KuranteMelodii wrote:

As promised, M4M

I suck at modding so plz don't blame me

[General]

1. Although it's okay to put break on easier diff, but i got a bad feeling if you only map the break part on 1 diff the fit spot to do it only 1 ;_;

[Easy]

1. I wonder does this intentional timing so suck
   
   If you want to get a precise DS, it's better to disable grid snap

[Normal]

1. 

[Our promise]

1. 00:36:003 (2) - Is this intentional? The red tick isn't pretty noticeable pretty sure for following piano
2. 02:20:515 (6,7,1) - Looks weird with stacks on.
3. 03:27:078 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is better imo that jump to catch (3) is very cruel 8(
   
   
   Or like this if you want to emphasize 03:28:328 (1) - ok for this :3
   
   

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

hello, M4M. p/4818076

since the song has so many minor changes on BPM, it's hard to create that much different beats with objects.
personally i think they are well-placed under the current timing settings, but i can't check timing so I'll just leave them like that.
sorry for the short mod, but I'll check as much as i can.

[Easy]
00:10:881 (2,3,1) - replacing two of them with a slider is highly recommended, the BPM change may bother those new players a lot.iirc it was unsnapped 8(
00:16:244 (4) - maybe you can move it to 00:16:544 - so the gap between 00:16:244 (4,1) - will become 1/1, which is easier to catch newbie is hard to hear 1/2 beat with circle
01:26:773 (4,5) - wrong snapped notes that timing so suck

[Normal]
01:26:140 (2,3) - same.
01:32:891 - i was surprised because there's nothing tapable on this point, which contains an obvious guitar burst. maybe you can change something here.

[Our Promise]
02:19:265 (2,3) - Both the Timing point and the Inherited point should have the same settings. please check their volume.
00:16:544 - both piano and vocal have a sound on it, and 00:16:244 (2) - make this note alone is a bit strange for me. just try map loudest one in 00:16:844 -
02:59:265 (2,3) - if you can put a jump here, they can be consistent with 02:19:265 (2,3) - .

有一張shuo.png被丟在sb文件夾外面，檢查看看是不是漏了多出來之類的，如果沒有，或許丟進去會看來更整潔 (可是你應該會需要改代碼) nah, it's used on first lyric and lazy to move to sb folder since it was an experiment before make all files and if i moved it, i'll ruin my code lol

底下四個對yueding.jpg的Scale操作，可以考慮加個1在Easing，個人認為效果較好
並且把他們全部放在Background Layer底下，就不會和歌詞字體重疊造成阻擋 1.0太强了

03:23:328 - 現代中文一般由左至右讀，確認一下這條字的順序有沒有錯，或是原本設計就是如此 ups, was a mistake。改了
我一定是神經病才會mod中英文混用

Shad0w1and wrote:

[promise]
01:04:163 (3) - prefer slider
01:54:179 (3,4,1) - same spacing and ds? yep
02:36:453 (2) - 283-245
02:44:578 (3,4,1) - well all these blankets could be improved
03:32:078 (3,4,5,6) - in kiai, this stops the motion which let me feel really werid
03:34:578 (3,1) - this is not beautiful..

SPOILER

03:35:828 (1,2) - and blanket
maybe all nazi point, but this diff not visually good to me. might review all blankets
other diffs looks fine to me

1. Metadata?
2. Aku agak ragu sama timing yang di sini 00:10:881 - 00:11:533 - 00:12:088 -
3. Hemm aku periksa pake automod kok kaya gini yah http://puu.sh/mAfyz/be5dc62033.png, padahal aku periksa manual ga ada duplicate .osb sama semua sb element kepake semua, bug kali ya?
4. Ga perlu tambah karen di tags? kan dia ambil bagian di lirik

