i hate pp wrote:
Helloim gay
02:30:255 (3,4) - Increase the spacing between 3 and 4 ---no need , like 01:01:979 (3,4) -
04:12:496 (4) - I dont think you need this here ---i keep ,if any mod say this again , i will consider
04:47:496 (1) - I like the slider art but it goes on for too long. Theres no reason for it to be so long because it continues even after the music ends. ---let's keep it ,
I cant find any other issues with your map. Good luck with it
Mollon wrote:
还债。。感觉摸不出啥,很喜欢这种类型的排列,随便说下
泡菜王diff 2333 ---嘛,这diff名是 公主的全称
跳我一直都比较喜欢,看这张图有点感觉音乐起来该把间距加上去的时候有些位置间距还是偏小,和前段差不多甚至有的时候更小,像01:08:875 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) 这段,感觉间距就可以加一下 ---这里就不加了
00:15:772 (1,2,3) - 大概看了一下前后节奏与间距,感觉这里应该间距更大一点的 √
00:26:806 (1,2,3,4) - ^ √
00:28:358 (1,2,3,4) - 要不要像后面那样反一下2和3 我感觉有点坑 ---这里不反, 虽然坑点,但有趣些,类似的几个地方都是这排列
01:10:082 (4,5) - 可以再往右上一点 这么重音 √
02:05:772 (4,1) - 看样子是不想包但是看着有点怪 ---好吧换了下排版+blanket√
爽111
thank you allhanyuu_nanodesu wrote:
Hi from my modding Q~
MillhioreF ? .-. --a ha , it is a character's Full Name in Anima : [DOG DAYS]
Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others
[Millhiore F. Biscotti]
- About combo color, I think the current combo color 3 (brown) don't really fit the light happy happy pink background. I think it would be better if you use something light too like yellow or light blue. √
- Check your AiMod again, there are two spot where there are overlapping timing points. √
- Is epilepsy warning really necessary? o-o I see your storyboard is pretty light, only dimming the background at slower part and lighting it up again. I tried to disable epilepsy warning and AiMod don't even ask to enable it... Maybe it's unnecessary?√
- 00:41:462 I prefer if the vocal here is clickable so maybe shorten (3) 1/4 beat or 1/2 beat and add a note here instead.√
- 00:55:944 (2,3) - I think the stack kinda unnecessary... It's would be better if you either unstack these or stack 00:55:944 (2,3,4) - together (instead of only 2 and 3) because they have the same sound. ---ok, i stack 234
- 01:10:944 (1) - Since this is preceded by some jumps, I think this slider should act as "bumper". To do that, the flow from the previous note should be better, and the current is kinda rough. Maybe curve it the other way to make it smoother and to avoid unnecessary combo break. ---fix
- 01:30:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Honestly I prefer if at this part the map would just stop so at here 01:31:634 you can totally feel the pressure and the map would be more dynamics (I'm bad at explaining this x-x). So maybe just delete these. ---i keep these
- 02:16:117 (2) - Hmm, it's a pretty nice place to use 1/2 rhythm to follow vocal here :/√
- 02:37:841 (1) - Try to delete this note, I think it sounds better. ---keep this like 01:09:565 (1) -
- 02:59:220 (3) - Actually I feel the same as previous part, but if you insist to keep, it much better to play the entire vocal instead of ignoring some like this one (just like what you did at the first part, it's better) since the only sound this part is following is vocal so better stick to vocal. ---yep ,as u said , i keep here like before
- 03:11:806 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Maybe you should fix this hexagon shape... Or if it weren't mean to be hexagon, you better make it into hexagon... You know about ctrl+shift+D feature right? o-o ok , √
- 03:48:186 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe be more consistent since it the same sound... stack both or unstack both. ---stack both
- 04:08:875 Maybe turn off the kiai for a while here, and start it again here 04:10:255 since that part is quiet and so that the star would burst again here 04:10:255 . Furthermore, stopping here 04:08:875 and starting again here 04:09:393 is pretty good actually. Maybe you could use the same rhythm for the previous two parts instead of using 1/1 slider here 04:08:875 ---kiai fix ,but for 04:08:531 (5,6) - ,so 7 i do not use slider
- 04:12:151 (2,3,4,5) - Aren't this note need a little jump to each other? Their sound is pretty big, worth enough to be emphasized by jumps. ---ok, fix
- 04:47:496 (1) - Nice slider but pretty sad that the sound actually ends around here 04:55:772 lol, it's alright tho xD---no no , actually i think it end at 05:01:634 but there are too light ,so i do it at 05:00:600 ,u can up the volume and u will know this
Overall nice map and such a cute song *^*
Good luck, have a nice new year