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HabiHolic

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-04-18T00:56:18+00:00

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Title:Harumodoki
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Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Aerous
Version:Habi's Normal
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku my teen romantic snafu 2 oregairu momochikun habiholic celsiuslk
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Ipas

806 posts

Joined September 2013

Ipas 2015-04-18T02:20:03+00:00

From #modreqs
I will try to give better mods ><
Bad English ><

I won't say the same things twice due to laziness lol xD

General:

Spinner at the end seems to be inconsistence . It was difference with another diff especially the end of that spinner . Consider to consistence it or remove it like Habi did on Normal

Easy:

00:04:707 (1,1) - What I know is: The distance between Spinner and next note on Easy must be have 4 empty white ticks . I guess you must change the spinner into a slider because you can't start next note at 00:07:466 - .
00:09:535 (1) - I prefer to start a note on that strong beat and not using end of reversed slider like what do you on this and also you can keep your consistency of NC
00:11:604 (3) - Try to follow the next slider body's direction . It looks more better than before
00:26:604 (4) - You may put NC on this to keep your NC consistency and then you put NC on 00:29:363 (2) -
00:38:501 (2) - Try another slider art . This one looks like a bit ugly
00:46:087 - I think you should put a circle at here because the strong beat fits more better by a slider head or a circle
00:46:776 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved at this . It's fine but using blanket should be more better I guess
00:50:570 (1,2) - Swap New Combo between these two
00:52:638 (3) - I thought this slider end doesn't fits with the song . Change it to another pattern . I give you a suggestion to change it Like this and put Clap to 00:53:328 - Since there's a note here *This will apply if you follow my suggestion :3
01:27:121 (1) - Are you sure with this spinner end's?

I guess you can use / end the first spinner like what Habi did :3

Habi's Normal:

00:19:190 (3) - This clap on this slider end seems to be no sense/overuse . Consider to remove it . The clap sound must be use at 00:19:621 - Not at 00:19:535 -
00:49:363 (2) - It fits more better if you could end this slider at 00:49:707 - and put a circle at 00:49:880 -
00:50:225 (3) - Consider to place New Combo here?
00:52:638 - to 00:54:018 - Do something like This?
01:10:052 - The strong beat appears at here so don't ignore this . Your pattern seems to be doesn't fits too with the song . You must map this strong beat to fits its more better
01:10:914 - Prefer to decrease usage of volume at here . The clap sounds annoying because its too loud

Anyway, good map :3

Mochi's Hard:

00:10:914 (3,1) - This overlap doesn't looks good . Consider to change it?
00:14:707 (2,3,4) - Intentional? I think you shouldn't do this since there's no New Combo or anything that can be used to place a Jump or inconsistency DS
00:36:259 (4,5) - Ctrl+G this pattern . It fits more better with the song since the strong beat that you must place a slider existed here -> 00:36:259 (4) -
00:45:397 (6,7) - Jump between these two seems to be too huge since the song was soft at here . Consider to move (6) to make more easy jump
00:51:432 (7) - Delete clap . Overuse/No sense . Or better to remove this circle at place it with 1/1 reverse slider from previous reversed slider
00:52:638 (3,4) - Ctrl+G these two :3 May have same reason as above
01:06:432 (1,2) - Swap new combo between these two
01:20:225 (4,1) - Make this jump same as previous jump
01:20:914 (2,3,4) - Why does the clap from these make a bad sound? It seems to be overuse/no sense

captin's Insane:

00:32:121 (1) - For consistency, add finish too at this slider head like what you did at 00:34:880 (1,1) -
01:08:845 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think this is overmapped since the drum sound doesn't loud as you can put them (Stream) at here . Its absolutely no sense

Celsius' Insane:

00:42:638 - Don't ignore this strong beat

Spring:

00:19:363 (4,1) - Prefer to fix the blanket
00:36:259 (1) - It doesn't good when you suddenly move to use vocal to map . Prefer to make this slider into circles to map its rhythm since I hear a strong beat at 00:36:432 -
00:39:794 - Probably just me . It feels awkward if this doesn't mapped too xD
00:43:845 (2) - Since the strong beat heard at the end of this slider, consider to Ctrl+G these 00:43:845 (2,3) -
00:57:121 (1,2,3,4) - It doesn't looks good . Prefer to make a square within these slider so it won't be a overlapped note like before
Since you made streams before why don't you map 00:58:414 - to 00:59:276 - with streams too since the drum sounds still audible? IGNORE THIS xD
01:09:276 (10,1) - Fix inconsistency of Distance snap at these two
01:20:656 - Map this too? xD You don't have to though xD

That's all from me

I hope this helpful :3
Good Luck :3

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-04-18T04:38:07+00:00

April

In April wrote:
Saw you request sometime and decided to drop by for as much as I can, I like Snafu, despite disliking Hacchi for not letting girls confess to him >_<

I dont claim to be a nor good player or a modder and cant really judge your Hard and higher, also your EN are in very good condition already, so you should treat all things below as suggestions you can spit on >w< !!!

Easy
SPOILER
00:00:570 (1,2) - compared to map as a whole, these dont feel organic, maybe curve them up in some way. its fine i think

00:44:707 (3) - since its easy, it would personally not make the _| corner motion, maybe flip the starting point so the motion would go clockwise? uhh i like mine ;w;

01:05:397 (1) - you could curve this a bit more,dont do a perfect blanket though ?? its fine i think sorry

01:20:225 (2) - umm, this one kindof drowns in loud music sequence and therefore doesnt feel like its there, put a different sound on it or replace it, possible by extending 01:19:190 (1) into a 1x repeat and 01:20:570 a note here. i likke my slider better

01:24:707 (1) - zis one needs to be louder too, the finish on slider beginning doesnt really dig it
louds enough rip
In April wrote:
Saw you request sometime and decided to drop by for as much as I can, I like Snafu, despite disliking Hacchi for not letting girls confess to him >_< rip (

I dont claim to be a nor good player or a modder and cant really judge your Hard and higher, also your EN are in very good condition already, so you should treat all things below as suggestions you can spit on >w< !!!

Easy
SPOILER
00:00:570 (1,2) - compared to map as a whole, these dont feel organic, maybe curve them up in some way.

00:44:707 (3) - since its easy, it would personally not make the _| corner motion, maybe flip the starting point so the motion would go clockwise?

01:05:397 (1) - you could curve this a bit more,dont do a perfect blanket though

01:20:225 (2) - umm, this one kindof drowns in loud music sequence and therefore doesnt feel like its there, put a different sound on it or replace it, possible by extending 01:19:190 (1) into a 1x repeat and 01:20:570 a note here.

01:24:707 (1) - zis one needs to be louder too, the finish on slider beginning doesnt really dig it
Normal
SPOILER
00:02:638 (4,5,1) - maybe space out them a slight small lil bit, i think the pace here allows it, or maybe its just this shape feels to crowded ;-;

00:20:570 till 00:21:087 - why is this 3beat sequence is mapped on sliderend, circle and slider beginning point of another combo while lyrics begin on that next slider end? 00:31:604 - here backgroud drums improve the pace and wont let the player focus on that, but here it feels wrong, this sequence stands out but is mapped by blending it in ;w;

Overall this same sequence is mapped in different ways on your map and I like it, but at the same time maybe it would be better to have only 1-2 variants for it since its 2star normal? think about it

00:33:673 (3) - this one feels empty too, give it a louder sound or extend it to here 00:33:501
00:44:880 (4,5) - swap their positions, you are doing an additional beat where theres none, and skipping a beat at slider end

01:01:604 (4) - muhby replace this one with a slider like at 01:00:570 (2), since you made an up rhythm in this combo dont skip it again

aside from some slightly rough egdes these maps are polished, and more importantly feel and play smooth and organic, my best wishes in getting this ranked, it really deserves it
carry on =^w^=

pkhg

pkhg wrote:
from #modreqs

[General]
Your bg is 1454x768. It must be 16:9 :p
I'll check it later !
Add around 2000ms lead-in
Adding it later maybee
Its better if the last spinner ends on 01:28:673 -
01:28:845 - ending here

[Easy]

Uncheck Letterbox during breaks k
00:04:707 (1,1) - t/241019
replaced spinner with a long slider
00:21:087 (1,1) - add finish like you did in the other diffs
Theres finish on already ??
00:49:880 (2,1) - this works better http://puu.sh/hfyzm/ad6cde49c7.jpg
maybe later , if other mods mention this
00:50:570 (1,2) - swap NC k
00:52:638 (6) - better rhythm http://puu.sh/hfyBS/8d23a9573f.jpg
keeping mine
01:05:397 (1) - this fits vocals better http://puu.sh/hfyFv/41c7b79c60.jpg
^
01:10:914 (1,2,3,4) - add claps on every white tick (where its possible obv), right now its inconsistent :p kk !

[Spring]
AR9 is fine please, the song isnt fast enough and you didnt make complex patterns
yea ill change it

Uncheck Letterbox during breaks k
00:07:811 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - claps on every white tick, starting from 00:07:811 (2) - no its fine with the whistles + claps
00:44:707 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/hfBJU/35dfc268ab.jpg
no change here for shape
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00:49:535 (3) - clap on head k
01:10:570 (5,6,7,8,1) - http://puu.sh/hfBXY/b95b01518c.jpg
fixed it a bit myself
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^^ done

Good Luck :3/

NewIpas

NewIpas wrote:
From #modreqs
I will try to give better mods ><
Bad English ><

I won't say the same things twice due to laziness lol xD

General:
Spinner at the end seems to be inconsistence . It was difference with another diff especially the end of that spinner . Consider to consistence it or remove it like Habi did on Normal

Easy:
00:04:707 (1,1) - What I know is: The distance between Spinner and next note on Easy must be have 4 empty white ticks . I guess you must change the spinner into a slider because you can't start next note at 00:07:466 - .
Changed from previous mod !
00:09:535 (1) - I prefer to start a note on that strong beat and not using end of reversed slider like what do you on this and also you can keep your consistency of NC
i think its fine
00:11:604 (3) - Try to follow the next slider body's direction . It looks more better than before
kk
00:26:604 (4) - You may put NC on this to keep your NC consistency and then you put NC on 00:29:363 (2) -
no nc on the first one i applied on the second one
00:38:501 (2) - Try another slider art . This one looks like a bit ugly
yup !
00:46:087 - I think you should put a circle at here because the strong beat fits more better by a slider head or a circle
yea i should lol
00:46:776 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved at this . It's fine but using blanket should be more better I guess
i remade this part a bit different
00:50:570 (1,2) - Swap New Combo between these two yup i did with previous mod
00:52:638 (3) - I thought this slider end doesn't fits with the song . Change it to another pattern . I give you a suggestion to change it Like this and put Clap to 00:53:328 - Since there's a note here *This will apply if you follow my suggestion :3
changed here ! ty for suggestion
01:27:121 (1) - Are you sure with this spinner end's? changed
I guess you can use / end the first spinner like what Habi did :3

Spring:
00:19:363 (4,1) - Prefer to fix the blanket ok
00:36:259 (1) - It doesn't good when you suddenly move to use vocal to map . Prefer to make this slider into circles to map its rhythm since I hear a strong beat at 00:36:432 - yea im gonna think of something else , for the meantime ill keep it like this
00:39:794 - Probably just me . It feels awkward if this doesn't mapped too xD its fine xD
00:43:845 (2) - Since the strong beat heard at the end of this slider, consider to Ctrl+G these 00:43:845 (2,3) -
uhh maybee later
00:57:121 (1,2,3,4) - It doesn't looks good . Prefer to make a square within these slider so it won't be a overlapped note like before
back and forth motion , so its on purpose
Since you made streams before why don't you map 00:58:414 - to 00:59:276 - with streams too since the drum sounds still audible? IGNORE THIS xD
I had it mapped before but it was waay too much , i asked xxdeathx about this too
01:09:276 (10,1) - Fix inconsistency of Distance snap at these two
yup
01:20:656 - Map this too? xD You don't have to though xD
no its fine !

That's all from me
I hope this helpful :3
Good Luck :3

Thanks for the mods ! @everyone should end here 01:28:845 -
@Monstrata i was going through the mods and my google chrome crashed ;w; I changed most of the stuff , if you need me to clarify then pm me in league or osu

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-04-18T05:26:28+00:00

@NewIpas no change for me I want to focus on the tone of vocal there

Spicy Salsa

67 posts

Joined November 2013

Spicy Salsa 2015-04-18T06:20:00+00:00

Hey there, M4M here, if you think my mod is not too bad

I normally focus on small details when modding, if you don't really consider this helpful then you may ignore my post and not mod my map at all.
All of those statements represent my opinion and can differ from the opinions of other people, it's up to you whether you agree with me or not.

Easy:
00:03:328 (3) - Currently isn't at the very center. Just enable DS and drag it around until it's in the middle of the x-axis.
00:04:707 (1) - This slider's ending doesn't really fit with the vocals or the beginning of the drums. Consider moving this to 00:06:776, it really fits better in my opinion.
00:11:604 (3,1) - Those two aren't aligned nicely, if this isn't intended, I'd correct this. More like this
00:35:742 (2) - Move this a bit to the left for a better blanket.
00:38:501 (2) - I don't really like the slider's shape, it seems somewhat forced. I'd try something like this.
00:52:638 (3) - This slider's return point sounds awkward, I'd change it to something similar to this
01:02:638 (1,2) - Once again, those two are not aligned nicely.
01:05:397 (1) - Change this slider's shape slightly for a better blanket. Like this
01:27:121 (1) - Not really important, but why is this slider's end at 01:28:932 ?

Habi's Normal:
00:03:328 (1) - It might just be me, but this slider's end doesn't really seem to fit the background music. Consider making the slider end earlier.
Otherwise a prefectly nice diff, gz!

Mochi's Hard:
00:37:121 (6,7,8) - If you change the order from 6,7,8 to 6,8,7 I think it would be more fun to play.
01:02:294 (5,1) - Between those two, the pause is almost too long, it would play more fluently if you were to add a note in between those two.
01:24:880 (1,2,3) - Once again, I'd suggest to change the order from 1,2,3 to 1,3,2 for a play that's more fun.

Captin's Insane:
01:00:570 (3,4,5) - In my opinion, this would be much better to play
Almost flawless...

Celsius' Insane:
00:06:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those are borderline overmapping since the background accents accounting for this stream are almost nonexistent. I'd reconsider.
00:45:742 (4,1) - The gap between those two is rather unreasonable because of the conspicuous drum fill that is played in between those. Consider adding a hitcircle in there, like this.
00:52:983 (1,2,3) - Playing this can be rather stressful, try moving 00:53:156 (2) - to someplace like that.
01:12:983 (1,2) - I'd use Ctrl+G on this one since the original one is also kind of stressful to pull off.
01:25:914 (1) - I'd rotate this one for less stressful cursor movement, like this

Spring:
00:06:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, borderline overmapping.
00:10:052 (1,1,3) - Not a fan of those at all, since sliders that bow away from your cursor movement by 90 degrees aren't really something smooth to play.
00:26:604 (1,2,3,1,2) - You could really use a slower slider speed for those, since there is a huge emphasis on that part being calm and silent in comparison to the other parts before and after it.
The overlaps of 00:57:121 (1,3) - and the overlaps of 00:57:294 (2,4) - are not the same ones. This looks a bit odd as a result of this. If it's intended it's fine. If it's not, please fix.
01:17:121 (5,6) - Only mapping the vocals is not really a thing in diffs like spring, since you already mapped so many inconspicuous things, I wouldn't skip that bass drum hit. Try adding a hitcircle, like this.

That's it, sorry if my mod was too short or too focused on tiny details sometimes, but I'm trying my best

Please don't forget to give me some feedback on what suggestions you liked and what suggestions made you question my mapping knowledge

Edit: Don't forget that the Insane diff on the map for M4M is not done yet, please mainly look at Spicy's Extra diff, although you are welcome to look at the Insane diff in case you have some extra time <3

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,608 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2015-04-18T07:16:35+00:00

"NewIpas"

captin's Insane:

00:32:121 (1) - For consistency, add finish too at this slider head like what you did at 00:34:880 (1,1) - no finish sound here though
01:08:845 (4,5,6,7,8) - I think this is overmapped since the drum sound doesn't loud as you can put them (Stream) at here . Its absolutely no sense makes sense to me, i hear the drums fine

"Spicy Salsa"

Captin's Insane:
01:00:570 (3,4,5) - In my opinion, this would be much better to play feels fine to me, and would like to keep the distance down here
Almost flawless...

thanks, but no changes

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-04-18T08:39:42+00:00

Spicy Salsa wrote:
Hey there, M4M here, if you think my mod is not too bad

Celsius' Insane:
00:06:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those are borderline overmapping since the background accents accounting for this stream are almost nonexistent. I'd reconsider. what? yes I map to the background sound but I don't think it overmapped or something
00:45:742 (4,1) - The gap between those two is rather unreasonable because of the conspicuous drum fill that is played in between those. Consider adding a hitcircle in there, like this. that rhythm play weird for me here imo
00:52:983 (1,2,3) - Playing this can be rather stressful, try moving 00:53:156 (2) - to someplace like that. it's fine imo
01:12:983 (1,2) - I'd use Ctrl+G on this one since the original one is also kind of stressful to pull off. ctrl+g makel spacing and flow here 01:12:638 (2,1) - not good imo
01:25:914 (1) - I'd rotate this one for less stressful cursor movement, like this ok

That's it, sorry if my mod was too short or too focused on tiny details sometimes, but I'm trying my best
Please don't forget to give me some feedback on what suggestions you liked and what suggestions made you question my mapping knowledge

Edit: Don't forget that the Insane diff on the map for M4M is not done yet, please mainly look at Spicy's Extra diff, although you are welcome to look at the Insane diff in case you have some extra time <3

thanks for the mods

asdasd

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zhengyuanhang

58 posts

Joined February 2013

zhengyuanhang 2015-04-18T10:14:09+00:00

Hi, M4M

Easy
1. 00:04:707 (1,1) - Too close

Habi's Normal
1. Change AR into 5 for its rather complex patterns and the high BPM.
2. Change HP into 3.
3. I think it's better to add a slidertick hitsound (the same as a clap hitsound) at 01:14:018.
4. Add a spinner from 01:27:294 to 01:28:845.

