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Kishida preda Tuan & THE Akeboshi Rockets - GATE ~Sore wa Ak

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ztrike
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Topic Starter
ztrike
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年1月21日 at 21:36:37

Artist: Kishida preda Tuan & THE Akeboshi Rockets
Title: GATE ~Sore wa Akatsuki no you ni~ (TV size)
Source: ゲート 自衛隊 彼の地にて、斯く戦えり
Tags: GATE 奇幻自衛隊 ゲート 自衛隊 彼の地にて、斯く戦えり
BPM: 200
Filesize: 2444kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.51 stars, 203 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.65 stars, 136 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (3.18 stars, 436 notes)
  4. Oni (4.2 stars, 631 notes)
Download: Kishida preda Tuan & THE Akeboshi Rockets - GATE ~Sore wa Akatsuki no you ni~ (TV size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#15 mapset (ready for mod)
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Kantan ---------------100%
Futsuu ---------------100%
Muzukashii ---------100%
Oni -------------------100%
Last edited by ztrike , edited 10 times in total.
snz
877 posts
Joined February 2015
snz
From My Queue

d: Don
k: Kat
D: Big Don
K: Big Kat
^:Read before

Kantan
00:29:250 (38) - Add finish
00:53:250 (75) - Change This To D
01:28:650 (135) - Change This To K
Futsuu
00:12:000 (26) - Change This To d
00:53:250 (120) - Delete Finish
01:00:450 (136) - Change This To D
01:19:650 (179) - Change this to d
Muzukashii
00:11:700 (50) - Change This To d
00:49:650 (220) - ^
00:55:350 (250,252) - Ctrl+G
01:19:650 (386) - Add Finish
01:28:050 (435) - Change This To K
Oni
00:06:600 (35) - Delete This
00:17:250 (110) - Change To K
00:26:850 (175) - Add Finish
00:51:150 (350,351) - Ctrl+G
00:56:400 (393) - Change This To d
01:22:050 (589) - Change This To D

Good Luck With Rank :D
ztrike
31 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
ztrike

Ppuskalin wrote:

From My Queue

d: Don
k: Kat
D: Big Don
K: Big Kat
^:Read before

Kantan
00:29:250 (38) - Add finish rejected
00:53:250 (75) - Change This To D rejected
01:28:650 (135) - Change This To K rejected

Futsuu
00:12:000 (26) - Change This To d accepted
00:53:250 (120) - Delete Finish rejected
01:00:450 (136) - Change This To D accepted
01:19:650 (179) - Change this to d accepted
Muzukashii
00:11:700 (50) - Change This To d rejected
00:49:650 (220) - ^ accepted and changed to D
00:55:350 (250,252) - Ctrl+G accepted
01:19:650 (386) - Add Finish accepted
01:28:050 (435) - Change This To K rejected
Oni
00:06:600 (35) - Delete This rejected
00:17:250 (110) - Change To K rejected
00:26:850 (175) - Add Finish rejected
00:51:150 (350,351) - Ctrl+G rejected
00:56:400 (393) - Change This To d rejected
01:22:050 (589) - Change This To D accepted

Good Luck With Rank :D


Thanks so much for the mod
Smallwu
572 posts
Joined April 2013
Smallwu
Hi~ mod from in-game PM

General
Source 應該是 "ゲート 自衛隊 彼の地にて、斯く戦えり"

Design 關閉Widescreen Support

紅線的部分 或許應該再增加 00:12:900 . 00:13:800 和 01:28:050 ？
我聽節拍的部分和其他人相較之下好像比較不同OwO 你聽聽看之後再決定要不要增加吧~

