man why you reject so much. you're just too dumb to realise they are good ideas 
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well , is that the way you start modding someone's map?[ microism ] wrote:
ur map sux i had seizure from sb
k bye remap kd pls
and I agree with Battle , almost everything in your mod was wrong
please don't judge
plus you just insulted him because he rejected all your (SUGGESTIONS) , dood please stop modding if you gonna keep telling people "you just dumb because you rejected my (SUGGESTIONS) " , "your map is just sux please remap but , kds pls"[ microism ] wrote:
man why you reject so much. you're just too dumb to realise they are good ideas
do you like it when I just go and get the hell out your map problems and say your map sucks and you should remap it . " you should stop mapping" do you like something like this? huh? If you rejected something in my mod I'm going to insult you which means nonsense because modding is just giving suggestions to help others map not to insult them just because they rejected your suggestions
that's not the manners should modder have
To the next BN:
The 1/8 stream might look weird, but it plays perfectly fine
Those were the few things I worried about, and they are actually quite fine
So time to push it forward!
The 1/8 stream might look weird, but it plays perfectly fine
Those were the few things I worried about, and they are actually quite fine
So time to push it forward!
You have two unsnapped objects on Weeaboo.
00:26:357 (2,1,3,1,3,3,3,1) - (Easy) Consistency of this part and the map as a whole should be fixed
01:20:700 (5,6) - 02:30:300 (2,3) - 02:35:271 (6,7,8) - (Rocket's Normal) Spacing problem.
Also, this shouldn't be even bubbled yet. You have a lot of things to work before someone else bubbles.
Weeaboo's difficulty needs more attention.
00:26:357 (2,1,3,1,3,3,3,1) - (Easy) Consistency of this part and the map as a whole should be fixed
01:20:700 (5,6) - 02:30:300 (2,3) - 02:35:271 (6,7,8) - (Rocket's Normal) Spacing problem.
Also, this shouldn't be even bubbled yet. You have a lot of things to work before someone else bubbles.
Weeaboo's difficulty needs more attention.
Wait what?
Neither AutoMod nor AiMod detected those for me >>___>>
Neither AutoMod nor AiMod detected those for me >>___>>
Either blame peppy or you should re-dl the map
Topic Starter
I'll fix when I get home, didn't even notice that it got bubbled x.x
Also @Kasumi you shouldn't really worry that much since his thing wasn't really that serious lol
edit: Fixed unsnapped and improved consistency I think (I made it so there are less 1/1 sliders to be even with some of the other kiais)
Also @Kasumi you shouldn't really worry that much since his thing wasn't really that serious lol
edit: Fixed unsnapped and improved consistency I think (I made it so there are less 1/1 sliders to be even with some of the other kiais)
Weaboo
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00:35:357 - missing a note
00:43:157 (2,3) - probably could repeat slider map glitch part
00:45:557 (1) - i dont think needs nc
01:13:928 (5) - overmapped
01:19:414 (5) - ^ There seems to be a lot of these overmapped parts.
01:29:442 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Consider changing these patterns, its really boring and static. Really goes for everywhere you used these, maybe have stream expansions.
02:08:614 - missing note
02:16:071 (1,2,3,4) - Could probably map the glitch part here
02:18:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Gonna sliderbreak people here
02:18:814 (1) - this extra note here looks weird
02:35:785 (3,4) - make this evenly spaced, feels wierd
03:02:357 (1,2,3,4) - could cause some breaks, song feels like its over after the spinner, spacing is also inconsistent.
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00:35:357 - missing a note
00:43:157 (2,3) - probably could repeat slider map glitch part
00:45:557 (1) - i dont think needs nc
01:13:928 (5) - overmapped
01:19:414 (5) - ^ There seems to be a lot of these overmapped parts.
01:29:442 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Consider changing these patterns, its really boring and static. Really goes for everywhere you used these, maybe have stream expansions.
02:08:614 - missing note
02:16:071 (1,2,3,4) - Could probably map the glitch part here
02:18:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Gonna sliderbreak people here
02:18:814 (1) - this extra note here looks weird
02:35:785 (3,4) - make this evenly spaced, feels wierd
03:02:357 (1,2,3,4) - could cause some breaks, song feels like its over after the spinner, spacing is also inconsistent.
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Weaboo
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00:35:357 - missing a note Well people didn't like a note there in the other version of the map and this was more preferred
00:43:157 (2,3) - probably could repeat slider map glitch part I think it's fine
00:45:557 (1) - i dont think needs nc
01:13:928 (5) - overmapped
01:19:414 (5) - ^ There seems to be a lot of these overmapped parts.
01:29:442 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Consider changing these patterns, its really boring and static. Really goes for everywhere you used these, maybe have stream expansions. Kinda don't really like, care if they're boring since I want them to be playable (by me) since my skill is deteriorating lol
02:08:614 - missing note Other people called it over mapped when I had a note here so yeah
02:16:071 (1,2,3,4) - Could probably map the glitch part here I was focusing on the build up for here
02:18:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Gonna sliderbreak people here Barat said it was fine ;-;
02:18:814 (1) - this extra note here looks weird I kinda wanted it to be like in the circle thing so it can at least be seen
02:35:785 (3,4) - make this evenly spaced, feels wierd did something
03:02:357 (1,2,3,4) - could cause some breaks, song feels like its over after the spinner, spacing is also inconsistent. It's fine, it just four notes, and on consistent, it's 1.8 ds the goes back to the start so I don't get how it's inconsistent
Thanks for modding same color responses like alwayssss
SORRY
19:44 Anxient: .3.
19:44 Anxient: now as revenge
19:44 Battle: .3.
19:44 Anxient: 00:03:042 (1,3) - potential blanket?
19:44 Battle: lmao
19:44 Battle: I hate blankets
19:44 Battle: with like
19:44 Battle: a passion
19:44 Anxient: BLANKET IT or make it less
19:44 Anxient: obcioous
19:44 Battle: so naw
19:44 Anxient: obv
19:45 Battle: fine
19:45 Battle: lol
19:45 Anxient: ugu http://puu.sh/lHNo3/d2e624632b.jpg
19:45 Anxient: 00:01:671 (1) - i bet if you ctrl g this
19:45 Anxient: it would play better
19:45 Anxient: and its still possible to get 2
19:46 Battle: but I like it like this
19:46 Anxient: mmk
19:46 Battle: what happened to the slider in the picture you sent ;-;
19:46 Battle: it became
19:46 Battle: POINTED
19:46 Anxient: 00:10:242 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - use polygon circles
19:46 Anxient: fuck
19:46 Anxient: MAKE A PERFECT
19:46 Anxient: SQUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARE
19:46 *Anxient is trying to imitate Xenans
19:46 Battle: ;-;
19:46 Battle: lmao
19:46 Anxient: but seriousl tho
19:47 Anxient: use a perfect square
19:47 Battle: kk
19:47 Anxient: 00:16:414 (6) - ctrl g or riot
19:47 Anxient: what the fuck is this song
19:47 Anxient: the lyrics
19:47 Anxient: aa
19:48 Battle: lmao
19:48 Battle: y ctrl g tho
19:48 Anxient: 00:18:128 (1,2,3) - no perfect triangle?
19:48 Anxient: emphasis
19:48 Anxient: and plays better??
19:49 Battle: but are you sure it plays better .3.
19:49 Battle: it looks really ugly lol
19:49 Anxient: 00:37:842 (3) - place this in 00:36:300 (2) -
19:49 Anxient: stack it
19:49 Battle: and for 1,2,3 it's supposed to just be like a pointy thing
19:49 Battle: so like ya
19:49 Anxient: 00:37:842 (3) - you couldve made a
19:49 Anxient: stream
19:50 Anxient: 00:45:214 (7,8,9) - perfect triangle asf
19:50 Anxient: equal DS at least
19:50 Battle: I'm not gonna make a stream
19:51 Anxient: k
19:51 Anxient: 01:06:128 (1,2) - interesting
19:51 Anxient: lyrics i mean
19:51 Anxient: you better put a R-15 warning
19:51 Battle: slider shapes to go along with them lol
19:51 Battle: I do have it
19:52 Anxient: 01:07:500 (1) - 01:07:500 (1,4) - use the same sliders asdf
19:52 Battle: with a mememe banner
19:52 Battle: lol
19:52 Anxient: woah
19:52 Anxient: WOAH.
19:52 Battle: lol what?
19:52 Anxient: 01:09:557 (4,5) - make it allign
19:53 Battle: align as in?
19:53 Anxient: uh
19:53 Anxient: wait
19:53 Anxient: http://puu.sh/lHNIn/911ffa33e0.jpg
19:54 Battle: k
19:54 Anxient: 01:13:500 (3,4,5) - youre already jumping all over the place and then you pull this?
19:54 Anxient: not good man
19:54 Anxient: 01:15:385 (1,3) - how do you read this
19:55 Anxient: 01:26:528 (8,1) - better place this out. people be thinking this be a 1/4
19:55 Anxient: whos incharge of the SB?
19:55 Battle: 1,3 is visible
19:55 Battle: and comfywolf is in charge of sb
19:56 Anxient: ooh
19:56 Anxient: tell him to try to arrange the light pulsing to match where the high sounds come
19:56 Anxient: 01:30:471 (5) - in here, the light pulses
19:56 Anxient: 01:31:842 (5) - something like this, but more to the left
19:56 Anxient: yeah you get it right?
