HB24 wrote:

[Easy]
-00:16:522 (3,1) - blanket this better
-01:05:384 (2,3) - this fits better:

Pic

current one is fine and easier rhythm as it stays on white ticks
-01:11:852 (3,2) - make them parallel looks better:

Pic

sure
-01:19:396 (2) - idk the reason for this slidershape
-01:23:349 (2,1) - blanket this better dood
-01:27:660 (1,2) - same here
-01:37:001 (2,3) - ^
-01:40:594 (3,4) - ^
fixed them
-01:42:031 (1,2) - a bit confusing for nabs i would recommend to move the anchor point a bit to the middle very clear shape, movement and spacing
-01:44:905 (1) - u could stack the tail on 01:42:750 (2) - could

[Normal]
-a bit afraid of some slidershapes that may confuse beginners since low diffs must have as clear slider path as possible
example:00:08:618 (1,2) - 00:11:492 (1,2) - 00:17:241 (1) -
i guess u need to make ccorners a bit more clear and noticable
should be fine for normal, there is still a lower diff with very simple sliders
-00:27:301 (1,1) - reason for not stacking those? does it matter? different movement and patterns
-00:48:319 (6) - :

Pic

current one fits better with sounds
-01:13:828 (3) - slidershape thingie this one is confusing, right
-01:27:660 (1) - would stack wth 01:25:684 (3) - and blanket with 01:27:301 (4) -
-01:27:301 (4,5) - dem stacks
all those dont make any difference during gampleay as they are so far apart and only restrict possible placement
-01:34:846 (4,5) - is this a blanket? lol

[Hard]
-00:04:486 (4,5) - elite blanketing fixed
-00:13:109 (2) - dont like this slidershape changed a bit
-00:22:271 (1,2) - swap NC sure
-00:25:864 (1,2) - omg dood dont know wat u have against blankets xD
-00:27:840 (4,5) - ^
uh, guess i fixed those
-00:30:534 (3,5) - more separated pls yes
-00:52:630 (4,1) - not completely looking parallel
fixed
-01:15:983 (1) - i would make this part like this:

Pic

current one fits better
-01:20:295 (1) - same suggestion here ^
-01:22:989 (3,1) - it would ve been a gud blanket instead of this this is nicer than boring blanket

[Insane]
-well i can clearly hear piano notes here: 00:11:672 - 00:12:211 - 00:12:750 - 00:13:289 - 00:15:804 - current one follow the song nicely and brings out the important piano sound while keeping a density that fits this part
-00:22:271 (1,2) - swap NC
-00:23:079 (1,1) - isnt reaction time a bit abused here? xD maybe not for a ninja fine for Insane/Extra
-00:27:929 (2) - this must bere here 00:27:840 - and circle here 00:28:378 - no, lol- I follows the background noise while having the strong piano clickable
-00:44:007 - feels weird not having a note here only held vocals here
-00:58:558 (1,1) - i dont like this overlap wh, I is overlapped like all those overlaps on the map
-01:08:438 (5) - more curved
-01:09:157 (2) - ^
01:07:540 (1,5,2) - are all the same shape and fit fine here

well thats all gud luck 0/

thanks for modding!

Hi.





That's all.
I have a suspicion that this mod isn't very helpful, so I will only ask for 1 or 2 difficulties modded on my map.

-Nao Tomori- wrote:

Hi.

Extra

00:08:618 (1) - not sure why this is a repeat slider, it sounds weird. consider muting it.
00:11:492 (1,3) - ^ , the sound you are following appears to be inaudible with any level of hitsound
seems fine on normal volume, check each tick @50% and you can clearly hear it, seems fitting
00:25:864 (1) - i think this looks weird and unnecessary, why not use a normal slider?
current shape gives you some more time to react to the doubled sv due to pathing
00:33:947 (5,6,1) - this "pattern" looks weird, looks a lot better when the notes are just stacked on the slider. this happens throughout the map.
00:51:552 (5,6,1) - ^
this is consistently done on downbeats and suits the music well
00:58:558 (1,2,3) - this, in my opinion should either be facing the other way (like the combos before it) or at an angle similar to the combo after it.
as of now it looks like the two triangles before it are related, and then the next two are random, which shouldn't be the case. yes, I'm going to just make it one clockwise circular jump to be as 2015 as possible. or I could make it more interesting, basically it's sepearted into 00:57:480 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:58:558 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:59:636 (1,2,1,2) - with flow changes which is really nice and more interesting than "lol 2015 pp hexagons"

01:38:977 (9) - i think this sound is more like a single note, rather than a slider.rihht on that one, changed

Insane

00:51:732 (1,2,3) - consider making these spacing the same current reflects beat intensity way better
01:28:558 (1,2,3) - ^ Not the same, but better fitting
01:33:408 (1,2,3,4) - this feels kind of awkward to play, but it might just be me. consider changing the pattern to make a square. I like how this plays and the spacing fits really nice

Hard

00:06:283 (2) - imperfect blanket unrankable please remap (kappa)
00:38:618 (1) - ^
k
01:36:283 (1) - it would be nice if this was the same slider as (2) for continuity's sake no. and I like this movement better

Normal

00:33:049 (3,4,5) - feels like there should be a note in between 3 and 4. goes fine with rhythm from 1-2-3
01:10:774 (2,3,4) - consider making these 1/2 sliders, though it might be too hard for "normal" 1/1 taps are fine here for this diff

That's all.
I have a suspicion that this mod isn't very helpful, so I will only ask for 1 or 2 difficulties modded on my map.

thanks for the mod!

Heyo. M4m from your queue.

Easy

1. 00:09:516 (2) - Is this supposed to start on a red tic? I can hear the piano this is going to, but its a little disorienting for an easy diff. (Same with 00:15:265)
2. 00:52:450 (2,3) - Minor gripe, but the gap between notes (like you've done in the previous 5-6 combos) is in a different spot. Sounds good with the same gap as the previous combos.
3. 01:11:852 (3) - If you move the third node of this slider x-4 and make the second last node red, it should blanket better with the slider in the next combo.

Normal

1. 2.26 Stars. Argh. It bugged me when it happened on my map, but I reduced the CS by .1 and it was listed as normal on the site (dropped from 2.26 to 2.23). Just information.
2. 00:26:582 - You probably already know this, but you can put stuff 2 measures after the spinner on Normals. Would be nice to see something here
3. 00:33:768 (4,5,6) - I feel this plays better with two 1/2 sliders instead of note note slider.
4. 00:48:319 (6) - Flows better if 6 starts at a Y coordinate less than 5 (Higher on the screen)
5. 01:31:253 - Same as 00:26:582.

Hard

1. 00:21:193 (3,4,5) - Personally not a fan of the Anti-jumps here but personal preference. (Same with 01:26:223)
2. 00:32:151 (2,1) - This flows wierdly imo. Maybe move (1) slightly further to the left and upwards (closer to (1) of the previous combo)
3. Otherwise diff looks good. GJ

Insane

1. 00:02:870 (1,2) - Is there a reason these two sliders are x0.50 Velocity multiplier while the rest are at x0.53?
2. 01:00:355 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Not a fan of how you have streams bookending kick slider jumps. I'd either have 8 notes in stream and then the kick slider jumps (Like you did at 01:11:852) or the kick slider jumps then the stream.
3. 01:12:570 (1,2,1,2) - This jump is pretty tricky imo, I'd scale it down a bit.

Can't mod Extra because I can't play that high diff yet.

Sorry my mod wasn't huge. I'm a bit tired at failing pretty hard at playtesting.

Hiicantpk wrote:

Heyo. M4m from your queue.

Easy

1. 00:09:516 (2) - Is this supposed to start on a red tic? I can hear the piano this is going to, but its a little disorienting for an easy diff. (Same with 00:15:265) seems fine for me, not really a difficulty rhythm and fits nicely
2. 00:52:450 (2,3) - Minor gripe, but the gap between notes (like you've done in the previous 5-6 combos) is in a different spot. Sounds good with the same gap as the previous combos. goes fien with the music and having some more 1/1 etc. gaps is nice for newer players
3. 01:11:852 (3) - If you move the third node of this slider x-4 and make the second last node red, it should blanket better with the slider in the next combo.Yes, I did some stuff here to make the sliderblanket nicer

Normal

1. 2.26 Stars. Argh. It bugged me when it happened on my map, but I reduced the CS by .1 and it was listed as normal on the site (dropped from 2.26 to 2.23). Just information. difficulty icons don't matter
2. 00:26:582 - You probably already know this, but you can put stuff 2 measures after the spinner on Normals. Would be nice to see something here
3. 00:33:768 (4,5,6) - I feel this plays better with two 1/2 sliders instead of note note slider. yes
4. 00:48:319 (6) - Flows better if 6 starts at a Y coordinate less than 5 (Higher on the screen) think this plays more interesting
5. 01:31:253 - Same as 00:26:582.
   as for the spinners, that might be true, but every note before 01:31:612 - is appears during the spinner and I don't really like that for normals and that spot feils weird to put the first note on, so I'll leave it like that for now

Hard

1. 00:21:193 (3,4,5) - Personally not a fan of the Anti-jumps here but personal preference. (Same with 01:26:223) they fit fine
2. 00:32:151 (2,1) - This flows wierdly imo. Maybe move (1) slightly further to the left and upwards (closer to (1) of the previous combo) think it plays fine and also looks much better like this
3. Otherwise diff looks good. GJ

Insane

1. 00:02:870 (1,2) - Is there a reason these two sliders are x0.50 Velocity multiplier while the rest are at x0.53? lol I copied the timing points from extra where they are needed for a pattern, made all 0.53x here
2. 01:00:355 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Not a fan of how you have streams bookending kick slider jumps. I'd either have 8 notes in stream and then the kick slider jumps (Like you did at 01:11:852) or the kick slider jumps then the stream. love how this plays and fits nicely
3. 01:12:570 (1,2,1,2) - This jump is pretty tricky imo, I'd scale it down a bit. yeah, I swapped 01:12:929 (1,2) - to make it small square into triangle kicksliders things

Can't mod Extra because I can't play that high diff yet.

