head instead of repeat
11. 00:57:963 (3) - incorrect rhythm, it changes to 1/1 beat, so use 2 circles instead. Also NC here instead. http://puu.sh/m0r90/0874cf616e.jpg http://puu.sh/m0r8b/7e1a253890.jpg
12. 01:10:572 (2,3) - spacing too large. it should be similar to 01:08:833 (2,3) imo
13. 01:21:007 (2) - could add a whistle here to make it sound more energetic

1. 1.2SV and 0.7 DS plays very strange since it makes sliders slide faster than note spacing. Especially in the beginning, the sliders feel way too fast. It would be a lot of work to remap everything now, but it's something to think about.
2. 00:03:617 (1) - move this to [126, 163] for better flow
3. 00:08:834 (1) - looks strange, I would just use 3 points and blanket only the end circle of the slider
4. 00:12:964 (2) - stack on (3) to match vocals?
5. 00:14:051 - add a note here to finish phrase. you can start the spinner at 00:14:486 -
6. 00:18:833 - bpm might be slow enough that you can add a circle here. not sure though
7. 00:23:181 (2,3) - I think using 1/1 rhythms makes the map more intuitive to play. You should get some more opinions though
8. 00:26:659 (1,2) - ^
9. 00:31:877 (1,2,3,4) - be consistent with what instrument/vocal you follow in your mapping. either use 2 3/2 repeated sliders or stick to 1/1 rhythm
10. 00:35:355 (1) - slider shape suggestion http://puu.sh/m0sqU/ea34ea5e2d.jpg
11. 00:38:833 (1) - the end look strange, why not blanket the entire slider?
12. 00:51:007 (1) - nothing in the song indicates 3/2 slider. why not use 1/1 instead?
13. 00:57:963 (3) - I think it would be better to break up into 3 circles to give more emphasis to the 3 distinct vocals
14. 01:04:485 (2) - move to [271, 146] for better flow
15. 01:06:224 (3) - looks a little strange, why not use a smoother blanket around 01:05:790 (2) -
16. 01:17:963 (4,1) - these should blanket each other, also will need to adjust the shape of 01:17:094 (3) - to keep symmetry
17. 01:23:181 (2) - use 1/1 slider, especially since you didn't map 01:22:094 -

MokouSmoke wrote:

from my queue~

[General]

1. Nice storyboard
2. 00:17:964 - I feel like there's too many whistles for a song that isn't very fast or intense. I'd remove the whistles that aren't on the downbeatswell.. It's okay

[Insane]

1. 00:09:486 (2) - ctrl+j and reposition for better flow from (1) imo fix
2. 00:12:312 (1) - feels slightly overemphasized. maybe move to [199, 244] and flatten slider? also helps with flowit's okay i think
3. 00:14:051 (1) - make a more interesting shape? http://puu.sh/m0mcA/8b22d0147d.jpghmm.. i'll consider it
4. 00:18:834 (3,4,5) - generally should end triplets on a white tick mark unless you have good reason. move 00:18:943 (4) to 00:19:159 and restack accordingly fix
5. 00:23:616 (2) - break into two circles so player can start clicking stream on red tickthere's' no reason to do...
6. 00:26:877 (2,3,4) - move to (303, 239) to fix triangle pattern fix
7. 00:36:007 (2) - curve this slider to avoid overlap. looks better http://puu.sh/m0n0b/ca6e5bc306.jpg It's my main style
8. 00:45:790 (1) - finish here? I don't want to use too many finishs..
9. 00:52:746 (1) - slightly curve this slider nice idea but I should have more time to think about this section...
10. 00:55:355 (5,6,7,8) - kick sliders are overkill imo, even if this is the most intense part of the song. how about this? http://puu.sh/m0niI/371b27895b.jpgI think it's okay
11. 01:06:985 (2,3) - unstack to keep flow circling to (4) I don't use that
12. 01:17:855 - add note for triplet01:04:268 (3,4) - same as here

[Hard]

1. 00:03:617 (1) - curve this slightly so slider points at (2) ? that's also important but I can't break this shape
2. 00:07:747 (3) - I think it plays better if you unstack and move to [221, 266] well...
3. 00:11:008 (2,3) - unstack to match 00:08:834 (1,2) - there is no reason to match
4. 00:11:660 (4) - start slider at 00:11:877 instead to follow vocal? that's a bit hard to fix and I don't want to
5. 00:13:182 (2) - looks strange since it is very close to touching 00:12:312 (1) - maybe try this? http://puu.sh/m0pQq/f36a838cf5.jpg fix
6. 00:39:703 (2,3,4) - DS would be better imo well..
7. 00:45:790 (1) - ctrl+g and then 00:46:659 (2) - ctrl+ g for better flow fix
8. 00:51:442 (2) - move this up a couple grid spaces so there's a little more room between 00:51:007 (1) - ?
9. 00:52:746 (1,2,1) - flow feels a little forced I agree but I can't know how to fix
10. 00:57:094 (2) - place whistle on slider head instead of repeat fix
11. 00:57:963 (3) - incorrect rhythm, it changes to 1/1 beat, so use 2 circles instead. Also NC here instead. http://puu.sh/m0r90/0874cf616e.jpg http://puu.sh/m0r8b/7e1a253890.jpg fix
12. 01:10:572 (2,3) - spacing too large. it should be similar to 01:08:833 (2,3) imo I have no idea how to fix it... that makes this section a bit ugly
13. 01:21:007 (2) - could add a whistle here to make it sound more energeticfix

Hope that helps and good luck!

MokouSmoke wrote:

from my queue~


[Normal]

1. 00:14:051 - add a note here to finish phrase. you can start the spinner at 00:14:486 - fix
2. 00:35:355 (1) - slider shape suggestion http://puu.sh/m0sqU/ea34ea5e2d.jpg Nice..
3. 01:04:485 (2) - move to [271, 146] for better flow fix

Hope that helps and good luck!