1. 00:14:614 (3) - Pindah dikit ke kanan x:92 y:160 biar lebih natural?
2. 00:58:551 (2) - Pindah ke x:152 y:260 buat fix spacingnya?
3. 02:00:562 - Mungkin pake drum whistle aja? kalo soft whistle asa plain bgt?
4. 02:19:578 (2) - 02:22:078 - 02:27:078 (5) - 02:32:078 (4) - 02:34:578 - Entah intentional atau engga, aku kira bakal pake normal clap di sana biar konsisten gitu di kiai, sama buat normal sama hard juga

1. 00:00:276 (1) - Kayanya distack sama (2) lebih ngefeel deh sama pianonya?
2. 00:52:276 (4) - Pindah ke kanan dikit x:252 y:332? kayanya spasinya agak jauh di sini secara visual juga?
3. 01:16:031 (2,3) - Agak aneh geraknya, kenapa ga coba kaya gini aja https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4360028 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4360036
4. 02:00:562 - Mungkin pake drum whistle aja? kalo soft whistle asa plain bgt?
5. 02:50:828 (5) - Lupa drum whistle deh?
6. 03:29:578 (3) - Pindah ke kiri sedikit biar ga overlap?

1. 00:00:276 (1) - Kayanya distack sama (2) lebih ngefeel deh sama pianonya?
2. 00:52:908 - Volumenya disamain biar ga error
3. 01:41:356 (2,3,4,5,6) - Agak aneh deh menurut aku ritmenya, kalo mau ikut stream suara gitar seharusnya ini juga 01:42:137 - dikasih note kan? Mungkin coba ritme ini deh http://puu.sh/mAiuK/06ae4e2011.jpg, terus ini 01:41:356 (2) - juga mungkin dibuat agak tengah overlapnya biar rapih
4. 01:50:743 (2,3) - Aku ga ngerti deh itu ngikutin instrumen apa, kenapa ga pake slider panjang aja kaya http://puu.sh/mAiII/06b593db6e.jpg lebih enak ngecover suara gitar sama pianonya
5. 02:00:562 - Mungkin pake drum whistle aja? kalo soft whistle asa plain bgt?
6. 02:05:030 (5,1) - Overlapnya nanggung bgt huhu
7. 02:51:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - Note yang di blue tick buat ritmenya aneh, kenapa ga di samain aja kaya normal sama easy kaya gini ritmenya http://puu.sh/mAiW5/494a0bc45b.jpg lebih reasonable kata aku
8. 03:42:134 - Kayanya ga ada beat deh di situ, cuma long vokal aja. Mungkin delete? normal sama easy juga ga ada kok

Kencho wrote:

Sorry for late because I was prepared my exam a few days.

[Our Promise <3]

1. 00:13:351 (3) - I recommend to change to two 1/2 sliders because 00:10:881 (2,3) - you follow vocal, then 00:13:351 (3) - should follow vocal too. Also if you just want follow piano, then delete 00:10:881 (2,3) - because 01:51:691 - 01:51:691 - you haven't add a note.
   
   I think 00:16:544 - vocal is strong, so 00:16:244 (2) - change to 1/2 slider too. 00:17:144 (1,2,3) - Then you just start follow piano. but piano 8(
   
   00:25:826 - Actually I hear piano here.
   
   00:28:663 - ^
   
   00:29:301 - Add a green line to increase volume because sounds strong.
   
   00:36:003 (2) - Why not just use 3 anchor slider? XD doesnt really matter lol
   
   00:39:786 - Sounds strong just a vocal 8(
   
   00:55:142 - Add a circle? more mapping to piano
   
   00:59:176 (3) - I recommend to change to two 1/2 sliders.
   
   01:10:103 - Add a circle? just a vocal 8(
   
   01:15:117 - ^ ^
   
   01:51:064 - Actually have a sound too. just a piano while in here i more follow the drum or whatever it in 01:50:743 (2,3) -
   
   If you didn't delete 00:10:881 (2,3) - , I recommend to add a circle on 01:51:691 - and 01:51:691 - .
   