Muzukashii
00:02:400 (9,10,11,12) - d k d k

00:12:450 (53) - D

00:30:900 (134) 改成k 移動至 00:30:675 - 因為 00:30:600 有明顯的鼓聲三連打

00:32:550 (141) - d

00:40:050 (177) - D

00:40:800 (180) - Delete

00:40:950 - 換成這樣

00:56:850 (260) - D 因為你後面的Note都有大圓

01:02:700 (291) - Delete

01:04:200 (300) - ^ 給些休息 而且這樣也比較符合音樂

01:05:100 (305,306) - d K

01:06:450 (314) - D 因為你後面的Note都有大圓

01:09:000 (327) - Delete

01:09:825 (333) - Add d？

01:11:400 (343) - Delete

01:13:800 (355) - ^

01:16:200 (367) - ^

01:18:450 (378) - K

01:18:600 (379) - Delete

Oni
00:05:850 (31) - k

00:06:150 (32,33,34) - d k d

00:06:600 (35) - Delete 因為這裡沒有任何突出的音

00:40:950 - kdk

00:41:325 (280,281) - Delete

00:45:600 (308) - k

01:04:950 (461) - Delete 這裡沒有特別突出的音

01:04:950 - 改成這樣

01:18:450 - 改成這樣 因為這裡很明顯是一連串的鼓聲～

Good luck ！
祝Rank :)
DeletedUser_6637817
DeletedUser_6637817
Mod from Queue! EDIT: Wow, this took loong >-<

Kantan
00:25:050 (32) - sounds like a ghost note, remove?
00:28:650 (37) - ^
00:38:250 (52,54) - ^
00:43:050 (59) - ^
01:10:650 (104) - ^
01:13:050 (108) - ^
01:15:450 (112) - ^
01:10:050 (103) - Delete finisher, doesnt fit even with vocals
01:12:450 (107) - delete finisher, doesnt fit even with the vocals
01:11:550 - try adding a note here because a vocal piece is left out
Repeat for all these patterns
01:22:500 (125) - Ghost note, remove?
01:27:300 (133) - ^
01:28:350 - try adding another d here!

Futsuu
This is General advice, no concrete Note changes, because i dont want to write a book on all the changes

Try hitsounding a little bit equally, theres way too much kat making half of the map only a k fest.

Suggestion: Put more dons on notes where theres a lower pitch or the vocal pitch is lower!

Muzukashii
00:08:700 (41) - d because of lower pitch
Well mapped!

Oni
00:05:850 (31) - you can hear the kick sound, change to k
00:09:300 (52) - kick sound, change to k
00:39:900 (268) - ^
00:51:375 (353) - not very neccessarry, i dont hear a 1/4 sound
01:11:550 (513,514) - invert colors, kick sound is on the 2nd note
01:13:950 (528,529) - ^
01:16:350 (543,544) - ^
01:28:050 (635,636,637) - finishers to emphasize?

This mod took way too long, hope you get ranked!
ztrike
31 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
ztrike

Smallwu wrote:

Hi~ mod from in-game PM

General
Source 應該是 "ゲート 自衛隊 彼の地にて、斯く戦えり"

Design 關閉Widescreen Support

紅線的部分 或許應該再增加 00:12:900 . 00:13:800 和 01:28:050 ？
我聽節拍的部分和其他人相較之下好像比較不同OwO 你聽聽看之後再決定要不要增加吧~

