yanaginagi - Haru Modoki · forum

Mint

Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-06-14T21:42:54+00:00

#modreqs

Might as well change your map description after the removal of Habi's diff.

[Normal]
Disable widescreen support?
00:04:707 (3) - For some reason I find that this slider ends at a rather weak point. Ending it on the large white tick after this, or putting a note at 00:06:087 - seems more logical to me...
00:18:328 (1) - Adjusting the slider here would improve flow here by a lot. http://puu.sh/ioZeS/18a342d9e0.jpg
00:29:880 (3) - Hmm.. dunno why you place objects like this lol, it doesn't flow that well imo :/ moving it a bit down looks better to me.
00:43:328 (1,2,3) - Flow here could be improved as well.... also would be then similar flow like 01:05:397 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/ioZCB/9f46e48835.jpg
01:04:535 (4,5) - Would reverse rhythm here, since the string sound on the red tick should get the slider imo. http://puu.sh/ioZKR/a7fcb3f158.jpg

well most of these are subjective.. anyways good luck!

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-14T21:49:35+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
#modreqs

Might as well change your map description after the removal of Habi's diff. ok thanks for reminding me !

[Normal]
Disable widescreen support? already did with previous mod !
00:04:707 (3) - For some reason I find that this slider ends at a rather weak point. Ending it on the large white tick after this, or putting a note at 00:06:087 - seems more logical to me... mhm good suggestion , but I'll change if another mod mentions this
00:18:328 (1) - Adjusting the slider here would improve flow here by a lot. http://puu.sh/ioZeS/18a342d9e0.jpg changed here
00:29:880 (3) - Hmm.. dunno why you place objects like this lol, it doesn't flow that well imo :/ moving it a bit down looks better to me. well theres a bit of a break here , should be okay ?
00:43:328 (1,2,3) - Flow here could be improved as well.... also would be then similar flow like 01:05:397 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/ioZCB/9f46e48835.jpg
okay fixed here
01:04:535 (4,5) - Would reverse rhythm here, since the string sound on the red tick should get the slider imo. http://puu.sh/ioZKR/a7fcb3f158.jpg sure !

well most of these are subjective.. anyways good luck!

ty

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captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2015-06-16T07:08:46+00:00

[Normal]

00:04:707 (3) - personally i'd delete the first red point of this and just adjust the curve to something more like this, to get a nicer looking blanket here
SPOILER
00:08:501 (3,4,5) - would recommend trying to avoid having spacing like this, where 5 is closer to 3 than it is to 4. keeping everything even will make it look a lot nicer
00:12:811 (1) - try curving this a bit more to get a more even blanket of 2. do the same with 00:14:018 (3) - if you do this
00:15:052 (5,1) - not a fan of this visual transition, would be nice if it didn't cut the curve short
00:21:087 (1) - this is curved nicely to blanket while 00:19:190 (3) - and 00:21:949 (3) - aren't, try to keep a better sense of consistency for this
00:36:259 (4) - especially this one, wouldn't call it a nice blanket by lax standards
00:55:397 (2,3,4) - not a fan of the flow here, seems just awkwardly back and forth
00:59:363 (4) - makes me a bit nervous that this is looks like it's 1.0x distance away from the previous note
01:06:432 (3) - try switching this for 2 circles instead, to give the finish better impact
01:19:190 (1) - ehhh this wave could look a lot better, try moving the points closer to the center so it's more naturally and evenly curved
01:25:742 (3) - same as before
could be maybe a little harder in some places to fill spread better, like kiai

[SNAFU]

00:09:880 (7,1) - feel this is a really awkward transition from the notes before. another thing to note is that this jump doesn't feel any different than the jump spam you have just before this. rather than just making this an obnoxious screenjump, i'd recommend toning down the spacing before, so that this feels more impactful and in tune with the song. basically applies for the next circle pattern as well
00:08:673 (6,1) - while we're at it, i'll mention that this transition feels kinda awkward after the nice circular motion you have just before
00:10:914 (3,4,5,1) - try something resembling this here, to continue the idea of circular motion before the circle jump sections
SPOILER
00:13:673 (3,4,5,6,1) - an idea here could be to actually decrease the spacing of these jumps gradually, to fit the melody line lowering in pitch
00:19:363 (4,1) - perhaps instead of doing this double blanket like you have now, which i think looks a bit awkward, you could rotate 4 so that it's the only one blanketing
SPOILER
00:20:742 (4,1) - stacking these would better create the musical effect imo
00:21:604 (2,3) - not a fan of how these curve drastically away from each other
00:22:294 (4,1) - this transition is awkward similar to how i mentioned in the first point, the slider doesn't lead well from the note before
00:22:983 (2,3,4,5) - and this is just kinda a mess flow wise, starts with stop motion with 2 being stacked under the slider, and then a very wide linear angle going upwards and a jump down into a slider that doesn't fit the motion at all.

