Rihanna - Lost In Paradise · forum

Vovan

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2015-12-26T12:39:32+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Hey Prismetical! Here's finally my mod! And sorry for such long wait.

[D27's Beginner]

Lol, I also speak French, but I'm going to mod it in English. There are words I couldn't find in French lel.
Prismetical don't updated my diff (my latest update.) T_T

00:26:050 (1,2,1,2) - I would literally move them to one beat before, meaning that you should move them to the downbeat 00:25:656 . I see that you intend to follow the voice in the part, but wouldn't it sound better if the objects are all on the downbeats, hitting the instruments? Otherwise they create weird gaps between 00:24:866 (5,1) and 00:30:787 (2,1) -, and those don't sound nice. If you'll apply this point, you'll also have to add something on 00:31:971 . Fixed on my latest version
00:38:287 - I highly recommend you add something on this tick. This measure introduces a new type of rhythm, so if you want to emphasize it, it would be nice to add an object. Same, already fixed.
You would want to add more hitsounds to your difficulty. Currently, there's only whistles. What I want to suggest is you add claps, in the kiai part and after, on the second downbeat of each measure. So, it means that you add claps on 00:45:392 (2) - 00:46:182 (3) - (repeat) 00:48:550 (4) - and etc.
00:44:603 (1) - And circle deserves a finish hitsound! Same, already fixed.
Lel, I'm not used seeing really slow Slider Velocity, but everything does look fine! Just some rhythm issues.
All was already fine.......on the latest ver. of my diff.

All was already applied, so I don't update !!!!

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-12-26T17:43:16+00:00

@Dono027: 00:44:603 (1) - You said you added a finish, but you didn't lol.

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2015-12-26T22:50:06+00:00

Oh sry, I only apply the 1st part of this sentence.

Dono027 wrote:
[D27's Beginner]

uh... I re-apply this part.

You would want to add more hitsounds to your difficulty. Currently, there's only whistles. What I want to suggest is you add claps, in the kiai part and after, on the second downbeat of each measure *1.. So, it means that you add claps on 00:45:392 (2) - 00:46:182 (3) - (repeat) 00:48:550 (4) - and etc.
00:44:603 (1) - And circle deserves a finish hitsound!
*1. Here, I make whistles, we go out of the kiai, and the claps sounds good, but the whistles too. So, because this moment is outside the kiai, I make whistles.

Update ♥

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squirrelpascals

982 posts

Joined March 2015

squirrelpascals 2015-12-29T02:15:20+00:00

HARD DIFFICULTY ~

Overall a very clean map. I would get people to test play it (from people who mainly play hard diffs) and take it from there. Just a few things I would point out:

* http://imgur.com/X52tU5J this slider's corner is very subtle 00:02:761 (1) - . Try to keep the curve consistent or exaggerate the corner more

* same thing with this one 00:56:445 (6) -

* You stuck around the 1/1 rhythm a lot, besides for the doubles. I would try adding a little variety in the rhythm that can focuses around the vocals. For example: You could change up the sliders 00:26:050 (1,2,3) - to achieve a more engaging rhythm

* Try distancing these objects 01:04:735 (7,8,9,1,2) - a little more evenly to make it look neater

* 00:35:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This consolation can be neater. Be sure the distance between each circle is note organized and even.

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2015-12-29T11:52:11+00:00

BluJvy wrote:
HARD DIFFICULTY ~

Overall a very clean map. thankyou ^^ I would get people to test play it done (from people who mainly play hard diffs) and take it from there. Just a few things I would point out:

* http://imgur.com/X52tU5J this slider's corner is very subtle 00:02:761 (1) - . Try to keep the curve consistent or exaggerate the corner more done

* same thing with this one 00:56:445 (6) - gonna leave that one :3

* You stuck around the 1/1 rhythm a lot, besides for the doubles. I would try adding a little variety in the rhythm that can focuses around the vocals. For example: You could change up the sliders 00:26:050 (1,2,3) - to achieve a more engaging rhythm i get your thought, but im gonna leave it like that

* Try distancing these objects 01:04:735 (7,8,9,1,2) - a little more evenly to make it look neater i think distancing them differently would be even more confusing, still it is a Hard difficulty so i think i can do things like this

* 00:35:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This consolation can be neater. Be sure the distance between each circle is note organized and even. distancing is correct, it is called 'Star pattern', used very often, it is used in Hard difficulties very often ^^

Thankyou!

Nekomata

807 posts

Joined December 2013

Nekomata 2015-12-30T01:21:49+00:00

[General]
As discussed in chat, here is a new (cut) mp3: http://puu.sh/md43n.mp3
Offset is 159, which is -234 from the current offset. re-offset timing points, select all objects, and drag on timeline

With the current mp3, the offset is a little late, if you choose to continue using it, the offset is -7 from the current offset.

Might want to put "unapologetic" in tags, because that album has this particular song in it.

[D27's Beginner]
No major issues with this diff, but if you're gonna make a difficulty this easy, then I suggest using CS2 and increasing the distance spacing slightly to minimize the overlaps for greater readability. No reason to have the same CS as the Normal here.
relative to the music, don't you think 55% hitsound volume is pretty low for the kiai (try 75%?)

[2222's Easy]
00:21:314 (3) - you might want to reposition that so that it's not *that* high up in the mapping area. it doesn't touch the hp bar, but it is within its bounds. it may or may not be unrankable.
why does most of the kiai lack hitsounding

[Normal]
00:09:471 (5) - this is awkward to play, i suggest swapping timeline position with 00:09:077 (4) - .
00:23:287 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 7 circles is quite a lot of tapping in a row in a Normal, usually i would limit the number of taps per measure to around 3. consider placing some sliders.
00:24:471 (2) - stacking too soon here imo, consider repositioning.
00:31:971 (5) - ^
40% hitsound volume for the kiai is very low.. try 75%

[Hard]
For the beginning of the map, I wasn't sure if you were following vocals or instrumental but some combos can be done a bit better.

Here are a couple of examples I created:
00:06:708 - http://puu.sh/md7aX.png
00:13:024 - http://puu.sh/md7km.png

missing some claps in the kiai. here's a couple: 00:50:129 (3) - 00:51:708 (3) - (there may be more)
would sound pretty cool if you added a circle at 01:11:314 - 01:12:892 - 01:14:471 - since you were doing that kind of rhythm before (or even this rhythm would be fun too)

00:46:182 (2) - how about making this a slider so it doesn't feel so empty for the next beat?
00:47:761 (5) - ^
00:52:498 (5) - ^
00:54:077 (4) - ^
01:11:445 (1) - this slider is a 3-point bezier, thus it doesn't look like a proper circular-curved slider. delete and re-map this slider.