Sorry my mod wasn't huge. I'm a bit tired at failing pretty hard at playtesting.

thanks :v

M4M from your queue ;>


The Extra was really fun to play though https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4218112

Aeril wrote:

M4M from your queue ;>

[Easy]

• No problems I could see popping out here

[Normal]

• • 00:50:115 (4,5,6,7) - looks a bit weird, consider moving to this kind of pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4218046 sure
  • 01:15:265 - sounds a bit weird leaving out a beat here added sth
  • 01:31:702 (1) - was this meant to be placed on the white tick? o, lol. fixed that

[Hard]

• • 00:12:570 (3,1) - why is this NC'd, its part of the last sliders rhythm, remove the NC dont really think so and it follow a consistent nc pattern anyways, no nc would be weirder here :v
  • 00:20:115 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is a very awkward rhythm to follow, consider making them all into 1/1 sliders had 1/1 sliders hjere before and they felt really unfitting, rhythm is fine to read and the sldiers dont punish misreading with bad acc anyways
  • 00:25:864 (1,2) - properly blanket this note pls
  • 00:27:840 (4,5) - ^
  • 01:00:355 (1,2,3,4,1) - consider spacing these out a bit more as it might be a bit hard to read for a newer player
  • 01:11:852 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
  those patterns are fine, you should consider this is a "hard" difficulty and in the middle of the set, this is not mean for newer players, they could play normal, this is meant for players with some experience and those are not very uncommon on hards

[Insane]

• • 00:26:582 (1,2,3,4) - i feel 4 would do better spaced under beat 2 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4217927 ruins intended flow and is spaced to high for intensiity of the sound on red tick
  • 00:32:510 (4,5) - ctrl+g 4 and 5
  same for all of those tbh, there is a clear spacing and flow concept behind them with higher spacing on the stronger white ticks
  • 01:12:929 (1,2) - switch these 2
  lol I just switched those in the last mod, but i'll change them again
  • 01:15:624 (6,7) - ctrl+g why? that would put way more emphasis on 6 which doesnt make sense musically

[Extra]

• • 00:05:744 (1,2) - looks a bit weird but plays fine, maybe try spacing it out evenly on both sides of 00:05:025 (5) - ? stacked on 5 already and perfectly mirrored, other stuff is intended
  • 00:08:618 (1,2) - maybe space out the hit circle from the slider, almost missed it on my first time through, same goes for 00:11:492 (1,2) - and 00:12:031 (3,4) - but 00:10:414 (1,2) - is fine because the slider sticks out
  tried sth new
  • 00:42:750 (6,7,1) - i feel like this would play and look better with a straight triple https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4217876 nah, this is nicer and makes for a great transition into the square
  • 00:55:145 (3,4,5) - i think spacing this stream out more would play better ruins the whole pattern/spacing concept and it plays fine imo
  • 01:08:259 (4,5) - less awkward if you do ctrl+g on slider 5 current transitions better into the next pattern and the symmetry feels really fitting here

The Extra was really fun to play though https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4218112

thanks for modding!

M4M,

brief mod for not finding anything bad in these diff....
and I guess you wont be interested in my test play....so no picture...
GL~

Edit:
btw I think stein gate is a really great anime

cHelli wrote:

M4M,

[Extra]

1. 00:58:558 (1,2,3) - I wonder why not a triangle like before and after here...
2. 00:59:636 (1,2,1,2) - and this does not fit well by using the similar triangle jumps like before imo.....

I'm not kinda experienced in extra mapping so
actually I changed the beginning of the jump sequence a bit, but the general idea of 2xtriangle - star - traingle stays
just some personal ideas. Hope these can be helpful
[Insane]

1. I think AR9 is better because players nowadays may be more familiar to higher AR. AR8.4 is little low for insane players imo.
   I might raise it a little bit, I used ar8 at first and even that seemed fine to me, the density isn't very high and the structure is simple, so lower ar should be fine
2. maybe larger distance? I feel the map too tight after playing it. Or maybe is necessary to map a insane+ diff for players who think extra is too difficult and insane is too easy.. looks fine to me, the insane has nearly the same rhythm as extra with some more sliders and fewer 1/4 while keeping a lower spacing, so it fits nice between hard and extra

brief mod for not finding anything bad in these diff....
and I guess you wont be interested in my test play....so no picture...
GL~

Edit:
btw I think stein gate is a really great anime

thanks for modding :v

Hi, m4m from your queue!

[General]

1. On some difficulties, the downbeat at 01:46:343 isn't emphasised. Why is this? Move the start of the spinner forward 1/2 and place a circle there and it will play a whole lot better.

[Easy]

1. 00:09:516 (2,3) - This rhythm might confuse new players, since a downbeat is skipped and the next note begins on a red tick. Not really much you can do about this though, considering the nature of the song at this point in time. It's just something to point out.
   00:12:570 (2) - Add a bell whistle at the end of this slider? I feel that it is missing one, since the music at this point is on a powerful, high pitched beat.
2. 00:15:265 (2,3) - Like 00:09:516 (2,3), I'm really not too sure about this rhythm.
3. 01:37:001 (2,3) - This blanket could be improved slightly. Nothing major, but bad blankets can look untidy at times.

[Normal]

1. 00:50:115 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks a bit lopsided, you can improve it by making sure the sliders are symmetrical with each other. Make sure the starts and ends of the sliders form a perfect square.
2. 01:27:301 (4,1) - This blanket is a bit off as well if you look closely.
3. 01:36:283 (1,2) - I'm not a fan of these sliders; they bend at 90° angles which seems out of place with the rest of the map. I recommend changing this into something more appropriate.

[Hard]

1. 00:09:516 (4) - I would recommend a different rhythm here, because the piano sounds are pretty powerful; I think they need some more emphasis. Especially the with bell hitsound you have here, it can make gameplay a bit jarring because you're not actually clicking the note, you're only letting go. Try something like 3 circles, or replacing that last repeat with a circle.
2. 01:05:923 (1) - I would get rid of the finish on this slider. Provided that you're mapping to the vocals, a finish wouldn't be a good choice because it is on the end of a slider, which is awkward to play because you'e not clicking on it. Also, the beat isn't that powerful in the song anyway, despite being a downbeat.

[Insane]
Pretty nice insane, that's all I could find.

1. 01:11:133 (5,6) - This could flow a bit better, these long sliders are curving in totally different directions, and the player would have to follow them completely to get a 300s

[Extra]

1. 00:05:025 (5,1,2) - I'm not fond of this pattern. Although you made it a bit readable, I don't like how the cursor is restricted in the same place moving in the same direction. It doesn't play well and I feel that there are better things you can do to express this part of the music.
2. 00:22:989 (2,1) - The way this slider goes back on itself and hides under the bigger slider makes it very challenging to read, because the player might not notice this until it is too late. I recommend you change (1) to something that doesn't go back on itself so it is more readable.
3. 00:29:816 (3,1) - This antijump might also be a bit tricky considering the amount of NCs you already have in the music that are 1/2 spaced. A player might assume this is 1/2 as well, and hit too early. I'd get rid of this antijump or tone down on the NCs.
4. 00:51:552 (5,6,1) - Despite the NC, I still don't like how the notes are spaced differently, it looks strange. I recommend you make the spacing consistent here.
   00:54:965 (2,6) - Add an NC on these two notes, having all of 00:54:606 (1,3,4,5,7) - the same colour is tricky to read, and doesn't exactly look nice. Adding NCs to (2,6) will sort this out, creating a more organised feel to the beatmap.
5. 00:55:864 (8,9,1) - Again, I'm not fond of the inconsistent spacing.

Overall, this is a pretty solid beatmap. You've utilized good flow and hitsounding, but some aesthetics could do some work. I shot a star, good luck!

-Faded- wrote:

Hi, m4m from your queue!

[General]

1. On some difficulties, the downbeat at 01:46:343 isn't emphasised. Why is this? Move the start of the spinner forward 1/2 and place a circle there and it will play a whole lot better. su7re, added on easy and hard

[Easy]

1. 00:09:516 (2,3) - This rhythm might confuse new players, since a downbeat is skipped and the next note begins on a red tick. Not really much you can do about this though, considering the nature of the song at this point in time. It's just something to point out get what you mean but it should be fine, this fits the song better and the gaps between the notes are 1/1 and 2/1 like before
   00:12:570 (2) - Add a bell whistle at the end of this slider? I feel that it is missing one, since the music at this point is on a powerful, high pitched beat. sure, that's fine. I that sound on the next white tick on all other diffs, but I couln'd map it on easy so I'll use this one. putting it on 2 in a row would be too spammy
2. 00:15:265 (2,3) - Like 00:09:516 (2,3), I'm really not too sure about this rhythm. lol I accidentally ended 00:15:265 (2) - too early here, rhythtm and gaps make more sense here now
3. 01:37:001 (2,3) - This blanket could be improved slightly. Nothing major, but bad blankets can look untidy at times. sure

[Normal]

1. 00:50:115 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks a bit lopsided, you can improve it by making sure the sliders are symmetrical with each other. Make sure the starts and ends of the sliders form a perfect square. not really my intention but it looks nicer
2. 01:27:301 (4,1) - This blanket is a bit off as well if you look closely. fixed
3. 01:36:283 (1,2) - I'm not a fan of these sliders; they bend at 90° angles which seems out of place with the rest of the map. I recommend changing this into something more appropriate.but my 2007 sliders :'( meh I made the more modern

[Hard]

1. 00:09:516 (4) - I would recommend a different rhythm here, because the piano sounds are pretty powerful; I think they need some more emphasis. Especially the with bell hitsound you have here, it can make gameplay a bit jarring because you're not actually clicking the note, you're only letting go. Try something like 3 circles, or replacing that last repeat with a circle. added circle for the piano
2. 01:05:923 (1) - I would get rid of the finish on this slider. Provided that you're mapping to the vocals, a finish wouldn't be a good choice because it is on the end of a slider, which is awkward to play because you'e not clicking on it. Also, the beat isn't that powerful in the song anyway, despite being a downbeat. sure

[Insane]
Pretty nice insane, that's all I could find.

1. 01:11:133 (5,6) - This could flow a bit better, these long sliders are curving in totally different directions, and the player would have to follow them completely to get a 300 I moved those around a bit to give a nvier flow and better transition into the stream

[Extra]

1. 00:05:025 (5,1,2) - I'm not fond of this pattern. Although you made it a bit readable, I don't like how the cursor is restricted in the same place moving in the same direction. It doesn't play well and I feel that there are better things you can do to express this part of the music. not really a problem imo, had nobody that testplayed complain about it and it like how it fits here
2. 00:22:989 (2,1) - The way this slider goes back on itself and hides under the bigger slider makes it very challenging to read, because the player might not notice this until it is too late. I recommend you change (1) to something that doesn't go back on itself so it is more readable. it's readable enough, and that curve makes it harder to break due to strong sv change and there is enough of the slider visible
3. 00:29:816 (3,1) - This antijump might also be a bit tricky considering the amount of NCs you already have in the music that are 1/2 spaced. A player might assume this is 1/2 as well, and hit too early. I'd get rid of this antijump or tone down on the NCs. maybe if the player isn't focused :v this "antijump" pattern is introduced starting from 00:13:109 (1,2,3,1) - and pretty consistent in spacing etc. not having an "antijump" here would actually be more confusing . also I don't think this is even an "antijump", just a low spaced 1/1
4. 00:51:552 (5,6,1) - Despite the NC, I still don't like how the notes are spaced differently, it looks strange. I recommend you make the spacing consistent here. they work great with the musical difference between 00:51:552 (5,6) - and 00:51:732 (1) - and are used consistently before downbeats
   00:54:965 (2,6) - Add an NC on these two notes, having all of 00:54:606 (1,3,4,5,7) - the same colour is tricky to read, and doesn't exactly look nice. Adding NCs to (2,6) will sort this out, creating a more organised feel to the beatmap. dont think pattern based nc is needed here
5. 00:55:864 (8,9,1) - Again, I'm not fond of the inconsistent spacing. 00:54:426 (7,8,1) - :v

Overall, this is a pretty solid beatmap. You've utilized good flow and hitsounding, but some aesthetics could do some work. I shot a star, good luck!

thanks for modding!

