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Shiranai
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Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Hello :)

[General]
  1. Really no kiai on both diff?
  2. That combo colors looks really good, but imo combo 1 and 2 http://puu.sh/lut1s/46cc5bcf9a.png kinda similiar with background especially combo 1, maybe you can replace or add a pink, or other soft color?
  3. Considering this a relax song, maybe disable the count down will more appropriate, since that count down very distracting
  4. Add more tags maybe? something related to mii channel
[Easy]
  1. Raise your volume please, use 30% might be better. Somehow the current kinda inaudible in some parts
  2. 00:01:215 - and 00:37:992 - and 00:39:043 - Uninherited point (green line) not snapped properly
  3. 00:00:162 (1) - Move up a bit to x:76 y:232, to fix the spacing issue?
  4. 00:18:025 (4) - NC I guess, try to follow two measurement of white big tick to have new combo
  5. 00:20:127 (5) - Maybe move to x:116 y:308, to fix the spacing issue?
  6. 00:24:330 (2) - That one almost out of screen on lowest resolution on playing, so maybe making this 00:22:228 (1) - more curve, then move this 00:24:330 (2) - above a bit? You can try something like http://puu.sh/lutEJ/f7373cfca7.jpg or something similiar and adjust next note spacing
  7. 00:26:431 (1) - Maybe a bit readjusting the slider nodes there into something http://puu.sh/lutK0/7a0c4f78e2.jpg? Somehow, how it turn to left a bit uncomfortable because the slider border a bit unclear to see http://puu.sh/lutMH/8c1ceb8fcd.jpg might affect the readability of slider path
  8. 00:33:787 (3,4,1) - Also maybe you can a bit readjust the placement there? because 00:34:838 (1) - almost touching hp bar
  9. 00:43:244 (1) - That one also same as 00:26:431 (1) - Somehow, how it turn to left a bit uncomfortable because the slider border a bit unclear to see http://puu.sh/lutMH/8c1ceb8fcd.jpg might affect the readability of slider path http://puu.sh/lutUj/d251669a2e.jpg
  10. 00:47:447 (3) - Should be nc, and this one 00:49:549 (1) - better not nc

    Improve the hitsound a bit more
[Normal]
  1. AR 4 OD and HP 3 might be better, considering this is a calm song so I guess a high setup not really needed here
  2. Raise your volume please, use 30% might be better. Somehow the current kinda inaudible in some parts
  3. 00:34:052 - and 00:34:577 - and 00:34:832 - Uninherited point (green line) not snapped properly
  4. 00:13:559 (4) - Move that down to prevent overlap with 00:11:983 (2) - , then readjust next spacing
  5. 00:17:500 (3,1,2,3) - Spacing error, check again
  6. 00:30:635 (1,2,3) - and 00:32:211 (1,2,3) - on them also, better follow the DS at least to reduce the confuseness
  7. 00:34:838 (3,4,5) - Same
  8. 00:39:041 (1) - Maybe move to x:224 y:212 to fix that spacing error?

    So far so good, just minor sugestion
[]
Better to follow Distance Spacing on Both Easy and Normal, to make it less confused to play for beginner
I think that's all for now, I might come again after some mods and reach the criteria, until then good luck!
ayygurl
447 posts
Joined September 2014
Topic Starter
ayygurl
Hey! Thanks for the mod! I hope the Combo Colours and the New Combos are correct but except this everything's normally good! I was just wondering, how could I change the hitsounds on the Easy diff. ? If I remember the changes I did on the map, I didn't change them, but i'm not sure, and I don't know how I could possibly change them without creating a mess haha ;D.