19:57 Battle: but like
19:57 Battle: there's multiple diffs so it's like a pain to do that all I would assume .3.
19:57 Anxient: more like
19:57 Anxient: only for this duff
19:57 Anxient: diff
19:57 Anxient: is it possible?
19:57 Anxient: 01:48:642 - AND ADD A NOTE
19:57 Anxient: WHY YOU IGNORE AAA
19:57 Anxient: ;w;
19:58 Battle: a storyboard for one diff?
19:58 Anxient: 01:59:614 (1) - id like this spaced more
19:58 Anxient: 01:58:071 (4,1) - like this
19:58 Battle: nah it's fine
19:59 Anxient: but
19:59 Anxient: consistency :<
19:59 Anxient: in that case
19:59 Anxient: 02:00:128 (2) - use the same slider
19:59 Anxient: oh nvm lol
19:59 Anxient: NO WAIT YES
19:59 Anxient: use the same slider as the one you used in 2
19:59 Anxient: http://puu.sh/lHNXF/9bc0bd8ba4.jpg
19:59 Battle: what .-.
20:00 Battle: k
20:00 Anxient: http://puu.sh/lHNZe/fbf505102f.jpg
20:00 Anxient: this
20:00 Anxient: know what i mean?
20:00 Anxient: 02:04:757 - at least use a repeat slider
20:00 Battle: be like as straight as it?
20:01 Anxient: you know what i mean?
20:01 Anxient: make it straight
20:01 Battle: ya
20:01 Anxient: see how 1 and 2 face in similar direction
20:01 Anxient: make yours like that
20:02 Anxient: 02:18:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - make a proper circle stream
20:02 Anxient: and add 1/8 slideres
20:02 Battle: for the other thing about making a repeat it's like, not following what I was doign so I'm not gonna do that
20:02 Battle: but barat said it was fine ;-;
20:05 Anxient: uuh
20:05 Anxient: wait
20:07 Anxient: but does this look finER? http://puu.sh/lHOgO/3923b52f11.jpg
20:08 Anxient: that look me awhile
20:08 Anxient: wlel
20:08 Anxient: thats it i guess
20:08 Anxient: fine map
20:08 Battle: hm
20:09 Battle: I dunno I like it kinda like collapsing or w/e
20:09 Anxient: welll
20:09 Battle: anyways thanks~
20:09 Anxient: im more of a structure person
20:09 Anxient: anyway
20:09 Anxient: thank you for having the preview point on masterbait
20:09 Anxient: masturbate
20:09 Battle: yes
20:09 Battle: masturbate to cartoons
20:09 Anxient: what is my sexuality
20:10 Anxient: 2d girls?
20:10 Anxient: NOPE
20:10 Battle: lol
20:10 Anxient: [http://puu.sh/lHOlU/6f83d1881d.jpg WIP GIRLS]
20:10 Anxient: lITERALLY WIP
20:11 Battle: omfg lmao
21:06 Anxient: OMG
21:06 Anxient: I FORGOT TO POST THE MOD ON THE THREAD
19:44 Anxient: now as revenge
19:44 Battle: .3.
19:44 Anxient: 00:03:042 (1,3) - potential blanket?
19:44 Battle: lmao
19:44 Battle: I hate blankets
19:44 Battle: with like
19:44 Battle: a passion
19:44 Anxient: BLANKET IT or make it less
19:44 Anxient: obcioous
19:44 Battle: so naw
19:44 Anxient: obv
19:45 Battle: fine
19:45 Battle: lol
19:45 Anxient: ugu http://puu.sh/lHNo3/d2e624632b.jpg
19:45 Anxient: 00:01:671 (1) - i bet if you ctrl g this
19:45 Anxient: it would play better
19:45 Anxient: and its still possible to get 2
19:46 Battle: but I like it like this
19:46 Anxient: mmk
19:46 Battle: what happened to the slider in the picture you sent ;-;
19:46 Battle: it became
19:46 Battle: POINTED
19:46 Anxient: 00:10:242 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - use polygon circles
19:46 Anxient: fuck
19:46 Anxient: MAKE A PERFECT
19:46 Anxient: SQUAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARE
19:46 *Anxient is trying to imitate Xenans
19:46 Battle: ;-;
19:46 Battle: lmao
19:46 Anxient: but seriousl tho
19:47 Anxient: use a perfect square
19:47 Battle: kk
19:47 Anxient: 00:16:414 (6) - ctrl g or riot
19:47 Anxient: what the fuck is this song
19:47 Anxient: the lyrics
19:47 Anxient: aa
19:48 Battle: lmao
19:48 Battle: y ctrl g tho
19:48 Anxient: 00:18:128 (1,2,3) - no perfect triangle?
19:48 Anxient: emphasis
19:48 Anxient: and plays better??
19:49 Battle: but are you sure it plays better .3.
19:49 Battle: it looks really ugly lol
19:49 Anxient: 00:37:842 (3) - place this in 00:36:300 (2) -
19:49 Anxient: stack it
19:49 Battle: and for 1,2,3 it's supposed to just be like a pointy thing
19:49 Battle: so like ya
19:49 Anxient: 00:37:842 (3) - you couldve made a
19:49 Anxient: stream
19:50 Anxient: 00:45:214 (7,8,9) - perfect triangle asf
19:50 Anxient: equal DS at least
19:50 Battle: I'm not gonna make a stream
19:51 Anxient: k
19:51 Anxient: 01:06:128 (1,2) - interesting
19:51 Anxient: lyrics i mean
19:51 Anxient: you better put a R-15 warning
19:51 Battle: slider shapes to go along with them lol
19:51 Battle: I do have it
19:52 Anxient: 01:07:500 (1) - 01:07:500 (1,4) - use the same sliders asdf
19:52 Battle: with a mememe banner
19:52 Battle: lol
19:52 Anxient: woah
19:52 Anxient: WOAH.
19:52 Battle: lol what?
19:52 Anxient: 01:09:557 (4,5) - make it allign
19:53 Battle: align as in?
19:53 Anxient: uh
19:53 Anxient: wait
19:53 Anxient: http://puu.sh/lHNIn/911ffa33e0.jpg
19:54 Battle: k
19:54 Anxient: 01:13:500 (3,4,5) - youre already jumping all over the place and then you pull this?
19:54 Anxient: not good man
19:54 Anxient: 01:15:385 (1,3) - how do you read this
19:55 Anxient: 01:26:528 (8,1) - better place this out. people be thinking this be a 1/4
19:55 Anxient: whos incharge of the SB?
19:55 Battle: 1,3 is visible
19:55 Battle: and comfywolf is in charge of sb
19:56 Anxient: ooh
19:56 Anxient: tell him to try to arrange the light pulsing to match where the high sounds come
19:56 Anxient: 01:30:471 (5) - in here, the light pulses
19:56 Anxient: 01:31:842 (5) - something like this, but more to the left
19:56 Anxient: yeah you get it right?
19:57 Battle: but like
19:57 Battle: there's multiple diffs so it's like a pain to do that all I would assume .3.
19:57 Anxient: more like
19:57 Anxient: only for this duff
19:57 Anxient: diff
19:57 Anxient: is it possible?
19:57 Anxient: 01:48:642 - AND ADD A NOTE
19:57 Anxient: WHY YOU IGNORE AAA
19:57 Anxient: ;w;
19:58 Battle: a storyboard for one diff?
19:58 Anxient: 01:59:614 (1) - id like this spaced more
19:58 Anxient: 01:58:071 (4,1) - like this
19:58 Battle: nah it's fine
19:59 Anxient: but
19:59 Anxient: consistency :<
19:59 Anxient: in that case
19:59 Anxient: 02:00:128 (2) - use the same slider
19:59 Anxient: oh nvm lol
19:59 Anxient: NO WAIT YES
19:59 Anxient: use the same slider as the one you used in 2
19:59 Anxient: http://puu.sh/lHNXF/9bc0bd8ba4.jpg
19:59 Battle: what .-.
20:00 Battle: k
20:00 Anxient: http://puu.sh/lHNZe/fbf505102f.jpg
20:00 Anxient: this
20:00 Anxient: know what i mean?
20:00 Anxient: 02:04:757 - at least use a repeat slider
20:00 Battle: be like as straight as it?
20:01 Anxient: you know what i mean?
20:01 Anxient: make it straight
20:01 Battle: ya
20:01 Anxient: see how 1 and 2 face in similar direction
20:01 Anxient: make yours like that
20:02 Anxient: 02:18:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - make a proper circle stream
20:02 Anxient: and add 1/8 slideres
20:02 Battle: for the other thing about making a repeat it's like, not following what I was doign so I'm not gonna do that
20:02 Battle: but barat said it was fine ;-;
20:05 Anxient: uuh
20:05 Anxient: wait
20:07 Anxient: but does this look finER? http://puu.sh/lHOgO/3923b52f11.jpg
20:08 Anxient: that look me awhile
20:08 Anxient: wlel
20:08 Anxient: thats it i guess
20:08 Anxient: fine map
20:08 Battle: hm
20:09 Battle: I dunno I like it kinda like collapsing or w/e
20:09 Anxient: welll
20:09 Battle: anyways thanks~
20:09 Anxient: im more of a structure person
20:09 Anxient: anyway
20:09 Anxient: thank you for having the preview point on masterbait
20:09 Anxient: masturbate
20:09 Battle: yes
20:09 Battle: masturbate to cartoons
20:09 Anxient: what is my sexuality
20:10 Anxient: 2d girls?