Hard
1. Change AR into 8 for its rather complex patterns and the high BPM.
2. 00:17:811 (3) - This slider's velocity should be slightly increased and add a NC on it.

captin's Insane
1. Change AR into 9 for its rather complex patterns and the high BPM.

Spring
1. 01:10:570 (5,6,7,8,1) - Bad pattern of streams.
2. 01:25:570 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
3. 01:19:621 (6,1) - The space between them is too large.

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-04-18T18:00:40+00:00

Spicy Salsa

Spicy Salsa wrote:
Hey there, M4M here, if you think my mod is not too bad

I normally focus on small details when modding, if you don't really consider this helpful then you may ignore my post and not mod my map at all.
All of those statements represent my opinion and can differ from the opinions of other people, it's up to you whether you agree with me or not.

Easy:
00:03:328 (3) - Currently isn't at the very center. Just enable DS and drag it around until it's in the middle of the x-axis. okayy??
00:04:707 (1) - This slider's ending doesn't really fit with the vocals or the beginning of the drums. Consider moving this to 00:06:776, it really fits better in my opinion.no its fine
00:11:604 (3,1) - Those two aren't aligned nicely, if this isn't intended, I'd correct this. More like this
its fine
00:35:742 (2) - Move this a bit to the left for a better blanket.
this is fine alreadyu with the blanket
00:38:501 (2) - I don't really like the slider's shape, it seems somewhat forced. I'd try something like this.
no i like this shape
00:52:638 (3) - This slider's return point sounds awkward, I'd change it to something similar to this
i changed it a bit
01:02:638 (1,2) - Once again, those two are not aligned nicely.
its fine i think the way it is
01:05:397 (1) - Change this slider's shape slightly for a better blanket. Like this
adjusted a bit
01:27:121 (1) - Not really important, but why is this slider's end at 01:28:932 ?
no the one i have right now is perfect

Spring:
00:06:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, borderline overmapping. what? this is fine ...
00:10:052 (1,1,3) - Not a fan of those at all, since sliders that bow away from your cursor movement by 90 degrees aren't really something smooth to play.
i like this , so im gonna keep it no changes
00:26:604 (1,2,3,1,2) - You could really use a slower slider speed for those, since there is a huge emphasis on that part being calm and silent in comparison to the other parts before and after it. no its fine
The overlaps of 00:57:121 (1,3) - and the overlaps of 00:57:294 (2,4) - are not the same ones. This looks a bit odd as a result of this. If it's intended it's fine. If it's not, please fix. k fixed overlaps
01:17:121 (5,6) - Only mapping the vocals is not really a thing in diffs like spring, since you already mapped so many inconspicuous things, I wouldn't skip that bass drum hit. Try adding a hitcircle, like this.
maybe later

That's it, sorry if my mod was too short or too focused on tiny details sometimes, but I'm trying my best
Please don't forget to give me some feedback on what suggestions you liked and what suggestions made you question my mapping knowledge

Edit: Don't forget that the Insane diff on the map for M4M is not done yet, please mainly look at Spicy's Extra diff, although you are welcome to look at the Insane diff in case you have some extra time <3

Thanks for the mod

zhengyuanhang

zhengyuanhang wrote:
Hi, M4M

Easy
1. 00:04:707 (1,1) - Too close Should be okay i think

Spring
1. 01:10:570 (5,6,7,8,1) - Bad pattern of streams. the shape is fine..
2. 01:25:570 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
3. 01:19:621 (6,1) - The space between them is too large. its only 2.15x its fine

Thanks for the mod !

@captin1 I'll change the video offset soon ! Also I think I like AR 9 more

!

coua

coua 2015-04-19T07:40:34+00:00

M4M (Everyday World - Insane)

first mod - I'll try not to make it too subjective

Spring
00:10:052 (1) - Slider position feels awkward when coming from the note right behind it. Consider rotating it anti-clock wise to something like this?
01:12:294 (1) - Consider spacing the repeated notes away from each other for better visibility.
00:09:707 (6) - A tad bit overspaced
00:12:638 (7) - A tad bit overspaced
00:32:121 (1) - Slider position a bit awkward. Consider rotating it clock-wise.
00:44:363 (4) - Don't really like how its directly vertical from the previous note
00:46:776 (3) - Awkward spacing - add
01:03:501 (4) - Awkward spacing - add
01:12:121 (7) - Awkward placement - Notes from 4-7 in this combo are flowing to the left. Consider spacing the 7 more to the left instead of vertically downwards.
01:15:742 (5) - Awkward spacing - add
01:20:052 (3) - Consider making this face upwards and not down
01:26:432 (1) - Purely subjective - consider making these a bit more spaced and away from the 5-note burst right before it. Makes it more natural.
01:17:121 (5) - I wouldn't recommend skipping a note after this circle
Overall good map imo!

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-04-19T08:51:27+00:00

Chobo wrote:
M4M (Everyday World - Insane)

first mod - I'll try not to make it too subjective

Spring
00:10:052 (1) - Slider position feels awkward when coming from the note right behind it. Consider rotating it anti-clock wise to something like this? ]i like the way it is
01:12:294 (1) - Consider spacing the repeated notes away from each other for better visibility. this was on purpose
00:09:707 (6) - A tad bit overspaced spacing is fine here
00:12:638 (7) - A tad bit overspaced^^
00:32:121 (1) - Slider position a bit awkward. Consider rotating it clock-wise. no its to blanket sorry ;w;
00:44:363 (4) - Don't really like how its directly vertical from the previous note its for blanketing
00:46:776 (3) - Awkward spacing - add this part of the song is soft and doesnt have any thing to emphasis on
01:03:501 (4) - Awkward spacing - add ^^
01:12:121 (7) - Awkward placement - Notes from 4-7 in this combo are flowing to the left. Consider spacing the 7 more to the left instead of vertically downwards. no , i might ruin this pattern http://puu.sh/hj8V3/75ed29768f.jpg
01:15:742 (5) - Awkward spacing - add music doesnt change so no need
01:20:052 (3) - Consider making this face upwards and not down it follows the flow from the previous slider
01:26:432 (1) - Purely subjective - consider making these a bit more spaced and away from the 5-note burst right before it. Makes it more natural.theres already a tiny break in between so its fine
01:17:121 (5) - I wouldn't recommend skipping a note after this circle i think its fine

thanks for the mod !
Overall good map imo!

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2015-04-19T18:54:55+00:00

Hi~ Aerous

General

BG = 1454x768 > 1366x768 Please Change !!

Easy

00:03:328 (3) - Move to x256 y320 ( 00:00:570 (1,2) - It seems that more and better be symmetrical. )
00:04:707 (1) - End of the slider 00:06:776 (2) - To get into a drum beat.
00:21:087 (1) - no whistle and finish :3 00:23:845 (1) - Same ( I think many overlapping sounds bad )
00:33:501 - 00:36:259 - Add Whistle ( Now there is no sound. The sound seems that be better itneunge. )
00:47:466 (2) - Slider end 00:48:845 (1) - ( Missing Clap )
00:52:638 (2) - Bad snap. Better
01:04:018 (3) - 00:33:501~00:36:259 - Same

Habi's Normal

00:03:328 (1) - 이전 슬라이더들과 흐름이 맞게 1/2 슬라이더로 만드는게 더 좋은거같아.
00:17:121 (1) - 휘슬 지우는건 어때? 파랑색 2,4번에도 들어갔는데 4번이랑 그 다음에 바로 휘슬또들어가는데 자주들어갔다고 생각하는데 'ㅅ' ;;
00:33:328 (4) - 서클 추가에 클랩추가해주는게 박자에 더 알맞을꺼같아.
00:47:466 (3) - 슬라이더를 왼쪽 붉은색 선까지 이동. 그리고 00:47:983 (4) - 이 슬라이더를 반으로 줄여줘. 중간 하얀선에 끝나게. 그리고 00:48:501 (5) - 이걸 오른쪽 붉은선까지 이동. 내가 제안하는 박자.
01:27:121 (3) - 스핀이 더 좋지 않을까?

Mochi's Hard

00:06:432 (1,2) - Delete ( The sound of the beat is unheard. )
00:15:052 (3) - Better beat
00:34:880 (9,1) - 00:48:845 (8,1) - 01:17:638 (1,2) - Swap NC
00:49:535 (2) - Slider Start ( Missing Clap )
00:59:880 (1) - nazi ( !! )

captin's Insane

00:39:018 (1,2,3) - Add Whistle ( It seem to fit better the sound. )
00:45:225 (2,3,4) - Same
00:58:673 (2) - Same
01:08:932 (5,6,7,8) - Same
01:18:414 (4,5) - 01:21:690 (5,6,7) - Same

Celsius' Insane

01:08:932 (2) - Delete
01:25:397 (3) - ~ 01:25:914 (1) - Change Stream
01:25:914 (1) - Delete. Move to Spinner 01:26:345 (1) - > 01:25:914 (1) - Good!

Spring

00:44:707 (1) - Change Whistle

Good Map~ GL~ !!

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-04-20T02:05:30+00:00

[ Zzz ] wrote:
Hi~ Aerous

General
BG = 1454x768 > 1366x768 Please Change !! yea ill do it soon

Easy
00:03:328 (3) - Move to x256 y320 ( 00:00:570 (1,2) - It seems that more and better be symmetrical. )
changed
00:04:707 (1) - End of the slider 00:06:776 (2) - To get into a drum beat. no its fine
00:21:087 (1) - no whistle and finish :3 00:23:845 (1) - Same ( I think many overlapping sounds bad ) maybe later
00:33:501 - 00:36:259 - Add Whistle ( Now there is no sound. The sound seems that be better itneunge. ) kk added
00:47:466 (2) - Slider end 00:48:845 (1) - ( Missing Clap ) yup
00:52:638 (2) - Bad snap. Better i think its fine
01:04:018 (3) - 00:33:501~00:36:259 - Same ^

Spring
00:44:707 (1) - Change Whistle
i think its fine

Good Map~ GL~ !!

Thanks for the mod !

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-04-20T02:05:39+00:00

[ Zzz ] wrote:
Hi~ Aerous

Celsius' Insane
01:08:932 (2) - Delete I can still hear background sound so I guess it's fine
01:25:397 (3) - ~ 01:25:914 (1) - Change Stream it's fine imo
01:25:914 (1) - Delete. Move to Spinner 01:26:345 (1) - > 01:25:914 (1) - Good! I think mine is fine imo

Good Map~ GL~ !!

thanks for the mods

also @aerous, I changed this slider 01:25:914 (1) -

fdgg

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Aerous

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Aerous 2015-04-20T22:16:10+00:00

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Ringating

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Ringating 2015-04-21T04:13:40+00:00

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xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2015-04-23T21:58:11+00:00

[General]

captin1's name missing from tags
tv size in tags

[Easy]

01:02:638 (1,2) - parallel
01:05:397 (1,2) - blanket

[Normal]

00:03:328 (1) - end at 00:03:673
00:51:604 (1) - 00:52:983 (3) - use 1/1 repeat slider so you don't ignore clap
01:10:052 - follow this sound since you did with 01:09:363 (3) -

[Hard]

00:25:742 (2,3) - 3/4 gap with circles is really hard to notice. Should use 3/4 slider
00:41:087 (2,3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is really unintuitive and doesn't follow the music.

[captin's Insane]

00:04:794 (1,1) - 1/2 beat spinner gap is kinda iffy for the lowest insane in the mapset
00:52:294 (4,5) - I think slider before circle fits better so it has clickable objects on all white ticks (which are drums and vocals)

[CelsiusLK's Insane]

00:17:811 (5) - speed this up
00:20:570 (4) - ^
00:42:638 - don't ignore this sound
00:48:501 - it feels much better to ignore this sound
00:57:121 (1,2,3,4) - it's more natural to follow the violin
00:59:535 (3) - This should be sped up
01:09:363 (1) - ^ it's not really right to interpret these kinds of sounds as slowdown sliders, makes much more sense to speed them up
01:19:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this won't work well for a multitude of reasons. to the player, it looks like you grouped objects by sliders with circles stacked on them, and every group is 1/2 beat apart. in that case they expect 2 circles stacked before the slider, not 3, which really ruins polarity for single tappers. 3 circles between 1/2 sliders is when everything is 1/4 beat apart, in which case you need to arrange the objects to telegraph that clearly—connect the circles in a stream between the sliders like what you did at 01:20:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - . Pretty much most other ways will guarantee players in that skill range an extremely hard time with this part, as they'll be tricked into clicking one too many or too few times.
SPOILER

[Extra]
this mod is on an older version of your diff, but most should still apply

00:09:880 (7,1) - bad flow
00:14:190 (6,1) - also bad flow
00:15:914 (1,2) - stack
00:17:811 (8) - Why would you use a 1/4 repeating slider. This part asks for a big jump or fast 1/2 slider, depending on how you're feeling the music. The blue tick has nothing to map.
00:19:363 (4,1) - blanket both sides
00:20:914 (5) - delete, this circle doesn't belong at all. its existence implies that the nearly silent sound at 00:20:914 deserves the same emphasis as 00:20:570 (3,4) - before it
00:22:294 (4,1) - bad flow
00:23:673 (5) - what i said earlier about 00:20:914 (5). consider speeding 00:23:328 (4) - up
00:26:432 (5) - ^
00:26:604 (1,2,3,1,2) - use a lower SV for this section, since it's quiet
00:29:190 (5) - same things
00:36:087 (5,1) - flow
00:41:949 (1) - stack
00:51:604 (1) - ^
00:55:225 (2,3) - this transition is awkward
00:58:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - I highly recommend you delete these to give players a break rather than making the map hard for the sake of being hard. The sounds are barely audible at 25% playback rate here, yet 00:58:501 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - is mapped at the same intensity as the previous part.
01:06:604 (1,2) - bad blanket
01:19:621 (6,1) - for the love of god please don't do this unless you know what you're doing
01:22:638 (3,5) - stack

Better be careful with the QAT's increased standards.

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,608 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2015-04-23T22:09:47+00:00

@zhengyuanhang no thanks, prefer 8.7

[ Zzz ] wrote:
captin's Insane
00:39:018 (1,2,3) - Add Whistle ( It seem to fit better the sound. ) none done, my hitsounding style doesn't add drum beats to the music
00:45:225 (2,3,4) - Same
00:58:673 (2) - Same
01:08:932 (5,6,7,8) - Same
01:18:414 (4,5) - 01:21:690 (5,6,7) - Same

xxdeathx wrote:
[captin's Insane]
00:04:794 (1,1) - 1/2 beat spinner gap is kinda iffy for the lowest insane in the mapset not really
00:52:294 (4,5) - I think slider before circle fits better so it has clickable objects on all white ticks (which are drums and vocals) following bass drum hits and i like the current flow

go ahead and add tags aerous

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-04-24T04:41:49+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
[CelsiusLK's Insane]
00:17:811 (5) - speed this up I know but somehow it looks like it doesn't work for me since when you speed up the slider the slider length also increase too and it looks weird for me to have long slider length on these sudden beat or something like this and also I rarely speed up slider it work for me if it is something like slowdown then go speed up (dubstep wub wub style)
00:20:570 (4) - ^ ^
00:42:638 - don't ignore this sound ok
00:48:501 - it feels much better to ignore this sound I don't think so , feel pretty weird somehow if I skip this
00:57:121 (1,2,3,4) - it's more natural to follow the violin I think follow drum also fine here
00:59:535 (3) - This should be sped up I think slow sv help emphasis the beat here really well
01:09:363 (1) - ^ it's not really right to interpret these kinds of sounds as slowdown sliders, makes much more sense to speed them up ^ it make sense for me somehow since I kinda focus on the tone of the song here and it kinda something ..idk how to explain this but slowdown here fit the tone here really well imo
01:19:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this won't work well for a multitude of reasons. to the player, it looks like you grouped objects by sliders with circles stacked on them, and every group is 1/2 beat apart. in that case they expect 2 circles stacked before the slider, not 3, which really ruins polarity for single tappers. 3 circles between 1/2 sliders is when everything is 1/4 beat apart, in which case you need to arrange the objects to telegraph that clearly—connect the circles in a stream between the sliders like what you did at 01:20:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - . Pretty much most other ways will guarantee players in that skill range an extremely hard time with this part, as they'll be tricked into clicking one too many or too few times. yea ,ok
SPOILER

Thanks for the mods

also did self-mod and fix some slider transitions

osu file format v14

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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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460,104,52121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,324,52638,2,0,L|272:336,1,83.2499974594117,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,52983,5,0,0:0:0:0:
148,180,53156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,212,53328,2,0,L|420:190,1,83.2499974594117,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,72,53673,2,0,L|317:45,1,83.2499974594117,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,32,54018,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,32,54363,6,0,P|204:76|232:112,1,83.2499974594117,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,116,54621,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,116,54707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,212,54880,2,0,P|292:252|272:312,1,83.2499974594117,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,55138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,304,55225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,284,55311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,256,55397,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,228,55483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,55570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,172,55656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,148,55742,6,0,L|128:156,3,41.6249987297059,2|0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,124,56087,2,0,L|52:108,3,41.6249987297059,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,88,56432,5,2,0:0:0:0:
84,60,56518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,40,56604,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,40,56690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,44,56776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,52,56863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,48,56949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,36,57035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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440,220,57725,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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124,188,58156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,124,58328,1,4,0:0:0:0:
208,248,59363,5,8,0:0:0:0:
208,248,59449,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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300,140,60570,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,68,60742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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300,140,61259,6,0,P|212:212|228:288,1,185,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,256,61776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,64,61949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,64,62121,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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72,280,63328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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140,60,65742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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292,40,66604,6,0,B|268:136|340:136|288:252,1,185,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,152,67121,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,144,67294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,300,67466,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,320,67638,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,332,67811,2,0,L|404:220,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,76,68156,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,184,68328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,40,68501,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,168,68673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,228,68845,5,2,0:2:0:0:
212,212,68932,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,180,69018,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,148,69104,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,136,69190,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,152,69276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,176,69363,6,0,P|332:192|368:176,1,92.5,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,156,69794,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,156,69880,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,320,70052,6,0,P|388:324|350:343,1,92.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,364,70397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,328,70570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,328,70656,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,328,70742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,328,70828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,328,70914,6,0,L|128:228,1,92.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,71259,5,8,0:0:0:0:
252,180,71432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,140,71604,5,8,0:0:0:0:
276,56,71776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,268,71949,5,8,0:0:0:0:
340,128,72121,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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199,280,72638,2,0,L|171:192,1,92.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,56,72983,5,8,0:0:0:0:
432,136,73156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,180,73328,5,8,0:0:0:0:
180,8,73501,1,2,0:0:0:0:
199,280,73673,6,0,P|245:283|288:267,1,92.5,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,140,74018,5,8,0:0:0:0:
80,328,74190,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,196,74363,5,8,0:0:0:0:
199,281,74535,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,140,74707,5,8,0:0:0:0:
332,160,74880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,268,75052,5,8,0:0:0:0:
264,80,75225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,184,75397,5,8,0:0:0:0:
380,284,75570,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,64,75742,5,8,0:0:0:0:
444,220,75914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,268,76087,2,0,P|284:228|304:176,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,108,76432,5,4,0:0:0:0:
384,312,76604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,220,76776,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,220,76949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,368,77121,2,0,P|216:332|204:220,1,185,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,160,77638,1,2,0:0:0:0:
461,310,77811,6,0,L|444:220,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,160,78156,2,0,P|252:204|152:172,1,185,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,32,78673,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,32,78845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,144,79018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,72,79190,6,0,L|384:56,1,92.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,52,79449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,64,79535,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,88,79621,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,120,79707,2,0,P|440:164|448:228,1,92.5,4|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,236,79966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,264,80052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,296,80138,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,328,80225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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180,240,80828,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,220,80914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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104,100,81604,2,0,L|88:52,1,46.25,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,32,81776,2,0,L|210:22,1,46.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,108,81949,6,0,P|364:128|460:76,1,185,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,24,82466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,160,82638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,32,82811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,82983,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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464,144,83673,2,0,L|477:52,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,84018,2,0,L|445:323,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,84363,2,0,L|270:141,1,92.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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190,219,85742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,86345,12,0,88156,0:0:0:0:

MiKatokung

27 posts

Joined March 2013

MiKatokung 2015-04-24T13:33:28+00:00

Wow it's funny map and Not long will rank

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-04-28T04:34:22+00:00

00:26:949 - chata !