Good luck!

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2015-12-30T02:10:08+00:00

Nekomata wrote:
[General]
As discussed in chat, here is a new (cut) mp3: http://puu.sh/md43n.mp3
Offset is 159, which is -234 from the current offset. re-offset timing points, select all objects, and drag on timeline

With the current mp3, the offset is a little late, if you choose to continue using it, the offset is -7 from the current offset.

Might want to put "unapologetic" in tags, because that album has this particular song in it.

All general is fixed for me

[D27's Beginner]
No major issues with this diff, but if you're gonna make a difficulty this easy, then I suggest using CS2 A new player can't miss this size of circle/slider. xD and increasing the distance spacing slightly to minimize the overlaps for greater readability.I don't apply the last thibg, so i don't apply this. No reason to have the same CS as the Normal here. & the easy* xD
relative to the music, don't you think 55% hitsound volume is pretty low for the kiai (try 75%?) Fixed

Good luck! Thanks !

Update :

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hent2222

395 posts

Joined April 2014

hent2222 2015-12-30T11:47:26+00:00

Nekomata wrote:
[General]
As discussed in chat, here is a new (cut) mp3: http://puu.sh/md43n.mp3
Offset is 159, which is -234 from the current offset. re-offset timing points, select all objects, and drag on timeline

With the current mp3, the offset is a little late, if you choose to continue using it, the offset is -7 from the current offset.

Might want to put "unapologetic" in tags, because that album has this particular song in it.

[2222's Easy]
00:21:314 (3) - you might want to reposition that so that it's not *that* high up in the mapping area. it doesn't touch the hp bar, but it is within its bounds. it may or may not be unrankable. Change
why does most of the kiai lack hitsounding

Good luck! Thank you c;

Update :3

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Title:Lost In Paradise
TitleUnicode:Lost In Paradise
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:Rihanna
Creator:Prismetical
Version:2222's Easy
Source:
Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
BeatmapID:827415
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Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2015-12-30T15:07:27+00:00

Nekomata wrote:
[General]
As discussed in chat, here is a new (cut) mp3: http://puu.sh/md43n.mp3
Offset is 159, which is -234 from the current offset. re-offset timing points, select all objects, and drag on timeline thankyouuuu!

With the current mp3, the offset is a little late, if you choose to continue using it, the offset is -7 from the current offset. deleted

Might want to put "unapologetic" in tags, because that album has this particular song in it. done

[Normal]
00:09:471 (5) - this is awkward to play, i suggest swapping timeline position with 00:09:077 (4) - . I disagree :3
00:23:287 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 7 circles is quite a lot of tapping in a row in a Normal, usually i would limit the number of taps per measure to around 3. consider placing some sliders. changed one into slider, didn't find another chance
00:24:471 (2) - stacking too soon here imo, consider repositioning. I don't have anything stacked there, I guess I misunderstand this
00:31:971 (5) - ^ ^
40% hitsound volume for the kiai is very low.. try 75% right, changed

[Hard]
For the beginning of the map, I wasn't sure if you were following vocals or instrumental but some combos can be done a bit better. k

Here are a couple of examples I created:
00:06:708 - http://puu.sh/md7aX.png
00:13:024 - http://puu.sh/md7km.png I stick to what I did

missing some claps in the kiai. here's a couple: 00:50:129 (3) - 00:51:708 (3) - (there may be more) k
would sound pretty cool if you added a circle at 01:11:314 - 01:12:892 - 01:14:471 - since you were doing that kind of rhythm before (or even this rhythm would be fun too) there might be a problem if you give me the audio and you mod the old version :/ can you edit these times?

00:46:182 (2) - how about making this a slider so it doesn't feel so empty for the next beat?
00:47:761 (5) - ^
00:52:498 (5) - ^
00:54:077 (4) - ^ following the drums here :3
01:11:445 (1) - this slider is a 3-point bezier, thus it doesn't look like a proper circular-curved slider. delete and re-map this slider. done

Good luck! ty c:

Thankyou!

squirrelpascals

982 posts

Joined March 2015

squirrelpascals 2015-12-30T18:50:33+00:00

Fix offset in all diffs please

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2015-12-30T19:53:27+00:00

BluJvy wrote:
Fix offset in all diffs please

Prismetical just tell me the offset is changed in all diffs.

Bekko

423 posts

Joined September 2014

Bekko 2015-12-30T21:06:22+00:00

Here is my mod

hope its not too hard to follow

NORMAL

-+NORMAL DIFFCULTY+-
00:05:685 (6) - move the 2nd point to x:204 y:332 and the 3rd one to x:248 y:296
00:07:264 (3) - big sliders can be hard to mod but i will try my best:
ok, first of all remove the whole slider, its ok we will make a brand new one

add the start of the slider to x:172 y:244 and the end slider to x:420 y:88
add a RED point at x:232 y:208
add another point at x:268 y:120 and a new point to x:328 y:68, that will make a smooth curve.
00:54:632 (2) - move this slider to x:296 y:308
00:55:422 (1) - move to x:312 y:176
other than that, ITS GREAT

HARD

-+HARD DIFFCULTY+-
00:02:527 (7) - move the first point to x:312 y:86, add a red point to x:349 y:76, set the 3rd point around x:384 y:120 and the last point to x:460 y:105
00:03:711 (2) - move this circle to x:244 y:136
00:07:264 (3) - this desn't seem too pretty. move the 2nd point up to x:272 y:80 much better

00:15:158 (7) - flip this slider vertically and move it to x:428 y:64
00:15:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you need to move all of these cirlces to a place that fits.
00:21:474 (8,2) - turn these more round.
00:23:843 (5,1,2,3,4) - try to move 00:23:843 (5) - to x:256 y:232 and move 00:24:632 (1,2,3,4) - to x:200 y:116. i think this will give more effect.
00:36:080 (4) - sorry but 00:36:080 (4) - makes me cringe .-. move it up to x:492 y:92. now it makes me happy

00:45:158 (1) - i dont think i like that slider so much. try to copy 00:46:737 (3) - :3:
00:50:290 (5) - what happend to all of these points?
00:52:264 (5) - make this to a slider.
00:54:632 (2) - ok, the points are a little messy.. try reducing the points.
00:54:632 (2) - why not move the 3rd point to x:360 y:240
01:08:448 (1) - move it to the other side to form a "good" triangle.

Thats all for my mod!