20:10 Anxient: NOPE
20:10 Battle: lol
20:10 Anxient: [http://puu.sh/lHOlU/6f83d1881d.jpg WIP GIRLS]
20:10 Anxient: lITERALLY WIP
20:11 Battle: omfg lmao
21:06 Anxient: OMG
21:06 Anxient: I FORGOT TO POST THE MOD ON THE THREAD
THE HATERS GONNA HATE
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324,176,94414,1,4,0:3:0:0:
284,148,94585,1,10,0:0:0:0:
200,208,94928,6,0,B|164:212|164:212|144:204|144:204|144:224|144:224|120:252,2,110.000000596046,4|8|0,0:3|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,172,95785,1,4,0:3:0:0:
212,128,95957,1,10,0:0:0:0:
168,40,96300,2,0,P|220:12|276:36,2,110.000000596046,4|8|0,0:3|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,84,97157,1,4,0:3:0:0:
92,88,97328,1,10,0:0:0:0:
36,172,97671,6,0,B|36:208|36:208|28:216|28:216|44:224|44:224|36:232|36:232|36:268,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
136,260,98357,2,2,B|136:232|136:232|128:224|128:224|144:212|144:212|136:204|136:204|136:164,1,110.000000596046,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,80,99042,2,0,B|148:64|164:28|164:28|204:56|204:56|232:16|292:24|292:24|316:44|344:24|344:24|368:32|384:72,1,330.000001788138,4|10,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,148,100414,6,0,P|432:196|484:216,2,110.000000596046,4|8|0,0:3|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,116,101442,1,10,0:0:0:0:
482,215,101785,2,0,P|462:267|410:287,2,110.000000596046,4|8|0,0:3|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,148,102814,1,10,0:0:0:0:
316,112,103157,6,0,P|348:64|404:48,2,110.000000596046,4|8|0,0:3|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,208,104185,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,304,104528,2,0,P|216:272|196:224,2,110.000000596046,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,336,105557,1,10,0:0:0:0:
428,256,105900,6,0,B|416:228|416:228|424:204|424:204|400:196|400:196|384:164,2,110.000000596046,4|8|0,0:3|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,107271,2,0,B|256:128|256:128|248:116|248:116|264:104|264:104|256:92|256:92|256:56,2,110.000000596046,4|8|0,0:3|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,260,108642,6,0,B|100:232|100:232|92:208|92:208|116:200|116:200|132:168,2,110.000000596046,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,328,110014,2,0,P|224:308|172:332,2,110.000000596046,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,111385,5,4,0:3:0:0:
256,192,115500,12,2,116871,0:0:0:0:
168,264,118242,6,0,P|256:320|344:256,1,220.000001192092,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,119271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,132,119614,2,0,B|212:112|208:72|208:72|232:92|272:92|292:72|292:72|296:104|320:136,1,220.000001192092,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,192,120642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,280,120985,6,0,B|312:300|312:300|304:316|304:316|268:332|268:332|260:344|260:344|212:368,2,165.000000894069,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,192,122357,2,0,P|436:232|448:296,2,110.000000596046,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,123385,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,196,123728,2,0,B|200:232|212:264|212:264|164:300|192:352,2,165.000000894069,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,232,125100,6,0,P|284:128|184:100,1,220.000001192092,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,172,126128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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416,264,127842,6,0,P|408:196|380:152,1,110.000000596046,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,104,128528,2,0,P|268:100|244:108,1,55.000000298023,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,120,128871,2,0,P|172:128|136:120,1,55.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,104,129214,2,0,P|48:108|72:232,1,220.000001192092,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,268,130071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,280,130242,2,0,P|184:284|204:296,1,55.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,312,130585,6,0,B|280:300|300:272|300:272|328:300|368:312|400:272,2,165.000000894069,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,216,131957,2,0,B|200:164|200:164|184:156|184:156|168:120|168:120|152:116|152:116|136:80|136:80,2,165.000000894069,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,312,133328,2,0,P|204:324|128:304,1,110.000000596046,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
76,228,134014,2,0,L|92:160,1,55.000000298023,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,128,134357,2,0,L|48:68,1,55.000000298023,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,40,134700,6,0,P|164:68|244:40,2,165.000000894069,4|0|4,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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132,296,136757,1,4,0:3:0:0:
216,248,137100,1,4,0:3:0:0:
268,332,137442,2,0,B|296:324|308:288|308:288|356:320|396:280|380:244|380:244|420:256|448:216|432:180|412:164|412:164|420:132,1,330.000001788138,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
448,44,138814,1,4,0:3:0:0:
80,188,140185,5,4,0:3:0:0:
256,284,140871,2,0,L|256:212,1,55.000000298023,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
404,244,141557,2,0,P|436:184|412:136,1,110.000000596046
432,100,142071,1,0,0:3:0:0:
388,76,142242,2,0,P|360:52|344:48,1,55.000000298023,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
296,56,142585,2,0,P|268:64|228:52,1,55.000000298023,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,44,142928,6,0,P|144:56|120:120,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
148,200,143614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,296,143957,2,0,L|232:312,1,55.000000298023,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,308,144300,2,0,L|336:292,1,55.000000298023,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,272,144642,2,0,B|400:260|408:236|408:236|432:248|468:240,2,110.000000596046,8|0|8,0:1|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
308,204,145671,2,0,P|256:180|200:208,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
140,268,146357,6,0,L|64:268,1,55.000000298023,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
136,128,147042,2,0,P|176:96|248:112,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
276,120,147557,1,4,0:3:0:0:
312,156,147728,2,0,P|320:184|320:216,1,55.000000298023,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
300,256,148071,2,0,P|308:300|324:328,1,55.000000298023,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,344,148414,2,0,P|400:336|436:276,2,110.000000596046,4|8|4,0:3|0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,304,149442,2,0,L|196:312,1,55.000000298023,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,316,149785,6,0,P|104:296|84:232,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
80,196,150300,1,4,0:3:0:0:
100,152,150471,2,0,L|136:96,1,55.000000298023,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
176,84,150814,2,0,L|232:52,1,55.000000298023,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
272,64,151157,2,0,P|324:76|380:44,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
420,140,151842,2,0,L|372:180,1,55.000000298023,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
344,320,152528,6,0,B|292:320|292:320|276:324|276:324|228:324,3,110.000000596046,2|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
192,300,153728,1,8,0:1:0:0:
148,288,153900,2,0,P|116:252|128:192,1,110.000000596046,4,0:3,0:0:0:0:
188,120,154585,1,4,0:3:0:0:
276,72,154928,2,0,L|320:108,1,55.000000298023,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,136,155271,2,0,P|392:200|368:244,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
356,276,155785,1,4,0:3:0:0:
316,304,155957,2,0,L|256:292,1,55.000000298023,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
216,320,156300,2,0,P|172:332|152:328,1,55.000000298023,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
116,316,156642,6,0,P|76:300|100:240,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
144,160,157328,2,0,P|112:144|84:148,2,55.000000298023,0|4|8,0:0|0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
224,220,158014,2,0,P|244:164|232:112,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
208,72,158528,1,4,0:3:0:0:
192,24,158700,2,0,B|248:8|248:8|312:28,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
344,40,159214,1,8,0:1:0:0:
384,72,159385,2,0,P|424:124|408:176,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
352,240,160071,2,0,P|332:292|344:344,1,110.000000596046
432,296,160757,6,0,P|476:264|496:196,2,110.000000596046
392,192,161785,1,8,0:1:0:0:
308,140,162128,2,0,P|228:132|184:160,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
132,212,162814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,304,163157,1,8,0:1:0:0:
256,252,163500,2,0,L|256:32,1,220.000001192092,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,72,164528,1,8,0:1:0:0:
444,104,164871,6,0,P|416:160|360:180,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
276,176,165557,2,0,P|224:200|204:260,1,110.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
280,308,166242,2,0,P|200:248|92:316,1,220.000001192092,0|4,3:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
188,348,167271,1,8,0:1:0:0:
280,308,167614,2,0,B|332:292|332:292|352:292|352:292|404:276,1,110.000000596046,4|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
464,220,168300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,148,168642,1,8,0:1:0:0:
312,200,168985,6,0,B|260:224|208:188|208:188|164:256|96:216,1,220.000001192092,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,192,169842,1,4,0:3:0:0:
72,144,170014,2,0,L|120:88,1,55.000000298023,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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444,28,171385,1,8,0:1:0:0:
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276,84,174471,2,0,P|320:68|392:200,1,220.000001192092,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,272,175500,1,8,0:1:0:0:
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60,220,176700,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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372,32,178242,1,8,0:1:0:0:
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why do you think i do this to everyoneKASUM1 wrote:
well , is that the way you start modding someone's map?[ microism ] wrote:
ur map sux i had seizure from sb
k bye remap kd pls
and I agree with Battle , almost everything in your mod was wrong
please don't judgeplus you just insulted him because he rejected all your (SUGGESTIONS) , dood please stop modding if you gonna keep telling people "you just dumb because you rejected my (SUGGESTIONS) " , "your map is just sux please remap but , kds pls"[ microism ] wrote:
man why you reject so much. you're just too dumb to realise they are good ideas
do you like it when I just go and get the hell out your map problems and say your map sucks and you should remap it . " you should stop mapping" do you like something like this? huh? If you rejected something in my mod I'm going to insult you which means nonsense because modding is just giving suggestions to help others map not to insult them just because they rejected your suggestions
that's not the manners should modder have
. i still modded his mapmy part of m4m
General:
- Add otaku to the tags? I feel like it fits (using urban dictionary as source)
Weeaboo:
- The aethestics in this difficulty makes the map not fun to play. Its kinda ''sharp''.