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-04-28T22:34:39+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
[General]
captin1's name missing from tags
tv size in tags
[Easy]
01:02:638 (1,2) - parallel
01:05:397 (1,2) - blanket
fixed all in here
[Extra]
this mod is on an older version of your diff, but most should still apply
00:09:880 (7,1) - bad flow fixed the flow hopefully
00:14:190 (6,1) - also bad flow^ same here
00:15:914 (1,2) - stack yea i did it for a few times already but idk it keeps on doing this
00:17:811 (8) - Why would you use a 1/4 repeating slider. This part asks for a big jump or fast 1/2 slider, depending on how you're feeling the music. The blue tick has nothing to map. make a jump here instead of a repeat slider
00:19:363 (4,1) - blanket both sides blanketed !
00:20:914 (5) - delete, this circle doesn't belong at all. its existence implies that the nearly silent sound at 00:20:914 deserves the same emphasis as 00:20:570 (3,4) - before it deleted before this mod
00:22:294 (4,1) - bad flow fixed flow i think ;w;
00:23:673 (5) - what i said earlier about 00:20:914 (5). consider speeding 00:23:328 (4) - up CTRL + G 4 and 5 and made 4 have a bigger distance because of finish hitsound --> http://puu.sh/huqX7/a1894caec2.jpg
00:26:432 (5) - ^ yup
00:26:604 (1,2,3,1,2) - use a lower SV for this section, since it's quiet used uhh 0.75x SV
00:29:190 (5) - same things deleted this circle
00:36:087 (5,1) - flowfixed
00:41:949 (1) - stack idk about this one
00:51:604 (1) - ^ ^
00:55:225 (2,3) - this transition is awkward Should be decent , but if other mods mention I'll change this for sure
00:58:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - I highly recommend you delete these to give players a break rather than making the map hard for the sake of being hard. The sounds are barely audible at 25% playback rate here, yet 00:58:501 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - is mapped at the same intensity as the previous part.
same as before , if one more mod mentions this I'll delete it
01:06:604 (1,2) - bad blanket Fixed
01:19:621 (6,1) - for the love of god please don't do this unless you know what you're doing yea whoops , forgot about this lol
01:22:638 (3,5) - stack stacked
Better be careful with the QAT's increased standards.

Thanks for the mod , and I'll be careful with QATs ! I'll update tags in the next update , forgot about captins name

Lazer

418 posts

Joined July 2012

Lazer 2015-05-08T18:29:43+00:00

From Astral Horizon Queue

Spring
00:32:638 (2,3) - You should move those up so that 00:32:121 (1) will blanket 00:32:983 (3)
00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - AAAAAH I CANT HEAR THE SONG ANYMORE
01:09:189 (9) - Put clap

Celsius' Insane
00:30:742 (1) - I suggest putting a circle here and putting a slider at 00:30:914

Mochi's Hard
00:30:570 (4) - NC
00:36:432 (5) - NC
00:39:018 (5) - NC
00:41:776 (4) - NC
00:44:535 (4) - NC + Make downbeat a clickable object
00:47:294 (4) - NC
00:48:845 (8) - NC
00:50:052 (3) - NC
00:52:811 (4) - NC
00:54:018 (7) - I suggest making it a 1/2 slider and placing a circle on downbeat
01:00:914 (4,1) - (1) blanket with (4), improve it a little
01:17:638 (1) - not nc here but 01:17:811 (2)
01:24:363 (4) - I suggest making it a 1/2 slider and placing a circle on downbeat, also NC on this one

Yeaaa

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-05-08T22:18:13+00:00

Lazer wrote:
From Astral Horizon Queue

Spring
00:32:638 (2,3) - You should move those up so that 00:32:121 (1) will blanket 00:32:983 (3) no its fine
00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - AAAAAH I CANT HEAR THE SONG ANYMORE lol no change here
01:09:189 (9) - Put clap k

Yeaaa

ty for mod

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-05-09T03:03:48+00:00

no change , it should be fine as it is since I want to emphasis vocal there and rhythm should be alright since transition here 00:30:742 (1,2) - is not that bad imo

thanks for the mods

KAIZ3R

68 posts

Joined November 2014

KAIZ3R 2015-05-11T11:10:06+00:00

Easy

Perfect no, mod needed.

Normal

Tip Section

01:02:638 (1) - Might look nice but will feel very weird for new players, it is a Normal difficulty in the end. Try this

Other than that it's just fine

Celsius' Insane

Tip Section

Try moving 00:44:707 (1) - a bit lower so it will make sense, like this

Spring

Just wow, perfect

Sorry for the short mod, it's just some maps are almost perfect

Good Luck!

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-05-11T14:48:08+00:00

uhh that make flow a bit weird imo , no change

thanks for the mods

edited: new page wut

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-05-12T08:46:27+00:00

Hi! M4M Queue

[General]

Audio Lead-In : +1430 ( all difficult ) minimum 2000 ms.
Uncheck Widescreen Support on all difficult except Celsius . (Cause this mapset doesn't have SB.)
err.. this is good.

[Easy]

00:11:604 (3,1) - same spacing like 00:10:914 (2,3) - maybe move to 140|276
00:21:087 (1) - umm.. three hitsound on tail? remove finish & whistle. keep clap cause same with another difficulty
00:26:604 (4) - 164|220 better.
00:49:880 (2) - move 1 grid up maybe?
00:52:638 (2) - sound weird over here.
SPOILER
sound's better if you make like this.
SPOILER
01:09:707 (3) - 400|168 better.
01:14:363 (2) - maybe make this slider same like 01:13:328 (4)
00:37:638 (1) - straighten with 00:38:501 (2) - maybe?
err.. this is good.

[Habi]

01:04:707 (4,1) - blanket?
00:16:432 (3) - move 1 grid up maybe?
00:59:535 (3) - 244|116 better.
err.. this is good.

[Mochi]

00:09:707 (4) - better move to 328|252
00:34:880 (9) - again. 304|24
00:37:294 (7,8) - Ctrl+G?
00:51:604 (1) - better move to 208|368
01:10:052 (3,4) - make same spacing like 00:19:363 (4,5)
01:25:914 (5) - NC?
err.. this is good.

[Captin]

00:09:190 (3) - move 1 grid down maybe?
00:13:673 (3) - better move to 472|208
00:24:707 (4) - emm same spacing like 00:19:190 (4,5,6) - maybe move to 316|164
00:33:501 (6) - move to 388|316 maybe?
00:42:983 (4) - better move to 192|316 . Same spacing like 00:42:121 (2,3)
00:52:294 (4) - again. 468|168
00:54:707 (2) - Ctrl+G?
00:58:501 (1,2) - err .. confusing spacing ._. move to 128|312 maybe?
01:20:138 (7) - move to 24|200 ? or something better ? make same spacing like 01:18:156 (3,4,5) - maybe?
err.. this is good.

[Celsius]

00:29:880 (2,5) - blanket?
00:30:052 (3,4) - this spacing kinda weird.. maybe move 56|176
00:36:776 (3,6) - stack?
01:16:087 (3) - NC?
01:19:707 (5) - again.
01:24:018 (3) - better move to 440|228 .
01:25:570 (4,5) - Ctrl+G?
err.. this is good.

[Spring]

00:23:501 (5,1) - stack?
00:25:052 (4) - better move to 212|152 maybe?
00:40:914 (2) - Ctrl+G?
00:46:776 (3,2) - stack?
00:47:466 (1,2) - blanket?
00:59:621 (4) - remove?
01:10:828 (8,1) - spacing please? it's different with 01:10:570 (5,6,7,8) - maybe move to 344|92
01:17:811 (1) - remove NC .. Start NC on 01:17:466 (6)
err.. this is good.

GoodLuck!

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-05-12T10:11:53+00:00

Sky Trias wrote:
Hi! M4M Queue

[Celsius]
00:29:880 (2,5) - blanket? looks fine
00:30:052 (3,4) - this spacing kinda weird.. maybe move 56|176 current one is fine imo
00:36:776 (3,6) - stack? uhh no , current one is fine as it is imo
01:16:087 (3) - NC? no,not really need to nc there imo cus music not changing much
01:19:707 (5) - again. this is fine imo I don't want to nc much here
01:24:018 (3) - better move to 440|228 . uuhh ok
01:25:570 (4,5) - Ctrl+G? that make flow weird imo
err.. this is good.
GoodLuck!

thanks for the mods

@aerous I already added audioleadin to my diff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Harumodoki.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1430
PreviewTime: 59880
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Haru Modoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Aerous
Version:Celsius' Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku my teen romantic snafu 2 oregairu captin1 momochikun habiholic celsiuslk tv size
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Mio_chan

172 posts

Joined July 2010

Mio_chan 2015-05-12T15:21:58+00:00

Doing a M4M for your queue :3

Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Green mods are comments only.

[Spring]
00:23:501 (5) – making this a circle like you did in 00:20:742 -?
00:55:225 (2,3) – this pattern look nice but it plays hard imo, the actual DS between (2) and (3) during gameplay is much larger than the other part of this slider jump pattern and moreover the movement from (2) to (3) to (4) does not flow very well, consider reducing the DS a bit?
01:17:466 (6) – NC here instead of 01:17:810 (1) -?, if you do that, put NC in 01:18:501 (4) –

[captin’s Insane]
The slider ticks in intro is quite noisy imo
00:19:449 (6) – I think this should start at 00:19:363 (5) –instead, since there is nothing in the music here same applies to 00:24:880 –
00:45:742 (6) – circles suits here better imo, due to the drum fill in
01:17:466 (5) – NC on here instead?
01:20:138 (7,8) – stack them under (6)?

[Celsius’ Insane]
The slider ticks in intro is quite noisy imo
Nothing else I can find… ;_;

[Mochi’s Hard]
00:09:880 (5) – I find this stack quite odd and not necessary 0.0
00:25:742 (2,3) – change it to slider? Quite easy to misread due to low AR
01:08:156 (1) – can make it to a blanket imo
I personally think that the stacking is too much in this diff (because of the low AR…)

[Habi’s Normal]
I like this normal
Please don’t punch me for the spacing mod… you know these days the spacing for normal and easy is rather strict

SPOILER

00:24:363 (2) – 00:31:776 (6) - 00:34:880 (3) - 00:49:363 (2) -01:05:914 (2) - 01:21:259 (4) - 01:25:225 (2) –

00:51:604 (1,3) – I think all beats on 1/1 suits music better, since there is vocal on the empty white line
01:13:673 (1) – same as above, due to snare drum

[Easy]
00:21:087 (1) – remove finish on slider end
01:09:707 (3,4) –I suggest merging this into a single slider since the beat is quite hard to play for an easy

I will give a star because I like some of the diff

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

pkk 2015-05-20T01:53:01+00:00

I believe

Hard

696 posts

Joined February 2013

Hard 2015-05-22T17:12:23+00:00

yo. From my queue. Please rate my mod when I finished.

[Spring]

00:02:638 (4) - this 'n' sound is emphasized and a bit louder and i think you should show that in the map and not use the sliders like you did before. i suggest you choose a single circle and change the slider's end into one too. OR you add a jump here. but the higher note is something that i have to feel, hope you understand my weird explanation :/
00:06:432 (5) - how about you add a soft whistle here? it would fit because the drum there is a little bit stronger. you could also make the volume for this one a bit louder and change it for the next one again. that's just some nice effect
00:07:120 (5,6) - change the clap to a drum-finish because the drums change from toms to floor drum.
00:08:673 (6,1,2,3) - this jump doesn't feel natural. how about you change this the following way. you get the little flowbreak you had before but also make it a double-triangle-clockwise pattern and this is somehow nicer:
SPOILER
00:12:638 (7,1) - again this feels a bit weird. maybe ctrl + h 1 and place it more on the left
00:26:259 (4) - make a cool effect with this and add some jumpy-slider-thingu like this:
SPOILER
00:39:880 (1,2,3,4) - this sudden 1/3 stream could be difficult to follow because there hasn't been something like this before and stuff.
00:50:225 (1) - i think you should ctrl + g this slider. because of 00:49:535 (3) - you got circular-clockwise flow here and you suddenly change it with that slider and it plays weird. if you ctrl + it feels lighter. you'd also have to ctrl +g 00:50:570 (2) - if you do this

[Celsius' Insane]

00:05:397 (2,3) - i think you could add some hitsound on the sliderend of 2 and 3 here (a whistle or whatever)
00:13:501 (3,4,5) - a jump after a parallel pattern always feels off. so also this time. mabe you should curve the 3 circles before a bit or somehow change like this:
SPOILER
00:31:604 (4,5,6) - this flows weird. maybe ctrl + g 5 and 6 so you get clockwise-flow and not 2 sudden changes in direction in such a short time
00:34:363 (4,5,1) - again. this feels off because... wait... i'll draw something:
SPOILER

as you can see the direction changes 4 times with 4 objects. (red is clockwise and blue is anti-clockwise) this doesn't feel nice and somehow hectic and weird. how about you make something like this instead:
SPOILER
now the whole thing plays smoother
01:05:914 (3) - ctrl + g for interesting flowbreak-flow and it would fit the music.
01:23:156 (6,1) - this jump doesn't fit. please change it. nothing in the music calls for something like this and it plays weird as hell

[captin's Insane]

again I mod a guest difficulty you made. you're everywhere. that's somehow creepy.
00:02:638 (4) - like i said before in another difficulty (but since this is a guest i'll say it again) the 'n'-sound and the 'do' sound after this are a bit stronger than the sliders before and i think this should show in the map. maybe make a jump here or change this slider into two circles
00:30:914 (1,2,3) - this is okay but i got a nice idea that would fit, be a bit more interesting and still flow nice. how about you stack the beginning of slider 3 with circle 1 and rotate 3 a bit. you got clockwise flow before and this way you also put in a forth-and-back motion. this would also emphasize the jump after this and just feel cool. like this:
SPOILER
00:33:328 (5,6) - maybe ctrl+ g for flow here?
nice difficulty

[Mochi's Hard]

00:20:570 (3) - i think both guitar sounds have the same strength, so about you change this slider into two stacking circles? it would fit and also create some cool effect.
00:23:328 (3,1) - this could be a bit too difficult to read for a hard
00:34:018 (7) - this feels wrong because the really strong finish-guitar sound is on a sliderend. i think this strong sound should be tapped. this confused me...

[Habi's Normal]

seems fine to me

[Easy]

seems fine

hope i could help you a bit~

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-05-25T23:01:01+00:00

Sky (m4m)

Sky Trias wrote:
Hi! M4M Queue

[General]
Audio Lead-In : +1430 ( all difficult ) minimum 2000 ms.
Uncheck Widescreen Support on all difficult except Celsius . (Cause this mapset doesn't have SB.)
err.. this is good.
ok added audio + unchecked widescreen
[Easy]
00:11:604 (3,1) - same spacing like 00:10:914 (2,3) - maybe move to 140|276 i dont wanan ruin this
00:21:087 (1) - umm.. three hitsound on tail? remove finish & whistle. keep clap cause same with another difficulty ok
00:26:604 (4) - 164|220 better. its fine
00:49:880 (2) - move 1 grid up maybe? no
00:52:638 (2) - sound weird over here. its fine i thinkk with the slider
SPOILER
sound's better if you make like this.
SPOILER
01:09:707 (3) - 400|168 better. i like the way it is right now
01:14:363 (2) - maybe make this slider same like 01:13:328 (4) ok
00:37:638 (1) - straighten with 00:38:501 (2) - maybe? yup !
err.. this is good.
[Spring]
00:23:501 (5,1) - stack? no one purpose
00:25:052 (4) - better move to 212|152 maybe? i think its fine as it is now
00:40:914 (2) - Ctrl+G? i didnt ctrl + g instead i just rearranged it a bit so i emphasis the drum on 3
00:46:776 (3,2) - stack? no i like the way it is right now
00:47:466 (1,2) - blanket? its fine with the blanket
00:59:621 (4) - remove? deleted the whole part
01:10:828 (8,1) - spacing please? it's different with 01:10:570 (5,6,7,8) - maybe move to 344|92 nice catch
01:17:811 (1) - remove NC .. Start NC on 01:17:466 (6)k
err.. this is good.
GoodLuck!