   02:05:030 (5,1) - These overlap so ugly . Try this or don't overlap it.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   02:34:890 (4) - Remove to 02:33:328 (1) - slider head. eeee?
   
   02:50:515 (5,6) - I will like to ctrl+G them. [/color]
   
   02:57:703 (4,1) - I think can blanket better.

Momochikun wrote:

yo mb

[Hard]
00:04:082 (3) - aku se prefer e iki stack mbe (2) ae cek cocok karo piano lan NC ne
00:10:881 (2) - iki delay nya lumayan lama, yaopo lak NC ?
00:16:244 (2) - podo
00:16:544 - kok nggak delete (3) trus 1/2 slider disini aja buat catch vocal ? soal e ngemap piano e
00:28:982 (2,3,4,1) - ga di jauhin dikit biar ga nempel ? model kyk gini 00:32:493 (1,2,3) - kan enak diliat soalnya rada jauhan perasaan gak nempel
00:39:786 - note ? piano mz
00:57:604 - ^ buat vocal
01:25:395 (1,2,3,4) - ga onok whistle nak salah satu ne iki ? rasane kok onok sing ngganjel
01:40:419 (1,2) - d gae ngene ?

SPOILER

01:44:794 (2) - curve e tambahono sitik ae lo cek match karo 01:45:419 (1) -
01:54:179 (3) - ctrl G ? enakan ngene
02:05:030 (5,1) - nanggung overlap e wkkwkwkw rip already awkwakaw
02:11:094 (1) - kurangin dikit volumenya ? keknya 45% lbih cocok
02:42:078 (3) - coba shape iki mb >>

SPOILER

03:39:578 (3) - krungu cymbal nak kene, soft finish bakal cocok paling lebih krungu drum e. tak coba keep sek
03:41:793 (3,1) - ojok di stack, bingung soale timing ganti ><

mandek sek lanjut besok, wes ngantuk kena lagu iki malah ga kuat melek xD

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello lovebird, mod yang lain jangan lupa dibales dooong sabar mbak mako, nunggu sekalian bbrapa mod biar reply dalam sekali jalan xDDD

[General]

1. Metadata? bntar mo minta karen soalnya dia yang cek
2. Aku agak ragu sama timing yang di sini 00:10:881 - 00:11:533 - 00:12:088 - yang sini 00:12:088 - aku yakin sih. yang 2 emang kerasa rada telat dikit. krn timer yg buat sibuk.. jadi objek buat 00:10:881 - 00:11:533 - q remove sekalian buat ga ngikutin weak vocal :p
3. Hemm aku periksa pake automod kok kaya gini yah http://puu.sh/mAfyz/be5dc62033.png, padahal aku periksa manual ga ada duplicate .osb sama semua sb element kepake semua, bug kali ya? yep bug. kalo pake jgn aibat. pake automod aja ><
4. Ga perlu tambah karen di tags? kan dia ambil bagian di lirik lupa lol, added

[Easy]

1. 00:14:614 (3) - Pindah dikit ke kanan x:92 y:160 biar lebih natural?
2. 00:58:551 (2) - Pindah ke x:152 y:260 buat fix spacingnya?
3. 02:00:562 - Mungkin pake drum whistle aja? kalo soft whistle asa plain bgt?
4. 02:19:578 (2) - 02:22:078 - 02:27:078 (5) - 02:32:078 (4) - 02:34:578 - Entah intentional atau engga, aku kira bakal pake normal clap di sana biar konsisten gitu di kiai, sama buat normal sama hard juga nice catch

[Normal]

1. 00:00:276 (1) - Kayanya distack sama (2) lebih ngefeel deh sama pianonya?
2. 00:52:276 (4) - Pindah ke kanan dikit x:252 y:332? kayanya spasinya agak jauh di sini secara visual juga?
3. 01:16:031 (2,3) - Agak aneh geraknya, kenapa ga coba kaya gini aja https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4360028 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4360036 aku ganti pake selera ku sendiri ><
4. 02:00:562 - Mungkin pake drum whistle aja? kalo soft whistle asa plain bgt?
5. 02:50:828 (5) - Lupa drum whistle deh?
6. 03:29:578 (3) - Pindah ke kiri sedikit biar ga overlap?