General

Storyboard

Insane

Hard

Down's Normal

Dailycare wrote:

#Project Korean Air

Down's Normal

00:03:617 (1) - 00:07:095 (1) - 뉴콤보를 해제하셔두 될 것 같은데.. ! 저번모딩에서도 나왔는데 안고쳤었네요.. fix
00:08:834 (1) - 블랭킷 흠..맞아보이는데
00:17:964 - 부터 00:19:703 - 까지가 좀 많이 허전해요. 00:12:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - 과 스피너를 이렇게 만드시고 스피너가 끝나는 부분을 일찍 앞당기신 다음 노트를 넣는게 어떨까요?! 그냥 제 생각이니까 참고만 해주세요 네.. 사실 앞당겨서 노트넣어보자고 생각도 했었는데 스피너가 끝나는자리가 그러면 너무 어색한자리밖에 없어서 그대로 둘려고 합니다.
00:37:529 (4) - ^ 이것은 뭘까욤
00:51:007 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제 fix
00:52:746 (1) - 블랭킷 모르겠어요 ㅠㅜ
00:56:224 (1,2,3) - 이 슬라이더들의 배치를 좀 더 이쁘게 해주세용.. 나름 고쳐봤습니다.
01:03:181 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제하는게 좋지않을까요? fix
01:04:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 음 제가 듣기에는 어색한 박자였습니다. 01:18:833 (1,2,3,4) - 이런 식으로 바꾸는 것도 한 번 생각해보세요 아마 (3)번슬라때문에 그렇게 느끼신건지도 몰라서 (3)번슬라와 (4)번 노트의 순서를 바꿧습니다.
01:23:181 (2) - 이것도 저는 01:24:920 (2,3) - 처럼 노트 두개를 놓는게 더 좋아보여요 그러면 살짝 지루해질것 같아서 두겠습니당



어.. 적용이 Down님 노말을 고친 걸로 바꿨다는 말인가요? 그렇다면 제가 친구 만나러 나가기 전에 모딩하는거라 다시 봐드릴 수가 없어서 죄송합니당.. ;w; //하지만 이때바뀐것이 얼마없다는것이 함정

Down wrote:

Dailycare wrote:

#Project Korean Air

Down's Normal

00:03:617 (1) - 00:07:095 (1) - 뉴콤보를 해제하셔두 될 것 같은데.. ! 저번모딩에서도 나왔는데 안고쳤었네요.. fix
00:08:834 (1) - 블랭킷 흠..맞아보이는데
00:17:964 - 부터 00:19:703 - 까지가 좀 많이 허전해요. 00:12:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - 과 스피너를 이렇게 만드시고 스피너가 끝나는 부분을 일찍 앞당기신 다음 노트를 넣는게 어떨까요?! 그냥 제 생각이니까 참고만 해주세요 네.. 사실 앞당겨서 노트넣어보자고 생각도 했었는데 스피너가 끝나는자리가 그러면 너무 어색한자리밖에 없어서 그대로 둘려고 합니다.
00:37:529 (4) - ^ 이것은 뭘까욤
00:51:007 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제 fix
00:52:746 (1) - 블랭킷 모르겠어요 ㅠㅜ
00:56:224 (1,2,3) - 이 슬라이더들의 배치를 좀 더 이쁘게 해주세용.. 나름 고쳐봤습니다.
01:03:181 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제하는게 좋지않을까요? fix
01:04:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 음 제가 듣기에는 어색한 박자였습니다. 01:18:833 (1,2,3,4) - 이런 식으로 바꾸는 것도 한 번 생각해보세요 아마 (3)번슬라때문에 그렇게 느끼신건지도 몰라서 (3)번슬라와 (4)번 노트의 순서를 바꿧습니다.
01:23:181 (2) - 이것도 저는 01:24:920 (2,3) - 처럼 노트 두개를 놓는게 더 좋아보여요 그러면 살짝 지루해질것 같아서 두겠습니당



어.. 적용이 Down님 노말을 고친 걸로 바꿨다는 말인가요? 그렇다면 제가 친구 만나러 나가기 전에 모딩하는거라 다시 봐드릴 수가 없어서 죄송합니당.. ;w; //하지만 이때바뀐것이 얼마없다는것이 함정

감사합니다~
http://puu.sh/m19Uh/c6fffb06b0.zip

Dailycare wrote:

헤헤 제가 이걸 나가기 전 30분 내에 하다보니.. 더군다나 노말을 마지막에 해서! 제가 봐도 정신이 없네요 .. 죄송합니다 ;w;

1. 00:06:225 (3,4) - It would be nice to add whistles here for the piano sounds. Same goes for 00:07:747 (2) - and 00:02:747 (3) - and 00:12:312 (1) -
2. 00:33:616 (4,1) - and 00:37:094 (4) - It's a bit of a waste really. There's so many piano notes that you miss out on sounding

1. 00:11:660 (4) - I suggest this pattern instead to better map to the vocals, where the circle is the piano note and the slider indicates the vocals.

1. 00:08:834 (1) - You can probably improve this blanket a lot more by only using 3 anchor points, rather than several more.
2. 00:37:529 (4) - Not sure if this is suggesting a blanket, but it's way off.
3. 00:58:833 - I would add a break here to keep in line with the rest of the difficulties

DahplA wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:06:225 (3,4) - It would be nice to add whistles here for the piano sounds. Same goes for 00:07:747 (2) - and 00:02:747 (3) - and 00:12:312 (1) -
   00:12:312 (1) I agree with this, so fixed. but I didn't used whistle in this section to emphasize something...
2. 00:33:616 (4,1) - and 00:37:094 (4) - It's a bit of a waste really. There's so many piano notes that you miss out on soundingif I followed piano sound mainly, It would be a real waste

[Hard]

1. 00:11:660 (4) - I suggest this pattern instead to better map to the vocals, where the circle is the piano note and the slider indicates the vocals. nice idea I think, so fixed

The only main problem I found was that there wasn't enough hitsound emphasis on the piano notes. Other than that, completely fine set. Good luck.

SkinnyJommy wrote:

NM from my queue ayyyyyy

[Insane]

1. 00:19:486 (7,1) - ugly overlap here D: I agree... but It's stacked with previous slider... I agree, but It's also a stacked with previous slider..
   