Thanks again,

-ayygurl
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Electoz
1,888 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
IRC
22:33 ayygurl: hey
22:34 Electoz: yes?
22:34 ayygurl: xD
22:35 ayygurl: do you give quick mods irc?
22:35 Electoz: why me lol
22:35 Electoz: give me a map then
22:35 ayygurl: xD
22:35 ayygurl: okay :D
22:36 ayygurl: btw nice to meet you :pp
22:36 ayygurl: here it is
22:36 *ayygurl is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/822694 Kazumi Totaka - Mii Plaza]
22:37 ayygurl: ty :D
22:37 Electoz: I might not find anything much though, so don't expect anything much
22:38 ayygurl: np np
22:38 Electoz: anyway, I'll be starting with easy now
22:38 ayygurl: okay :D
22:39 Electoz: you have 4 combo colours
22:40 Electoz: but the first two are the same
22:40 Electoz: so the latter
22:40 Electoz: why's that?
22:40 ayygurl: idk
22:40 ayygurl: wait
22:40 Electoz: wait
22:40 Electoz: I guess
22:40 Electoz: my pc gone mad
22:40 Electoz: hold on a minute
22:40 ayygurl: k
22:41 Electoz: just to make sure because I don't trust my pc
22:41 Electoz: your map has 4 combo colours right?
22:41 ayygurl: §yep i changed them
22:41 ayygurl: lemme show you
22:43 ayygurl: sorry for long time
22:43 ayygurl: puush is lagging lol
22:43 ayygurl: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/SpWkQF9.png
22:44 Electoz: I guess my pc didn't gone mad
22:44 ayygurl: lol
22:44 Electoz: the first two
22:44 Electoz: looks almost the same
22:45 Electoz: I couldn't tell the differnce of colours between them at first
22:45 ayygurl: we can see the difference a lot more in game
22:46 ayygurl: the picture has not very good colors
22:46 ayygurl: i dunno why
22:46 Electoz: http://postimg.org/image/47kpks1e7/
22:46 Electoz: my pc couldn't tell the difference
22:47 ayygurl: wtf
22:47 ayygurl: thats weird
22:47 Electoz: If you didn't tell that the colours are different I wouldn't have noticed
22:47 Electoz: anyway, let's put that aside
22:47 ayygurl: we can clearly see the difference on the picutre tho
22:47 ayygurl: yea xD
22:47 Electoz: keep it for now, until others mention this
22:47 ayygurl: but thanks for telling
22:47 ayygurl: kk :D
22:50 Electoz: 00:15:924 (2) - this one
22:50 Electoz: overlaps the life bar, if you test it with default skin
22:50 ayygurl: okay
22:53 Electoz: this is just in my opinion, not completely unrankable or anything
22:53 Electoz: but when you map Easy
22:53 ayygurl: nah i changed np
22:53 Electoz: try to use 1/1 divisor
22:53 Electoz: to sum it up most of the objects are on the white tick
22:54 Electoz: some of objects you put are on the red tick
22:54 Electoz: 00:22:228 (1) -  like this
22:54 Electoz: because mapping on the white tick only is easier for beginners to catch with the rhythm
22:54 Electoz: it's up to you though
22:55 Electoz: 00:34:838 (1) - this one also
22:55 Electoz: If I were you, I would extend those sliders to the next white tick
22:56 ayygurl: sooo
22:56 ayygurl: i put them to the white tick just before
22:56 Electoz: works fine too
22:57 Electoz: just make sure there aren't any DS problems when you shorten or extend sliders.
22:57 ayygurl: yea dont wor
22:57 ayygurl: worry
22:57 Electoz: seems nothing to point out for me now
22:57 Electoz: I'll go for Normal then
22:59 ayygurl: okay :D
23:00 Electoz: overall looks fine
23:00 Electoz: but
23:01 Electoz: there are some spaces that should be mapped
23:01 ayygurl: exemples?
23:01 Electoz: 00:20:915 here for an example
23:01 Electoz: it's just a small pause
23:01 Electoz: but since ar's still low it can become harder to read the next ones after the pause
23:02 Electoz: I believe that the pause there's still some sound that can still follow with.
23:02 Electoz: sry if my grammar messed up
23:02 ayygurl: np
23:02 ayygurl: im not surer
23:02 ayygurl: its kinda fucked up if i map this part
23:03 Electoz: lol
23:03 Electoz: how come
23:03 ayygurl: because
23:03 ayygurl: i dont really map the sound you hear in all the song,
23:03 ayygurl: i mean
23:03 ayygurl: the little drum thing
23:04 Electoz: just my opinion though, don't serious
23:04 Electoz: let's see, I'll do a final check here
23:06 ayygurl: :D
23:07 Electoz: are there any more tags to put in?
23:07 ayygurl: idk
23:07 ayygurl: what do you suggest
23:08 Electoz: let's see
23:08 Electoz: I'll browsing google for a sec
23:08 ayygurl: lemme upload btw new version
23:11 ayygurl: donee
23:11 ayygurl: don't forget to upload irc for a kudosu :D
23:11 Electoz: nothing found more for tags
23:12 Electoz: btw
23:12 Electoz: one last thing
23:12 ayygurl: ye
23:12 Electoz: widescreen support
23:12 Electoz: checked in Easy
23:12 Electoz: in Normal it didn't checked
23:13 Electoz: at least make those checks the smae
23:13 Electoz: *same
23:13 ayygurl: what should i put?
23:14 ayygurl: okay
23:14 ayygurl: everythings done
23:14 ayygurl: thanks :D
23:15 ayygurl: post irc plz xD
23:15 Electoz: dunno what you should put though, I don't remember that thing anymore
23:15 Electoz: lol
23:15 Electoz: you're welcome
ayygurl
447 posts
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ayygurl
Hey thank you mate :P !