From MQ～
Extra
Insane
Hard
Normal
Easy
GL

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

From MQ～
Extra

00:32:331 (1,1,1,1,1) - Because the volume is alternation setting of 50% and the 10%, I don't feel the need reducing distance. I think that it becomes the factor to be confused.
I recommend that I make distance the same. Don't think this will be a problem, same rhythm/music is introduced way before so it should be fine, at least nobody that testplayed messed up acc/combo here. If more people compplain I might DS it though, but I really like the decreasing ds

00:36:283 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I don't like this flow little bit. Would you move 00:36:642 (4) - in x256 y267? That makes the spacving a bit weird. But I remade the pattern to have better angles

00:44:367 (6) - Would you add clap? SUre, that fits, added for other diffs too

00:45:624 (6) - ^ to slider tail. Don't like that one, that sound+slidertail doesnt really fit it

00:55:145 (3,4,5,7,3,4,5) - I think that it is not good placement. Please to line up it a little more neatly. sure, I rearranged them a bit

01:17:420 (6,1,2) - Rhythm is little bit strange. Please try this http://puu.sh/mf4n0.jpg Current one is really nice with vocals and instrument imo

Insane

00:48:139 (1,2) - Would you do Ctrl+G? I think that the strong beat has good start of the slider. I actually think the sound on the red tick feels stronger here, lol

01:12:750 (2,1) - Distance is too far. I recommend that I narrow it a little more. remade the pattern with lower ds

01:25:953 (6) - It is surplus note which there isn't even in Extra diff. I recommend that I remove it. the 1/4 is audible so it's fine. I just mapped them a bit differently, Extra is focused on vocals here and Insane on drums. I'd rather add a 1/4 on Extra if really needed, but I'll keep it like it is for now

Hard

00:48:139 (4,1) - It is the same as Insane diff. yeah, same reasoning :v

01:16:163 - I think that I have to pick this up. Would you change the 01:20:295 (1) - to 1circle and 1/2 slider? How about this? When I added clap to it, I did not feel a sense of incongruity. http://puu.sh/mfa4y.jpg think following vocals like that is fine here and it makes the diff easier to play

01:20:474 - ^ (+ add finish) same here

01:16:881 (4) - This likes curves personally. Would you bend it? http://puu.sh/mf8Sa.jpg 01:15:983 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is all straight sliders, would look out of place imo

01:18:498 (4) - ^ same

Normal

00:43:828 (3,4,5) - I felt it to be difficult in the normal diff. Would you switch to rhythm same as 00:44:905 (6) - ?

01:12:211 (2,3,4) - ^
seem fine to me and kleep it more interesting

01:06:462 (2) - This phrase is in particular difficult. I think it to be note which is not necessary in the normal diff. Removed that one

01:15:983 (4) - ^ following the vocals here, would feel weird without this one

01:25:684 (3) - ^ ^

01:13:289 (1,2,3,4) - A flow is narrow. Would you change to a little bit softer flow? For example http://puu.sh/mfbq7.jpg sure, made it smoother

I felt it to be difficult because there was much note overall. My normals always seem to end up a bit harder than average, lol. But because of that (and ranking criteria in most cases) I normally add a lower diff for beginner players that can't play this one. So it should be fine

Easy

This mod is gift of happy new year lol thanks :v
00:27:840 (3) - Would you extend 1/2 rhythm? It becomes easy to take rhythm to 00:28:738 (1) - http://puu.sh/mfdGH.jpg good idea, also made the sliders nicer

01:30:175 (3) - I did not feel the need of this note. I recommend that I remove it. huh? don't see any problems with it and 1/1 rhythm is nice to play here

GL

thanks for modding!

M4M from your queue.
You asked for more attention on the extra so that's what I'll be doing. And I can't mod Easy and Normal cause I have no experience with those difficulties.
Love the song too ^^


Hope I could help.

DavidEd wrote:

M4M from your queue.
You asked for more attention on the extra so that's what I'll be doing. And I can't mod Easy and Normal cause I have no experience with those difficulties.
Love the song too ^^

Extra

- I think you should totally use some kind of snare in the chorus. It kinda feels anti climatic and sounds more like a build up. I think this works better with what the music provides tbh
- 00:32:331(1,1,1,1) i think you should use consistent spacing on these sliders. since you are not he first to complain I'll change it
- 00:34:486(2) new combo and remove nc from 00:34:127(1) o sure
- 00:46:702 i like what you did here, but its so easy to break your combo when the sliders are facing outwards. ctrl+g all sliders and see how it plays out, you dont have to change if you dont feel like it. just personal opinion would break the whole pattern and how it looks. also it's nice to sometimes a a few slightly more challenging to read patterns :v
- 00:53:528(3) ctrl+g for somewhat better flow actulaly think it plays really nice and makes 00:53:528 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - a nice movement
- 01:04:486(5, stack 5 ontop of 3 sliderhead for a nice flow wouldnt change much and for this diff/map I never do that so it would feel pretty weird here to not have the typical overlap
- 01:11:852 amazing stream. just wanted to point that out xD :v
- 01:27:660 nerf this part, even for an extra its kinda too much spacing all of the sudden I nerfed 01:28:199 (2,1,2) - a little bit, but I'll keep 01:28:738 (2,1) - for now. It is only one jump and the angles make it quite easy to hit, also only adds like 0.01* and fits nice to finish the chorus
- 01:42:031(1,2,3) these triples thats upcoming doesnt look appealing. space them out for nicer gameplay think those stackjumps play nice here
- 01:52:181 NOT SUPER IMPORTANT but the song actually ends on that blue tick, so exceed that spinner to that timestamp. listen to that part in 25% if you dont belive me. seems right, I extended it by 1/4 on all diffs

nice diff

Insane

- It's pretty hard to read this diff, so make the AR a bit higher. maybe, lol. It seems fine to me tbh
- same for the hitsounding in this diff, i really think you should use a snare in the chorus for the same reason above.
- 01:52:091(1,2,1,2) i hope these wasnt intentional xD lol I forgot to remove, I "saved" the, there when I remapped a kickslider pattern
- 00:51:732(1,2,3) why not stack with the previous 00:50:834(3,4,5) same as extra, no stacks (except some 1/4 and stuff), only overlaps. also better to read imo
- 01:40:594 this part is kinda weird, no matter how hard i try, i just cant get a good accuracy on this part. this is up to you, but i think you should remap this part as it kinda plays awkwardly. but thats just me i hope Yeah, there are some (or more) people that struggle with 3/4 slider-1/4 note patterns and stuff, but it seems fine
- 01:52:181 NOT SUPER IMPORTANT but the song actually ends on that blue tick, so exceed that spinner to that timestamp. listen to that part in 25% if you dont belive me.

this diff also plays well, until that last part. well done

Hard

- Same with the hitsounds here as with the other diffs
- 01:00:355(1,2,3,4) new combo all of these, was hard to tell them apart (looks good aswell)
- 01:11:852(1,2,3,4) ^
guess I could do that, inb4 next person to mod is like "remove nc spam" lol
- 01:52:181 NOT SUPER IMPORTANT but the song actually ends on that blue tick, so exceed that spinner to that timestamp. listen to that part in 25% if you dont belive me.

couldnt find anything else, its a well made hard.

Hope I could help.

thanks for the mod :v

eyo m4m

[Easy]
00:54:965 (2) - move this slightly to the right
01:14:726 (3) - maybe rotate to something like this

[Normal]
idk looks good

[Hard]
00:48:858 (2) - I'd move this a bit further away from the previous slider. also add nc to this one and remove from previous slider

[Insane]
00:45:624 (5) - this could be horizontal flip of 00:45:624 (5) and would look nice imo

[Extra]
01:13:289 (1) - move this a bit lower and add a curve maybe
01:17:780 (2) - this is weird slider but idk
01:34:486 (6) - horizontal flip from 01:34:127 (5) , no?

very nice map

- Drummer- wrote:

eyo m4m

[Easy]
00:54:965 (2) - move this slightly to the right sure, somehow messed up anglesnap here
01:14:726 (3) - maybe rotate to something like this sure

[Normal]
idk looks good

[Hard]
00:48:858 (2) - I'd move this a bit further away from the previous slider. also add nc to this one and remove from previous slider

[Insane]
00:45:624 (5) - this could be horizontal flip of 00:45:624 (5) and would look nice imo lol you put the same timestamp twice but I get the suggestion. still think current one is nicer though

[Extra]
01:13:289 (1) - move this a bit lower and add a curve maybe moved and changed shape a bit
01:17:780 (2) - this is weird slider but idk lol
01:34:486 (6) - horizontal flip from 01:34:127 (5) , no? nah, 01:33:408 (1,5) - are like that, and I like the symmetry this makes with 01:34:846 (1) - more

very nice map

thanks for modding :v

Add Itou to the tags as her name is also commonly spelled this way.

More focused towards the easier diffs, dropped a couple things for the harder ones though.

[Easy]

1. 00:17:241 (1) - I would remove the red node personally and do a full blanket around instead
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2. 00:24:426 - the drumroll sound would sound better if it started here? Try like 30% volume
3. 00:38:618 - I would consider this to be the dominant note and where I honestly think 00:38:798 (3) - should start. Both the vocals and the instruments support this. This applies to almost every single pattern down the line such as 00:41:492 - 00:44:367 -00:47:241 - etc
4. 00:55:684 - circle
5. 00:57:121 - circle. The drums are really active here and it feels odd when going upbeat like this and having a break in the rhythm.
6. 01:00:714 (1) - optional, if you want a break you can easily remove this. making 01:01:792 (1) - feel like an epic hit.
7. 01:05:384 (2,3) - the 3/2 slider like 01:08:259 (2) - would be a better option here to capture the dominant notes.
8. 01:21:911 (1) - I don't think you need the 'ding' whistle in it lol.
9. 01:31:971 (3) - Less of a curve would be super. It feels way too tight.
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10. 01:34:486 (2,3,4) - Try balancing these so it flows in a more circular motion. You don't have to blanket the (1) really, but up to you.
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[Normal]

1. 00:16:881 (4) - Two circles would suit this better imo. Much easier to play when you have piano notes like these.
2. 00:23:169 (1,1) - This is probably one of my biggest pet peeves in mapping as of now. The whole space inbetween here is completely empty because of the spinner you placed. People should be playing this section, and instead having a gap where the spinner is. Try ending the spinner at 00:24:426 - (maybe delete 00:22:989 (1) - and move the spinner back to it so there's more spin time) and resume mapping at 00:25:864 - Regardless if you take this mod or not, 00:27:301 (1) - is very awkward to play because of the vocals.
3. 00:36:822 (6) - A 1/1 gap is pretty much mandatory here. As lead-in vocals aren't important to map, and they won't ruin your rhythm, try deleting this slider and placing a circle at 00:37:001 -
4. 00:48:319 (6) - pretty much the same as 36 secs, since your rhythm mapping here, it's best to stick to it and skip the lead-in.
5. 01:07:181 (3) - A circle would be better here.
6. 01:05:384 (3,4,5,1) - Probably the most unrankable issue about this map. You change what you follow. You were happily following vocals and then decided to swap to the instrumentals in this spot. It makes it hard to read as well as confusing to follow. The other issue is that when doing this, you map offbeat which only adds to it. Following the previous combos, it would be best simply like this:
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7. 01:21:911 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Another major issue. You follow the vocals in the first combo, but ignore them in the second (even if they're fading ones) Again from the second (3->4) feels very uncomfortable to play as players will naturally want to follow the vocals because of your previous combo.
8. 01:24:786 (1,2,3,4) - Try this for vocal emphasis and better matching for your style
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9. 01:29:097 (1) - same as the first spinnner, kind of ruins the upcoming notes. 01:31:612 (1) - is a bit odd to come back into the music as well. Maybe delete this if you want to keep the spinner.