- There's weird spacings and overlaps (but im guessing thats a part of your mapping style?)
00:06:814(6,7) - ctrl+g
00:00:300(1,2,3,4,5,1) - example of weird spacing. i think you can see that it's not really consistent, and that makes for a less ''smooth'' playing experience. dont change this if you feel like it's ok. its not too hard to read after all. just something to think about.
00:13:328(4) - example of weird overlap (not saying you should change this. but if you do, stack it). theres alot of these in your diff
00:13:328(4) - if you observed the issue above. stack it ontop of 00:12:642(1) sliderhead
00:26:357(1,2,3,4,5) - shouldnt stack 2 and 3. it makes it so awkward to play. map it like this?
01:11:957 - not really a huge fan of these types of maps xD
01:15:042(4) - why stack this note? move it down
01:29:442 - love this part ^^
02:04:757 - shouldnt there be a triple here?
Hard:
Aethestics are also kinda weird here too. Fine polish.
00:20:957 - leave some spacing before spinner. put spinner on red tick
00:39:042(5,6) - spread these out instead
02:01:328(2,3,4,5) - im not sure if a stream is necesarry (especually on hard diff). just personal opinion
02:56:185(1,2,3) - no beats can be heard for a triple here
was a fun map to play though, but it can get so much better if you just finepolish your map alot, like fixing blankets, bended sliders etc. (feel like im saying this in every mod now xD but seriously, it helps). this goes for all difficulties
good luck!
lost my modding halfway though so had to rewrite it... thats why it looks so unproffesionally done xD
General:
- Add otaku to the tags? I feel like it fits (using urban dictionary as source)
Weeaboo:
- The aethestics in this difficulty makes the map not fun to play. Its kinda ''sharp''.
- There's weird spacings and overlaps (but im guessing thats a part of your mapping style?)
00:06:814(6,7) - ctrl+g
00:00:300(1,2,3,4,5,1) - example of weird spacing. i think you can see that it's not really consistent, and that makes for a less ''smooth'' playing experience. dont change this if you feel like it's ok. its not too hard to read after all. just something to think about.
00:13:328(4) - example of weird overlap (not saying you should change this. but if you do, stack it). theres alot of these in your diff
00:13:328(4) - if you observed the issue above. stack it ontop of 00:12:642(1) sliderhead
00:26:357(1,2,3,4,5) - shouldnt stack 2 and 3. it makes it so awkward to play. map it like this?
01:11:957 - not really a huge fan of these types of maps xD
01:15:042(4) - why stack this note? move it down
01:29:442 - love this part ^^
02:04:757 - shouldnt there be a triple here?
Hard:
Aethestics are also kinda weird here too. Fine polish.
00:20:957 - leave some spacing before spinner. put spinner on red tick
00:39:042(5,6) - spread these out instead
02:01:328(2,3,4,5) - im not sure if a stream is necesarry (especually on hard diff). just personal opinion
02:56:185(1,2,3) - no beats can be heard for a triple here
was a fun map to play though, but it can get so much better if you just finepolish your map alot, like fixing blankets, bended sliders etc. (feel like im saying this in every mod now xD but seriously, it helps). this goes for all difficulties
good luck!
lost my modding halfway though so had to rewrite it... thats why it looks so unproffesionally done xD
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DavidEd wrote:
my part of m4m
General:
- Add otaku to the tags? I feel like it fits (using urban dictionary as source) I think it should be fine to exclude it (a lot of otakus consider themselves not a "weeaboo" even though they basically are a weeaboo)
Weeaboo:
- The aethestics in this difficulty makes the map not fun to play. Its kinda ''sharp''. Meh, I like it's sharpness
- There's weird spacings and overlaps (but im guessing thats a part of your mapping style?) mm
00:06:814(6,7) - ctrl+g
00:00:300(1,2,3,4,5,1) - example of weird spacing. i think you can see that it's not really consistent, and that makes for a less ''smooth'' playing experience. dont change this if you feel like it's ok. its not too hard to read after all. just something to think about. I kinda feel like it's justified since the music like progressively gets louder as it heads toward the first lyrics
00:13:328(4) - example of weird overlap (not saying you should change this. but if you do, stack it). theres alot of these in your diff yeah it's intentional
00:13:328(4) - if you observed the issue above. stack it ontop of 00:12:642(1) sliderhead z I don't know why all of these are saying invalid format but the point still stands with the thing above
00:26:357(1,2,3,4,5) - shouldnt stack 2 and 3. it makes it so awkward to play. map it like this? I kinda like stacked things since I'm getting pretty bad at this game .3. but on the bright side I moved some stuff here
01:11:957 - not really a huge fan of these types of maps xD They are like, one of the only kinds of maps I enjoy playing nowadays lol
01:15:042(4) - why stack this note? move it down
01:29:442 - love this part ^^ If you're talking about the streams you're the first person to say that lol
02:04:757 - shouldnt there be a triple here?
Hard:
Aethestics are also kinda weird here too. Fine polish.
00:20:957 - leave some spacing before spinner. put spinner on red tick
00:39:042(5,6) - spread these out instead
02:01:328(2,3,4,5) - im not sure if a stream is necesarry (especually on hard diff). just personal opinion I think it's fine since doing 1/1 repeat sliders can be kinda boring n stuff
02:56:185(1,2,3) - no beats can be heard for a triple here
was a fun map to play though, but it can get so much better if you just finepolish your map alot, like fixing blankets, bended sliders etc. (feel like im saying this in every mod now xD but seriously, it helps). this goes for all difficulties I'm like zzz cuz a lot of the things are like, people saying to blanket things that I don't want to blanket cuz it's not like I'm good at doing them, and bending sliders is kinda meh for me as well so zzzz
good luck!
lost my modding halfway though so had to rewrite it... thats why it looks so unproffesionally done xD rip
green comments or fix
blue no fix
unreply fix
Hello! From my NM Queue~
Weeaboo
00:27:042 (5) - Blanket it with 00:26:357 (1) -
00:33:557 (2) - Slider head stack with 00:32:871 (6) - Slider tail
00:33:900 (3) - Fix Blanket with 00:33:214 (1) -
00:42:642 (6) - Blanket it with 00:42:128 (4) -
01:09:214 (2,3) - This two notes seems wider compared to the others like 01:07:842 (2,3) - and 01:08:528 (5,6) - and a few others
01:43:500 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + J
02:11:100 (3) - Put a slider here making it end on 02:11:271 - and a circle on 02:11:442 - sounds alot more smooth, try it out and see the difference
02:16:757 (1,2,3,4) - Please make sure the spacing between each note is the same
03:03:042 (3,4) - Misleading spacing
That's all from me!Good luck with your map!
Weeaboo
00:27:042 (5) - Blanket it with 00:26:357 (1) -
00:33:557 (2) - Slider head stack with 00:32:871 (6) - Slider tail
00:33:900 (3) - Fix Blanket with 00:33:214 (1) -
00:42:642 (6) - Blanket it with 00:42:128 (4) -
01:09:214 (2,3) - This two notes seems wider compared to the others like 01:07:842 (2,3) - and 01:08:528 (5,6) - and a few others
01:43:500 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + J
02:11:100 (3) - Put a slider here making it end on 02:11:271 - and a circle on 02:11:442 - sounds alot more smooth, try it out and see the difference
02:16:757 (1,2,3,4) - Please make sure the spacing between each note is the same
03:03:042 (3,4) - Misleading spacing
That's all from me!Good luck with your map!
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Same colors, thanks for mod~Wishmaker980 wrote:
Hello! From my NM Queue~
Weeaboo
00:27:042 (5) - Blanket it with 00:26:357 (1) - I don't think this would really be necessary
00:33:557 (2) - Slider head stack with 00:32:871 (6) - Slider tail Overlaps with bottom right corner of 6 on purpose
00:33:900 (3) - Fix Blanket with 00:33:214 (1) -
00:42:642 (6) - Blanket it with 00:42:128 (4) - Kinda ruins what I was trying to do if this is done, repositioned a bit for a bit better flow
01:09:214 (2,3) - This two notes seems wider compared to the others like 01:07:842 (2,3) - and 01:08:528 (5,6) - and a few others
01:43:500 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + J
02:11:100 (3) - Put a slider here making it end on 02:11:271 - and a circle on 02:11:442 - sounds alot more smooth, try it out and see the difference after a bit of messing around with it, i decided to not do it since it kinda just like ruined what i tried to do with the notes here and I couldn't really think of a smooth transition for the notes so yeah .3.
02:16:757 (1,2,3,4) - Please make sure the spacing between each note is the same
03:03:042 (3,4) - Misleading spacing
That's all from me!Good luck with your map!
I posted on your m4m queue but didn't get an answer and got bored and just decided to mod this no matter what. don't feel obliged to m4m my map if you decided not to at the end, I just felt like doing this. here goes
I suck at easy-hard, but I looked at them and they look mostly OK. but on hard - 00:02:357 (3,4) - they look really weird, i'm just being nazi on this one though, lol.
I like the song.
I suck at easy-hard, but I looked at them and they look mostly OK. but on hard - 00:02:357 (3,4) - they look really weird, i'm just being nazi on this one though, lol.