-ayygurl
YellowManul
429 posts
Joined December 2010
YellowManul
hey owo
request via pm o k


Easy


00:01:213 (1) - you don't need nc here
00:20:127 (2) - fix spacing owo (0,96x is not correct)
00:21:177 - i'd add here circle here for consistency
00:51:125 - same here, i'd add 2 circles or slider here ;w;


Normal
00:01:213 (1) - same as in normal
00:05:153 (5) - spacing fix
00:07:517 (1) - ^
00:51:125 - circles/slider here please too ;w;
additions:
cs 3,6? i'd use 3,5 or 3 ;w;
btw ar 3-3,5 fits better here, but idk owo


good luck!
ayygurl
447 posts
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ayygurl
This post is useless don't ask me why.
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ayygurl
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ayygurl

YellowManul wrote:

hey owo
request via pm o k


Easy


00:01:213 (1) - you don't need nc here k.
00:20:127 (2) - fix spacing owo (0,96x is not correct) k.
00:21:177 - i'd add here circle here for consistency
00:51:125 - same here, i'd add 2 circles or slider here ;w;


Normal
00:01:213 (1) - same as in normal kk.
00:05:153 (5) - spacing fix k.
00:07:517 (1) - ^ k.
00:51:125 - circles/slider here please too ;w;
additions:
cs 3,6? i'd use 3,5 or 3 ;w; I choosed 3.5.
btw ar 3-3,5 fits better here, but idk owo 3.9 Looks nice I think ^^.


good luck! Thanks!

Just to mention, the thing with the points you mentionned I should add, I'm gonna ask #modhelp about that.


Thanks for everything!
-ayygurl
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Arphimigon
1,651 posts
Joined December 2014
Arphimigon
Dayum son.

[Easy]
Tbh this is pretty legit, I'd just suggest adding in hitsounds.
00:47:447 (1,2) - Dis diffspike, no notes like this before. Please replace with slider.

[Normal]
I see you have hitsounds but I didn't even realise they were hitsounds until I was done modding, they sound too much like a part of the song. Can you add extra soft-whistles on top?
00:12:771 (3) - Don't really like the end of this slider being so short and edgy, can you make it look neater at the end?
00:16:186 (2,3,4,5) - A bit high on the playing field and the notes not really fitting with the last curve can be a problem. Can you try making the slider here point left and this may make it all easier to play?

