hi xd
00:01:258 (1) - could use some hs tbh
normal-00:10:858 (4,1,1) - spaced equally will look better. 1.2x on both
-01:43:458 (5,2) - this kinda destroys all the cuteness of your aesthetics ;(
-02:26:258 (2,3) - i think if you ctrl g this rhythm, will sound much better cuz right now you're ignoring 02:26:458 - which kinda goes against to your other rhythms
adv-00:10:458 (3,4,1) - spacing looks ugly here ;w;
-00:12:858 (1,1) - blanket looks cool here xd
-02:33:458 (4,1) - move a bit down so 02:32:658 (2,3,4,1) - is a triangle?O:
-02:46:258 (1) - i'd say that its length is too short for a advanced. like if i spin like a player of that level will do, ill get 50 everytime xd
hard-00:13:058 - 01:30:658 - you lowered too much the volumen here ;w; i cant hear anything, and you're supposed to hear something atleast. same with other diffs
-00:58:658 (2,2) - that doesnt look too nice imo ;w;, stacking or overlapping a little bit is better than just putting it over the slider
-looks like a light insane with that spacing and constant jumps tbh xd
insane-02:12:458 (5,6,1) - so rude ;w;
-02:16:058 (1,2,3,4,5) - could be a pentagon, will look neater
-02:34:058 (5) - i'd place it to the other side to follow the previous flow, like x347y207
extra-00:20:658 (6,7) - if you stack them like that, it's like a stop and go mental movement that noone likes to play ;( . spacing them out a bit will be more natural while playing imo, same with the others
-00:50:658 (1,2,3) - have you tried something like this
http://puu.sh/lwGLR/edea161b16.jpg ? Using 1/2 slider in the middle of a bunch of 3/4 isnt too smoothly. Using this other rhythm is more readable as well i'd say. same with the copy paste later
-02:10:791 (1) - this isnt very nice nor fitting. You're mapping a random vocal sample that isnt worth at all
-02:24:858 (5,6) - copy pasting one of them looks 98% better imo
could use silent sliderslide too, stuff like 00:16:658 (7) - in extra sounds pretty badly
not a fan of your aesthetics, stuff like 02:21:258 (4) - are unfitting and ugly from my point of view. didnt like the constant stream jumps, these should be done occacionally just for pure emphasis but you do it a lot which is unnecessary.
But you like all that so just saying xd
If you found the mod somewhat helpful (or if you're bored /w\) mod my map plz
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/293832 ;w; tytytyty