Milan- wrote:

hi
insane
-00:05:356 (1) - i'd add whistle on here cuz your whole intro sounds empty due to the lack of hsfix
-00:07:095 - to 00:10:573 - didnt get why the nc pattern changed tbhfix
-00:23:943 (3) - makes more sense to start the stream from 00:24:050 - instead. since that's where the sound you're trying to cover startsfixed
-there's clear triple here 00:48:507 - but instead you map 00:48:290 - , which is really weird i'd say...I mapped vocal mainly, then drum in here
-00:56:550 (2,2) - i'd space these a bit more so it's easier to read the 3/4 gap, as right it's like your usual spacingfix
-00:57:963 (1) - this should end at 00:58:290 - it's just to clear. need to redo the pattern yesfix
-01:15:246 - i'd add a triple here instead of 01:14:811 (8) - , sounds more fitting fix
-i dont agree with several streams/triples like 00:50:245 (4,6) - , 00:55:246 (4) - , this whole thing 01:07:529 - is like overmapping the same sound that repeats before 01:04:050 - and after, and even 01:25:790 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - sounds more like http://puu.sh/mstxG/2cb4f54c0e.jpg. stuff like those arent really supported by the song imo fix

hard
-00:14:051 (1,1) - rather use the same rhythm as insane. sounds bit better i guess will be fixed by Unlock-
-01:14:485 (3,4) - i'd unstack these so it's easier to play and read for this level fix

dunno if the sb is done but:
i was wondering how precise the spectrum is, like this break 00:59:703 - shouldn't have much variation, but it has.. uhhh
also this shouldn't happen . one way to make it work is to fade in everytime you need a group of leaves instead of just moving them in
or having like 3 layers (bg, and 2 blackbg) at the beginning
not sure if it's on purpose or not but your black pics dont fit the original bg size. so no idea if you wanted to add a scale effect at the beginning and end but forgot to scale it back or wat
sakura2.png seems unused, which is good , but delete it from the folder. same with black.png

cool stuff tho
gl

Taeyang wrote:

랜덤모딩
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

• General

1. 전체적으로 특별한 이유가 없다면 다운비트에 맞추서 매핑해주세요 노말은 2다운비트 하드,인센은 1다운비트
   
   SPOILER

   

• Hard

1. 00:03:182 (3,4,5,6) - 모양 흐름 추천;00:03:617 (4) - 리버스 지우고00:02:747 (2) - 여기에 담요 시킨후
   00:04:051 (5) - 이걸 00:03:182 (3) - 여기 꼬리에 스택시켜서 00:03:617 (4,5) - 점프 만들면 더 좋을것 같습니다.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   fix
2. 00:04:704 (7) - 가능하면 이부분 서클 추가 했으면 좋겠네요 넣을 수는 있겠지만, 리딩이 불편해질 것같습니다.
3. 00:12:312 (1) - 뉴콤 제거하고 00:11:877 (1) -여기서 부터 시작; 흐름 모양 제안
   
   SPOILER

   
   fix
4. 00:20:572 (3,1) - 담요 더 잘맞춰줄수 있어요fix
   
   SPOILER

   

• Insane

1. 00:05:356 (1,2) - 00:06:660 (5,6) - 나지;스택 삐뚤어짐fix
2. 00:11:443 - 여기 보컬도 피아노도 아무소리도 없기에, 비워두는게 느낌상 더 좋아보이네요fix
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:14:051 (1) - 그저 롱슬라는 너무 밋밋해보이는데 하트라던가 모양 잡아보시느건 어떤가요? 아래껀 제 제안입니다.
   그게 아니라면 아주느린 변속(0.5sv)을 사용하셔도 될것같습니다.언락님 올려주신거대로 고치면 괜찮은 모양이 나올듯합니다

Satellite wrote:

diffname Insane changed Lunatic better.

Touhou song Insane = Lunatic is more better fit =w=

1. ?
   