[Hard]

1. 00:09:157 (3) - You really don't need the tail end of this slider. Makes the light intro really heavy imo with it. a 1/1 gap here works just fine.
2. 00:09:516 (4,5) - 3 circles for the piano
3. 00:31:073 (5) - try deleting this.
4. 00:32:151 (2,1) - Very very bad transition from vocals to beat. Please pick one or the other. Especially after playing everything before 00:30:714 (4) - this rhythm is confusing. (3,4) are actually very tough to hit because of this.
5. 00:35:744 (1,2,3) - change (1) to two circles (one on the head and tail) This makes hitting the triplet much easier and distinguishes which part of the rhythm the player is playing. You can even swap the new triplet and the 1/4 repeat at 00:36:462 (4) - to make it more adaptable.
6. 00:59:636 (1,2,3) - 4 circles. All of these notes sound the exact same so they shouldn't be different.
7. 01:13:828 (3,4) - 1/1 slider would fit the best here.
8. 01:28:558 (1,2,3) - little bit of a jump would have been cool.
9. 01:29:007 (1,1) - the slider could be a little closer to the middle imo. It's quite a reach to get to.
10. 01:34:486 (5) - ending on the red tick would suit this better, especially since you have 1/4 notes after this. Really no point using a 3/4 here.

[Insane]
More 1/1s please! This whole map is pretty much 1/2 spam. You don't need to map every single 1/2 note you know!

1. 00:25:864 (1,2,1) - Make it the same distance, you map extra bits that doesn't follow from the previous notes on the 00:26:582 (1) - and having the gap makes it look like a 1/1.
2. 01:12:570 (1,2,1,2) - Try to even the gaps out a bit. (They feel completely random to me) The jump from (2->1) is a bit much for example.
3. 01:29:007 (1) - Don't see any reason why you can't end this at 01:30:175 - More of a dominant beat there anyways.
4. 01:40:234 (7) - like in hard.. why not at 01:40:414 - where the beat is emphasized more?
5. 01:40:594 (1) - intentionally added in beat on nothing on this end is also pointless.
6. Actually to be honest, all of these 3/4 sliders would fit the song much better as 1/2 instead. No need to create something that isn't in the song itself.
7. 01:43:917 (3) - ? no point, just stick to the main beats imo. you really don't need to be mapping to that 1/4 sound as it's just added unnecessary difficulty. I suggest nerfing this quite a bit. You can still map heavily just following the drum beats anyways.

[Extra]

1. 00:09:516 - piano here would be better as a clickable.
2. 00:20:654 (2) - Just a 1/1 slider? I don't hear anything on the reverse worth putting it on for.
3. 00:25:864 (1) -

   Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read. Additionally, the slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. However, sliders that cross over themselves are fine as long as the borders are clearly visible.

   Yeah.. change this so the beginning part of it doesn't troll. I would personally consider this unrankable, even if it's only a 'little bit' as it makes the slider path nearly impossible to read. Just change this and save yourself a headache later on.
4. 00:46:702 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - whistles like your earlier sliders would have been cool here instead of the chime.

Hope something helps. Good luck o/

Lanturn wrote:

Add Itou to the tags as her name is also commonly spelled this way. sure

More focused towards the easier diffs, dropped a couple things for the harder ones though.

[Easy]

1. 00:17:241 (1) - I would remove the red node personally and do a full blanket around instead
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   kinda like how it looks now more
2. 00:24:426 - the drumroll sound would sound better if it started here? Try like 30% volume done for easy and extra
3. 00:38:618 - I would consider this to be the dominant note and where I honestly think 00:38:798 (3) - should start. Both the vocals and the instruments support this. This applies to almost every single pattern down the line such as 00:41:492 - 00:44:367 -00:47:241 - etc I get what you try to tell me. But current one seems alright and makes for a way simpler rhytm imo
4. 00:55:684 - circle
5. 00:57:121 - circle. The drums are really active here and it feels odd when going upbeat like this and having a break in the rhythm. I considered that but thought it might be too dense, but seems like I'll add them then
6. 01:00:714 (1) - optional, if you want a break you can easily remove this. making 01:01:792 (1) - feel like an epic hit. will consider/color]
7. 01:05:384 (2,3) - the 3/2 slider like 01:08:259 (2) - would be a better option here to capture the dominant notes. [color=#FFBF00]i'd really like to have something on 01:06:103 though
8. 01:21:911 (1) - I don't think you need the 'ding' whistle in it lol. yeah, changed to drum additions for all diffs
9. 01:31:971 (3) - Less of a curve would be super. It feels way too tight.
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   changed it
10. 01:34:486 (2,3,4) - Try balancing these so it flows in a more circular motion. You don't have to blanket the (1) really, but up to you.
    SPOILER

    
    redid some stuff here, should be better now and look nice

[Normal]

1. 00:16:881 (4) - Two circles would suit this better imo. Much easier to play when you have piano notes like these.
2. 00:23:169 (1,1) - This is probably one of my biggest pet peeves in mapping as of now. The whole space inbetween here is completely empty because of the spinner you placed. People should be playing this section, and instead having a gap where the spinner is. Try ending the spinner at 00:24:426 - (maybe delete 00:22:989 (1) - and move the spinner back to it so there's more spin time) and resume mapping at 00:25:864 - Regardless if you take this mod or not, 00:27:301 (1) - is very awkward to play because of the vocals.
   makes sense. I decided to delete the spinner and put a liser like easy/extra here. spinner should still be fine for hard/insane as they are so lenient with recovery time
3. 00:36:822 (6) - A 1/1 gap is pretty much mandatory here. As lead-in vocals aren't important to map, and they won't ruin your rhythm, try deleting this slider and placing a circle at 00:37:001 - sure
4. 00:48:319 (6) - pretty much the same as 36 secs, since your rhythm mapping here, it's best to stick to it and skip the lead-in. seems fine here as it nicely follows the background noise too. feels really fitting
5. 01:07:181 (3) - A circle would be better here. really want to kepp sth on 01:07:361 - tbh
6. 01:05:384 (3,4,5,1) - Probably the most unrankable issue about this map. You change what you follow. You were happily following vocals and then decided to swap to the instrumentals in this spot. It makes it hard to read as well as confusing to follow. The other issue is that when doing this, you map offbeat which only adds to it. Following the previous combos, it would be best simply like this:
   SPOILER

   
   remapped this a bit to follow the vocals more
7. 01:21:911 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Another major issue. You follow the vocals in the first combo, but ignore them in the second (even if they're fading ones) Again from the second (3->4) feels very uncomfortable to play as players will naturally want to follow the vocals because of your previous combo. I can't really see a problem with this and the taps on 01:23:349 (1,2) - should be opkay with vocals
8. 01:24:786 (1,2,3,4) - Try this for vocal emphasis and better matching for your style
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   sure
9. 01:29:097 (1) - same as the first spinnner, kind of ruins the upcoming notes. 01:31:612 (1) - is a bit odd to come back into the music as well. Maybe delete this if you want to keep the spinner. removed the note

[Hard]

1. 00:09:157 (3) - You really don't need the tail end of this slider. Makes the light intro really heavy imo with it. a 1/1 gap here works just fine.
2. 00:09:516 (4,5) - 3 circles for the piano
   applied both
3. 00:31:073 (5) - try deleting this. sure, made 00:30:714 (4) - a 1/1 slider since that felt to empty without it
4. 00:32:151 (2,1) - Very very bad transition from vocals to beat. Please pick one or the other. Especially after playing everything before 00:30:714 (4) - this rhythm is confusing. (3,4) are actually very tough to hit because of this.
5. 00:35:744 (1,2,3) - change (1) to two circles (one on the head and tail) This makes hitting the triplet much easier and distinguishes which part of the rhythm the player is playing. You can even swap the new triplet and the 1/4 repeat at 00:36:462 (4) - to make it more adaptable.
   I redid some stuff for the whole part, including those you mentioned
6. 00:59:636 (1,2,3) - 4 circles. All of these notes sound the exact same so they shouldn't be different. sure
7. 01:13:828 (3,4) - 1/1 slider would fit the best here. think this fits better with the vocals and beat
8. 01:28:558 (1,2,3) - little bit of a jump would have been cool. sure, added some more spacing
9. 01:29:007 (1,1) - the slider could be a little closer to the middle imo. It's quite a reach to get to. 1/1 gap and I'd expect people that play hards to have a little bit of control over their spinning and not just flail their mouse like on lower diffs :v
10. 01:34:486 (5) - ending on the red tick would suit this better, especially since you have 1/4 notes after this. Really no point using a 3/4 here.feels nice for me + having it like that follow that other osund really well on 01:34:486 (5,1) -

[Insane]
More 1/1s please! This whole map is pretty much 1/2 spam. You don't need to map every single 1/2 note you know! ;_; I'll consider sth, but I really like how it plays and it's only 168 bpm and also an Insane after all

1. 00:25:864 (1,2,1) - Make it the same distance, you map extra bits that doesn't follow from the previous notes on the 00:26:582 (1) - and having the gap makes it look like a 1/1. k
2. 01:12:570 (1,2,1,2) - Try to even the gaps out a bit. (They feel completely random to me) The jump from (2->1) is a bit much for example. rearranged them
3. 01:29:007 (1) - Don't see any reason why you can't end this at 01:30:175 - More of a dominant beat there anyways. sure, did same on extra
4. 01:40:234 (7) - like in hard.. why not at 01:40:414 - where the beat is emphasized more? same reasoning
5. 01:40:594 (1) - intentionally added in beat on nothing on this end is also pointless.
6. Actually to be honest, all of these 3/4 sliders would fit the song much better as 1/2 instead. No need to create something that isn't in the song itself. removed them until 01:41:672 (6) - where they seem pretty fitting to me
7. 01:43:917 (3) - ? no point, just stick to the main beats imo. you really don't need to be mapping to that 1/4 sound as it's just added unnecessary difficulty. those 1/4 seem strong enough to have them here imo, should be fine for insane plays fine I suggest nerfing this quite a bit. You can still map heavily just following the drum beats anyways.it's already a pretty easy insane anyways

[Extra]

1. 00:09:516 - piano here would be better as a clickable. sure
2. 00:20:654 (2) - Just a 1/1 slider? I don't hear anything on the reverse worth putting it on for. sure
3. 00:25:864 (1) -

   Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read. Additionally, the slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. However, sliders that cross over themselves are fine as long as the borders are clearly visible.