source跟design都改了, 紅線還是先保持不變

Muzukashii
00:02:400 (9,10,11,12) - d k d k accepted

00:12:450 (53) - D rejected

00:30:900 (134) 改成k 移動至 00:30:675 - 因為 00:30:600 有明顯的鼓聲三連打 rejected, muzu還是簡單點好

00:32:550 (141) - d accepted

00:40:050 (177) - D rejected

00:40:800 (180) - Delete rejected

00:40:950 - 換成這樣 rejected

00:56:850 (260) - D 因為你後面的Note都有大圓 accepted

01:02:700 (291) - Delete rejected, 跟00:53:100保持一致

01:04:200 (300) - ^ 給些休息 而且這樣也比較符合音樂 accepted

01:05:100 (305,306) - d K accepted

01:06:450 (314) - D 因為你後面的Note都有大圓 accepted

01:09:000 (327) - Delete accepted

01:09:825 (333) - Add d？ rejected

01:11:400 (343) - Delete rejected

01:13:800 (355) - ^ rejected

01:16:200 (367) - ^ rejected

01:18:450 (378) - K rejected

01:18:600 (379) - Delete rejected

Oni
00:05:850 (31) - k accepted

00:06:150 (32,33,34) - d k d rejected

00:06:600 (35) - Delete 因為這裡沒有任何突出的音 rejected

00:40:950 - kdk changed to k d K

00:41:325 (280,281) - Delete accepted

00:45:600 (308) - k rejected

01:04:950 (461) - Delete 這裡沒有特別突出的音 rejected

01:04:950 - 改成這樣 rejected

01:18:450 - 改成這樣 因為這裡很明顯是一連串的鼓聲～ rejected

Good luck ！
祝Rank :)
thanks =D
ztrike
31 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
ztrike

Nepuri wrote:

Mod from Queue! EDIT: Wow, this took loong >-<

Kantan
00:25:050 (32) - sounds like a ghost note, remove? accepted
00:28:650 (37) - ^ accepted
00:38:250 (52,54) - ^ accepted
00:43:050 (59) - ^ accepted
01:10:650 (104) - ^ rejected
01:13:050 (108) - ^ rejected
01:15:450 (112) - ^ rejected
01:10:050 (103) - Delete finisher, doesnt fit even with vocals rejected
01:12:450 (107) - delete finisher, doesnt fit even with the vocals rejected
01:11:550 - try adding a note here because a vocal piece is left out accepted
Repeat for all these patterns
01:22:500 (125) - Ghost note, remove? rejected
01:27:300 (133) - ^ rejected
01:28:350 - try adding another d here! accepted

Futsuu
This is General advice, no concrete Note changes, because i dont want to write a book on all the changes

Try hitsounding a little bit equally, theres way too much kat making half of the map only a k fest.

Suggestion: Put more dons on notes where theres a lower pitch or the vocal pitch is lower!

thanks for the advice, I'll try it.

Muzukashii
00:08:700 (41) - d because of lower pitch accepted
Well mapped!

Oni
00:05:850 (31) - you can hear the kick sound, change to k accepted
00:09:300 (52) - kick sound, change to k accepted
00:39:900 (268) - ^ accepted
00:51:375 (353) - not very neccessarry, i dont hear a 1/4 sound rejected
01:11:550 (513,514) - invert colors, kick sound is on the 2nd note accepted
01:13:950 (528,529) - ^ accepted
01:16:350 (543,544) - ^ accepted
01:28:050 (635,636,637) - finishers to emphasize?rejected