2. 00:28:398 (1,4) - you should stack these!if you do this you would need to move 00:29:485 (6) - to 192. 164fix
   
3. 00:58:833 (3) - you could move this to 431, 347 because it creates a triangular sort of shape between the sliders! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4180543slider head, circle triangle
   
   [Hard]
   
4. 00:04:269 (2) - I think this would be better if you changed this to a 1/1 slider that extends to the next red tick that would be nice too, but It's hard to fix now(maybe I should fix almost entire map)and it's okay now i think
   
5. 00:39:703 (2,3,4) - 1/3 spacing like this is going to be really hard to read here... i wuold just stick to a 1/3 slider and leave that sort of pattern for insanes/extras oh, everybody thinks it's not good.. so this time I fixed
   
6. 00:41:442 (2,3,4) - same

well thats it for my mod! the background looks so high quality holy moly

gl with this

-Nya- wrote:

Heya~ From my M4M queue~

General:

1. Not sure why but I see two mp3’s and two OSB files in the song’s folder: fixed
   
   Picture

   
   This may be a problem at my side or not. If it’s not, I’m not sure if this is allowed. Rather doublecheck with a QAT or BN.
2. It looks like the normal-hitclap2 soundfile has a delay: now I'm checking... ->fixed
   
   Picture

   
   It would be a good idea to check with someone else as well and confirm this, since it’s unrankable if there is a delay.

Insane:

1. 00:08:182 (3,2) –Try to stack this by moving 00:08:834 (1,2) –around a bit.fix
2. 00:12:964 (2,4) –I don’t really think it’s a good idea to stack notes like this since it prevents smooth flow, so I rather suggest you space the circles out normally. There are more of these that are similar but I’m not going to point out every single one. fix
3. 00:21:008 (6,1) –Personally I would perfect this stack. first, I didn't. But to have consistency, I fixed.
4. 00:56:224 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –This rhythm choice might throw players off guard. I suggest using sliders as well to make that pattern more readable.well...I don't want to touch this pattern...if it can really be problem, I will then.
5. 01:05:790 (3,6) –This doesn’t look nice. I suggest you perfect the stack. fix
6. 01:27:528 (9) – Placing a new combo here might be a cool idea, since there’s a very strong and distinct beat here. If you decide to follow this suggestion then remember to do this in the other diffs as well. fix

Hard:

1. 00:11:660 (4,5) –Perfect this stack. It looks weird. lol why I did like that.. fix
2. 00:21:224 (4) –Same thing as Insane about the stacking thing. fix
3. 00:23:181 (1) –I would maybe place a small jump here since that beat on the head of the slider is quite strong. fix
4. 00:36:442 (3,1) –Rather not curve these sliders too much. They tend to look ugly then. fix
5. 00:41:442 (2) –The tail of this slider is grazing the HP bar slightly. I suggest you lower it a bit. fix as I can
6. 01:26:224 (3,2) –Bleh, perfect the stack.fix

Nice mapset overall.
Good Luck~!

DahplA wrote:

[Down's Normal]

1. 00:08:834 (1) - You can probably improve this blanket a lot more by only using 3 anchor points, rather than several more.
2. 00:37:529 (4) - Not sure if this is suggesting a blanket, but it's way off. fix
3. 00:58:833 - I would add a break here to keep in line with the rest of the difficulties fix

SkinnyJommy wrote:

NM from my queue ayyyyyy

[Down's Normal]

[*]00:05:356 (1,2) - the blanket at the head of 2 is a bit off Yes.. but It is hard to fix

[*]00:36:442 (2,3) - This will definitely be confusing for beginner players, its a really big tempo increase from the long sliders before this, and on top of that its a stack, which is even more harder to read :C I think it's okay

[*]00:36:659 (3,4) - Fix blanket! fix

[*]00:43:181 (3,4,5) - Keep the same distance snap between everything in normal's / easy's PLEASEEEEEEE fix

[*]00:56:224 (1,2,3) - please no overlaps at all either, this is really bad Can't follow the beat if so. [/list]

well thats it for my mod! the background looks so high quality holy moly

gl with this

-Nya- wrote:

Heya~ From my M4M queue~

Down’s Normal:

1. Not sure if 4.5 as an approach rate would be fine for the easiest diff. I remember one of my maps getting DQ’s because I set the AR to 5. An AR of 4 is definitely acceptable though. You can doublecheck this with a QAT though, just to make sure 4.5 is safe. fix to ar4
2. 00:08:834 (1) –Uhh, ugly shape. I understand that you absolutely want to perfect that blanket but I think you can still make a nice blanket with a normal curved slider as well. Rather not make ugly curved sliders to perfect a blanket. I don't think this is ugly. The deployment of this way my mapping style.
3. 00:14:486 (1,1) –There has to be four beats between the spinner and the next note in the easiest diff. I think right now there are 3 beats. To be safe you can end the spinner here: 00:17:530 – fix
4. 01:06:659 (4) –Ugly shape. I agree. fix
5. 01:23:181 (2) –I think it’s better to end the slider here: 01:23:616 – fix

Nice mapset overall.
Good Luck~!

UnLock- wrote:

사실 배경이 니토리 아니더라도 상관없음 ㅎ

• [Down's Normal]

1. 00:19:268 - 서클 여기서부터 시작해도 될거같네요.
2. 00:36:442 (2,3) - 노멀 난이도에서 스택서클은 추천하지 않습니다. 큰 문제는 없겠지만 스택 푸시는걸 권장합니다.
3. 00:44:050 (4) - 뉴콤보 넣어주세요
4. 00:48:398 (5) - 뉴콤보
5. 00:49:268 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제
6. 00:55:355 (5) - 뉴콤보
7. 00:56:224 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제
8. 00:56:224 (1) - 뉴콤보
9. 01:25:790 (1,2,1,2) - 최하위 난이도 에서 이건좀 어렵다고 생각되는 패턴이네요. 1/2슬라이더로 하지마시고
   01:25:790 - 01:26:224 - 01:26:659 - 01:27:094 - 여기다가 서클 하나씩만 놔주시면 될거같아요.

• 
  [Hard]

1. 00:03:617 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
2. 00:04:921 (3) - 뉴콤
3. 00:05:356 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
4. 00:07:095 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
5. 00:08:182 (4) - 뉴콤
6. 00:08:834 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
7. 00:09:921 (3) - 뉴콤
8. 00:10:573 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
9. 00:11:660 (4) - 뉴콤
10. 00:33:616 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
11. 00:37:094 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
12. 00:37:963 (4) - 뉴콤
13. 00:38:833 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
14. 00:55:355 (3) - 리피트 슬라이더 2개만 줄여주세요 오버매핑같습니다.