2. "Iro wa Nio e do Chiri Nuru o" is not needed in tags, add tags"幽閉サテライト Mayumi Morinaga 森永真由美"

1. 00:36:442 (2,3) - since it's the only normal diff and the lowest sr diff, stack is not recommended here
2. 01:01:007 (1,1) - ^

1. od-0.5
2. 00:06:225 (3) - whistle? it quite fits for me. or using default whistle here
3. 00:46:659 (2) - too high and overlapped with the score at the right top: http://puu.sh/mLhyb/6f861fd958.jpg

1. od-0.5?
2. just fine.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

• 
  Down's Normal
  

1. 00:36:442 (2,3) - since it's the only normal diff and the lowest sr diff, stack is not recommended here
2. 01:01:007 (1,1) - ^

Minakami Yuki wrote:

1. Just some complaints.
2. My personal suggestions.
3. Highly recommended.
4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General

1. ?
   fixed
2. "Iro wa Nio e do Chiri Nuru o" is not needed in tags, add tags"幽閉サテライト Mayumi Morinaga 森永真由美"fixed

Hard

1. od-0.5 fixed
2. 00:06:225 (3) - whistle? it quite fits for me. or using default whistle here fixed
3. 00:46:659 (2) - too high and overlapped with the score at the right top: http://puu.sh/mLhyb/6f861fd958.jpg
   fixed like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413091

Lunatic

1. od-0.5? fix
2. just fine.

Minakami Yuki wrote:

when a BN left a star on your map, it means he/she gonna have a recheck after you telling him you have fixed the mods.

looks fine to me now, Bubbled!

Moly wrote:

[Down's Normal]

00:14:051 (5) - 살짝 내려주세요 http://puu.sh/mRnrl/7bf80723ee.jpg 이정도? 제 의도랑은 다른것 같아서 두겠습니다.
00:17:964 - 스핀 줄이시고 여기 슬라 하나 넣으셔야 할 것 같아요. 최하위 난이도에서는 스피너 회전중에 어프로치 서클이 보이면 언랭요소가 됩니다. 그래서 스핀을 거기까지 둔겁니다. 만약 스피너를 줄여서 어프로치 서클이 안보인다고 해도 상당히 어색하게 들릴것 같습니다.
01:01:007 (1) - 01:02:746 (2) - 얘랑 붙이시는 것도 괜찮을듯. 최하위 난이도에서 스택 또한 위험합니다. 저번에는 붙였었는데 BN이 위험하니까 분리하라고 하더라구요.

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hello! A mod in return~ Sorry for the huge delay ;n;

[> Down's Normal <]

1. 00:37:529 (4,1) - The spacing here is pretty low, while mainly using 0.7x on this calm part. Recorrecting it would suffice.
2. 00:40:572 (2) - Optional objective: Maybe a bit of curve on the tail of the slider? It'd improve bit of the flowing structure when it'd head towards the next note directly, which would make it a little comfortable for the beginner players to guide their cursor easily and smoothly. But if the current one is what you want, it'll still be fine as long as it's rankable and in an average aesthetics.
3. 01:20:572 (3) - Seems pretty minor, but you could at least make this little blanket more accurate for some aesthetical improvement, when giving it a try. Sth like this would do:
   
   ss

   
4. 01:23:181 (2) - On slider's tail, replace the whistle to clap. It sounds clunky and noisy over the emphasis with the song.

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

[> Hard <]

1. 00:25:355 (2,3) - The jump here is quite a small sudden, nothing hits intense on the song track but downbeats(snares). So maybe equalizing objects with the music regarding the spacing, how about moving slider (2) somewhere near x:360|y:338 or around it? The gap would only be 0.20x, so it wouldn't take too much stress on "clicking" up the downbeat.fix
2. 00:27:094 (2,3) - I think making this part a passive pattern isn't very well or wise. A matching rhythm for this part is to Ctrl+G these two notes on the timeline, and it'll surely sound better than the current. As if it's applied, you can try another passive pattern like below pic for example. The circle stacks on the other slider for an indication of the music, can make it more interesting tbh:fix
   
   ss

   

[> Lunatic <]

1. 01:17:094 (1) - Why not replace this onto another grid for a greater spacing? At least around/nearby x:216|y:65 would give a perfect 1.7x spacing as you usually spaced for the kiai time.fix

[/notice]

Overall, the mapset is great. If it were only the storyboard elements were organized correctly, I would've planned to qualify this. Well, ended up being popped for rankability reasons.

Anyways, get me back once everything's done!

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Recheck, no kudosu

Hard
- HP Drain 5 for a balanced dissemination with the rest of the difficulties. Which would spread alike 3⁺² > 5⁺² > 7.fix
01:15:355 (1) - Add finish on slider's head, it would've done with the Lunatic diff. Just a bit hitsounding consistency.fix

Just a few things, and hopefully ready to be rebubbled. Get me back again once done.

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Everything seems alright, including the storyboard. I guess this beatmap is ready for sure. A rebubble, you deserve!

Satellite wrote:

Next bn : add 神々が恋した幻想郷 The Gensokyo the Gods Loved 河城にとり kawashiro nitori to tag please
and BG not fit this song Q.Q It is music of Kawashiro Nitori. Therefore BG of Kawashiro Nitori is preferable.