Mio (m4m)

Mio_chan wrote:
Doing a M4M for your queue :3

Black mods are suggestions only
Blue mods are recommended to fix, or places need to pay attention to
Green mods are comments only.

[Spring]
00:23:501 (5) – making this a circle like you did in 00:20:742 -? this fits the music perfectly
00:55:225 (2,3) – this pattern look nice but it plays hard imo, the actual DS between (2) and (3) during gameplay is much larger than the other part of this slider jump pattern and moreover the movement from (2) to (3) to (4) does not flow very well, consider reducing the DS a bit?
maybe if other mods mention this ill change
01:17:466 (6) – NC here instead of 01:17:810 (1) -?, if you do that, put NC in 01:18:501 (4) – changed from other mod !

[Easy]
00:21:087 (1) – remove finish on slider end changed from other mod
01:09:707 (3,4) –I suggest merging this into a single slider since the beat is quite hard to play for an easy no its fine

I will give a star because I like some of the diff

Hard

Hard wrote:
yo. From my queue. Please rate my mod when I finished.

[Spring]

00:02:638 (4) - this 'n' sound is emphasized and a bit louder and i think you should show that in the map and not use the sliders like you did before. i suggest you choose a single circle and change the slider's end into one too. OR you add a jump here. but the higher note is something that i have to feel, hope you understand my weird explanation :/ increased the distance here !
00:06:432 (5) - how about you add a soft whistle here? it would fit because the drum there is a little bit stronger. you could also make the volume for this one a bit louder and change it for the next one again. that's just some nice effect
added whistle
00:07:120 (5,6) - change the clap to a drum-finish because the drums change from toms to floor drum.
no its fine here
00:08:673 (6,1,2,3) - this jump doesn't feel natural. how about you change this the following way. you get the little flowbreak you had before but also make it a double-triangle-clockwise pattern and this is somehow nicer:
SPOILER
changed to what you told me to do
00:12:638 (7,1) - again this feels a bit weird. maybe ctrl + h 1 and place it more on the left
mhm maybe but for now ill keep it !
00:26:259 (4) - make a cool effect with this and add some jumpy-slider-thingu like this:
SPOILER
i see what you did there , but might be overkill with the jump
00:39:880 (1,2,3,4) - this sudden 1/3 stream could be difficult to follow because there hasn't been something like this before and stuff.
uhh i changed this part from a whole stream to half stream into repeat sldier
00:50:225 (1) - i think you should ctrl + g this slider. because of 00:49:535 (3) - you got circular-clockwise flow here and you suddenly change it with that slider and it plays weird. if you ctrl + it feels lighter. you'd also have to ctrl +g 00:50:570 (2) - if you do this
ok
hope i could help you a bit~

Thanks for the mods !

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-05-26T15:12:51+00:00

Hard wrote:
yo. From my queue. Please rate my mod when I finished.

[Celsius' Insane]

00:05:397 (2,3) - i think you could add some hitsound on the sliderend of 2 and 3 here (a whistle or whatever) it doesn't sound right to me there so I leave it empty like that
00:13:501 (3,4,5) - a jump after a parallel pattern always feels off. so also this time. mabe you should curve the 3 circles before a bit or somehow change like this:
SPOILER
yea fixed
00:31:604 (4,5,6) - this flows weird. maybe ctrl + g 5 and 6 so you get clockwise-flow and not 2 sudden changes in direction in such a short time no , I prefer current one the sudden change there kinda fit the song there where it just feel a bit sudden or something here 00:31:604 (4,5) -
00:34:363 (4,5,1) - again. this feels off because... wait... i'll draw something:
SPOILER

as you can see the direction changes 4 times with 4 objects. (red is clockwise and blue is anti-clockwise) this doesn't feel nice and somehow hectic and weird. how about you make something like this instead:
SPOILER
now the whole thing plays smoother fixed on my own
01:05:914 (3) - ctrl + g for interesting flowbreak-flow and it would fit the music. no, current one fit more imo
01:23:156 (6,1) - this jump doesn't fit. please change it. nothing in the music calls for something like this and it plays weird as hell fixed
hope i could help you a bit~

thanks for the mod

dot

osu file format v14

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ganad

277 posts

Joined March 2012

ganad 2015-06-03T08:35:27+00:00

Hi I'm a pretty noob modder, and I'm still learning so don't expect too much, but I'll try my best to assist you

I can only mod easy to hard so I didn't mod insane soz

Most of the things i will say will just be suggestions, so yeah
Just experiment and see if you like it

EASY
00:39:535 (3) I think you should try and line this slider with the previous one 00:38:501 (2) (line them up or just bend the (2) slider so that it does)

00:52:638 (2) It sounded like something was off, so i played around with it and came up with a reverse slider 1/1 i think at the start of 00:52:638 and 1/1 slider at 00:53:673

01:08:845 (2) It sounds a bit to long so i tried to shortened it and sounded slightly better I think

HABI'S NORMAL
00:03:328 (1) It kinda sound off to me, maybe shorten it by 1/2 a beat so on the white tick

00:07:811 The pause was to long imo, you could lengthen the spinner or bring the slider back (1) and make it a reverse or just add a beat circle

00:42:638 (3) maybe alter it to make it a blanket or just somehow make it connect to 00:43:328 (1)

Can't mod the other diffs.

I'm sorry I can't be of much more help, I just can't comprehend it

This mapset is looking really good tho.
Good luck and wish for the best

P.S. I think the difficulty jump from normal to hard might be a bit too much ( I heard this from another modder, just wanted to get that out there)

Misure

953 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2015-06-03T16:32:49+00:00

Hello~
Got idea from Cloud's queue
(I'm new in modding,if I say something wrong,just ignore~

)

[General]

I think the BG can be more moe >.<
[Easy]

00:04:018 - better add a note here
00:23:845 (1) - hitsound on the slider?I think you are not on purpose.
00:39:535 (3) - curve better surely
00:42:638 (4) - curve better
and this is my 2pc score <3 (the first pc missed at the very last)

Image

[Habi's Normal]

I think all OK!
Maybe add a spinner at the last? whatever
[Mochi's Hard]
No BG,or just my problem?
00:04:880 - spinner starts at this point better
00:26:001 (3,4) - a little difficult in a Hard diff,delete 00:26:001 (3) - better
00:33:673 (6) - 00:34:535 (8) - 00:35:742 (3) -

Image

and 00:35:742 (3) stack,hope you can understand

00:41:604 (3,4) - ctrl+G and move
00:59:880 (1) - (100,192)better
01:19:707 (3) - ctrl+G
[Celsius' Insane]

00:01:949 (3,4) - maybe they can keep a distance
00:17:121 (4,5,6,7,1) - not straight?
00:20:225 (2) - maybe a llittle curve better
00:28:328 (1) - maybe (104,272),I think keep it far from 00:27:638 (3) - is better
00:45:742 (5,6) - maybe stack is not a good choice
00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - flow of this part is a little awkward
00:59:535 (1) - a high speed slider is cool I think
[captin's Insane]

00:01:949 (3) - a little uncomfortable,maybe (124,128) better?
00:17:121 - maybe better

00:18:328 (1) - ctrl+G for I think 1 flows to 2 and 3
00:37:294 (5) - curve more
00:38:673 (4) - (8,212)
00:39:880 (6) - ctrl+G
00:50:052 (1) - change red point to white(hope express clearly)because it's a littlle sudden now
00:50:914 (3) - curve direction like 2
00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - a little irregular
00:58:501 - how about like this

01:00:225 (2) - 01:00:914 (5) - 01:01:604 (2) - curve
01:22:294 (2) - (267,240)
01:22:983 (5) - (168,344)
[Spring]

00:01:949 (3) - rotate -9°
00:07:983 (3) - (300,112)?
00:14:363 (1) - 00:14:707 (2) - ctrl+G
00:22:466 (1) - ctrl+H and move to (296,224)or around
00:27:121 (2) - ctrl+G
00:40:570 (1) - start point to (152,64)
00:57:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move to right more
01:23:328 (1) - curve
01:25:225 (2,3) - I think they are a little far

Maybe my modding is poor but
Good luck to you!

Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2015-06-04T01:58:24+00:00

Hi from CloudSplash's modding company (not really)~

General

@captin1 @HabiHolic: Widescreen Support is enable in your diffs, and Aerous' Easy as well. (It's time to fix it, lol)
@Momochikun: Your BG is lost, and your tag is inconsistent with others.
I dunno whether it's rankable if your difficulties have different kiai time setting.

Spring

00:08:501 (5,6) - Swap hitsound addition plz.
00:09:707 (6,7) - Swap hitsound. Drum sound does not change until 00:09:880 - ,therefore hitsound consistency is critical here. (like what you do on 00:12:466 (6,7,1) - )
00:16:776 (4) - I prefer a straight slider here, looks better.
00:25:138 - Here is a kick sound, you'd better adjust the pattern to follow it. Cuz you follow this on 00:19:621 -
00:41:259 (3) - try ctrl+g?
00:47:983 (2,3,4,1) - Try this (2 is a duplicate of 1 and is rotated by 180) for a nicer blanket.
SPOILER
00:52:552 - Change the rhythm into this, would follow the drum and vocal better.
SPOILER
00:59:363 - Just suggestion: add a triplet here.
01:08:931 (6) - Suggest you add a whistle or drum whistle on this. To make your overmap sounds more natural.
01:25:570 (3) - Replace your addition into Drum finish. This would make a better transition between drum clap and your whistle.

Celsius' Insane

From 00:00:570 - to 00:06:087 - Suggest you use whstle addition on every two white ticks (instead of one).
01:07:121 (2) - Just my taste: try this?
SPOILER

Your mapping style is what i am really happy with. (I really enjoy that Kawaru Mirai) Sorry if i can't help much here.

captin's Insane

From 00:00:570 - to 00:06:087 - Suggest you use whstle addition on every two white ticks (instead of one).
00:31:776 (5) - Just my suggestion: overmap here as a triplet, in order to distinguish this from 00:20:742 (5) - (whose drum sound is different)
00:34:535 (4) - 00:37:294 (5) - ^
00:58:673 (2,3) - Try this. I think your current pattern is not relyable to anyting in the song. This at least follows something. (i dunno the name of this sound but if you play it with 25% speed you could clearly hear it)
SPOILER

Mochi's Hard

00:11:949 (2) - Whistle on the head
00:15:397 (4) - Drum finish would be better
00:25:742 (2,3) - Suggest compress 2 circles into a slider. I feel from 2 to 3,4 is a bit hard to identify while testplay.
00:33:673 (6,7) - Blank 4 tail with 5, or avoid any blanket here. Current one looks not that awesome, really......
00:41:604 (3,4) - Swap the order of slider and circle. You don't follow vocal or something else here but I feel it's really juggling while testplay.

Vhy's Normal

00:11:604 (4,5) - Inconsistent distance.

Easy

00:54:018 (3) - Inconsistent distance

That's all my mod. Hope this could help.

Good luck~

GiantZarz

183 posts

Joined January 2014

GiantZarz 2015-06-04T14:26:44+00:00

From Mod Value Exchange

General

OK

Easy

00:04:707 (1) - Slider end should be at 00:06:087
00:52:638 (2) - Feel like reverse should be at 00:52:983 and add a note at 00:53:673
01:01:259 (3) - It would be more fit if you do a 1/4 reverse slider
01:05:397 (1,2,3) - Try this
SPOILER
01:08:156 (1,2,3,4) - Try this
SPOILER

Habi's Normal

00:03:328 (1,2) - Doesn't Fit
00:07:811 - Add a note here,It feels to empty
00:34:363 (2) - Better do 1/2 with reverse
01:04:707 (4) - Move it to 01:04:535 and extend it

Mochi's Hard

01:00:397 - Add a note here

captin's Insane

00:13:242 - Add a note here to be co nsistent with other patterns

Celsius' Insane

OK

Spring

00:44:707 (1) - No need for clap
00:54:363 to 00:57:983 - So loud, lower the volume down

Good Luck!

SoGa

236 posts

Joined June 2013

SoGa 2015-06-04T23:03:28+00:00

General

Well , i don't think u need widescreen support on , maybe just disable it.

[Easy]

00:09:535 (1,3) - Switch Nc
00:21:087 (1) - Slider head = Finish is ok , 3 hitsounds join is too noisy and terrible,and i dont think the whole slider body need hitsound ,sound annoying.pls delete those clap and hitsound on the slider body
00:40:570 (1) - Actually i want you to decrease the volume here instead of increasing it.Maybe set it to 50% or something lower
00:50:570 (3) - Maybe change this to a 1/2 reverse ? I think this way fit the song more lmao.and then turn this to a 2/1slider 00:51:604 (1) -
00:52:638 (2) - I dont think this one fit enough , maybe change it like a 1/1 then 3 notes
01:05:397 (1,2) - Nazi , not perfect blanket

[Habi's Normal]

00:59:535 (3,1) - Nazi , why won't u blanket them ;w;
01:04:018 (3,4,5) - Maybe u can try this rhythm ?
01:05:397 (1,2,3) - I think this way fit the song more in though,By moving 01:06:432 (3) - half gap to the right and switch it as a note , image below

[Mochi's Hard]

00:09:535 (3,4,5) - Keep this in same ds will look better ,maybe
i's just me or the set change the bg for this set?becuz i dont see a bg of this set after update the map

Spring

00:07:294 (1,3) - U made such a shape and didnt blanket them waste orz
00:26:604 (1) - Lower the volume pls , this part suppose to be a very silence part tho.and the current volume is just making it sound weird with such high volume
00:22:983 (2) - Maybe chang this to a 1/2 slider like other diffs do and delete this note .00:23:156 (3) - sound weird
00:44:707 (1,2,3) - Personal recommendation is to make this shape more aesthetic and then blanket them .example:
00:47:121 (4) - Stack this one to 00:47:983 (2) - slider tail
00:54:449 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i want to say this hitsound is kinda noisy , pls change a clap or either decrease the volume a little bit , we aren't playing a Gatlin
01:02:638 (1) - Ctrl + G better tho.
01:11:949 (6,7) - Ctrl + G
01:19:707 (1) - Unnecessary Finish here
01:20:397 (5) - ^ Noisy
01:24:707 (1) - Ctrl + G . i think the current flow is awkward
01:25:225 (2) - If u did above one and then change this Ctrl + G too .after u done , u will get such pattern

End

Osuology

528 posts

Joined February 2014

Osuology 2015-06-05T00:12:54+00:00

Mod from ModCoin queue

[General]
Tags are conflicting?
Filesize exceeds 24 mb, change video or audio bitrate

[Mochi's Hard]
You have a lot of overlaps, I like overlaps, but most people don't, so consider changing maybe if you have probs with this later.
00:17:121 (1) - Make this go to the next blue tick sounds better in accord with guitar.
The doubles are also hard, maybe change if possible, like using sliders instead.

[captin's Insane]
00:19:190 (4) - this doesn't need to be here, kinda makes the double non prevalent (these keep happening later too, I won't mention the rest)
01:25:397 (3,4,5) - While it might be symmetrical, it doesn't play well IMO. Possible change here, not required tho.

[Celsius' Insane]
00:54:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Stream is excessive, maybe shorten a little bit, using sliders

[Spring]
00:09:363 (4) - This took me by surprise, I think it's fine, just surprised my first time.
00:58:328 (7) - Put a spinner until a beat before the note after this one.
01:08:845 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - No stream in the background.

01:19:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Again you sometimes map to nothing.

Wow, this is derserving of rank after this and some stuff from BNs. Good work guys!

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2015-06-10T19:28:34+00:00

Hi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

Missing bg in Mochi's Hard

[Spring]

00:01:949 (3,4) - It feels like a random placement/shape. Try to copy 00:01:259 (2) -, Ctrl+H,J for 00:01:949 (3) - this. and copy 00:01:949 (3) - this slider, Ctrl+H for 00:02:638 (4) -
SPOILER
00:26:604 (1) - Move to x428 y63 for blanket
00:31:259 (3) - a bit close that spacing 00:31:087 (2,3) - and flow isn't good. so Try to move 00:31:259 (3) - this slider in there. would be better than current imo.
SPOILER
00:31:259 (3,4,5,6) - Not bad that flow, but I want to change that this jump pattern for more improve flow. Try this one.
SPOILER
00:44:707 (1,2,3,4) - You can improve this placement
SPOILER

[Celsius' Insane]

00:11:949 (2) - Why not use copy of 00:11:604 (1) - slider :3
SPOILER

[captin's Insane]

Good.

[Mochi's Hard]

00:34:880 (9,1) - Swap NC

[Habi's Normal]

Please use soft-hitwhistle more. You can add it to match the bass sound e.g.00:08:156 - 00:08:845 - 00:09:535 - 00:10:397 - 00:10:914 - 00:11:604 - and so on.

00:03:328 (1) - There is no sound in red tick. so use 1/2 slider better instead of it.
00:19:190 (3) - Remove clap from sldier tail. and Add clap to 00:19:707 (4) - slider head.
00:21:949 (3,4) - ^ same. Try to listen to the music carefully, snare sound in 00:22:466 - there. not 00:22:294 -
00:24:707 (3,1) - ^
00:34:363 (2,3) - a bit wrong spacing. Please use 1.10x
01:16:776 (2,4) - Add clap to slider head.
01:25:225 (2) - Please fix that spacing.

[Easy]

00:06:776 - It feels so empty here. Try to add 1/1 slider.
00:09:535 (1) - Clap + finish sound is too big. Please remove clap or lower the volume.
00:12:294 (1) - ^ same
00:21:087 (1) - ^ omg all hitsounds o_o and remove finish and whistle from slider body.
00:23:845 (1) - ^
00:52:638 (2) - It's werid rhythm. Slider repeat doesn't follow any sound. so Try this rhythm.

Good luck!

Natsu

8,100 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2015-06-12T03:05:49+00:00

Yo, captin1's request

General:

Check all those mods lol
can everyone end their diff in 01:28:845 - ??