tbh already a bit tired, this is nowhere near how well you mapped rally go round. take for example the last point, and then compare it to 00:22:214 (3,4,5,6,1) - in that map. you'll see it's more or less the same pattern, but applied in a much better way, avoiding the stop motion at the start and letting the slider follow the motion from the jump at the end. by this point i know you can do better than this, so try to be as critical of yourself as i'm being

edit: some changes to my diff

SPOILER

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Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-16T23:06:42+00:00

captin1 wrote:

[Normal]

00:04:707 (3) - personally i'd delete the first red point of this and just adjust the curve to something more like this, to get a nicer looking blanket here
SPOILER
k deleted
00:08:501 (3,4,5) - would recommend trying to avoid having spacing like this, where 5 is closer to 3 than it is to 4. keeping everything even will make it look a lot nicer changed the spacing here
00:12:811 (1) - try curving this a bit more to get a more even blanket of 2. do the same with 00:14:018 (3) - if you do this ok
00:15:052 (5,1) - not a fan of this visual transition, would be nice if it didn't cut the curve short fixed here
00:21:087 (1) - this is curved nicely to blanket while 00:19:190 (3) - and 00:21:949 (3) - aren't, try to keep a better sense of consistency for this hopefully fixed now
00:36:259 (4) - especially this one, wouldn't call it a nice blanket by lax standards yea lol fixed
00:55:397 (2,3,4) - not a fan of the flow here, seems just awkwardly back and forth changed this part a little bit (placements)
00:59:363 (4) - makes me a bit nervous that this is looks like it's 1.0x distance away from the previous note hope its fine now with the palcement changes
01:06:432 (3) - try switching this for 2 circles instead, to give the finish better impact changed to two circles.
01:19:190 (1) - ehhh this wave could look a lot better, try moving the points closer to the center so it's more naturally and evenly curved changed the points
01:25:742 (3) - same as before yup
could be maybe a little harder in some places to fill spread better, like kiai

[SNAFU]

00:09:880 (7,1) - feel this is a really awkward transition from the notes before. another thing to note is that this jump doesn't feel any different than the jump spam you have just before this. rather than just making this an obnoxious screenjump, i'd recommend toning down the spacing before, so that this feels more impactful and in tune with the song. basically applies for the next circle pattern as well
changed the flow here / changed spacing
00:08:673 (6,1) - while we're at it, i'll mention that this transition feels kinda awkward after the nice circular motion you have just before
changed here too (placements)
00:10:914 (3,4,5,1) - try something resembling this here, to continue the idea of circular motion before the circle jump sections
SPOILER
kk
00:13:673 (3,4,5,6,1) - an idea here could be to actually decrease the spacing of these jumps gradually, to fit the melody line lowering in pitch nice suggestion !
00:19:363 (4,1) - perhaps instead of doing this double blanket like you have now, which i think looks a bit awkward, you could rotate 4 so that it's the only one blanketing
SPOILER
fixed like what you have
00:20:742 (4,1) - stacking these would better create the musical effect imo stacked
00:21:604 (2,3) - not a fan of how these curve drastically away from each other yea whoops , changed here
00:22:294 (4,1) - this transition is awkward similar to how i mentioned in the first point, the slider doesn't lead well from the note before
reduced spacing a bit
00:22:983 (2,3,4,5) - and this is just kinda a mess flow wise, starts with stop motion with 2 being stacked under the slider, and then a very wide linear angle going upwards and a jump down into a slider that doesn't fit the motion at all.
changed to how i mapped rally
tbh already a bit tired, this is nowhere near how well you mapped rally go round. take for example the last point, and then compare it to 00:22:214 (3,4,5,6,1) - in that map. you'll see it's more or less the same pattern, but applied in a much better way, avoiding the stop motion at the start and letting the slider follow the motion from the jump at the end. by this point i know you can do better than this, so try to be as critical of yourself as i'm being

thanks for the mod captin ! yea when I was mapping Rally , it was right after I finished Haru Modoki and wanted to try something new. I'm kind of proud of what I have in Rally now compared to what I have in Haru Modoki. Hopefully as time passes , my mapping skills would improve ! Really love your feedbacks captin

!

edit: some changes to my diff

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Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2015-06-17T13:12:29+00:00

found some spare time on my concern, here's some quick check on the diffs as responds to your request before..

