Rolled wrote:

I'm not quite sure the current view on using different mp3's in a beatmap. Personally, I don't find having both of them too convenient. I think you should just pick a language and go with it. Consult a BAT or something about it first though, if you want to keep it. Alright, I'll look into it. Thanks.

Hard:
Ticksounds <3

03:09:348 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest you take an approach similar to Krimson's diff for this part. The current formation is pretty awkward. Guarantees some 100's on what could otherwise be a solid playthrough. Alright. You can hardly hear that triplet even without the help of the hitsounds anyway.

Other than that, nothing game breaking. You can do some polishing by rounding out some sliders, but that's about it. I'll comb through and see what I can make smoother, etc. Though I like the way the 01:09:810 (8) one looked. ;p

Ex:
00:33:656 (2) - Sliders with curves as sharp as this look better with two anchors.
01:04:733 (7) - Would look better a bit more symmetrical.
01:09:810 (8) - Remove both anchors closest to the slider ends, and extend the middle-most two outward.

As I've said, it's purely cosmetic and it could be subjective. I do believe it makes the sliders look better, and improves the map's flow, though.

Krimson:
3365 offset. Much better. k
00:41:364 (5) - As cool as it is, it's pretty hidden. Probably needs a removal.
The hitsounds are pretty cool in this. It begs for Ticksounds to keep the beat, though ;(.

Normal is nice

I could see easy getting a bit confusing with the spacing so small. Harder to tell the length between each note when they have similar spacing. (ex: 01:22:271 (1,2,3,4,1,1)) I wouldn't mind +.1 or .2 to the distance snapping, but that's on you. I agree. I'll respace everything.

Nice map.

banvi wrote:

Go!!! Roling Girl
oh... skin(silder) is good. and nicemap.

my mod Oo, nazi's. <3
[spoilerbox]General
uh... wowaka is certainly this song composer. But he doesn't sing this.
so I think , you should change "Nico Nico Chorus" in Artist... I'll ask around about this one. Even the guidelines don't have something for this situation.
Easy
01:16:425 (3) move 1 up?(LV3)
01:28:271 (2) spacing? I think , move 3 up.
02:32:271 (3) too overhang, change pattern please? (the rule for good) I'm going to end up respacing this difficulty as per Rolled's (that doesn't fell grammatically correct, heh) mod, so I'll just keep these in consideration while I move everything around.
Normal
over ☆4... so I think Normal+ It doesn't really play like a Normal+ though. Star ratings are goofy.
00:24:118 (2) move 1 left? nah
00:29:041 (2,6) move 1 up? k
01:26:118 (3) move 1 down? k
01:39:502 (1) remove new combo? Eh, They are sizeable jumps for a Normal, and it's a huge emphasis on that high note for the chorus. I'll keep it.
02:16:425 (2) move 1 up? nah
02:18:887 (6) move 1 left? k
02:35:041 (3) move 1 down? k
02:48:425 (1) remove new combo? ^
Krisom's
I think okay.
It's beautiful spacing and rhythm.
Hard
00:52:733 (5) move 2 up and 2 left? sure
01:53:810 (9,10) move 1 left? Also moved down one.
02:13:348 (5,6,7) move 1 up? Due to stacking, it's positioned there. Check it in play mode.
02:16:271 (17) move 1 left? I did something close to that.
star & gl

Pokie wrote:

I chose last two diffs to mod o.o
hahaha sliderballs are creative XD Yeah, I love them. Just wish I could get them to turn around, but you can't unless you make a full-blown skin AND have it installed. Bleh.

General
- Add "Krisom" on all diffs' tag Crap, I thought I had... where'd they go?! Oh well, re-added.
- "Nico Nico Chorus - Rolling Girl (Garven).osb" is usual, but "wowaka - Rolling Girl (Chorus) (Garven).osb" is unusal o.o? remove this one XD Ack, artist/title change got me on that one.