   Yeah.. change this so the beginning part of it doesn't troll. I would personally consider this unrankable, even if it's only a 'little bit' as it makes the slider path nearly impossible to read. Just change this and save yourself a headache later on.
   guess I'll change it then since you'Re not the first to complain, even though I'm yet to see someone having problems with it while testplaying
4. 00:46:702 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - whistles like your earlier sliders would have been cool here instead of the chime. most seem fine but I changed it slightly

Hope something helps. Good luck o/

thanks for helping out :v

quick mod for 1 of your diffs as requested.

[Insane]

1. 00:34:486 (2,3) - try to ctrl +g these, it emphasis the music better, you may need to move 00:35:025 (5) - if you do this though since this could create some nasty flow. something like this
   
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2. 00:46:702 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - this whole thing looks really sloppy, reconsider re working the entire pattern ,and possibly even the rhythm.
3. 01:01:432 (1,2,3,4) - - this is not snapped correctly, well this whole part actually sounds like a snapping nightmare, so good luck with that, I ham actually not good with this, but I can tell something here is very wrong.
4. 01:12:929 (1,2) - hmmmm i definitely dont hear anything on the blue ticks here. actually you try to cover up alot of overmapping with hitsounds throughout the whole map

uhh yeah that's all I have, sorry for the short mod, good luck with the map!

Setz wrote:

quick mod for 1 of your diffs as requested.

[Insane]

1. 00:34:486 (2,3) - try to ctrl +g these, it emphasis the music better, you may need to move 00:35:025 (5) - if you do this though since this could create some nasty flow. something like this did sth here
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:46:702 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - this whole thing looks really sloppy, reconsider re working the entire pattern ,and possibly even the rhythm. rhythm seems fine, redid the pattern more cleanly
3. 01:01:432 (1,2,3,4) - - this is not snapped correctly, well this whole part actually sounds like a snapping nightmare, so good luck with that, I ham actually not good with this, but I can tell something here is very wrong. Have to agree that esp. 01:01:522 (2) - sound a bit off, but 1/4 is pretty much the most playble here while still somehow fitting and the other version got through with this snapped to 1/4, lol
4. 01:12:929 (1,2) - hmmmm i definitely dont hear anything on the blue ticks here. actually you try to cover up alot of overmapping with hitsounds throughout the whole map seems fine, epsecially on the second blue the drum and other sound are audible enough. also what part sounded overmapped? lol

uhh yeah that's all I have, sorry for the short mod, good luck with the map!

thanks

[Easy]

01:16:881 (2) - centre rotate 20°?

[Normal]

00:36:283 (5,1) - overlap

00:43:828 (3,4,5) - try

00:51:372 (7) - i prefer (244,132)

[Hard]

00:16:522 (3,4) - try each ctrl+g once

00:45:265 (4) - ctrl+g

01:19:217 (2) - i prefer (280,80)

[Insane]

00:16:522 (3) - ctrl+g

00:23:079 (1,1) - too close

00:56:043 (1,2,3) - stack

[Expert]

00:05:744 (1,2) - stack them

00:37:001 (6,7) - ctrl+g

00:41:313 (5,6,1,2,3) - i prefer pentagon

00:53:528 (3) - ctrl+g ,like as 01:14:367 (5,6,1) -

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Easy]

01:16:881 (2) - centre rotate 20°? sure

[Normal]

00:36:283 (5,1) - overlap fixed

00:43:828 (3,4,5) - try

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overlaps the sliders too much imo and current one has a nice and more interesting movement

00:51:372 (7) - i prefer (244,132) ruins 00:50:115 (4,5,6,7) - pattern

[Hard]

00:16:522 (3,4) - try each ctrl+g once really like how it plays

00:45:265 (4) - ctrl+g plays fine and I don't want to abuse slider leniency too much on hard

01:19:217 (2) - i prefer (280,80) like the current one more, has a really nice movement

[Insane]

00:16:522 (3) - ctrl+g bad spacing or ruins symmetry, current is fine

00:23:079 (1,1) - too close I think it is fine for Insane and goes better with the music. the next note is close to the center and a slider so it plays fine. if more complain I could shorten the spinner though :/

00:56:043 (1,2,3) - stack wtf happened here? fixed

[Expert]

00:05:744 (1,2) - stack them slight change

00:37:001 (6,7) - ctrl+g nah, current fits better, but I fixed the spacing

00:41:313 (5,6,1,2,3) - i prefer pentagon I don't, lol. also ruins overlap pattern

SPOILER

00:53:528 (3) - ctrl+g ,like as 01:14:367 (5,6,1) - sure

thanks for the help, I'll mod your map after I'm home from university again in some hours

Hello there Lasse

[Extra]


I'll continue to mod other difficulties a bit later. Got some things to do first beforehand. Stay tune!

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:

Hello there Lasse

[Extra]

• General

1. I'm not sure why don't get why you use a high SV of 2.08 when you never even adjust the SV multiplier over x1.0 . There's no need to have an SV as low as x0.25 when you can just the general Slider Velocity to 1.50 instead. But, is not big of an issue though. I doesn't make a difference for gameplay or anything anyways, just different ways to achieve the same thing
   
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2. Maybe start the song with a spiner start from here 00:00:355 then ends at 00:02:690?DOn't feel that this is needed for that sound
3. 00:05:744 (1) - The slider tail is not properly stack with the head of 00:05:025 (5) slider. Adjust the tail right in the middle of the 00:05:025 (5) slider head would be nice this is such a pain, remade it
4. 00:06:283 (2) - I really don't like the idea of stacking this slider with 00:05:744 (1) slider at all. Making symmetrical like this plays well enough b-but I like it :'(
5. 00:12:570 (5) - Since the song at 00:11:492 and 00:12:031 is similar to this, why not just use 1/4 slider like you did at 00:11:492 (1,3) ? there is way better on audible piano on 00:12:750 than on the others, so I the single repeat here is to focus on that, while the otehrs are more focused on background since there is no piano on the repeats
6. 00:14:367 (1) - Use a DS of x0.1 to keep the spacing constant with 00:13:648 (2,3) fixed
7. 00:17:780 (2) - Guess this isn't blanketed well with the slider tail of 00:17:241 (1) fixed
8. Hitsound suggestion here. Add clap at 00:17:780 (2,3) , 00:19:396 (2) , 00:22:271 (5) , and 00:21:193 (3) would sound pretty nice here added some more claps in this part for all diffs
9. 00:22:271 (5,1) - Swap NC. NC at 00:22:271 (5) indicates the start of change in rhythm here makes sense
10. 00:23:349 - Move the 2nd node of this slider a bit upward to make it somewhat similar to 00:25:504 changed a bit
11. 00:22:989 (2) - I think ending the slider at 00:25:684 sounds nicer and would be more appropriate sound is still held on the blue tick, so I preder to keep it
12. 00:29:277 (2) - Ugly slider, don't like how you stacks the slider at the head of 00:28:738 (1) at all. Looks terrible in the gameplay fixed the stack and I think it looks fine during gameplay tbh
13. 00:29:995 - An obvious vocal here. Move the 00:29:816 (3) here sounds a lot nice actually I just added a note on 00:29:995 (4) - and kept 3, goes fine with vocals and all
14. 00:36:822 (5,6,7) - The jumps here should a larger than 00:36:283 (2,3,4) due to the loud vocal here right, respaced a bit
15. 00:27:121 (1) - Wrong additional sampleset. Change it to Normal no, this pattern 00:26:582 (1,1,1,1) - is supposed to be n-s-n-s which it is
16. 00:37:361 (1,4) - These sliders aren't blanket very well fixed
17. 00:47:420 (1,2,3,4) - Small suggestion here, maybe make the SV gradually becomes smaller and smaller? Like from x0.5 > x0.45 > x0.4 > x0.35 or something similar that is too much sv change spam for my taste here, one change on the nc is fine enough
18. 00:51:732 (1) - I don't think there's any significance with this circle that it needs a larger spacing than 00:51:552 (5,6)
19. 00:54:606 (1) - If you want to keep this kind of pattern, sure. Make sure the spacing is similar to 00:56:043 (1) as well
    I fixed it for the second one,i t was a bit too low. I think those are fine since the third tick is way stronger, louder and sounds different
20. 00:59:636 (1,2,1,2) - Doesn't sound good at all spamming claps here. Just 00:59:636 (1) and 00:59:995 (1) sounds good enough seems fine with the music for me
21. 01:02:869 (5,6,7,8) - I don't get this 1/4 at all. This doesn't follows anything, felt really forced here huh? Delete the notes and you can clearly hear the 1/4, even at 100% playback rate
22. 01:08:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try not to spam all these circles with claps here. Sounds really noisy for me. Just at claps at 01:09:157 (2,4,6,8) following the vocal sounds really great here I removed some and did some other hitosund stuff here for all diffs
23. 01:03:229 (1,2,3) - Actually I would prefer if you map this part similar to 01:14:726 (1,2,3,4,5,6) vocals on both "progress" differently, seems better like it is
24. 01:28:917 (1) - This jump is really ridiculous and forced if you ask me. There's nothing really special in the song or louder beat that you need to have an extremely big jump here nerfed it again
25. 01:39:157 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These stream here is weirdly mapped. Try to improve the pattern hereremapped those a bit
26. 01:43:468 (1) - The fast pace from 01:42:121 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) followed by big jump to 01:43:468 (1) plays awkwardly here. The players automatically think this slider would be fast because of the 1/4 slider jumps. I misread this part in my first testplay because I aimed at the 01:43:738 (2) too fast thinking that 01:43:468 (1) slider would be fast too. did some sv stuff here

I'll continue to mod other difficulties a bit later. Got some things to do first beforehand. Stay tune!

thanks for the mod so far :v

Trashy mod queue les go 3 weeks late or smth idk

Suggestion
Very highly suggested
Unrankable

player view
It looks much much clunkier while playing than it does in editor, keep in mind that what makes sense in editor might just look like randomly placed notes while playing

Jumps feel nice to hit, no big issue in that sense.

General
I feel like you are trying way too hard to make every burst/every slider special, I'd highly reccommend only making 00:28:738 (1,2) - stuff like this when it clearly makes sense in the song. It just doesnt look good nor polished at all.
00:51:552 (5,6,1) - example, this looks like you placed shit randomly, even in the editor. There are ways to make a map special while still keeping it clean. This is in my opinion the biggest issue with the map currently.

NC issue. Im not going to point these out in the mod because they're literally everywhere. You NC at strong downbeats (big white lines) without ANY regard of whether or not it actually fits the song/your map/patterns. If a player sees a new combo they expect the rhythm/spacing to change. Keep that in mind
Id honestly reccommend taking a look at all your diffs and changing it, because its a pretty glaring issue.
like this for example 00:31:073 (5) - why the hell is this continuing from the last one if there's a new pattern and a break?

