Note: the mod on the diffs themselves are using the old mp3, so the timing might be slightly off
Easy +:
Normal mod:
01:33:403 (2,3) - it would look nicer if the blue slier did not cover up these notes (remove 1's repeat and make 1 longer to accommodate this change?)
Combo mod:
01:12:104 (2) - new combo to be consistent with 01:05:988 (1)
02:00:677 (6) - new combo to follow the lyrics?
Normal:
Normal mod:
03:05:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - the 3 looks pretty bad hitting the hp bar
03:07:819 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is very annoying to read
Hard:
Normal mod:
01:27:739 (4) - the slider's direction is virtually impossible to see under the 300, so can you please change the pattern
01:41:394 (1,1) - the shortened spacing between these 2 notes is really confusing
02:19:784 (3,4) - this stack is very random because you properly spaced all the other half notes in the area, so I suggest you remove this stack by distance-snapping the 4
02:49:737 (3,4,5,6) - This stack was also quite strange because all similarly snapped notes in the nearby areas are streams, so this felt out of place
Combo mod:
03:09:132 (7) - with the new pattern and spacing, add a combo here to make the change more intuitive
Insane:
Normal mod:
01:30:895 (1,2) - a stack like this fits better in the center of the hexagon created by the previous 2 combos, the jump from 2 to the next combo is acceptable too)
01:32:438 (1,2) - ^ (to match the other one, do the same thing here too)
01:39:657 (2) - it does not look very nice to have the blue stack be on top of this slider
01:55:421 (7,8,9) - random stack (reasoning is the same as the other stacks I pointed out in other diffs)
01:57:147 (7,8) - ^
02:09:151 (5,1) - ^
02:18:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - can you please arrange this into a nicer looking combo
02:19:603 (3) - it would look better if this note was partially overlapped by the orange combo
02:55:132 (3) - I really don't like the overlap her eithter
Combo mod:
00:16:817 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with the next 3 combos (you might want to move 3 from the previous combo so it does not overlap these notes)
01:00:646 (5) - I advise you add a new combo here to be consistent with 00:54:427 (1)
01:06:768 (5) - ^
01:12:863 (5) - ^
01:49:787 (5) - you might want to add a new combo here to follow the lyrics
02:09:151 (5,1) - I would rather have the pattern of 4 half notes be kept constant for this section, so remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5
02:55:488 (4) - new combo to follow the lyrics?
03:09:132 (7) - new combo for the same reason as teh hard difficulty note at this point
Overall, nice mapset. The biggest problem is that insane has a lot of combos and patterns that are aesthetically unpleasing or sort of random, so I advise you comb over the map to see if you make the map look as good as it possibly can.
Note: This post is not finished yet, timing sections still need to be checked. Here is just a basic mod for each difficulty. I will finish up this mod sometime soon.