1. 00:39:085 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - I knew I was going to confuse people with how I phrased it haha. I meant something more like:
   
2. 01:27:017 (153,154,155) - I meant a dd K here, I think even my description on what to do was wrong lol.

1. 00:21:040 and 00:21:491 - Did these notes explode o_o? d k here would be fine, since the break was earlier (if that was the intent at all xP)
2. 00:22:055 (54,60) - To be safe, let's just make these triplets into 1/2 d d. Applies to both here.
3. 00:27:355 (73) - Move this to 00:27:243 and make it a d, so it fits the song as a simple double.
4. 00:42:919 (42,43) - These notes just barely missed the right tick by one :p (00:43:032 and 00:43:370 of course)
5. 00:51:716 (68,69,70,71,72) - I think a simple k d k would do spread better justice here.
6. 00:56:904 (85) - Spinner as it is in Futsuu?
7. 01:00:288 (6) - Should be at 01:00:739 , editor probably messed it up. Also add a finisher to it!
8. 01:07:280 (33,34) - Deleting these was the break I meant in the mod.
9. 01:15:175 (1) - Instead of a spinner, because Oni is so simple, a 1/3 k k ddd should be good enough.
10. 01:18:784 (9,10,11,12,13) - I think a good medium would be something like
    

1. 00:26:904 (36,37,38) - I lied. This sounds bad. Delete 00:27:355 (38) - and move 00:27:130 (37) - to 00:27:243 (1/4)!
2. 01:06:152 (19) - Make this a d d d (no finisher on the first note) since the other diffs aren't so simple here.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Toad: Wahoo!

[Jamu's Oni]

1. 00:39:085 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - I knew I was going to confuse people with how I phrased it haha. I meant something more like:
   
2. 01:27:017 (153,154,155) - I meant a dd K here, I think even my description on what to do was wrong lol.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:21:040 and 00:21:491 - Did these notes explode o_o? d k here would be fine, since the break was earlier (if that was the intent at all xP)
2. 00:22:055 (54,60) - To be safe, let's just make these triplets into 1/2 d d. Applies to both here.
3. 00:27:355 (73) - Move this to 00:27:243 and make it a d, so it fits the song as a simple double.
4. 00:42:919 (42,43) - These notes just barely missed the right tick by one :p (00:43:032 and 00:43:370 of course)
5. 00:51:716 (68,69,70,71,72) - I think a simple k d k would do spread better justice here.
6. 00:56:904 (85) - Spinner as it is in Futsuu?
7. 01:00:288 (6) - Should be at 01:00:739 , editor probably messed it up. Also add a finisher to it!
8. 01:07:280 (33,34) - Deleting these was the break I meant in the mod.
9. 01:15:175 (1) - Instead of a spinner, because Oni is so simple, a 1/3 k k ddd should be good enough.
10. 01:18:784 (9,10,11,12,13) - I think a good medium would be something like
    

[Futsuu]

1. 00:26:904 (36,37,38) - I lied. This sounds bad. Delete 00:27:355 (38) - and move 00:27:130 (37) - to 00:27:243 (1/4)!
2. 01:06:152 (19) - Make this a d d d (no finisher on the first note) since the other diffs aren't so simple here.

I'm gonna hire a guy to clean any little things up >:3

Raiden wrote:

Hello! As requested.

[ General]

• AiMod

1. clear
   Audio
2. fine
   Background
3. correct
   Inconsistencies
4. none
   Folder
5. okay

[ Futsuu]

• Difficulty/general settings

1. 00:15:626 - 00:17:431 - useless green lines, delete them
   Hitsounding and patterning
2. 00:27:807 (1) - Why finisher on a spinner? lol
3. 01:23:746 (13) - Strong vocal, can use a finisher?
4. 01:27:355 (21) - Similar to above ^
5. 00:44:498 (29) - Finisher? To cohere with 00:37:280 (15) -
   Structure and spread
6. 01:08:408 - Leaving this blank makes it somewhat inconsistent with 01:01:190 (6) - , so I'd tell you to add a note
7. 01:11:566 (34) - Similar issue as above, but this time about note placement. You placed the first note of the previous stanza at 01:04:799 (16) - rather than at 01:04:348 - , so I'd suggest moving 01:11:566 (34) - to 01:12:017 - to maintain the consistency

[ Muzukashii]

• Difficulty/general settings

1. 00:15:626 - 00:17:431 - same as Futsuu
   Hitsounding and patterning
2. 00:10:213 (20) - Finisher? There is a strong crash
3. 00:15:626 (39,40,41,42,43) - KDKDK when it was DDKDK in Futsuu? Why? D:
4. 00:37:280 (24) - Finisher? To cohere with 00:44:498 (47) -
5. 01:07:957 (33) - Finishr? Strong crash
6. 01:15:175 (60) - Has same intensity as 01:13:370 (56,57,58,59) - , should have a finisher too imo
7. 01:23:746 (13) - Finisher? Like in Futsuu
   Structure and spread
8. 01:19:235 (11) - Sounds awkward considering the sound you wanted to follow to do previous+following patterns, I'd move to 01:19:122 -

[ Oni]