General tidyness. mostly in jumps. 00:57:480 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - if you highlight this section and scroll to the star you can see that you stack the notes that makes sense. Sometimes. This makes it look ugly. If you are going to try and make it look good in the editor you have to go all the way, halfassed just looks random.
This is pretty much everywhere in your map, giving the impression that you just stacked notes when available instead of making an actual effort for it to look good.
These three things all really need to be worked on imo

I'm not the best hitsounder but the intros hitsounding felt pretty off while playing

oorgnoc ysp le

00:08:618 (1) - any reason for making this a repeatslider? The music only supports 1/2 rhythm here
00:10:414 (1) - same
00:11:492 (1,3) - yeah
00:48:678 (4) - I feel like this should be a long slider instead, fits better with vocals
00:49:576 (4) - why isnt the middle part here clickable, clearly a strong beat
00:54:426 (7,8,1) - 00:55:864 (8,9,1) - i highly dislike these triples, they look unpolished more than anything else, even if i see where you are coming from. A lot of them in the map
01:01:432 (1,2,3,4) - is there a reason for these to look like this? the down down pattern dont make any sense in the music and a normally spaced quint would look better. This looks like you are trying too hard to make something unique
01:06:283 (2) - NC issue i talked about. It clearly fits the song better to NC at the 2 instead of the 1 here as its a new part of the song, and the 1 is part of the jump pattern earlier. Dont just NC at downbeats, NC where it fits the song.
01:31:971 (1) - ok fo real though why isnt this a slider when you mapped the two sounds before as a slider. Extremely confusing and doesnt fit at all. Yes its not as loud but its still the most audiable part of the song at that point.
01:37:720 (1) - same
01:39:157 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1) - you CANNOT follow the sound you are currenly following here, as it slows down at first and then speeds up. As it is now its simply timed incorrectly and thus unrankable.
I also personally feel like the jumpstreams are extremely forced, but since this part needs to be changed anyways it doesnt matter.

Rapthorn wrote:

Trashy mod queue les go 3 weeks late or smth idk

Suggestion
Very highly suggested
Unrankable

player view
It looks much much clunkier while playing than it does in editor, keep in mind that what makes sense in editor might just look like randomly placed notes while playing

Jumps feel nice to hit, no big issue in that sense.

General
I feel like you are trying way too hard to make every burst/every slider special, I'd highly reccommend only making 00:28:738 (1,2) - stuff like this when it clearly makes sense in the song. It just doesnt look good nor polished at all.
00:51:552 (5,6,1) - example, this looks like you placed shit randomly, even in the editor. There are ways to make a map special while still keeping it clean. This is in my opinion the biggest issue with the map currently."randomly", whatever since people keep complaining I'll change those

NC issue. Im not going to point these out in the mod because they're literally everywhere. You NC at strong downbeats (big white lines) without ANY regard of whether or not it actually fits the song/your map/patterns. If a player sees a new combo they expect the rhythm/spacing to change. Keep that in mind
Id honestly reccommend taking a look at all your diffs and changing it, because its a pretty glaring issue.
like this for example 00:31:073 (5) - why the hell is this continuing from the last one if there's a new pattern and a break?
eh, I nc based on patterns when it is needed for readability, otherwise on new measures, it nc follows mainly the drums i

General tidyness. mostly in jumps. 00:57:480 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - if you highlight this section and scroll to the star you can see that you stack the notes that makes sense. Sometimes. This makes it look ugly. If you are going to try and make it look good in the editor you have to go all the way, halfassed just looks random.
This is pretty much everywhere in your map, giving the impression that you just stacked notes when available instead of making an actual effort for it to look good.
If you tried to actually look which of those overlaps are visible during gameplay and which not it might make more sense to you
These three things all really need to be worked on imo

I'm not the best hitsounder but the intros hitsounding felt pretty off while playing

oorgnoc ysp le

00:08:618 (1) - any reason for making this a repeatslider? The music only supports 1/2 rhythm here
00:10:414 (1) - same
00:11:492 (1,3) - yeah
already explained this in another mod, if you can't hear the background stuff it fits to then idk
00:48:678 (4) - I feel like this should be a long slider instead, fits better with vocals and totally ignore the really strong next beat?
00:49:576 (4) - why isnt the middle part here clickable, clearly a strong beat
really? this clickable but not 00:48:858 (1) - ? doesnt make any sense to me
00:54:426 (7,8,1) - 00:55:864 (8,9,1) - i highly dislike these triples, they look unpolished more than anything else, even if i see where you are coming from. A lot of them in the map I made some of them "normal" and slightly changed the others for now
01:01:432 (1,2,3,4) - is there a reason for these to look like this? the down down pattern dont make any sense in the music and a normally spaced quint would look better. This looks like you are trying too hard to make something unique follows the stronger high pitched sounds on 1/3 better
01:06:283 (2) - NC issue i talked about. It clearly fits the song better to NC at the 2 instead of the 1 here as its a new part of the song, and the 1 is part of the jump pattern earlier. Dont just NC at downbeats, NC where it fits the song. see reasoning before, nc on the strongest drum beats is fine and that is clearly 01:06:103 (1) -
01:31:971 (1) - ok fo real though why isnt this a slider when you mapped the two sounds before as a slider. Extremely confusing and doesnt fit at all. Yes its not as loud but its still the most audiable part of the song at that point.
01:37:720 (1) - same
you basically answered it yourself, it gets way harder to hear so switching focus to the other stuffs fits nicer after those
01:39:157 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1) - you CANNOT follow the sound you are currenly following here, as it slows down at first and then speeds up. As it is now its simply timed incorrectly and thus unrankable. not rly sure tbh
I also personally feel like the jumpstreams are extremely forced, but since this part needs to be changed anyways it doesnt matter.[s[/color]

thanks

M4M~



i think, in one color, distance should as same as each other.(except kiai time & some part the music is special)

and, my english isn't well, hope you can understand.

MouseCheeseW wrote:

M4M~

Normal

01:04:486 (4) - remove. place a note here.

01:04:666 - place a slider, end at 01:05:025 . good idea

Hard

01:15:983 (1) - slider end at 01:16:163 . place a note at 01:16:343 this follows vocals better

01:39:157 (1,2,3,4) - i think slider should reduce 1/4 beat.(end at red line)

01:43:468 (1,2,3,4) - ↑ current ones are fine

Insane

00:26:582 (1,2,3,4) - 4 nots's distance should as same as each other. (2 ~ 3 different from others)

00:32:331 (3,4,5,6) - ↑(3 ~ 4)

01:31:253 (4,5,6) - ↑

01:33:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ↑

01:36:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ↑

01:38:438 (5,6) - ↑

Extra

00:22:989 (3) - remove. place a spinner, end at 00:25:684. sldier is fine too

00:29:995 (4) - place this away from the previous circle.

00:30:714 (4) - closer to previous circle.

00:31:073 (5,6,7) - 3 nots's distance should as same as each other

00:34:486 (1,2,3,4) - ↑

00:37:001 (6) - closer to previous circle.

00:41:313 (5) - ↑

00:41:672 (1,2,3,4) - distance should as same as each other

01:43:738 (1) - 01:44:097 (1) - 01:44:456 (1) - remove. huh? they are fine with the music and play well

no spacing changes (see below)

i think, in one color, distance should as same as each other.(except kiai time & some part the music is special)
uh, that's not how spacing/emphasis works lol, basically the reasoning why I denied all spacing suggestions in this mod

and, my english isn't well, hope you can understand.

thanks

m4m from your q

FCL wrote:

m4m from your q

• [Extra]

1. 00:26:402 (2) - the circle feels cramped, recommend to make more extensive blanket ruins the pattern/spacing
2. 00:38:618 (6,1) - a bit inconvenient the flow, suggest to ctrl+j 00:38:798 (1) - and move to 228 352 just simple back and forth, seems fine
3. 00:49:396 (3) - don't like such a low spacing here, since (3) have strong vocal beat. Stack him with (1) will good vocals are not even main focus here and it looks worse :/
4. 00:59:636 (1,2,1,2) - claps here are more stronger than ever before, so why not to do spacing more? It is already? 00:59:636 (1,1) - have bigger jumps, and even more would feel overdone
5. 01:01:073 (1,2) - given the fact that the piano (?) sound starts to fade you could be reduce slider velocity like 00:47:420 (1,2,3,4) - that works
6. 01:01:432 (1,2,3,4) - don't understand why so? lol. claps are not changed sounding seems fine with drums
7. 01:03:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - when i listening the previous time i thought that rhythm will have roughly like this http://puu.sh/mFfYR/d1b2904829.jpg. Red ticks have strong vocal and probably could be mapped to circles. You not should to create full screen jumps here, think my option will be fine http://puu.sh/mFggq/25c4c99cf5.jpg. probably it's just obtrusion of my mapping style, but I really think that this model of mapping will better
   sliders are fine here, lol. not too much singletap spam
8. 01:11:852 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - claps are started at 01:12:613 - so i think that kick-slider like 01:00:714 (1,2,1,2) - will be better since continue stream when changed him causes a bit weird spacing change does the job too and it fits so nice here
9. 01:27:660 (1,1,2,1,2,1) - too much unnecessary nc's lol. remove it on 01:27:660 (1) - and 01:28:917 (1) - because so it will more follow to vocal. sure
10. 01:27:480- this beat have sound and should be clikable. U can replce (4) to slider, will be good takes away emphasis from vocals
11. 01:34:846 (1) - don't use 1/1 here, red tich should be clikable this has soem weird snapping, sure there is sth on the red tick, but making that clickable would feel so weird to play with all the other sounds with weird snapping
12. 01:40:504 (4) - rly hard for reading, recommend to rewok it to standart model seemed fine for me and people that testplayed
13. 01:40:594 (1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - probably it's my preferences but if rotate this to +-5 degrees will look better perfextly vertical/horizontal is nicer for the sliders imo
14. 01:45:624 (1) - nc is not necessary since u don't use clap here fits the pattern better
15. 01:46:432 (1) - move end to white tick lol song ends on blue though

thanks
not much time so I'll check the other diffs /mod back later

FCL wrote:

• [Insane]

1. ar 8.4 and od 7.5 . Not bad for pp
2. 00:02:870 (1) - just my preferences, but sliderwawes like this looks more neatly http://puu.sh/mFhku/ec26cee896.jpg
3. 00:20:654 (2) - blanket here will be nice huh, it is blanketed like I wantit already
4. 01:18:678 (7) - probably a bit confusing, make it less closely would make the overlapping inconsistent and it plays fine
5. 01:27:660 (1,2,3) - 90 degrees flow will be nice http://puu.sh/mFhDX/8918f1637e.jpg current is nicer imo
6. 01:35:025 - should be clickable, as and in Extra same as extra

• [Hard]

1. 00:39:337 (3) - blanket not intended to
2. 01:00:714 (1,1,1) - nc's haven't reason for this easier to read imo
3. 01:11:852 (1,1,1,1) - ^

• [Normal]

1. 00:44:367 (4) - 1/1 slider instead circle will be better for rhythm imo 00:44:546 (5) - not clickable would be weird
2. 01:28:558 (3,4,5) - probably 3 1/2 circles are unrankabled in Normal since i tryed to rank The Monk with same patterns, but BN's said me to remove it lol
3. 01:45:624 (2,3,4) - ^I nerfed them a bit, even though they cold be fine

• [Easy]

1. idk, can't find something

k so I remapped the ending for all higher diffs with fixed snapping
time to get back to work on this

[Easy]

01:29:097 (2) - missing hitsound?