Pretty nice imo.
ayygurl
447 posts
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Topic Starter
ayygurl

Arphimigon wrote:

Dayum son.

[Easy]
Tbh this is pretty legit, I'd just suggest adding in hitsounds. *
00:47:447 (1,2) - Dis diffspike, no notes like this before. Please replace with slider. Okay :D.

[Normal]
I see you have hitsounds but I didn't even realise they were hitsounds until I was done modding, they sound too much like a part of the song. Can you add extra soft-whistles on top? *I added hitsounds on both difficulties! :D
00:12:771 (3) - Don't really like the end of this slider being so short and edgy, can you make it look neater at the end? Yep!
00:16:186 (2,3,4,5) - A bit high on the playing field and the notes not really fitting with the last curve can be a problem. Can you try making the slider here point left and this may make it all easier to play? I've put it a bit under.

Pretty nice imo. ty <3

Thanks Arphi :D !
-ayygurl
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Recheck

Easy
- 00:01:213 - Useless inherited point (green line), better delete that

Normal
- 00:34:838 (1,2) - Spacing error, too big
- That 5% volume on 00:34:050 - and 00:34:575 - inaudible, please rise the volume a little more, 18% good enough like you did on 00:37:990 -
- 00:46:922 (3) - Improve the flow a bit by making that (3) something like this http://puu.sh/lMErb/8acab8aa60.jpg so the flow on 00:46:922 (3,1) - more natural

Call me back after :)
ayygurl
447 posts
Joined September 2014
Topic Starter
ayygurl

Mako Sakata wrote:

Recheck

Easy
- 00:01:213 - Useless inherited point (green line), better delete that" Okay!

Normal
- 00:34:838 (1,2) - Spacing error, too big Okay!
- That 5% volume on 00:34:050 - and 00:34:575 - inaudible, please rise the volume a little more, 18% good enough like you did on 00:37:990 - Yep!
- 00:46:922 (3) - Improve the flow a bit by making that (3) something like this http://puu.sh/lMErb/8acab8aa60.jpg so the flow on 00:46:922 (3,1) - more natural Yep!

Call me back after :) :)

<3
Shiranai
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Shiranai
Bubbled!
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gg ayygurl :D
ayygurl
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ayygurl
Thanks! This is my first bubble c: .
meii18
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meii18
Placeholder c:
ayygurl
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ayygurl

ByBy13 wrote:

Placeholder c:

wat c:
meii18
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meii18

ayygurl wrote:

ByBy13 wrote:

Placeholder c:

wat c:
it means that I will mod your map c:
ayygurl
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ayygurl
Thanks! Hope I can qualify this soon hehe! c:
Kuki
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Kuki


congrats my man 8-)
ayygurl
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ayygurl
Thanks B).
Electoz
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Electoz
Wait, I thought I modded this just a few days ago. Go for it ayygurl!
ayygurl
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ayygurl
:D
Ipas
806 posts
Joined September 2013
Ipas
Hello!

[General]
  1. Disable widescreen support in entire diffs
  2. Sliderslide sound really disturbing . Please replace it using silent hitsound
  3. Sorry, for the combo colors, 1 & 2 and 3 & 4 are literally similar to each of them . It would be hard to distinguish the combo with only darken the next one a bit . I'd rather to use one of purple and one of blue, which means I only use 2 combo colors
[Easy]
  1. 00:00:162 (1,1) - For placement that result transition, this one really disturbing in my opinion . Something like this should play better
    SPOILER
[Normal]
  1. Clear!
[]
It has to be ready, but please clear things up regarding to combo colors stuff!
Good Luck!
ayygurl
447 posts
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ayygurl

Ipas wrote:

Hello! ayy :3

[General]
  1. Disable widescreen support in entire diffs kk
  2. Sliderslide sound really disturbing . Please replace it using silent hitsound yep!
  3. Sorry, for the combo colors, 1 & 2 and 3 & 4 are literally similar to each of them . It would be hard to distinguish the combo with only darken the next one a bit . I'd rather to use one of purple and one of blue, which means I only use 2 combo colors
Yeah :D.

