senya - Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Xinely

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-11-08T08:34:14+00:00

changed a bit
00:39:346 (5,1,2) - i prefer keep mine before, the music is calm yeah but at least it's increasing from 00:38:282 - so i prefer to give a bit more spacing and jump at this time

SPOILER

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[Metadata]
Title:Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba
TitleUnicode:泡沫、哀のまほろば
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Razor Sharp
Version:Nely's INFINITE
Source:東方Project
Tags:SDVX SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH HiZuMi Iceon ZUN かませ虎 murutattack - Magic Girl - Tokufi Touhou 幽閉サテライト 東方永夜抄 エクステンドアッシュ　～ 蓬莱人 月まで届け 不死の煙 imperishable night reach for the moon immortal smoke Xinely
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Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-11-08T13:44:56+00:00

Updated!

Also updated all diffs with same Combo Colors

Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2015-11-11T02:44:49+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:

Magic Girl's ADVANCED
00:04:798 (2) - I'd avoid introducing such a strong dash this early on, and in such a quiet section of the song, selecting all previous notes and dragging to x-112 or 128 feels much better - Fixed
00:20:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Wowowow this combo is way too long for a Salad, remember that slider tails and repeats count as fruits the stack up on the plate too! NC (5) please - Fixed
00:25:895 (5,1) - Swap NC to emphasise the downbeat on (5), and also since (5) is a part of the 00:26:282 (1,2) synth/guitar rhythm - Fixed
00:34:411 (3,4) - Strong dash leading into strong antiflow feels weird here, since this is a very calm section of the song. A simpler pattern would be welcome here anyway, such as 00:34:411 (3,4) as a 1/2 slider or two circles with 00:34:991 as a circle as well for added emphasis - Personally I'd rather keep the slider since I like to follow to the small pause in the vocals with a slider, tilted it up instead to make it easier since everyone keeps complaining about the difficulty.
00:41:379 (3) - NC here as well please, since 00:39:830 (1,2,3,4,5) stacks pretty high at the moment, and it will make this combo consistent in length with the surrounding ones - Fixed
00:48:346 (1) - Why is this NC'ed all on it's own? It doesn't seem that important a note or difficult a pattern to me... Consider swapping with 00:47:185 (4) - Fixed
00:49:120 (1,2,3,4) - Back to back dash isn't really recommended for a Salad at this BPM as it's a pretty sizeable difficulty spike - consider simplifying this by creating dashes to 00:49:120 (1,3,1) only - How do you propose I do that exactly? I tried is all I'm gonna say.
00:53:766 (1) - End this spinner 1/2 earlier please, a 1/2 beat recovery isn't a great deal at this BPM, and since 00:55:314 (1) is off to the left, it will be easy (and frustrating) for a newer player to get spinner baited here - Fixed
00:56:862 (4) - NC here as well please, combo length, consistency and all that good stuff - Fixed
00:59:959 (1,2,3,4) - Same suggestion as 00:49:120 (1,2,3,4) - Same response, this one I didn't try.
01:03:830 (4,1) - These can feel a little uncomfortable to play, as the current spacing is close to requiring dash, and may leave newer players in two minds about how to play them. Consider moving 01:03:056 (3,1) to x-224 to make this easier to read as I feel dash would fit nicely here - Fixed
01:07:701 (1,2,3) - Since the tail of (1) is a pretty prominent vocal note, I feel it would be better to remove the repeat, shift (2,3) back 1/2 and add a circle where (3) currently ends, as this allows you to make a jump (and welcome NC) for the strong vocal note at 01:09:250 which is currently underemphasised by being mapped to the low-movement slider tail - Fixed
01:16:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is just horizontal left/right 1/2 sliders repeatedly, which feels a little plain to play. For variety here you could try angling some of the sliders slightly, or creating a dash to 01:18:540 (1) perhaps - Fixed (or tried to)
01:27:164 (3) - Whilst this is a strong vocal sound, it's in a very calm section of the song. I guess you don't want to use dash here, so I would reduce the spacing to this a tiny bit, as it feels a little uncomfortable for newer players right now - Fixed

I'll keep an eye on things, but this is all for now.
Good luck!