Spring:

This diff play jsut fine with AR9 there is not need for the .2
00:07:294 (1,3) - 00:07:294 (1,4) - I suppose that you tryed to blank those objects, so improve them:
SPOILER
00:15:052 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - again bad blanket, redo the stream, use the tool compose > convert slider to stream so you can do a better blanket here
00:15:914 (1,2) - nazi, stack its off
00:16:776 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same blanket problem, since most of your streams looks like you did them circle by circle, use the tool its better
00:23:501 (5,1) - I like your idea, but its better if you stacks the tail perfect, actually looks really bad in game
00:36:949 (3) - this shouldn't be mapped as circle, since you lost the emphasis of 00:37:121 (4,5,6) - by doing that, so do a slider with 00:36:776 (2,3) - instead
00:38:156 (2,3) - your blankets need improve, yeah should be nice if you check your blankets in all this diff, they are off
00:39:880 (1,2,3) - use a slider instead, playing 1/3 in a 1/4 song feels really bad and make people lost their rhythm, a slider will be a better idea as the other diffs do
00:47:466 (1,2) - this pattern can be better, looks a bit random to be honest
00:54:966 (8,1,2,3,4) - first to all your 1/4 jumps start with too big spacing and feels uncomfortable to play, also can be confused with 1/2 spacing, so reduce a bit the spacing at the beginning, second 00:55:742 (1,2,3,4) - I still don't understan why you are starting to use double repeat sliders, a single circle stream or 1/4 sliders (without repeat will feel alot better when playing) third 00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - redo your hitsounds here that clap spam its kinda annoying, I think you should redo all this stream sections, hitsounds, rhythm and placement
00:58:501 atleast add a spinner or do something like captin1 did
01:19:707 (1,2) - spacing its too big, since is the firts 1/4 jump at this pattern, should use less spacing, imo

captin's Insane:

00:58:156 (6,7,1) - this make me fail so bad when testing , 6,7 reduce spacing or add increase spacing in 7,1

Celsius' Insane:

00:06:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I have no feedback when clicking this stream, add whistles like spring diff did, also like you did here 00:17:121 (4,5,6,7) -
00:25:052 (5) - nothing in the music here, just do a slider in 00:24:880 (4) - until 00:25:138 -
00:54:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try to hitsound this better, I feel it too simple >:
00:59:535 (1) - music its in 1/2, there is nothing to map at blue tick, pls dont
01:09:363 (1) - eh I don't get why the slowdown here, it doesn't fit the song tbh just map at normal speed here.
01:11:259 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - don't spam combos pls, you just mess up the hp drain in all your diff, also this kind of pattern are easy to read without doing that

Mochi's Hard:

00:06:432 (1,2) - better remove those objects, or make them audible.
00:25:742 (2,3) - just use a slider, your actually transition its really hard to get, I did hit 100 at 3, cuz its weird to start in a blue tick to be honest

Habi's Normal:

00:12:121 (5,6) - stack
At a spinner in the end

Easy:

00:37:121 (3,1) - is this supposed to be a blanket?
so many straight sliders >:

mmm reply to this and lets see what I can do here

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-06-12T04:03:01+00:00

Misure wrote:
Hello~
Got idea from Cloud's queue
(I'm new in modding,if I say something wrong,just ignore~ )

[General]

I think the BG can be more moe >.< same

[Celsius' Insane]

00:01:949 (3,4) - maybe they can keep a distance looks fine
00:17:121 (4,5,6,7,1) - not straight? o
00:20:225 (2) - maybe a llittle curve better u
00:28:328 (1) - maybe (104,272),I think keep it far from 00:27:638 (3) - is better looks fine
00:45:742 (5,6) - maybe stack is not a good choice bulidup for nice jumps feeling tho
00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - flow of this part is a little awkward not really imo
00:59:535 (1) - a high speed slider is cool I think slow speed is nice and fit the tone of song tho

Maybe my modding is poor but same
Good luck to you!

Adol Christin wrote:
Hi from CloudSplash's modding company (not really)~ same

Celsius' Insane
From 00:00:570 - to 00:06:087 - Suggest you use whstle addition on every two white ticks (instead of one). one is nice I think not sound too much or too low , music here is pretty calm tho so current is fitted imo
01:07:121 (2) - Just my taste: try this?
SPOILER
I prefer current one
Your mapping style is what i am really happy with. (I really enjoy that Kawaru Mirai) Sorry if i can't help much here.

That's all my mod. Hope this could help. same

Good luck~

Osuology wrote:
[Celsius' Insane]
00:54:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Stream is excessive, maybe shorten a little bit, using sliders I think the stream play fine here not really intense that much imo and it follow the beat tho

Wow, this is derserving of rank after this and some stuff from BNs. Good work guys!

Guy wrote:
Hi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[Celsius' Insane]
00:11:949 (2) - Why not use copy of 00:11:604 (1) - slider :3 I prefer current one since it make the flow nice and instresting imo
SPOILER

Good luck!

Natsu wrote:
Yo, captin1's request

General:

Check all those mods lol
can everyone end their diff in 01:28:845 - ?? yea
Celsius' Insane:

00:06:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I have no feedback when clicking this stream, add whistles like spring diff did, also like you did here 00:17:121 (4,5,6,7) - k
00:25:052 (5) - nothing in the music here, just do a slider in 00:24:880 (4) - until 00:25:138 - there is a "ding" bell sound like there tho ;_;
00:54:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try to hitsound this better, I feel it too simple >: how tho ? I try to add more whistle , not sure if it better or not ;_;
00:59:535 (1) - music its in 1/2, there is nothing to map at blue tick, pls dont but I hear something like a electronic reverse sound or something idk at blue tick clearly tbh
01:09:363 (1) - eh I don't get why the slowdown here, it doesn't fit the song tbh just map at normal speed here. I emphasis the tone of music here which you can here the sound of instrument here 01:09:363 - get extened at its pace or something (idk how to explain it tho ) so I guess sv change really fit the thing like this here
01:11:259 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - don't spam combos pls, you just mess up the hp drain in all your diff, also this kind of pattern are easy to read without doing that ok
mmm reply to this and lets see what I can do here

thanks for the mods

everyone

spoilerbox indeed

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:春擬き
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ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
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Version:Celsius' Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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Last edited by Iceskulls 2015-06-12T04:12:35+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

captin1

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captin1 2015-06-12T04:09:07+00:00

"Sky Trias"

[Captin]

00:09:190 (3) - move 1 grid down maybe? most of these not done because they're pretty pointless
00:13:673 (3) - better move to 472|208
00:24:707 (4) - emm same spacing like 00:19:190 (4,5,6) - maybe move to 316|164
00:33:501 (6) - move to 388|316 maybe?
00:42:983 (4) - better move to 192|316 . Same spacing like 00:42:121 (2,3)
00:52:294 (4) - again. 468|168
00:54:707 (2) - Ctrl+G? kk
00:58:501 (1,2) - err .. confusing spacing ._. move to 128|312 maybe? adjusted a little
01:20:138 (7) - move to 24|200 ? or something better ? make same spacing like 01:18:156 (3,4,5) - maybe? did same spacing
err.. this is good.

"Mio_chan"

[captin’s Insane]
The slider ticks in intro is quite noisy imo better than the annoying sliderslide
00:19:449 (6) – I think this should start at 00:19:363 (5) –instead, since there is nothing in the music here same applies to 00:24:880 – but there is a snare sound there
00:45:742 (6) – circles suits here better imo, due to the drum fill in prefer mine
01:17:466 (5) – NC on here instead? keeping ncs consistent
01:20:138 (7,8) – stack them under (6)? changed from before

"Hard"

[captin's Insane]

again I mod a guest difficulty you made. you're everywhere. that's somehow creepy. :p
00:02:638 (4) - like i said before in another difficulty (but since this is a guest i'll say it again) the 'n'-sound and the 'do' sound after this are a bit stronger than the sliders before and i think this should show in the map. maybe make a jump here or change this slider into two circles would like to keep this consistent and easy to play
00:30:914 (1,2,3) - this is okay but i got a nice idea that would fit, be a bit more interesting and still flow nice. how about you stack the beginning of slider 3 with circle 1 and rotate 3 a bit. you got clockwise flow before and this way you also put in a forth-and-back motion. this would also emphasize the jump after this and just feel cool. like this: nice
SPOILER
00:33:328 (5,6) - maybe ctrl+ g for flow here? like the transition into 1 better as is
nice difficulty

"Misure"

[captin's Insane]

00:01:949 (3) - a little uncomfortable,maybe (124,128) better? fine as is
00:17:121 - maybe better not what i want here

00:18:328 (1) - ctrl+G for I think 1 flows to 2 and 3 plays worse for me
00:37:294 (5) - curve more no
00:38:673 (4) - (8,212) fine as is
00:39:880 (6) - ctrl+G ^
00:50:052 (1) - change red point to white(hope express clearly)because it's a littlle sudden now ^
00:50:914 (3) - curve direction like 2 ^
00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - a little irregular what?
00:58:501 - how about like this doesn't follow song

01:00:225 (2) - 01:00:914 (5) - 01:01:604 (2) - curve no
01:22:294 (2) - (267,240) fine as is
01:22:983 (5) - (168,344) ^

"Adol Christin"

captin's Insane

From 00:00:570 - to 00:06:087 - Suggest you use whstle addition on every two white ticks (instead of one). uh it is
00:31:776 (5) - Just my suggestion: overmap here as a triplet, in order to distinguish this from 00:20:742 (5) - (whose drum sound is different)
00:34:535 (4) - 00:37:294 (5) - ^ nah
00:58:673 (2,3) - Try this. I think your current pattern is not relyable to anyting in the song. This at least follows something. (i dunno the name of this sound but if you play it with 25% speed you could clearly hear it) my current rhythm is easier
SPOILER

"giantzarz"

captin's Insane

00:13:242 - Add a note here to be co nsistent with other patterns nah

"Osuology"

[captin's Insane]
00:19:190 (4) - this doesn't need to be here, kinda makes the double non prevalent (these keep happening later too, I won't mention the rest) fine as is
01:25:397 (3,4,5) - While it might be symmetrical, it doesn't play well IMO. Possible change here, not required tho. plays fine for me

"Natsu"

captin's Insane:

00:58:156 (6,7,1) - this make me fail so bad when testing , 6,7 reduce spacing or add increase spacing in 7,1 yea it's fixed

ty

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
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let me know when you finish fixing your diff aerous and i'll give it a run down

Natsu

8,100 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2015-06-12T04:16:34+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
Natsu wrote:
Yo, captin1's request

General:

Check all those mods lol
can everyone end their diff in 01:28:845 - ?? yea
Celsius' Insane:

00:25:052 (5) - nothing in the music here, just do a slider in 00:24:880 (4) - until 00:25:138 - there is a "ding" bell sound like there tho ;_; try 25 % or 50% there is nothing noticeable, mmm we can agre maybe making a slider from 00:24:707 - to 00:25:052 - ?
00:54:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try to hitsound this better, I feel it too simple >: how tho ? I try to add more whistle , not sure if it better or not ;_; ya, also maybe add claps at 0:56:087 (2,3)
00:59:535 (1) - music its in 1/2, there is nothing to map at blue tick, pls dont but I hear something like a electronic reverse sound or something idk at blue tick clearly tbh 00:59:449 this is more noticeable and you just ignore it tho, also your ¨electronic¨ sound isn't the one that start in 00:59:707 but the hold sound continue to the blue? that's why make more sense to end the slider in red
01:09:363 (1) - eh I don't get why the slowdown here, it doesn't fit the song tbh just map at normal speed here. I emphasis the tone of music here which you can here the sound of instrument here 01:09:363 - get extened at its pace or something (idk how to explain it tho ) so I guess sv change really fit the thing like this here atleast can you consider use a more friendly sv change? like 0,70 ?

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-12T04:26:37+00:00

Natsu

Natsu wrote:
Yo, captin1's request

General:

Check all those mods lol yea i will ;w;
can everyone end their diff in 01:28:845 - ??
Spring:

This diff play jsut fine with AR9 there is not need for the .2 yup changed
00:07:294 (1,3) - 00:07:294 (1,4) - I suppose that you tryed to blank those objects, so improve them:
SPOILER
okay fixed here
00:15:052 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - again bad blanket, redo the stream, use the tool compose > convert slider to stream so you can do a better blanket here
used the convert thingy , I thought i did before ;w;
00:15:914 (1,2) - nazi, stack its off nazi stack fix
00:16:776 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same blanket problem, since most of your streams looks like you did them circle by circle, use the tool its better
okay convert thingy
00:23:501 (5,1) - I like your idea, but its better if you stacks the tail perfect, actually looks really bad in game stacked
00:36:949 (3) - this shouldn't be mapped as circle, since you lost the emphasis of 00:37:121 (4,5,6) - by doing that, so do a slider with 00:36:776 (2,3) - instead made into slider
00:38:156 (2,3) - your blankets need improve, yeah should be nice if you check your blankets in all this diff, they are off
im trying
00:39:880 (1,2,3) - use a slider instead, playing 1/3 in a 1/4 song feels really bad and make people lost their rhythm, a slider will be a better idea as the other diffs do
used repeat
00:47:466 (1,2) - this pattern can be better, looks a bit random to be honest yea i agree , fixed
00:54:966 (8,1,2,3,4) - first to all your 1/4 jumps start with too big spacing and feels uncomfortable to play, also can be confused with 1/2 spacing, so reduce a bit the spacing at the beginning, second 00:55:742 (1,2,3,4) - I still don't understan why you are starting to use double repeat sliders, a single circle stream or 1/4 sliders (without repeat will feel alot better when playing) third 00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - redo your hitsounds here that clap spam its kinda annoying, I think you should redo all this stream sections, hitsounds, rhythm and placement
i remapped everything here ;w; and hitsound
00:58:501 atleast add a spinner or do something like captin1 did no i kinda want the player to have a break after those streams

01:19:707 (1,2) - spacing its too big, since is the firts 1/4 jump at this pattern, should use less spacing, imo fixed

Easy:

00:37:121 (3,1) - is this supposed to be a blanket? whoops yea
so many straight sliders >:

mmm reply to this and lets see what I can do here

Guy

Guy wrote:
Hi!

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Missing bg in Mochi's Hard
baka mochi , didnt add BG when she/he sent it to me
[Spring]
00:01:949 (3,4) - It feels like a random placement/shape. Try to copy 00:01:259 (2) -, Ctrl+H,J for 00:01:949 (3) - this. and copy 00:01:949 (3) - this slider, Ctrl+H for 00:02:638 (4) -
SPOILER
00:26:604 (1) - Move to x428 y63 for blanket
00:31:259 (3) - a bit close that spacing 00:31:087 (2,3) - and flow isn't good. so Try to move 00:31:259 (3) - this slider in there. would be better than current imo.
SPOILER
00:31:259 (3,4,5,6) - Not bad that flow, but I want to change that this jump pattern for more improve flow. Try this one.
SPOILER
00:44:707 (1,2,3,4) - You can improve this placement
SPOILER

[Easy]
00:06:776 - It feels so empty here. Try to add 1/1 slider.
00:09:535 (1) - Clap + finish sound is too big. Please remove clap or lower the volume.
00:12:294 (1) - ^ same
00:21:087 (1) - ^ omg all hitsounds o_o and remove finish and whistle from slider body.
00:23:845 (1) - ^
00:52:638 (2) - It's werid rhythm. Slider repeat doesn't follow any sound. so Try this rhythm.
Good luck!

i literally fixed everything here ;w;

Adol

Adol Christin wrote:
Hi from CloudSplash's modding company (not really)~

General
@captin1 @HabiHolic: Widescreen Support is enable in your diffs, and Aerous' Easy as well. (It's time to fix it, lol)
@Momochikun: Your BG is lost, and your tag is inconsistent with others.
I dunno whether it's rankable if your difficulties have different kiai time setting.

added BG , and different kiai time doesnt matter lol

Spring
00:08:501 (5,6) - Swap hitsound addition plz.
00:09:707 (6,7) - Swap hitsound. Drum sound does not change until 00:09:880 - ,therefore hitsound consistency is critical here. (like what you do on 00:12:466 (6,7,1) - )
00:16:776 (4) - I prefer a straight slider here, looks better.
00:25:138 - Here is a kick sound, you'd better adjust the pattern to follow it. Cuz you follow this on 00:19:621 -
00:41:259 (3) - try ctrl+g?
00:47:983 (2,3,4,1) - Try this (2 is a duplicate of 1 and is rotated by 180) for a nicer blanket.
SPOILER
00:52:552 - Change the rhythm into this, would follow the drum and vocal better.
SPOILER
00:59:363 - Just suggestion: add a triplet here.
01:08:931 (6) - Suggest you add a whistle or drum whistle on this. To make your overmap sounds more natural.
01:25:570 (3) - Replace your addition into Drum finish. This would make a better transition between drum clap and your whistle.
i recently fixed all of my hitsounds , and other small things

Easy
00:54:018 (3) - Inconsistent distance this is fine !

That's all my mod. Hope this could help.

Good luck~

giantzarz

giantzarz wrote:
From Mod Value Exchange

General
OK

Easy
00:04:707 (1) - Slider end should be at 00:06:087 no its fine here
00:52:638 (2) - Feel like reverse should be at 00:52:983 and add a note at 00:53:673 i like my rythem right here
01:01:259 (3) - It would be more fit if you do a 1/4 reverse slider no i dont like reverse that much
01:05:397 (1,2,3) - Try this
SPOILER

maybe , but no for now
01:08:156 (1,2,3,4) - Try this
SPOILER
^^

Spring
00:44:707 (1) - No need for clap
00:54:363 to 00:57:983 - So loud, lower the volume down
recently fixed hitsound and other things
Good Luck!