Insane
At the intro I feel these notes are overmapped probably, you should make it a slider from the note before hand instead if you want to keep it.
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00:11:785 (3) -
00:16:757 (1,2,3) - sounds weird, I like 1,2 being as 1/2s more.
00:20:528 (4,1) - touching the health bar, unrankable. move it and the slider
00:27:728 (1,2) - breaks the nice flow that you had started going towards
00:28:414 (7) - make it round maybe? looks weird in editor
00:32:185 (3) - very awkward to play to me atleast.
00:36:300 (2) - ^
00:56:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this whole section got VERY boring, VERY fast. change some of the 1/2s sliders into back and forths.
01:04:757 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would maybe change this stream up a bit.. it grows outward very weirdly. either way, remove NC from 01:05:100 (1) -
01:15:728 (2) - change to 1/2, also overlap is a bit weird with 01:15:385 (1) -
01:29:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - another one of those weird sections that just seems to repeat. yeah it's a repetitive part of the song I agree, but this is just the same pattern over and over, you can definitely vary this up quite a bit more I feel. other than being pretty dull, it's fine.
01:40:457 - timing point not snapped
01:45:942 - ^
02:00:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - plays weird. awkward transition into the triple.
02:16:414 (4,2,4) - very weird overlapping.
02:18:814 (2) - weird placement, the slider ends on the other side, but you would expect the single to be on the right hand side. you can keep if you want, just thought i'd point it out
02:25:671 (1,2) - this is just plain weird. awkward jump and very weird overlapping
02:53:100 (1,2) - ^
02:53:957 (4,1) - weird overlap.
03:02:357 (1,2,3,4) - I would remove these, just weird after that long spinner.
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00:07:671 (3) -
00:09:042 (3) -
00:10:414 (3) -
00:11:785 (3) -
00:16:757 (1,2,3) - sounds weird, I like 1,2 being as 1/2s more.
00:20:528 (4,1) - touching the health bar, unrankable. move it and the slider
00:27:728 (1,2) - breaks the nice flow that you had started going towards
00:28:414 (7) - make it round maybe? looks weird in editor
00:32:185 (3) - very awkward to play to me atleast.
00:36:300 (2) - ^
00:56:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this whole section got VERY boring, VERY fast. change some of the 1/2s sliders into back and forths.
01:04:757 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would maybe change this stream up a bit.. it grows outward very weirdly. either way, remove NC from 01:05:100 (1) -
01:15:728 (2) - change to 1/2, also overlap is a bit weird with 01:15:385 (1) -
01:29:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - another one of those weird sections that just seems to repeat. yeah it's a repetitive part of the song I agree, but this is just the same pattern over and over, you can definitely vary this up quite a bit more I feel. other than being pretty dull, it's fine.
01:40:457 - timing point not snapped
01:45:942 - ^
02:00:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - plays weird. awkward transition into the triple.
02:16:414 (4,2,4) - very weird overlapping.
02:18:814 (2) - weird placement, the slider ends on the other side, but you would expect the single to be on the right hand side. you can keep if you want, just thought i'd point it out
02:25:671 (1,2) - this is just plain weird. awkward jump and very weird overlapping
02:53:100 (1,2) - ^
02:53:957 (4,1) - weird overlap.
03:02:357 (1,2,3,4) - I would remove these, just weird after that long spinner.
Weeaboo
Same as insane here, I feel these notes are overmapped.
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00:09:042 (3) -
00:10:414 (3) -
00:11:785 (3) -
00:02:185 (3) - i think this is touching the health bar, which is unrankable.
00:10:585 (4,5,6,7) - weird overlap.
00:18:128 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i liked what you did on insane on this part more.
00:40:414 (3,4,5,6,7) - pattern just feels off no matter how many times i've tried this.
00:41:957 (2,3,4) - nothing major, but this feels really spaced lol.
01:06:128 (1,2,3) - this sounds wrong, 1/2s sounded better.
01:15:385 (1,3) - bad overlap. nothing more to add here.
01:29:442 - from this point until 01:40:414 - every single stream goes in the same direction. should add some streams going the other way imho. fine otherwise.
02:15:385 (3,1,2) - weird overlap, should be fine though.
02:21:900 (2,4) - awful looking overlap, pls change.
02:23:442 (3,5) - ^
02:28:928 (3,5) - ^
03:02:357 (1,2,3,4) - same as insane. feels wrong after such a long spinner.
Good map otherwise. i like it.
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00:09:042 (3) -
00:10:414 (3) -
00:11:785 (3) -
00:02:185 (3) - i think this is touching the health bar, which is unrankable.
00:10:585 (4,5,6,7) - weird overlap.
00:18:128 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i liked what you did on insane on this part more.
00:40:414 (3,4,5,6,7) - pattern just feels off no matter how many times i've tried this.
00:41:957 (2,3,4) - nothing major, but this feels really spaced lol.
01:06:128 (1,2,3) - this sounds wrong, 1/2s sounded better.
01:15:385 (1,3) - bad overlap. nothing more to add here.
01:29:442 - from this point until 01:40:414 - every single stream goes in the same direction. should add some streams going the other way imho. fine otherwise.
02:15:385 (3,1,2) - weird overlap, should be fine though.
02:21:900 (2,4) - awful looking overlap, pls change.
02:23:442 (3,5) - ^
02:28:928 (3,5) - ^
03:02:357 (1,2,3,4) - same as insane. feels wrong after such a long spinner.
Good map otherwise. i like it.
I like the song.
Topic Starter
Hail Zaros wrote:
I posted on your m4m queue but didn't get an answer and got bored and just decided to mod this no matter what. don't feel obliged to m4m my map if you decided not to at the end, I just felt like doing this. here goes I'm done with finals now so I can probably take a quick look at your map later zzz
I suck at easy-hard, but I looked at them and they look mostly OK. but on hard - 00:02:357 (3,4) - they look really weird They aren't really supposed to be parallel so Ithink they are fine, i'm just being nazi on this one though, lol.
Insane
At the intro I feel these notes are overmapped probably, you should make it a slider from the note before hand instead if you want to keep it. There's enough in the music to justify these notes, so it shouldn't be an issue since they aren't "overmapped"
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00:16:757 (1,2,3) - sounds weird, I like 1,2 being as 1/2s more. While I do agree that 1/2 sounds nice, I want to make it so that the lyrics are somewhat emphasized here "
00:20:528 (4,1) - touching the health bar, unrankable. move it and the slider It doesn't touch the vanilla skin, therefor, rankable, this would have been caught since it was bubbled before (the main issue being the hardest diff)
00:27:728 (1,2) - breaks the nice flow that you had started going towards That's the point tho
00:28:414 (7) - make it round maybe? looks weird in editor Nah, I like it's current shape
00:32:185 (3) - very awkward to play to me atleast. I think it should be fine
00:36:300 (2) - ^ same
00:56:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this whole section got VERY boring, VERY fast. change some of the 1/2s sliders into back and forths. but doing so would make there be some random variation, not really neat tbh
01:04:757 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would maybe change this stream up a bit.. it grows outward very weirdly. either way, remove NC from 01:05:100 (1) - I think it's fine, NC is for the sake to show ds change
01:15:728 (2) - change to 1/2, also overlap is a bit weird with 01:15:385 (1) - I like the overlap, but anyways, it's 3/4 so that way the note for 3 sounds important n stuff
01:29:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - another one of those weird sections that just seems to repeat. yeah it's a repetitive part of the song I agree, but this is just the same pattern over and over, you can definitely vary this up quite a bit more I feel. other than being pretty dull, it's fine. Having no variation is fine as well
01:40:457 - timing point not snapped Snapped on 1/8
01:45:942 - ^ ^
02:00:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - plays weird. awkward transition into the triple. Well, it's for the auto-tune so not much really can be done about that :v
02:16:414 (4,2,4) - very weird overlapping. Meh, I feel like it's fine
02:18:814 (2) - weird placement, the slider ends on the other side, but you would expect the single to be on the right hand side. you can keep if you want, just thought i'd point it out I put it there since the last repeat ends with the slider going on that side so yeah
02:25:671 (1,2) - this is just plain weird. awkward jump and very weird overlapping To each their own
02:53:100 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:53:957 (4,1) - weird overlap. yep
03:02:357 (1,2,3,4) - I would remove these, just weird after that long spinner. I would consider it equally as awkward to have the last lyrics not clickable
Weeaboo
Same as insane here, I feel these notes are overmapped. Same as insane
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00:02:185 (3) - i think this is touching the health bar, which is unrankable. Nope
00:10:585 (4,5,6,7) - weird overlap. Fine to me
00:18:128 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i liked what you did on insane on this part more. I like what I did for weeaboo than insane but yeah
00:40:414 (3,4,5,6,7) - pattern just feels off no matter how many times i've tried this. Although I don't really understand why it's off, since I tried it multiple times and it felt on, I changed it so it's consistent with 00:41:442 (1) -
00:41:957 (2,3,4) - nothing major, but this feels really spaced lol.