Thanks for modding, apologies (nopunintended) if this apply felt salty and whatnot. I'm also sorry for the amount of time it took to do this. Haven't been having the best of time recently.

Update

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TitleUnicode:泡沫、哀のまほろば
Artist:senya
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Creator:Razor Sharp
Version:Magic Girl's ADVANCED
Source:東方Project
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Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-11-11T18:50:57+00:00

Updated!

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,578 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2015-11-14T04:43:23+00:00

A recheck hmm.

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[

General]

Difficulty Naming

Though it is fine to keep SDVX naming, however, for a clearer recognize, it is better to have the default naming, such as Cup, Salad, Platter etc.

[

Moekufi's NOVICE]

Timeline

00:01:121 (1) - In my opinion this should end at 00:01:895 as the sound is at there but not at red tick. Right now you are trying to have a special rhythm, but it doesn't go as good as the suggested one, also it doesn't hurt to end at white tick. If you decided to go as suggested, please curve the slider as well.
00:02:669 (3) - ^
01:08:282 (2,3,1,2) - It is fine to have such rhythm, but it feels awkward and inconsistent at the Kiai Time, as most of the Kiai Time parts are with only 1/1 timeline, which is quite inconsistent if you include sudden 1/2 patterns. Either remove the pattern or just add 1/2 patterns in various patterns to fix the consistency.

New Combos
00:11:185 (4) - This should be a NC to emphasize the sound at the tail of 00:09:637 (3) - Which feels more complete. Therefore you may remove the NC at 00:11:959 (1)
00:15:056 (2) - Better have a NC here instead of 00:14:669 (1) to fit the stanza rhythm.
00:18:540 (1) - Remove the NC as it is going in line with the previous pattern 00:17:766 (1,2,3)
00:30:540 (5) - You may NC this instead of 00:32:088 (1) so the rhythm is much clearer, NC'ing every 2 stanza.
00:34:991 (1) - Same as above, therefore removing NC here helps. If you decided to do so, add a NC at 00:37:120 (4) too.
00:49:895 (1) - Feels particularly weird here with a sudden NC, since 00:49:120 - 00:50:669 - is in the same stanza if you listen carefully, therefore I suggest removing the NC at 00:49:895 (1)
00:58:798 (3) - It feels like a NC suits here to fit the stanza while shortening the combo. (Since this is an easy diff, combo shouldn't be stacked)
01:14:669 (1) - Maybe removing the NC here will do, since you didn't add NC at 01:16:217 (3) - It would be nice to follow the NC rhythm by NC'ing past every 4 white ticks.
01:28:664 (1,2) - Remove the NC here and place the NC at 01:29:164 (2) as 01:29:164 (2) is with whistle, which can be emphasized like you did at 01:27:164 (1)
01:30:664 (1,2) - ^

Hitsounds
00:32:862 (4,5) - I would suggest adding Whistle at (4) instead of (5), it feels slightly better.
01:16:217 (3) - Better remove the Clap at the tail of this slider, it breaks the hitsound rhythm in my opinion.
01:30:164 (3) - This should be consistent with 01:28:164 (2) in the hitsound patterning, maybe you should decide on whether adding Whistles at this two notes, or only with Claps.

[

Magic Girl's ADVANCED]

