-Nya- wrote:

Heya~ M4M

General:

1. This file is not in the SB folder. I guess it has to be? yeah but worked.. rip im gonna to recode then
2. Maybe add “Karen” in tags, since Karen provided the lyrics. (According to your description)

Our Promise <3:

1. 00:36:003 (2) –Move the red anchor of this slider a bit more to the right. The shape will look better then imo.
   
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2. 00:46:519 (3) –Uhh, not a nice shape. Looks too curved. Curve it a bit less.
3. 01:31:648 (3,4) –This spacing looks a bit small compared to other similar spacings. (4) is too close to (3).
4. 02:05:030 (5,1) –Rather avoid this slight overlap. It looks really unnecessary.
5. 02:06:945 (3) –Imo the jump should rather be here and not here: 02:06:626 (2) – since the click sound is on (3) and should be emphasized. pianoooo
6. 02:19:578 (3) –I think you have to add an addition here:
   
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   I don’t think the click sound has to be on that note but rather the dong sound.
7. 02:22:078 (3) -^, on head. This applies to all similar cases.
8. 02:14:578 (3,3) –Shouldn’t you add jumps here as well, like you did here: 02:22:078 (3,3) – This applies to all similar cases.
9. 02:44:578 (3) –I know you are stacking here but I think a jump will fit better and be consistent.

Normal <3:

1. Since you added a break in Normal and Easy, why not in the hardest diff as well? The players will have to rest in that diff as well. Rather keep your breaks consistent. doesnt really matter. it's normal to give a break in lower diffs
2. 01:21:675 (3) –Ctrl+J this slider for better flow. change in other way
3. 02:50:828 (5,1,2) –I would rather place these notes on the right side of the grid to avoid the overlap with 02:48:953 (2,3) – blanket

Easy <3:

1. 00:40:782 (4,1) –This is a bad overlap that can be avoided. You can try creating a blanket. if i can do i would do it from long time ago ;_;
2. 01:52:903 (1) –Ctrl+J for better flow. not really good for me
3. 01:52:903 (1) –Spacing error here. This slider is a bit too close to 01:51:691 (1) –
4. 02:00:562 (4,5,6) –Isn’t this a rhythm for a Normal. I don’t think this kind of pattern fits into an Easy diff. Too difficult for beginners. This applies to all similar cases. low bpm afterall so just less/some 1/2 would make the variety
5. 02:32:078 (4,5) –This pattern looks a bit difficult for the easiest diff. Rather just turn those two objects into a single slider. This applies to all similar cases.
6. 03:10:828 (3,4) -^ easy to read for this one

Good Luck~!

Mako Sakata wrote:

Metadata?

SPOILER

Momochikun wrote:

no kd ya mb

[Normal]
00:54:184 (3,1) - iki se mending jangan di stack, bingung soale lak end slider biasane
01:04:163 (3,1) - ^
00:59:176 - 1/2 slider gae vocal ? ga melu vocal 8(
01:14:156 (2) - ga miss whistle ?
01:30:069 - ngganjel rasane lak kene ga onok note-_- kasih ae lo mesisan ga melu vocal 8(
02:50:828 (5,1) - swap NC ?

[Easy]
00:12:088 (1,2) - iki angel di catch lak gae awal", mending (1) sing di gae 3/2 slider cek spacing e ga aneh
01:08:840 (2,3,4) - hmm wedi ne beginner malah ngeklik (4) duduk (3) soale jarake luwih cidek, coba rearrange ?
02:10:775 - note plss tambah angel lek 1/2
01:55:456 (4) - ctrl g ? wut? tambah jump



ga ngerti opo sing kudu di mod soale lagune lemot orz,
gl

Mako Sakata wrote:

Recheck,

Xinely kok tiba2 sb nya hilang yah di bagian ini 03:13:328 - yang abis efek zoom in https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4382646 aku pake default skin nah SB sering ngebug kalo pake objek dari file yg aku pake dari BG, jadi itu efek zoom nya aku hapus deh daripada ngebug terus
Padahal udah redownload sama restart osu, terus kenapa ga pake epilepsi warning? karena dihapus jadi ga perlu epilepsi

Itu aja kayanya, selebihnya okk

1. ta.png is not present in osb/osu files. Please remove this png from the mapset as it it does nothing.

1. Care to explain how "<3" emoticon is related to the difficulty names? What does the heart here mean? Remove it, please. If you really want to keep it, leave it in the hardest diff, although I believe that it should not be used at all.

1. 02:18:328 (1,3) - the stack here lowers readability of the patterns. Please avoid this kind of stacks in E/N diffs.

1. 01:31:332 (2) - the slider leaves the stronger beat at 01:31:648 - unclickable. Please replace with two circles to emphasize it properly?

1. 02:51:609 (3) - doesn't seem to be following anything. And while we are at it (4) would feel really weird if only (3) is removed. So, either remove both or explain what do these two follow.

Bakari wrote:

Greetings.

[Easy]

1. 02:18:328 (1,3) - the stack here lowers readability of the patterns. Please avoid this kind of stacks in E/N diffs. there isn't any burts or object covering it, check in game https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4425292 the object is totally fine, this kind of stacks doesn't affect readability at all

[Normal]

1. 01:31:332 (2) - the slider leaves the stronger beat at 01:31:648 - unclickable. Please replace with two circles to emphasize it properly? piano pitch its really stronger at 01:31:332 - than in 01:31:648 -

[Our Promise]

1. 02:51:609 (3) - doesn't seem to be following anything. And while we are at it (4) would feel really weird if only (3) is removed. So, either remove both or explain what do these two follow. or just remove 3 and add a circle at 02:51:765 - (there is a triplet in the music, somehow i did miss it)