[Hard]

1. 00:00:276 (1) - Kayanya distack sama (2) lebih ngefeel deh sama pianonya?
2. 00:52:908 - Volumenya disamain biar ga error
3. 01:41:356 (2,3,4,5,6) - Agak aneh deh menurut aku ritmenya, kalo mau ikut stream suara gitar seharusnya ini juga 01:42:137 - dikasih note kan? Mungkin coba ritme ini deh http://puu.sh/mAiuK/06ae4e2011.jpg, terus ini 01:41:356 (2) - juga mungkin dibuat agak tengah overlapnya biar rapih
4. 01:50:743 (2,3) - Aku ga ngerti deh itu ngikutin instrumen apa, kenapa ga pake slider panjang aja kaya http://puu.sh/mAiII/06b593db6e.jpg lebih enak ngecover suara gitar sama pianonya itu ikut musik yg suaranya kek tuk tuk tuk tuk gitu
5. 02:00:562 - Mungkin pake drum whistle aja? kalo soft whistle asa plain bgt?
6. 02:05:030 (5,1) - Overlapnya nanggung bgt huhu keknya dah ilang awkawkawk
7. 02:51:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - Note yang di blue tick buat ritmenya aneh, kenapa ga di samain aja kaya normal sama easy kaya gini ritmenya http://puu.sh/mAiW5/494a0bc45b.jpg lebih reasonable kata aku itu ngikutin drum sih daripada vocalnya
8. 03:42:134 - Kayanya ga ada beat deh di situ, cuma long vokal aja. Mungkin delete? normal sama easy juga ga ada kok

[]
Kalo ga mager mungkin aku dateng lagi yay

-Nya- wrote:

Heya~ M4M

General:

1. This file is not in the SB folder. I guess it has to be? yeah but worked.. rip im gonna to recode then
2. Maybe add “Karen” in tags, since Karen provided the lyrics. (According to your description)

Our Promise <3:

1. 00:36:003 (2) –Move the red anchor of this slider a bit more to the right. The shape will look better then imo.
   
   Picture

   
2. 00:46:519 (3) –Uhh, not a nice shape. Looks too curved. Curve it a bit less.
3. 01:31:648 (3,4) –This spacing looks a bit small compared to other similar spacings. (4) is too close to (3).
4. 02:05:030 (5,1) –Rather avoid this slight overlap. It looks really unnecessary.
5. 02:06:945 (3) –Imo the jump should rather be here and not here: 02:06:626 (2) – since the click sound is on (3) and should be emphasized. pianoooo
6. 02:19:578 (3) –I think you have to add an addition here:
   
   Picture

   
   I don’t think the click sound has to be on that note but rather the dong sound.
7. 02:22:078 (3) -^, on head. This applies to all similar cases.
8. 02:14:578 (3,3) –Shouldn’t you add jumps here as well, like you did here: 02:22:078 (3,3) – This applies to all similar cases.
9. 02:44:578 (3) –I know you are stacking here but I think a jump will fit better and be consistent.