• Difficulty/general settings

1. 00:15:626 - 00:17:431 - same as Futsuu
   Hitsounding and patterning
2. okay i guess
   Structure and spread
3. 00:42:919 (60) - move to 00:43:032 - ? Would follow vocals more nicely imo
4. 00:43:258 - add a k to fully follow vocals?
5. 01:28:934 (162) - There's actually no vocal here, sounds nicer if you remove it imo

You may call me back (¦3[___]

1. 00:46:303 - add a d? This part being empty makes spread look weird. 00:47:205 - k here would also help for consistency with 00:52:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
2. 00:59:385 (2,3,4) - Move these onto the blue ticks before. It's the only way these won't sound like they ignore the song.
3. 01:15:175 (1) - This kind of ignores part of the song. Shorten the spinner to 01:16:528.
   Then add a don at 01:16:979 , 01:17:656 , and a kat at 01:18:333 . This also helps the player know what rhythm 01:18:784 (1,2,3,4,5) - is.

1. 00:07:280 - Add a k since Oni is hella dense.
2. 00:07:731 - ^ don here.
3. 00:07:957 (14) - Finisher seems kinda mapped to nothing. Remove?
4. 00:12:694 - Add a note here because Oni is actually preeetty dense.
5. 00:13:822 (32) - Deleting this note does sooo much more for actually following vocals without sounding horribly off.
6. 00:45:626 - Add a don here similar to how we added notes in Futsuu for spread.
7. 00:53:521 (73) - Remove finisher, seems mapped to nothing as well.
8. 00:54:874 (77) - ^ But add a finisher at 00:55:325 (78) - , it's much more deserving.

1. 00:27:355 (110) - Move this to 00:27:243 to properly match the rhythm.
2. 00:52:393 - Add a k to set this part further from Muzukashii.
3. 01:10:776 (69) - Change to don, I can predict people will see this stream and panic.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Futsuu]

1. 00:46:303 - add a d? This part being empty makes spread look weird. 00:47:205 - k here would also help for consistency with 00:52:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
2. 00:59:385 (2,3,4) - Move these onto the blue ticks before. It's the only way these won't sound like they ignore the song.
3. 01:15:175 (1) - This kind of ignores part of the song. Shorten the spinner to 01:16:528.
   Then add a don at 01:16:979 , 01:17:656 , and a kat at 01:18:333 . This also helps the player know what rhythm 01:18:784 (1,2,3,4,5) - is.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:07:280 - Add a k since Oni is hella dense.
2. 00:07:731 - ^ don here.
3. 00:07:957 (14) - Finisher seems kinda mapped to nothing. Remove?
4. 00:12:694 - Add a note here because Oni is actually preeetty dense.
5. 00:13:822 (32) - Deleting this note does sooo much more for actually following vocals without sounding horribly off.
6. 00:45:626 - Add a don here similar to how we added notes in Futsuu for spread.
7. 00:53:521 (73) - Remove finisher, seems mapped to nothing as well.
8. 00:54:874 (77) - ^ But add a finisher at 00:55:325 (78) - , it's much more deserving.

[Oni]

1. 00:27:355 (110) - Move this to 00:27:243 to properly match the rhythm.
2. 00:52:393 - Add a k to set this part further from Muzukashii.
3. 01:10:776 (69) - Change to don, I can predict people will see this stream and panic.

Spread is wider than ｆｕｌｌ　ｗｉｔｈ　ａｌｐｈａｎｕｍｅｒｉｃ　ｔｅｘｔ．

1. Title - 残念系隣人部★★☆
2. Romanised - Zannenkei Rinjinbu Hoshi Futatsuhan

DakeDekaane wrote:

^Fix the title.

[Additional notes]

Remove tsukuritai zannenkei rinjinbu hoshi futatsushan from tags, it's already in the title.
Also add 星二つ半 to tags, since it's how Futatsuhan is written.

[Futsuu]
00:27:807 (1) - Shorten this spinner to 00:29:385 - or 00:29:611 - , as spinners doesn't have a defined end, most of the time it leaves an empty beat in 00:30:062 -, which be nice to be hit.
00:50:814 (1) - Something similar, in this case, it'd be better to remove the spinner and put a note in 00:51:716 -

[Muzukashii]
01:15:175 - The 1/3 here feels a bit odd, try moving 01:15:476 (61) - to as a don.

[Oni]
01:01:416 (14,15,16,17,18,19) - I think a kd dkkd would suit better as vocals are dominant in this section.
01:03:220 (23,24,25,26,27,28) - Something similar here.
01:21:491 (124) - This note could be removed, intensity in the song went down, yet this keeps the high density of the previous section.

The spread still looks a bit wide, but I think I (personally) can accept it.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Rechecking as requested.

[Futsuu]
You're missing a don in 00:30:062 - . Unless you're going mostly for vocals.
00:50:814 - A don would complement the previous patterns nicely.

[Muzukashii]
00:59:686 - Try putting a don here? It sounds nice and would help to avoid this kind of awkward 3/4.

[Oni]
00:11:115 (44) - I don't know why I missed this in the last check, but move this to the previous blue tick, so it matches vocals and follows better the song.
00:12:919 (53) - ^

You can poke me back after you fix this.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Sorry for the late recheck, and I did a mistake, in Muzukashii, the note should be in 00:59:686 (5) -. Fix that and I'll bubble.