1. Inner Oni (5,51 stars, 2458 notes)
2. Oni (4,42 stars, 2005 notes)

FrostxE wrote:

Should have had a feature to mix with your previous mapset of this song ╭( ･ㅂ･)و

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1. hitsound +5~10%
2. 05:51:941 - Drum sampleset doesn't works in Taiko mode, should be Normal. also 5% seems too small, please keep 20% at least.

1. OD5.0 works good enough.
2. 00:17:238 - 00:22:265 - In the same way as the previous part, make triplets as alternately ddd-ddd and kkk-kkk? It makes more interesting flow imo. just suggestion.
3. 00:22:427 - 00:27:454 - milar as above, ddd-kkk > kkk-ddd?
4. 00:31:832 (139,140,141,142,143,144) - ddk triplets are bit too many in this part, how about making kkd? I'd like to suggest k-d-kkd-k.
5. 00:37:021 (171,172,173,174,175,176) - ^
   
   
6. 00:56:805 - 00:59:400 - Reverse pattern makes more interesting flow in a similar way as intro part imo. (ddd-d-/kkk-k-, ddd-k-/kkk-k-, etc.)
7. 01:01:995 - 01:04:589 - ^
8. 01:20:643 (413,414,415,416) - I think k-D--d-K fits to the vocal more well.
9. 02:26:968 - same as above.
   
   
10. 02:55:508 (973) - Add finisher same as 01:24:697? (also 02:55:995 (976,979) - and 02:56:806 (980) - ?)
11. 04:24:697 (1496) - , 04:27:292 (1515) - Add finishers for making more consistent pattern with prev part?
12. 04:33:454 (1) - seems too short and too few hits. Extend spinner until 1/2 right.
    SPOILER

    
13. 04:38:968 (24) - Finish? since strong sound.
14. 04:54:697 (60) - k fits to the hi-hat more well imo.
    
15. 05:38:805 (387) - change to kat? dd-d-d is weirld to me, because not similar sounds. If you wanna keep d at 05:38:805 (387,388) -, try to d-kkddd at 05:38:319 (382,383,384,385,386,387) -.
16. 05:43:832 - ^

1. 00:56:157 - same as Oni.
2. 02:26:968 - ^
   
   
3. 01:20:805 (487,488,489,490) - KddK? similar reason as Oni.
4. 02:03:211 -, 02:08:319 - same as Oni's outro part.
5. 02:51:616 (1114) - K?
6. 02:56:805 (1143) - add finisher here?
7. 04:33:454 (1) - Same as Oni.
   
   
8. 04:23:724 - 04:28:751 - Non-dominant hand wants to hit more kats. x_x
9. 04:56:157 - 05:16:265 - , ^. also dominant hand wants to hit more dons.

tasuke912 wrote:

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[ General]

1. hitsound +5~10% +5 is ok.
2. 05:51:941 - Drum sampleset doesn't works in Taiko mode, should be Normal. also 5% seems too small, please keep 20% at least. This is on purpose. Spinners are spam objects, and I don't want them to have a sound. It is possible to add a taiko-drum-hitnormal and taiko-drum-hitclap to make it have sound, but I don't want that.

[ Oni]

1. OD5.0 works good enough. Ok.
2. 00:17:238 - 00:22:265 - In the same way as the previous part, make triplets as alternately ddd-ddd and kkk-kkk? It makes more interesting flow imo. just suggestion.
3. 00:22:427 - 00:27:454 - milar as above, ddd-kkk > kkk-ddd? Made them alternate in a different way.
4. 00:31:832 (139,140,141,142,143,144) - ddk triplets are bit too many in this part, how about making kkd? I'd like to suggest k-d-kkd-k.
5. 00:37:021 (171,172,173,174,175,176) - ^ I agree that there are many ddk here, but the music doesn't exactly suggest anything else , to be honest. I wanted to make this progressive as the later part after the chorus is slightly different, so it's more obvious.
   
   
6. 00:56:805 - 00:59:400 - Reverse pattern makes more interesting flow in a similar way as intro part imo. (ddd-d-/kkk-k-, ddd-k-/kkk-k-, etc.)
7. 01:01:995 - 01:04:589 - ^ I find ddd a heavy representation of the guitar, and kkk a more high pitched one. kkk just wouldn't work here for me.
8. 01:20:643 (413,414,415,416) - I think k-D--d-K fits to the vocal more well. Sure.
9. 02:26:968 - same as above. Same.
   
   
10. 02:55:508 (973) - Add finisher same as 01:24:697? (also 02:55:995 (976,979) - and 02:56:806 (980) - ?) Changed except 980. Nothing in music to support a finish here.
11. 04:24:697 (1496) - , 04:27:292 (1515) - Add finishers for making more consistent pattern with prev part? Yep.
12. 04:33:454 (1) - seems too short and too few hits. Extend spinner until 1/2 right. I want it to have 2 hits, because it's an optional component. Having it longer in combination with anything lower than OD8 can cause a miss on the finisher, especially on double time.
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 04:38:968 (24) - Finish? since strong sound. Ok.
14. 04:54:697 (60) - k fits to the hi-hat more well imo. Yes.
    
15. 05:38:805 (387) - change to kat? dd-d-d is weirld to me, because not similar sounds. If you wanna keep d at 05:38:805 (387,388) -, try to d-kkddd at 05:38:319 (382,383,384,385,386,387) -.
16. 05:43:832 - ^ This was done to express the pitch path of the guitar better, so it has a progressive flow which goes upwards and then downwards. I did this at the beginning too, as well as in Inner. I think it's very expected to have a kat on every half beat here, and that may be boring, so this is a nice change imo.

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:56:157 - same as Oni.
2. 02:26:968 - ^ Same reason.
   
   
3. 01:20:805 (487,488,489,490) - KddK? similar reason as Oni. Sure.
4. 02:03:211 -, 02:08:319 - same as Oni's outro part. Same reason.
5. 02:51:616 (1114) - K? K!
6. 02:56:805 (1143) - add finisher here? Same reason as I listed in oni (that note 980 in Oni)
7. 04:33:454 (1) - Same as Oni. Same reason.
   
   
8. 04:23:724 - 04:28:751 - Non-dominant hand wants to hit more kats. x_x
9. 04:56:157 - 05:16:265 - , ^. also dominant hand wants to hit more dons.
   :3 . I mapped this with having full alt playstyle in mind, so there are no dominant hands for me. I find that these streams play well as they are though, and they express the guitar riffs accurately, changing things inside them would mask the guitar rhythm and then I wouldn't like them. I want to keep, sorry. ;_;

Nice diffs. Call me back when you are done. (¦3[▓▓] ╭( ･ㅂ･)و

tasuke912 wrote:

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Approved!

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