[Easy]
  1. 00:00:162 (1,1) - For placement that result transition, this one really disturbing in my opinion . Something like this should play better Done!
    SPOILER
[Normal]
  1. Clear!
ye boi
[]
It has to be ready, but please clear things up regarding to combo colors stuff! now qualify this c:
Good Luck! Thanks :D !

tfw general has more "problems" than the normal diff.

Thanks :D.
-ayygurl
meii18
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Joined October 2013
meii18
Hello! We did some changes via IRC
10:33 ByBy13: hi
10:33 ayygurl: hey!
10:33 ByBy13: IRC?
10:34 *ByBy13 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/822694 Kazumi Totaka - Mii Plaza]
10:34 ayygurl: ow yea :D
10:34 ByBy13: oki doki
10:34 ayygurl: ty :D
10:35 ByBy13: np :)
10:35 ayygurl: tfw nothing's bad
10:35 ayygurl: xD
10:36 ByBy13: ugh I am afraid that your normal diff looks like a hard diff D:
10:36 ayygurl: holy
10:36 ayygurl: xD
10:36 ayygurl: nah its 1.82 stars olol
10:36 ayygurl: and it has no ds changes
10:37 ByBy13: I know that
10:37 ByBy13: but so many circles...you can use some 1/2sliders for example
10:37 ayygurl: wait
10:37 ayygurl: lemme show u
10:38 ayygurl: smthing i tought about it
10:38 ByBy13: oh :o
10:39 ayygurl: http://puu.sh/lO98Q/6faf3a9057.jpg
10:39 ayygurl: but
10:39 ayygurl: the thing is that i dont wanna change everything now
10:39 ByBy13: not every where
10:40 ByBy13: just to simplify the diff a little bit
10:40 ayygurl: but is it good?
10:40 ByBy13: yes
10:40 ayygurl: the thing i changed
10:40 ayygurl: yea its more esthetic
10:40 ayygurl: you know what
10:40 ayygurl: every points i think its not very good
10:40 ByBy13: yea
10:40 ayygurl: estheticly
10:41 ByBy13: ye
10:41 ByBy13: =w=)
10:41 ayygurl: im gonna change it by a slider
10:41 ByBy13: okay
10:41 ByBy13: but not really everything
10:41 ayygurl: sounds a gud idea
10:41 ByBy13: :)
10:43 ayygurl: ok
10:43 ayygurl: i changed 2 more
10:43 ayygurl: so in total
10:43 ByBy13: okay :D
10:43 ayygurl: i changed 3 times
10:43 ayygurl: it looks better know
10:43 ByBy13: oh oki
10:43 ayygurl: now*
10:43 ByBy13: update pls
10:44 ayygurl: updated
10:44 ByBy13: oki
10:45 ByBy13: 00:03:051 (5)- NC snce there are the reset of the instruments and also seems that you forgot to add  it here
10:46 ayygurl: both diffs?
10:46 *ByBy13 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/822694 Kazumi Totaka - Mii Plaza [Normal]]
10:46 ByBy13: in normal
10:47 ayygurl: k
10:49 *ByBy13 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/822694 Kazumi Totaka - Mii Plaza [Normal]]