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2015-12-30T22:28:34+00:00

HELLO

For everyone who is having issues with the offset: we have a new audio! You need to delete and download the mapset again, redownloading is not enough. That is why the offset might be wrong for you.

bejewelled

553 posts

Joined August 2015

bejewelled 2015-12-31T00:03:43+00:00

Hey Prismetical, (Check my queue homepage for color meanings)

This map is great, and I love the song. Just a few minor things:

Beginner: I would think that this is almost too easy. Even complete newbies at osu could probably manage a 1 star map. I would raise this just a bit.

Easy: Slider velocity is a bit slow. Then again, you would have to resnap all of the sliders, so your choice.

Normal: 00:06:474 (1,2,3) - The slider is too long; you have constant beats and then a long slider that interrupts the flow. Also, making the circle size 3.2-3.3 from 3.0 would give it an extra sense of increased difficulty.

Hard: Loved this map! Got 99% on it. Nothing wrong here.

Please leave a kudosu as I need to build up my supply! I would award 3-5 stars, but I have no kudosu!

Nekomata

807 posts

Joined December 2013

Nekomata 2015-12-31T01:23:21+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
there might be a problem if you give me the audio and you mod the old version :/ can you edit these times?

any offset/mp3 changes should always be the last thing to do

01:11:080 -
01:12:658 -
01:14:237 -

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2015-12-31T01:32:47+00:00

Nekomata wrote:
any offset/mp3 changes should always be the last thing to do

01:11:080 -
01:12:658 -
01:14:237 -

I was assuming you modded with the new audio, because you told me Offset and things !

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2015-12-31T01:34:49+00:00

Swegmec wrote:
Hey Prismetical, (Check my queue homepage for color meanings)

This map is great, and I love the song. Just a few minor things:

Beginner: I would think that this is almost too easy. Even complete newbies at osu could probably manage a 1 star map. I would raise this just a bit.

Easy: Slider velocity is a bit slow. Then again, you would have to resnap all of the sliders, so your choice.

Normal: 00:06:474 (1,2,3) - The slider is too long; you have constant beats and then a long slider that interrupts the flow. Also, making the circle size 3.2-3.3 from 3.0 would give it an extra sense of increased difficulty.

Hard: Loved this map! Got 99% on it. Nothing wrong here.

Please leave a kudosu as I need to build up my supply! I would award 3-5 stars, but I have no kudosu!

Thankyou a lot!

Phos-

773 posts

Joined December 2012

Phos- 2015-12-31T02:27:16+00:00

Hi, m4m from Dono's queue!

[Beginner]
I'd add a spinner somewhere. I know this is beginner, and that beginners might not be able to handle spinners, but how will they learn? Also, spinners are important to add variety to the scoreboards when the map gets ranked. Imagine if #1 simply became a race to see who can full mod FC your diff first.

00:29:369 (1,2) - I'm not too fond of this pattern. It doesn't really represent anything and it's unpleasing to the eye. If you curved them more, you'd have a solid oval shape, but as it currently stands, I'm not liking the look of it.
00:35:685 (3) - Why did you put a whistle on the slider trail as well? It sounds so different to the usual now, and it is quite inconsistent. I would change this by making sure there's only a whistle on the end and start of the slider.
00:57:001 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - These patterns feel a bit cramped. It feels as if everything is going on in the bottom left quadrant. This is bad when sliders like (4) nearly end up going off the screen. You have all this space, use it.

[Easy]
I really don't like how you've hitsounded this difficulty. Why have the first part of the song use whistles and the second part use claps? Both parts are very similar to each other and you shouldn't segregate the hitsounds like this, use them together. Otherwise it will startle and confuse players. (two claps in a short succession also sound bad when used consecutively in a short period of time.)

00:00:159 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is it just me or does this whole area have no hitsounds? I would add some, because without hitsounds the patterns would sound bland and monotonous.
00:04:895 (5,1) - Despite them being in different combos, I still think these sliders should be symmetrical; it would look a lot nicer that way.
01:15:158 (1) - Unrankable, Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. Why is the hitsound here so quiet? I know you want to reflect on how most of the instruments stop here, but it's ineffective and it would be better just to get rid of the note. So either make the hitsound here normal volume, or just get rid of the slider.

And what's with the lack of hitsounds at all towards the end of the diff? Please, this is a solid difficulty in all aspects except for hitsounds, which I personally think needs a redo. Look at the other difficulties in this mapset for an example of good hitsounding.

[Normal]

00:25:816 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Personally, I feel that it would be better if you did patterns here rather than just straight lines; it feels somewhat bland.
00:41:211 (1,2,3,4) - Another minor suggestion; you could make this pattern symmetrical, as the position of (4) is a bit off. Try moving it to 220|132 instead.
00:51:474 (3,1,2) - The claps here are so inconsistent. Remove the claps at (2) and the head of (1), and place a clap at the tail of (1). This will sound much nicer and consistent.

[Hard]

00:13:580 (3,5) - I suppose you were going for something like an oval here. Unfortunately it looks a bit lopsided; it would really help improve it if you were to make both sliders identical to each other. (3) has a much stronger cure than (5).
00:42:395 (2) - I really don't think this beat is strong enough to justify a finish. Sure, you want to help build up towards the spinner, but because there isn't an actual strong beat in the music, it just sounds funny. It would sound much nicer if you just got rid of the finish.
00:45:027 I would add a note here to map to the bass. You have a note here on all the other patterns like this, so why is this so different? It's just inconsistent.
01:07:658 (1,1,1) - I feel as though these notes could use a bit more oomph, so why not space them out a bit? It's a hard difficulty, so you can break distance snap to add jumps if you want.

Overall, it's a pretty good mapset. Aspects such as patterns and flow were pretty good, although hitsounds could use some work on the easier difficulties. I shot a star, good luck!

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2015-12-31T13:34:51+00:00

-Faded- wrote:
Hi, m4m from Dono's queue! thankyou Donooo! ♥

[Normal]
00:25:816 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Personally, I feel that it would be better if you did patterns here rather than just straight lines; it feels somewhat bland. I wanted it to directly go down, because the vocal is going deeper and so I want to kind of simulate that xD (rip english)
00:41:211 (1,2,3,4) - Another minor suggestion; you could make this pattern symmetrical, as the position of (4) is a bit off. Try moving it to 220|132 instead. good point, it was because (3) was a bit higher than (2)
00:51:474 (3,1,2) - The claps here are so inconsistent. Remove the claps at (2) and the head of (1), and place a clap at the tail of (1). This will sound much nicer and consistent. tried your resulution, still sounded weird, I used 3 claps in a row now for end of (3) and for both of (1)
[Hard]
00:13:580 (3,5) - I suppose you were going for something like an oval here. Unfortunately it looks a bit lopsided; it would really help improve it if you were to make both sliders identical to each other. (3) has a much stronger cure than (5). I actually didn't care if oval or not, gonna leave it
00:42:395 (2) - I really don't think this beat is strong enough to justify a finish. Sure, you want to help build up towards the spinner, but because there isn't an actual strong beat in the music, it just sounds funny. It would sound much nicer if you just got rid of the finish. not sure, both sounds cool for me
00:45:027 I would add a note here to map to the bass. You have a note here on all the other patterns like this, so why is this so different? It's just inconsistent. you're so right!
01:07:658 (1,1,1) - I feel as though these notes could use a bit more oomph, so why not space them out a bit? It's a hard difficulty, so you can break distance snap to add jumps if you want. changed it up a bit, I'm a huge friend of distance snap, so I will not break it ^^
Overall, it's a pretty good mapset. Aspects such as patterns and flow were pretty good, although hitsounds could use some work on the easier difficulties. I shot a star, good luck!thanks A LOT!