Krisom's Rolling
OA is too fast for me D:
01:18:441 (7) - new combo here?
02:03:210 (9) - ^
02:27:364 (7) - ^

Hard
...Is this really a Hard XD? hahaha (failed)
- some of combos are too long imo, try to use new combo to cut them? I like the long combos. Since I have large circles, I needed some sort of boost to difficulty (don't want to up hp drain due to beginning)

(oh I finally realized that I mod lots of nazi new combo..)

then..have my stars :D

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
not sure if you can use different mp3 in a same map....should ask a BAT to make sure. Okayed by Ephemeral. Just gotta keep the mp3s in decent quality and small filesize (once you have a good reason for having multiple mp3s)
slider tick rate 2 on Easy/Normal/Hard， and remake all tick sounds... yay that's a big work but i think you need to make them perfect. now some ticksounds are on red lines, where they shouldn't be.
some skin elements are not good enough imo (especially combobursts..?) [/color]

[Easy]
02:51:194 (1,1) - remove this new combos..? They go with the color explosion in the video.
02:52:425 (1,1) - ^
03:06:887 (3,4) - 3- 1 grid left, 4- center of the screen, i think will looks better= = k
03:08:118 (1) - end 1/4 later? Bleh, I guess everyone likes it later than earlier. Moved.

[Normal]
00:22:271 (4,5) - 4- 1grid up+ 1 grid right, 5- 1 grid right= = Man, I need to nazi my stuff more closely. >>
01:39:656 (1) - a bit short... how about end it 1/2 later? Nah.
01:53:964 (8,1,2) - nazi spacing XD Haha, scooted over a tiny bit.
02:51:194 (1,1) - same new combo thing= =
02:52:425 (1,1) - ^
03:06:887 (3) - 1 grid left kk

[Krisom's Rolling]
don't really like the custom hitsounds you choose, but i like those sliders~ won't mod this diff before i can know if it's fine to use different mp3s... (because i think the answer is no.) I let NatsumeRin know about the answer, and he said that the diff was fine since it was so heavy on symmetry.

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate-1, or you should add some short breaks in the front part...
except for the same new combo problem... you should add some new combos to preven really long combos (the max in this diff=17 i think...?), example:00:41:348 (9) I like the really long combos. It increases the difficulty a little but considering the large circle size and close spacing.
01:17:348 (1,2,3,4) - emm... spacing? Was doubling distance each hit, but I guess it ended up a little fugly. I'll rearrange them.
01:39:656 (1) - end 1/2 later? Nah, goes with the "no" vocal.
02:13:348 (5) - looks strange... 1 grid up+ about 0.5 grid left? It's lining up for the stacking. Check play mode.
02:35:348 (4) - 1 grid up Ack, done.

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

[Krisom's Rolling]
I love this difficulty.
Awesome~

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Krisom's Rolling]
don't really like the custom hitsounds you choose, but i like those sliders~ won't mod this diff before i can know if it's fine to use different mp3s... (because i think the answer is no.)

Pokie wrote:

Krisom's Rolling
OA is too fast for me D:
01:18:441 (7) - new combo here? Nah
02:03:210 (9) - ^ Yes
02:27:364 (7) - ^ Nah :3

banvi wrote:

Krisom's
I think okay.
It's beautiful spacing and rhythm.

Rolled wrote:

Krimson: D: It's Krisom
3365 offset. Much better. Looks like Garven changed it alredy ;D
00:41:364 (5) - As cool as it is, it's pretty hidden. Probably needs a removal. Changed...Hmmmm, I'm unsure about how it is now...
The hitsounds are pretty cool in this. It begs for Ticksounds to keep the beat, though ;(. Yeah

Colin Hou wrote:

[Krisom's Rolling]:

1. fine

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Ohai~ Here comes my mod~ Oh, hi.

[Overall]
Krisom's Rolling feels much harder than the [Hard] that is on here.
Yet it has just a little bit less star rating than [Hard]. Yeah. I ... don't really have any control over that though. :P

[Normal]
01:37:041 1,2,3,4 - I'm not too fond on how these are placed. Looks a bit ugly. It's because of that cursed (1) hit circle. Gah, fine. Nobody likes my dumb combo placement, hehe.

[Hard]
00:34:271 (3) - I'm not too fond of this slider. I am. :D

Didn't find much to complain about, hah.
*throws a star at you*
Thar ya go~

Neethime wrote:

;) Hello Ahoy
I chose first two diffs to mod o.o

[General]
00:32:88 - 01:18:88 :turn up volume by 10? I wanted a decent change in volume level when the chorus hits, and also some breathing room for slowly turning it up on the four big notes before the climax.