01:06:128 (1,2,3) - this sounds wrong, 1/2s sounded better. Gotta sacrifice stuff so you can make slider art lol, it's fine since the T starts on "bate" and C starts on "to"
01:15:385 (1,3) - bad overlap. nothing more to add here. Guess it's not too visible, even though it felt fine sight-reading but w/e
01:29:442 - from this point until 01:40:414 - every single stream goes in the same direction. should add some streams going the other way imho. fine otherwise. it's fine
02:15:385 (3,1,2) - weird overlap, should be fine though. lol it's not supposed to look like that anyways fixed
02:21:900 (2,4) - awful looking overlap, pls change. tl;dr for these I move it to bottom right to overlap instead
02:23:442 (3,5) - ^
02:28:928 (3,5) - ^
03:02:357 (1,2,3,4) - same as insane. feels wrong after such a long spinner. Same explanation
Good map otherwise. i like it.
I like the song.
Thanks for modding, same color stuffzzzzzz
Super Extra Weeaboo + Mod = Extra Weeaboo + Mod = Insane Weeaboo
At this progress, the final weeaboo will be easy :v joke
At this progress, the final weeaboo will be easy :v joke
Topic Starter
Lol naw i just removed the extra weeaboo altogether
[Weeaboo]
00:33:214 (1,2) - This plays really awkward imo
01:05:785 (5) - To follow you NCs, NC this (every beat in the stream)
Call me
00:33:214 (1,2) - This plays really awkward imo
01:05:785 (5) - To follow you NCs, NC this (every beat in the stream)
Call me
Topic Starter
im so bad, i didn't check this for a while, all fixed
Let's try again!
Battle, for the next BN, try to find someone who is of a high rank, and can thus rate Weeaboo better. I think it's fine, but if the qualify comes from a great player at least it also plays fine for the better players
Battle, for the next BN, try to find someone who is of a high rank, and can thus rate Weeaboo better. I think it's fine, but if the qualify comes from a great player at least it also plays fine for the better players
rip weeaboo dream
if this trend continues this'll end up as a ENH set
mmm
Topic Starter
if it became an enh set people would start complaining that there needs to be another diff because the music is too intense rip
[Weeaboo]
01:14:185 (7) - Confusing spacing, I thought you were spacing off of the synth, but there's no synth here.
01:16:414 (5) - 0.88 spacing? so confusing, this slider even has synths on the start and end and a drum on the end.
01:17:785 (4,5) - Why are these the same object whilst the rhythm changes? the second repeat slider shouldn't be 1/4, really borked. First repeat slider would play better as a stacked triple too.
01:19:842 (1) - haven't modded this, just looked in editor, why isn't this mapped? this is so play breaking,
this is the rhythm here in circles, place sliders or w.e u want, even just stacking the 2 and 3 on top of the 1 makes for awesome play. This is such a hugely missed opportunity.
01:22:071 (4,5,6) - could be neater, straight line or 5 is equally spaced between 4 and 6.
01:23:100 (3,4,5) - same again
Map is littered with those sorts of things (not polished)
01:24:642 (3) - something like this should probably be 1/2 circles to emphasise the synth
01:26:528 (1) - space more, this synth is batshit.
tbh, not sure what's going on with the spacing in weeaboo now i look at it, sorry dude D:
ehh, I really don't have time to mod this though especially with a laptop and trackpad in editor QQ, thought i would bring up some of these issues though before it's too late!
note being mean by bubble popping, saw someone np the map, saw it in editor went to comment. I tried to make a brief but broad range of the issues i'd otherwise bring up in greater detail (don't kd, not worth it)
edit: sorry, quick edit, i think that your chioce of rhythms in weeaboo were not optimal and representative enough and could be done better, whilst also keeping within the bounds of the intended difficulty. Just thugoht i'd clarify that
01:14:185 (7) - Confusing spacing, I thought you were spacing off of the synth, but there's no synth here.
01:16:414 (5) - 0.88 spacing? so confusing, this slider even has synths on the start and end and a drum on the end.
01:17:785 (4,5) - Why are these the same object whilst the rhythm changes? the second repeat slider shouldn't be 1/4, really borked. First repeat slider would play better as a stacked triple too.
01:19:842 (1) - haven't modded this, just looked in editor, why isn't this mapped? this is so play breaking,
this is the rhythm here in circles, place sliders or w.e u want, even just stacking the 2 and 3 on top of the 1 makes for awesome play. This is such a hugely missed opportunity.
01:22:071 (4,5,6) - could be neater, straight line or 5 is equally spaced between 4 and 6.
01:23:100 (3,4,5) - same again
Map is littered with those sorts of things (not polished)
01:24:642 (3) - something like this should probably be 1/2 circles to emphasise the synth
01:26:528 (1) - space more, this synth is batshit.
tbh, not sure what's going on with the spacing in weeaboo now i look at it, sorry dude D:
ehh, I really don't have time to mod this though especially with a laptop and trackpad in editor QQ, thought i would bring up some of these issues though before it's too late!
note being mean by bubble popping, saw someone np the map, saw it in editor went to comment. I tried to make a brief but broad range of the issues i'd otherwise bring up in greater detail (don't kd, not worth it)
edit: sorry, quick edit, i think that your chioce of rhythms in weeaboo were not optimal and representative enough and could be done better, whilst also keeping within the bounds of the intended difficulty. Just thugoht i'd clarify that
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Hula wrote:
[Weeaboo]
01:14:185 (7) - Confusing spacing, I thought you were spacing off of the synth, but there's no synth here.
01:16:414 (5) - 0.88 spacing? so confusing, this slider even has synths on the start and end and a drum on the end.
01:17:785 (4,5) - Why are these the same object whilst the rhythm changes? the second repeat slider shouldn't be 1/4, really borked. First repeat slider would play better as a stacked triple too.
01:19:842 (1) - haven't modded this, just looked in editor, why isn't this mapped? this is so play breaking, [/color]
this is the rhythm here in circles, place sliders or w.e u want, even just stacking the 2 and 3 on top of the 1 makes for awesome play. This is such a hugely missed opportunity.
01:22:071 (4,5,6) - could be neater, straight line or 5 is equally spaced between 4 and 6.
01:23:100 (3,4,5) - same again
Map is littered with those sorts of things (not polished)
01:24:642 (3) - something like this should probably be 1/2 circles to emphasise the synth Think this is fine for now, I noticed that most of the synths in this map had sliders for them so I think it's fine yeah
01:26:528 (1) - space more, this synth is batshit.
tbh, not sure what's going on with the spacing in weeaboo now i look at it, sorry dude D:
ehh, I really don't have time to mod this though especially with a laptop and trackpad in editor QQ, thought i would bring up some of these issues though before it's too late!
note being mean by bubble popping, saw someone np the map, saw it in editor went to comment. I tried to make a brief but broad range of the issues i'd otherwise bring up in greater detail (don't kd, not worth it)
edit: sorry, quick edit, i think that your chioce of rhythms in weeaboo were not optimal and representative enough and could be done better, whilst also keeping within the bounds of the intended difficulty. Just thugoht i'd clarify that
Fixed some emphasis parts on map, small edit to a slider shape, end relatively untouched due to the spacing being like that since it's the only chorus with lyrics, thus it should be different .3.
#3
Hoping everyone thinks it's better now >_>
Hoping everyone thinks it's better now >_>
No? Haven't looked at it again yet. But he seemed to teject a lot of points i made and i did it kinda quickly, should have more mods from high quality modders imo. Since that was my thought when i madea a quick post (which wasn't a mod)Baraatje123 wrote:
#3
Hoping everyone thinks it's better now >_>
Oops, my bad
Popping it for now
Call me when it's done
Popping it for now
Call me when it's done
sorry. was a really slow double post cos of slow mobile net - delete please.
Topic Starter
k i go search now on free time
My 2 cents.
Highest difficulty
00:00:814 (2,3) - why is this spaced larger than 00:01:328 (4,1) - ? I feel there should be more emphasis with 00:01:671 (1) rather than the middle of that phrase
00:04:414 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - the 3/4 slider just doesn't sound or feel good, and it's not just the additional sound produced. The held vocals and the part of the song here is still not very strong. At least from 00:12:642 (1) onwards that section seems to have progressed with the intensity
00:20:528 (4,1) - difference between this and 00:19:157 (4,1) - ? Why would just one stack or one unstack only?
00:20:871 (1,2,3,4) - could use some different direction change at 00:21:214 (2,3,4) - if not 00:20:871 (1) would stick out of this pattern
00:25:671 (1,2,3) - I don't think you should stack them all, in fact I believe spacing them out would do the music better
00:28:071 (3,4,5,6,7) - could you direct this upwards with the music
00:32:185 (3,4) - triplet to slider would honestly be closer to the rhythm, but yeh the idea of going upwards with the music is here which you can do for above suggestion ^:
00:35:100 (4,5,6) - this is really masking what the song is here, you added 2 repeat slider, making some general rhythm which isn't suited for the song. Tailor is for the song, sure you might want to diversify with your own rhythm, but it isn't working here. This is what I got from the song; single beat at 00:35:100 and 1/4 triplets from 00:35:271 to 00:35:442 before having a slider from 00:35:614 to 00:35:785 - :
00:38:357 (4,5) - stack? You made them similar hitsounded, making the sound a like a repetitive beat
01:02:014 (1) - I suggest you don't keep changing the rhythm, else everything just becomes just another pattern which doesn't hold much meaning. The song starts building up here, you use the repeat slider. But then you switch the rhythm at 01:03:385 (1) when it is the similar tune and change everything, making any force that could have been built up from using the same rhythm get diffused.