Thankyou so much! ♥ HAPPY NEW YEAR

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2015-12-31T16:24:36+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
-Faded- wrote:
Hi, m4m from Dono's queue! thankyou Donooo! ♥

I want this song ranked. I'll apply the mod of Faded. 2mins. ♥

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2015-12-31T16:39:51+00:00

-Faded- wrote:

Hi, m4m from Dono's queue!

[Beginner]
I'd add a spinner somewhere. I know this is beginner, and that beginners might not be able to handle spinners, but how will they learn? Also, spinners are important to add variety to the scoreboards when the map gets ranked. Imagine if #1 simply became a race to see who can full mod FC your diff first.

Fixed. THANKS ! c:

00:29:369 (1,2) - I'm not too fond of this pattern. It doesn't really represent anything and it's unpleasing to the eye. If you curved them more, you'd have a solid oval shape, but as it currently stands, I'm not liking the look of it.
I just curved a bit more the sliders
00:35:685 (3) - Why did you put a whistle on the slider trail as well? It sounds so different to the usual now, and it is quite inconsistent. I would change this by making sure there's only a whistle on the end and start of the slider.
Fixed.
00:57:001 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - These patterns feel a bit cramped. It feels as if everything is going on in the bottom left quadrant. This is bad when sliders like (4) nearly end up going off the screen. You have all this space, use it.

Nope, the points don't go out of the grid, and that's just a blanket. I don't know what is the problem. I keep this.

Update.

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Rihanna - Lost In Paradise (Official) (mp3cut.net).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38815
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13815
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Lost In Paradise
TitleUnicode:Lost In Paradise
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:Rihanna
Creator:Prismetical
Version:D27's Beginner
Source:
Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
BeatmapID:825140
BeatmapSetID:371997

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.500000005960464
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"fantasy-dreamworld.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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44369,-100,4,2,0,75,0,1
69632,-100,4,2,0,45,0,0


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Combo1 : 243,58,86
Combo2 : 128,128,192
Combo3 : 233,170,39

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byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-12-31T20:59:07+00:00

Beginner

looks fine

Easy

00:02:527 (3) - do not use a slider tail for emphasizing downbeat. make this part a slider 00:03:316 -
00:04:895 (5) - move this to 00:04:501 -
00:08:843 (3) - similar
00:11:211 (5) - similar
im not going to go through all of the parts you did this, but please change it so that the downbeat is clickable.

Normal

i'd say remake your sliders so that they blanket the circles even with DS
00:10:422 (3) - the slider tail should be a circle. you should use the same rhythm you used here 00:03:316 (1,2,3) -
00:11:606 - i highly suggest you fill this with a 1/1 slider 00:11:211 (4) - but I understand that you want to put emphasis on the three circles
00:13:185 -
00:40:422 (2) - look at my mod for the hard diff first for a method to fix this

Hard

00:26:606 (2,3) - make the visual distance the same spacing as 00:25:816 (1,2) - ? . compare http://puu.sh/mf7tp/586a05edd2.jpg to http://puu.sh/mf7ue/7f8203922c.jpg it might not seem like a big difference, but there really is (especially since this is a light hard diff with low ar)
00:28:974 (1) - make it more perfect like this? http://puu.sh/mf7nm/b76a7116c3.jpg
code for it if you want it
```
480,128,28974,22,0,B|420:160|468:224|384:244,1,140
```
do it the same way for all your other squigly sliders please, it looks better and more neater this way
00:50:290 (5) - uh
00:54:632 (2) - ^
a tip for sliders, less nodes = better

gl

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2015-12-31T21:28:19+00:00

byfar wrote:
Normal
i'd say remake your sliders so that they blanket the circles even with DS aren't they fine?
00:10:422 (3) - the slider tail should be a circle. you should use the same rhythm you used here 00:03:316 (1,2,3) - I like it
00:11:606 - i highly suggest you fill this with a 1/1 slider 00:11:211 (4) - but I understand that you want to put emphasis on the three circles no, I like your idea, I want to change the 3 circles anyway so this is the perfect chance! thankyou ^^
00:13:185 - here I want to put full focus on voice
00:40:422 (2) - look at my mod for the hard diff first for a method to fix this eh.. wut? xD
Hard
00:26:606 (2,3) - make the visual distance the same spacing as 00:25:816 (1,2) - ? . compare http://puu.sh/mf7tp/586a05edd2.jpg to http://puu.sh/mf7ue/7f8203922c.jpg it might not seem like a big difference, but there really is (especially since this is a light hard diff with low ar) they had a wrong spacing anyway, spaced/placed them completely new
00:28:974 (1) - make it more perfect like this? http://puu.sh/mf7nm/b76a7116c3.jpg seems good to me
code for it if you want it
480,128,28974,22,0,B|420:160|468:224|384:244,1,140
do it the same way for all your other squigly sliders please, it looks better and more neater this way
00:50:290 (5) - uh sooooorry, changed
00:54:632 (2) - ^ I'm creative!
a tip for sliders, less nodes = better
gl

Thankyou!

Drasamii

20 posts

Joined March 2015

Drasamii 2015-12-31T22:07:20+00:00

From my queue:

These maps seem pretty clean to me. I didn't really find much so it's a short mod but here you are:

SPOILER

2222's Easy:

00:48:711 (4) - make this a two-beat slider?

Normal:

00:45:158- add another circle to this combo here?

01:07:264 (3) - Make this the NC point instead of 01:07:658 (1)?

