yanaginagi - Haru Modoki‬ · forum‬

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

pkk 2015-05-20T01:53:01+00:00

I believe

Hard

696 posts

Joined February 2013

Hard 2015-05-22T17:12:23+00:00

yo. From my queue. Please rate my mod when I finished.

[Spring]

00:02:638 (4) - this 'n' sound is emphasized and a bit louder and i think you should show that in the map and not use the sliders like you did before. i suggest you choose a single circle and change the slider's end into one too. OR you add a jump here. but the higher note is something that i have to feel, hope you understand my weird explanation :/
00:06:432 (5) - how about you add a soft whistle here? it would fit because the drum there is a little bit stronger. you could also make the volume for this one a bit louder and change it for the next one again. that's just some nice effect
00:07:120 (5,6) - change the clap to a drum-finish because the drums change from toms to floor drum.
00:08:673 (6,1,2,3) - this jump doesn't feel natural. how about you change this the following way. you get the little flowbreak you had before but also make it a double-triangle-clockwise pattern and this is somehow nicer:
SPOILER
00:12:638 (7,1) - again this feels a bit weird. maybe ctrl + h 1 and place it more on the left
00:26:259 (4) - make a cool effect with this and add some jumpy-slider-thingu like this:
SPOILER
00:39:880 (1,2,3,4) - this sudden 1/3 stream could be difficult to follow because there hasn't been something like this before and stuff.
00:50:225 (1) - i think you should ctrl + g this slider. because of 00:49:535 (3) - you got circular-clockwise flow here and you suddenly change it with that slider and it plays weird. if you ctrl + it feels lighter. you'd also have to ctrl +g 00:50:570 (2) - if you do this

[Celsius' Insane]

00:05:397 (2,3) - i think you could add some hitsound on the sliderend of 2 and 3 here (a whistle or whatever)
00:13:501 (3,4,5) - a jump after a parallel pattern always feels off. so also this time. mabe you should curve the 3 circles before a bit or somehow change like this:
SPOILER
00:31:604 (4,5,6) - this flows weird. maybe ctrl + g 5 and 6 so you get clockwise-flow and not 2 sudden changes in direction in such a short time
00:34:363 (4,5,1) - again. this feels off because... wait... i'll draw something:
SPOILER

as you can see the direction changes 4 times with 4 objects. (red is clockwise and blue is anti-clockwise) this doesn't feel nice and somehow hectic and weird. how about you make something like this instead:
SPOILER
now the whole thing plays smoother
01:05:914 (3) - ctrl + g for interesting flowbreak-flow and it would fit the music.
01:23:156 (6,1) - this jump doesn't fit. please change it. nothing in the music calls for something like this and it plays weird as hell

[captin's Insane]

again I mod a guest difficulty you made. you're everywhere. that's somehow creepy.
00:02:638 (4) - like i said before in another difficulty (but since this is a guest i'll say it again) the 'n'-sound and the 'do' sound after this are a bit stronger than the sliders before and i think this should show in the map. maybe make a jump here or change this slider into two circles
00:30:914 (1,2,3) - this is okay but i got a nice idea that would fit, be a bit more interesting and still flow nice. how about you stack the beginning of slider 3 with circle 1 and rotate 3 a bit. you got clockwise flow before and this way you also put in a forth-and-back motion. this would also emphasize the jump after this and just feel cool. like this:
SPOILER
00:33:328 (5,6) - maybe ctrl+ g for flow here?
nice difficulty

[Mochi's Hard]

00:20:570 (3) - i think both guitar sounds have the same strength, so about you change this slider into two stacking circles? it would fit and also create some cool effect.
00:23:328 (3,1) - this could be a bit too difficult to read for a hard
00:34:018 (7) - this feels wrong because the really strong finish-guitar sound is on a sliderend. i think this strong sound should be tapped. this confused me...

[Habi's Normal]

seems fine to me

[Easy]

seems fine

hope i could help you a bit~

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-05-25T23:01:01+00:00

Sky (m4m)

Sky Trias wrote:
Hi! M4M Queue

[General]
Audio Lead-In : +1430 ( all difficult ) minimum 2000 ms.
Uncheck Widescreen Support on all difficult except Celsius . (Cause this mapset doesn't have SB.)
err.. this is good.
ok added audio + unchecked widescreen
[Easy]
00:11:604 (3,1) - same spacing like 00:10:914 (2,3) - maybe move to 140|276 i dont wanan ruin this
00:21:087 (1) - umm.. three hitsound on tail? remove finish & whistle. keep clap cause same with another difficulty ok
00:26:604 (4) - 164|220 better. its fine
00:49:880 (2) - move 1 grid up maybe? no
00:52:638 (2) - sound weird over here. its fine i thinkk with the slider
SPOILER
sound's better if you make like this.
SPOILER
01:09:707 (3) - 400|168 better. i like the way it is right now
01:14:363 (2) - maybe make this slider same like 01:13:328 (4) ok
00:37:638 (1) - straighten with 00:38:501 (2) - maybe? yup !
err.. this is good.
[Spring]
00:23:501 (5,1) - stack? no one purpose
00:25:052 (4) - better move to 212|152 maybe? i think its fine as it is now
00:40:914 (2) - Ctrl+G? i didnt ctrl + g instead i just rearranged it a bit so i emphasis the drum on 3
00:46:776 (3,2) - stack? no i like the way it is right now
00:47:466 (1,2) - blanket? its fine with the blanket
00:59:621 (4) - remove? deleted the whole part
01:10:828 (8,1) - spacing please? it's different with 01:10:570 (5,6,7,8) - maybe move to 344|92 nice catch
01:17:811 (1) - remove NC .. Start NC on 01:17:466 (6)k
err.. this is good.
GoodLuck!

Mio (m4m)

Mio_chan wrote:
Doing a M4M for your queue :3

Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Green mods are comments only.

[Spring]
00:23:501 (5) – making this a circle like you did in 00:20:742 -? this fits the music perfectly
00:55:225 (2,3) – this pattern look nice but it plays hard imo, the actual DS between (2) and (3) during gameplay is much larger than the other part of this slider jump pattern and moreover the movement from (2) to (3) to (4) does not flow very well, consider reducing the DS a bit?
maybe if other mods mention this ill change
01:17:466 (6) – NC here instead of 01:17:810 (1) -?, if you do that, put NC in 01:18:501 (4) – changed from other mod !

[Easy]
00:21:087 (1) – remove finish on slider end changed from other mod
01:09:707 (3,4) –I suggest merging this into a single slider since the beat is quite hard to play for an easy no its fine

I will give a star because I like some of the diff

Hard

Hard wrote:
yo. From my queue. Please rate my mod when I finished.

[Spring]

00:02:638 (4) - this 'n' sound is emphasized and a bit louder and i think you should show that in the map and not use the sliders like you did before. i suggest you choose a single circle and change the slider's end into one too. OR you add a jump here. but the higher note is something that i have to feel, hope you understand my weird explanation :/ increased the distance here !
00:06:432 (5) - how about you add a soft whistle here? it would fit because the drum there is a little bit stronger. you could also make the volume for this one a bit louder and change it for the next one again. that's just some nice effect
added whistle
00:07:120 (5,6) - change the clap to a drum-finish because the drums change from toms to floor drum.
no its fine here
00:08:673 (6,1,2,3) - this jump doesn't feel natural. how about you change this the following way. you get the little flowbreak you had before but also make it a double-triangle-clockwise pattern and this is somehow nicer:
SPOILER
changed to what you told me to do
00:12:638 (7,1) - again this feels a bit weird. maybe ctrl + h 1 and place it more on the left
mhm maybe but for now ill keep it !
00:26:259 (4) - make a cool effect with this and add some jumpy-slider-thingu like this:
SPOILER
i see what you did there , but might be overkill with the jump
00:39:880 (1,2,3,4) - this sudden 1/3 stream could be difficult to follow because there hasn't been something like this before and stuff.
uhh i changed this part from a whole stream to half stream into repeat sldier
00:50:225 (1) - i think you should ctrl + g this slider. because of 00:49:535 (3) - you got circular-clockwise flow here and you suddenly change it with that slider and it plays weird. if you ctrl + it feels lighter. you'd also have to ctrl +g 00:50:570 (2) - if you do this
ok
hope i could help you a bit~

Thanks for the mods !

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-05-26T15:12:51+00:00

Hard wrote:
yo. From my queue. Please rate my mod when I finished.

[Celsius' Insane]

00:05:397 (2,3) - i think you could add some hitsound on the sliderend of 2 and 3 here (a whistle or whatever) it doesn't sound right to me there so I leave it empty like that
00:13:501 (3,4,5) - a jump after a parallel pattern always feels off. so also this time. mabe you should curve the 3 circles before a bit or somehow change like this:
SPOILER
yea fixed
00:31:604 (4,5,6) - this flows weird. maybe ctrl + g 5 and 6 so you get clockwise-flow and not 2 sudden changes in direction in such a short time no , I prefer current one the sudden change there kinda fit the song there where it just feel a bit sudden or something here 00:31:604 (4,5) -
00:34:363 (4,5,1) - again. this feels off because... wait... i'll draw something:
SPOILER

as you can see the direction changes 4 times with 4 objects. (red is clockwise and blue is anti-clockwise) this doesn't feel nice and somehow hectic and weird. how about you make something like this instead:
SPOILER
now the whole thing plays smoother fixed on my own
01:05:914 (3) - ctrl + g for interesting flowbreak-flow and it would fit the music. no, current one fit more imo
01:23:156 (6,1) - this jump doesn't fit. please change it. nothing in the music calls for something like this and it plays weird as hell fixed
hope i could help you a bit~

thanks for the mod

dot

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 1430
PreviewTime: 59880
Countdown: 0
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Title:Haru Modoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Aerous
Version:Celsius' Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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ganad

277 posts

Joined March 2012

ganad 2015-06-03T08:35:27+00:00

Hi I'm a pretty noob modder, and I'm still learning so don't expect too much, but I'll try my best to assist you

I can only mod easy to hard so I didn't mod insane soz

Most of the things i will say will just be suggestions, so yeah
Just experiment and see if you like it

EASY
00:39:535 (3) I think you should try and line this slider with the previous one 00:38:501 (2) (line them up or just bend the (2) slider so that it does)

00:52:638 (2) It sounded like something was off, so i played around with it and came up with a reverse slider 1/1 i think at the start of 00:52:638 and 1/1 slider at 00:53:673

01:08:845 (2) It sounds a bit to long so i tried to shortened it and sounded slightly better I think

HABI'S NORMAL
00:03:328 (1) It kinda sound off to me, maybe shorten it by 1/2 a beat so on the white tick

00:07:811 The pause was to long imo, you could lengthen the spinner or bring the slider back (1) and make it a reverse or just add a beat circle

00:42:638 (3) maybe alter it to make it a blanket or just somehow make it connect to 00:43:328 (1)

Can't mod the other diffs.

I'm sorry I can't be of much more help, I just can't comprehend it

This mapset is looking really good tho.
Good luck and wish for the best

P.S. I think the difficulty jump from normal to hard might be a bit too much ( I heard this from another modder, just wanted to get that out there)

Misure

953 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2015-06-03T16:32:49+00:00

Hello~
Got idea from Cloud's queue
(I'm new in modding,if I say something wrong,just ignore~

)

[General]

I think the BG can be more moe >.<
[Easy]

00:04:018 - better add a note here
00:23:845 (1) - hitsound on the slider?I think you are not on purpose.
00:39:535 (3) - curve better surely
00:42:638 (4) - curve better
and this is my 2pc score <3 (the first pc missed at the very last)

Image

[Habi's Normal]

I think all OK!
Maybe add a spinner at the last? whatever
[Mochi's Hard]
No BG,or just my problem?
00:04:880 - spinner starts at this point better
00:26:001 (3,4) - a little difficult in a Hard diff,delete 00:26:001 (3) - better
00:33:673 (6) - 00:34:535 (8) - 00:35:742 (3) -

Image

and 00:35:742 (3) stack,hope you can understand

00:41:604 (3,4) - ctrl+G and move
00:59:880 (1) - (100,192)better
01:19:707 (3) - ctrl+G
[Celsius' Insane]

00:01:949 (3,4) - maybe they can keep a distance
00:17:121 (4,5,6,7,1) - not straight?
00:20:225 (2) - maybe a llittle curve better
00:28:328 (1) - maybe (104,272),I think keep it far from 00:27:638 (3) - is better
00:45:742 (5,6) - maybe stack is not a good choice
00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - flow of this part is a little awkward
00:59:535 (1) - a high speed slider is cool I think
[captin's Insane]

00:01:949 (3) - a little uncomfortable,maybe (124,128) better?
00:17:121 - maybe better

00:18:328 (1) - ctrl+G for I think 1 flows to 2 and 3
00:37:294 (5) - curve more
00:38:673 (4) - (8,212)
00:39:880 (6) - ctrl+G
00:50:052 (1) - change red point to white(hope express clearly)because it's a littlle sudden now
00:50:914 (3) - curve direction like 2
00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - a little irregular
00:58:501 - how about like this

01:00:225 (2) - 01:00:914 (5) - 01:01:604 (2) - curve
01:22:294 (2) - (267,240)
01:22:983 (5) - (168,344)
[Spring]

00:01:949 (3) - rotate -9°
00:07:983 (3) - (300,112)?
00:14:363 (1) - 00:14:707 (2) - ctrl+G
00:22:466 (1) - ctrl+H and move to (296,224)or around
00:27:121 (2) - ctrl+G
00:40:570 (1) - start point to (152,64)
00:57:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move to right more
01:23:328 (1) - curve
01:25:225 (2,3) - I think they are a little far

Maybe my modding is poor but
Good luck to you!

Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2015-06-04T01:58:24+00:00

Hi from CloudSplash's modding company (not really)~

General

@captin1 @HabiHolic: Widescreen Support is enable in your diffs, and Aerous' Easy as well. (It's time to fix it, lol)
@Momochikun: Your BG is lost, and your tag is inconsistent with others.
I dunno whether it's rankable if your difficulties have different kiai time setting.

Spring

00:08:501 (5,6) - Swap hitsound addition plz.
00:09:707 (6,7) - Swap hitsound. Drum sound does not change until 00:09:880 - ,therefore hitsound consistency is critical here. (like what you do on 00:12:466 (6,7,1) - )
00:16:776 (4) - I prefer a straight slider here, looks better.
00:25:138 - Here is a kick sound, you'd better adjust the pattern to follow it. Cuz you follow this on 00:19:621 -
00:41:259 (3) - try ctrl+g?
00:47:983 (2,3,4,1) - Try this (2 is a duplicate of 1 and is rotated by 180) for a nicer blanket.
SPOILER
00:52:552 - Change the rhythm into this, would follow the drum and vocal better.
SPOILER
00:59:363 - Just suggestion: add a triplet here.
01:08:931 (6) - Suggest you add a whistle or drum whistle on this. To make your overmap sounds more natural.
01:25:570 (3) - Replace your addition into Drum finish. This would make a better transition between drum clap and your whistle.

Celsius' Insane

From 00:00:570 - to 00:06:087 - Suggest you use whstle addition on every two white ticks (instead of one).
01:07:121 (2) - Just my taste: try this?
SPOILER

Your mapping style is what i am really happy with. (I really enjoy that Kawaru Mirai) Sorry if i can't help much here.

captin's Insane

From 00:00:570 - to 00:06:087 - Suggest you use whstle addition on every two white ticks (instead of one).
00:31:776 (5) - Just my suggestion: overmap here as a triplet, in order to distinguish this from 00:20:742 (5) - (whose drum sound is different)
00:34:535 (4) - 00:37:294 (5) - ^
00:58:673 (2,3) - Try this. I think your current pattern is not relyable to anyting in the song. This at least follows something. (i dunno the name of this sound but if you play it with 25% speed you could clearly hear it)
SPOILER

Mochi's Hard

00:11:949 (2) - Whistle on the head
00:15:397 (4) - Drum finish would be better
00:25:742 (2,3) - Suggest compress 2 circles into a slider. I feel from 2 to 3,4 is a bit hard to identify while testplay.
00:33:673 (6,7) - Blank 4 tail with 5, or avoid any blanket here. Current one looks not that awesome, really......
00:41:604 (3,4) - Swap the order of slider and circle. You don't follow vocal or something else here but I feel it's really juggling while testplay.

Vhy's Normal

00:11:604 (4,5) - Inconsistent distance.

Easy

00:54:018 (3) - Inconsistent distance

That's all my mod. Hope this could help.

Good luck~

GiantZarz

183 posts

Joined January 2014

GiantZarz 2015-06-04T14:26:44+00:00

From Mod Value Exchange

General

OK

Easy

00:04:707 (1) - Slider end should be at 00:06:087
00:52:638 (2) - Feel like reverse should be at 00:52:983 and add a note at 00:53:673
01:01:259 (3) - It would be more fit if you do a 1/4 reverse slider
01:05:397 (1,2,3) - Try this
SPOILER
01:08:156 (1,2,3,4) - Try this
SPOILER

Habi's Normal

00:03:328 (1,2) - Doesn't Fit
00:07:811 - Add a note here,It feels to empty
00:34:363 (2) - Better do 1/2 with reverse
01:04:707 (4) - Move it to 01:04:535 and extend it

Mochi's Hard

01:00:397 - Add a note here

captin's Insane

00:13:242 - Add a note here to be co nsistent with other patterns

Celsius' Insane

OK

Spring

00:44:707 (1) - No need for clap
00:54:363 to 00:57:983 - So loud, lower the volume down

Good Luck!

SoGa

236 posts

Joined June 2013

SoGa 2015-06-04T23:03:28+00:00

General

Well , i don't think u need widescreen support on , maybe just disable it.

[Easy]

00:09:535 (1,3) - Switch Nc
00:21:087 (1) - Slider head = Finish is ok , 3 hitsounds join is too noisy and terrible,and i dont think the whole slider body need hitsound ,sound annoying.pls delete those clap and hitsound on the slider body
00:40:570 (1) - Actually i want you to decrease the volume here instead of increasing it.Maybe set it to 50% or something lower
00:50:570 (3) - Maybe change this to a 1/2 reverse ? I think this way fit the song more lmao.and then turn this to a 2/1slider 00:51:604 (1) -
00:52:638 (2) - I dont think this one fit enough , maybe change it like a 1/1 then 3 notes
01:05:397 (1,2) - Nazi , not perfect blanket

[Habi's Normal]

00:59:535 (3,1) - Nazi , why won't u blanket them ;w;
01:04:018 (3,4,5) - Maybe u can try this rhythm ?
01:05:397 (1,2,3) - I think this way fit the song more in though,By moving 01:06:432 (3) - half gap to the right and switch it as a note , image below

[Mochi's Hard]

00:09:535 (3,4,5) - Keep this in same ds will look better ,maybe
i's just me or the set change the bg for this set?becuz i dont see a bg of this set after update the map

Spring

00:07:294 (1,3) - U made such a shape and didnt blanket them waste orz
00:26:604 (1) - Lower the volume pls , this part suppose to be a very silence part tho.and the current volume is just making it sound weird with such high volume
00:22:983 (2) - Maybe chang this to a 1/2 slider like other diffs do and delete this note .00:23:156 (3) - sound weird
00:44:707 (1,2,3) - Personal recommendation is to make this shape more aesthetic and then blanket them .example:
00:47:121 (4) - Stack this one to 00:47:983 (2) - slider tail
00:54:449 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i want to say this hitsound is kinda noisy , pls change a clap or either decrease the volume a little bit , we aren't playing a Gatlin
01:02:638 (1) - Ctrl + G better tho.
01:11:949 (6,7) - Ctrl + G
01:19:707 (1) - Unnecessary Finish here
01:20:397 (5) - ^ Noisy
01:24:707 (1) - Ctrl + G . i think the current flow is awkward
01:25:225 (2) - If u did above one and then change this Ctrl + G too .after u done , u will get such pattern

End

Osuology

528 posts

Joined February 2014

Osuology 2015-06-05T00:12:54+00:00

Mod from ModCoin queue

[General]
Tags are conflicting?
Filesize exceeds 24 mb, change video or audio bitrate

[Mochi's Hard]
You have a lot of overlaps, I like overlaps, but most people don't, so consider changing maybe if you have probs with this later.
00:17:121 (1) - Make this go to the next blue tick sounds better in accord with guitar.
The doubles are also hard, maybe change if possible, like using sliders instead.

[captin's Insane]
00:19:190 (4) - this doesn't need to be here, kinda makes the double non prevalent (these keep happening later too, I won't mention the rest)
01:25:397 (3,4,5) - While it might be symmetrical, it doesn't play well IMO. Possible change here, not required tho.

[Celsius' Insane]
00:54:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Stream is excessive, maybe shorten a little bit, using sliders

[Spring]
00:09:363 (4) - This took me by surprise, I think it's fine, just surprised my first time.
00:58:328 (7) - Put a spinner until a beat before the note after this one.
01:08:845 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - No stream in the background.

01:19:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Again you sometimes map to nothing.

Wow, this is derserving of rank after this and some stuff from BNs. Good work guys!

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2015-06-10T19:28:34+00:00

Hi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

Missing bg in Mochi's Hard

[Spring]

00:01:949 (3,4) - It feels like a random placement/shape. Try to copy 00:01:259 (2) -, Ctrl+H,J for 00:01:949 (3) - this. and copy 00:01:949 (3) - this slider, Ctrl+H for 00:02:638 (4) -
SPOILER
00:26:604 (1) - Move to x428 y63 for blanket
00:31:259 (3) - a bit close that spacing 00:31:087 (2,3) - and flow isn't good. so Try to move 00:31:259 (3) - this slider in there. would be better than current imo.
SPOILER
00:31:259 (3,4,5,6) - Not bad that flow, but I want to change that this jump pattern for more improve flow. Try this one.
SPOILER
00:44:707 (1,2,3,4) - You can improve this placement
SPOILER

[Celsius' Insane]

00:11:949 (2) - Why not use copy of 00:11:604 (1) - slider :3
SPOILER

[captin's Insane]

Good.

[Mochi's Hard]

00:34:880 (9,1) - Swap NC

[Habi's Normal]

Please use soft-hitwhistle more. You can add it to match the bass sound e.g.00:08:156 - 00:08:845 - 00:09:535 - 00:10:397 - 00:10:914 - 00:11:604 - and so on.

00:03:328 (1) - There is no sound in red tick. so use 1/2 slider better instead of it.
00:19:190 (3) - Remove clap from sldier tail. and Add clap to 00:19:707 (4) - slider head.
00:21:949 (3,4) - ^ same. Try to listen to the music carefully, snare sound in 00:22:466 - there. not 00:22:294 -
00:24:707 (3,1) - ^
00:34:363 (2,3) - a bit wrong spacing. Please use 1.10x
01:16:776 (2,4) - Add clap to slider head.
01:25:225 (2) - Please fix that spacing.

[Easy]

00:06:776 - It feels so empty here. Try to add 1/1 slider.
00:09:535 (1) - Clap + finish sound is too big. Please remove clap or lower the volume.
00:12:294 (1) - ^ same
00:21:087 (1) - ^ omg all hitsounds o_o and remove finish and whistle from slider body.
00:23:845 (1) - ^
00:52:638 (2) - It's werid rhythm. Slider repeat doesn't follow any sound. so Try this rhythm.

Good luck!

Natsu

8,100 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2015-06-12T03:05:49+00:00

Yo, captin1's request

General:

Check all those mods lol
can everyone end their diff in 01:28:845 - ??