• 
  [Insane]

1. 00:04:921 (4) - 뉴콤
2. 00:05:356 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
3. 00:07:095 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요
4. 00:08:182 (3) - 뉴콤
5. 00:08:834 (1) - 뉴콤풀어주세요
6. 00:09:921 (3) - 뉴콤
7. 00:58:290 - 제생각엔 여기 서클 하나 필요할거같은데 패턴상 넣기가 애매하네요. 가능하시다면 여기다가 서클하나 추가해주세요.
8. 01:03:616 (2) -
   이렇게 해보세요

   
9. 01:11:007 (5,6,7,8) - 패턴이 부자연스럽고 어색하네요. 추천드리는 모양은 삼각형이나 완벽한 사각형입니다. 시도해보세요.
   지적드린 뉴콤이외에도 신경쓸 부분이 보이니 뉴콤보 전체난이도 신경써주세요.

VTC wrote:

From my queue.

• [Down's Normal]

1. 00:19:268 - 서클 여기서부터 시작해도 될거같네요. 아까 BN이와서 슬라후에 4비트 비어두라고 하셔서 넣을수가 없겠네요..
2. 00:36:442 (2,3) - 노멀 난이도에서 스택서클은 추천하지 않습니다. 큰 문제는 없겠지만 스택 푸시는걸 권장합니다. 블랭킷도 되어있어서 고치기가 어려울것 같습니다. 큰 문제가 없다고하시니 일단 두겠습니다.
3. 00:44:050 (4) - 뉴콤보 넣어주세요 fix
4. 00:48:398 (5) - 뉴콤보 fix
5. 00:49:268 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제 fix
6. 00:55:355 (5) - 뉴콤보 fix
7. 00:56:224 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제 fix
8. 00:56:224 (1) - 뉴콤보 fix
9. 01:25:790 (1,2,1,2) - 최하위 난이도 에서 이건좀 어렵다고 생각되는 패턴이네요. 1/2슬라이더로 하지마시고
   01:25:790 - 01:26:224 - 01:26:659 - 01:27:094 - 여기다가 서클 하나씩만 놔주시면 될거같아요. fix

MERRY CHRISTMAS !

VTC wrote:

From my queue.

• 
  [Hard]

1. 00:03:617 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
2. 00:04:921 (3) - 뉴콤fix
3. 00:05:356 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
4. 00:07:095 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
5. 00:08:182 (4) - 뉴콤fix
6. 00:08:834 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
7. 00:09:921 (3) - 뉴콤fix
8. 00:10:573 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
9. 00:11:660 (4) - 뉴콤fix
10. 00:33:616 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
11. 00:37:094 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
12. 00:37:963 (4) - 뉴콤fix
13. 00:38:833 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
14. 00:55:355 (3) - 리피트 슬라이더 2개만 줄여주세요 오버매핑같습니다.지금 시간이 늦어져서 스피커를 못켭니다...낮에 듣고 해볼게요

• 
  [Insane]

1. 00:04:921 (4) - 뉴콤fix
2. 00:05:356 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
3. 00:07:095 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요fix
4. 00:08:182 (3) - 뉴콤fix
5. 00:08:834 (1) - 뉴콤풀어주세요fix
6. 00:09:921 (3) - 뉴콤fix
7. 00:58:290 - 제생각엔 여기 서클 하나 필요할거같은데 패턴상 넣기가 애매하네요. 가능하시다면 여기다가 서클하나 추가해주세요.힘들듯하네요ㅠㅠ
8. 01:03:616 (2) -
   이렇게 해보세요

   
   현재가 동선 고려해볼때 더 나은 것 같습니다.
9. 01:11:007 (5,6,7,8) - 패턴이 부자연스럽고 어색하네요. 추천드리는 모양은 삼각형이나 완벽한 사각형입니다. 시도해보세요. 공간 상황상 힘들 것 같습니다...조금더 동선 자연스럽게 수정해봤어요.
   지적드린 뉴콤이외에도 신경쓸 부분이 보이니 뉴콤보 전체난이도 신경써주세요.넵 이것도 낮에 전부 체크해볼게요.

MERRY CHRISTMAS !

Left wrote:

메리 크리스마스~

1. 00:07:747 (9) - can be put right after 00:07:095 (8) - this slider so it make flow there a bit better imo , put (9) at x160 y112 q:
2. 00:11:877 (1) - why nc ? I don't think it really need nc , nothing change much here
3. 00:26:659 (1,2,3,4) - swap place of these notes so it will make flow here 00:26:224 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - better ?
4. 01:22:311 (1) - mm I think straight slider would fit here better and would make flow here 01:22:311 (1,2) - nice imo

1. 00:16:525 - I think spinner fit better than the break o.o
2. 00:30:137 (1,2,3,4) - spaced 1/4 reverse slider maybe a bit too hard , I thikn better use lower spacing like 0.7x would be better here
3. 00:31:877 (1,2,3) - mm I'm thinking that maybe if this get consistent spacing maybe it will make flow here better imo
4. 00:33:616 (3,4,1) - same
5. 01:13:616 (1,2,3) - similiar to 00:30:137 (1,2,3,4) -
   
   overall somehow idk why you change spacing a lots lol like first it 1.1x then it's go 1.2x on next note then back to 1.1x or go to 1.3x
   I think using same spacing for some notes that not sound emphasized would make thing looks a bit better imo

1. 00:08:834 (1) - I think ctrl+g this make flow here 00:07:095 (2,1,2) - better
2. 01:05:355 - it feels weird to ignore this snare , I think if you end 01:04:920 (1) - at white tick instead it will make rhythm sound better

CelsiusLK wrote:

as requested
[down]

1. 00:08:834 (1) - I think ctrl+g this make flow here 00:07:095 (2,1,2) - better fix
2. 01:05:355 - it feels weird to ignore this snare , I think if you end 01:04:920 (1) - at white tick instead it will make rhythm sound better fix

good luck

CelsiusLK wrote:

as requested

[insane]

1. 00:07:747 (9) - can be put right after 00:07:095 (8) - this slider so it make flow there a bit better imo , put (9) at x160 y112 q:fix
2. 00:11:877 (1) - why nc ? I don't think it really need nc , nothing change much herefix
3. 00:26:659 (1,2,3,4) - swap place of these notes so it will make flow here 00:26:224 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - better ?fix
4. 01:22:311 (1) - mm I think straight slider would fit here better and would make flow here 01:22:311 (1,2) - nice imofix

[hard]

1. 00:16:525 - I think spinner fit better than the break o.ofix
2. 00:30:137 (1,2,3,4) - spaced 1/4 reverse slider maybe a bit too hard , I thikn better use lower spacing like 0.7x would be better herefix
3. 00:31:877 (1,2,3) - mm I'm thinking that maybe if this get consistent spacing maybe it will make flow here better imofix
4. 00:33:616 (3,4,1) - samefix
5. 01:13:616 (1,2,3) - similiar to 00:30:137 (1,2,3,4) - fix
   
   overall somehow idk why you change spacing a lots lol like first it 1.1x then it's go 1.2x on next note then back to 1.1x or go to 1.3x
   I think using same spacing for some notes that not sound emphasized would make thing looks a bit better imoI'm trying to fix now but It takes too many change..

good luck

Really Thanks for accepting my request and Thank you again for modding!