- Castaway -

40 posts

Joined April 2014

- Castaway - 2015-12-31T22:52:59+00:00

Hey! M4M From my queue

SPOILER

General

Turn off grid snap please...i'll have examples of why down below!
I'm sad how the lyrics have a great and interesting rhythm but all the maps go by the beat in the background... D: It feels like i'm playing the drums.....
Snap Preview Points

D27's Easy

As said above, the grid snap can sometimes be annoying especially on easy diffs. It's very slight, but here are some examples: 00:05:685 (5,1) - these are almost touching 00:34:895 (2) - move circle to x:245 y:218
00:38:843 - might wanna snap the preview point :/
It would also be nice if your sliders were more consistent. These 2 00:06:474 (1,3) - could be the same as these 00:00:159 (1,3) - . Its exactly the same sound so...
00:15:158 (2,1) - ^
01:00:158 (3,4) - don't like this placement. a sharp turn for beginner
Clean the map up abit and it'll be great

2222's Easy

00:21:080 (3) - turn so it leads on to (4)
00:33:711 (2) - less curve on this please
00:40:422 (3,4) - fix blanket (slightly)
Snap Preview Point as well
00:49:895 (5,1,2,3) - this rhythm should be the same as this 00:45:948 (1,2,3,4) -. Your a beat ahead but because the sliders are the same shape its confusing D:
00:57:790 (5,1) - fix the flow from (5) to (1) please
01:00:948 (3,1) - same shape better
01:06:869 (5) - Make horizontal. Like this: http://puu.sh/mfccb/335b7af349.JPG
01:09:632 (1,5) - same shape as well please
01:12:790 (5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/mfch1/17a6f7d68d.JPG http://puu.sh/mfcj6/58b9947873.JPG. (5) will blanket (1)

Normal

00:00:948 (2,3,4) - (3) and (4) blanket...but it looks ugly next to slider (2)
00:03:316 (1,2) - fix blanket please ._.
00:07:264 (3) - why is this long slider here...keep it consistent with the first set of 'oooo's' 00:00:159 (1,2,3) -
00:19:501 (2) - ^
00:19:501 (2,1) - dis blanket :/
00:21:080 (2,3,4) - this better: http://puu.sh/mfcyv/7cdfdce16b.JPG
00:32:527 (1,3) - copy (1) and rotate for slider (3) imo
00:36:474 (4,5) - this part is exactly the same as 00:34:895 (1,2,3) - echoing 'with this heart'
00:44:764 - You can use red ticks in normal... the chorus starts somewhere here on the red tick...unless your going by the beat D:
00:51:474 (3,1) - its a bit of symmetry which makes it looks ugly imo
01:08:448 (3,4) - blanket PWEZ
00:57:395 (2) - This isn't centred between 00:56:211 (3,3) - these...it's off
01:03:316 (3) - slider
01:04:895 (3) - ^
01:06:474 (2) - ^
01:13:974 (3) - 1/4 slider please and 01:14:764 - circle here

Hard

throughout the whole song...the map goes by the beat...and the beat usually changes only slightly throughout a song...so your basically repeating the beat for the WHOLE 1:15 min...i hope you will change this
00:14:369 (5,7) - blanket off
00:38:843 (2,3,4,5) - See...this part could be much more interesting
Fix Preview Point as well
Pretty much fine diff

GL with ur map

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-01-01T00:10:47+00:00

- Castaway - wrote:
Hey! M4M From my queue

General
Turn off grid snap please...i'll have examples of why down below! Using this is highly recommended.
I'm sad how the lyrics have a great and interesting rhythm but all the maps go by the beat in the background... D: It feels like i'm playing the drums..... That's because all the voice sound go to the beat.
Snap Preview Points
I'll speak about this tomorrow with Prismetical ^^

D27's Easy
As said above, the grid snap can sometimes be annoying especially on easy diffs. It's very slight, but here are some examples: 00:05:685 (5,1) - these are almost touching 00:34:895 (2) - move circle to x:245 y:218 That's because I use DS ._.
00:38:843 - might wanna snap the preview point :/ Ill do this
It would also be nice if your sliders were more consistent. These 2 00:06:474 (1,3) - could be the same as these 00:00:159 (1,3) - . Its exactly the same sound so... It's the same sound so I've use the same hitsounds & the same kind of slider.
00:15:158 (2,1) - ^ I don't know here is the problem.
01:00:158 (3,4) - don't like this placement. a sharp turn for beginner 00:59:369 (2,3,4) - That make a basic pattern : triangle. So no changes;
Clean the map up abit and it'll be great
... Uh... For me no changes, just snap the point. I will speak about this with Prismetical tomorrow.

geodoomcraft

7 posts

Joined March 2015

geodoomcraft 2016-01-01T02:36:31+00:00

Hello, doing M4M from Dono027's queue

[D27's Begineer]

00:24:632 (5,1) - I feel a reverse slider might work here to get 00:25:027 - in with the beat.
00:32:527 (1) - I feel the extra red curve on this is not needed.
00:42:001 - Maybe add a circle here to keep consistency with 00:38:053 (4) -, And it also adds a bit on the vocal because that's where the vocalist says "To".
00:44:369 (1,2) - i feel like a slider could be used here instead of two circles to add to the vocal.
01:09:632 - I feel like the drum set of hit sounds could be used here.
01:13:974 - This one spot feels like its missing a note or something like that, maybe add a circle here.

[2222's Easy]

00:03:711 - I feel like u should remove (4) at 00:04:106 (4) - and make a slider from 00:03:711 - to 00:04:106 - and add one circle to 00:04:501 -. That way it sounds a bit more in flow with the rhythm.
00:10:027 - Same thing here but only up to 00:10:816 -
00:49:106 - I feel a slider might work very well with the rhythm here.
00:58:974 - I think a circle should be added here to keep consistency with 00:55:422 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:04:106 (3) - Maybe curve this more to add to the vocal.
01:15:158 (1) - Feel like there could be a hit sound here that would help emphasize the last part of the song.

[Normal]

00:12:790 (3) - imo the (3) here can be changed to a slider so it fits with the "mhh..".
00:45:158 - I think a circle should go here. It will work better with the rhythm.
00:53:843 (1) - I feel a slider will do better here then a circle, will work better with rhythm.

[Hard]

00:41:211 (1) - imo this is kind of not needed, the vocal from 00:41:211 - ends at 00:41:606 -, maybe make a slider up to there then put a circle at 00:42:001 -
00:50:158 (4) - This is probably just me but it sounds like its not needed here.
00:50:685 (6) - ^ same thing. I Think you should extend 00:50:290 (5) - to (6) and get rid of the circle on (6)

If there are any questions about my mod pls ask

Good luck with the map!