[Easy]
00:13:041 - delete this green line Ack. There used to be some really ugly sliders back there. ;)
00:42:887 (1) - finish k
01:13:502 (1) - remove new combo I was changing with the reply vocals. Style combo more than anything.
01:33:194 (1) - remove new combo ^
01:56:887 (1) - this slider doesn't fit music much...And I also feel difficult to catch the song...so I can't give suggestion,sorry. I tried to set this up to be going with the rhythmic vocals (thus the sound set change) but it was hard to pull off for the easy diff. If anything, if you click on the beat next anyway, the OD is low enough to not kill your combo and you'll just start sliding anyway, hehe.
03:08:118 (1) - this spinner should end at 03:10:118 according to your Normal Oops, done.

[Normal]
I didn't find mistakes , but imo, you'd better not change distance spacing in Normal(I found some small jumps),right? Yeah. I figured since they had two beats between each, plus that point in the song it'd be fine.
03:10:118 (2) - finish The cymbals linger too long for my taste.

:D Star~

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • Open all .osu files and change...
  //Background Colour Transformations
  3,100,192,192,192
  • Add "Vocaloid" into Tags[/color] Hrm... fine.

[Easy]

• • You might want to consider bringing down the slider velocity a bit. Might be a bit too fast for beginners. I think it flows enough that it shouldn't be that much of a problem.
  • Slider Tick Rate: 1 This is set at 2 for hit sounds.
  • 01:22:271 - Set current position as preview point.
  • 01:25:810 (1) - Remove "New combo" k
  • 01:25:810 (1,2) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it) Ack. Missed that one, thanks.
  • 01:33:194 (1) - Remove "New combo" It's kind of a response in the lyrics, so nah
  • 01:55:810 (1) - ^ k
  • 01:56:887 (1) - Add a repetition I was worried about the confusion of when the repeating stops, so I gave plenty of room. I guess it's not that horrid...
  • 02:34:733 (1) - Remove "New combo" k
  • 02:42:117 (1) - ^ nah
  • 02:50:887 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ These go with the color explosion in the video.
  • 02:56:887 (1) - ^ k
  • 03:01:810 (1) - ^[/color] nah

[Normal]

• • 01:22:271 - Set current position as preview point.
  • 01:33:194 (1) - Remove "New combo"
  • 02:42:117 (1) - ^ nah
  • 02:50:887 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ Explained above
  • 02:56:887 (1) - ^ nah
  • 03:01:810 (1) - ^[/color] nah

[Hard]

• • 01:22:271 - Set current position as preview point.
  • 01:33:194 (1) - Remove "New combo"
  • 02:13:964 (8) - Add "New combo" k
  • 02:50:887 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remove "New combo" Explained above
  • 02:56:887 (1) - ^ nah[/color]

Kecco wrote:

xxheroxx wrote:

[Krisom's Rolling]

• • 01:22:133 - Set current position as preview point.

01:22:271* I like my current preview time better - thanks though.


•Overall•
Nico Nico Chorus is wrong -> It should be NicoNico Chorus. Oh hey, whoops.

•Hard•
00:19:194 (5) - New combo? I like the longer combos for this difficulty.
00:21:656 (5) - ^
00:27:041 (5) - ^
00:29:502 (6) - ^
00:31:964 (6) - ^
00:41:348 (9) - ^
01:05:656 (8) - ^
01:10:733 (9) - ^
01:17:348 (1,2,3,4) - Make those notes symmetrical? I rearranged 'em.
02:13:964 (8) - New combo? Already done via xxhero's
02:20:271 (10) - ^ nah
02:50:194 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why these new combos? Fix them. Goes with color explosion in video.

•Krisom•
OK.

•Normal•
Jeez, the Slider Velocity is too high for a Normal Diff : 1,00? I think it's fine where it's at.
Overall Difficulty and HP Drain rate -1?
02:28:118 (3) - Spacing error. It's on purpose.
02:48:656 (1) - This spinner is too quick for a Normal Diff. Felt fine to me, and oddly, no AIMod flags.
02:50:194 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why these new combos? Fix them. ^
03:08:118 (1) - This spinner is too quick for a Normal Diff. ^

•Easy•
Jeez, the Slider Velocity is too high for a Normal Diff : 0,80? I think it's fine where it's at.
Overall Difficulty and HP Drain rate -1? I like the OD where it's at. HP drain reduced, though.
01:19:810 (1) - This spinner is too quick for a Easy Diff. Hrm. Slidered it up.

Star~

Frill wrote:

[Hard]
02:49:733 - let the KIAI stop here. 02:49:656 - - ? I moved it back further so the .5 slider isn't glowing momentarily.
01:41:656 - ^ 01:41:502 - This one doesn't matter so much.