Gameplay

00:15:830 (1,2) - The jump between the two sliders here should be less-distant, so that the jump at 00:16:217 (2,3) won't be too hard.
00:17:379 (4,5) - In my opinion the gap is a little bit big, that players might dash here. To maintain a good dashing rhythm, I suggest moving (4) closer to (5), say x:272, where the gap can be smaller and help players to catch the jump at 00:17:572 (5,1)
00:24:346 (1,2) - Probably it is just careless stuff, I deem that it is difficult for Salad players to catch (2), as (1,2) are parallel in movements, which can be hard for them to decelerate and get to the left, plus it needs dashing to full combo here. Therefore it would be nice to Ctrl+G (2) or just remap the part at 00:24:346 - 00:25:508 to lower the difficulty.
00:25:508 (4,1) - The jump here is also big, where it would be nicer if you lower the distance while keeping the dash.
00:34:024 (2,3,4) - It is a no to have dash-holding part in a Salad, such as this part, where players have to hold their dash button to catch (3) and (4). Please lower the distance of (2,3) to fit the difficulty.
00:46:798 (3,1) - It is fine here, but the dash can be difficult for players to get it, since (3) swipes them away from (1). Try changing the pattern here, that can maintain the dash here as well.
01:08:862 (3,1) - Poof, that's unrankable to include a hyperdash in Salad.
01:23:164 - 01:32:817 - This part totally lacks dashes, which is way too plain as the ending in my opinion though it is a kind of soft part. What about adding dash at 01:26:914 (2,3) and 01:30:164 (3,1) - which do not hurt much having them?

New Combos
00:05:766 (3) - You may NC here to have the same NC rhythm as the previous ones.
00:08:862 (3) - Similar to above, instead you can NC here to fit the later ones.
00:15:056 (3) - Why not having a NC here? It begins a new stanza. If you decided to go as suggested, remove the NC at 00:15:830 (1) and NC at 00:16:604 (3) as well.
00:20:669 (1) - Shouldn't NC here as the stanza is still going on, instead, NC at 00:21:250 (2) will do.
00:28:798 (3) - NC here? It will be consistent with the later rhythms.
01:03:056 (3) - ^
01:25:164 (4) - NC here instead of 01:26:164 (1) to go in line with the rhythms.
01:27:164 (3) - NC with the same reason above.
01:28:664 (1,2) - NC at (2) instead of (1), same reason as above.

Hitsounds
00:03:250 (2) - Feels weird to have a Whistle here, it doesn't go consistent with 00:01:701 (2)
00:06:153 (4) - Maybe remove the Whistle here? It feels less stacked with Whistles in this part.
00:06:927 (6) - ^
00:28:798 (3,4,5) - It is so stacked with the Whistles in my opinion, how about only keeping the Whistle at the tail of 00:29:379 (4) which feels less complex.
00:30:346 (1) - Please remove the Whistle at the tail, it is so stacked when you have consecutive Whistles going on here.
01:27:164 - 01:30:664 - The Whistles are way too much here, which I find them didn't fit the gradual slowing rhythm in the audio. Maybe you should hitsound this part similarly as 01:23:164 - 01:27:164 in the hitsound patterning.

[

Murumuru's EXHAUST]

Gameplay

00:39:830 (1) - Since the hyperdash at 00:38:282 (4,1) may force players to go left and stick to the wall, it would be nice if you rotate 00:39:830 (1) for 180 degree and place at the same spot, which can decrease the difficulty here.
00:52:120 (6,1) - The gap is a bit large in my opinion, what about lowering the gap here while keeping a dash? Try moving 00:51:927 (4) to x:448, 00:52:024 (5) to x:408 and 00:52:120 (6) to x:368.
00:55:217 (7,1) - This gap is large as well, that can be lowered by increase the slope of 00:54:830 (3,4,5,6,7) like the above.
01:19:894 (4,5) - Add a dash here? Otherwise it would be so awkward that this is less intense than the jumps at 01:18:540 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)

New Combos
00:17:572 (1) - What about removing the NC here and NC at 00:18:153 (3) instead? It fits the audio more in my opinion.
00:42:346 (1,2) - ^
00:57:056 (4) - NC here to go with the same rhythm as the later ones.
01:06:153 (6) - You may NC this and remove the NC at 01:06:927 (1) as the stanza is more fit with such amendment.
01:12:346 (5) - NC in my opinion. This would feel better in the rhythm.
01:25:164 (3) - ^
01:32:477 (1) - Better remove the NC with the reason above.

Hitsounds
00:29:766 (6) - Feels awkward that Whistle is not going at the head but the tail. For me adding Whistle at the head would fit the rhythm much better.