Spring:

This diff play jsut fine with AR9 there is not need for the .2
00:07:294 (1,3) - 00:07:294 (1,4) - I suppose that you tryed to blank those objects, so improve them:
SPOILER
00:15:052 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - again bad blanket, redo the stream, use the tool compose > convert slider to stream so you can do a better blanket here
00:15:914 (1,2) - nazi, stack its off
00:16:776 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same blanket problem, since most of your streams looks like you did them circle by circle, use the tool its better
00:23:501 (5,1) - I like your idea, but its better if you stacks the tail perfect, actually looks really bad in game
00:36:949 (3) - this shouldn't be mapped as circle, since you lost the emphasis of 00:37:121 (4,5,6) - by doing that, so do a slider with 00:36:776 (2,3) - instead
00:38:156 (2,3) - your blankets need improve, yeah should be nice if you check your blankets in all this diff, they are off
00:39:880 (1,2,3) - use a slider instead, playing 1/3 in a 1/4 song feels really bad and make people lost their rhythm, a slider will be a better idea as the other diffs do
00:47:466 (1,2) - this pattern can be better, looks a bit random to be honest
00:54:966 (8,1,2,3,4) - first to all your 1/4 jumps start with too big spacing and feels uncomfortable to play, also can be confused with 1/2 spacing, so reduce a bit the spacing at the beginning, second 00:55:742 (1,2,3,4) - I still don't understan why you are starting to use double repeat sliders, a single circle stream or 1/4 sliders (without repeat will feel alot better when playing) third 00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - redo your hitsounds here that clap spam its kinda annoying, I think you should redo all this stream sections, hitsounds, rhythm and placement
00:58:501 atleast add a spinner or do something like captin1 did
01:19:707 (1,2) - spacing its too big, since is the firts 1/4 jump at this pattern, should use less spacing, imo

captin's Insane:

00:58:156 (6,7,1) - this make me fail so bad when testing , 6,7 reduce spacing or add increase spacing in 7,1

Celsius' Insane:

00:06:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I have no feedback when clicking this stream, add whistles like spring diff did, also like you did here 00:17:121 (4,5,6,7) -
00:25:052 (5) - nothing in the music here, just do a slider in 00:24:880 (4) - until 00:25:138 -
00:54:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try to hitsound this better, I feel it too simple >:
00:59:535 (1) - music its in 1/2, there is nothing to map at blue tick, pls dont
01:09:363 (1) - eh I don't get why the slowdown here, it doesn't fit the song tbh just map at normal speed here.
01:11:259 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - don't spam combos pls, you just mess up the hp drain in all your diff, also this kind of pattern are easy to read without doing that

Mochi's Hard:

00:06:432 (1,2) - better remove those objects, or make them audible.
00:25:742 (2,3) - just use a slider, your actually transition its really hard to get, I did hit 100 at 3, cuz its weird to start in a blue tick to be honest

Habi's Normal:

00:12:121 (5,6) - stack
At a spinner in the end

Easy:

00:37:121 (3,1) - is this supposed to be a blanket?
so many straight sliders >:

mmm reply to this and lets see what I can do here

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-06-12T04:03:01+00:00

Misure wrote:
Hello~
Got idea from Cloud's queue
(I'm new in modding,if I say something wrong,just ignore~ )

[General]

I think the BG can be more moe >.< same

[Celsius' Insane]

00:01:949 (3,4) - maybe they can keep a distance looks fine
00:17:121 (4,5,6,7,1) - not straight? o
00:20:225 (2) - maybe a llittle curve better u
00:28:328 (1) - maybe (104,272),I think keep it far from 00:27:638 (3) - is better looks fine
00:45:742 (5,6) - maybe stack is not a good choice bulidup for nice jumps feeling tho
00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - flow of this part is a little awkward not really imo
00:59:535 (1) - a high speed slider is cool I think slow speed is nice and fit the tone of song tho

Maybe my modding is poor but same
Good luck to you!

Adol Christin wrote:
Hi from CloudSplash's modding company (not really)~ same

Celsius' Insane
From 00:00:570 - to 00:06:087 - Suggest you use whstle addition on every two white ticks (instead of one). one is nice I think not sound too much or too low , music here is pretty calm tho so current is fitted imo
01:07:121 (2) - Just my taste: try this?
SPOILER
I prefer current one
Your mapping style is what i am really happy with. (I really enjoy that Kawaru Mirai) Sorry if i can't help much here.

That's all my mod. Hope this could help. same

Good luck~

Osuology wrote:
[Celsius' Insane]
00:54:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Stream is excessive, maybe shorten a little bit, using sliders I think the stream play fine here not really intense that much imo and it follow the beat tho

Wow, this is derserving of rank after this and some stuff from BNs. Good work guys!

Guy wrote:
Hi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[Celsius' Insane]
00:11:949 (2) - Why not use copy of 00:11:604 (1) - slider :3 I prefer current one since it make the flow nice and instresting imo
SPOILER

Good luck!

Natsu wrote:
Yo, captin1's request

General:

Check all those mods lol
can everyone end their diff in 01:28:845 - ?? yea
Celsius' Insane:

00:06:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I have no feedback when clicking this stream, add whistles like spring diff did, also like you did here 00:17:121 (4,5,6,7) - k
00:25:052 (5) - nothing in the music here, just do a slider in 00:24:880 (4) - until 00:25:138 - there is a "ding" bell sound like there tho ;_;
00:54:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try to hitsound this better, I feel it too simple >: how tho ? I try to add more whistle , not sure if it better or not ;_;
00:59:535 (1) - music its in 1/2, there is nothing to map at blue tick, pls dont but I hear something like a electronic reverse sound or something idk at blue tick clearly tbh
01:09:363 (1) - eh I don't get why the slowdown here, it doesn't fit the song tbh just map at normal speed here. I emphasis the tone of music here which you can here the sound of instrument here 01:09:363 - get extened at its pace or something (idk how to explain it tho ) so I guess sv change really fit the thing like this here
01:11:259 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - don't spam combos pls, you just mess up the hp drain in all your diff, also this kind of pattern are easy to read without doing that ok
mmm reply to this and lets see what I can do here

thanks for the mods

everyone

spoilerbox indeed

osu file format v14

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Last edited by Iceskulls 2015-06-12T04:12:35+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,608 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2015-06-12T04:09:07+00:00

"Sky Trias"

[Captin]

00:09:190 (3) - move 1 grid down maybe? most of these not done because they're pretty pointless
00:13:673 (3) - better move to 472|208
00:24:707 (4) - emm same spacing like 00:19:190 (4,5,6) - maybe move to 316|164
00:33:501 (6) - move to 388|316 maybe?
00:42:983 (4) - better move to 192|316 . Same spacing like 00:42:121 (2,3)
00:52:294 (4) - again. 468|168
00:54:707 (2) - Ctrl+G? kk
00:58:501 (1,2) - err .. confusing spacing ._. move to 128|312 maybe? adjusted a little
01:20:138 (7) - move to 24|200 ? or something better ? make same spacing like 01:18:156 (3,4,5) - maybe? did same spacing
err.. this is good.

"Mio_chan"

[captin’s Insane]
The slider ticks in intro is quite noisy imo better than the annoying sliderslide
00:19:449 (6) – I think this should start at 00:19:363 (5) –instead, since there is nothing in the music here same applies to 00:24:880 – but there is a snare sound there
00:45:742 (6) – circles suits here better imo, due to the drum fill in prefer mine
01:17:466 (5) – NC on here instead? keeping ncs consistent
01:20:138 (7,8) – stack them under (6)? changed from before

"Hard"

[captin's Insane]

again I mod a guest difficulty you made. you're everywhere. that's somehow creepy. :p
00:02:638 (4) - like i said before in another difficulty (but since this is a guest i'll say it again) the 'n'-sound and the 'do' sound after this are a bit stronger than the sliders before and i think this should show in the map. maybe make a jump here or change this slider into two circles would like to keep this consistent and easy to play
00:30:914 (1,2,3) - this is okay but i got a nice idea that would fit, be a bit more interesting and still flow nice. how about you stack the beginning of slider 3 with circle 1 and rotate 3 a bit. you got clockwise flow before and this way you also put in a forth-and-back motion. this would also emphasize the jump after this and just feel cool. like this: nice
SPOILER
00:33:328 (5,6) - maybe ctrl+ g for flow here? like the transition into 1 better as is
nice difficulty

"Misure"

[captin's Insane]

00:01:949 (3) - a little uncomfortable,maybe (124,128) better? fine as is
00:17:121 - maybe better not what i want here

00:18:328 (1) - ctrl+G for I think 1 flows to 2 and 3 plays worse for me
00:37:294 (5) - curve more no
00:38:673 (4) - (8,212) fine as is
00:39:880 (6) - ctrl+G ^
00:50:052 (1) - change red point to white(hope express clearly)because it's a littlle sudden now ^
00:50:914 (3) - curve direction like 2 ^
00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - a little irregular what?
00:58:501 - how about like this doesn't follow song

01:00:225 (2) - 01:00:914 (5) - 01:01:604 (2) - curve no
01:22:294 (2) - (267,240) fine as is
01:22:983 (5) - (168,344) ^

"Adol Christin"

captin's Insane

From 00:00:570 - to 00:06:087 - Suggest you use whstle addition on every two white ticks (instead of one). uh it is
00:31:776 (5) - Just my suggestion: overmap here as a triplet, in order to distinguish this from 00:20:742 (5) - (whose drum sound is different)
00:34:535 (4) - 00:37:294 (5) - ^ nah
00:58:673 (2,3) - Try this. I think your current pattern is not relyable to anyting in the song. This at least follows something. (i dunno the name of this sound but if you play it with 25% speed you could clearly hear it) my current rhythm is easier
SPOILER

"giantzarz"

captin's Insane

00:13:242 - Add a note here to be co nsistent with other patterns nah

"Osuology"

[captin's Insane]
00:19:190 (4) - this doesn't need to be here, kinda makes the double non prevalent (these keep happening later too, I won't mention the rest) fine as is
01:25:397 (3,4,5) - While it might be symmetrical, it doesn't play well IMO. Possible change here, not required tho. plays fine for me

"Natsu"

captin's Insane:

00:58:156 (6,7,1) - this make me fail so bad when testing , 6,7 reduce spacing or add increase spacing in 7,1 yea it's fixed

ty

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:春擬き
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let me know when you finish fixing your diff aerous and i'll give it a run down

Natsu

8,100 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2015-06-12T04:16:34+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
Natsu wrote:
Yo, captin1's request

General:

Check all those mods lol
can everyone end their diff in 01:28:845 - ?? yea
Celsius' Insane:

00:25:052 (5) - nothing in the music here, just do a slider in 00:24:880 (4) - until 00:25:138 - there is a "ding" bell sound like there tho ;_; try 25 % or 50% there is nothing noticeable, mmm we can agre maybe making a slider from 00:24:707 - to 00:25:052 - ?
00:54:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try to hitsound this better, I feel it too simple >: how tho ? I try to add more whistle , not sure if it better or not ;_; ya, also maybe add claps at 0:56:087 (2,3)
00:59:535 (1) - music its in 1/2, there is nothing to map at blue tick, pls dont but I hear something like a electronic reverse sound or something idk at blue tick clearly tbh 00:59:449 this is more noticeable and you just ignore it tho, also your ¨electronic¨ sound isn't the one that start in 00:59:707 but the hold sound continue to the blue? that's why make more sense to end the slider in red
01:09:363 (1) - eh I don't get why the slowdown here, it doesn't fit the song tbh just map at normal speed here. I emphasis the tone of music here which you can here the sound of instrument here 01:09:363 - get extened at its pace or something (idk how to explain it tho ) so I guess sv change really fit the thing like this here atleast can you consider use a more friendly sv change? like 0,70 ?