10:49 ByBy13: 00:24:330 (1,2,3)- for improving the flow here,you can use this pattern ->http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097088
10:52 ByBy13: 00:26:431 (1,2)- try to move 2 to 181|258 for improving the flow here
10:53 ayygurl: §can you show a pic? i moved the 1 xD
10:53 ByBy13: oh wait a min
10:54 ayygurl: kk
10:54 ByBy13: 00:26:431 (1,2)- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097124 moved a little bit up now to 178|249
10:55 ByBy13: 00:30:635 (1,2)- these 2 circles can be a 1/2 slider to simplify the diff a bit let's say
10:55 ByBy13: 00:32:211 (1,2)- ^
10:55 ByBy13: don't forget to re-add the NCs there btw
10:57 ayygurl: and whistle
10:57 ayygurl: and claps
10:57 ayygurl: lol
10:57 ayygurl: kk
10:57 ByBy13: :)
10:57 ayygurl: its sad because i used to like deez triples
10:57 ayygurl: rip
10:57 ayygurl: xD
10:58 ByBy13: 00:36:939 (4,1)- The NC must be on 4 and not on 1 since there are the reset of the instruments on 4 and a NC there would be good
10:58 ayygurl: are you sure?
10:59 ayygurl: nobody told me that lol
10:59 ayygurl: bur ok
10:59 ayygurl: but*
10:59 ByBy13: yes really sure uwu
10:59 ayygurl: kk
11:03 ByBy13: 00:47:447 (1,2)- 2 circles -> 1/2 slider
11:03 ByBy13: + don't forget the NC,clap and whistle
11:03 ayygurl: can i let this one D: ?
11:03 ByBy13: mmm nop ;_
11:03 ByBy13: ;_;
11:04 ayygurl: plz
11:04 ByBy13: okay xd
11:04 ayygurl: just dis one D:
11:04 ByBy13: okay x)
11:04 ayygurl: thx :D
11:04 ByBy13: np
11:04 ByBy13: :3
11:04 ayygurl: lol
11:04 ayygurl: x)
11:04 ayygurl: ^^
11:09 ayygurl: is this okay?
11:09 ayygurl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097221
11:10 ByBy13: yeah
11:10 ayygurl: its not too high?
11:10 ByBy13: nop
11:11 ByBy13: just make the ss more better to see it more good
11:11 ayygurl: wat?
11:11 ayygurl: xD
11:12 ayygurl: 00:16:974 (3) -
11:12 ayygurl: whistle?
11:13 ayygurl: hallo?
11:13 ByBy13: no
11:13 ayygurl: xD
11:13 ByBy13: xD
11:13 ByBy13: it sounds too louder
11:13 ayygurl: okay
11:14 ByBy13: now let's see easy diff
11:14 ayygurl: k i updated
11:14 ayygurl: oh ok
11:14 ayygurl: but
11:14 ayygurl: i have to go ;_;
11:14 ByBy13: ugh
11:14 *ByBy13 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/822693 Kazumi Totaka - Mii Plaza [Easy]]
11:15 ayygurl: can u do it online + post the irc?
11:15 ByBy13: sure
11:15 ayygurl: perfect thanks
11:15 ayygurl: thanks again
11:15 ayygurl: hope someone can qualify this soon lol
11:15 ByBy13: np :)
11:15 ayygurl: see ya !
11:15 ByBy13: bye :D
11:15 ayygurl: hope i didnt did smthing wrong with dem hitsounds
11:15 ayygurl: and new combos lol
11:15 ByBy13: yeah :D