[Normal]
00:10:052 (1) - add clap just like you did 00:12:811 (1) - ? i think that sounds better along with the drum
00:29:363 (2,3) - this flow rather odd considering the angle of the slider and the opposite placement of the note, i'd make them straight or smth
00:39:018 (4,5) - looks bad at my stand, at least make the part after red node became symmetrical so they make such a contact

SPOILER

00:44:880 (4) - missing clap both start and end
00:45:742 (5) - finish feels overused and doesn't really match the tempo you're following, delete it
00:53:156 (4) - i'd rather replace it with a note on 00:53:328 - so the whole 00:51:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - would following the vocal smoothly, thats kinda weird for me to have this one follow the drum when you're ignoring the one at 00:52:466 - , so.. yeah
01:07:121 (1) - delete nc to keep your 2/1 nc's pattern
01:08:156 (1) - finish sounds good

there're some nitpicks that i dont include here since seems it will make pretty long post, so i'll just assume that a stylish-stuffs.
good luck :3

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-17T21:01:09+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
found some spare time on my concern, here's some quick check on the diffs as responds to your request before..

[Normal]
00:10:052 (1) - add clap just like you did 00:12:811 (1) - ? i think that sounds better along with the drum
00:29:363 (2,3) - this flow rather odd considering the angle of the slider and the opposite placement of the note, i'd make them straight or smth
00:39:018 (4,5) - looks bad at my stand, at least make the part after red node became symmetrical so they make such a contact
SPOILER
00:44:880 (4) - missing clap both start and end
00:45:742 (5) - finish feels overused and doesn't really match the tempo you're following, delete it
00:53:156 (4) - i'd rather replace it with a note on 00:53:328 - so the whole 00:51:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - would following the vocal smoothly, thats kinda weird for me to have this one follow the drum when you're ignoring the one at 00:52:466 - , so.. yeah
01:07:121 (1) - delete nc to keep your 2/1 nc's pattern
01:08:156 (1) - finish sounds good

there're some nitpicks that i dont include here since seems it will make pretty long post, so i'll just assume that a stylish-stuffs.
good luck :3

omg thanks a lot mochi

! Fixed everything you mentioned here

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

pkk 2015-06-19T02:56:22+00:00

soon (TM)

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-07-02T13:26:23+00:00

ok checking snafu and normal

[snafu]

00:06:776 (1) - would be cool to start to spacing note from stack here instead the song just fit it somehow
SPOILER
00:07:294 (1) - you can try make it looks like this so it might make flow here 00:06:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - nice imo
SPOILER
00:09:190 (3,4) - lower spacing would be nice , high spacing just play a bit weird here somehow the song isn't really that intense tho
00:11:949 (3,4) - same ^
00:30:570 (4,5) - ^ make sure spacing is a bit consistent with the song
00:31:604 (4,5) - if you swap place of these two notes , it might make flow here 00:31:259 (3,4,5,6,1) - better imo
SPOILER
00:36:432 - rhythm would sound better if you map this kick , try this rhythm ?
SPOILER
00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:811 (1,2,3) - no. 1/4 slider spam won't fit the music here tbh the snare in music here sound like random placed which make the 1/4 slider play a bit awkward (1/4 slider need like consistent instrument pattern to make it play good ) , using a stream here instead is highly recommend
00:57:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is one of the place that 1/4 slider fit , just saying
00:59:535 (1,1) - overlaphere looks not that good imo , I would use this pattern instead
SPOILER
01:08:501 (3,4) - similiar to what I said here 00:09:190 (3,4) - , you can move (4) to around x400 y256
01:19:707 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:811 (1,2,3) -
01:21:173 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a sudden increase in spacing like this is make the stream here play a bit weird imo , you can try increase overall spacing here 01:20:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or decrease overall spacing here 01:21:259 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - that would make the stream here kinda a bit more reasonable , spacing increase is ok for this part but make sure to organize it good , you can take a look at stream here in my diff for reference lol

I think overall the design can be improved a bit, this is really a bit different from what you did in rally go round imo

[normal]

00:12:294 (5,1) - mfw inconsistent spacing
00:18:845 (2) - nazi move to x216 y100 for better flow here 00:18:328 (1,2) -
00:35:914 (3) - nazi move to x196 y292 for better flow 00:35:397 (2,3) - ( fix next spacing too if you make change here )
01:06:604 (4,5) - rhythm would play better if you make this slider instead imo
SPOILER
01:13:673 (1,2) - this rhythm sound better
SPOILER

xd good luck

edited: also I fixed stream here 01:20:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - in my diff a bit

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Aerous

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-07-05T21:33:36+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:

ok checking snafu and normal

[snafu]