[

Nely's INFINITE]

Gameplay

00:15:830 (3,4) - Better remove the NC here to fit the consistency with 00:22:024 (3,4)
00:56:088 (3,4) - Maybe turn this into a pattern like 00:57:637 (3,4,5) to have a consistency in the Kiai Time.
01:08:475 (3) - ^

New Combos
00:02:669 (4) - NC here to fit the rhythm here (NC'ing every 4 white ticks).
00:12:733 (5) - Better NC here instead of 00:13:120 (1) since it is weird to NC suddenly at the middle.
00:14:766 (1) - ^, instead remove the NC here.
00:38:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - The NC pattern is weird, what about NC'ing at 00:39:056 (2) only?
00:53:766 (4) - NC here instead of 00:54:540 (1) to emphasize the Finish at (4).
01:19:701 (1) - Remove the NC here to fit the rhythm.
01:25:164 (3) - ^

[

GRAVITY]

Gameplay

00:11:572 (4,1) - Try to add a hyperdash here to fit the rhythm.
00:22:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern should go consistent as 00:18:153 (1,2,3,4) - therefore decide on whether using 3/4 sliders or 1/2 sliders + circles.

Good luck!

-AFB

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-11-14T04:50:19+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
A recheck hmm.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ General]

Difficulty Naming
Though it is fine to keep SDVX naming, however, for a clearer recognize, it is better to have the default naming, such as Cup, Salad, Platter etc. - Ok! Will change it back! (hardest diff get cutsom tho)

[ GRAVITY]

Gameplay
00:11:572 (4,1) - Try to add a hyperdash here to fit the rhythm. - Fixed!
00:22:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern should go consistent as 00:18:153 (1,2,3,4) - therefore decide on whether using 3/4 sliders or 1/2 sliders + circles. - Should be ok now!

Good luck!

-AFB

THanks for the mod!

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-11-14T09:18:20+00:00

applied rhythms, but for nc i mostly keep mine in case for avoiding much fruits, and some of them are i NC'ed a bit late because of new patterns so NC'ing a note before new patterns look quite weird for me

thanks afb ~

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280,120,49508,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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328,296,62088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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408,256,62669,2,0,L|300:280,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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48,240,66540,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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140,200,71088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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236,328,73024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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232,256,73508,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,344,73701,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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232,308,90664,2,0,L|316:297,2,85,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,332,91414,6,0,L|247:335,1,85
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188,344,92477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,244,93592,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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268,248,93799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,94246,12,0,100963,0:0:0:0:

Moeruattack

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Joined June 2014

Moeruattack 2015-11-15T18:58:46+00:00

Took all the Ayyfbmao suggestion, thanks for modding

Somehow, Osu email notification didn`t show up, sorry about late RS >_<"

Murumuru's Platter

osu file format v14

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Title:Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba
TitleUnicode:泡沫、哀のまほろば
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Razor Sharp
Version:Murumuru's Platter
Source:東方Project
Tags:SDVX SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH HiZuMi Iceon ZUN かませ虎 murutattack - Magic Girl - Tokufi Touhou 幽閉サテライト 東方永夜抄 エクステンドアッシュ　～ 蓬莱人 月まで届け 不死の煙 imperishable night reach for the moon immortal smoke Xinely
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Tokufi

117 posts

Joined July 2013

Tokufi 2015-11-17T01:03:33+00:00

Fixed all Afbmoe mods ~

UPDATE

osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:泡沫、哀のまほろば
Artist:senya
ArtistUnicode:senya
Creator:Razor Sharp
Version:Moekufi's Cup
Source:東方Project
Tags:SDVX SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH HiZuMi Iceon ZUN かませ虎 murutattack - Magic Girl - Tokufi Touhou 幽閉サテライト 東方永夜抄 エクステンドアッシュ　～ 蓬莱人 月まで届け 不死の煙 imperishable night reach for the moon immortal smoke Xinely
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Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2015-11-21T06:19:58+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
A recheck hmm.