Also in easy on 00:07:517 (1,2,3)- there's clearly spacing issue and it must be fixed.Also the pattern doesn't look really good to my eyes so you can try this one -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097271

Call me back!
ayygurl
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ayygurl

ByBy13 wrote:

Hello! We did some changes via IRC
10:33 ByBy13: hi
10:33 ayygurl: hey!
10:33 ByBy13: IRC?
10:34 *ByBy13 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/822694 Kazumi Totaka - Mii Plaza]
10:34 ayygurl: ow yea :D
10:34 ByBy13: oki doki
10:34 ayygurl: ty :D
10:35 ByBy13: np :)
10:35 ayygurl: tfw nothing's bad
10:35 ayygurl: xD
10:36 ByBy13: ugh I am afraid that your normal diff looks like a hard diff D:
10:36 ayygurl: holy
10:36 ayygurl: xD
10:36 ayygurl: nah its 1.82 stars olol
10:36 ayygurl: and it has no ds changes
10:37 ByBy13: I know that
10:37 ByBy13: but so many circles...you can use some 1/2sliders for example
10:37 ayygurl: wait
10:37 ayygurl: lemme show u
10:38 ayygurl: smthing i tought about it
10:38 ByBy13: oh :o
10:39 ayygurl: http://puu.sh/lO98Q/6faf3a9057.jpg
10:39 ayygurl: but
10:39 ayygurl: the thing is that i dont wanna change everything now
10:39 ByBy13: not every where
10:40 ByBy13: just to simplify the diff a little bit
10:40 ayygurl: but is it good?
10:40 ByBy13: yes
10:40 ayygurl: the thing i changed
10:40 ayygurl: yea its more esthetic
10:40 ayygurl: you know what
10:40 ayygurl: every points i think its not very good
10:40 ByBy13: yea
10:40 ayygurl: estheticly
10:41 ByBy13: ye
10:41 ByBy13: =w=)
10:41 ayygurl: im gonna change it by a slider
10:41 ByBy13: okay
10:41 ByBy13: but not really everything
10:41 ayygurl: sounds a gud idea
10:41 ByBy13: :)
10:43 ayygurl: ok
10:43 ayygurl: i changed 2 more
10:43 ayygurl: so in total
10:43 ByBy13: okay :D
10:43 ayygurl: i changed 3 times
10:43 ayygurl: it looks better know
10:43 ByBy13: oh oki
10:43 ayygurl: now*
10:43 ByBy13: update pls
10:44 ayygurl: updated
10:44 ByBy13: oki
10:45 ByBy13: 00:03:051 (5)- NC snce there are the reset of the instruments and also seems that you forgot to add  it here
10:46 ayygurl: both diffs?
10:46 *ByBy13 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/822694 Kazumi Totaka - Mii Plaza [Normal]]
10:46 ByBy13: in normal
10:47 ayygurl: k
10:49 *ByBy13 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/822694 Kazumi Totaka - Mii Plaza [Normal]]
10:49 ByBy13: 00:24:330 (1,2,3)- for improving the flow here,you can use this pattern ->http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097088
10:52 ByBy13: 00:26:431 (1,2)- try to move 2 to 181|258 for improving the flow here
10:53 ayygurl: §can you show a pic? i moved the 1 xD
10:53 ByBy13: oh wait a min
10:54 ayygurl: kk
10:54 ByBy13: 00:26:431 (1,2)- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097124 moved a little bit up now to 178|249
10:55 ByBy13: 00:30:635 (1,2)- these 2 circles can be a 1/2 slider to simplify the diff a bit let's say
10:55 ByBy13: 00:32:211 (1,2)- ^
10:55 ByBy13: don't forget to re-add the NCs there btw
10:57 ayygurl: and whistle
10:57 ayygurl: and claps
10:57 ayygurl: lol
10:57 ayygurl: kk
10:57 ByBy13: :)
10:57 ayygurl: its sad because i used to like deez triples
10:57 ayygurl: rip
10:57 ayygurl: xD
10:58 ByBy13: 00:36:939 (4,1)- The NC must be on 4 and not on 1 since there are the reset of the instruments on 4 and a NC there would be good
10:58 ayygurl: are you sure?
10:59 ayygurl: nobody told me that lol
10:59 ayygurl: bur ok
10:59 ayygurl: but*
10:59 ByBy13: yes really sure uwu
10:59 ayygurl: kk
11:03 ByBy13: 00:47:447 (1,2)- 2 circles -> 1/2 slider
11:03 ByBy13: + don't forget the NC,clap and whistle
11:03 ayygurl: can i let this one D: ?
11:03 ByBy13: mmm nop ;_
11:03 ByBy13: ;_;
11:04 ayygurl: plz
11:04 ByBy13: okay xd
11:04 ayygurl: just dis one D:
11:04 ByBy13: okay x)
11:04 ayygurl: thx :D
11:04 ByBy13: np
11:04 ByBy13: :3
11:04 ayygurl: lol
11:04 ayygurl: x)
11:04 ayygurl: ^^
11:09 ayygurl: is this okay?
11:09 ayygurl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097221
11:10 ByBy13: yeah
11:10 ayygurl: its not too high?
11:10 ByBy13: nop
11:11 ByBy13: just make the ss more better to see it more good
11:11 ayygurl: wat?
11:11 ayygurl: xD
11:12 ayygurl: 00:16:974 (3) -
11:12 ayygurl: whistle?
11:13 ayygurl: hallo?
11:13 ByBy13: no
11:13 ayygurl: xD
11:13 ByBy13: xD
11:13 ByBy13: it sounds too louder
11:13 ayygurl: okay
11:14 ByBy13: now let's see easy diff
11:14 ayygurl: k i updated
11:14 ayygurl: oh ok
11:14 ayygurl: but
11:14 ayygurl: i have to go ;_;
11:14 ByBy13: ugh
11:14 *ByBy13 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/822693 Kazumi Totaka - Mii Plaza [Easy]]
11:15 ayygurl: can u do it online + post the irc?
11:15 ByBy13: sure
11:15 ayygurl: perfect thanks
11:15 ayygurl: thanks again
11:15 ayygurl: hope someone can qualify this soon lol
11:15 ByBy13: np :)
11:15 ayygurl: see ya !
11:15 ByBy13: bye :D
11:15 ayygurl: hope i didnt did smthing wrong with dem hitsounds
11:15 ayygurl: and new combos lol
11:15 ByBy13: yeah :D