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-12T04:26:37+00:00

Natsu

Natsu wrote:
Yo, captin1's request

General:

Check all those mods lol yea i will ;w;
can everyone end their diff in 01:28:845 - ??
Spring:

This diff play jsut fine with AR9 there is not need for the .2 yup changed
00:07:294 (1,3) - 00:07:294 (1,4) - I suppose that you tryed to blank those objects, so improve them:
SPOILER
okay fixed here
00:15:052 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - again bad blanket, redo the stream, use the tool compose > convert slider to stream so you can do a better blanket here
used the convert thingy , I thought i did before ;w;
00:15:914 (1,2) - nazi, stack its off nazi stack fix
00:16:776 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same blanket problem, since most of your streams looks like you did them circle by circle, use the tool its better
okay convert thingy
00:23:501 (5,1) - I like your idea, but its better if you stacks the tail perfect, actually looks really bad in game stacked
00:36:949 (3) - this shouldn't be mapped as circle, since you lost the emphasis of 00:37:121 (4,5,6) - by doing that, so do a slider with 00:36:776 (2,3) - instead made into slider
00:38:156 (2,3) - your blankets need improve, yeah should be nice if you check your blankets in all this diff, they are off
im trying
00:39:880 (1,2,3) - use a slider instead, playing 1/3 in a 1/4 song feels really bad and make people lost their rhythm, a slider will be a better idea as the other diffs do
used repeat
00:47:466 (1,2) - this pattern can be better, looks a bit random to be honest yea i agree , fixed
00:54:966 (8,1,2,3,4) - first to all your 1/4 jumps start with too big spacing and feels uncomfortable to play, also can be confused with 1/2 spacing, so reduce a bit the spacing at the beginning, second 00:55:742 (1,2,3,4) - I still don't understan why you are starting to use double repeat sliders, a single circle stream or 1/4 sliders (without repeat will feel alot better when playing) third 00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - redo your hitsounds here that clap spam its kinda annoying, I think you should redo all this stream sections, hitsounds, rhythm and placement
i remapped everything here ;w; and hitsound
00:58:501 atleast add a spinner or do something like captin1 did no i kinda want the player to have a break after those streams

01:19:707 (1,2) - spacing its too big, since is the firts 1/4 jump at this pattern, should use less spacing, imo fixed

Easy:

00:37:121 (3,1) - is this supposed to be a blanket? whoops yea
so many straight sliders >:

mmm reply to this and lets see what I can do here

Guy

Guy wrote:
Hi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Missing bg in Mochi's Hard
baka mochi , didnt add BG when she/he sent it to me
[Spring]
00:01:949 (3,4) - It feels like a random placement/shape. Try to copy 00:01:259 (2) -, Ctrl+H,J for 00:01:949 (3) - this. and copy 00:01:949 (3) - this slider, Ctrl+H for 00:02:638 (4) -
SPOILER
00:26:604 (1) - Move to x428 y63 for blanket
00:31:259 (3) - a bit close that spacing 00:31:087 (2,3) - and flow isn't good. so Try to move 00:31:259 (3) - this slider in there. would be better than current imo.
SPOILER
00:31:259 (3,4,5,6) - Not bad that flow, but I want to change that this jump pattern for more improve flow. Try this one.
SPOILER
00:44:707 (1,2,3,4) - You can improve this placement
SPOILER

[Easy]
00:06:776 - It feels so empty here. Try to add 1/1 slider.
00:09:535 (1) - Clap + finish sound is too big. Please remove clap or lower the volume.
00:12:294 (1) - ^ same
00:21:087 (1) - ^ omg all hitsounds o_o and remove finish and whistle from slider body.
00:23:845 (1) - ^
00:52:638 (2) - It's werid rhythm. Slider repeat doesn't follow any sound. so Try this rhythm.
Good luck!

i literally fixed everything here ;w;

Adol

Adol Christin wrote:
Hi from CloudSplash's modding company (not really)~

General
@captin1 @HabiHolic: Widescreen Support is enable in your diffs, and Aerous' Easy as well. (It's time to fix it, lol)
@Momochikun: Your BG is lost, and your tag is inconsistent with others.
I dunno whether it's rankable if your difficulties have different kiai time setting.

added BG , and different kiai time doesnt matter lol

Spring
00:08:501 (5,6) - Swap hitsound addition plz.
00:09:707 (6,7) - Swap hitsound. Drum sound does not change until 00:09:880 - ,therefore hitsound consistency is critical here. (like what you do on 00:12:466 (6,7,1) - )
00:16:776 (4) - I prefer a straight slider here, looks better.
00:25:138 - Here is a kick sound, you'd better adjust the pattern to follow it. Cuz you follow this on 00:19:621 -
00:41:259 (3) - try ctrl+g?
00:47:983 (2,3,4,1) - Try this (2 is a duplicate of 1 and is rotated by 180) for a nicer blanket.
SPOILER
00:52:552 - Change the rhythm into this, would follow the drum and vocal better.
SPOILER
00:59:363 - Just suggestion: add a triplet here.
01:08:931 (6) - Suggest you add a whistle or drum whistle on this. To make your overmap sounds more natural.
01:25:570 (3) - Replace your addition into Drum finish. This would make a better transition between drum clap and your whistle.
i recently fixed all of my hitsounds , and other small things

Easy
00:54:018 (3) - Inconsistent distance this is fine !

That's all my mod. Hope this could help.

Good luck~

giantzarz

giantzarz wrote:
From Mod Value Exchange

General
OK

Easy
00:04:707 (1) - Slider end should be at 00:06:087 no its fine here
00:52:638 (2) - Feel like reverse should be at 00:52:983 and add a note at 00:53:673 i like my rythem right here
01:01:259 (3) - It would be more fit if you do a 1/4 reverse slider no i dont like reverse that much
01:05:397 (1,2,3) - Try this
SPOILER

maybe , but no for now
01:08:156 (1,2,3,4) - Try this
SPOILER
^^

Spring
00:44:707 (1) - No need for clap
00:54:363 to 00:57:983 - So loud, lower the volume down
recently fixed hitsound and other things
Good Luck!

SoGA

SoGa wrote:
General
Well , i don't think u need widescreen support on , maybe just disable it.
[Easy]
00:09:535 (1,3) - Switch Nc NC fine
00:21:087 (1) - Slider head = Finish is ok , 3 hitsounds join is too noisy and terrible,and i dont think the whole slider body need hitsound ,sound annoying.pls delete those clap and hitsound on the slider body fixed from Guy
00:40:570 (1) - Actually i want you to decrease the volume here instead of increasing it.Maybe set it to 50% or something lower
changed to 55
00:50:570 (3) - Maybe change this to a 1/2 reverse ? I think this way fit the song more lmao.and then turn this to a 2/1slider 00:51:604 (1) -
its fine , i dont like reverses that much
00:52:638 (2) - I dont think this one fit enough , maybe change it like a 1/1 then 3 notes
no its fine
01:05:397 (1,2) - Nazi , not perfect blanket okay D:

Spring
00:07:294 (1,3) - U made such a shape and didnt blanket them waste orz yea fixed from natsu's mod
00:26:604 (1) - Lower the volume pls , this part suppose to be a very silence part tho.and the current volume is just making it sound weird with such high volume okay
00:22:983 (2) - Maybe chang this to a 1/2 slider like other diffs do and delete this note .00:23:156 (3) - sound weird no its fine
00:44:707 (1,2,3) - Personal recommendation is to make this shape more aesthetic and then blanket them .example:
yup fixed
00:47:121 (4) - Stack this one to 00:47:983 (2) - slider tail this part got remapped a bit
00:54:449 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i want to say this hitsound is kinda noisy , pls change a clap or either decrease the volume a little bit , we aren't playing a Gatlin LOL yea i fixed my hitosunds
01:02:638 (1) - Ctrl + G better tho. should be okay i like the jump here
01:11:949 (6,7) - Ctrl + G should be okay here
01:19:707 (1) - Unnecessary Finish here personally i think its fine with the finish hitsound
01:20:397 (5) - ^ Noisy ^
01:24:707 (1) - Ctrl + G . i think the current flow is awkward jump for the finish emphasis
01:25:225 (2) - If u did above one and then change this Ctrl + G too .after u done , u will get such pattern
End

Osuology

Osuology wrote:
Mod from ModCoin queue

[General]
Tags are conflicting?
Filesize exceeds 24 mb, change video or audio bitrate if its under 32 its rankabke , and yea ill update Mochi's tag

[Spring]
00:09:363 (4) - This took me by surprise, I think it's fine, just surprised my first time. no its fine lol
00:58:328 (7) - Put a spinner until a beat before the note after this one. i want the players to get a rest here after stream
01:08:845 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - No stream in the background. you dont hear it? if you delete the slider you can hear it
01:19:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Again you sometimes map to nothing. sometimes you need to check your ears for ear wax dudee

Wow, this is derserving of rank after this and some stuff from BNs. Good work guys!

Thanks for the mod ! @captin , updated the diffs
Plus hope Habi replies to these mods atleast once .....

Last edited by Aerous 2015-06-12T04:46:28+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-06-12T04:38:03+00:00

Natsu wrote:
CelsiusLK wrote:
Yo, captin1's request

General:

Check all those mods lol
can everyone end their diff in 01:28:845 - ?? yea
Celsius' Insane:

00:25:052 (5) - nothing in the music here, just do a slider in 00:24:880 (4) - until 00:25:138 - there is a "ding" bell sound like there tho ;_; try 25 % or 50% there is nothing noticeable, mmm we can agre maybe making a slider from 00:24:707 - to 00:25:052 - ? ok , is it ok if I do like what you suggest first , slider from 00:24:880 - to 00:25:138 - ?
00:54:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try to hitsound this better, I feel it too simple >: how tho ? I try to add more whistle , not sure if it better or not ;_; ya, also maybe add claps at 0:56:087 (2,3) added clap at 00:56:087 (2) - head , 00:56:432 (3) - already clap
00:59:535 (1) - music its in 1/2, there is nothing to map at blue tick, pls dont but I hear something like a electronic reverse sound or something idk at blue tick clearly tbh 00:59:449 this is more noticeable and you just ignore it tho, also your ¨electronic¨ sound isn't the one that start in 00:59:707 but the hold sound continue to the blue? that's why make more sense to end the slider in red kk
01:09:363 (1) - eh I don't get why the slowdown here, it doesn't fit the song tbh just map at normal speed here. I emphasis the tone of music here which you can here the sound of instrument here 01:09:363 - get extened at its pace or something (idk how to explain it tho ) so I guess sv change really fit the thing like this here atleast can you consider use a more friendly sv change? like 0,70 ? yea , why not

SPOILER

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Momochikun

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Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2015-06-13T12:14:36+00:00

fixed.

seems there're some internal changing after my previous update, pls add video and double check the general stuffs before you update it

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-13T19:43:57+00:00

I sent around 5 to 8 messages to Habi telling her she should apply the mods from the beginning , but because she didn't reply to me I assume that she won't do apply these mods. I have fixed some or most of the blankets , distances and hitsound (plus green lines to change hitsound volumes , copied from easy diff. )in the Normal diff. Ontop of that , I added a spinner at the end so it can end on the same time as the other diffs. Hope Natsu can come back and check now.

Pho

1,786 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-06-13T20:23:43+00:00

Small IRC mod with Aerous for his Insane

21:47 Aerous: yoo pho can i ask you something ;w;
21:48 Pho: if it doesn't contain the words 'mod', 'icon' or 'rank my map' then yes
21:48 Aerous: LOL
21:48 Aerous: its about the stream here
21:48 *Aerous is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/674128 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Spring]]
21:48 Aerous: ;w;
21:48 Aerous: 00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) -
21:48 Pho: i get these way more ferequently the last weeks, dunno why lol
21:49 Pho: hmm lets see
21:49 Aerous: kinda remapped it after natsu modded it
21:49 Aerous: idk if its good enough to call him/her back
21:50 Pho: looks... odd lol
21:50 Pho: lemme test
21:50 Aerous: yea
21:50 Aerous: rip
21:52 Pho: need to get used to mah new skin first ;w;
21:52 Aerous: wtf you played so good
21:52 Aerous: with new skin
21:52 Aerous: gg i suck
21:52 Pho: azer skin is actuall really nice to paly with lol
21:52 Pho: eh, idk about the map
21:52 Aerous: lol i have it but the old one ;w;
21:53 Pho: it plays fine, good thing you dont spam jumps that much anymore lol
21:53 Aerous: lesson learned ???
21:53 Aerous:

21:54 Pho: i hope so if you don't get seduced by the jump devil again
21:54 Pho: 00:25:138 - missing a clear beat here
21:54 Pho: 00:28:501 (2) - dude wtf snap
21:54 Aerous: oh yea
21:54 Aerous: the 1/3
21:54 Aerous: double checked with captin
21:55 Pho: are you sure? sounds wrong to me
21:55 *Aerous is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672564 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Haru]]
21:55 Pho: it's only the mid beat at around 00:28:759 - that's not clear to hear
21:55 Aerous: double checked
21:55 Pho: hmm, ok
21:55 Aerous: if not then ill just change it lol
21:56 Pho: ask again, it sounds wrong really. 00:29:363 (1) - fix blanket nub
21:56 Aerous: fixed!
21:56 Aerous: ill ask captin when hes on
21:56 Pho: 00:41:949 (1) - you go over 00:42:121 - this, why :CCC
21:57 Pho: well i guess you're one of those vocal mappers
21:57 Aerous: ya :
21:58 Pho: 00:54:363 - concerning the part you mentioned: it plays fine. it's not the most optimal one, but it's decent
21:58 Aerous: idk about those overlap sliders thoo
21:58 Pho: 00:56:776 (1) - 00:57:466 (1) - just don't NC spam, it's not really necessary
21:58 Aerous: ok ill fix the nc after spec
21:59 Aerous: are the jumps at the start
21:59 Aerous: okay ?
21:59 Aerous: i'm kinda scared of them
21:59 Pho: it might get confusing since combo numbers of 00:55:742 (1,2,3,4) - are not clearly readable
22:00 Pho: it shouldn't be too much of an issue... IMO
22:00 Pho: and what jumps you mean, the sliders?
22:01 Aerous: these 00:08:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
22:01 Aerous: oh for the nc
22:01 Aerous: 00:55:742 -
22:01 Pho: fits... even if im not fond of it lol
22:01 Aerous: i nc on the big white ticks
22:01 Aerous:

i might change it if it gets in the way of reading them
22:02 Pho: the jumps are clearly readable dw
22:02 Aerous: kk
22:03 Pho: it's just a new mapping illness to slap jumps everywhere possible. 00:59:363 - would start mapping here again already, the drums are really strong
22:03 Pho: http://puu.sh/inCha/8c48d63ce6.jpg
22:03 Aerous: oh i deleted those
22:03 Aerous: i had them before
22:04 Aerous: i just wanted the players to have a rest or something
22:04 Aerous: after the stream
22:04 Pho: no need to. it's compressed streams, which are pretty comfortable to play already
22:04 Pho: the gap is just annoying xD and start mapping from the red tick again is more consistent since you followed drums earlier already with 00:57:811 (1,2,3,1) -
22:05 Pho: 01:02:638 (1,3) - fcking overlap
22:05 Pho: 01:06:604 (1) - ugly piece of <3
22:05 Aerous:

22:05 Aerous: ok rip
22:05 Aerous: ill cahnge that one
22:06 Pho: 01:19:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - i have no idea what you did with the drum HS here really lol
22:06 Aerous: rip
22:06 Pho: 00:33:501 (1) - ^this one too btw
22:06 Aerous: i already changed it a bit from before ;w;
22:07 Aerous: shoulkd i make overlap
22:07 Aerous: http://puu.sh/inCoQ/e8658d6903.jpg
22:07 Aerous: 00:59:880 (1) -
22:07 Aerous: i mean extended slider
22:07 Pho: for that stream session above: only claps at 01:19:534 (5) - and 01:20:052 (3) - sliderstart
22:08 Pho: that's more dependent on you, i think both are okay. without is better
22:09 Pho: for me
22:09 Pho: that is
22:10 Aerous: brb restarting osu
22:11 Aerous: wanna post for kd
22:11 Aerous:

DDDDDD
22:12 Aerous: or just something for natsu to look at
22:12 Pho: only one thing left: 00:00:570 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - do something about this, this looks awfully randomly set lol
22:13 Aerous: oh i just copied what Guy told me to do
22:13 Aerous: p/4238566
22:14 Pho: oh xD
22:14 Pho: it still looks random lol
22:14 Aerous: rip
22:15 Pho: i mean you didn't even map that with DS, so idk what that pattern should be for
22:15 Aerous: well i had it with DS before
22:17 Pho: it's just that the pattern makes no musical sense. like 00:00:570 (1,2,3,4) - you switch the moving direction steadily with the music being pretty linear and soft, i mean wt
22:19 Pho: easiest thing you can do for structure here is symmetry, but i don't think you like that stuff too much lol
22:19 Aerous: should i change it
22:20 Pho: yep. but might ask natsu for it, my style just doesn't complement yours too well to give a good alternative
22:21 Aerous: k ill just wait what natsu gonna do

@Natsu: I have quality concerns about Aerous maps (as always ahue), some patterns can still be polished with the main concern still being the pattern at the beginning: 00:00:570 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - . Guy mentioned the random placement already, but even with his fix it still looks randomly placed to me. Hope you can give a good alternative for him.

Still good luck Aerous! /o/

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Natsu 2015-06-14T04:12:29+00:00

Aerous wrote:
I sent around 5 to 8 messages to Habi telling her she should apply the mods from the beginning , but because she didn't reply to me I assume that she won't do apply these mods. I have fixed some or most of the blankets , distances and hitsound (plus green lines to change hitsound volumes , copied from easy diff. )in the Normal diff. Ontop of that , I added a spinner at the end so it can end on the same time as the other diffs. Hope Natsu can come back and check now.

no I can't recheck if Habic don't reply to mods, if he ignore you, you can just replace his diff and map one or ask for it to another person.

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-14T05:24:40+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Aerous wrote:
I sent around 5 to 8 messages to Habi telling her she should apply the mods from the beginning , but because she didn't reply to me I assume that she won't do apply these mods. I have fixed some or most of the blankets , distances and hitsound (plus green lines to change hitsound volumes , copied from easy diff. )in the Normal diff. Ontop of that , I added a spinner at the end so it can end on the same time as the other diffs. Hope Natsu can come back and check now.
no I can't recheck if Habic don't reply to mods, if he ignore you, you can just replace his diff and map one or ask for it to another person.

Ok I added my normal diff , now gonna look for some mods before getting Natsu again

Meg

1,622 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2015-06-14T06:52:21+00:00

Habi is unko

only Normal diff

Normal

00:01:259 (2,4,2) - delete whistle on head?
00:44:880 (4,5) - hard to read rhythm try here ↓
SPOILER
00:50:914 - clap→whistle?
01:08:156 (1) - add finish on head
01:21:259 (4) - object isn't snapped!
01:26:432 (1,2,3) - i recommend to delete this notes. there are no sounds here and this is hard as Normal diff. 01:26:087 - start spin

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-14T07:39:15+00:00

iMage-- wrote:
Habi is unko

only Normal diff

Normal
00:01:259 (2,4,2) - delete whistle on head? these should be okay
00:44:880 (4,5) - hard to read rhythm try here ↓ okay
SPOILER
00:50:914 - clap→whistle? i like the clap here though ;w;
01:08:156 (1) - add finish on head added
01:21:259 (4) - object isn't snapped! whoops thanks !
01:26:432 (1,2,3) - i recommend to delete this notes. there are no sounds here and this is hard as Normal diff. 01:26:087 - start spin okay

Thanks for the mod !

Zerss

730 posts

Joined December 2013

Zerss 2015-06-14T21:19:55+00:00

Hey~ from #modreqs
As asked on IRC, only Normal.
Newbie modding

General

- If there's no storyboard, disable "Widescreen support"

Normal

- 00:06:776 (1) - Disable NC
- 00:12:811 (1,2) - This blanket could look better
- 00:13:673 (2,3) - ^
- 00:17:121 (3,4) - ^ You can use the approach circle to help you
- 00:21:604 (2,3) - ^
- 00:28:673 (1,2) - ^
- 00:36:259 (4,5) - ^ t/208596 Look at the "blanket slider" section, it'll help you ^^
- 00:44:880 (4,5) - ^
- 00:47:983 (5,1) - ^
- 01:10:570 (6,1) - ^
- 00:28:673 (1,2) - Delete the NC at 1 and put it at the 2
- 01:07:121 (1) - Delete the NC
- 01:19:190 (1) - A sliderwave made with the ϟimpliest way must be created like that

Nice map ! I really like it !

Bye~

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-14T21:26:18+00:00

Z e r s s wrote:
Hey~ from #modreqs
As asked on IRC, only Normal.
Newbie modding

General

- If there's no storyboard, disable "Widescreen support" nice catch almost forgot lol

Normal

- 00:06:776 (1) - Disable NC NC on purpose
- 00:12:811 (1,2) - This blanket could look better looks fine already http://puu.sh/ioYpK/d3bba51542.jpg
- 00:13:673 (2,3) - ^ ^
- 00:17:121 (3,4) - ^ You can use the approach circle to help you i already am http://puu.sh/ioYsS/55f0003c9d.jpg its fine
- 00:21:604 (2,3) - ^ ok fixed even though it was off a bit
- 00:28:673 (1,2) - ^ this one is actually fine , even though its off just like 1 pixel off
- 00:36:259 (4,5) - ^ t/208596 Look at the "blanket slider" section, it'll help you ^^
i already know about it , but its not that bad of a blanket already http://puu.sh/ioYzt/85cac6854e.jpg
- 00:44:880 (4,5) - ^ ^ same here its fine already lol http://puu.sh/ioYAA/80e3e63994.jpg
- 00:47:983 (5,1) - ^ okay fixed
- 01:10:570 (6,1) - ^ its off like 2 pixels , its fine
- 00:28:673 (1,2) - Delete the NC at 1 and put it at the 2 NC fine here
- 01:07:121 (1) - Delete the NC why ?
- 01:19:190 (1) - A sliderwave made with the ϟimpliest way must be created like that its fine already i already like my curves

Nice map ! I really like it !
Bye~

ty !

Mint

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Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-06-14T21:42:54+00:00

#modreqs

Might as well change your map description after the removal of Habi's diff.

[Normal]
Disable widescreen support?
00:04:707 (3) - For some reason I find that this slider ends at a rather weak point. Ending it on the large white tick after this, or putting a note at 00:06:087 - seems more logical to me...
00:18:328 (1) - Adjusting the slider here would improve flow here by a lot. http://puu.sh/ioZeS/18a342d9e0.jpg
00:29:880 (3) - Hmm.. dunno why you place objects like this lol, it doesn't flow that well imo :/ moving it a bit down looks better to me.
00:43:328 (1,2,3) - Flow here could be improved as well.... also would be then similar flow like 01:05:397 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/ioZCB/9f46e48835.jpg
01:04:535 (4,5) - Would reverse rhythm here, since the string sound on the red tick should get the slider imo. http://puu.sh/ioZKR/a7fcb3f158.jpg

well most of these are subjective.. anyways good luck!

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-14T21:49:35+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
#modreqs

Might as well change your map description after the removal of Habi's diff. ok thanks for reminding me !

[Normal]
Disable widescreen support? already did with previous mod !
00:04:707 (3) - For some reason I find that this slider ends at a rather weak point. Ending it on the large white tick after this, or putting a note at 00:06:087 - seems more logical to me... mhm good suggestion , but I'll change if another mod mentions this
00:18:328 (1) - Adjusting the slider here would improve flow here by a lot. http://puu.sh/ioZeS/18a342d9e0.jpg changed here
00:29:880 (3) - Hmm.. dunno why you place objects like this lol, it doesn't flow that well imo :/ moving it a bit down looks better to me. well theres a bit of a break here , should be okay ?
00:43:328 (1,2,3) - Flow here could be improved as well.... also would be then similar flow like 01:05:397 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/ioZCB/9f46e48835.jpg
okay fixed here
01:04:535 (4,5) - Would reverse rhythm here, since the string sound on the red tick should get the slider imo. http://puu.sh/ioZKR/a7fcb3f158.jpg sure !

well most of these are subjective.. anyways good luck!

ty

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captin1

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captin1 2015-06-16T07:08:46+00:00

[Normal]

00:04:707 (3) - personally i'd delete the first red point of this and just adjust the curve to something more like this, to get a nicer looking blanket here
SPOILER
00:08:501 (3,4,5) - would recommend trying to avoid having spacing like this, where 5 is closer to 3 than it is to 4. keeping everything even will make it look a lot nicer
00:12:811 (1) - try curving this a bit more to get a more even blanket of 2. do the same with 00:14:018 (3) - if you do this
00:15:052 (5,1) - not a fan of this visual transition, would be nice if it didn't cut the curve short
00:21:087 (1) - this is curved nicely to blanket while 00:19:190 (3) - and 00:21:949 (3) - aren't, try to keep a better sense of consistency for this
00:36:259 (4) - especially this one, wouldn't call it a nice blanket by lax standards
00:55:397 (2,3,4) - not a fan of the flow here, seems just awkwardly back and forth
00:59:363 (4) - makes me a bit nervous that this is looks like it's 1.0x distance away from the previous note
01:06:432 (3) - try switching this for 2 circles instead, to give the finish better impact
01:19:190 (1) - ehhh this wave could look a lot better, try moving the points closer to the center so it's more naturally and evenly curved
01:25:742 (3) - same as before
could be maybe a little harder in some places to fill spread better, like kiai

[SNAFU]