00:06:776 (1) - would be cool to start to spacing note from stack here instead the song just fit it somehow
SPOILER
00:07:294 (1) - you can try make it looks like this so it might make flow here 00:06:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - nice imo
SPOILER
00:09:190 (3,4) - lower spacing would be nice , high spacing just play a bit weird here somehow the song isn't really that intense tho
00:11:949 (3,4) - same ^
00:30:570 (4,5) - ^ make sure spacing is a bit consistent with the song
00:31:604 (4,5) - if you swap place of these two notes , it might make flow here 00:31:259 (3,4,5,6,1) - better imo
SPOILER
00:36:432 - rhythm would sound better if you map this kick , try this rhythm ?
SPOILER
00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:811 (1,2,3) - no. 1/4 slider spam won't fit the music here tbh the snare in music here sound like random placed which make the 1/4 slider play a bit awkward (1/4 slider need like consistent instrument pattern to make it play good ) , using a stream here instead is highly recommend
00:57:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is one of the place that 1/4 slider fit , just saying
00:59:535 (1,1) - overlaphere looks not that good imo , I would use this pattern instead
SPOILER
01:08:501 (3,4) - similiar to what I said here 00:09:190 (3,4) - , you can move (4) to around x400 y256
01:19:707 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:811 (1,2,3) -
01:21:173 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a sudden increase in spacing like this is make the stream here play a bit weird imo , you can try increase overall spacing here 01:20:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or decrease overall spacing here 01:21:259 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - that would make the stream here kinda a bit more reasonable , spacing increase is ok for this part but make sure to organize it good , you can take a look at stream here in my diff for reference lol

I think overall the design can be improved a bit, this is really a bit different from what you did in rally go round imo

[normal]

00:12:294 (5,1) - mfw inconsistent spacing
00:18:845 (2) - nazi move to x216 y100 for better flow here 00:18:328 (1,2) -
00:35:914 (3) - nazi move to x196 y292 for better flow 00:35:397 (2,3) - ( fix next spacing too if you make change here )
01:06:604 (4,5) - rhythm would play better if you make this slider instead imo
SPOILER
01:13:673 (1,2) - this rhythm sound better
SPOILER

xd good luck

edited: also I fixed stream here 01:20:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - in my diff a bit

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256,192,86345,12,0,88845,0:0:0:0:

Gonna take a look next week , I have summer school atm

. I'll edit this page when I reply to this mod.

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-12-26T22:15:05+00:00

Hello? Remapped my highest diff.

Last edited by Aerous 2015-12-26T22:17:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2015-12-26T22:17:42+00:00

hello?!?