Fun map.

Kudo for the inspiration of the change I made, hehe.

+Star

Vikon wrote:

[General]
good map.

[Easy]
00:32:887 delete this timing section and make these changes on 00:03:50?
02:21:349 (1) The volume of the finish is a bit too loud. I think it's fine.
02:31:194 (1) useless timing section? or you forgot to make changes on them? Actually, it was once I re-set kiai on the one before it. >>
03:08:118 (1) end at 03:09:964? Ahaha, where were you when everyone else wanted this to end where it is now and I originally had it in that position? /sigh

[Normal]
a little bit difficult for a [Normal] I was trying for some sort of decent scaling of difficulty up to the hards.
01:17:348 (1,2,3,4) try to increase the volume differance between these notes? players may not feel the volume changes. Hrm, tweaked.
01:56:733 add a note here? Nah
02:00:425 ^ Nah
02:21:348 (1) decrease the volume of this fnish? Nah, it's fine
02:26:271 (1,2,3) try to increase the volume differance between these notes? Tweaked
03:08:118 (1) the end of this spinner is unsnapped? Huh. Fixed. Nice spot.
03:09:887 (1) move it to the next white tick? It's too late then. They all sing off the beat. It's annoying.

[Hard]
This is insane lol? the OA is a bit high for a [Hard]
(00:32:887 double section) Oops
00:34:964 useless timing section? or you forgot to make changes? Ack
01:17:348 (1,2,3,4) try to increase the volume differance between these notes? k
01:56:733 add a note here? Nah
02:21:348 (1) decrease the volume of this fnish? Nah
02:26:271 (1,2,3,4) try to increase the volume differance between these notes? k
02:50:870 useless timing section? or you forgot to make changes? Ack, no. It's supposed to start the kiai, not the one before it.

It's time to get my star~

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Having 2 mp3's is fine (well there are a few ranked maps with this). But you should make sure they are of the same quality. The mp3 on Krisom's difficulty sounds worse imo so try and get a better mp3? XD This is the best one I could find. :/ I can try again, but I don't think I'll have any better luck.

Easy:

00:36:118 (5) - That custom slider tick sounds odd because the slider ends suddenly on vocal, maybe reduce the volume of it slightly. (imo ~) Hrm, okay. I don't hear much of a difference, but eh. Easy change.
01:31:964 (1) - I expected the custom whistle at the end of the slider. I had them off for that part of the chorus, but if they're expected, sure.
01:33:195 (1) - ^
02:29:964 (4) - Overlap looks a bit bad here, or maybe it's just the slider. Well, it's fading out right when the other is fading in. And yeah, the slider is kinda weird, but I was trying to keep the same form as the hard mode ones.
02:41:041 (1) - Custom whistle end? k
02:42:118 (1) - ^
02:50:887 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - I presume this is because the video changes color or something, idk... it looks kinda strange XD Bleh, nobody likes it. T_T
02:56:887 (2) - Custom whistle end?
02:59:349 (2) - End at 02:59:810 imo k
03:01:041 (2) - Custom whistle? k

The slider velocity is a bit fast but so is the bpm so it's fine I guess. Sometimes I felt that custom whistles were missing.

Normal:

00:15:810 (1) - Custom whistle end?
00:18:271 (1) - ^
00:20:733 (1) - ^
00:23:194 (1) - ^ ~ yeah these sound like they need it, plus it keeps the pattern constant <3 Mm, Looked like I was torn between not having them for the "ah ah" vocals and ended up doing them for the last ones anyway. All added.
01:25:348 (2) - Remove custom slider tick? =S Hrm, k.
01:31:194 (x) - Note. k
01:39:656 (1) - Kinda short for a normal. Well, AI mod isn't crying foul, and I'm getting 300s even when I wait half a second before starting up a spin. It should be okay.
02:40:118 (x) - Note. k
03:09:887 (1) - Is this supposed to be on a blue tick? (It's not in Hard btw XD) Oops

Taiko:

-- Short? Yeah, short due to 1000 note limit on Taiko diffs (don't really know why [beyond TnT never going beyond that?])

Yeah pretty typical Taiko diff, streams ~

Hard:

01:14:733 (x) - Note? k
01:34:887 (x) - Kinda expected a note here. Hrm, k

Just picky stuff, nice mapset.