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ Magic Girl's ADVANCED]

Gameplay
00:15:830 (1,2) - The jump between the two sliders here should be less-distant, so that the jump at 00:16:217 (2,3) won't be too hard. - Fixed
00:17:379 (4,5) - In my opinion the gap is a little bit big, that players might dash here. To maintain a good dashing rhythm, I suggest moving (4) closer to (5), say x:272, where the gap can be smaller and help players to catch the jump at 00:17:572 (5,1) - Fixed
00:24:346 (1,2) - Probably it is just careless stuff, I deem that it is difficult for Salad players to catch (2), as (1,2) are parallel in movements, which can be hard for them to decelerate and get to the left, plus it needs dashing to full combo here. Therefore it would be nice to Ctrl+G (2) or just remap the part at 00:24:346 - 00:25:508 to lower the difficulty. - Fixed
00:25:508 (4,1) - The jump here is also big, where it would be nicer if you lower the distance while keeping the dash. - Fixed
00:34:024 (2,3,4) - It is a no to have dash-holding part in a Salad, such as this part, where players have to hold their dash button to catch (3) and (4). Please lower the distance of (2,3) to fit the difficulty. - Fixed
00:46:798 (3,1) - It is fine here, but the dash can be difficult for players to get it, since (3) swipes them away from (1). Try changing the pattern here, that can maintain the dash here as well. - Fixed (or tried to ;w;)
01:08:862 (3,1) - Poof, that's unrankable to include a hyperdash in Salad. - Brb kms I'm an idiot for not checking that (fixed)
01:23:164 - 01:32:817 - This part totally lacks dashes, which is way too plain as the ending in my opinion though it is a kind of soft part. What about adding dash at 01:26:914 (2,3) and 01:30:164 (3,1) - which do not hurt much having them? - Fixed

New Combos
00:05:766 (3) - You may NC here to have the same NC rhythm as the previous ones. - Fixed
00:08:862 (3) - Similar to above, instead you can NC here to fit the later ones. - Fixed
00:15:056 (3) - Why not having a NC here? It begins a new stanza. If you decided to go as suggested, remove the NC at 00:15:830 (1) and NC at 00:16:604 (3) as well. - Fixed
00:20:669 (1) - Shouldn't NC here as the stanza is still going on, instead, NC at 00:21:250 (2) will do. - Fixed
00:28:798 (3) - NC here? It will be consistent with the later rhythms. - Fixed
01:03:056 (3) - ^ - ^
01:25:164 (4) - NC here instead of 01:26:164 (1) to go in line with the rhythms. - Fixed
01:27:164 (3) - NC with the same reason above. - Fixed
01:28:664 (1,2) - NC at (2) instead of (1), same reason as above. - Fixed

Hitsounds
00:03:250 (2) - Feels weird to have a Whistle here, it doesn't go consistent with 00:01:701 (2) - Fixed
00:06:153 (4) - Maybe remove the Whistle here? It feels less stacked with Whistles in this part. - Fixed
00:06:927 (6) - ^ - Fixed
00:28:798 (3,4,5) - It is so stacked with the Whistles in my opinion, how about only keeping the Whistle at the tail of 00:29:379 (4) which feels less complex. - Fixed
00:30:346 (1) - Please remove the Whistle at the tail, it is so stacked when you have consecutive Whistles going on here. - Fixed
01:27:164 - 01:30:664 - The Whistles are way too much here, which I find them didn't fit the gradual slowing rhythm in the audio. Maybe you should hitsound this part similarly as 01:23:164 - 01:27:164 in the hitsound patterning. - Fixed

Good luck!

-AFB

Thanks for modding. I am so sorry for the delay I'm really busy recently orz ;w;

Magic Girl's Salad

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TitleUnicode:泡沫、哀のまほろば
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Creator:Razor Sharp
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Source:東方Project
Tags:SDVX SOUND VOLTEX BOOTH HiZuMi Iceon ZUN かませ虎 murutattack - Magic Girl - Tokufi Touhou 幽閉サテライト 東方永夜抄 エクステンドアッシュ　～ 蓬莱人 月まで届け 不死の煙 imperishable night reach for the moon immortal smoke Xinely
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Razor Sharp

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Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-11-21T18:30:36+00:00

All updated!

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,578 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2015-12-14T02:36:43+00:00

It is now fine to me-

Bubbled!

Good luck!