dude nic

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

pkk 2015-12-27T00:21:45+00:00

IRC with my son

18:09 Aerous: can u mod one tv size diff 4 me xd
18:09 pkuai: no
18:09 Aerous: plz
18:09 pkuai: ok
18:10 *Aerous is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/674128 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Extra]]
18:10 Aerous: xd
18:10 pkuai: om
18:10 pkuai: f
18:10 pkuai: i swear u ranked this 2 years ago
18:10 Aerous: nah its in my graveyard xdd
18:10 pkuai: 00:03:673 (2,2) - xd
18:11 Aerous: xd
18:11 Aerous: wait updating
18:11 Aerous: ok uipdated
18:13 pkuai: 00:03:673 (2,2) - xd
18:13 pkuai: 00:09:018 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - whats this nc
18:13 Aerous: idk
18:14 Aerous: i love colors
18:14 pkuai: me too
18:14 pkuai: 00:15:225 (1,1) - might be easier to read if you remove NC so people dont think the circle is actually a slider
18:14 Aerous: ok
18:15 pkuai: 00:21:087 (1) - start and end aren't exactly parallel idk if u want to make them parallel or not
18:15 Aerous: this is why i need art class
18:15 Aerous: ok i tried
18:15 pkuai: 00:26:604 (1,2,3) - idk this just plays relaly awkwardly
18:15 pkuai: i think too much movement at 00:26:949 (2,3) -
18:16 pkuai: maybe u can stack 00:26:949 (2,4) -
18:16 pkuai: or 00:26:949 (2,3) -
18:16 Aerous: k
18:16 Aerous: 2,4 stack
18:16 Aerous: http://puu.sh/m9BxQ/c3c4037da6.jpg
18:18 pkuai: buce
18:18 pkuai: 00:28:673 (3,4,5) -
18:18 pkuai: rhythm is really awkward cuz slidertail on strong beat and you skipped the stronger blue tick
18:19 pkuai: maybe u can remove circle 4 and slider 3 then triplet on 00:28:673 -
18:21 Aerous: ok
18:21 pkuai: 00:29:880 (2,3) - kinda far
18:21 pkuai: feels kinda weird to play, maybe you can reposition 00:30:225 (3,4) -
18:22 pkuai: or you can try moving 00:29:880 (2) - so the tail stacks with 00:30:397 (4) -
18:22 Aerous: nerfed a bit
18:22 Aerous: ?!?!? http://puu.sh/m9BWU/eb851107de.jpg
18:23 pkuai: [https://i.gyazo.com/3341791436a5f88d8f1e0f6559b07fc0.jpg !!!]
18:23 pkuai: you can leave everything as it is but only move 2
18:24 pkuai: you can try something else too if this is too edgy xd
18:24 Aerous: yolo i copied urs
18:24 pkuai: same
18:24 Aerous: xd ? 00:37:121 (5,6,7) -
18:24 pkuai: 00:37:294 (6) - x 293 y 64
18:25 pkuai: 00:37:466 (7) - x 441 y 125
18:25 pkuai: I think if you do that it'll flow better into slider 1
18:25 pkuai: because your 7 is currently kind of low so that when you go into 1 its some fucked up shit
18:25 Aerous: o
18:25 Aerous: nice flow
18:25 *pkuai sprays holy water everywhere
18:25 pkuai: i got u bro
18:26 Aerous: ayylmao
18:26 pkuai: 00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2) -
18:27 pkuai: all these clap hitsounds
18:27 pkuai: r gonna give me a heart attack
18:27 pkuai: when i play this
18:27 Aerous: XDD
18:27 Aerous: i just copied hitsounds
18:27 Aerous: ill double check those
18:27 pkuai: 00:57:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try ctrl g h
18:27 pkuai: then move whole thing to x 204 y 143
18:28 pkuai: 00:59:880 (1) - move the first red point to x 342 y 144
18:29 pkuai: brb dinner dad is gonna kill me brb
18:29 Aerous: kk
19:06 pkuai: im
19:06 pkuai: black
19:07 Aerous: wtf ur black
19:07 Aerous: wait updating
19:07 *Aerous is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/674128 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Extra]]
19:07 Aerous: ok done
19:08 pkuai: k
19:08 pkuai: 01:02:552 - a triplet would be nice here, 1 sec
19:09 pkuai: https://i.gyazo.com/830871fea10c87c4ed1 ... a5185d.jpg
19:09 pkuai: ctrl g j on 4
19:09 pkuai: move 5 to there then add note on blue tick before slider 1 for triplet xd d d xd
19:11 Aerous: ok kinda did it
19:11 Aerous: http://puu.sh/m9EL8/9b16da0fb9.jpg ?!??!
19:11 pkuai: wtf
19:11 pkuai: lower the spacing
19:12 pkuai: move like t he whole thing 671 closer
19:12 Aerous: kk
19:12 pkuai: 01:03:242 (3) - theres no sound here and since you have a triplet before this, it might play better as 1/2
19:13 Aerous: wait
19:13 Aerous: dont you hear it?
19:13 Aerous: delete 2-3
19:13 Aerous: i swear im high or omse shit
19:13 pkuai: it comes earlier
19:13 pkuai: and it's 1/3
19:13 pkuai: xd
19:13 Aerous: k
19:13 Aerous: delteed
19:14 Aerous: o xd
19:14 pkuai: [https://i.gyazo.com/2da306116b538b303e643888a0bc5dd5.png u can try this placement for 1/2 idk im high]
19:14 Aerous: o
19:14 Aerous: we almost had the same thing in mind
19:14 Aerous: xd
19:14 pkuai: lo
19:14 Aerous: http://puu.sh/m9EYD/a2774e6156.jpg
19:16 pkuai: nice 1 !1
19:17 pkuai: nice
19:17 pkuai: 01:27:121 (1) -
19:17 pkuai: might want to add some timing points to lower volume during the slider
19:17 pkuai: since sliderticks can be kinda loud
19:17 pkuai: anyways thats it
19:17 pkuai: buxw
19:18 Aerous: kk boss
19:20 Aerous: tyy
19:20 Aerous: post 4 kd
19:21 pkuai: ok xd

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-12-27T00:35:56+00:00

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♠ 00:08:845 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - nc on white ticks instead of reds? makes more sense musically imo. Compare with 00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -
♠ 00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These felt kinda exaggerated for me, like especially 00:12:294 (1,2) - because you compare that with the spacing on 00:12:638 (1,1) - . You kinda expect a larger jump since the pitch peaks at 00:12:811 -
♠ 00:17:638 (3,4) - No triple or kickslider?
♠ 00:26:949 (2,3,4,1) - Spacing is a bit confusing, especially 4>1
♠ 00:55:225 (1,2) - I would make this a kick-slider instead. It makes more sense to begin the streams again on 00:55:397 - vocals + drum.
♠ 01:04:018 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - NC thing.
♠ 01:13:673 (1) - Okay using a 1/1 slider right after those 1/2 jumps is kinda weird for me lol. I would use a 1/2 slider and a circle instead so there isn't such a drastic rhythm change.
♠ 01:24:880 (2) - Sounds kinda overmapped. I'd do a 1/2 slider here instead
♠ 01:25:914 (4,1) - If you're going for a stack, its quite off.
♠ 01:27:121 (1) - Make the tail a bit more visible. Like, the border.