Also in easy on 00:07:517 (1,2,3)- there's clearly spacing issue and it must be fixed.Also the pattern doesn't look really good to my eyes so you can try this one -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4097271 I changed the pattern but there wasn't any spacing error xD.

Call me back! Hell yea!

Thanks!
-ayygurl
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Shiranai
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I'll come again after by's bubble, just let me know if you update the set
ayygurl
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Mako Sakata wrote:

I'll come again after by's bubble, just let me know if you update the set
looks like it's already updated xD
Arphimigon
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ayyyyyyyyyyy girl watcha doin'?
wanna hang out at...
mii plaza?
*speaks italian*
ayygurl
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ayylmao xD
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Arphimigon wrote:

*speaks italian*
Pizza \OwO/
ayygurl
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tiramisu B)
meii18
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Recheck:

easy:
00:09:619(4,1)- The NC is supposed to be here and not on the next note since here are clearly the reset of the instruments
00:13:822(3)- Here shouldn't be a NC?
00:28:533(2,3)- The flow seems to be odd here in my opinion.I suggest to move the note (3) to 462|29 and then after this, the pattern should be like this -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4108230
00:36:939(2)- In my opinion,you can curve this slider to improve the flow with the next note because now the flow feels odd to me
00:49:549(2)- This could start from 00:49:286- (1/2 tick) as you did in normal diff but you have to remove the repeat and then to extend the slider to 00:50:600- like here -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4108284

Normal looks fine to me
Call me back and I'll rebubble it
meii18
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double post xD

Should be fine now.Also checked green lines with 18& volume and they are audible enough

Rebubbled!
ayygurl
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thx :3, mako qualify plez xD
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Placeholder to recheck, I have morning class today😩

Edit:
Regarding the combo colors, maybe you can consider to add one more color like pink pastel or other color? Because imo it doesn't feel comfortable if a map just consist of two colors, furthermore those two colors kinda looks same

Aside from that good to go, call me back after you consider that thing :)
ayygurl
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Done :P
Shiranai
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Intentional double post, Qualified!
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did irre just lose his status as the only swiss mapper
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trooth has been spoken :d
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