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-12-14T03:43:43+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
It is now fine to me-

Bubbled!

Good luck!

om here we go bois!

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Moeruattack 2015-12-14T05:10:25+00:00

Here we go

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-12-15T11:15:48+00:00

Sorry I took so long, I just have a few small suggestions before we finish up:

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Magic Girl's Salad

00:06:927 (4,1) - Consider increasing the spacing a bit here, I really feel this calls for dash considering the emphasis you're putting on the head of (1). Consider moving it to x-168, then to avoid a weird spacing to 00:08:088 (2) you could move 00:08:088 (2,1,2,1) to x-240
01:23:164 (1,2,3,1) - Don't you think this many whistles sounds a bit excessive? I think you could remove the ones on the tails of each, keeping them on the heads for the strong vocal sounds

Murumuru's Platter

01:17:862 (4,5,6,7) - This 1/4 stream would look a bit neater if you curved it leading into the slider imo, the current (6,7) transition is noticeable bigger than the previous ones but not big enough that it requires playing any differently, e.g. with dash, so it just comes off as a bit random to me. Try moving (4) to [432,284], then (5) and (6) both (separately) to x-456 to give a smoother effect that looks a bit cleaner
01:19:314 (1,2) - Not a huge fan of this repetition; though it does fit the song, it seems a bit anticlimactic given the great variation you had earlier. If you'd like to keep it, I recommend increasing the distance to and from this pair to provide a little more of a "building-up" feel. Try moving these to x-112

Nely's Rain

00:29:959 (3,1) - Eeek this jump is pretty annoying since it's really close to hdash. If there's supposed to be a hdash here, move (1) to x-412 - otherwise make the jump more comfortable by moving to x-372, consistent with 00:27:056 (5,1)
00:52:217 (1,2) - This spacing feels a bit awkward - due to the SV and placement of (2), you have to dash to reach the end (which is unexpected), followed by a return hdash. I can see this catching players off guard, so a solution might be to (1) a little to the right, say x-152?
01:26:664 - You mapped the soft piano sound at 01:24:664 (2) but not here which seems a bit odd. I'd consider dropping a 1/2 slider in at about x-240, facing left to bridge the gap

Grief

00:14:862 (8,1) - Strong hdash into a near vertical slider really kills the flow and will create so many annoying misses. I suggest moving the slider start back to x-128 and making it more horizontal to create a slightly less harsh movement
00:18:153 (1,2,3,4) - 00:22:798 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Don't these seem a little exaggerated to you? The music is intense, sure, but not enough to justify a snappy motion like this. Reducing the hyper strengths a bit would play better and be more fitting to the music
00:52:798 (4,5) - Is this really strong enough for an antiflowing reverse hyper pattern? Seems unnecessary to me, moving 00:53:185 (5,6) to x-96 would play and fit better imo
01:05:572 (4) - Move this to x-64 please, both to be consistent with 01:04:991 (2) and avoid an annoying pixel jump into hyper combination
01:08:475 (4) - Flip this, the antiflow is unnecessary and will just lead to annoying droplet misses

Call me back.

Razor Sharp

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Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-12-15T14:59:26+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Sorry I took so long, I just have a few small suggestions before we finish up:

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Grief
00:14:862 (8,1) - Strong hdash into a near vertical slider really kills the flow and will create so many annoying misses. I suggest moving the slider start back to x-128 and making it more horizontal to create a slightly less harsh movement - Fixed!
00:18:153 (1,2,3,4) - 00:22:798 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Don't these seem a little exaggerated to you? The music is intense, sure, but not enough to justify a snappy motion like this. Reducing the hyper strengths a bit would play better and be more fitting to the music - Fixed!
00:52:798 (4,5) - Is this really strong enough for an antiflowing reverse hyper pattern? Seems unnecessary to me, moving 00:53:185 (5,6) to x-96 would play and fit better imo - Fixed!
01:05:572 (4) - Move this to x-64 please, both to be consistent with 01:04:991 (2) and avoid an annoying pixel jump into hyper combination - Fixed!
01:08:475 (4) - Flip this, the antiflow is unnecessary and will just lead to annoying droplet misses - Fixed!
Call me back.

