M4M from my queue~
Ok, that's all from me
Good luck~
[General]
- Consider converting your BG into a jpeg file to use less file size
Into tags: "ED" isn't needed since you already have "ending"
[Insane]
- 00:14:486 (3) - The repeat kinda slows down the whole pattern, so what about a circle stacked on 00:14:311 (2) - instead of the repeat?
00:23:960 (2,3) - Hm... this flow is really slow compared to the rest of your map. What about a Ctrl + G?
00:25:890 (4) - Again, that repeat makes you waste all the good flow on that part where the vocals play around a bit. I have a couple of suggestions here on how to remove the repeat and add a circle: Suggestion 1 Suggestion 2
(I prefer the second one...)
00:34:662 (5) - Putting circles stacked under the head of a slider is a bit unusual: first, because it isn't so easy to see as if it would be stacked under the tail; second, in this case you put more emphasis on 5 which is a red tick beat and less on the following white tick one.
So, in short, imo you should stack 5 under 3's tail, not head
00:42:732 (4) - Same as for all the other repeat sliders I pointed out till now. Using a circle stacked under 00:42:381 (3) - 's head would feel way better instead of the repeat
00:45:188 (2,3,4) - This pattern is really odd compared to the rest of your patterns: you used to emphasize better your notes till this point...
Imo you should put first the reverse slider and then the circle (like this). As for the pattern, I dunno tbh, since it is a bit cramped there...
01:15:013 (4) - Why this slider is with the curve pointing downwards? .-. Should it be like this?
[Light Insane]
- 00:43:785 (3,4,5) - Why do you increase spacing here? It's too much imo
01:01:504 (1) - The movement from this note to the next one is a bit hard since the slider starts on a red tick. What about stacking 1 on top of the slider?
Consider also adding a Finish on it
Hm.. nothing else to say here, solid and clean diff
[Hard]
- 01:03:785 (3) - I'd rather use circles here, otherwise the last beat gets wasted
01:12:732 (1,3) - Is this even readable? I don't think so... Please, move it somewhere else, since it is even unrakable probably
01:21:855 (3) - Imo you should remove the last 2 repeats and add a circle, since you never used so many repeats on a slider before
[Normal]
- 00:05:363 (1) - Maybe move it to around 360,183 to give it a more curvy feeling with the next slider
[Easy]
- Nothing relevant here
Ok, that's all from me
Good luck~