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Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-12-27T00:46:36+00:00

monstrata wrote:
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♠ 00:08:845 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - nc on white ticks instead of reds? makes more sense musically imo. Compare with 00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -
♠ 00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These felt kinda exaggerated for me, like especially 00:12:294 (1,2) - because you compare that with the spacing on 00:12:638 (1,1) - . You kinda expect a larger jump since the pitch peaks at 00:12:811 -
♠ 00:17:638 (3,4) - No triple or kickslider?
♠ 00:26:949 (2,3,4,1) - Spacing is a bit confusing, especially 4>1
♠ 00:55:225 (1,2) - I would make this a kick-slider instead. It makes more sense to begin the streams again on 00:55:397 - vocals + drum.
♠ 01:04:018 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - NC thing.
♠ 01:13:673 (1) - Okay using a 1/1 slider right after those 1/2 jumps is kinda weird for me lol. I would use a 1/2 slider and a circle instead so there isn't such a drastic rhythm change.
♠ 01:24:880 (2) - Sounds kinda overmapped. I'd do a 1/2 slider here instead
♠ 01:25:914 (4,1) - If you're going for a stack, its quite off.
♠ 01:27:121 (1) - Make the tail a bit more visible. Like, the border.
~

Fixed all except the jump into 1/1 slider , i thought it would nice to have a easier pattern after those jumps also i had 1/4 sliders later too. Thanks!

Yunomi

292 posts

Joined May 2014

Yunomi 2016-01-03T22:36:13+00:00

extra

00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - these screen jump scalings are a bit too extreme throughout the map, scale them just a bit smaller to fit with the difficulty of the rest of the map. this song doesn't call for those kinds of jumps imo.
01:12:292 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - another example here which 01:13:328 (1,2) - shrinks so much compared from 01:12:982 (1,2) - but they are similar intensity. can fix this by making 01:12:982 (1,2) - smaller.
00:55:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is kinda ugly xd
01:20:397 (4) - maybe this vocal should be emphasized with a slider, felt kinda weird going from that to a stream.

i had no problems with playing the map but the difficulty felt kind of forced. jumps are definitely playable but i think it could be better if it's scaled down a little. nice map aerous your new name fucking sucks

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-01-03T23:21:59+00:00

Adore wrote:
extra

00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - these screen jump scalings are a bit too extreme throughout the map, scale them just a bit smaller to fit with the difficulty of the rest of the map. this song doesn't call for those kinds of jumps imo. Maybe later , if its like a major issue that is unrankable.
01:12:292 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - another example here which 01:13:328 (1,2) - shrinks so much compared from 01:12:982 (1,2) - but they are similar intensity. can fix this by making 01:12:982 (1,2) - smaller. Might just leave the distance here and increase the angle
00:55:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is kinda ugly xd xd yea i'll try to fix it up if i have other ideas? for now no change
01:20:397 (4) - maybe this vocal should be emphasized with a slider, felt kinda weird going from that to a stream. after those streams and slider jumps i wanted the player to have like a short rest here so they can continue the long ass stream that comes up later

i had no problems with playing the map but the difficulty felt kind of forced. jumps are definitely playable but i think it could be better if it's scaled down a little. nice map aerous your new name fucking sucks

Thanks for the mod and yes I know my name is fucking good ! Jk , I'll change it back soon :3

edit: fk new page

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2016-01-09T20:39:45+00:00

d

SPOILER

14:20 Aerous: wanna leag
14:20 Kibbleru: ok
14:20 Aerous: ok
14:21 Kibbleru: how can i be non pleb at csgo
14:21 Kibbleru: i feed 0/19 ever gaem
14:21 Kibbleru:

14:21 Aerous: LOL
14:21 Aerous: LOLOLOL
14:21 Aerous: niceeeee
14:21 Aerous: just play more ?!?!??!?!
14:21 Aerous: whats ur mouse sens
14:21 Kibbleru: low
14:21 Aerous: do you run and spray
14:21 Kibbleru: no
14:21 Aerous: just watch those youtube vids
14:21 Kibbleru: i stand still and try to aim
14:21 Kibbleru: or behind a wall
14:22 Aerous: yea just practice aim in those workshop maps
14:22 Kibbleru: but ppl seem to always have better acc than me xd
14:22 Aerous: i guess u have to play more osu
14:22 Kibbleru: same
14:23 Aerous: or you know spend money into unboxing knife
14:23 Aerous: thats how you go pro
14:23 Kibbleru: lmao
14:24 Kibbleru: ik my friend does alot of this stuff
14:24 Kibbleru: skins n shit
14:24 Kibbleru: hes spent prob over 2k on csgo skins
14:24 Aerous: damn
14:24 Aerous: does he bet
14:24 Kibbleru: yea
14:24 Kibbleru: he earns alot of money
14:24 Kibbleru: apparently
14:24 Kibbleru: by betting
14:25 Kibbleru: iirc he also did some rock paper sissors betting lmfao
14:25 Kibbleru: scissors
14:25 Kibbleru: tfw u forgot how to spell scissors
14:25 Kibbleru: what rank r u csgo anyway
14:26 Aerous: dmg?!?!?
14:26 Aerous: i let my friend go play on it
14:26 Aerous: so idk
14:26 Aerous: anymore
14:26 Kibbleru: lol
14:26 Aerous: spent
14:26 Aerous: req
14:27 Aerous: on my smurf xd
14:27 Kibbleru: if ur silver 1 i no longer respect u as a memer
14:28 Kibbleru: the friend of mien is like
14:28 Kibbleru: master eagle or something
14:28 Kibbleru: idk
14:28 Kibbleru: the higher one
15:26 Aerous: mod one diff for me plz
15:26 Aerous: xd
15:26 Kibbleru: if its irc
15:27 Kibbleru: discord modding
15:27 Kibbleru: get on
15:27 Kibbleru: https://discord.gg/0WDeFZOi0THEf9Nd
15:27 Aerous: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/300312
15:27 Aerous: xtra plz
15:27 Aerous: so i can get apple to take a look
15:28 *Aerous is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/674128 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Xtra]]
15:32 Kibbleru: 00:55:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
15:32 Kibbleru: 01:11:259 (2,1,2) -
15:33 Kibbleru: 01:27:121 -
15:34 Kibbleru: 00:11:949 (1) -
15:34 Kibbleru: 00:15:397 (3,1) -
15:34 Kibbleru: 00:15:570 (2) -
15:35 Kibbleru: 00:15:397 - nc here
15:35 Kibbleru: not 00:15:570 -
15:35 Kibbleru: 00:17:638 (3,4,5) - trasfasofas
15:35 Kibbleru: f
15:35 Kibbleru: safas
15:35 Kibbleru: fas
15:35 Kibbleru: das
15:36 Kibbleru: 00:28:673 (1) -
15:36 Kibbleru: 00:58:328 (6) - nc
15:37 Kibbleru: 01:14:190 (2,3,4) - a nice description of the every day solo q teammates i get paired up with
15:37 Kibbleru: cancer

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2016-01-16T19:52:57+00:00

few stuff

Easy
00:04:707 (1) - Enlarge this to 00:06:776 - maybe, the gap right now feels awkward considering there is still some action inbetween. Or do it like in your Normal.
00:20:570 (3) - These stubs aren't that welcome in easy diffs anymore, so you better find another way to map this out:
00:37:121 (3,1) - 00:34:880 (1,2) - blanket xd
00:48:845 (1) - 00:59:880 (1) - make this look less cramped, it's easy diff after all
01:05:397 (1,2) - Can you make flow less broken please?
01:20:914 (3,1) - This cries for it

Please work a little bit on this easy diff, it doesn't look visually appealing as your normal and sometimes feels like you just slapped random straight sliders in here and set some angle between them (e.g. 00:09:535 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 00:18:328 (1,2,3) - 00:51:604 (1,2) - 01:06:604 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 01:15:052 (3,1,2,3) - 01:23:328 (3,4,1,2,3) - ).

Mochi
01:03:673 (4,1) - This might a bit hard to read even for advanced players, can you make a slight overlap?
01:08:156 (1,2) - Cuter blanket

captin
01:08:501 (3,4) - Feels pretty low-spaced in comparison to how intense this beat is in the tracl IMO.

celsiusghandislk
00:40:225 (4) - 1/4 rly? I think this was supposed to be 1/3
00:58:328 (1) - I think you can make a prettier shape here.
01:20:914 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - streamshape :c
01:25:397 (4) - Would set a NC here, this is somewhat difficult to read imo

X
00:03:673 (2,2) - whats this
00:17:638 (3) - 1/6. Actually, the whole 00:17:121 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern looks randomly spaced to me somehow, can you structure this a bit better?
00:49:535 (3) - clap
00:54:363 - Clapspam is really bad idea here unless your intention is to cause earbleeding to the players. Try to find a more simplified clap pattern, similar to captin's.
01:04:018 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - like how does this pattern complement the music, there are mostly strings in this part which aren't even intense at all and you put in gradually increasing jumps in it.
01:10:570 (1,2,1) - lol spacing. Nerf this would be adviseable.
01:24:707 (1) - clap on tail.