SoGA

SoGa wrote:
General
Well , i don't think u need widescreen support on , maybe just disable it.
[Easy]
00:09:535 (1,3) - Switch Nc NC fine
00:21:087 (1) - Slider head = Finish is ok , 3 hitsounds join is too noisy and terrible,and i dont think the whole slider body need hitsound ,sound annoying.pls delete those clap and hitsound on the slider body fixed from Guy
00:40:570 (1) - Actually i want you to decrease the volume here instead of increasing it.Maybe set it to 50% or something lower
changed to 55
00:50:570 (3) - Maybe change this to a 1/2 reverse ? I think this way fit the song more lmao.and then turn this to a 2/1slider 00:51:604 (1) -
its fine , i dont like reverses that much
00:52:638 (2) - I dont think this one fit enough , maybe change it like a 1/1 then 3 notes
no its fine
01:05:397 (1,2) - Nazi , not perfect blanket okay D:

Spring
00:07:294 (1,3) - U made such a shape and didnt blanket them waste orz yea fixed from natsu's mod
00:26:604 (1) - Lower the volume pls , this part suppose to be a very silence part tho.and the current volume is just making it sound weird with such high volume okay
00:22:983 (2) - Maybe chang this to a 1/2 slider like other diffs do and delete this note .00:23:156 (3) - sound weird no its fine
00:44:707 (1,2,3) - Personal recommendation is to make this shape more aesthetic and then blanket them .example:
yup fixed
00:47:121 (4) - Stack this one to 00:47:983 (2) - slider tail this part got remapped a bit
00:54:449 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i want to say this hitsound is kinda noisy , pls change a clap or either decrease the volume a little bit , we aren't playing a Gatlin LOL yea i fixed my hitosunds
01:02:638 (1) - Ctrl + G better tho. should be okay i like the jump here
01:11:949 (6,7) - Ctrl + G should be okay here
01:19:707 (1) - Unnecessary Finish here personally i think its fine with the finish hitsound
01:20:397 (5) - ^ Noisy ^
01:24:707 (1) - Ctrl + G . i think the current flow is awkward jump for the finish emphasis
01:25:225 (2) - If u did above one and then change this Ctrl + G too .after u done , u will get such pattern
End

Osuology

Osuology wrote:
Mod from ModCoin queue

[General]
Tags are conflicting?
Filesize exceeds 24 mb, change video or audio bitrate if its under 32 its rankabke , and yea ill update Mochi's tag

[Spring]
00:09:363 (4) - This took me by surprise, I think it's fine, just surprised my first time. no its fine lol
00:58:328 (7) - Put a spinner until a beat before the note after this one. i want the players to get a rest here after stream
01:08:845 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - No stream in the background. you dont hear it? if you delete the slider you can hear it
01:19:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Again you sometimes map to nothing. sometimes you need to check your ears for ear wax dudee

Wow, this is derserving of rank after this and some stuff from BNs. Good work guys!

Thanks for the mod ! @captin , updated the diffs
Plus hope Habi replies to these mods atleast once .....

Last edited by Aerous 2015-06-12T04:46:28+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-06-12T04:38:03+00:00

Natsu wrote:
CelsiusLK wrote:
Yo, captin1's request

General:

Check all those mods lol
can everyone end their diff in 01:28:845 - ?? yea
Celsius' Insane:

00:25:052 (5) - nothing in the music here, just do a slider in 00:24:880 (4) - until 00:25:138 - there is a "ding" bell sound like there tho ;_; try 25 % or 50% there is nothing noticeable, mmm we can agre maybe making a slider from 00:24:707 - to 00:25:052 - ? ok , is it ok if I do like what you suggest first , slider from 00:24:880 - to 00:25:138 - ?
00:54:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - try to hitsound this better, I feel it too simple >: how tho ? I try to add more whistle , not sure if it better or not ;_; ya, also maybe add claps at 0:56:087 (2,3) added clap at 00:56:087 (2) - head , 00:56:432 (3) - already clap
00:59:535 (1) - music its in 1/2, there is nothing to map at blue tick, pls dont but I hear something like a electronic reverse sound or something idk at blue tick clearly tbh 00:59:449 this is more noticeable and you just ignore it tho, also your ¨electronic¨ sound isn't the one that start in 00:59:707 but the hold sound continue to the blue? that's why make more sense to end the slider in red kk
01:09:363 (1) - eh I don't get why the slowdown here, it doesn't fit the song tbh just map at normal speed here. I emphasis the tone of music here which you can here the sound of instrument here 01:09:363 - get extened at its pace or something (idk how to explain it tho ) so I guess sv change really fit the thing like this here atleast can you consider use a more friendly sv change? like 0,70 ? yea , why not

SPOILER

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Momochikun

1,954 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2015-06-13T12:14:36+00:00

fixed.

seems there're some internal changing after my previous update, pls add video and double check the general stuffs before you update it

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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Title:Haru Modoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Aerous
Version:Mochi's Hard
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku my teen romantic snafu 2 oregairu captin1 momochikun habiholic celsiuslk tv size
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Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-13T19:43:57+00:00

I sent around 5 to 8 messages to Habi telling her she should apply the mods from the beginning , but because she didn't reply to me I assume that she won't do apply these mods. I have fixed some or most of the blankets , distances and hitsound (plus green lines to change hitsound volumes , copied from easy diff. )in the Normal diff. Ontop of that , I added a spinner at the end so it can end on the same time as the other diffs. Hope Natsu can come back and check now.

Pho

1,786 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2015-06-13T20:23:43+00:00

Small IRC mod with Aerous for his Insane

21:47 Aerous: yoo pho can i ask you something ;w;
21:48 Pho: if it doesn't contain the words 'mod', 'icon' or 'rank my map' then yes
21:48 Aerous: LOL
21:48 Aerous: its about the stream here
21:48 *Aerous is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/674128 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Spring]]
21:48 Aerous: ;w;
21:48 Aerous: 00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) -
21:48 Pho: i get these way more ferequently the last weeks, dunno why lol
21:49 Pho: hmm lets see
21:49 Aerous: kinda remapped it after natsu modded it
21:49 Aerous: idk if its good enough to call him/her back
21:50 Pho: looks... odd lol
21:50 Pho: lemme test
21:50 Aerous: yea
21:50 Aerous: rip
21:52 Pho: need to get used to mah new skin first ;w;
21:52 Aerous: wtf you played so good
21:52 Aerous: with new skin
21:52 Aerous: gg i suck
21:52 Pho: azer skin is actuall really nice to paly with lol
21:52 Pho: eh, idk about the map
21:52 Aerous: lol i have it but the old one ;w;
21:53 Pho: it plays fine, good thing you dont spam jumps that much anymore lol
21:53 Aerous: lesson learned ???
21:53 Aerous:

21:54 Pho: i hope so if you don't get seduced by the jump devil again
21:54 Pho: 00:25:138 - missing a clear beat here
21:54 Pho: 00:28:501 (2) - dude wtf snap
21:54 Aerous: oh yea
21:54 Aerous: the 1/3
21:54 Aerous: double checked with captin
21:55 Pho: are you sure? sounds wrong to me
21:55 *Aerous is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/672564 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Haru]]
21:55 Pho: it's only the mid beat at around 00:28:759 - that's not clear to hear
21:55 Aerous: double checked
21:55 Pho: hmm, ok
21:55 Aerous: if not then ill just change it lol
21:56 Pho: ask again, it sounds wrong really. 00:29:363 (1) - fix blanket nub
21:56 Aerous: fixed!
21:56 Aerous: ill ask captin when hes on
21:56 Pho: 00:41:949 (1) - you go over 00:42:121 - this, why :CCC
21:57 Pho: well i guess you're one of those vocal mappers
21:57 Aerous: ya :
21:58 Pho: 00:54:363 - concerning the part you mentioned: it plays fine. it's not the most optimal one, but it's decent
21:58 Aerous: idk about those overlap sliders thoo
21:58 Pho: 00:56:776 (1) - 00:57:466 (1) - just don't NC spam, it's not really necessary
21:58 Aerous: ok ill fix the nc after spec
21:59 Aerous: are the jumps at the start
21:59 Aerous: okay ?
21:59 Aerous: i'm kinda scared of them
21:59 Pho: it might get confusing since combo numbers of 00:55:742 (1,2,3,4) - are not clearly readable
22:00 Pho: it shouldn't be too much of an issue... IMO
22:00 Pho: and what jumps you mean, the sliders?
22:01 Aerous: these 00:08:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
22:01 Aerous: oh for the nc
22:01 Aerous: 00:55:742 -
22:01 Pho: fits... even if im not fond of it lol
22:01 Aerous: i nc on the big white ticks
22:01 Aerous:

i might change it if it gets in the way of reading them
22:02 Pho: the jumps are clearly readable dw
22:02 Aerous: kk
22:03 Pho: it's just a new mapping illness to slap jumps everywhere possible. 00:59:363 - would start mapping here again already, the drums are really strong
22:03 Pho: http://puu.sh/inCha/8c48d63ce6.jpg
22:03 Aerous: oh i deleted those
22:03 Aerous: i had them before
22:04 Aerous: i just wanted the players to have a rest or something
22:04 Aerous: after the stream
22:04 Pho: no need to. it's compressed streams, which are pretty comfortable to play already
22:04 Pho: the gap is just annoying xD and start mapping from the red tick again is more consistent since you followed drums earlier already with 00:57:811 (1,2,3,1) -
22:05 Pho: 01:02:638 (1,3) - fcking overlap
22:05 Pho: 01:06:604 (1) - ugly piece of <3
22:05 Aerous:

22:05 Aerous: ok rip
22:05 Aerous: ill cahnge that one
22:06 Pho: 01:19:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - i have no idea what you did with the drum HS here really lol
22:06 Aerous: rip
22:06 Pho: 00:33:501 (1) - ^this one too btw
22:06 Aerous: i already changed it a bit from before ;w;
22:07 Aerous: shoulkd i make overlap
22:07 Aerous: http://puu.sh/inCoQ/e8658d6903.jpg
22:07 Aerous: 00:59:880 (1) -
22:07 Aerous: i mean extended slider
22:07 Pho: for that stream session above: only claps at 01:19:534 (5) - and 01:20:052 (3) - sliderstart
22:08 Pho: that's more dependent on you, i think both are okay. without is better
22:09 Pho: for me
22:09 Pho: that is
22:10 Aerous: brb restarting osu
22:11 Aerous: wanna post for kd
22:11 Aerous:

DDDDDD
22:12 Aerous: or just something for natsu to look at
22:12 Pho: only one thing left: 00:00:570 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - do something about this, this looks awfully randomly set lol
22:13 Aerous: oh i just copied what Guy told me to do
22:13 Aerous: p/4238566
22:14 Pho: oh xD
22:14 Pho: it still looks random lol
22:14 Aerous: rip
22:15 Pho: i mean you didn't even map that with DS, so idk what that pattern should be for
22:15 Aerous: well i had it with DS before
22:17 Pho: it's just that the pattern makes no musical sense. like 00:00:570 (1,2,3,4) - you switch the moving direction steadily with the music being pretty linear and soft, i mean wt
22:19 Pho: easiest thing you can do for structure here is symmetry, but i don't think you like that stuff too much lol
22:19 Aerous: should i change it
22:20 Pho: yep. but might ask natsu for it, my style just doesn't complement yours too well to give a good alternative
22:21 Aerous: k ill just wait what natsu gonna do

@Natsu: I have quality concerns about Aerous maps (as always ahue), some patterns can still be polished with the main concern still being the pattern at the beginning: 00:00:570 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - . Guy mentioned the random placement already, but even with his fix it still looks randomly placed to me. Hope you can give a good alternative for him.

Still good luck Aerous! /o/

Natsu

8,100 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2015-06-14T04:12:29+00:00

Aerous wrote:
I sent around 5 to 8 messages to Habi telling her she should apply the mods from the beginning , but because she didn't reply to me I assume that she won't do apply these mods. I have fixed some or most of the blankets , distances and hitsound (plus green lines to change hitsound volumes , copied from easy diff. )in the Normal diff. Ontop of that , I added a spinner at the end so it can end on the same time as the other diffs. Hope Natsu can come back and check now.

no I can't recheck if Habic don't reply to mods, if he ignore you, you can just replace his diff and map one or ask for it to another person.

Aerous

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-14T05:24:40+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Aerous wrote:
I sent around 5 to 8 messages to Habi telling her she should apply the mods from the beginning , but because she didn't reply to me I assume that she won't do apply these mods. I have fixed some or most of the blankets , distances and hitsound (plus green lines to change hitsound volumes , copied from easy diff. )in the Normal diff. Ontop of that , I added a spinner at the end so it can end on the same time as the other diffs. Hope Natsu can come back and check now.
no I can't recheck if Habic don't reply to mods, if he ignore you, you can just replace his diff and map one or ask for it to another person.

Ok I added my normal diff , now gonna look for some mods before getting Natsu again

Meg

1,622 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2015-06-14T06:52:21+00:00

Habi is unko

only Normal diff

Normal

00:01:259 (2,4,2) - delete whistle on head?
00:44:880 (4,5) - hard to read rhythm try here ↓
SPOILER
00:50:914 - clap→whistle?
01:08:156 (1) - add finish on head
01:21:259 (4) - object isn't snapped!
01:26:432 (1,2,3) - i recommend to delete this notes. there are no sounds here and this is hard as Normal diff. 01:26:087 - start spin

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-14T07:39:15+00:00

iMage-- wrote:
Habi is unko

only Normal diff

Normal
00:01:259 (2,4,2) - delete whistle on head? these should be okay
00:44:880 (4,5) - hard to read rhythm try here ↓ okay
SPOILER
00:50:914 - clap→whistle? i like the clap here though ;w;
01:08:156 (1) - add finish on head added
01:21:259 (4) - object isn't snapped! whoops thanks !
01:26:432 (1,2,3) - i recommend to delete this notes. there are no sounds here and this is hard as Normal diff. 01:26:087 - start spin okay

Thanks for the mod !

Zerss

730 posts

Joined December 2013

Zerss 2015-06-14T21:19:55+00:00

Hey~ from #modreqs
As asked on IRC, only Normal.
Newbie modding

General

- If there's no storyboard, disable "Widescreen support"

Normal

- 00:06:776 (1) - Disable NC
- 00:12:811 (1,2) - This blanket could look better
- 00:13:673 (2,3) - ^
- 00:17:121 (3,4) - ^ You can use the approach circle to help you
- 00:21:604 (2,3) - ^
- 00:28:673 (1,2) - ^
- 00:36:259 (4,5) - ^ t/208596 Look at the "blanket slider" section, it'll help you ^^
- 00:44:880 (4,5) - ^
- 00:47:983 (5,1) - ^
- 01:10:570 (6,1) - ^
- 00:28:673 (1,2) - Delete the NC at 1 and put it at the 2
- 01:07:121 (1) - Delete the NC
- 01:19:190 (1) - A sliderwave made with the ϟimpliest way must be created like that

Nice map ! I really like it !

Bye~

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-14T21:26:18+00:00

Z e r s s wrote:
Hey~ from #modreqs
As asked on IRC, only Normal.
Newbie modding

General

- If there's no storyboard, disable "Widescreen support" nice catch almost forgot lol

Normal

- 00:06:776 (1) - Disable NC NC on purpose
- 00:12:811 (1,2) - This blanket could look better looks fine already http://puu.sh/ioYpK/d3bba51542.jpg
- 00:13:673 (2,3) - ^ ^
- 00:17:121 (3,4) - ^ You can use the approach circle to help you i already am http://puu.sh/ioYsS/55f0003c9d.jpg its fine
- 00:21:604 (2,3) - ^ ok fixed even though it was off a bit
- 00:28:673 (1,2) - ^ this one is actually fine , even though its off just like 1 pixel off
- 00:36:259 (4,5) - ^ t/208596 Look at the "blanket slider" section, it'll help you ^^
i already know about it , but its not that bad of a blanket already http://puu.sh/ioYzt/85cac6854e.jpg
- 00:44:880 (4,5) - ^ ^ same here its fine already lol http://puu.sh/ioYAA/80e3e63994.jpg
- 00:47:983 (5,1) - ^ okay fixed
- 01:10:570 (6,1) - ^ its off like 2 pixels , its fine
- 00:28:673 (1,2) - Delete the NC at 1 and put it at the 2 NC fine here
- 01:07:121 (1) - Delete the NC why ?
- 01:19:190 (1) - A sliderwave made with the ϟimpliest way must be created like that its fine already i already like my curves

Nice map ! I really like it !
Bye~

ty !

Mint

1,611 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-06-14T21:42:54+00:00

#modreqs

Might as well change your map description after the removal of Habi's diff.

[Normal]
Disable widescreen support?
00:04:707 (3) - For some reason I find that this slider ends at a rather weak point. Ending it on the large white tick after this, or putting a note at 00:06:087 - seems more logical to me...
00:18:328 (1) - Adjusting the slider here would improve flow here by a lot. http://puu.sh/ioZeS/18a342d9e0.jpg
00:29:880 (3) - Hmm.. dunno why you place objects like this lol, it doesn't flow that well imo :/ moving it a bit down looks better to me.
00:43:328 (1,2,3) - Flow here could be improved as well.... also would be then similar flow like 01:05:397 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/ioZCB/9f46e48835.jpg
01:04:535 (4,5) - Would reverse rhythm here, since the string sound on the red tick should get the slider imo. http://puu.sh/ioZKR/a7fcb3f158.jpg

well most of these are subjective.. anyways good luck!

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-14T21:49:35+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
#modreqs

Might as well change your map description after the removal of Habi's diff. ok thanks for reminding me !