1. 00:57:963 (1) - Why new combo

1. 00:04:921 (1) - Should remove NC and move to 00:05:356 (2) - because big white tick is important to make new combo
2. 01:22:963 - You miss something here

Chibi Maruko wrote:

From my queue

Hard

1. 00:57:963 (1) - Why new combofix

Insane

1. 00:04:921 (1) - Should remove NC and move to 00:05:356 (2) - because big white tick is important to make new combofix
2. 01:22:963 - You miss something herewell...

This map too great, I can mod like short ;_;
Ok, gl with ur map \:D/

byfar wrote:

Hello, from mod queue

General

Normal

• 
  looks fine

Hard

1. 01:03:181 (1,2) - super cramped (almost touching even), spread out a little fix
2. 00:51:877 (3,4) - ^well...
3. 01:04:050 (3,4,5) - - i'd swap this rhythm here. you should make this 01:04:050 (3,4) - a 1/2 slider and this 01:04:485 (5) - 2 1/2 circles. this emphasizes the rhythm better. the vocals lands over here 01:04:485 (5) -, so you want to emphasize that. fix

Insane

1. 00:09:921 (1,2,3,4) - space this out like you did over here? in my opinion the stacks don't fit here fix
2. 00:23:182 (1,2) - perhaps these two sliders can be spaced out more for aesthetic purposes? so that it doesn't look super cramped. http://puu.sh/mf69J/440061cce1.jpg fix
3. 00:25:791 (3,4) - same reason as above^ I have no idea how to move it..
4. 00:37:963 (7,8) - ^ for DS...
5. 00:42:311 (1,2,3,4) - ^ since the visual distance (as in spacing between sliders) is larger here 00:39:485 (2,3,4,5,6) - , why does the visual distance suddenly decrease with no indication from the music? compare http://puu.sh/mf6iY/c62937beb4.jpg to http://puu.sh/mf6jC/b6689af039.jpg fix
6. 00:29:485 (6) - make it more in the center of the triangle? fix
7. 00:48:181 (1,2) - try something like this? http://puu.sh/mf6lH/ffae785451.jpg i think it flows better this way since the cursor motion is more zigzagged whereas your pattern before was quite linear. fix
8. 00:53:398 (3) - kind of confusing to read, space out like this? http://puu.sh/mf6pd/0ca788ceec.jpg fix
9. 00:54:703 (2) - make it face the flow direction like this? http://puu.sh/mf6tm/21cae90837.jpg fix
10. 00:55:137 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - the flow is a bit off here. as a tip, try to imagine the 1/4 sliders as a 1/2 circle and see if it will flow. fix
11. 01:04:920 (1,2) - very cramped fix
12. 01:03:181 (1,2) - ^ well..
    
    cool diff

gl

amusing_zero wrote:

my browser reset my mod, i'm crying ...

So ... I write the mod again.
Firstly, try to make one more kiai here 01:15:355 - well...


Hard is ok, but
01:26:007 (2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5,6) - is confusing, so try to change it as it is very difficult to play I think it's okay..

Insane could be more difficult if you weren't trying to hide the notes
00:13:834 (4) - is the example I changed another one.
00:08:399 (2,3) - ^
ask for more examples if you need to
also in some places combos are too long (check streams)

amusing_zero wrote:

my browser reset my mod, i'm crying ...

Normal:
00:01:878 (1) - end it here and put a note on the white tick
00:03:617 (2) - start this slider here and make it shorter as the first
00:04:921 - put smth here
00:08:834 (1) - separate it onto 2 sliders
00:17:964 - put a note here pls
00:23:833 (3) - move it to the white tick and shorten the slider a bit
00:27:963 (3) - remove it to solve the similar problem and move the previous slider
00:34:485 (3,4) - a slider instead of them
00:41:442 (3,4) - maybe it's the same
00:42:963 (2) - you can remove it to make the map easier
00:44:703 - a note here pls
00:51:007 (5) - end it at this time
01:08:398 (1) - make the slider twice shorter and then repeat the slider
01:10:137 (1) - the same?
01:13:616 (3) - the same

[C u r i] wrote:

노말 irc

19:40 [C u r i]: 님 맵만 모딩하고 공짜쿠도스 먹을래야
19:40 [C u r i]: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
19:40 Down: ㄷㄷ
19:41 Down: 쿠도스먹기엔
19:41 [C u r i]: 우선 초반에 슬라모양좀 뜯어 고치는게 어떰..
19:41 Down: 빼애애액
19:41 Down: 전 좋은뎅
19:41 [C u r i]: 00:05:356 - 여기부터 00:10:573 - 까지..
19:42 [C u r i]: 담요를 쓰겠다는건 알겠고
19:42 [C u r i]: 다괜찮은데
19:42 [C u r i]: 너무 억지로 만든감이있음
19:42 Down: 00:08:834 (1) -
19:42 Down: 이건
19:42 Down: 자꾸 막 걸고늘어지는분들이 많은데
19:42 Down: 답이없음..
19:42 [C u r i]: 점 저렇게 많이 안찍어도
19:42 [C u r i]: 충분히 담요 됨
19:42 [C u r i]: 2점으로도 저거보다
19:42 [C u r i]: 확실한 담요 나옴
19:43 Down: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4279137
19:43 Down: 이렇게박으면 될려나요...?
19:43 [C u r i]: 그냥 1점 슬라로 박는게 
19:43 [C u r i]: 더 이뻐보임 차라리
19:45 Down: 흠
19:46 [C u r i]: 00:43:181 (3,1,2) - 요즘 매핑은 사각형보다는 원을 더 좋아함
19:47 [C u r i]: 00:56:224 (1,2,3) - 이지가 없이 최하난이도로 노말이기때문에 파란선은 쓰지않는게 좋음
19:47 Down: (나름 원이라고 만든건데)
19:48 [C u r i]: 하이라이트에 빨간선에서 시작되거나 끝나는 노트가 없는데
19:48 [C u r i]: 굉장히 박자똑으로 보면
19:48 [C u r i]: 지루하다고 생각해볼수있음
19:49 Down: 저번에 몇개있었는데
19:49 Down: BN이 치워버림
19:49 [C u r i]: 00:38:833 (1) - 점 너무 많이 찍는것도 좋진않음
19:49 [C u r i]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4279158
19:50 [C u r i]: 점을 최대한 줄여쓰는게 모딩받을때 편함
19:51 Down: 엌
19:51 Down: S자를 노린게 아니지만
19:51 Down: 바꿔볼께용
19:51 [C u r i]: 01:11:877 (1,2,3) - 이런것도 원으로 잡아주는게 좋음
19:51 Down: 오옹
19:51 [C u r i]: 쉬운난이도기때문에 무빙하기 쉽게 잡아야됨
19:52 Down: 크흑
19:52 Down: 디스턴스 다꼬일듯
19:52 Down: 천천히 바꿔보죠
19:54 Down: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4279171
19:54 Down: 1번을 살짝올려서 디스턴스조정했는데
19:54 Down: 원같아요?
19:54 Down: 아닌감..
19:55 [C u r i]: 원만들기가 어려우면
19:55 [C u r i]: 대충 타원으로 맞춰도 ㅗ딤
19:55 [C u r i]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4279181
19:56 Down: ㅇㅎ
19:56 [C u r i]: 01:04:920 (1,2,3,4) - 이것도
19:56 [C u r i]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4279185
19:56 [C u r i]: 이렇게 하면 훨씬 무빙하기 쉽잖
19:57 Down: 엌
19:57 Down: 최대한 비슷하게 맞춰봄
19:58 [C u r i]: 그냥 쉬운난이도 잘찍는법은
19:59 [C u r i]: 남의 맵 보면 됨
19:59 [C u r i]: 어려운난이도는 남 맵 봐도 따라하는게 어려운데
19:59 [C u r i]: 쉬운맵은 따라하는것도 쉬움
19:59 Down: ㅇㅋㅇㅋ
19:59 Down: 렢님이 쿠도스줄지는 모르겠지만
20:00 Down: 스레드 ㄱㄱ
20:00 [C u r i]: 01:14:485 (4,1) - 
20:00 [C u r i]: 아직 한밯ㄹ
20:00 [C u r i]: 남았다
20:00 [C u r i]: 01:14:485 (4) - 얘는 직선인데
20:00 [C u r i]: 01:15:355 (1) - 얘는 왜 곡선임
20:00 Down: !
20:00 Down: 왜그럴까요
20:01 [C u r i]: 그러게요 왜그럴까요
20:02 Down: 진짜 왜그럴까요
20:02 [C u r i]: 님 혹시 컨셉임?
20:02 [C u r i]: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
20:02 Down: 설마...
20:02 Down: 그럴리가
20:02 Down: 스레드에 올려주셔야
20:02 Down: 그전에 올라온 모딩도
20:02 Down: 같이 인용시켜서
20:02 Down: 고친줄알겠죠
20:03 [C u r i]: 이제 올리러감

328,200,14051,6,0,B|312:184|288:176|264:184|247:199|247:199|215:228|215:228|180:258|119:266|81:233|56:192|45:143|81:93|127:75|127:75|145:70,1,462.187508815527
158,159,15791,1,0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:14:051 (1) - change beat to http://puu.sh/mpfu8/91ac6225af.jpg

Milan- wrote:

hi
normal
-00:14:486 (1) - i'd extend it till 00:17:964 - , otherwise that beat is left unclickable and end sounding pretty awkward fix
-00:23:833 (3) - prefer circle+1/1 slider, sounds the best cuz as right now you pass over 00:24:050 - which doesnt sound well fix
-01:01:007 - this note is quite hard to hear, use higher volumen or add some addition to it I turned the volume up.
-00:44:050 (1) - 00:55:355 (1) - these nc are prob unintentional? fix
-kiai could use some more variation on the rhythms. especially for a normal and low bpm, pure 1/1 isnt really fun i guess

cool stuff tho
gl

Taeyang wrote:

랜덤모딩
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

• Down's Normal

1. 00:01:878 (1,2) - 개인적으론 아래와 같은 흐름 추천
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:05:356 (1,2) - 오버랩 슬라담요로 이렇게 다듬으면 더 좋을것 같습니다. 00:08:834 (1) - 여기 담요도 더 다듬고요
   아래 코드 첨부했습니다 이패턴 원하시면 메모장열어서 그래도 복붙하시면됩니다. 이부분에 대한 모딩이 엄청많던데.. 복붙해서 가져가겠습니다.
   

   218,122,1878,6,0,P|359:144|232:230,1,360
   179,197,3617,2,0,P|71:291|223:296,1,360
   252,242,5356,6,0,B|360:237|448:298|448:298|490:221|472:142,1,360
   473,66,7095,2,0,B|464:125|426:193|426:193|329:147|207:165,1,360
   197,249,8834,6,0,P|120:166|194:80,2,240
   344,160,11443,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:27:311 (2) - 너무 슬라만 나오면 밋밋하니 직선슬라도 섞어줄 필요도 있다고 생각합니다. fix
   
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4. 00:31:877 (1,2,3) - 리듬 추천 참고만 할께용
   
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5. 00:36:442 (2,3) - 이지가 없는 노말은 왠만하면 이지규정을 따라가는게 좋습니다.;가능한 맵셋전체적으로 스택 해제 해주세요 언랭사유가 될시에 고치겠습니다. 딱히 생각나는 패턴이 없네요.
6. 00:38:398 (5) - 지우고 00:37:529 (4) - 컨쥐해서 리버스리버스 00:38:833 (1) - 그후 잘담요시켜주세요 자세한건 아래 사진첨부 확인 fix
   