00:09:880 (7,1) - feel this is a really awkward transition from the notes before. another thing to note is that this jump doesn't feel any different than the jump spam you have just before this. rather than just making this an obnoxious screenjump, i'd recommend toning down the spacing before, so that this feels more impactful and in tune with the song. basically applies for the next circle pattern as well
00:08:673 (6,1) - while we're at it, i'll mention that this transition feels kinda awkward after the nice circular motion you have just before
00:10:914 (3,4,5,1) - try something resembling this here, to continue the idea of circular motion before the circle jump sections
SPOILER
00:13:673 (3,4,5,6,1) - an idea here could be to actually decrease the spacing of these jumps gradually, to fit the melody line lowering in pitch
00:19:363 (4,1) - perhaps instead of doing this double blanket like you have now, which i think looks a bit awkward, you could rotate 4 so that it's the only one blanketing
SPOILER
00:20:742 (4,1) - stacking these would better create the musical effect imo
00:21:604 (2,3) - not a fan of how these curve drastically away from each other
00:22:294 (4,1) - this transition is awkward similar to how i mentioned in the first point, the slider doesn't lead well from the note before
00:22:983 (2,3,4,5) - and this is just kinda a mess flow wise, starts with stop motion with 2 being stacked under the slider, and then a very wide linear angle going upwards and a jump down into a slider that doesn't fit the motion at all.

tbh already a bit tired, this is nowhere near how well you mapped rally go round. take for example the last point, and then compare it to 00:22:214 (3,4,5,6,1) - in that map. you'll see it's more or less the same pattern, but applied in a much better way, avoiding the stop motion at the start and letting the slider follow the motion from the jump at the end. by this point i know you can do better than this, so try to be as critical of yourself as i'm being

edit: some changes to my diff

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 1430
PreviewTime: 59880
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.499999

[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Aerous
Version:captin's Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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BeatmapSetID:300312

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Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-16T23:06:42+00:00

captin1 wrote:

[Normal]

00:04:707 (3) - personally i'd delete the first red point of this and just adjust the curve to something more like this, to get a nicer looking blanket here
SPOILER
k deleted
00:08:501 (3,4,5) - would recommend trying to avoid having spacing like this, where 5 is closer to 3 than it is to 4. keeping everything even will make it look a lot nicer changed the spacing here
00:12:811 (1) - try curving this a bit more to get a more even blanket of 2. do the same with 00:14:018 (3) - if you do this ok
00:15:052 (5,1) - not a fan of this visual transition, would be nice if it didn't cut the curve short fixed here
00:21:087 (1) - this is curved nicely to blanket while 00:19:190 (3) - and 00:21:949 (3) - aren't, try to keep a better sense of consistency for this hopefully fixed now
00:36:259 (4) - especially this one, wouldn't call it a nice blanket by lax standards yea lol fixed
00:55:397 (2,3,4) - not a fan of the flow here, seems just awkwardly back and forth changed this part a little bit (placements)
00:59:363 (4) - makes me a bit nervous that this is looks like it's 1.0x distance away from the previous note hope its fine now with the palcement changes
01:06:432 (3) - try switching this for 2 circles instead, to give the finish better impact changed to two circles.
01:19:190 (1) - ehhh this wave could look a lot better, try moving the points closer to the center so it's more naturally and evenly curved changed the points
01:25:742 (3) - same as before yup
could be maybe a little harder in some places to fill spread better, like kiai

[SNAFU]

00:09:880 (7,1) - feel this is a really awkward transition from the notes before. another thing to note is that this jump doesn't feel any different than the jump spam you have just before this. rather than just making this an obnoxious screenjump, i'd recommend toning down the spacing before, so that this feels more impactful and in tune with the song. basically applies for the next circle pattern as well
changed the flow here / changed spacing
00:08:673 (6,1) - while we're at it, i'll mention that this transition feels kinda awkward after the nice circular motion you have just before
changed here too (placements)
00:10:914 (3,4,5,1) - try something resembling this here, to continue the idea of circular motion before the circle jump sections
SPOILER
kk
00:13:673 (3,4,5,6,1) - an idea here could be to actually decrease the spacing of these jumps gradually, to fit the melody line lowering in pitch nice suggestion !
00:19:363 (4,1) - perhaps instead of doing this double blanket like you have now, which i think looks a bit awkward, you could rotate 4 so that it's the only one blanketing
SPOILER
fixed like what you have
00:20:742 (4,1) - stacking these would better create the musical effect imo stacked
00:21:604 (2,3) - not a fan of how these curve drastically away from each other yea whoops , changed here
00:22:294 (4,1) - this transition is awkward similar to how i mentioned in the first point, the slider doesn't lead well from the note before
reduced spacing a bit
00:22:983 (2,3,4,5) - and this is just kinda a mess flow wise, starts with stop motion with 2 being stacked under the slider, and then a very wide linear angle going upwards and a jump down into a slider that doesn't fit the motion at all.
changed to how i mapped rally
tbh already a bit tired, this is nowhere near how well you mapped rally go round. take for example the last point, and then compare it to 00:22:214 (3,4,5,6,1) - in that map. you'll see it's more or less the same pattern, but applied in a much better way, avoiding the stop motion at the start and letting the slider follow the motion from the jump at the end. by this point i know you can do better than this, so try to be as critical of yourself as i'm being

thanks for the mod captin ! yea when I was mapping Rally , it was right after I finished Haru Modoki and wanted to try something new. I'm kind of proud of what I have in Rally now compared to what I have in Haru Modoki. Hopefully as time passes , my mapping skills would improve ! Really love your feedbacks captin

!

edit: some changes to my diff

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Momochikun

1,954 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2015-06-17T13:12:29+00:00

found some spare time on my concern, here's some quick check on the diffs as responds to your request before..

[Normal]
00:10:052 (1) - add clap just like you did 00:12:811 (1) - ? i think that sounds better along with the drum
00:29:363 (2,3) - this flow rather odd considering the angle of the slider and the opposite placement of the note, i'd make them straight or smth
00:39:018 (4,5) - looks bad at my stand, at least make the part after red node became symmetrical so they make such a contact

SPOILER

00:44:880 (4) - missing clap both start and end
00:45:742 (5) - finish feels overused and doesn't really match the tempo you're following, delete it
00:53:156 (4) - i'd rather replace it with a note on 00:53:328 - so the whole 00:51:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - would following the vocal smoothly, thats kinda weird for me to have this one follow the drum when you're ignoring the one at 00:52:466 - , so.. yeah
01:07:121 (1) - delete nc to keep your 2/1 nc's pattern
01:08:156 (1) - finish sounds good

there're some nitpicks that i dont include here since seems it will make pretty long post, so i'll just assume that a stylish-stuffs.
good luck :3

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-17T21:01:09+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
found some spare time on my concern, here's some quick check on the diffs as responds to your request before..

[Normal]
00:10:052 (1) - add clap just like you did 00:12:811 (1) - ? i think that sounds better along with the drum
00:29:363 (2,3) - this flow rather odd considering the angle of the slider and the opposite placement of the note, i'd make them straight or smth
00:39:018 (4,5) - looks bad at my stand, at least make the part after red node became symmetrical so they make such a contact
SPOILER
00:44:880 (4) - missing clap both start and end
00:45:742 (5) - finish feels overused and doesn't really match the tempo you're following, delete it
00:53:156 (4) - i'd rather replace it with a note on 00:53:328 - so the whole 00:51:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - would following the vocal smoothly, thats kinda weird for me to have this one follow the drum when you're ignoring the one at 00:52:466 - , so.. yeah
01:07:121 (1) - delete nc to keep your 2/1 nc's pattern
01:08:156 (1) - finish sounds good

there're some nitpicks that i dont include here since seems it will make pretty long post, so i'll just assume that a stylish-stuffs.
good luck :3

omg thanks a lot mochi

! Fixed everything you mentioned here

pkk

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pkk 2015-06-19T02:56:22+00:00

soon (TM)

Iceskulls

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Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-07-02T13:26:23+00:00

ok checking snafu and normal

[snafu]

00:06:776 (1) - would be cool to start to spacing note from stack here instead the song just fit it somehow
SPOILER
00:07:294 (1) - you can try make it looks like this so it might make flow here 00:06:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - nice imo
SPOILER
00:09:190 (3,4) - lower spacing would be nice , high spacing just play a bit weird here somehow the song isn't really that intense tho
00:11:949 (3,4) - same ^
00:30:570 (4,5) - ^ make sure spacing is a bit consistent with the song
00:31:604 (4,5) - if you swap place of these two notes , it might make flow here 00:31:259 (3,4,5,6,1) - better imo
SPOILER
00:36:432 - rhythm would sound better if you map this kick , try this rhythm ?
SPOILER
00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:811 (1,2,3) - no. 1/4 slider spam won't fit the music here tbh the snare in music here sound like random placed which make the 1/4 slider play a bit awkward (1/4 slider need like consistent instrument pattern to make it play good ) , using a stream here instead is highly recommend
00:57:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is one of the place that 1/4 slider fit , just saying
00:59:535 (1,1) - overlaphere looks not that good imo , I would use this pattern instead
SPOILER
01:08:501 (3,4) - similiar to what I said here 00:09:190 (3,4) - , you can move (4) to around x400 y256
01:19:707 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:811 (1,2,3) -
01:21:173 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a sudden increase in spacing like this is make the stream here play a bit weird imo , you can try increase overall spacing here 01:20:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or decrease overall spacing here 01:21:259 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - that would make the stream here kinda a bit more reasonable , spacing increase is ok for this part but make sure to organize it good , you can take a look at stream here in my diff for reference lol

I think overall the design can be improved a bit, this is really a bit different from what you did in rally go round imo

[normal]

00:12:294 (5,1) - mfw inconsistent spacing
00:18:845 (2) - nazi move to x216 y100 for better flow here 00:18:328 (1,2) -
00:35:914 (3) - nazi move to x196 y292 for better flow 00:35:397 (2,3) - ( fix next spacing too if you make change here )
01:06:604 (4,5) - rhythm would play better if you make this slider instead imo
SPOILER
01:13:673 (1,2) - this rhythm sound better
SPOILER

xd good luck

edited: also I fixed stream here 01:20:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - in my diff a bit

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Aerous

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-07-05T21:33:36+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:

ok checking snafu and normal

[snafu]

00:06:776 (1) - would be cool to start to spacing note from stack here instead the song just fit it somehow
SPOILER
00:07:294 (1) - you can try make it looks like this so it might make flow here 00:06:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - nice imo
SPOILER
00:09:190 (3,4) - lower spacing would be nice , high spacing just play a bit weird here somehow the song isn't really that intense tho
00:11:949 (3,4) - same ^
00:30:570 (4,5) - ^ make sure spacing is a bit consistent with the song
00:31:604 (4,5) - if you swap place of these two notes , it might make flow here 00:31:259 (3,4,5,6,1) - better imo
SPOILER
00:36:432 - rhythm would sound better if you map this kick , try this rhythm ?
SPOILER
00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:811 (1,2,3) - no. 1/4 slider spam won't fit the music here tbh the snare in music here sound like random placed which make the 1/4 slider play a bit awkward (1/4 slider need like consistent instrument pattern to make it play good ) , using a stream here instead is highly recommend
00:57:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is one of the place that 1/4 slider fit , just saying
00:59:535 (1,1) - overlaphere looks not that good imo , I would use this pattern instead
SPOILER
01:08:501 (3,4) - similiar to what I said here 00:09:190 (3,4) - , you can move (4) to around x400 y256
01:19:707 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:811 (1,2,3) -
01:21:173 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a sudden increase in spacing like this is make the stream here play a bit weird imo , you can try increase overall spacing here 01:20:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or decrease overall spacing here 01:21:259 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - that would make the stream here kinda a bit more reasonable , spacing increase is ok for this part but make sure to organize it good , you can take a look at stream here in my diff for reference lol

I think overall the design can be improved a bit, this is really a bit different from what you did in rally go round imo

[normal]

00:12:294 (5,1) - mfw inconsistent spacing
00:18:845 (2) - nazi move to x216 y100 for better flow here 00:18:328 (1,2) -
00:35:914 (3) - nazi move to x196 y292 for better flow 00:35:397 (2,3) - ( fix next spacing too if you make change here )
01:06:604 (4,5) - rhythm would play better if you make this slider instead imo
SPOILER
01:13:673 (1,2) - this rhythm sound better
SPOILER

xd good luck

edited: also I fixed stream here 01:20:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - in my diff a bit