Xtra could be more polished ehh.... but k. Please look at the things I mentioned in Easy.

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-01-16T22:08:14+00:00

Fixed all , sorry for my easy thats from like half a year ago xdd

except xtra 00:03:673 (2) - cuz i love this slider

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2016-01-17T00:41:42+00:00

Fixed

SPOILER

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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-01-17T13:31:00+00:00

Pho wrote:
few stuff

celsiusghandislk
00:40:225 (4) - 1/4 rly? I think this was supposed to be 1/3 ye I remember trying to figure out the snap here long time ago I'm sure the beat at the reverse arrow land on 1/4 eventhough the tail might sound like 1/3 but vocal is happen to be on 1/2 there too so it kinda ok here
00:58:328 (1) - I think you can make a prettier shape here. i tried z
01:20:914 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - streamshape :c lol stream shape maybe be kinda like d but it play kinda better when it shape better for some reason so maybe I will keep itI also fixed some curve here 01:21:259 (1,2) - a bit
01:25:397 (4) - Would set a NC here, this is somewhat difficult to read imo oop

thanks for the mods

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captin1

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captin1 2016-01-17T21:56:50+00:00

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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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Pho

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Pho 2016-01-17T23:09:41+00:00

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Mint

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Joined February 2013

Mint 2016-01-18T22:16:49+00:00

As your request.

NO KD

General

* Clean!

Easy

* 00:50:914 - Would be cool if this sound was actually clickable. Split it up in a circle + 1/2 instead? Completely up to you tho.

Mochi's Hard

* Different spinner/slider ending time at the end of the map compared to the other difficulties. It's allowed since it's a GD, but consider making it consistent.

captin's Insane

* 01:19:535 (4) - Could use a clap too.

Celsius' Insane

* 00:37:294 (4,5) - This stack is a bit strange to me. The clap on (5) doesn't get any emphasis now.

Xtra

* 00:01:949 (3,4) - Swap these? Would play more natural to me.
* 00:37:121 (5,6,7) - It'd make more sense to me if (6,7) would be larger than (5,6) due to the clap.
* 00:57:639 (2,1) - Plays this part so many times, but this distance seems a bit too far for me, maybe I just suck at this game >_>
* 01:10:570 (1,2) - A pity that these are sliders. Since the sounds on the blue tick or almost equally as strong as the white & red ticks here, a small stream would fit much better imo. Even the other difficulties did that <_<`

Everything looks nice, feel free to call me back!

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-01-19T04:15:51+00:00

Fixed all

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2016-01-20T03:45:24+00:00

add the clap for me thx bby

Mint

1,607 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2016-01-20T21:17:36+00:00

Qualified!

Kalibe

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Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2016-01-20T22:18:36+00:00

Yay, grats ( ˘ω˘ )

Haruto

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Joined December 2013

Haruto 2016-01-20T22:24:15+00:00

grats!

Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

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Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2016-01-21T00:08:20+00:00

vocals in the end are off, but timable, refer to p/4793938 and how this set handles the last few vocals in general

i'd suggest something around 01:26:458 - for that timing point but getting more opinions would be appreciated, it's 1 am

i might add that the whistle spam in the beginning sounds excessive since there's no 2/1 piano going on

-430~-460 idk seems to work way better for the video like really.
i referred to like any youtube video of the opening and song in sync

Bonsai

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Joined July 2011

Bonsai 2016-01-21T00:40:06+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
vocals in the end are off, but timable, refer to p/4793938 and how this set handles the last few vocals in general

i'd suggest something around 01:26:458 - for that timing point but getting more opinions would be appreciated, it's 1 am

i might add that the whistle spam in the beginning sounds excessive since there's no 2/1 piano going on

-430~-460 idk seems to work way better for the video like really.
i referred to like any youtube video of the opening and song in sync

^ for the vocals at the end 01:26:468 would be right imo, for the video offset -370 seems right to me based on the downbeat at 00:03:328 being perfectly snyced with the screen change in the video
and the whistles at 00:01:259 and 00:02:638 seem too much for me too~

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

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Irreversible 2016-01-21T01:00:57+00:00

Hi there! confirmed issue, hence why I pull it out of qualification.

Please fix it up and don't hesitate asking something if you need further clarification.

ac8129464363

1,560 posts

Joined October 2013

ac8129464363 2016-01-21T01:16:38+00:00

hi i just want to complain about the claps at the beginning of xtra

ok bye

Aerous

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-01-21T02:27:47+00:00

~~Ok Ty I'll fix later~~

ok changed video offset and added timing

Pho