This mod took way too long, hope you get ranked!
special thanks for the advice~
ll-oscar
253 posts
Joined March 2012
ll-oscar
Oni
00:02:700 (12) - k->d ,low pitch seems better
00:03:600 (16,17,18,19,20) - k d kkd -> kdd d k ,fit for the BG music
00:04:875 (25) - d->k
00:05:250 (28) - D->k, no finish here
00:05:550 (29,30,31,32,33,34) - d k k d d k -> d k k d k K, better separation
00:06:600 (35) - del k, no sound here
00:06:750 - add d
00:07:200 (39,40,41,42) - d ddd -> ddd d, sound better
00:08:400 (47,48,49,50,51) - k d kkd -> kkd d k
00:09:600 (55,56,57,58,59) - ddd k d -> ddkkd k, have some different from the last part
00:11:550 (68,69) - d k -> k d
00:12:450 (76) - D -> K
00:13:500 (83,84,85,86) - k ddd -> d kkk
00:14:700 (93) - k ->d
00:15:150 (95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113) - d k d kkd k ddd d ddd kkd k D -> d k d kkd d kkkkd d kkk d d k, suggest by myself ;w;
00:18:300 (120,121,122,123) - k ddd -> d kkk, high pitch for the 3 x 1/4
00:19:500 (130) - k->d
00:21:600 - del d, no sound here
00:22:800 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376182
00:25:200 (166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173) - d k k ddd k d -> d kkk k d k k, high pitch kkk 1/4 better here
00:27:600 (179,180,181,182,183) - k d ddk -> d kdd k , follow to the last part pattern
00:28:350 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376173
00:30:750 (203,204,205) - k k d-> K K, matchj to the last part
00:32:400 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376190 my own suggestion
00:34:350 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376194 my own suggestion
00:36:750 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376195 my own suggestion
00:39:150 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376203 my own suggestion
00:41:550 - add d, have a BG music sound here
00:41:700 (280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287) - k kkd k d d k -> d kdd d k d k
00:43:050 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376218
00:46:350 (312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323) - k d d kkd d kkddk _ -> d k kkk d k d d
00:47:850 - del d, no sound here
00:48:000 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376233
00:54:450 (372,373,374,375,376) - ddkkd -> ddddk
00:55:200 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376297
00:57:150 (393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400) - d k kkd k d k -> d k K d k D
00:58:350 (404) - del d, no sound here
00:58:500 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376258 my own suggestion
01:02:250 (436,437,438,439,440) - kdkkk -> ddkdk, my own suggestion
01:04:050 (450,451,452,453,454) - ddkkd -> kdddk, same as 01:04:050 (450,451,452,453,454)
01:04:650 - del d, no sound here
01:04:800 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376272
01:06:450 - D _ -> ddd, 3 x 1/4 better than finish
01:06:750 (473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480) - d k kkd k d k -> k d ddddk d k
01:07:950 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376307
01:10:050 (501) - k -> K, heavy hit sound here
01:10:800 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376320
01:13:650 (522,523,524,525) - kdd d -> kdddk
01:15:600 - same as the pattern of 01:10:800 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376320
01:17:400 (548) - del d, separate into 2 parts
01:18:300 (553) - k d -> d k , from low to high pitch, d k seems better
01:18:450 (554,555,556,557,558) - kkddk -> kdddk
From 01:19:950 - to 01:28:050 - - same as from 00:12:750 - to 00:20:850 -
01:27:900 (630) - k ->d, low pitch
01:28:050 (631,632,633,634) - d d d K -> K K D D, fit for finishes than small notes
Last edited by ll-oscar , edited 1 time in total.
ztrike
31 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
ztrike

ll-oscar wrote:

Oni
00:02:700 (12) - k->d accepted
00:03:600 (16,17,18,19,20) - k d kkd -> kdd d k changed to kdd k d
00:04:875 (25) - d->k accepted
00:05:250 (28) - D->k rejected
00:05:550 (29,30,31,32,33,34) - d k k d d k -> d k k d k K rejected
00:06:600 (35) - del k rejected
00:06:750 - add d rejected
00:07:200 (39,40,41,42) - d ddd -> ddd d rejected
00:08:400 (47,48,49,50,51) - k d kkd -> kkd d k accepted
00:09:600 (55,56,57,58,59) - ddd k d -> ddkkd k rejected
00:11:550 (68,69) - d k -> k d accepted
00:12:450 (76) - D -> K rejected
00:13:500 (83,84,85,86) - k ddd -> d kkk rejected
00:14:700 (93) - k ->d rejected
00:15:150 (95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113) - d k d kkd k ddd d ddd kkd k D -> d k d kkd d kkkkd d kkk d d k rejected
00:18:300 (120,121,122,123) - k ddd -> d kkk rejected
00:19:500 (130) - k->d rejected
00:21:600 - del d accepted
00:22:800 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376182 rejected
00:25:200 (166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173) - d k k ddd k d -> d kkk k d k k rejected
00:27:600 (179,180,181,182,183) - k d ddk -> d kdd k rejected
00:28:350 (184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376173 rejected
00:30:750 (203,204,205) - k k d-> K K rejected
00:32:400 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376190 rejected
00:34:350 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376194 rejected
00:36:750 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376195 rejected
00:39:150 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376203 rejected
00:41:550 - add d accepted
00:41:700 (280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287) - k kkd k d d k -> d kdd d k d k rejected
00:43:050 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376218 accepted
00:46:350 (312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323) - k d d kkd d kkddk _ -> d k kkk d k d d rejected
00:47:850 - del d accepted
00:48:000 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376233 rejected
00:54:450 (372,373,374,375,376) - ddkkd -> ddddk rejected
00:55:200 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376297 rejected
00:57:150 (393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400) - d k kkd k d k -> d k K d k D rejected
00:58:350 (404) - del d rejected
00:58:500 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376258 rejected
01:02:250 (436,437,438,439,440) - kdkkk -> ddkdk accepted
01:04:050 (450,451,452,453,454) - ddkkd -> kdddk rejected
01:04:650 - del d accepted
01:04:800 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376272 rejected
01:06:450 - D _ -> ddd rejected
01:06:750 (473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480) - d k kkd k d k -> k d ddddk d k rejected
01:07:950 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376307 rejected
01:10:050 (501) - k -> K accepted
01:10:800 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376320 rejected
01:13:650 (522,523,524,525) - kdd d -> kdddk rejected
01:15:600 - same as the pattern of 01:10:800 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376320 changed the hitsound
01:17:400 (548) - del d accepted
01:18:300 (553) - k d -> d k rejected
01:18:450 (554,555,556,557,558) - kkddk -> kdddk accepted
From 01:19:950 - to 01:28:050 - - same as from 00:12:750 - to 00:20:850 - accepted
01:27:900 (630) - k ->d rejected
01:28:050 (631,632,633,634) - d d d K -> K K D D accepted
What a huge mod, thanks anyway
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,842 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
Hi, your beatmap has been declined by the TNA. The reasons will be stated downbelow:

[ Oni]

  1. In general the beatplacement is fine, but the density of patterns doesn't change a lot, whether it is a calm part or not. Example: 00:22:050 to 00:41:250 doesn't differ much to previous and upcoming part even though there are clear difference in the song's pace. That's why you should delete some notes accordingly to the pace of the song. You can for example follow more the beat of the song at 00:22:050 and only map to the 1/2 instead of adding 1/4.
[ Muzukashii]

  1. Same problems like in Oni with the addition that the Muzukashii should contain some breaks. Patterns are in general very long. You could delete for example such notes 00:14:550 (62) - which would give player a short rest.
[ Futsuu]
  1. Beatplacement is very odd and hard to follow starting from 00:22:050 . For example, I would expect another kat at 00:24:900 - , yet, 00:24:600 (56) - this don appears which threw me totally off due to the sudden change in snapping. Sometimes mapper seems to change from beat to vocal mapping as well at 00:34:950 (78,79,80) - which makes the section inconsistent.
  2. This Futsuu should contain some rest moments. Same problem like in Muzukashii.
  3. Density doesn't change much in this difficulty either. E.g. at 00:41:250 it is similar to previous part.
Overall this difficulty is very inconsistent because you tried to map somehow to the beat an vocal at the same time, but that didn't turn out very well. Because of this, placement of notes is very odd and makes notes not really be connected to each other. The addition of not following the songs pace makes it even more problematic, which is why I would suggest in this case to consider a remap where you mainly focus on either the vocals or the beat + having an eye on the density in this map. Is the pace of the song lower, use less notes - is it higher, use more.

[ Kantan]

  1. 00:14:850 (16,17) - Considering where 00:13:200 (13) - is placed, you should rather swap the notes to d k, so you are having a better beatplacement. In this case, don represents the downbeat.
To be honest, nearly the same problems appear like in Futsuu. Let's take the part 00:12:450 ~ 00:22:050 as example. You can't see a real system here, since the notes rather look like they are placed randomly. They have no connection to each other. 00:12:450 (12,13,14,15,16,17) - This one for example, normaly there shouldn't be any note at 00:15:300 considering that at 00:12:900 isn't any either. (17) should be placed by that logic at 00:15:600 to have a more consistent pattern.

[General]

As I said, Oni and Muzukashii have beside the density problem and some missing rest moments a fine beatplacement. But that's not the case for Kantan and Futsuu. I would strongly recommend you to read this guide about Taiko mapping. The rubric with spreads will be probably interesting for you since the spread from Futsuu to Muzukashii is also very high. Muzukashii contains mostly 1/2 notes + 1/4, while Futsuu is mostly mapped on 1/1. The difference is too big.

Good luck for now!
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