[Normal]
Disable widescreen support? already did with previous mod !
00:04:707 (3) - For some reason I find that this slider ends at a rather weak point. Ending it on the large white tick after this, or putting a note at 00:06:087 - seems more logical to me... mhm good suggestion , but I'll change if another mod mentions this
00:18:328 (1) - Adjusting the slider here would improve flow here by a lot. http://puu.sh/ioZeS/18a342d9e0.jpg changed here
00:29:880 (3) - Hmm.. dunno why you place objects like this lol, it doesn't flow that well imo :/ moving it a bit down looks better to me. well theres a bit of a break here , should be okay ?
00:43:328 (1,2,3) - Flow here could be improved as well.... also would be then similar flow like 01:05:397 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/ioZCB/9f46e48835.jpg
okay fixed here
01:04:535 (4,5) - Would reverse rhythm here, since the string sound on the red tick should get the slider imo. http://puu.sh/ioZKR/a7fcb3f158.jpg sure !

well most of these are subjective.. anyways good luck!

ty

!

captin1

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2,608 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2015-06-16T07:08:46+00:00

[Normal]

00:04:707 (3) - personally i'd delete the first red point of this and just adjust the curve to something more like this, to get a nicer looking blanket here
SPOILER
00:08:501 (3,4,5) - would recommend trying to avoid having spacing like this, where 5 is closer to 3 than it is to 4. keeping everything even will make it look a lot nicer
00:12:811 (1) - try curving this a bit more to get a more even blanket of 2. do the same with 00:14:018 (3) - if you do this
00:15:052 (5,1) - not a fan of this visual transition, would be nice if it didn't cut the curve short
00:21:087 (1) - this is curved nicely to blanket while 00:19:190 (3) - and 00:21:949 (3) - aren't, try to keep a better sense of consistency for this
00:36:259 (4) - especially this one, wouldn't call it a nice blanket by lax standards
00:55:397 (2,3,4) - not a fan of the flow here, seems just awkwardly back and forth
00:59:363 (4) - makes me a bit nervous that this is looks like it's 1.0x distance away from the previous note
01:06:432 (3) - try switching this for 2 circles instead, to give the finish better impact
01:19:190 (1) - ehhh this wave could look a lot better, try moving the points closer to the center so it's more naturally and evenly curved
01:25:742 (3) - same as before
could be maybe a little harder in some places to fill spread better, like kiai

[SNAFU]

00:09:880 (7,1) - feel this is a really awkward transition from the notes before. another thing to note is that this jump doesn't feel any different than the jump spam you have just before this. rather than just making this an obnoxious screenjump, i'd recommend toning down the spacing before, so that this feels more impactful and in tune with the song. basically applies for the next circle pattern as well
00:08:673 (6,1) - while we're at it, i'll mention that this transition feels kinda awkward after the nice circular motion you have just before
00:10:914 (3,4,5,1) - try something resembling this here, to continue the idea of circular motion before the circle jump sections
SPOILER
00:13:673 (3,4,5,6,1) - an idea here could be to actually decrease the spacing of these jumps gradually, to fit the melody line lowering in pitch
00:19:363 (4,1) - perhaps instead of doing this double blanket like you have now, which i think looks a bit awkward, you could rotate 4 so that it's the only one blanketing
SPOILER
00:20:742 (4,1) - stacking these would better create the musical effect imo
00:21:604 (2,3) - not a fan of how these curve drastically away from each other
00:22:294 (4,1) - this transition is awkward similar to how i mentioned in the first point, the slider doesn't lead well from the note before
00:22:983 (2,3,4,5) - and this is just kinda a mess flow wise, starts with stop motion with 2 being stacked under the slider, and then a very wide linear angle going upwards and a jump down into a slider that doesn't fit the motion at all.

tbh already a bit tired, this is nowhere near how well you mapped rally go round. take for example the last point, and then compare it to 00:22:214 (3,4,5,6,1) - in that map. you'll see it's more or less the same pattern, but applied in a much better way, avoiding the stop motion at the start and letting the slider follow the motion from the jump at the end. by this point i know you can do better than this, so try to be as critical of yourself as i'm being

edit: some changes to my diff

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:春擬き
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ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Aerous
Version:captin's Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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Aerous

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Aerous 2015-06-16T23:06:42+00:00

captin1 wrote:

[Normal]

00:04:707 (3) - personally i'd delete the first red point of this and just adjust the curve to something more like this, to get a nicer looking blanket here
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k deleted
00:08:501 (3,4,5) - would recommend trying to avoid having spacing like this, where 5 is closer to 3 than it is to 4. keeping everything even will make it look a lot nicer changed the spacing here
00:12:811 (1) - try curving this a bit more to get a more even blanket of 2. do the same with 00:14:018 (3) - if you do this ok
00:15:052 (5,1) - not a fan of this visual transition, would be nice if it didn't cut the curve short fixed here
00:21:087 (1) - this is curved nicely to blanket while 00:19:190 (3) - and 00:21:949 (3) - aren't, try to keep a better sense of consistency for this hopefully fixed now
00:36:259 (4) - especially this one, wouldn't call it a nice blanket by lax standards yea lol fixed
00:55:397 (2,3,4) - not a fan of the flow here, seems just awkwardly back and forth changed this part a little bit (placements)
00:59:363 (4) - makes me a bit nervous that this is looks like it's 1.0x distance away from the previous note hope its fine now with the palcement changes
01:06:432 (3) - try switching this for 2 circles instead, to give the finish better impact changed to two circles.
01:19:190 (1) - ehhh this wave could look a lot better, try moving the points closer to the center so it's more naturally and evenly curved changed the points
01:25:742 (3) - same as before yup
could be maybe a little harder in some places to fill spread better, like kiai

[SNAFU]

00:09:880 (7,1) - feel this is a really awkward transition from the notes before. another thing to note is that this jump doesn't feel any different than the jump spam you have just before this. rather than just making this an obnoxious screenjump, i'd recommend toning down the spacing before, so that this feels more impactful and in tune with the song. basically applies for the next circle pattern as well
changed the flow here / changed spacing
00:08:673 (6,1) - while we're at it, i'll mention that this transition feels kinda awkward after the nice circular motion you have just before
changed here too (placements)
00:10:914 (3,4,5,1) - try something resembling this here, to continue the idea of circular motion before the circle jump sections
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kk
00:13:673 (3,4,5,6,1) - an idea here could be to actually decrease the spacing of these jumps gradually, to fit the melody line lowering in pitch nice suggestion !
00:19:363 (4,1) - perhaps instead of doing this double blanket like you have now, which i think looks a bit awkward, you could rotate 4 so that it's the only one blanketing
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fixed like what you have
00:20:742 (4,1) - stacking these would better create the musical effect imo stacked
00:21:604 (2,3) - not a fan of how these curve drastically away from each other yea whoops , changed here
00:22:294 (4,1) - this transition is awkward similar to how i mentioned in the first point, the slider doesn't lead well from the note before
reduced spacing a bit
00:22:983 (2,3,4,5) - and this is just kinda a mess flow wise, starts with stop motion with 2 being stacked under the slider, and then a very wide linear angle going upwards and a jump down into a slider that doesn't fit the motion at all.
changed to how i mapped rally
tbh already a bit tired, this is nowhere near how well you mapped rally go round. take for example the last point, and then compare it to 00:22:214 (3,4,5,6,1) - in that map. you'll see it's more or less the same pattern, but applied in a much better way, avoiding the stop motion at the start and letting the slider follow the motion from the jump at the end. by this point i know you can do better than this, so try to be as critical of yourself as i'm being

thanks for the mod captin ! yea when I was mapping Rally , it was right after I finished Haru Modoki and wanted to try something new. I'm kind of proud of what I have in Rally now compared to what I have in Haru Modoki. Hopefully as time passes , my mapping skills would improve ! Really love your feedbacks captin

!

edit: some changes to my diff

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osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1430
PreviewTime: 59880
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.499999

[Metadata]
Title:Haru Modoki
TitleUnicode:春擬き
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Aerous
Version:captin's Insane
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru zoku my teen romantic snafu 2 oregairu captin1 momochikun celsiuslk tv size
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Momochikun

1,954 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2015-06-17T13:12:29+00:00

found some spare time on my concern, here's some quick check on the diffs as responds to your request before..

[Normal]
00:10:052 (1) - add clap just like you did 00:12:811 (1) - ? i think that sounds better along with the drum
00:29:363 (2,3) - this flow rather odd considering the angle of the slider and the opposite placement of the note, i'd make them straight or smth
00:39:018 (4,5) - looks bad at my stand, at least make the part after red node became symmetrical so they make such a contact

SPOILER

00:44:880 (4) - missing clap both start and end
00:45:742 (5) - finish feels overused and doesn't really match the tempo you're following, delete it
00:53:156 (4) - i'd rather replace it with a note on 00:53:328 - so the whole 00:51:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - would following the vocal smoothly, thats kinda weird for me to have this one follow the drum when you're ignoring the one at 00:52:466 - , so.. yeah
01:07:121 (1) - delete nc to keep your 2/1 nc's pattern
01:08:156 (1) - finish sounds good

there're some nitpicks that i dont include here since seems it will make pretty long post, so i'll just assume that a stylish-stuffs.
good luck :3

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-06-17T21:01:09+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
found some spare time on my concern, here's some quick check on the diffs as responds to your request before..

[Normal]
00:10:052 (1) - add clap just like you did 00:12:811 (1) - ? i think that sounds better along with the drum
00:29:363 (2,3) - this flow rather odd considering the angle of the slider and the opposite placement of the note, i'd make them straight or smth
00:39:018 (4,5) - looks bad at my stand, at least make the part after red node became symmetrical so they make such a contact
SPOILER
00:44:880 (4) - missing clap both start and end
00:45:742 (5) - finish feels overused and doesn't really match the tempo you're following, delete it
00:53:156 (4) - i'd rather replace it with a note on 00:53:328 - so the whole 00:51:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - would following the vocal smoothly, thats kinda weird for me to have this one follow the drum when you're ignoring the one at 00:52:466 - , so.. yeah
01:07:121 (1) - delete nc to keep your 2/1 nc's pattern
01:08:156 (1) - finish sounds good

there're some nitpicks that i dont include here since seems it will make pretty long post, so i'll just assume that a stylish-stuffs.
good luck :3

omg thanks a lot mochi

! Fixed everything you mentioned here

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

pkk 2015-06-19T02:56:22+00:00

soon (TM)

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-07-02T13:26:23+00:00

ok checking snafu and normal

[snafu]

00:06:776 (1) - would be cool to start to spacing note from stack here instead the song just fit it somehow
SPOILER
00:07:294 (1) - you can try make it looks like this so it might make flow here 00:06:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - nice imo
SPOILER
00:09:190 (3,4) - lower spacing would be nice , high spacing just play a bit weird here somehow the song isn't really that intense tho
00:11:949 (3,4) - same ^
00:30:570 (4,5) - ^ make sure spacing is a bit consistent with the song
00:31:604 (4,5) - if you swap place of these two notes , it might make flow here 00:31:259 (3,4,5,6,1) - better imo
SPOILER
00:36:432 - rhythm would sound better if you map this kick , try this rhythm ?
SPOILER
00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:811 (1,2,3) - no. 1/4 slider spam won't fit the music here tbh the snare in music here sound like random placed which make the 1/4 slider play a bit awkward (1/4 slider need like consistent instrument pattern to make it play good ) , using a stream here instead is highly recommend
00:57:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is one of the place that 1/4 slider fit , just saying
00:59:535 (1,1) - overlaphere looks not that good imo , I would use this pattern instead
SPOILER
01:08:501 (3,4) - similiar to what I said here 00:09:190 (3,4) - , you can move (4) to around x400 y256
01:19:707 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:811 (1,2,3) -
01:21:173 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a sudden increase in spacing like this is make the stream here play a bit weird imo , you can try increase overall spacing here 01:20:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or decrease overall spacing here 01:21:259 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - that would make the stream here kinda a bit more reasonable , spacing increase is ok for this part but make sure to organize it good , you can take a look at stream here in my diff for reference lol

I think overall the design can be improved a bit, this is really a bit different from what you did in rally go round imo

[normal]

00:12:294 (5,1) - mfw inconsistent spacing
00:18:845 (2) - nazi move to x216 y100 for better flow here 00:18:328 (1,2) -
00:35:914 (3) - nazi move to x196 y292 for better flow 00:35:397 (2,3) - ( fix next spacing too if you make change here )
01:06:604 (4,5) - rhythm would play better if you make this slider instead imo
SPOILER
01:13:673 (1,2) - this rhythm sound better
SPOILER

xd good luck

edited: also I fixed stream here 01:20:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - in my diff a bit

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Aerous

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-07-05T21:33:36+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:

ok checking snafu and normal

[snafu]

00:06:776 (1) - would be cool to start to spacing note from stack here instead the song just fit it somehow
SPOILER
00:07:294 (1) - you can try make it looks like this so it might make flow here 00:06:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - nice imo
SPOILER
00:09:190 (3,4) - lower spacing would be nice , high spacing just play a bit weird here somehow the song isn't really that intense tho
00:11:949 (3,4) - same ^
00:30:570 (4,5) - ^ make sure spacing is a bit consistent with the song
00:31:604 (4,5) - if you swap place of these two notes , it might make flow here 00:31:259 (3,4,5,6,1) - better imo
SPOILER
00:36:432 - rhythm would sound better if you map this kick , try this rhythm ?
SPOILER
00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:811 (1,2,3) - no. 1/4 slider spam won't fit the music here tbh the snare in music here sound like random placed which make the 1/4 slider play a bit awkward (1/4 slider need like consistent instrument pattern to make it play good ) , using a stream here instead is highly recommend
00:57:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is one of the place that 1/4 slider fit , just saying
00:59:535 (1,1) - overlaphere looks not that good imo , I would use this pattern instead
SPOILER
01:08:501 (3,4) - similiar to what I said here 00:09:190 (3,4) - , you can move (4) to around x400 y256
01:19:707 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:55:052 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:811 (1,2,3) -
01:21:173 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - a sudden increase in spacing like this is make the stream here play a bit weird imo , you can try increase overall spacing here 01:20:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or decrease overall spacing here 01:21:259 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - that would make the stream here kinda a bit more reasonable , spacing increase is ok for this part but make sure to organize it good , you can take a look at stream here in my diff for reference lol

I think overall the design can be improved a bit, this is really a bit different from what you did in rally go round imo

[normal]

00:12:294 (5,1) - mfw inconsistent spacing
00:18:845 (2) - nazi move to x216 y100 for better flow here 00:18:328 (1,2) -
00:35:914 (3) - nazi move to x196 y292 for better flow 00:35:397 (2,3) - ( fix next spacing too if you make change here )
01:06:604 (4,5) - rhythm would play better if you make this slider instead imo
SPOILER
01:13:673 (1,2) - this rhythm sound better
SPOILER

xd good luck

edited: also I fixed stream here 01:20:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - in my diff a bit

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256,192,86345,12,0,88845,0:0:0:0:

Gonna take a look next week , I have summer school atm

. I'll edit this page when I reply to this mod.

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-12-26T22:15:05+00:00

Hello? Remapped my highest diff.

Last edited by Aerous 2015-12-26T22:17:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

captin1

osu! Alumni

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captin1 2015-12-26T22:17:42+00:00

hello?!?

dude nic

pkk

1,821 posts

Joined November 2013

pkk 2015-12-27T00:21:45+00:00

IRC with my son

18:09 Aerous: can u mod one tv size diff 4 me xd
18:09 pkuai: no
18:09 Aerous: plz
18:09 pkuai: ok
18:10 *Aerous is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/674128 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Extra]]
18:10 Aerous: xd
18:10 pkuai: om
18:10 pkuai: f
18:10 pkuai: i swear u ranked this 2 years ago
18:10 Aerous: nah its in my graveyard xdd
18:10 pkuai: 00:03:673 (2,2) - xd
18:11 Aerous: xd
18:11 Aerous: wait updating
18:11 Aerous: ok uipdated
18:13 pkuai: 00:03:673 (2,2) - xd
18:13 pkuai: 00:09:018 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - whats this nc
18:13 Aerous: idk
18:14 Aerous: i love colors
18:14 pkuai: me too
18:14 pkuai: 00:15:225 (1,1) - might be easier to read if you remove NC so people dont think the circle is actually a slider
18:14 Aerous: ok
18:15 pkuai: 00:21:087 (1) - start and end aren't exactly parallel idk if u want to make them parallel or not
18:15 Aerous: this is why i need art class
18:15 Aerous: ok i tried
18:15 pkuai: 00:26:604 (1,2,3) - idk this just plays relaly awkwardly
18:15 pkuai: i think too much movement at 00:26:949 (2,3) -
18:16 pkuai: maybe u can stack 00:26:949 (2,4) -
18:16 pkuai: or 00:26:949 (2,3) -
18:16 Aerous: k
18:16 Aerous: 2,4 stack
18:16 Aerous: http://puu.sh/m9BxQ/c3c4037da6.jpg
18:18 pkuai: buce
18:18 pkuai: 00:28:673 (3,4,5) -
18:18 pkuai: rhythm is really awkward cuz slidertail on strong beat and you skipped the stronger blue tick
18:19 pkuai: maybe u can remove circle 4 and slider 3 then triplet on 00:28:673 -
18:21 Aerous: ok
18:21 pkuai: 00:29:880 (2,3) - kinda far
18:21 pkuai: feels kinda weird to play, maybe you can reposition 00:30:225 (3,4) -
18:22 pkuai: or you can try moving 00:29:880 (2) - so the tail stacks with 00:30:397 (4) -
18:22 Aerous: nerfed a bit
18:22 Aerous: ?!?!? http://puu.sh/m9BWU/eb851107de.jpg
18:23 pkuai: [https://i.gyazo.com/3341791436a5f88d8f1e0f6559b07fc0.jpg !!!]
18:23 pkuai: you can leave everything as it is but only move 2
18:24 pkuai: you can try something else too if this is too edgy xd
18:24 Aerous: yolo i copied urs
18:24 pkuai: same
18:24 Aerous: xd ? 00:37:121 (5,6,7) -
18:24 pkuai: 00:37:294 (6) - x 293 y 64
18:25 pkuai: 00:37:466 (7) - x 441 y 125
18:25 pkuai: I think if you do that it'll flow better into slider 1
18:25 pkuai: because your 7 is currently kind of low so that when you go into 1 its some fucked up shit
18:25 Aerous: o
18:25 Aerous: nice flow
18:25 *pkuai sprays holy water everywhere
18:25 pkuai: i got u bro
18:26 Aerous: ayylmao
18:26 pkuai: 00:54:363 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2) -
18:27 pkuai: all these clap hitsounds
18:27 pkuai: r gonna give me a heart attack
18:27 pkuai: when i play this
18:27 Aerous: XDD
18:27 Aerous: i just copied hitsounds
18:27 Aerous: ill double check those
18:27 pkuai: 00:57:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try ctrl g h
18:27 pkuai: then move whole thing to x 204 y 143
18:28 pkuai: 00:59:880 (1) - move the first red point to x 342 y 144
18:29 pkuai: brb dinner dad is gonna kill me brb
18:29 Aerous: kk
19:06 pkuai: im
19:06 pkuai: black
19:07 Aerous: wtf ur black
19:07 Aerous: wait updating
19:07 *Aerous is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/674128 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Extra]]
19:07 Aerous: ok done
19:08 pkuai: k
19:08 pkuai: 01:02:552 - a triplet would be nice here, 1 sec
19:09 pkuai: https://i.gyazo.com/830871fea10c87c4ed1 ... a5185d.jpg
19:09 pkuai: ctrl g j on 4
19:09 pkuai: move 5 to there then add note on blue tick before slider 1 for triplet xd d d xd
19:11 Aerous: ok kinda did it
19:11 Aerous: http://puu.sh/m9EL8/9b16da0fb9.jpg ?!??!
19:11 pkuai: wtf
19:11 pkuai: lower the spacing
19:12 pkuai: move like t he whole thing 671 closer
19:12 Aerous: kk
19:12 pkuai: 01:03:242 (3) - theres no sound here and since you have a triplet before this, it might play better as 1/2
19:13 Aerous: wait
19:13 Aerous: dont you hear it?
19:13 Aerous: delete 2-3
19:13 Aerous: i swear im high or omse shit
19:13 pkuai: it comes earlier
19:13 pkuai: and it's 1/3
19:13 pkuai: xd
19:13 Aerous: k
19:13 Aerous: delteed
19:14 Aerous: o xd
19:14 pkuai: [https://i.gyazo.com/2da306116b538b303e643888a0bc5dd5.png u can try this placement for 1/2 idk im high]
19:14 Aerous: o
19:14 Aerous: we almost had the same thing in mind
19:14 Aerous: xd
19:14 pkuai: lo
19:14 Aerous: http://puu.sh/m9EYD/a2774e6156.jpg
19:16 pkuai: nice 1 !1
19:17 pkuai: nice
19:17 pkuai: 01:27:121 (1) -
19:17 pkuai: might want to add some timing points to lower volume during the slider
19:17 pkuai: since sliderticks can be kinda loud
19:17 pkuai: anyways thats it
19:17 pkuai: buxw
19:18 Aerous: kk boss
19:20 Aerous: tyy
19:20 Aerous: post 4 kd
19:21 pkuai: ok xd