[Normal]

00:34:307 - recommend to remove rhythm.
For reason, don't you think 00:33:768 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - is too long train.
00:37:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^,
01:17:959 - is more important than 01:17:780 -
if 01:17:780 - is follow vocal, 01:16:881 (3) - should be follow vocal too.

[Hard]

01:16:163 - why don't you fill up in here. it's quite major rhythm for me.
01:20:474 - ^

[Insane]

00:55:864 (7,1,2,3) - are you sure about this rhythm

01:35:205 (2) - add clap on head instead of tail. according to music.

[Extra]

if you use same DS in 00:26:582 (1,1,1,1,1) -
you should be use same DS in 00:32:331 (1,1,1,1,1) - , too.

00:41:852 (2,3,4) - seem to unnatural flow for playing.

01:05:564 (4,6) - remove claps cuz seem to heavy hitsound, compare with music.
01:15:624 (6,8) - ^

01:06:283 (2,3) - add clap in tail instead of head

01:07:450 - add note?

01:20:384 - maybe add note or 01:20:205 -

01:44:905 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - if you use accelerator effect in previous partten 01:43:468 (1,1,1,1) -
not fit to growing smaller DS here.
how to do)
- 01:45:264 (1,2) - is bigger than 01:44:905 (1,2) -
- 01:45:624 (1,2) - is bigger than 01:45:264 (1,2) -
etc

Lami wrote:

[Easy]

01:29:097 (2) - missing hitsound? clap

[Normal]

00:34:307 - recommend to remove rhythm.
For reason, don't you think 00:33:768 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - is too long train.
00:37:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^,
Slightly reduced first one. second one seems fine as it is very 1/1 slider heavy and there is also an easy diff, so normal can be a bit harder
01:17:959 - is more important than 01:17:780 - following vocals and 01:17:780 - is pretty strong vocal
if 01:17:780 - is follow vocal, 01:16:881 (3) - should be follow vocal too.
right, changed rhythm a bit

[Hard]

01:16:163 - why don't you fill up in here. it's quite major rhythm for me.
01:20:474 - ^ donwbeats aren't that strong here, so using 1/1 vocal slider is fine imo

[Insane]

00:55:864 (7,1,2,3) - are you sure about this rhythm
changed it to 1/4 on extra instead :v
01:35:205 (2) - add clap on head instead of tail. according to music. sure

[Extra]

if you use same DS in 00:26:582 (1,1,1,1,1) -
you should be use same DS in 00:32:331 (1,1,1,1,1) - , too. patterns are different and the ds within both patterns are consistent, seems fine and looks nice

00:41:852 (2,3,4) - seem to unnatural flow for playing. works fine the way most people I watched play this (and me) play the slider at 00:42:211 (4) -

01:05:564 (4,6) - remove claps cuz seem to heavy hitsound, compare with music.
01:15:624 (6,8) - ^
fine

01:06:283 (2,3) - add clap in tail instead of head k

01:07:450 - add note? not needed, it's not that strong and I'd rather get a jump for the vocal without using a kickslider

01:20:384 - maybe add note or 01:20:205 - not needed

01:44:905 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - if you use accelerator effect in previous partten 01:43:468 (1,1,1,1) -
not fit to growing smaller DS here.
how to do)
- 01:45:264 (1,2) - is bigger than 01:44:905 (1,2) -
- 01:45:624 (1,2) - is bigger than 01:45:264 (1,2) -
etc
added more pp
fixed

thanks Lami!

M4M reply ~
[General]
fine.

[Easy]
fine.

[Normal]
00:19:756 (6) - i think removing this is better , to emphasis the new beat and the bass is quite strong as well
00:29:816 (3) - for me , i would move this to 00:29:995 - for the vocal
00:44:546 (5) - there is no cymbal here , remove finish
00:59:636 (5,6) - both of these sliderend change to sample N:C2
01:04:486 (4) - nc here maybe? since the vocal sounds just like 01:16:163 (1) -
[Hard]
00:21:193 (3) - nc , people could misread this as a 1/2 especially this diff is meant for average players
00:29:995 (1,2) - why is this ds is not the same with others around this part
00:31:612 (1,2) - this one as well
01:38:438 (4) - what does this slider mapped to ? it is clearly not the same as 01:44:007 (2) - , suggest you change it to 2 circles instead

[Insane]
00:13:109 (1) - since this is a continous piano unlike the earlier part , NC isnt necessary here
00:18:319 (3,1,2) - move these up a little so the blanket 00:17:780 (2,3) - would be the same as 00:17:061 (5,1) -
00:32:869 (6) - x:448 y:64 is better imo
01:02:331 (3,4) - instead of circle>slider , try slider>circle would express the vocal and the music better at the same time
01:08:977 (1,2) - this one as well
01:15:265 (3) - remove clap?didnt hear any clap sound here
01:21:103 (4) - same as above
01:25:953 (6) - this triple should be 01:26:133 -
01:29:007 (1) - extend spinner to red tick?


[Extra]
i think there is no reason to put ar 9.1? ar9 already suits this diff much better imo
00:02:870 (1,2) - move this few grids up so distance between 00:03:408 (2,3) - and 00:06:283 (2,3) - could be unified
00:08:618 (1) - i think its better to just change this to circle and highlight the piano here? there is no 1/4 sounds like 00:10:414 (1) - and onwards
00:18:319 (3,1) - swap nc
00:22:989 (3) - add nc , because this slow sv could drop high amount of hp with hr
00:42:031 (3) - move this a bit to left so the overlap between 00:40:414 (2,4,3) - looks nicer ( just editor purpose) didnt affect gameplay tho
00:54:426 (7,8,1) - weird spacing ? i dont see the music could have any intention to do so
01:01:073 (1) - think this is a bit spammy ncs couldve be remove . also the sv change doesnt really do anything tbh
01:14:546 (6) - suggest you move thos to x:180 y:220 is better overlap imo
01:15:804 (7) - 2 grids left 2 grids up so it looks straight with the slider
01:24:426 (7,8) - imo the bass is strong here , couldve have a higher spacing
01:31:612 (2,3,1) - i recommend you to map this as a 5plets to express this part better , since the sounds are obvious
01:46:432 (1) - spinner end mistaken snap?

Rumia- wrote:

M4M reply ~
[General]
fine.

[Easy]
fine.

[Normal]
00:19:756 (6) - i think removing this is better , to emphasis the new beat and the bass is quite strong as well made it a sliderend instead since removing creates a weird 2/1 gap
00:29:816 (3) - for me , i would move this to 00:29:995 - for the vocal whole combo follow the piano as clickable part, see 00:30:714 (5,6) - vocals just happen to be on the same tick most of the time
00:44:546 (5) - there is no cymbal here , remove finish removed for all diffs
00:59:636 (5,6) - both of these sliderend change to sample N:C2 supposed to sound like thatbut you made me notice that I need to silence normal-sliderslide, lol
01:04:486 (4) - nc here maybe? since the vocal sounds just like 01:16:163 (1) - sure
[Hard]
00:21:193 (3) - nc , people could misread this as a 1/2 especially this diff is meant for average players fine
00:29:995 (1,2) - why is this ds is not the same with others around this part literally no idea, fixed but kept jump to 00:31:612 (1) -
00:31:612 (1,2) - this one as well changed a bit
01:38:438 (4) - what does this slider mapped to ? it is clearly not the same as 01:44:007 (2) - , suggest you change it to 2 circles instead made a 1/2 slider

[Insane]
00:13:109 (1) - since this is a continous piano unlike the earlier part , NC isnt necessary here from a musical point it isn;t needed, but since I used it every downbeat before I'll keep it for a conistent nc pattern
00:18:319 (3,1,2) - move these up a little so the blanket 00:17:780 (2,3) - would be the same as 00:17:061 (5,1) - tried
00:32:869 (6) - x:448 y:64 is better imo would make the spacing of this overlap inconsitent with all other ones and the map is abses around those
01:02:331 (3,4) - instead of circle>slider , try slider>circle would express the vocal and the music better at the same time
01:08:977 (1,2) - this one as well
changed first one, second one follow it better as it is imo, same for extra
01:15:265 (3) - remove clap?didnt hear any clap sound here sure for all diffs
01:21:103 (4) - same as above ^
01:25:953 (6) - this triple should be 01:26:133 - can barely hear anything there, while 6 is much stronger so this seems better
01:29:007 (1) - extend spinner to red tick? k


[Extra]
i think there is no reason to put ar 9.1? ar9 already suits this diff much better imo decimals are love :v
00:02:870 (1,2) - move this few grids up so distance between 00:03:408 (2,3) - and 00:06:283 (2,3) - could be unified moved 00:03:947 (3) - instead
00:08:618 (1) - i think its better to just change this to circle and highlight the piano here? there is no 1/4 sounds like 00:10:414 (1) - and onwards made them all into 1/2 sliders
00:18:319 (3,1) - swap nc fine
00:22:989 (3) - add nc , because this slow sv could drop high amount of hp with hr It's fine, I also just increased hp to 6.5, this is how much hp you have left after the slider if you fc with really low acc before on hardrock: http://i.imgur.com/mQsHOzL.jpg considering this is the easiest part of the map I'd expect everyone who has a chance at getting a decent hr play on this to be able to do well enough on the start to not fail here
00:42:031 (3) - move this a bit to left so the overlap between 00:40:414 (2,4,3) - looks nicer ( just editor purpose) didnt affect gameplay tho was overlapped with wrong ds anyways, fixed
00:54:426 (7,8,1) - weird spacing ? i dont see the music could have any intention to do so changed
01:01:073 (1) - think this is a bit spammy ncs couldve be remove . also the sv change doesnt really do anything tbh makes it better to read instead of just filling everything with followpoints, keeps the 1/1 nc pattern and has the nice effect of only drawing down-left followpoints until 01:02:151 (2) -
01:14:546 (6) - suggest you move thos to x:180 y:220 is better overlap imo moved, but not there as that would make the spacing unfitting
01:15:804 (7) - 2 grids left 2 grids up so it looks straight with the slider tried
01:24:426 (7,8) - imo the bass is strong here , couldve have a higher spacing changed this part a bit
01:31:612 (2,3,1) - i recommend you to map this as a 5plets to express this part better , since the sounds are obvious not what I want to follow here :/
01:46:432 (1) - spinner end mistaken snap?see below

thanks for modding!
also relevant for the next people modding this as it got pointed out a few times already:
as for the spinner ending on the blue tick => 01:52:181 - on all diffs, that is intended as the music stops around there and not on the white tick

Hopefully you were able to find anything useful, if you did not, don't kudos. Good luck with mapping!