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-01T14:12:46+00:00

bryjow123 wrote:
From my queue:

These maps seem pretty clean to me. I take that as a compliment I didn't really find much so it's a short mod but here you are:

Normal:

00:45:158- add another circle to this combo here? nope, because of spacing between spinner and next element

01:07:264 (3) - Make this the NC point instead of 01:07:658 (1)? I prefer it how it is, because we are following the downbeats and (3) is not a part of that

Thankyou!

- Castaway - wrote:
Dono27 already answered the General things correctly

Normal
00:00:948 (2,3,4) - (3) and (4) blanket...but it looks ugly next to slider (2) hard to blanket, I tried
00:03:316 (1,2) - fix blanket please ._. tried
00:07:264 (3) - why is this long slider here...keep it consistent with the first set of 'oooo's' 00:00:159 (1,2,3) - I like it
00:19:501 (2) - ^ ^
00:19:501 (2,1) - dis blanket :/ I really don't see a problem there xD
00:21:080 (2,3,4) - this better: http://puu.sh/mfcyv/7cdfdce16b.JPG copied (2) and rotated it, might look better now
00:32:527 (1,3) - copy (1) and rotate for slider (3) imo they are copied
00:36:474 (4,5) - this part is exactly the same as 00:34:895 (1,2,3) - echoing 'with this heart' you're right, I miss the concern here, it is fine
00:44:764 - You can use red ticks in normal... the chorus starts somewhere here on the red tick...unless your going by the beat D: everybody says that, we need a certain break after a spinner
00:51:474 (3,1) - its a bit of symmetry which makes it looks ugly imo yeah, but I have to stack the sliderending otherwise I would have a overlay
01:08:448 (3,4) - blanket PWEZ looks good to me :3
00:57:395 (2) - This isn't centred between 00:56:211 (3,3) - these...it's off correct, looked at y-coordinate, they are on same height now! thankyou ^^
01:03:316 (3) - slider disagree
01:04:895 (3) - ^ ^
01:06:474 (2) - ^ ^
01:13:974 (3) - 1/4 slider please and 01:14:764 - circle here nah
Hard
throughout the whole song...the map goes by the beat...and the beat usually changes only slightly throughout a song...so your basically repeating the beat for the WHOLE 1:15 min...i hope you will change this I think this difficulty has a lot of variety, fun and complexity, so that it is still entertaining by only following the drums, well, everybody has his own taste
00:14:369 (5,7) - blanket off I don't find a problem... it seriously wonders me that your are the only one after tons of mods that encounters that
00:38:843 (2,3,4,5) - See...this part could be much more interesting can't change much :/
Fix Preview Point as well
Pretty much fine diff thankyou ^^
GL with ur map thankyou! good luck with yours too!

geodoomcraft wrote:
Hello, doing M4M from Dono027's queue good boy, Dono

[Normal]
00:12:790 (3) - imo the (3) here can be changed to a slider so it fits with the "mhh..". I want to point the voice out, so I start with the voice
00:45:158 - I think a circle should go here. It will work better with the rhythm. I knooow! But I need to have a certain break after a spinner ._. kills be aswell cuz it would be so good
00:53:843 (1) - I feel a slider will do better here then a circle, will work better with rhythm. not sure, rather going with the drums
[Hard]
00:41:211 (1) - imo this is kind of not needed, the vocal from 00:41:211 - ends at 00:41:606 -, maybe make a slider up to there then put a circle at 00:42:001 - not following voice here
00:50:158 (4) - This is probably just me but it sounds like its not needed here. the cool thing here is that we are following two things in once (that weird alarm and the drums) and it works totally for me, one of the coolest parts in that difficulty for me :3
00:50:685 (6) - ^ same thing. I Think you should extend 00:50:290 (5) - to (6) and get rid of the circle on (6) nah
If there are any questions about my mod pls ask I'm fine!
Good luck with the map! thankyouu! :3

Now that took a bit, thanks to you all! :3

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-01-01T15:08:15+00:00

geodoomcraft wrote:
Hello, doing M4M from Dono027's queue

[D27's Begineer]
00:24:632 (5,1) - I feel a reverse slider might work here to get 00:25:027 - in with the beat. Fixed.
00:32:527 (1) - I feel the extra red curve on this is not needed. I prefer with this.
00:42:001 - Maybe add a circle here to keep consistency with 00:38:053 (4) -, And it also adds a bit on the vocal because that's where the vocalist says "To". This is a beginner diff. We are after a spinner, so I give time to the player after this.
00:44:369 (1,2) - i feel like a slider could be used here instead of two circles to add to the vocal. For diversity, i added 2 circles, a map with only sliders will be...
01:09:632 - I feel like the drum set of hit sounds could be used here. The actual hitsounds sound good, and drum hitsound are really heavy.
01:13:974 - This one spot feels like its missing a note or something like that, maybe add a circle here.
I know, but I want to keep this. I don't want to make the end too hard I prefer just keep this.

If there are any questions about my mod pls ask
Good luck with the map!

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Rihanna - Lost In Paradise (Official) (mp3cut.net).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38815
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13815
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Lost In Paradise
TitleUnicode:Lost In Paradise
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:Rihanna
Creator:Prismetical
Version:D27's Beginner
Source:
Tags:dono027 d27 pop rated r hent2222 unapologetic
BeatmapID:825140
BeatmapSetID:371997

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.500000005960464
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"fantasy-dreamworld.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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44369,-100,4,2,0,75,0,1
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Aihuro

329 posts

Joined January 2015

Aihuro 2016-01-05T17:42:53+00:00

Hey! M4M request through PM.
Well, here goes nothing.

D27's Beginner:

00:02:527 (3,1) - I don't really like this overlap here, maybe try Ctrl+H And place him here: X: 132 Y: 160. I think it will also improve the flow. (It's also a quick fix, just have to fix the DS)
00:15:158 (2,4) - Same here, please stack (4) on (2)'s tail to prevent from overlapping with each other.
00:26:211 (6,1) - ^ Stack them properly please.
00:32:527 (1,3) - These two sliders are touching each other's head, I highly suggest you do something like this instead: http://puu.sh/mkBof/d46bbc075a.jpg
00:45:158 (2,4) - Same as I mentioned above, stack.
01:00:948 (4) - I think Ctrl+H Will work better since it will prevent overlapping with 00:57:001 (1) - .
01:14:369 (4,5) - I didn't saw you using this kind of pattern through out the whole mapset, maybe remove (4) and add a note here: 01:14:369 - .
Overall, nice diff! Just the stacking that kept bugging me.