Normal <3:

1. Since you added a break in Normal and Easy, why not in the hardest diff as well? The players will have to rest in that diff as well. Rather keep your breaks consistent. doesnt really matter. it's normal to give a break in lower diffs
2. 01:21:675 (3) –Ctrl+J this slider for better flow. change in other way
3. 02:50:828 (5,1,2) –I would rather place these notes on the right side of the grid to avoid the overlap with 02:48:953 (2,3) – blanket

Easy <3:

1. 00:40:782 (4,1) –This is a bad overlap that can be avoided. You can try creating a blanket. if i can do i would do it from long time ago ;_;
2. 01:52:903 (1) –Ctrl+J for better flow. not really good for me
3. 01:52:903 (1) –Spacing error here. This slider is a bit too close to 01:51:691 (1) –
4. 02:00:562 (4,5,6) –Isn’t this a rhythm for a Normal. I don’t think this kind of pattern fits into an Easy diff. Too difficult for beginners. This applies to all similar cases. low bpm afterall so just less/some 1/2 would make the variety
5. 02:32:078 (4,5) –This pattern looks a bit difficult for the easiest diff. Rather just turn those two objects into a single slider. This applies to all similar cases.
6. 03:10:828 (3,4) -^ easy to read for this one

Good Luck~!

Mako Sakata wrote:

Metadata?

SPOILER

Momochikun wrote:

no kd ya mb

[Normal]
00:54:184 (3,1) - iki se mending jangan di stack, bingung soale lak end slider biasane
01:04:163 (3,1) - ^
00:59:176 - 1/2 slider gae vocal ? ga melu vocal 8(
01:14:156 (2) - ga miss whistle ?
01:30:069 - ngganjel rasane lak kene ga onok note-_- kasih ae lo mesisan ga melu vocal 8(
02:50:828 (5,1) - swap NC ?

[Easy]
00:12:088 (1,2) - iki angel di catch lak gae awal", mending (1) sing di gae 3/2 slider cek spacing e ga aneh
01:08:840 (2,3,4) - hmm wedi ne beginner malah ngeklik (4) duduk (3) soale jarake luwih cidek, coba rearrange ?
02:10:775 - note plss tambah angel lek 1/2
01:55:456 (4) - ctrl g ? wut? tambah jump



ga ngerti opo sing kudu di mod soale lagune lemot orz,
gl

Mako Sakata wrote:

Recheck,

Xinely kok tiba2 sb nya hilang yah di bagian ini 03:13:328 - yang abis efek zoom in https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4382646 aku pake default skin nah SB sering ngebug kalo pake objek dari file yg aku pake dari BG, jadi itu efek zoom nya aku hapus deh daripada ngebug terus
Padahal udah redownload sama restart osu, terus kenapa ga pake epilepsi warning? karena dihapus jadi ga perlu epilepsi

Itu aja kayanya, selebihnya okk

1. ta.png is not present in osb/osu files. Please remove this png from the mapset as it it does nothing.

1. Care to explain how "<3" emoticon is related to the difficulty names? What does the heart here mean? Remove it, please. If you really want to keep it, leave it in the hardest diff, although I believe that it should not be used at all.

1. 02:18:328 (1,3) - the stack here lowers readability of the patterns. Please avoid this kind of stacks in E/N diffs.

1. 01:31:332 (2) - the slider leaves the stronger beat at 01:31:648 - unclickable. Please replace with two circles to emphasize it properly?

1. 02:51:609 (3) - doesn't seem to be following anything. And while we are at it (4) would feel really weird if only (3) is removed. So, either remove both or explain what do these two follow.

Bakari wrote:

Greetings.

[Easy]

1. 02:18:328 (1,3) - the stack here lowers readability of the patterns. Please avoid this kind of stacks in E/N diffs. there isn't any burts or object covering it, check in game https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4425292 the object is totally fine, this kind of stacks doesn't affect readability at all

[Normal]

1. 01:31:332 (2) - the slider leaves the stronger beat at 01:31:648 - unclickable. Please replace with two circles to emphasize it properly? piano pitch its really stronger at 01:31:332 - than in 01:31:648 -

[Our Promise]

1. 02:51:609 (3) - doesn't seem to be following anything. And while we are at it (4) would feel really weird if only (3) is removed. So, either remove both or explain what do these two follow. or just remove 3 and add a circle at 02:51:765 - (there is a triplet in the music, somehow i did miss it)