Satellite wrote:

Next bn : add 神々が恋した幻想郷 The Gensokyo the Gods Loved 河城にとり kawashiro nitori to tag please
and BG not fit this song Q.Q It is music of Kawashiro Nitori. Therefore BG of Kawashiro Nitori is preferable.

UnLock- wrote:

Satellite wrote:

Next bn : add 神々が恋した幻想郷 The Gensokyo the Gods Loved 河城にとり kawashiro nitori to tag please
and BG not fit this song Q.Q It is music of Kawashiro Nitori. Therefore BG of Kawashiro Nitori is preferable.

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I already pointed out about it LOL

Down wrote:

어쩃든 태그 추가땜시 어쩔 수 없이 터트려야할듯
BG는 뭐랄까.. 선택사항?

Minakami Yuki wrote:

no kd

just feel that the pattern in lunatic diff 00:24:920 (1,2,3,4) - plays quite awfulI can't know why..
and remove nc at 00:50:137 (1) - fix
stack? 00:57:746 (3,3) - fix

and those tags mentioned by satellitefix

Minakami Yuki wrote:

i remember this map and ?why not call me back to qualify
you cant find a suitable bg?

1. 00:13:834 (4) - 노트 제거 고려해주세요. 00:12:964 (2)와 달리 가사가 있는 것도 아니고, 1/2 박자가 너무 연속되면 강조 효과도 약해져요.
2. 00:26:659 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요. 여기만 콤보 주기가 짧네요.
3. 00:36:442 (2,3) - 박자가 너무 자의적입니다. 박자를 재구상해주세요.
4. 01:01:007 (1) - 굳이 필요한 노트인지는 의문입니다만, 유지를 원하시면 01:01:442 (1) 뉴콤 푸는거 고려해주세요. 너무 뜬금없는 단일 콤보 느낌입니다.
5. 01:10:137 (1) - 01:24:050 (1) - 콤보 풀어주세요.

1. 00:15:791 (1) - 스택이라서 뉴콤 효과가 다소 약한데, 콤보 푸는건 어때요?
2. 00:22:529 (5,6) - 연타 시작은 그렇다 쳐도 여기는 간격이 어긋난듯 하네요.
3. 00:31:442 (4,1) - 숫자상으로 일정한 간격입니다만, 이는 변속 때문으로 실제 간격은 다릅니다. 일정하게 유지시키는게 외관상 좋을듯 하네요.
4. 00:40:572 (1,2) - 블랭킷이 2% 부족해보이는 ㅋㅋ
5. 01:01:007 (1) - 볼륨이 과하게 낮은데, 40%정도라도. 루나틱도
6. 01:03:616 - 클랩
7. 01:27:094 (3,4,5,6) - 간격

1. 00:54:485 (1,3) - 다소 어색한 메뉴얼 스택인듯요.
2. 00:56:007 (7) - 간격이 (4,5,6)과 다르네요.
3. 01:03:181 (1,2,3) - 간격 신경써주세요. ctrl+G 활용하시면 균형잡힌 간격 만드실 수 있을겁니다.
4. 01:26:659 (5,1) - (5)에서 콤보 시작하고 마지막 뉴콤 지우는게 별 패턴이랑 1/4 슬라 패턴을 구별하는데 도움을 줄겁니다.

Sonnyc wrote:

스피너 01:33:561 - 에 끝내시는거 어때요? 지금 엔딩은 너무 애매한 스팟 같네요.
[Down's Normal]

1. 00:13:834 (4) - 노트 제거 고려해주세요. 00:12:964 (2)와 달리 가사가 있는 것도 아니고, 1/2 박자가 너무 연속되면 강조 효과도 약해져요. Fixed.
2. 00:26:659 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어주세요. 여기만 콤보 주기가 짧네요. Fixed.
3. 00:36:442 (2,3) - 박자가 너무 자의적입니다. 박자를 재구상해주세요. 슬라이더 하나로 이었습니다.
4. 01:01:007 (1) - 굳이 필요한 노트인지는 의문입니다만, 유지를 원하시면 01:01:442 (1) 뉴콤 푸는거 고려해주세요. 너무 뜬금없는 단일 콤보 느낌입니다. 노트를 제거했습니다.
5. 01:10:137 (1) - 01:24:050 (1) - 콤보 풀어주세요. Fixed.

Dailycare wrote:

랭크 ㅊㅋㅊㅋ