MikasaSerket wrote:

Mod for Mod, I already posted on your forum //
I pointed out small easy stuff

Easy
01:16:163 (1) - Rotate 10 degrees, it looks less slanted that way ;w; rotated slightly

01:03:947 (4) - Instead of making this lean, why not just make it straight>? fine

Normal
00:40:235 (1,2) - Try making these slightly curved then blanketing them, it makes it different than 00:51:732 (1,2,3) - which has a similar pattern but reversed but they are pretty much the same musically, so using the same pattern works fine


Why not make 01:05:384 (3) - the same as 01:05:744 (4) - >? They provide a similar pattern and provide contrast to the straight slider in 01:06:103 (1) -
sure

01:18:139 (2) - You should do a beat similar to the one below, it matches the vocals of the singer a lot better than the long slider.
current works fine for vocal-melody-vocal

Hard

00:02:870 (1,2,3,4) - Why not shift this entire section more towards the middle? It provides contrast for the fact that the pattern is very symmetrical like. sure

00:27:840 (4) - Add more of a curve so that it blankets a lot better with 00:28:378 (5) - not my intention here, I'd rather keep the shape consistent with before

00:36:103 (2,3,4) - I am not really feeling a good flow with this triple right here whenever I testplay it, I would suggest making it similar to 00:36:462 (5) - and how it is a repeating slider. It plays with a nicer flow that way. Kept the triple but changed stacking and pattern

01:09:875 (3) - I personally do not like how it is going straight forward, it looks a bit >? Awkward>? When playing I mean, I would suggest moving it towards a teensie bit to the left so that it is not directly on top of 01:10:414 (1) - 's slider end.works fine

Insane

The blankets on this difficulty are very nice <3

00:19:396 (2) - Why not just make this straight instead of slanted? Not really any reason, just personal preference. current is nicer for me/color]

00:31:253 (5) - Remove the slider and add a hitcircle to 00:31:253 - This provides a small pause on the red tick which matches to the vocals of the singer, and also this way, the beat is not being continuous. [color=#FFBF00]would completely ignore the piano on 00:31:432 -

Some of the jumps I do not like visually, such as 01:16:522 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - however, they do play well so there is not really a problem with that ;w;pls no hate on simple polygons ;_;

Extra

00:05:744 (1,2) - Make these like 00:02:870 (1,2) - and how they blanket eachother (Something similar to the one down below)
don't see a reason for that and current one works fine

Other than that, I honestly did not find anything wrong with extra, it is well mapped, this entire map is well mapped, that's why I couldn't mod it very easily.

Hopefully you were able to find anything useful, if you did not, don't kudos. Good luck with mapping!

thanks for modding!

from q

[easy]

1. 00:09:516 (2) - I think this rhythm sound better and a bit easier to play
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2. 00:15:265 (2) - sound like the 1/1 beat here 00:15:444 - sound a bit more noticable more than 1/2 so I guess I would map this 1/1 slider instead
3. 00:26:762 - why not map this vocal beat ? it kinda make the rhythm a bit more consistent imo
4. 01:17:959 - place clap here ? sound nice imo

[normal]

1. 00:07:899 (3) - idk lol but reverse slider just sound weird for me here I think normal 1/2 slider would just sound better
2. 01:03:947 (3,1) - I think this rhythm would work better
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3. 01:06:103 (1) - this play pretty weird imo same with having a short pause here 01:06:462 - , I would just use 1/1 slider here instead since it sound better and will make good transition with the next note
4. 01:45:624 (2,3) - mmm little inconsistent spacing

[hard]

1. 00:09:875 (6,1,2) - rhythm here sound weird , I'm not sure what you're following here but I guess I would do this rhythm instead cus it sound nice with the music
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2. 00:21:193 (3) - the nc should start here 00:21:193 (3) - instead of 00:21:732 (1) - , doesn't it ? (the spacing difference)
3. 00:22:271 (2) - I don't think this need nc lol since without nc it still easy read and notice spacing chaning thing there
4. 01:00:714 (1,1,1) - not really need to nc so much imo the main spacing for all 4 notes is like in form of 1/4 spacing so without nc it still easy to read it
5. 01:12:211 (1,1,1) - same
6. 01:17:420 (1) - I guess downbeat for sliderend here doesn't work that much like the previous one cus I think the next beat just doesn't sound strong enough to do the emphasis thing for the downbeat there so I guess this rhythm would just work a lots better
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7. 01:18:498 (3) - sound weird here imo idk , this rhythm might sound better imo
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8. 01:20:474 - imo this downbeat sound a bit strong and would make a rhythm sound better if you map it
9. 01:22:450 (2) - , 01:23:887 (2) - so mmm just my opinion so you intend to emphasis only the two notes there with the hitsound then leave another one sound unemphasized I just think that it would make a bit more sense if you would also emphasis the two notes that you hitsounded them by making it clickable too so yea lol

[insane]

1. AIBat v3.1 wrote:

   Snapping
   01:02:333 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).

2. 00:18:319 (3) - same as 00:21:193 (3) - in hard
3. 00:21:193 (3) - nc for anti jump ?
4. 01:11:133 (5) - I think if you place this at around x424 y100 it would make flow here 01:11:133 (5,6) - a bit better
   
   a I just think that low spacing like 00:26:402 (2,1,2,3,4) - , 00:41:313 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - , etc can't express the feeling or impact or w/e that much lol Ifeeling like higher spacing would just make those thing express the song better

[extra]

1. 00:26:582 (1,1,1,1) - ,00:32:331 (1,1,1,1) - somehow I don't think 1/4 slider like this would work clearly the 1/4 sound there aren't exist the music then yea I guess that why you silence sliderend here but still it's just sound really weird the music doesn't call for any kind of 1/4 pattern here imo so I guess that why it make thing here sound weird for me , using a circle just feel a lots better since it consist with the music better
2. 00:34:846 (3,4) - the spacing keep decrasing for the cymbal at (4) that make the spacing here looks weird , I guess give a bit higher spacing to (4) would make thing play better , try placing (4) at around x480 y284
3. 00:55:864 (8,9,1) - flow is kinda derp at 00:55:953 (9,1) - imo , why not just just use curve or straight pattern for that triplet
4. 01:08:798 (6,1) - mmm why a sudden drop in spacing when the beat sound similiar to each other I think increase spacing for (1) just make thing play better
5. 01:10:325 - ,01:10:145 - ,01:09:247 - ,01:09:606 - these are place where you can put a 1/4 note which can make the diff play a bit more like extra

aa spacing spacing spacing re re checking spacing ~ and also I find that some slider pattern can improve like make it looks better and creative but that just a my opinion lol

good luck

CelsiusLK wrote:

from q

[easy]

1. 00:09:516 (2) - I think this rhythm sound better and a bit easier to play
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   kept this but changed rhythm after a bit
2. 00:15:265 (2) - sound like the 1/1 beat here 00:15:444 - sound a bit more noticable more than 1/2 so I guess I would map this 1/1 slider instead feels pretty much equal to me, so I'll keep it
3. 00:26:762 - why not map this vocal beat ? it kinda make the rhythm a bit more consistent imo done
4. 01:17:959 - place clap here ? sound nice imodone

[normal]

1. 00:07:899 (3) - idk lol but reverse slider just sound weird for me here I think normal 1/2 slider would just sound better goes really well with background stuff on the tick and you don't click more anyways
2. 01:03:947 (3,1) - I think this rhythm would work better
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   current follows vocals fine and gives a nice lower density
3. 01:06:103 (1) - this play pretty weird imo same with having a short pause here 01:06:462 - , I would just use 1/1 slider here instead since it sound better and will make good transition with the next note same here
4. 01:45:624 (2,3) - mmm little inconsistent spacing fixed

[hard]

1. 00:09:875 (6,1,2) - rhythm here sound weird , I'm not sure what you're following here but I guess I would do this rhythm instead cus it sound nice with the music
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   redid rhythm to follow piano better
2. 00:21:193 (3) - the nc should start here 00:21:193 (3) - instead of 00:21:732 (1) - , doesn't it ? (the spacing difference)
3. 00:22:271 (2) - I don't think this need nc lol since without nc it still easy read and notice spacing chaning thing there yes., fixed both
4. 01:00:714 (1,1,1) - not really need to nc so much imo the main spacing for all 4 notes is like in form of 1/4 spacing so without nc it still easy to read it
5. 01:12:211 (1,1,1) - same
   think it's okay for hard since it makes it a bit better to read than just having alle those low spaced same colored things
6. 01:17:420 (1) - I guess downbeat for sliderend here doesn't work that much like the previous one cus I think the next beat just doesn't sound strong enough to do the emphasis thing for the downbeat there so I guess this rhythm would just work a lots better
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   current follows vocals fine and that is what I want to do here :/
7. 01:18:498 (3) - sound weird here imo idk , this rhythm might sound better imo
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   yes, that works
8. 01:20:474 - imo this downbeat sound a bit strong and would make a rhythm sound better if you map it done
9. 01:22:450 (2) - , 01:23:887 (2) - so mmm just my opinion so you intend to emphasis only the two notes there with the hitsound then leave another one sound unemphasized I just think that it would make a bit more sense if you would also emphasis the two notes that you hitsounded them by making it clickable too so yea lol removed some claps, should be better

[insane]

1. AIBat v3.1 wrote:

   Snapping
   01:02:333 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).

   fixed
2. 00:18:319 (3) - same as 00:21:193 (3) - in hard sure
3. 00:21:193 (3) - nc for anti jump ? dont think that is needed as the same spacing antijump is introduced before and it should be fine to read
4. 01:11:133 (5) - I think if you place this at around x424 y100 it would make flow here 01:11:133 (5,6) - a bit better moved 6 instead, changing 5 would ruin the pattern
   
   a I just think that low spacing like 00:26:402 (2,1,2,3,4) - , 00:41:313 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - , etc can't express the feeling or impact or w/e that much lol Ifeeling like higher spacing would just make those thing express the song better

[extra]

1. 00:26:582 (1,1,1,1) - ,00:32:331 (1,1,1,1) - somehow I don't think 1/4 slider like this would work clearly the 1/4 sound there aren't exist the music then yea I guess that why you silence sliderend here but still it's just sound really weird the music doesn't call for any kind of 1/4 pattern here imo so I guess that why it make thing here sound weird for me , using a circle just feel a lots better since it consist with the music better Got your point, but the sliders imo go really well with the "beep" sounds there.
2. 00:34:846 (3,4) - the spacing keep decrasing for the cymbal at (4) that make the spacing here looks weird , I guess give a bit higher spacing to (4) would make thing play better , try placing (4) at around x480 y284 lol I feel stupid now, seems like I accidentally ctrl-g'd 00:34:666 (2,3) - , swapped them made the spacing right again
3. 00:55:864 (8,9,1) - flow is kinda derp at 00:55:953 (9,1) - imo , why not just just use curve or straight pattern for that triplet changed this
4. 01:08:798 (6,1) - mmm why a sudden drop in spacing when the beat sound similiar to each other I think increase spacing for (1) just make thing play better balanced spacing a bit better
5. 01:10:325 - ,01:10:145 - ,01:09:247 - ,01:09:606 - these are place where you can put a 1/4 note which can make the diff play a bit more like extra sure there are sounds there, but they don't feel strong on a "has to be mapped" level and using jumps works fine too :v

aa spacing spacing spacing re re checking spacing ~ and also I find that some slider pattern can improve like make it looks better and creative but that just a my opinion lol

good luck

thanks for modding!