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7. 00:44:050 (1) - 뉴콤 제거하고 배치추천 좋은 배치라서 따라하다가 DS때문에 머리터질뻔ㅋㅋ 암튼 fix
   
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8. 00:48:398 (1) - 뉴콤 제거하고 00:49:268 (2) - 뉴콤 ;다운비트가 00:49:268 (2) - 여기네요 일정한주기로 뉴콤을 박는것을 추천해드립니다. fix
9. 00:55:355 (1) - 뉴콤 제거 이유는 위와같음 fix

Milan- wrote:

hi
insane
-00:05:356 (1) - i'd add whistle on here cuz your whole intro sounds empty due to the lack of hsfix
-00:07:095 - to 00:10:573 - didnt get why the nc pattern changed tbhfix
-00:23:943 (3) - makes more sense to start the stream from 00:24:050 - instead. since that's where the sound you're trying to cover startsfixed
-there's clear triple here 00:48:507 - but instead you map 00:48:290 - , which is really weird i'd say...I mapped vocal mainly, then drum in here
-00:56:550 (2,2) - i'd space these a bit more so it's easier to read the 3/4 gap, as right it's like your usual spacingfix
-00:57:963 (1) - this should end at 00:58:290 - it's just to clear. need to redo the pattern yesfix
-01:15:246 - i'd add a triple here instead of 01:14:811 (8) - , sounds more fitting fix
-i dont agree with several streams/triples like 00:50:245 (4,6) - , 00:55:246 (4) - , this whole thing 01:07:529 - is like overmapping the same sound that repeats before 01:04:050 - and after, and even 01:25:790 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - sounds more like http://puu.sh/mstxG/2cb4f54c0e.jpg. stuff like those arent really supported by the song imo fix

hard
-00:14:051 (1,1) - rather use the same rhythm as insane. sounds bit better i guess will be fixed by Unlock-
-01:14:485 (3,4) - i'd unstack these so it's easier to play and read for this level fix

dunno if the sb is done but:
i was wondering how precise the spectrum is, like this break 00:59:703 - shouldn't have much variation, but it has.. uhhh
also this shouldn't happen . one way to make it work is to fade in everytime you need a group of leaves instead of just moving them in
or having like 3 layers (bg, and 2 blackbg) at the beginning
not sure if it's on purpose or not but your black pics dont fit the original bg size. so no idea if you wanted to add a scale effect at the beginning and end but forgot to scale it back or wat
sakura2.png seems unused, which is good , but delete it from the folder. same with black.png

cool stuff tho
gl

Taeyang wrote:

랜덤모딩
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

• General

1. 전체적으로 특별한 이유가 없다면 다운비트에 맞추서 매핑해주세요 노말은 2다운비트 하드,인센은 1다운비트
   
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• Hard

1. 00:03:182 (3,4,5,6) - 모양 흐름 추천;00:03:617 (4) - 리버스 지우고00:02:747 (2) - 여기에 담요 시킨후
   00:04:051 (5) - 이걸 00:03:182 (3) - 여기 꼬리에 스택시켜서 00:03:617 (4,5) - 점프 만들면 더 좋을것 같습니다.
   
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2. 00:04:704 (7) - 가능하면 이부분 서클 추가 했으면 좋겠네요 넣을 수는 있겠지만, 리딩이 불편해질 것같습니다.
3. 00:12:312 (1) - 뉴콤 제거하고 00:11:877 (1) -여기서 부터 시작; 흐름 모양 제안
   
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4. 00:20:572 (3,1) - 담요 더 잘맞춰줄수 있어요fix
   
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• Insane

1. 00:05:356 (1,2) - 00:06:660 (5,6) - 나지;스택 삐뚤어짐fix
2. 00:11:443 - 여기 보컬도 피아노도 아무소리도 없기에, 비워두는게 느낌상 더 좋아보이네요fix
   
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3. 00:14:051 (1) - 그저 롱슬라는 너무 밋밋해보이는데 하트라던가 모양 잡아보시느건 어떤가요? 아래껀 제 제안입니다.
   그게 아니라면 아주느린 변속(0.5sv)을 사용하셔도 될것같습니다.언락님 올려주신거대로 고치면 괜찮은 모양이 나올듯합니다

Satellite wrote:

diffname Insane changed Lunatic better.

Touhou song Insane = Lunatic is more better fit =w=

1. ?
   
2. "Iro wa Nio e do Chiri Nuru o" is not needed in tags, add tags"幽閉サテライト Mayumi Morinaga 森永真由美"

1. 00:36:442 (2,3) - since it's the only normal diff and the lowest sr diff, stack is not recommended here
2. 01:01:007 (1,1) - ^

1. od-0.5
2. 00:06:225 (3) - whistle? it quite fits for me. or using default whistle here
3. 00:46:659 (2) - too high and overlapped with the score at the right top: http://puu.sh/mLhyb/6f861fd958.jpg

1. od-0.5?
2. just fine.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

• 
  Down's Normal
  

1. 00:36:442 (2,3) - since it's the only normal diff and the lowest sr diff, stack is not recommended here
2. 01:01:007 (1,1) - ^

Minakami Yuki wrote:

1. Just some complaints.
2. My personal suggestions.
3. Highly recommended.
4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General

1. ?
   fixed
2. "Iro wa Nio e do Chiri Nuru o" is not needed in tags, add tags"幽閉サテライト Mayumi Morinaga 森永真由美"fixed

Hard

1. od-0.5 fixed
2. 00:06:225 (3) - whistle? it quite fits for me. or using default whistle here fixed
3. 00:46:659 (2) - too high and overlapped with the score at the right top: http://puu.sh/mLhyb/6f861fd958.jpg
   fixed like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413091

Lunatic

1. od-0.5? fix
2. just fine.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

when a BN left a star on your map, it means he/she gonna have a recheck after you telling him you have fixed the mods.

looks fine to me now, Bubbled!

Moly wrote:

[Down's Normal]

00:14:051 (5) - 살짝 내려주세요 http://puu.sh/mRnrl/7bf80723ee.jpg 이정도? 제 의도랑은 다른것 같아서 두겠습니다.
00:17:964 - 스핀 줄이시고 여기 슬라 하나 넣으셔야 할 것 같아요. 최하위 난이도에서는 스피너 회전중에 어프로치 서클이 보이면 언랭요소가 됩니다. 그래서 스핀을 거기까지 둔겁니다. 만약 스피너를 줄여서 어프로치 서클이 안보인다고 해도 상당히 어색하게 들릴것 같습니다.
01:01:007 (1) - 01:02:746 (2) - 얘랑 붙이시는 것도 괜찮을듯. 최하위 난이도에서 스택 또한 위험합니다. 저번에는 붙였었는데 BN이 위험하니까 분리하라고 하더라구요.

