YellowManul wrote:

hey owo
request via pm o k


Easy


00:01:213 (1) - you don't need nc here k.
00:20:127 (2) - fix spacing owo (0,96x is not correct) k.
00:21:177 - i'd add here circle here for consistency
00:51:125 - same here, i'd add 2 circles or slider here ;w;


Normal
00:01:213 (1) - same as in normal kk.
00:05:153 (5) - spacing fix k.
00:07:517 (1) - ^ k.
00:51:125 - circles/slider here please too ;w;
additions:
cs 3,6? i'd use 3,5 or 3 ;w; I choosed 3.5.
btw ar 3-3,5 fits better here, but idk owo 3.9 Looks nice I think ^^.


good luck! Thanks!

Arphimigon wrote:

Dayum son.

[Easy]
Tbh this is pretty legit, I'd just suggest adding in hitsounds. *
00:47:447 (1,2) - Dis diffspike, no notes like this before. Please replace with slider. Okay .

[Normal]
I see you have hitsounds but I didn't even realise they were hitsounds until I was done modding, they sound too much like a part of the song. Can you add extra soft-whistles on top? *I added hitsounds on both difficulties!
00:12:771 (3) - Don't really like the end of this slider being so short and edgy, can you make it look neater at the end? Yep!
00:16:186 (2,3,4,5) - A bit high on the playing field and the notes not really fitting with the last curve can be a problem. Can you try making the slider here point left and this may make it all easier to play? I've put it a bit under.

Pretty nice imo. ty <3

Mako Sakata wrote:

Recheck

Easy
- 00:01:213 - Useless inherited point (green line), better delete that" Okay!

Normal
- 00:34:838 (1,2) - Spacing error, too big Okay!
- That 5% volume on 00:34:050 - and 00:34:575 - inaudible, please rise the volume a little more, 18% good enough like you did on 00:37:990 - Yep!
- 00:46:922 (3) - Improve the flow a bit by making that (3) something like this http://puu.sh/lMErb/8acab8aa60.jpg so the flow on 00:46:922 (3,1) - more natural Yep!

Call me back after :)

Ipas wrote:

Hello! ayy :3

[General]

1. Disable widescreen support in entire diffs kk
2. Sliderslide sound really disturbing . Please replace it using silent hitsound yep!
3. Sorry, for the combo colors, 1 & 2 and 3 & 4 are literally similar to each of them . It would be hard to distinguish the combo with only darken the next one a bit . I'd rather to use one of purple and one of blue, which means I only use 2 combo colors

Yeah .

[Easy]

1. 00:00:162 (1,1) - For placement that result transition, this one really disturbing in my opinion . Something like this should play better Done!
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. Clear!

ye boi
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It has to be ready, but please clear things up regarding to combo colors stuff! now qualify this c:
Good Luck! Thanks !

ByBy13 wrote:

Hello! We did some changes via IRC

10:33 ByBy13: hi
10:33 ayygurl: hey!
10:33 ByBy13: IRC?
10:34 *ByBy13 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/822694 Kazumi Totaka - Mii Plaza]
10:34 ayygurl: ow yea :D
10:34 ByBy13: oki doki
10:34 ayygurl: ty :D
10:35 ByBy13: np :)
10:35 ayygurl: tfw nothing's bad
10:35 ayygurl: xD
10:36 ByBy13: ugh I am afraid that your normal diff looks like a hard diff D:
10:36 ayygurl: holy
10:36 ayygurl: xD
10:36 ayygurl: nah its 1.82 stars olol
10:36 ayygurl: and it has no ds changes
10:37 ByBy13: I know that
10:37 ByBy13: but so many circles...you can use some 1/2sliders for example
10:37 ayygurl: wait
10:37 ayygurl: lemme show u
10:38 ayygurl: smthing i tought about it
10:38 ByBy13: oh :o
10:39 ayygurl: http://puu.sh/lO98Q/6faf3a9057.jpg
10:39 ayygurl: but
10:39 ayygurl: the thing is that i dont wanna change everything now
10:39 ByBy13: not every where
10:40 ByBy13: just to simplify the diff a little bit
10:40 ayygurl: but is it good?
10:40 ByBy13: yes
10:40 ayygurl: the thing i changed
10:40 ayygurl: yea its more esthetic
10:40 ayygurl: you know what
10:40 ayygurl: every points i think its not very good
10:40 ByBy13: yea
10:40 ayygurl: estheticly
10:41 ByBy13: ye
10:41 ByBy13: =w=)
10:41 ayygurl: im gonna change it by a slider
10:41 ByBy13: okay
10:41 ByBy13: but not really everything
10:41 ayygurl: sounds a gud idea
10:41 ByBy13: :)
10:43 ayygurl: ok
10:43 ayygurl: i changed 2 more
10:43 ayygurl: so in total
10:43 ByBy13: okay :D
10:43 ayygurl: i changed 3 times
10:43 ayygurl: it looks better know
10:43 ByBy13: oh oki
10:43 ayygurl: now*
10:43 ByBy13: update pls
10:44 ayygurl: updated
10:44 ByBy13: oki
10:45 ByBy13: 00:03:051 (5)- NC snce there are the reset of the instruments and also seems that you forgot to add  it here
10:46 ayygurl: both diffs?
10:46 *ByBy13 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/822694 Kazumi Totaka - Mii Plaza [Normal]]
10:46 ByBy13: in normal
10:47 ayygurl: k
10:49 *ByBy13 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/822694 Kazumi Totaka - Mii Plaza [Normal]]
10:49 ByBy13: 00:24:330 (1,2,3)- for improving the flow here,you can use this pattern ->http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097088
10:52 ByBy13: 00:26:431 (1,2)- try to move 2 to 181|258 for improving the flow here
10:53 ayygurl: §can you show a pic? i moved the 1 xD
10:53 ByBy13: oh wait a min
10:54 ayygurl: kk
10:54 ByBy13: 00:26:431 (1,2)- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097124 moved a little bit up now to 178|249
10:55 ByBy13: 00:30:635 (1,2)- these 2 circles can be a 1/2 slider to simplify the diff a bit let's say
10:55 ByBy13: 00:32:211 (1,2)- ^
10:55 ByBy13: don't forget to re-add the NCs there btw
10:57 ayygurl: and whistle
10:57 ayygurl: and claps
10:57 ayygurl: lol
10:57 ayygurl: kk
10:57 ByBy13: :)
10:57 ayygurl: its sad because i used to like deez triples
10:57 ayygurl: rip
10:57 ayygurl: xD
10:58 ByBy13: 00:36:939 (4,1)- The NC must be on 4 and not on 1 since there are the reset of the instruments on 4 and a NC there would be good
10:58 ayygurl: are you sure?
10:59 ayygurl: nobody told me that lol
10:59 ayygurl: bur ok
10:59 ayygurl: but*
10:59 ByBy13: yes really sure uwu
10:59 ayygurl: kk
11:03 ByBy13: 00:47:447 (1,2)- 2 circles -> 1/2 slider
11:03 ByBy13: + don't forget the NC,clap and whistle
11:03 ayygurl: can i let this one D: ?
11:03 ByBy13: mmm nop ;_
11:03 ByBy13: ;_;
11:04 ayygurl: plz
11:04 ByBy13: okay xd
11:04 ayygurl: just dis one D:
11:04 ByBy13: okay x)
11:04 ayygurl: thx :D
11:04 ByBy13: np
11:04 ByBy13: :3
11:04 ayygurl: lol
11:04 ayygurl: x)
11:04 ayygurl: ^^
11:09 ayygurl: is this okay?
11:09 ayygurl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097221
11:10 ByBy13: yeah
11:10 ayygurl: its not too high?
11:10 ByBy13: nop
11:11 ByBy13: just make the ss more better to see it more good
11:11 ayygurl: wat?
11:11 ayygurl: xD
11:12 ayygurl: 00:16:974 (3) -
11:12 ayygurl: whistle?
11:13 ayygurl: hallo?
11:13 ByBy13: no
11:13 ayygurl: xD
11:13 ByBy13: xD
11:13 ByBy13: it sounds too louder
11:13 ayygurl: okay
11:14 ByBy13: now let's see easy diff
11:14 ayygurl: k i updated
11:14 ayygurl: oh ok
11:14 ayygurl: but
11:14 ayygurl: i have to go ;_;
11:14 ByBy13: ugh
11:14 *ByBy13 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/822693 Kazumi Totaka - Mii Plaza [Easy]]
11:15 ayygurl: can u do it online + post the irc?
11:15 ByBy13: sure
11:15 ayygurl: perfect thanks
11:15 ayygurl: thanks again
11:15 ayygurl: hope someone can qualify this soon lol
11:15 ByBy13: np :)
11:15 ayygurl: see ya !
11:15 ByBy13: bye :D
11:15 ayygurl: hope i didnt did smthing wrong with dem hitsounds
11:15 ayygurl: and new combos lol
11:15 ByBy13: yeah :D

Also in easy on 00:07:517 (1,2,3)- there's clearly spacing issue and it must be fixed.Also the pattern doesn't look really good to my eyes so you can try this one -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097271 I changed the pattern but there wasn't any spacing error xD.

Call me back! Hell yea!