01:11:957 (2) - doesn't feel right with the strong beat on the slider end
01:18:471 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this feels too cramped. Either because of 01:18:814 (2,3) or 01:19:157 (3,4) - something in the spacing just makes it off
01:32:528 (2,3) - movement kinda awkward
01:39:385 (2,3) - would definitely help is 01:39:385 (2) is lower
01:32:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nothing less than 1.0x spacing please, especially those moving in the same direction, which tend to be smaller spacing than those facing each other; that's just cramping everything up and it's limiting movement
01:45:214 (3,4,5,6,7) - shape could be improved, that includes others like 01:46:585 (3,4,5,6,7) as well
02:00:985 (1,2,3,4,5) - this changing spacing isn't really working ideally here
02:11:614 (3) - slider end on strong beat, doesn't feel right
02:32:100 (5) - even placing it at 02:31:757 would be better, leave the tune at 02:32:014 to be clearer for all
02:38:014 (1) - not sure for the tunes like this, where the synth starts on the slider end, could really be emphasized more than what it is right now
02:41:100 (1,2) - maybe stack them up to allow the slowdown to ease in for the later part:
02:47:271 (5,6,1) - spacing pretty lopsided. If anything, like before, the new phrase I believe should have the bigger spacing
02:48:471 (4,5,6,1) - very drastic change in spacing from before, there was nothing like this beforehand, just spiking this over here
02:56:100 (2) - additive note
Highest difficulty
00:00:814 (2,3) - why is this spaced larger than 00:01:328 (4,1) - ? I feel there should be more emphasis with 00:01:671 (1) rather than the middle of that phrase
00:04:414 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - the 3/4 slider just doesn't sound or feel good, and it's not just the additional sound produced. The held vocals and the part of the song here is still not very strong. At least from 00:12:642 (1) onwards that section seems to have progressed with the intensity
00:20:528 (4,1) - difference between this and 00:19:157 (4,1) - ? Why would just one stack or one unstack only?
00:20:871 (1,2,3,4) - could use some different direction change at 00:21:214 (2,3,4) - if not 00:20:871 (1) would stick out of this pattern
00:25:671 (1,2,3) - I don't think you should stack them all, in fact I believe spacing them out would do the music better
00:28:071 (3,4,5,6,7) - could you direct this upwards with the music
00:32:185 (3,4) - triplet to slider would honestly be closer to the rhythm, but yeh the idea of going upwards with the music is here which you can do for above suggestion ^:
00:35:100 (4,5,6) - this is really masking what the song is here, you added 2 repeat slider, making some general rhythm which isn't suited for the song. Tailor is for the song, sure you might want to diversify with your own rhythm, but it isn't working here. This is what I got from the song; single beat at 00:35:100 and 1/4 triplets from 00:35:271 to 00:35:442 before having a slider from 00:35:614 to 00:35:785 - :
00:38:357 (4,5) - stack? You made them similar hitsounded, making the sound a like a repetitive beat
01:02:014 (1) - I suggest you don't keep changing the rhythm, else everything just becomes just another pattern which doesn't hold much meaning. The song starts building up here, you use the repeat slider. But then you switch the rhythm at 01:03:385 (1) when it is the similar tune and change everything, making any force that could have been built up from using the same rhythm get diffused.
01:11:957 (2) - doesn't feel right with the strong beat on the slider end
01:18:471 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this feels too cramped. Either because of 01:18:814 (2,3) or 01:19:157 (3,4) - something in the spacing just makes it off
01:32:528 (2,3) - movement kinda awkward
01:39:385 (2,3) - would definitely help is 01:39:385 (2) is lower
01:32:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nothing less than 1.0x spacing please, especially those moving in the same direction, which tend to be smaller spacing than those facing each other; that's just cramping everything up and it's limiting movement
01:45:214 (3,4,5,6,7) - shape could be improved, that includes others like 01:46:585 (3,4,5,6,7) as well
02:00:985 (1,2,3,4,5) - this changing spacing isn't really working ideally here
02:11:614 (3) - slider end on strong beat, doesn't feel right
02:32:100 (5) - even placing it at 02:31:757 would be better, leave the tune at 02:32:014 to be clearer for all
02:38:014 (1) - not sure for the tunes like this, where the synth starts on the slider end, could really be emphasized more than what it is right now
02:41:100 (1,2) - maybe stack them up to allow the slowdown to ease in for the later part:
02:47:271 (5,6,1) - spacing pretty lopsided. If anything, like before, the new phrase I believe should have the bigger spacing
02:48:471 (4,5,6,1) - very drastic change in spacing from before, there was nothing like this beforehand, just spiking this over here
02:56:100 (2) - additive note
Topic Starter
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neonat wrote:
My 2 cents.
Highest difficulty
00:00:814 (2,3) - why is this spaced larger than 00:01:328 (4,1) - ? I feel there should be more emphasis with 00:01:671 (1) rather than the middle of that phrase
00:04:414 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - the 3/4 slider just doesn't sound or feel good, and it's not just the additional sound produced. The held vocals and the part of the song here is still not very strong. At least from 00:12:642 (1) onwards that section seems to have progressed with the intensity
00:20:528 (4,1) - difference between this and 00:19:157 (4,1) - ? Why would just one stack or one unstack only? I decided to stack the one of 4,1 since previous to that, the pattern mentioned (the 19 sec one) is part of the build up, I find these two distinct enough for them to be different in this way
00:20:871 (1,2,3,4) - could use some different direction change at 00:21:214 (2,3,4) - if not 00:20:871 (1) would stick out of this pattern I didn't really get what you were trying to say here, but changed some stuff up
00:25:671 (1,2,3) - I don't think you should stack them all, in fact I believe spacing them out would do the music better No more stacked, but now anti-jumps because I think it fits nicely with music here
00:28:071 (3,4,5,6,7) - could you direct this upwards with the music
00:32:185 (3,4) - triplet to slider would honestly be closer to the rhythm, but yeh the idea of going upwards with the music is here which you can do for above suggestion ^:
00:35:100 (4,5,6) - this is really masking what the song is here, you added 2 repeat slider, making some general rhythm which isn't suited for the song. Tailor is for the song, sure you might want to diversify with your own rhythm, but it isn't working here. This is what I got from the song; single beat at 00:35:100 and 1/4 triplets from 00:35:271 to 00:35:442 before having a slider from 00:35:614 to 00:35:785 - :
00:38:357 (4,5) - stack? You made them similar hitsounded, making the sound a like a repetitive beat
01:02:014 (1) - I suggest you don't keep changing the rhythm, else everything just becomes just another pattern which doesn't hold much meaning. The song starts building up here, you use the repeat slider. But then you switch the rhythm at 01:03:385 (1) when it is the similar tune and change everything, making any force that could have been built up from using the same rhythm get diffused.
01:11:957 (2) - doesn't feel right with the strong beat on the slider end
01:18:471 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this feels too cramped. Either because of 01:18:814 (2,3) or 01:19:157 (3,4) - something in the spacing just makes it off
01:32:528 (2,3) - movement kinda awkward
01:39:385 (2,3) - would definitely help is 01:39:385 (2) is lower
01:32:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nothing less than 1.0x spacing please, especially those moving in the same direction, which tend to be smaller spacing than those facing each other; that's just cramping everything up and it's limiting movement
01:45:214 (3,4,5,6,7) - shape could be improved, that includes others like 01:46:585 (3,4,5,6,7) as well
02:00:985 (1,2,3,4,5) - this changing spacing isn't really working ideally here
02:11:614 (3) - slider end on strong beat, doesn't feel right
02:32:100 (5) - even placing it at 02:31:757 would be better, leave the tune at 02:32:014 to be clearer for all Don't really get clearer for all but moved note to triplet at start
02:38:014 (1) - not sure for the tunes like this, where the synth starts on the slider end, could really be emphasized more than what it is right now
02:41:100 (1,2) - maybe stack them up to allow the slowdown to ease in for the later part:
02:47:271 (5,6,1) - spacing pretty lopsided. If anything, like before, the new phrase I believe should have the bigger spacing
02:48:471 (4,5,6,1) - very drastic change in spacing from before, there was nothing like this beforehand, just spiking this over here
02:56:100 (2) - additive note
thanks, most all fix~
Modded it months ago, but whatever. I'm more experienced now.~
Gonna go full nazi, so prepare yourselves.
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• = Highly recommended suggestion
• = Suggestion
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• 00:20:185 (5,6) - Why do you go straight down there? Would be totally understandable if it was something to emphasize or smth.
• 00:29:100 (1,2,3,4) - Since you don't use a system here you could place (2) a bit more to the left for a curvier flow.
• 00:42:814 (1,2) - This placement doesn't really make sense, especially because you don't do this all the time so this isn't a part of your system.
• 01:00:300 (4) - Making this slider curvier would make more sense because this looks kinda forced.
• 01:08:185 (2,3,4) - This looks HELLA forced, really. Without having something to emphasize it doesn't make super much sense.
• 01:14:700 (4,5,1) - Placing (5) and (1) higher wouldn't be too bad because of the sudden direction change you use here.
• 02:02:357 (1,2,3) - Having a lineal flow here would definitely be better because this way you have a lot of direction changes too.
• 02:21:900 (4,5) - Transition is very strange, maybe rotate (5)?
• 02:39:385 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
• 00:10:585 (5,6,1) - This looks (and probably is) forced due to problems of place. I'd suggestion to change the previous pattern and completely re-work this part.
• 00:15:385 (4,5) - Slidertail of (4) doesn't directly show to (5), which is very weird imo.