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447,79,71949,2,0,P|467:139|467:175,1,92.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,72,72294,5,8,0:0:0:0:
444,176,72466,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,148,72638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,248,72811,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,256,72983,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,320,73156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,264,73328,2,0,L|76:260,1,92.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,71,73673,6,0,L|196:164,1,92.5,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,84,74018,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,28,74190,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,192,74363,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,56,74535,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,248,74707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,88,74880,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,200,75052,6,0,L|36:213,1,92.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,342,75397,2,0,L|232:327,1,92.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,75742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,144,75914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,140,76087,2,0,P|348:188|332:248,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,88,76432,6,0,P|356:56|432:120,1,185,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,248,76949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,184,77121,2,0,L|144:180,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,76,77466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,76,77638,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,196,77811,6,0,L|52:304,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,208,78156,2,0,L|210:116,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,232,78501,2,0,L|346:323,1,92.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,136,78845,2,0,L|312:124,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,208,79190,5,4,0:0:0:0:
228,76,79363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,76,79449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,76,79535,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,192,79707,2,0,P|124:240|176:288,1,92.5,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,168,80052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,168,80138,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,168,80225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,312,80397,6,0,P|420:236|432:116,1,185,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,116,80828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,94,80914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
402,78,81001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
379,72,81087,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,83,81173,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,91,81259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
283,89,81345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,78,81432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
222,62,81518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,92,81604,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,131,81690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,172,81776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,211,81863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,241,81949,6,0,P|268:252|328:232,1,92.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,116,82294,2,0,L|440:216,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,320,82638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,183,82811,2,0,L|295:91,1,92.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,272,83156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,332,83328,6,0,L|56:320,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,164,83673,2,0,L|108:152,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,84018,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,56,84190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,208,84363,2,0,L|180:316,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,336,84707,6,0,B|372:296|372:296|360:276|360:276|392:224|368:148,1,185,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,44,85225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,176,85397,1,8,0:3:0:0:
384,72,85570,2,0,P|420:88|460:140,1,92.5,8|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,264,85914,6,0,B|236:224|236:312|136:260,1,185,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86345,12,0,88845,0:0:0:0:

Gonna take a look next week , I have summer school atm

. I'll edit this page when I reply to this mod.

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-12-26T22:15:05+00:00

Hello? Remapped my highest diff.

Last edited by Aerous 2015-12-26T22:17:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

captin1

osu! Alumni

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captin1 2015-12-26T22:17:42+00:00

hello?!?

dude nic

pkk

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Joined November 2013

pkk 2015-12-27T00:21:45+00:00

IRC with my son

18:09 Aerous: can u mod one tv size diff 4 me xd
18:09 pkuai: no
18:09 Aerous: plz
18:09 pkuai: ok
18:10 *Aerous is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/674128 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Extra]]
18:10 Aerous: xd
18:10 pkuai: om
18:10 pkuai: f
18:10 pkuai: i swear u ranked this 2 years ago
18:10 Aerous: nah its in my graveyard xdd
18:10 pkuai: 00:03:673 (2,2) - xd
18:11 Aerous: xd
18:11 Aerous: wait updating
18:11 Aerous: ok uipdated
18:13 pkuai: 00:03:673 (2,2) - xd
18:13 pkuai: 00:09:018 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - whats this nc
18:13 Aerous: idk
18:14 Aerous: i love colors
18:14 pkuai: me too
18:14 pkuai: 00:15:225 (1,1) - might be easier to read if you remove NC so people dont think the circle is actually a slider
18:14 Aerous: ok
18:15 pkuai: 00:21:087 (1) - start and end aren't exactly parallel idk if u want to make them parallel or not
18:15 Aerous: this is why i need art class
18:15 Aerous: ok i tried
18:15 pkuai: 00:26:604 (1,2,3) - idk this just plays relaly awkwardly
18:15 pkuai: i think too much movement at 00:26:949 (2,3) -
18:16 pkuai: maybe u can stack 00:26:949 (2,4) -
18:16 pkuai: or 00:26:949 (2,3) -
18:16 Aerous: k
18:16 Aerous: 2,4 stack
18:16 Aerous: http://puu.sh/m9BxQ/c3c4037da6.jpg
18:18 pkuai: buce
18:18 pkuai: 00:28:673 (3,4,5) -
18:18 pkuai: rhythm is really awkward cuz slidertail on strong beat and you skipped the stronger blue tick
18:19 pkuai: maybe u can remove circle 4 and slider 3 then triplet on 00:28:673 -
18:21 Aerous: ok
18:21 pkuai: 00:29:880 (2,3) - kinda far
18:21 pkuai: feels kinda weird to play, maybe you can reposition 00:30:225 (3,4) -
18:22 pkuai: or you can try moving 00:29:880 (2) - so the tail stacks with 00:30:397 (4) -
18:22 Aerous: nerfed a bit
18:22 Aerous: ?!?!? http://puu.sh/m9BWU/eb851107de.jpg
18:23 pkuai: [https://i.gyazo.com/3341791436a5f88d8f1e0f6559b07fc0.jpg !!!]
18:23 pkuai: you can leave everything as it is but only move 2
18:24 pkuai: you can try something else too if this is too edgy xd
18:24 Aerous: yolo i copied urs
18:24 pkuai: same
18:24 Aerous: xd ? 00:37:121 (5,6,7) -
18:24 pkuai: 00:37:294 (6) - x 293 y 64
18:25 pkuai: 00:37:466 (7) - x 441 y 125
18:25 pkuai: I think if you do that it'll flow better into slider 1
18:25 pkuai: because your 7 is currently kind of low so that when you go into 1 its some fucked up shit
18:25 Aerous: o
18:25 Aerous: nice flow
18:25 *pkuai sprays holy water everywhere
18:25 pkuai: i got u bro
18:26 Aerous: ayylmao
18:26 pkuai: 00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2) -
18:27 pkuai: all these clap hitsounds
18:27 pkuai: r gonna give me a heart attack
18:27 pkuai: when i play this
18:27 Aerous: XDD
18:27 Aerous: i just copied hitsounds
18:27 Aerous: ill double check those
18:27 pkuai: 00:57:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try ctrl g h
18:27 pkuai: then move whole thing to x 204 y 143
18:28 pkuai: 00:59:880 (1) - move the first red point to x 342 y 144
18:29 pkuai: brb dinner dad is gonna kill me brb
18:29 Aerous: kk
19:06 pkuai: im
19:06 pkuai: black
19:07 Aerous: wtf ur black
19:07 Aerous: wait updating
19:07 *Aerous is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/674128 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Extra]]
19:07 Aerous: ok done
19:08 pkuai: k
19:08 pkuai: 01:02:552 - a triplet would be nice here, 1 sec
19:09 pkuai: https://i.gyazo.com/830871fea10c87c4ed1 ... a5185d.jpg
19:09 pkuai: ctrl g j on 4
19:09 pkuai: move 5 to there then add note on blue tick before slider 1 for triplet xd d d xd
19:11 Aerous: ok kinda did it
19:11 Aerous: http://puu.sh/m9EL8/9b16da0fb9.jpg ?!??!
19:11 pkuai: wtf
19:11 pkuai: lower the spacing
19:12 pkuai: move like t he whole thing 671 closer
19:12 Aerous: kk
19:12 pkuai: 01:03:242 (3) - theres no sound here and since you have a triplet before this, it might play better as 1/2
19:13 Aerous: wait
19:13 Aerous: dont you hear it?
19:13 Aerous: delete 2-3
19:13 Aerous: i swear im high or omse shit
19:13 pkuai: it comes earlier
19:13 pkuai: and it's 1/3
19:13 pkuai: xd
19:13 Aerous: k
19:13 Aerous: delteed
19:14 Aerous: o xd
19:14 pkuai: [https://i.gyazo.com/2da306116b538b303e643888a0bc5dd5.png u can try this placement for 1/2 idk im high]
19:14 Aerous: o
19:14 Aerous: we almost had the same thing in mind
19:14 Aerous: xd
19:14 pkuai: lo
19:14 Aerous: http://puu.sh/m9EYD/a2774e6156.jpg
19:16 pkuai: nice 1 !1
19:17 pkuai: nice
19:17 pkuai: 01:27:121 (1) -
19:17 pkuai: might want to add some timing points to lower volume during the slider
19:17 pkuai: since sliderticks can be kinda loud
19:17 pkuai: anyways thats it
19:17 pkuai: buxw
19:18 Aerous: kk boss
19:20 Aerous: tyy
19:20 Aerous: post 4 kd
19:21 pkuai: ok xd

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-12-27T00:35:56+00:00

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♠ 00:08:845 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - nc on white ticks instead of reds? makes more sense musically imo. Compare with 00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -
♠ 00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These felt kinda exaggerated for me, like especially 00:12:294 (1,2) - because you compare that with the spacing on 00:12:638 (1,1) - . You kinda expect a larger jump since the pitch peaks at 00:12:811 -
♠ 00:17:638 (3,4) - No triple or kickslider?
♠ 00:26:949 (2,3,4,1) - Spacing is a bit confusing, especially 4>1
♠ 00:55:225 (1,2) - I would make this a kick-slider instead. It makes more sense to begin the streams again on 00:55:397 - vocals + drum.
♠ 01:04:018 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - NC thing.
♠ 01:13:673 (1) - Okay using a 1/1 slider right after those 1/2 jumps is kinda weird for me lol. I would use a 1/2 slider and a circle instead so there isn't such a drastic rhythm change.
♠ 01:24:880 (2) - Sounds kinda overmapped. I'd do a 1/2 slider here instead
♠ 01:25:914 (4,1) - If you're going for a stack, its quite off.
♠ 01:27:121 (1) - Make the tail a bit more visible. Like, the border.

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Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-12-27T00:46:36+00:00

monstrata wrote:
extra
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♠ 00:08:845 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - nc on white ticks instead of reds? makes more sense musically imo. Compare with 00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -
♠ 00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These felt kinda exaggerated for me, like especially 00:12:294 (1,2) - because you compare that with the spacing on 00:12:638 (1,1) - . You kinda expect a larger jump since the pitch peaks at 00:12:811 -
♠ 00:17:638 (3,4) - No triple or kickslider?
♠ 00:26:949 (2,3,4,1) - Spacing is a bit confusing, especially 4>1
♠ 00:55:225 (1,2) - I would make this a kick-slider instead. It makes more sense to begin the streams again on 00:55:397 - vocals + drum.
♠ 01:04:018 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - NC thing.
♠ 01:13:673 (1) - Okay using a 1/1 slider right after those 1/2 jumps is kinda weird for me lol. I would use a 1/2 slider and a circle instead so there isn't such a drastic rhythm change.
♠ 01:24:880 (2) - Sounds kinda overmapped. I'd do a 1/2 slider here instead
♠ 01:25:914 (4,1) - If you're going for a stack, its quite off.
♠ 01:27:121 (1) - Make the tail a bit more visible. Like, the border.
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Fixed all except the jump into 1/1 slider , i thought it would nice to have a easier pattern after those jumps also i had 1/4 sliders later too. Thanks!