Thank you for the mod! Will poke ya when all diffs updated!

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Moeruattack 2015-12-15T15:17:48+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Sorry I took so long, I just have a few small suggestions before we finish up:

Difficulty-Specific Comments:
Murumuru's Platter
01:17:862 (4,5,6,7) - This 1/4 stream would look a bit neater if you curved it leading into the slider imo, the current (6,7) transition is noticeable bigger than the previous ones but not big enough that it requires playing any differently, e.g. with dash, so it just comes off as a bit random to me. Try moving (4) to [432,284], then (5) and (6) both (separately) to x-456 to give a smoother effect that looks a bit cleaner
01:19:314 (1,2) - Not a huge fan of this repetition; though it does fit the song, it seems a bit anticlimactic given the great variation you had earlier. If you'd like to keep it, I recommend increasing the distance to and from this pair to provide a little more of a "building-up" feel. Try moving these to x-112
Call me back.

Done all fixed

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Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2015-12-16T04:19:30+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Sorry I took so long, I just have a few small suggestions before we finish up:

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Magic Girl's Salad
00:06:927 (4,1) - Consider increasing the spacing a bit here, I really feel this calls for dash considering the emphasis you're putting on the head of (1). Consider moving it to x-168, then to avoid a weird spacing to 00:08:088 (2) you could move 00:08:088 (2,1,2,1) to x-240 - Fixed
01:23:164 (1,2,3,1) - Don't you think this many whistles sounds a bit excessive? I think you could remove the ones on the tails of each, keeping them on the heads for the strong vocal sounds - Fixed

Thanks for modding.

Magic Girl's Salad

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Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-12-17T00:29:18+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Sorry I took so long, I just have a few small suggestions before we finish up:

Nely's Rain
00:29:959 (3,1) - Eeek this jump is pretty annoying since it's really close to hdash. If there's supposed to be a hdash here, move (1) to x-412 - otherwise make the jump more comfortable by moving to x-372, consistent with 00:27:056 (5,1)
00:52:217 (1,2) - This spacing feels a bit awkward - due to the SV and placement of (2), you have to dash to reach the end (which is unexpected), followed by a return hdash. I can see this catching players off guard, so a solution might be to (1) a little to the right, say x-152?
01:26:664 - You mapped the soft piano sound at 01:24:664 (2) but not here which seems a bit odd. I'd consider dropping a 1/2 slider in at about x-240, facing left to bridge the gap almost cant hear piano unless in 01:26:914 - so i would like to keep what i've mapped now
Call me back.

thanks jbh ~

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Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-12-17T01:23:21+00:00

ALL UPDATED!

/pokes JBH

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-12-17T01:26:48+00:00

Razor Sharp wrote:
ALL UPDATED!

/pokes JBH

It's getting a bit late to do a proper check tonight, so I'll take a (hopefully) last look at this tomorrow.

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Razor Sharp 2015-12-17T11:00:31+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Razor Sharp wrote:
ALL UPDATED!

/pokes JBH
It's getting a bit late to do a proper check tonight, so I'll take a (hopefully) last look at this tomorrow.

you told me

OMG ITS NEW SAY

/pokes JBH

:^)

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-12-17T14:46:36+00:00

this guy >.>

Salad

00:28:024 (2) - Whistle on the repeat (or tail if you prefer) please, the vocal is relatively strong here and there's not enough feedback for the sound at the moment
00:32:088 (1) - ^ On the tail

Platter

00:05:766 (2,4) - Whistle/Whistle or Whistle/Clap on the heads, respectively please, there needs to be more feedback for the vocals here
00:28:798 (4) - 00:30:540 (2) - Whistle on the head
00:34:411 (3) - ^

Grief

00:39:443 (7) - Possible NC here? It's a pretty tricky section and note density is high, missing here results in a high change of failure
00:39:637 (10,11,12) - Increasing distance is good for that building up feeling, but this feels a little too excessive. The music hasn't changed in intensity much, yet you're using almost double the spacing between this triplet and the previous one. Suggest reducing the jump here a bit, try moving the triplet to around x-340 if you're going to keep the \ \ inversion, or x-362 (and then Ctrl+G the triplet) for a repeat of the \ / pattern

Last time (I hope).

Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-12-17T14:50:46+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
this guy >.>

Salad
00:28:024 (2) - Whistle on the repeat (or tail if you prefer) please, the vocal is relatively strong here and there's not enough feedback for the sound at the moment - Fixed!
00:32:088 (1) - ^ On the tail - Fixed!
Platter
00:05:766 (2,4) - Whistle/Whistle or Whistle/Clap on the heads, respectively please, there needs to be more feedback for the vocals here - Fixed!
00:28:798 (4) - 00:30:540 (2) - Whistle on the head - Fixed!
00:34:411 (3) - ^ - Fixed!
Grief
00:39:443 (7) - Possible NC here? It's a pretty tricky section and note density is high, missing here results in a high change of failure - Fixed!
00:39:637 (10,11,12) - Increasing distance is good for that building up feeling, but this feels a little too excessive. The music hasn't changed in intensity much, yet you're using almost double the spacing between this triplet and the previous one. Suggest reducing the jump here a bit, try moving the triplet to around x-340 if you're going to keep the \ \ inversion, or x-362 (and then Ctrl+G the triplet) for a repeat of the \ / pattern - Fixed!
Last time (I hope).

Applying the HS for the GD's as its not major stuff i guess

All updated!

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2015-12-17T15:03:10+00:00

Update #7657345 - Also fixed some unneeded and unsnapped green lines k.

Good grief ayyy lmao, picky old me is finally happy with this map. An approval flame would suit Mokou better tbh, but I can only give you a heart so get over it (^:

Requalified~

Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-12-17T15:07:21+00:00

thank you babe <3

Sunkiss

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Sunkiss 2015-12-17T16:05:35+00:00

Ahhhhh congrats razor!

Moeruattack

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Moeruattack 2015-12-17T16:36:20+00:00

\:D/

Mwallx

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Mwallx 2015-12-18T04:45:37+00:00

Where are those antihypers ? ._.

Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-12-18T16:38:35+00:00

Mwalls Ho wrote:
Where are those antihypers ? ._.

they caused to much trouble as the BNs were unsure about them so i had to remove them :c

LigerZero

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LigerZero 2015-12-20T09:28:02+00:00

Congrats your map ranked..........

done added in Discography t/373538 (sorry i can't look your image because i'm edit in internet cafe)

Satellite

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Satellite 2015-12-21T02:28:52+00:00

regrats!

Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-12-21T13:31:17+00:00

Satellite wrote:
regrats!

Thanks!

Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-12-21T13:33:47+00:00

LigerZero wrote:
Congrats your map ranked..........

done added in Discography t/373538 (sorry i can't look your image because i'm edit in internet cafe)

Sweet! Will add image too desc

-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2015-12-21T17:33:32+00:00

:O It's real *-*/ Gratz and thanks for this amazing song :3

Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-12-21T21:58:46+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
:O It's real *-*/ Gratz and thanks for this amazing song :3

haha, no problem :3 more senya songs comming soon!

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

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Yumeno Himiko 2015-12-22T11:23:28+00:00

gratz with your 1st map

Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-12-22T16:11:35+00:00

examination wrote:
gratz with your 1st map

thankyou

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2015-12-22T17:01:13+00:00

I need to disqualify it for guality issues on Grief.

[Grief]

00:36:733 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - We already told you before to change it and several mod mentioned it as well. Mapping 1/8s and 1/4s just because you hear them in the editor with 25% is not justify their usage. Given your map density, this would be better as a break.
[]

Razor Sharp

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Razor Sharp 2015-12-22T17:07:22+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
I need to disqualify it for guality issues on Grief.

[Grief]

00:36:733 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - We already told you before to change it and several mod mentioned it as well. Mapping 1/8s and 1/4s just because you hear them in the editor with 25% is not justify their usage. Given your map density, this would be better as a break.
[]

~~Ok removed those notes! Should be ok now!!~~

will discust this further

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