2222's Easy:

00:07:658 (2) - Mm. . I think something like this will improve the flow and it also plays nicely: http://puu.sh/mkBNL/91a296bb0a.jpg Just keep turning the slider clockwise until it looks like the picture above.
00:21:080 (3,4) - I suggest you switch these two notes maybe?
00:50:685 (1,2,3) - Why don't you add some hitsounds here? It feels pretty incomplete imo. Here: 00:51:474 (2) - you can put a clap.
00:54:632 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same here, please add some hitsounds, feels kinda empty.
Okay, this diff looks also pretty good, you just have to complete the hitsounds, lol.

Normal:
Looks fine~

Okay, I will end my mod here.
Good Luck with this mapset of yours~

Kuki

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Kuki 2016-01-06T10:28:27+00:00

osu! needs more generic pop music

hent2222

395 posts

Joined April 2014

hent2222 2016-01-06T16:53:20+00:00

-Faded-

I really don't like how you've hitsounded this difficulty. Why have the first part of the song use whistles and the second part use claps? Both parts are very similar to each other and you shouldn't segregate the hitsounds like this, use them together. Otherwise it will startle and confuse players. (two claps in a short succession also sound bad when used consecutively in a short period of time.)
00:00:159 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is it just me or does this whole area have no hitsounds? I would add some, because without hitsounds the patterns would sound bland and monotonous. monotonous? no. This part isn't energetic.
00:04:895 (5,1) - Despite them being in different combos, I still think these sliders should be symmetrical; it would look a lot nicer that way. Ok :3
01:15:158 (1) - Unrankable, Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. Why is the hitsound here so quiet? I know you want to reflect on how most of the instruments stop here, but it's ineffective and it would be better just to get rid of the note. So either make the hitsound here normal volume, or just get rid of the slider. I add Finish sound and I change the volume on 40%
And what's with the lack of hitsounds at all towards the end of the diff? Please, this is a solid difficulty in all aspects except for hitsounds, which I personally think needs a redo. Look at the other difficulties in this mapset for an example of good hitsounding.

byfar

00:02:527 (3) - do not use a slider tail for emphasizing downbeat. make this part a slider 00:03:316 - Ok
00:04:895 (5) - move this to 00:04:501 - Is okay
00:08:843 (3) - similar Ok
00:11:211 (5) - similar Is okay
im not going to go through all of the parts you did this, but please change it so that the downbeat is clickable.

bryjow123

00:48:711 (4) - make this a two-beat slider? This brief break match this moment the song

- Castaway -

00:21:080 (3) - turn so it leads on to (4) ok
00:33:711 (2) - less curve on this please why not
00:40:422 (3,4) - fix blanket (slightly) I don't see
Snap Preview Point as well ok
00:49:895 (5,1,2,3) - this rhythm should be the same as this 00:45:948 (1,2,3,4) -. Your a beat ahead but because the sliders are the same shape its confusing D: Nooo, is good
00:57:790 (5,1) - fix the flow from (5) to (1) please ok
01:00:948 (3,1) - same shape better ok
01:06:869 (5) - Make horizontal. Like this: http://puu.sh/mfccb/335b7af349.JPG ok
01:09:632 (1,5) - same shape as well please No
01:12:790 (5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/mfch1/17a6f7d68d.JPG http://puu.sh/mfcj6/58b9947873.JPG. (5) will blanket (1) Good idea

geodoomcraft

00:03:711 - I feel like u should remove (4) at 00:04:106 (4) - and make a slider from 00:03:711 - to 00:04:106 - and add one circle to 00:04:501 -. That way it sounds a bit more in flow with the rhythm. Nope
00:10:027 - Same thing here but only up to 00:10:816 - Nope
00:49:106 - I feel a slider might work very well with the rhythm here. This brief break match this moment the song
00:58:974 - I think a circle should be added here to keep consistency with 00:55:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is easy diff. There must be a break between objects
01:04:106 (3) - Maybe curve this more to add to the vocal. Why not
01:15:158 (1) - Feel like there could be a hit sound here that would help emphasize the last part of the song. I changed earlier c:

Aihuro

00:07:658 (2) - Mm. . I think something like this will improve the flow and it also plays nicely: http://puu.sh/mkBNL/91a296bb0a.jpg Just keep turning the slider clockwise until it looks like the picture above. I changed but otherwise
00:21:080 (3,4) - I suggest you switch these two notes maybe? Is okay
00:50:685 (1,2,3) - Why don't you add some hitsounds here? It feels pretty incomplete imo. ok Here: 00:51:474 (2) - you can put a clap. No
00:54:632 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same here, please add some hitsounds, feels kinda empty. Is okay
Okay, this diff looks also pretty good, you just have to complete the hitsounds, lol. I hate set hitsounds XD

Thanks all!!!

Download :3

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Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-06T18:30:27+00:00

Kuki wrote:
osu! needs more generic pop music

EXACTLY!

wasin

wasin 2016-01-06T21:26:38+00:00

M4M from my Q / *O* Stars 101

General
fine.

D27's Beginner
00:08:843 (2) - Consider this circle is too closer (3) than (1), make it good by move circle(2) to X:180 Y:252
00:16:737 (3) - ^ X:220 Y:168
00:26:211 (6) - Begin with the new vocal maybe you can NC here like 00:29:369 (1) -
00:50:685 (1) - In my opinion overlap with 00:48:316 (4) - prettier than your own, when you did it don't forget to fix distance since 00:52:264 (2) -
01:15:158 (5) - Can NC

2222' Easy
00:21:080 (3) - I think make this slider to be a curve slider for better flow
00:25:816 (1) - Spacing error here I can moved this slider please fix it
00:42:001 (1) - You can add "Finish" hs at the end of spin
01:09:632 (1) - Missing Finish
01:10:422 - 01:12:001 - 01:13:580 - Missing Clap

Normal
00:24:632 (3) - Blanket with 00:24:237 (2) - I suggest you move the center of slider (3) up 2 space
00:45:158 - This line is empty, you can add something here
00:50:685 (1) - Missing Finish ? try to add here. I think it's fine
00:56:211 (3) - Again the blanket doesn't fit with 00:55:816 (2) - , but if you don't mind about blanket it's ok
00:57:790 (3) - ^

Hard
00:23:843 (5) - Spacing error between 00:23:448 (4) - check this
00:27:395 (3) - This slider makes sure you wanna make these shape the same with 00:26:606 (2) - right ?, but I think it doesn't fit here, when you moved slider overlaps with 00:26:606 (2) - for example move slider(3) a bit down it's fine.
00:49:895 (3) - 00:51:474 (3) - Missing clap
00:57:001 (7) - Can Finish hs

That's all for this map rank it soon guy :D

-Keitaro

1,013 posts

Joined October 2013

-Keitaro 2016-01-08T12:23:00+00:00

Here, take my 14 stars! Hopefully it's very useful.
I think this should ranked soon