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,661 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-12-27T00:35:56+00:00

extra
[]
♠ 00:08:845 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - nc on white ticks instead of reds? makes more sense musically imo. Compare with 00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -
♠ 00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These felt kinda exaggerated for me, like especially 00:12:294 (1,2) - because you compare that with the spacing on 00:12:638 (1,1) - . You kinda expect a larger jump since the pitch peaks at 00:12:811 -
♠ 00:17:638 (3,4) - No triple or kickslider?
♠ 00:26:949 (2,3,4,1) - Spacing is a bit confusing, especially 4>1
♠ 00:55:225 (1,2) - I would make this a kick-slider instead. It makes more sense to begin the streams again on 00:55:397 - vocals + drum.
♠ 01:04:018 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - NC thing.
♠ 01:13:673 (1) - Okay using a 1/1 slider right after those 1/2 jumps is kinda weird for me lol. I would use a 1/2 slider and a circle instead so there isn't such a drastic rhythm change.
♠ 01:24:880 (2) - Sounds kinda overmapped. I'd do a 1/2 slider here instead
♠ 01:25:914 (4,1) - If you're going for a stack, its quite off.
♠ 01:27:121 (1) - Make the tail a bit more visible. Like, the border.

~

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2015-12-27T00:46:36+00:00

monstrata wrote:
extra
[]
♠ 00:08:845 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - nc on white ticks instead of reds? makes more sense musically imo. Compare with 00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -
♠ 00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These felt kinda exaggerated for me, like especially 00:12:294 (1,2) - because you compare that with the spacing on 00:12:638 (1,1) - . You kinda expect a larger jump since the pitch peaks at 00:12:811 -
♠ 00:17:638 (3,4) - No triple or kickslider?
♠ 00:26:949 (2,3,4,1) - Spacing is a bit confusing, especially 4>1
♠ 00:55:225 (1,2) - I would make this a kick-slider instead. It makes more sense to begin the streams again on 00:55:397 - vocals + drum.
♠ 01:04:018 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - NC thing.
♠ 01:13:673 (1) - Okay using a 1/1 slider right after those 1/2 jumps is kinda weird for me lol. I would use a 1/2 slider and a circle instead so there isn't such a drastic rhythm change.
♠ 01:24:880 (2) - Sounds kinda overmapped. I'd do a 1/2 slider here instead
♠ 01:25:914 (4,1) - If you're going for a stack, its quite off.
♠ 01:27:121 (1) - Make the tail a bit more visible. Like, the border.
~

Fixed all except the jump into 1/1 slider , i thought it would nice to have a easier pattern after those jumps also i had 1/4 sliders later too. Thanks!

Yunomi

292 posts

Joined May 2014

Yunomi 2016-01-03T22:36:13+00:00

extra

00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - these screen jump scalings are a bit too extreme throughout the map, scale them just a bit smaller to fit with the difficulty of the rest of the map. this song doesn't call for those kinds of jumps imo.
01:12:292 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - another example here which 01:13:328 (1,2) - shrinks so much compared from 01:12:982 (1,2) - but they are similar intensity. can fix this by making 01:12:982 (1,2) - smaller.
00:55:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is kinda ugly xd
01:20:397 (4) - maybe this vocal should be emphasized with a slider, felt kinda weird going from that to a stream.

i had no problems with playing the map but the difficulty felt kind of forced. jumps are definitely playable but i think it could be better if it's scaled down a little. nice map aerous your new name fucking sucks

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-01-03T23:21:59+00:00

Adore wrote:
extra

00:11:604 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - these screen jump scalings are a bit too extreme throughout the map, scale them just a bit smaller to fit with the difficulty of the rest of the map. this song doesn't call for those kinds of jumps imo. Maybe later , if its like a major issue that is unrankable.
01:12:292 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - another example here which 01:13:328 (1,2) - shrinks so much compared from 01:12:982 (1,2) - but they are similar intensity. can fix this by making 01:12:982 (1,2) - smaller. Might just leave the distance here and increase the angle
00:55:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is kinda ugly xd xd yea i'll try to fix it up if i have other ideas? for now no change
01:20:397 (4) - maybe this vocal should be emphasized with a slider, felt kinda weird going from that to a stream. after those streams and slider jumps i wanted the player to have like a short rest here so they can continue the long ass stream that comes up later

i had no problems with playing the map but the difficulty felt kind of forced. jumps are definitely playable but i think it could be better if it's scaled down a little. nice map aerous your new name fucking sucks

Thanks for the mod and yes I know my name is fucking good ! Jk , I'll change it back soon :3

edit: fk new page

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2016-01-09T20:39:45+00:00

d

SPOILER

14:20 Aerous: wanna leag
14:20 Kibbleru: ok
14:20 Aerous: ok
14:21 Kibbleru: how can i be non pleb at csgo
14:21 Kibbleru: i feed 0/19 ever gaem
14:21 Kibbleru:

14:21 Aerous: LOL
14:21 Aerous: LOLOLOL
14:21 Aerous: niceeeee
14:21 Aerous: just play more ?!?!??!?!
14:21 Aerous: whats ur mouse sens
14:21 Kibbleru: low
14:21 Aerous: do you run and spray
14:21 Kibbleru: no
14:21 Aerous: just watch those youtube vids
14:21 Kibbleru: i stand still and try to aim
14:21 Kibbleru: or behind a wall
14:22 Aerous: yea just practice aim in those workshop maps
14:22 Kibbleru: but ppl seem to always have better acc than me xd
14:22 Aerous: i guess u have to play more osu
14:22 Kibbleru: same
14:23 Aerous: or you know spend money into unboxing knife
14:23 Aerous: thats how you go pro
14:23 Kibbleru: lmao
14:24 Kibbleru: ik my friend does alot of this stuff
14:24 Kibbleru: skins n shit
14:24 Kibbleru: hes spent prob over 2k on csgo skins
14:24 Aerous: damn
14:24 Aerous: does he bet
14:24 Kibbleru: yea
14:24 Kibbleru: he earns alot of money
14:24 Kibbleru: apparently
14:24 Kibbleru: by betting
14:25 Kibbleru: iirc he also did some rock paper sissors betting lmfao
14:25 Kibbleru: scissors
14:25 Kibbleru: tfw u forgot how to spell scissors
14:25 Kibbleru: what rank r u csgo anyway
14:26 Aerous: dmg?!?!?
14:26 Aerous: i let my friend go play on it
14:26 Aerous: so idk
14:26 Aerous: anymore
14:26 Kibbleru: lol
14:26 Aerous: spent
14:26 Aerous: req
14:27 Aerous: on my smurf xd
14:27 Kibbleru: if ur silver 1 i no longer respect u as a memer
14:28 Kibbleru: the friend of mien is like
14:28 Kibbleru: master eagle or something
14:28 Kibbleru: idk
14:28 Kibbleru: the higher one
15:26 Aerous: mod one diff for me plz
15:26 Aerous: xd
15:26 Kibbleru: if its irc
15:27 Kibbleru: discord modding
15:27 Kibbleru: get on
15:27 Kibbleru: https://discord.gg/0WDeFZOi0THEf9Nd
15:27 Aerous: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/300312
15:27 Aerous: xtra plz
15:27 Aerous: so i can get apple to take a look
15:28 *Aerous is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/674128 yanaginagi - Haru Modoki [Xtra]]
15:32 Kibbleru: 00:55:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
15:32 Kibbleru: 01:11:259 (2,1,2) -
15:33 Kibbleru: 01:27:121 -
15:34 Kibbleru: 00:11:949 (1) -
15:34 Kibbleru: 00:15:397 (3,1) -
15:34 Kibbleru: 00:15:570 (2) -
15:35 Kibbleru: 00:15:397 - nc here
15:35 Kibbleru: not 00:15:570 -
15:35 Kibbleru: 00:17:638 (3,4,5) - trasfasofas
15:35 Kibbleru: f
15:35 Kibbleru: safas
15:35 Kibbleru: fas
15:35 Kibbleru: das
15:36 Kibbleru: 00:28:673 (1) -
15:36 Kibbleru: 00:58:328 (6) - nc
15:37 Kibbleru: 01:14:190 (2,3,4) - a nice description of the every day solo q teammates i get paired up with
15:37 Kibbleru: cancer

Pho

1,786 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2016-01-16T19:52:57+00:00

few stuff

Easy
00:04:707 (1) - Enlarge this to 00:06:776 - maybe, the gap right now feels awkward considering there is still some action inbetween. Or do it like in your Normal.
00:20:570 (3) - These stubs aren't that welcome in easy diffs anymore, so you better find another way to map this out:
00:37:121 (3,1) - 00:34:880 (1,2) - blanket xd
00:48:845 (1) - 00:59:880 (1) - make this look less cramped, it's easy diff after all
01:05:397 (1,2) - Can you make flow less broken please?
01:20:914 (3,1) - This cries for it

Please work a little bit on this easy diff, it doesn't look visually appealing as your normal and sometimes feels like you just slapped random straight sliders in here and set some angle between them (e.g. 00:09:535 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 00:18:328 (1,2,3) - 00:51:604 (1,2) - 01:06:604 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 01:15:052 (3,1,2,3) - 01:23:328 (3,4,1,2,3) - ).

Mochi
01:03:673 (4,1) - This might a bit hard to read even for advanced players, can you make a slight overlap?
01:08:156 (1,2) - Cuter blanket

captin
01:08:501 (3,4) - Feels pretty low-spaced in comparison to how intense this beat is in the tracl IMO.

celsiusghandislk
00:40:225 (4) - 1/4 rly? I think this was supposed to be 1/3
00:58:328 (1) - I think you can make a prettier shape here.
01:20:914 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - streamshape :c
01:25:397 (4) - Would set a NC here, this is somewhat difficult to read imo

X
00:03:673 (2,2) - whats this
00:17:638 (3) - 1/6. Actually, the whole 00:17:121 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern looks randomly spaced to me somehow, can you structure this a bit better?
00:49:535 (3) - clap
00:54:363 - Clapspam is really bad idea here unless your intention is to cause earbleeding to the players. Try to find a more simplified clap pattern, similar to captin's.
01:04:018 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - like how does this pattern complement the music, there are mostly strings in this part which aren't even intense at all and you put in gradually increasing jumps in it.
01:10:570 (1,2,1) - lol spacing. Nerf this would be adviseable.
01:24:707 (1) - clap on tail.

Xtra could be more polished ehh.... but k. Please look at the things I mentioned in Easy.

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-01-16T22:08:14+00:00

Fixed all , sorry for my easy thats from like half a year ago xdd

except xtra 00:03:673 (2) - cuz i love this slider

Momochikun

1,954 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2016-01-17T00:41:42+00:00

Fixed

SPOILER

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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-01-17T13:31:00+00:00

Pho wrote:
few stuff

celsiusghandislk
00:40:225 (4) - 1/4 rly? I think this was supposed to be 1/3 ye I remember trying to figure out the snap here long time ago I'm sure the beat at the reverse arrow land on 1/4 eventhough the tail might sound like 1/3 but vocal is happen to be on 1/2 there too so it kinda ok here
00:58:328 (1) - I think you can make a prettier shape here. i tried z
01:20:914 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - streamshape :c lol stream shape maybe be kinda like d but it play kinda better when it shape better for some reason so maybe I will keep itI also fixed some curve here 01:21:259 (1,2) - a bit
01:25:397 (4) - Would set a NC here, this is somewhat difficult to read imo oop

thanks for the mods

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captin1

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captin1 2016-01-17T21:56:50+00:00

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Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
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Pho

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Pho 2016-01-17T23:09:41+00:00

~

Mint

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Joined February 2013

Mint 2016-01-18T22:16:49+00:00

As your request.

NO KD

General

* Clean!

Easy

* 00:50:914 - Would be cool if this sound was actually clickable. Split it up in a circle + 1/2 instead? Completely up to you tho.

Mochi's Hard

* Different spinner/slider ending time at the end of the map compared to the other difficulties. It's allowed since it's a GD, but consider making it consistent.

captin's Insane

* 01:19:535 (4) - Could use a clap too.

Celsius' Insane

* 00:37:294 (4,5) - This stack is a bit strange to me. The clap on (5) doesn't get any emphasis now.

Xtra

* 00:01:949 (3,4) - Swap these? Would play more natural to me.
* 00:37:121 (5,6,7) - It'd make more sense to me if (6,7) would be larger than (5,6) due to the clap.
* 00:57:639 (2,1) - Plays this part so many times, but this distance seems a bit too far for me, maybe I just suck at this game >_>
* 01:10:570 (1,2) - A pity that these are sliders. Since the sounds on the blue tick or almost equally as strong as the white & red ticks here, a small stream would fit much better imo. Even the other difficulties did that <_<`

Everything looks nice, feel free to call me back!

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-01-19T04:15:51+00:00

Fixed all

captin1

osu! Alumni

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Joined February 2011

captin1 2016-01-20T03:45:24+00:00

add the clap for me thx bby

Mint

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Mint 2016-01-20T21:17:36+00:00

Qualified!

Kalibe

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Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2016-01-20T22:18:36+00:00

Yay, grats ( ˘ω˘ )

Haruto

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Joined December 2013

Haruto 2016-01-20T22:24:15+00:00

grats!

Okoayu

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined May 2012

Okoayu 2016-01-21T00:08:20+00:00

vocals in the end are off, but timable, refer to p/4793938 and how this set handles the last few vocals in general

i'd suggest something around 01:26:458 - for that timing point but getting more opinions would be appreciated, it's 1 am

i might add that the whistle spam in the beginning sounds excessive since there's no 2/1 piano going on

-430~-460 idk seems to work way better for the video like really.
i referred to like any youtube video of the opening and song in sync

Bonsai

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Joined July 2011

Bonsai 2016-01-21T00:40:06+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
vocals in the end are off, but timable, refer to p/4793938 and how this set handles the last few vocals in general

i'd suggest something around 01:26:458 - for that timing point but getting more opinions would be appreciated, it's 1 am

i might add that the whistle spam in the beginning sounds excessive since there's no 2/1 piano going on

-430~-460 idk seems to work way better for the video like really.
i referred to like any youtube video of the opening and song in sync

^ for the vocals at the end 01:26:468 would be right imo, for the video offset -370 seems right to me based on the downbeat at 00:03:328 being perfectly snyced with the screen change in the video
and the whistles at 00:01:259 and 00:02:638 seem too much for me too~

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

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Irreversible 2016-01-21T01:00:57+00:00

Hi there! confirmed issue, hence why I pull it out of qualification.

Please fix it up and don't hesitate asking something if you need further clarification.

ac8129464363

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Joined October 2013

ac8129464363 2016-01-21T01:16:38+00:00

hi i just want to complain about the claps at the beginning of xtra

ok bye

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-01-21T02:27:47+00:00

~~Ok Ty I'll fix later~~

ok changed video offset and added timing

Pho

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Joined November 2013

Pho 2016-03-13T11:24:36+00:00

The issues pointed out still persist:

Timing from Easy, Normal and Celsius' diff still need to be adjusted.
Fix the unsnapped last spinner from Mochi's Hard

Call me back then.

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-03-31T23:28:18+00:00

ok im back ill fix it

Pho

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Pho 2016-04-16T20:32:28+00:00

Let's try again

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-05-01T08:33:12+00:00

xd

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2016-07-13T01:47:31+00:00

3 month bubble detected o.o
If you need a BN, you can call me :3

Aerous

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Aerous 2016-07-17T01:40:34+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
3 month bubble detected o.o
If you need a BN, you can call me :3

omg my savior! \:D/

Arusamour

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Arusamour 2016-07-18T03:23:55+00:00

yay finally another round of qualification

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2016-07-31T01:08:18+00:00

The green timing section at 01:28:242 would fit the vocals better if it was moved at 01:28:192 (1) instead o3o (Easy-Normal-Extra only)
Not sure why this mapset got abandoned :/

Anyways, I'll move this mapset forward once you've made your reply.

Aerous

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Aerous 2016-08-18T16:09:44+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
The green timing section at 01:28:242 would fit the vocals better if it was moved at 01:28:192 (1) instead o3o (Easy-Normal-Extra only)
Not sure why this mapset got abandoned :/

Anyways, I'll move this mapset forward once you've made your reply.

okay fixed !

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2016-08-18T21:41:33+00:00

Okay! Last heart icon for real now!
Good luck~

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