00:40:162 (1,2,3) - These doesn't follow the rhythm of the song. You should move them all 1/4 back and add a note at 00:40:835. (a good rule of thumb is to map on the white and red lines when doing normal/slow parts, and us the blue lines for triples/streams. There are exceptions, like 00:46:028 (2,3) - which is mapped correctly, so be careful!)
00:44:298 (4,5,6) - When having triples like these (played very fast one after another) you either want them to be in a stack, or with short distance in between, like a mini stream. You usually don't want small jumps, and you definitely don't want it to jump between the two first notes, and stack the two last notes.
00:46:316 (4) - Move this 1/4 forward. Again, white and red lines. You should also make the distance a bit larger, since the note hits quite long after the one before
00:50:932 (6,7,8,9,10) - Delete the last one of these, and move the rest 1/4 forward (white and red)
00:57:086 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Move 1/4 forward
01:15:068 (7) - Consider making this 1/4 longer (just a thought, not necessarily needed)
01:32:953 (2,3) - Move 1/4 forward (an exception to the "white red rule, ugh). The weird thing is, you did it right in the three next notes
01:34:395 (5) - Move 1/4 forward, make it 1/4 shorter
Second verse makes a lot more sense than the first one. However i would still make a few changes (so it fits the song better, and is more similar to the first verse)
01:52:375 (5) - Move 1/4 back, so it comes at the same time as the vocals.
01:53:915 (6) - ^
01:58:242 (5,6,7) - Delete the first note, move the slider 1/4 back, and make it 1/4 longer (so it fits with the vocals)
02:00:069 (4) - Move 1/4 back, make 1/4 longer
02:04:300 (4,5,6) - Delete second note, make first slider 1/4 longer, move last slider 1/4 back, and make it 1/4 longer
02:10:838 (7) - Move 1/4 back
02:15:261 (1) - Move 1/4 forward, make 1/4 shorter
02:28:916 (7) - Consider making this 1/4 longer (just a thought, not necessarily needed)
02:46:801 (2,3) - Move 1/4 forward
02:48:338 (5) - Move 1/4 forward, make it 1/4 shorter
03:34:686 (2) - Make 1/4 shorter (so it matches the beat)
03:36:610 (4) - Consider making this 1/4 longer (just a thought, not necessarily needed)
03:58:629 (5) - Move 1/4 back