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Prismetical 2016-01-09T10:01:53+00:00

wasinkingspeedq wrote:
M4M from my Q / *O* Stars 101

General
fine. good c:

Normal
00:24:632 (3) - Blanket with 00:24:237 (2) - I suggest you move the center of slider (3) up 2 space I don't get your concern
00:45:158 - This line is empty, you can add something here break after spinner
00:50:685 (1) - Missing Finish ? try to add here. I think it's fine correct
00:56:211 (3) - Again the blanket doesn't fit with 00:55:816 (2) - , but if you don't mind about blanket it's ok you are actually right that it isn't blanket that well... but still it kind of looks good to me. xD
00:57:790 (3) - ^

Hard
00:23:843 (5) - Spacing error between 00:23:448 (4) - check this right, fixed!
00:27:395 (3) - This slider makes sure you wanna make these shape the same with 00:26:606 (2) - right ?, but I think it doesn't fit here, when you moved slider overlaps with 00:26:606 (2) - for example move slider(3) a bit down it's fine. I have no idea how you did this in your example without breakin distance snap, but I would keep mine anyway :3
00:49:895 (3) - 00:51:474 (3) - Missing clap for the first one no because the drums aren't followed on that part but I added a clap at the second one
00:57:001 (7) - Can Finish hs yeah, added

That's all for this map rank it soon guy :D I try sooo hard! thankyou

Rendyindo wrote:
Here, take my 14 stars! Hopefully it's very useful. thankyou! of course it is! ♥♥♥
I think this should ranked soon me too! ♥

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-01-09T14:20:40+00:00

Aihuro wrote:
Hey! M4M request through PM.
Well, here goes nothing.

D27's Beginner:
00:02:527 (3,1) - I don't really like this overlap here, maybe try Ctrl+H And place him here: X: 132 Y: 160. I think it will also improve the flow. (It's also a quick fix, just have to fix the DS)
That's not an overlap, when I see the 1, the 3 have disappear, so, that's not an overlap.
00:15:158 (2,4) - Same here, please stack (4) on (2)'s tail to prevent from overlapping with each other.
Nope, same reason.
00:26:211 (6,1) - ^ Stack them properly please.
Fixed
00:32:527 (1,3) - These two sliders are touching each other's head, I highly suggest you do something like this instead: http://puu.sh/mkBof/d46bbc075a.jpg
Fixed.
00:45:158 (2,4) - Same as I mentioned above, stack.
No.
01:00:948 (4) - I think Ctrl+H Will work better since it will prevent overlapping with 00:57:001 (1) - .
When I see the 4, the 1 have disappear, so That's not an overlap.
01:14:369 (4,5) - I didn't saw you using this kind of pattern through out the whole mapset, maybe remove (4) and add a note here: 01:14:369 - .
During all the map I used 2/1 & 4/1 beats. I made the end a bit harder for the player.
Overall, nice diff! Just the stacking that kept bugging me. Thanks ! But that isn't overlaps & problems of stacks x)

wasinkingspeedq wrote:
M4M from my Q / *O* Stars 101

D27's Beginner
00:08:843 (2) - Consider this circle is too closer (3) than (1), make it good by move circle(2) to X:180 Y:252
They're the same circles xDDDD 1 is horizontal & 3 is vertical. that's all x)

00:16:737 (3) - ^ X:220 Y:168
That will break my blanket.

00:26:211 (6) - Begin with the new vocal maybe you can NC here like 00:29:369 (1) -
Fixed.

00:50:685 (1) - In my opinion overlap with 00:48:316 (4) - prettier than your own, when you did it don't forget to fix distance since 00:52:264 (2) -
We can't see the 4 & 1 at the same moment x), so I keep this.

01:15:158 (5) - Can NC
I keep this.

That's all for this map rank it soon guy :D

THANKS GUYS !

Update :

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hent2222

395 posts

Joined April 2014

hent2222 2016-01-09T16:17:51+00:00

wasinkingspeedq wrote:
M4M from my Q / *O* Stars 101

General
fine.

2222' Easy
00:21:080 (3) - I think make this slider to be a curve slider for better flow I will try to make a difference at this moment
00:25:816 (1) - Spacing error here I can moved this slider please fix it Is okay
00:42:001 (1) - You can add "Finish" hs at the end of spin ok :3
01:09:632 (1) - Missing Finish ok
01:10:422 - 01:12:001 - 01:13:580 - Missing Clap Why not

That's all for this map rank it soon guy :D Yeah :3

Thanks!!

#aktualisieren

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Quack

64 posts

Joined July 2013

Quack 2016-01-18T03:10:46+00:00

yo yo m4m

[General]
All OK.

[Beginner]
I don't think anything's wrong with it, just a subjective thing is that I don't really like some of the flow of the sliders, for example 00:00:159 (1,2) - 1 into 2 and 01:00:948 (4,1) - 4 into 1, if you see what I mean. The flow is slightly off imo, an extremely nit picky subjective opinion.

[Easy]
00:10:422 (4,5) - Blanket 4 more with 5
00:22:658 (5) - Feel like it plays and sounds better as this. Consider changing the long slider into this.
00:27:395 (2,3) - Flow into 3 is a little off, once again all my comments on flow are nit picky and subjective.

00:30:553 (4,5) - ^
00:45:948 (1,2,3,4) - Might want to consider moving this section more to the left so that it doesn't go so much towards the right of the screen.

[Normal]
00:24:237 (2,3) - Improve blanket
00:32:527 (1,2,3) - Consider changing up this section to make it flow better (looking specifically at 3)
00:45:158 (1) - Should be a circle or something here, there's a really emphasized beat in the song.
00:46:737 (4,5) - Flow into 5 is a little off.
00:48:316 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
I wouldn't change much except for some flow lol. A few places in here where the flow could be improved a bit.

As you can see I love flow but it may not be significant enough at times to warrant a fix, but hey flowy map is nice map. Good luck!

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-01-18T15:30:20+00:00

Quack wrote:
yo yo m4m

[Beginner]
I don't think anything's wrong with it, just a subjective thing is that I don't really like some of the flow of the sliders, for example 00:00:159 (1,2) - 1 into 2 and 01:00:948 (4,1) - 4 into 1, if you see what I mean. The flow is slightly off imo, an extremely nit picky subjective opinion.

I'm a beginner mapper, so I don't know what is flow, so I searched , Now I know, Now the beginning is better, thanks !

As you can see I love flow but it may not be significant enough at times to warrant a fix, but hey flowy map is nice map. Good luck!

Update.

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Dono027 wrote:

BluJvy wrote:

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Nekomata wrote:

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Prismetical wrote:

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