• 00:45:214 (5) - You have more than enough space to make this slider pretty. There's no super high pitched and very weird vocal, so no need to curve it that much.
• 01:09:557 (5,6,1) - This looks extremely dumb. I see that you wanted to blanket it and so on, but you should look for another solution here honestly.
• 01:15:728 (1) - Wouldn't look that bad if this slider would go to the bottom right corner.
• 01:25:671 (4,5,6) - Doesn't look and flow too well. Easy to fix, if you decide so.
• 01:26:357 (6,2) - They touch. Sure it isn't visible ingame, but it triggers me because of you curve u wanted to to after the reverse slider. At least 01:27:728 (3) - place this one lower. ;_;
• 01:29:100 (7,2,3) - What the hell is this overlap.
• 01:30:471 (3,5) - Touching. Also not a big deal, but I'd suggest to rotate 01:30:814 (4) - slightly so you can flow the circles after that slider a bit better.
• 01:32:185 (1,2,3) - Why would you ever place objects like this in a Normal? It looks so ugly and isn't good for this low difficulty.
• 01:33:557 (4,5,6) - You always forced a curve to the next object / slider but here you break the system for whatever reason and make a questionable way up (let stand alone the fact that 01:34:585 (6,2) even touch lol).
• 01:37:157 (5,6) - Why not just making a linear flow to the next object?
• 01:39:042 (3) - You can actually try to stack it with a circle from 01:37:157 (5,6) .
• 01:40:414 (1,3) - God and Saviour pishiskinny told me that something like this is anything but recommendable. It's really meh that (3) appears before (1) even has its way back.
• 01:46:928 - 01:48:300 - 01:49:671 - 01:51:042 - Why suddenly no circles? I get that the music gets quieter but the drums are really hearable, no reason to stop using circles here.
• 02:21:557 (3,4,5) - Questionale transition again.
• 02:24:642 (5,6) - Blanket it properly.
• 02:28:071 (5,7) - Hello overlap.
• 02:32:528 (1) - Suddenly two reverses? This is confusing as hell for newer players. You didn't use one slider like this before.
• 02:44:528 (7,1) - Improve blanket.
• 02:52:757 (8,1) - Why using such a strange transition when you have more than enough space to make it properly?
• 00:36:300 (2,3,4,5) - So after (2) you decide to make a slight curve down but place (5) more to the right? Destroys flow and looks odd.
• 01:00:814 (1,2,3,4,5) - First a questional transition and then suddenly a stack? Replace (2) and (3) with a slider.
• 01:30:128 (3) - How should the player know that this slider has two reverses instead of one like before?
• 01:36:642 (3) - Make this slider a bit better looking maybe?
• 01:43:157 (1,2) - Why do you use especially here an emphasizing but not at the other similiar pattern before even though they have the same sound?
• 00:58:585 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:59:957 (3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe increase the spacing very slightly because of the music getting louder?
• 01:12:642 (5,1) - Blanket would look cleaner.
• 01:31:500 (3,4,5,6,7) - 01:35:614 (3,4,5,6,7) - What's the system behind placing these streams / bursts / whatever they are called that weird even though they have the same sound? At least I couldn't figure a different sound when listening with 25% speed.
• 01:55:500 (2,1) - Blanket it?
• 01:56:871 (1,3,4) - Custom stacks looks odd, would recommend placing it somewhere else.
• 02:25:671 (1,2) - Not the best pattern you can take here. (2) should definitely be more visible, maybe put it slightly to the left of (1)?
• 02:33:557 (2) - NC would be cool because this doesn't have anything similar with (1) in this case and also the break.
Didn't put too much attention to the last diff because I'm tired already, 2.37am OP.
But honestly here I ask myself if Baraatje even bothered to take a look here because this set doesn't look ready for ranking at all.
Gonna go full nazi, so prepare yourselves.
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• = Unrankable issue
• = Highly recommended suggestion
• = Suggestion
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Easy
• Personally I'd still nerf the SV a bit as it seems a bit high for an Easy, but that's just my opinion though.• 00:20:185 (5,6) - Why do you go straight down there? Would be totally understandable if it was something to emphasize or smth.
• 00:29:100 (1,2,3,4) - Since you don't use a system here you could place (2) a bit more to the left for a curvier flow.
• 00:42:814 (1,2) - This placement doesn't really make sense, especially because you don't do this all the time so this isn't a part of your system.
• 01:00:300 (4) - Making this slider curvier would make more sense because this looks kinda forced.
• 01:08:185 (2,3,4) - This looks HELLA forced, really. Without having something to emphasize it doesn't make super much sense.
• 01:14:700 (4,5,1) - Placing (5) and (1) higher wouldn't be too bad because of the sudden direction change you use here.
• 02:02:357 (1,2,3) - Having a lineal flow here would definitely be better because this way you have a lot of direction changes too.
• 02:21:900 (4,5) - Transition is very strange, maybe rotate (5)?
• 02:39:385 (1,2) - Fix blanket.
Rocket's Normal
• PLEASE check your DS in the whole map, at some points they are very inconsistent. (ex. 01:37:157 (5) - 01:38:357 (2) )• 00:10:585 (5,6,1) - This looks (and probably is) forced due to problems of place. I'd suggestion to change the previous pattern and completely re-work this part.
• 00:15:385 (4,5) - Slidertail of (4) doesn't directly show to (5), which is very weird imo.
• 00:45:214 (5) - You have more than enough space to make this slider pretty. There's no super high pitched and very weird vocal, so no need to curve it that much.
• 01:09:557 (5,6,1) - This looks extremely dumb. I see that you wanted to blanket it and so on, but you should look for another solution here honestly.
• 01:15:728 (1) - Wouldn't look that bad if this slider would go to the bottom right corner.
• 01:25:671 (4,5,6) - Doesn't look and flow too well. Easy to fix, if you decide so.
• 01:26:357 (6,2) - They touch. Sure it isn't visible ingame, but it triggers me because of you curve u wanted to to after the reverse slider. At least 01:27:728 (3) - place this one lower. ;_;
• 01:29:100 (7,2,3) - What the hell is this overlap.
• 01:30:471 (3,5) - Touching. Also not a big deal, but I'd suggest to rotate 01:30:814 (4) - slightly so you can flow the circles after that slider a bit better.
• 01:32:185 (1,2,3) - Why would you ever place objects like this in a Normal? It looks so ugly and isn't good for this low difficulty.
• 01:33:557 (4,5,6) - You always forced a curve to the next object / slider but here you break the system for whatever reason and make a questionable way up (let stand alone the fact that 01:34:585 (6,2) even touch lol).
• 01:37:157 (5,6) - Why not just making a linear flow to the next object?
• 01:39:042 (3) - You can actually try to stack it with a circle from 01:37:157 (5,6) .
• 01:40:414 (1,3) - God and Saviour pishiskinny told me that something like this is anything but recommendable. It's really meh that (3) appears before (1) even has its way back.
• 01:46:928 - 01:48:300 - 01:49:671 - 01:51:042 - Why suddenly no circles? I get that the music gets quieter but the drums are really hearable, no reason to stop using circles here.
• 02:21:557 (3,4,5) - Questionale transition again.
• 02:24:642 (5,6) - Blanket it properly.
• 02:28:071 (5,7) - Hello overlap.
• 02:32:528 (1) - Suddenly two reverses? This is confusing as hell for newer players. You didn't use one slider like this before.
• 02:44:528 (7,1) - Improve blanket.
• 02:52:757 (8,1) - Why using such a strange transition when you have more than enough space to make it properly?
Hard
• 00:33:214 (1,3) - Looks a bit meh that it's almost touching. ;_;• 00:36:300 (2,3,4,5) - So after (2) you decide to make a slight curve down but place (5) more to the right? Destroys flow and looks odd.
• 01:00:814 (1,2,3,4,5) - First a questional transition and then suddenly a stack? Replace (2) and (3) with a slider.
• 01:30:128 (3) - How should the player know that this slider has two reverses instead of one like before?
• 01:36:642 (3) - Make this slider a bit better looking maybe?
• 01:43:157 (1,2) - Why do you use especially here an emphasizing but not at the other similiar pattern before even though they have the same sound?
Weeaboo
• 00:35:271 (5,6,7) - Feels bit strange with that high spacing. 00:32:185 (3,4,5) feels fine because of the unique vocal here, but I don't really see a reason for this triplet to be that spaced.• 00:58:585 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:59:957 (3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe increase the spacing very slightly because of the music getting louder?
• 01:12:642 (5,1) - Blanket would look cleaner.
• 01:31:500 (3,4,5,6,7) - 01:35:614 (3,4,5,6,7) - What's the system behind placing these streams / bursts / whatever they are called that weird even though they have the same sound? At least I couldn't figure a different sound when listening with 25% speed.
• 01:55:500 (2,1) - Blanket it?
• 01:56:871 (1,3,4) - Custom stacks looks odd, would recommend placing it somewhere else.
• 02:25:671 (1,2) - Not the best pattern you can take here. (2) should definitely be more visible, maybe put it slightly to the left of (1)?
• 02:33:557 (2) - NC would be cool because this doesn't have anything similar with (1) in this case and also the break.
Didn't put too much attention to the last diff because I'm tired already, 2.37am OP.
But honestly here I ask myself if Baraatje even bothered to take a look here because this set doesn't look ready for ranking at all.
one of my fav s3rl songs,always getting in such a happy mood when listening to this one <3
take a star :3 ♥♥♥
take a star :3 ♥♥♥