Yunomi

292 posts

Joined May 2014

Yunomi 2016-01-03T22:36:13+00:00

extra

00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - these screen jump scalings are a bit too extreme throughout the map, scale them just a bit smaller to fit with the difficulty of the rest of the map. this song doesn't call for those kinds of jumps imo.
01:12:292 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - another example here which 01:13:328 (1,2) - shrinks so much compared from 01:12:982 (1,2) - but they are similar intensity. can fix this by making 01:12:982 (1,2) - smaller.
00:55:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is kinda ugly xd
01:20:397 (4) - maybe this vocal should be emphasized with a slider, felt kinda weird going from that to a stream.

i had no problems with playing the map but the difficulty felt kind of forced. jumps are definitely playable but i think it could be better if it's scaled down a little. nice map aerous your new name fucking sucks

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-01-03T23:21:59+00:00

Adore wrote:
extra

00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - these screen jump scalings are a bit too extreme throughout the map, scale them just a bit smaller to fit with the difficulty of the rest of the map. this song doesn't call for those kinds of jumps imo. Maybe later , if its like a major issue that is unrankable.
01:12:292 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - another example here which 01:13:328 (1,2) - shrinks so much compared from 01:12:982 (1,2) - but they are similar intensity. can fix this by making 01:12:982 (1,2) - smaller. Might just leave the distance here and increase the angle
00:55:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is kinda ugly xd xd yea i'll try to fix it up if i have other ideas? for now no change
01:20:397 (4) - maybe this vocal should be emphasized with a slider, felt kinda weird going from that to a stream. after those streams and slider jumps i wanted the player to have like a short rest here so they can continue the long ass stream that comes up later

i had no problems with playing the map but the difficulty felt kind of forced. jumps are definitely playable but i think it could be better if it's scaled down a little. nice map aerous your new name fucking sucks

Thanks for the mod and yes I know my name is fucking good ! Jk , I'll change it back soon :3

edit: fk new page

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2016-01-09T20:39:45+00:00

d

SPOILER

14:20 Aerous: wanna leag
14:20 Kibbleru: ok
14:20 Aerous: ok
14:21 Kibbleru: how can i be non pleb at csgo
14:21 Kibbleru: i feed 0/19 ever gaem
14:21 Kibbleru:

14:21 Aerous: LOL
14:21 Aerous: LOLOLOL
14:21 Aerous: niceeeee
14:21 Aerous: just play more ?!?!??!?!
14:21 Aerous: whats ur mouse sens
14:21 Kibbleru: low
14:21 Aerous: do you run and spray
14:21 Kibbleru: no
14:21 Aerous: just watch those youtube vids
14:21 Kibbleru: i stand still and try to aim
14:21 Kibbleru: or behind a wall
14:22 Aerous: yea just practice aim in those workshop maps
14:22 Kibbleru: but ppl seem to always have better acc than me xd
14:22 Aerous: i guess u have to play more osu
14:22 Kibbleru: same
14:23 Aerous: or you know spend money into unboxing knife
14:23 Aerous: thats how you go pro
14:23 Kibbleru: lmao
14:24 Kibbleru: ik my friend does alot of this stuff
14:24 Kibbleru: skins n shit
14:24 Kibbleru: hes spent prob over 2k on csgo skins
14:24 Aerous: damn
14:24 Aerous: does he bet
14:24 Kibbleru: yea
14:24 Kibbleru: he earns alot of money
14:24 Kibbleru: apparently
14:24 Kibbleru: by betting
14:25 Kibbleru: iirc he also did some rock paper sissors betting lmfao
14:25 Kibbleru: scissors
14:25 Kibbleru: tfw u forgot how to spell scissors
14:25 Kibbleru: what rank r u csgo anyway
14:26 Aerous: dmg?!?!?
14:26 Aerous: i let my friend go play on it
14:26 Aerous: so idk
14:26 Aerous: anymore
14:26 Kibbleru: lol
14:26 Aerous: spent
14:26 Aerous: req
14:27 Aerous: on my smurf xd
14:27 Kibbleru: if ur silver 1 i no longer respect u as a memer
14:28 Kibbleru: the friend of mien is like
14:28 Kibbleru: master eagle or something
14:28 Kibbleru: idk
14:28 Kibbleru: the higher one
15:26 Aerous: mod one diff for me plz
15:26 Aerous: xd
15:26 Kibbleru: if its irc
15:27 Kibbleru: discord modding
15:27 Kibbleru: get on
15:27 Kibbleru: https://discord.gg/0WDeFZOi0THEf9Nd
15:27 Aerous: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/300312
15:27 Aerous: xtra plz
15:27 Aerous: so i can get apple to take a look
15:28 *Aerous is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/674128 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Xtra]]
15:32 Kibbleru: 00:55:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
15:32 Kibbleru: 01:11:259 (2,1,2) -
15:33 Kibbleru: 01:27:121 -
15:34 Kibbleru: 00:11:949 (1) -
15:34 Kibbleru: 00:15:397 (3,1) -
15:34 Kibbleru: 00:15:570 (2) -
15:35 Kibbleru: 00:15:397 - nc here
15:35 Kibbleru: not 00:15:570 -
15:35 Kibbleru: 00:17:638 (3,4,5) - trasfasofas
15:35 Kibbleru: f
15:35 Kibbleru: safas
15:35 Kibbleru: fas
15:35 Kibbleru: das
15:36 Kibbleru: 00:28:673 (1) -
15:36 Kibbleru: 00:58:328 (6) - nc
15:37 Kibbleru: 01:14:190 (2,3,4) - a nice description of the every day solo q teammates i get paired up with
15:37 Kibbleru: cancer

Pho

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Joined November 2013

Pho 2016-01-16T19:52:57+00:00

few stuff

Easy
00:04:707 (1) - Enlarge this to 00:06:776 - maybe, the gap right now feels awkward considering there is still some action inbetween. Or do it like in your Normal.
00:20:570 (3) - These stubs aren't that welcome in easy diffs anymore, so you better find another way to map this out:
00:37:121 (3,1) - 00:34:880 (1,2) - blanket xd
00:48:845 (1) - 00:59:880 (1) - make this look less cramped, it's easy diff after all
01:05:397 (1,2) - Can you make flow less broken please?
01:20:914 (3,1) - This cries for it

Please work a little bit on this easy diff, it doesn't look visually appealing as your normal and sometimes feels like you just slapped random straight sliders in here and set some angle between them (e.g. 00:09:535 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 00:18:328 (1,2,3) - 00:51:604 (1,2) - 01:06:604 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 01:15:052 (3,1,2,3) - 01:23:328 (3,4,1,2,3) - ).

Mochi
01:03:673 (4,1) - This might a bit hard to read even for advanced players, can you make a slight overlap?
01:08:156 (1,2) - Cuter blanket

captin
01:08:501 (3,4) - Feels pretty low-spaced in comparison to how intense this beat is in the tracl IMO.

celsiusghandislk
00:40:225 (4) - 1/4 rly? I think this was supposed to be 1/3
00:58:328 (1) - I think you can make a prettier shape here.
01:20:914 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - streamshape :c
01:25:397 (4) - Would set a NC here, this is somewhat difficult to read imo

X
00:03:673 (2,2) - whats this
00:17:638 (3) - 1/6. Actually, the whole 00:17:121 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern looks randomly spaced to me somehow, can you structure this a bit better?
00:49:535 (3) - clap
00:54:363 - Clapspam is really bad idea here unless your intention is to cause earbleeding to the players. Try to find a more simplified clap pattern, similar to captin's.
01:04:018 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - like how does this pattern complement the music, there are mostly strings in this part which aren't even intense at all and you put in gradually increasing jumps in it.
01:10:570 (1,2,1) - lol spacing. Nerf this would be adviseable.
01:24:707 (1) - clap on tail.

Xtra could be more polished ehh.... but k. Please look at the things I mentioned in Easy.

Aerous

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Aerous 2016-01-16T22:08:14+00:00

Fixed all , sorry for my easy thats from like half a year ago xdd

except xtra 00:03:673 (2) - cuz i love this slider

Momochikun

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Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2016-01-17T00:41:42+00:00

Fixed

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Harumodoki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1430
PreviewTime: 59880
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Haru Modoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Aerous
Version:Mochi's Hard
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:jmmxps yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku my teen romantic snafu 2 oregairu captin1 momochikun celsiuslk tv size
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SliderMultiplier:1.4
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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-01-17T13:31:00+00:00

Pho wrote:
few stuff

celsiusghandislk
00:40:225 (4) - 1/4 rly? I think this was supposed to be 1/3 ye I remember trying to figure out the snap here long time ago I'm sure the beat at the reverse arrow land on 1/4 eventhough the tail might sound like 1/3 but vocal is happen to be on 1/2 there too so it kinda ok here
00:58:328 (1) - I think you can make a prettier shape here. i tried z
01:20:914 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - streamshape :c lol stream shape maybe be kinda like d but it play kinda better when it shape better for some reason so maybe I will keep itI also fixed some curve here 01:21:259 (1,2) - a bit
01:25:397 (4) - Would set a NC here, this is somewhat difficult to read imo oop

thanks for the mods

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captin1

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captin1 2016-01-17T21:56:50+00:00

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Pho

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Pho 2016-01-17T23:09:41+00:00

~

Mint

1,611 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2016-01-18T22:16:49+00:00

As your request.

NO KD

General

* Clean!

Easy

* 00:50:914 - Would be cool if this sound was actually clickable. Split it up in a circle + 1/2 instead? Completely up to you tho.

Mochi's Hard

* Different spinner/slider ending time at the end of the map compared to the other difficulties. It's allowed since it's a GD, but consider making it consistent.

captin's Insane

* 01:19:535 (4) - Could use a clap too.

Celsius' Insane

* 00:37:294 (4,5) - This stack is a bit strange to me. The clap on (5) doesn't get any emphasis now.

Xtra

* 00:01:949 (3,4) - Swap these? Would play more natural to me.
* 00:37:121 (5,6,7) - It'd make more sense to me if (6,7) would be larger than (5,6) due to the clap.
* 00:57:639 (2,1) - Plays this part so many times, but this distance seems a bit too far for me, maybe I just suck at this game >_>
* 01:10:570 (1,2) - A pity that these are sliders. Since the sounds on the blue tick or almost equally as strong as the white & red ticks here, a small stream would fit much better imo. Even the other difficulties did that <_<`

Everything looks nice, feel free to call me back!

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-01-19T04:15:51+00:00

Fixed all

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,608 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2016-01-20T03:45:24+00:00

add the clap for me thx bby

Mint

1,611 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2016-01-20T21:17:36+00:00

Qualified!

Kalibe

2,068 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2016-01-20T22:18:36+00:00

Yay, grats ( ˘ω˘ )

Haruto

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Joined December 2013

Haruto 2016-01-20T22:24:15+00:00

grats!

Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined May 2012

Okoayu 2016-01-21T00:08:20+00:00

vocals in the end are off, but timable, refer to p/4793938 and how this set handles the last few vocals in general

i'd suggest something around 01:26:458 - for that timing point but getting more opinions would be appreciated, it's 1 am

i might add that the whistle spam in the beginning sounds excessive since there's no 2/1 piano going on

-430~-460 idk seems to work way better for the video like really.
i referred to like any youtube video of the opening and song in sync

Bonsai

1,212 posts

Joined July 2011

Bonsai 2016-01-21T00:40:06+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
vocals in the end are off, but timable, refer to p/4793938 and how this set handles the last few vocals in general

i'd suggest something around 01:26:458 - for that timing point but getting more opinions would be appreciated, it's 1 am

i might add that the whistle spam in the beginning sounds excessive since there's no 2/1 piano going on

-430~-460 idk seems to work way better for the video like really.
i referred to like any youtube video of the opening and song in sync

^ for the vocals at the end 01:26:468 would be right imo, for the video offset -370 seems right to me based on the downbeat at 00:03:328 being perfectly snyced with the screen change in the video
and the whistles at 00:01:259 and 00:02:638 seem too much for me too~

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,317 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2016-01-21T01:00:57+00:00

Hi there! confirmed issue, hence why I pull it out of qualification.

Please fix it up and don't hesitate asking something if you need further clarification.

ac8129464363

1,567 posts

Joined October 2013

ac8129464363 2016-01-21T01:16:38+00:00

hi i just want to complain about the claps at the beginning of xtra

ok bye

Aerous

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-01-21T02:27:47+00:00

~~Ok Ty I'll fix later~~

ok changed video offset and added timing

Pho

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Joined November 2013

Pho 2016-03-13T11:24:36+00:00

The issues pointed out still persist:

Timing from Easy, Normal and Celsius' diff still need to be adjusted.
Fix the unsnapped last spinner from Mochi's Hard

Call me back then.

Aerous

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-03-31T23:28:18+00:00

ok im back ill fix it

Pho

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Joined November 2013

Pho 2016-04-16T20:32:28+00:00

Let's try again

Aerous

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-05-01T08:33:12+00:00

xd

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

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BeatofIke 2016-07-13T01:47:31+00:00

3 month bubble detected o.o
If you need a BN, you can call me :3

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-07-17T01:40:34+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
3 month bubble detected o.o
If you need a BN, you can call me :3

omg my savior! \:D/

Arusamour

424 posts

Joined April 2014

Arusamour 2016-07-18T03:23:55+00:00

yay finally another round of qualification

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2016-07-31T01:08:18+00:00

The green timing section at 01:28:242 would fit the vocals better if it was moved at 01:28:192 (1) instead o3o (Easy-Normal-Extra only)
Not sure why this mapset got abandoned :/

Anyways, I'll move this mapset forward once you've made your reply.

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-08-18T16:09:44+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
The green timing section at 01:28:242 would fit the vocals better if it was moved at 01:28:192 (1) instead o3o (Easy-Normal-Extra only)
Not sure why this mapset got abandoned :/

Anyways, I'll move this mapset forward once you've made your reply.

okay fixed !

BeatofIke

Beatmap Nominator