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hello! A mod in return~ Sorry for the huge delay ;n;

[> Down's Normal <]

1. 00:37:529 (4,1) - The spacing here is pretty low, while mainly using 0.7x on this calm part. Recorrecting it would suffice.
2. 00:40:572 (2) - Optional objective: Maybe a bit of curve on the tail of the slider? It'd improve bit of the flowing structure when it'd head towards the next note directly, which would make it a little comfortable for the beginner players to guide their cursor easily and smoothly. But if the current one is what you want, it'll still be fine as long as it's rankable and in an average aesthetics.
3. 01:20:572 (3) - Seems pretty minor, but you could at least make this little blanket more accurate for some aesthetical improvement, when giving it a try. Sth like this would do:
   
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4. 01:23:181 (2) - On slider's tail, replace the whistle to clap. It sounds clunky and noisy over the emphasis with the song.

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

[> Hard <]

1. 00:25:355 (2,3) - The jump here is quite a small sudden, nothing hits intense on the song track but downbeats(snares). So maybe equalizing objects with the music regarding the spacing, how about moving slider (2) somewhere near x:360|y:338 or around it? The gap would only be 0.20x, so it wouldn't take too much stress on "clicking" up the downbeat.fix
2. 00:27:094 (2,3) - I think making this part a passive pattern isn't very well or wise. A matching rhythm for this part is to Ctrl+G these two notes on the timeline, and it'll surely sound better than the current. As if it's applied, you can try another passive pattern like below pic for example. The circle stacks on the other slider for an indication of the music, can make it more interesting tbh:fix
   
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[> Lunatic <]

1. 01:17:094 (1) - Why not replace this onto another grid for a greater spacing? At least around/nearby x:216|y:65 would give a perfect 1.7x spacing as you usually spaced for the kiai time.fix

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Overall, the mapset is great. If it were only the storyboard elements were organized correctly, I would've planned to qualify this. Well, ended up being popped for rankability reasons.

Anyways, get me back once everything's done!

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Recheck, no kudosu

Hard
- HP Drain 5 for a balanced dissemination with the rest of the difficulties. Which would spread alike 3⁺² > 5⁺² > 7.fix
01:15:355 (1) - Add finish on slider's head, it would've done with the Lunatic diff. Just a bit hitsounding consistency.fix

Just a few things, and hopefully ready to be rebubbled. Get me back again once done.

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Everything seems alright, including the storyboard. I guess this beatmap is ready for sure. A rebubble, you deserve!

Satellite wrote:

Next bn : add 神々が恋した幻想郷 The Gensokyo the Gods Loved 河城にとり kawashiro nitori to tag please
and BG not fit this song Q.Q It is music of Kawashiro Nitori. Therefore BG of Kawashiro Nitori is preferable.

Satellite wrote:

Next bn : add 神々が恋した幻想郷 The Gensokyo the Gods Loved 河城にとり kawashiro nitori to tag please
and BG not fit this song Q.Q It is music of Kawashiro Nitori. Therefore BG of Kawashiro Nitori is preferable.

UnLock- wrote:

Satellite wrote:

Next bn : add 神々が恋した幻想郷 The Gensokyo the Gods Loved 河城にとり kawashiro nitori to tag please
and BG not fit this song Q.Q It is music of Kawashiro Nitori. Therefore BG of Kawashiro Nitori is preferable.

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I already pointed out about it LOL

Down wrote:

어쩃든 태그 추가땜시 어쩔 수 없이 터트려야할듯
BG는 뭐랄까.. 선택사항?

Minakami Yuki wrote:

no kd

just feel that the pattern in lunatic diff 00:24:920 (1,2,3,4) - plays quite awfulI can't know why..
and remove nc at 00:50:137 (1) - fix
stack? 00:57:746 (3,3) - fix

and those tags mentioned by satellitefix

Minakami Yuki wrote:

i remember this map and ?why not call me back to qualify
you cant find a suitable bg?

1. 00:13:834 (4) - 노트 제거 고려해주세요. 00:12:964 (2)와 달리 가사가 있는 것도 아니고, 1/2 박자가 너무 연속되면 강조 효과도 약해져요.
2. 00:26:659 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요. 여기만 콤보 주기가 짧네요.
3. 00:36:442 (2,3) - 박자가 너무 자의적입니다. 박자를 재구상해주세요.
4. 01:01:007 (1) - 굳이 필요한 노트인지는 의문입니다만, 유지를 원하시면 01:01:442 (1) 뉴콤 푸는거 고려해주세요. 너무 뜬금없는 단일 콤보 느낌입니다.
5. 01:10:137 (1) - 01:24:050 (1) - 콤보 풀어주세요.

1. 00:15:791 (1) - 스택이라서 뉴콤 효과가 다소 약한데, 콤보 푸는건 어때요?
2. 00:22:529 (5,6) - 연타 시작은 그렇다 쳐도 여기는 간격이 어긋난듯 하네요.
3. 00:31:442 (4,1) - 숫자상으로 일정한 간격입니다만, 이는 변속 때문으로 실제 간격은 다릅니다. 일정하게 유지시키는게 외관상 좋을듯 하네요.
4. 00:40:572 (1,2) - 블랭킷이 2% 부족해보이는 ㅋㅋ
5. 01:01:007 (1) - 볼륨이 과하게 낮은데, 40%정도라도. 루나틱도
6. 01:03:616 - 클랩
7. 01:27:094 (3,4,5,6) - 간격

1. 00:54:485 (1,3) - 다소 어색한 메뉴얼 스택인듯요.
2. 00:56:007 (7) - 간격이 (4,5,6)과 다르네요.
3. 01:03:181 (1,2,3) - 간격 신경써주세요. ctrl+G 활용하시면 균형잡힌 간격 만드실 수 있을겁니다.
4. 01:26:659 (5,1) - (5)에서 콤보 시작하고 마지막 뉴콤 지우는게 별 패턴이랑 1/4 슬라 패턴을 구별하는데 도움을 줄겁니다.