Kloyd wrote:

• Insane

1. 00:13:785 (1,2,3) - keeping same spacing might be good http://puu.sh/l1MA9/b43b55677d.jpg 음 거리가 1.4가 아니게 되지만 보기는 그게 좋으니 고쳐봤습니다.
2. ofc u should blanket this again if u going to fix my mod 00:15:013 (1) - 음 2만 옮겼으니 딱히 재블랭킷을 할 필요는?
3. 00:32:732 (5) - i'd like to NC this kind of stronk-special sounds. 난이도별로 싹 그렇게 수정해봤습니다.
4. 01:03:521 - a sound on here is stronk but u missed. try this rhythm and put notes again if u want to put emphasis on that 'kira!' sound http://puu.sh/l1MG4/9416cca6f1.jpg 사실 전 그 키라 소리가 정확히 거기에서 시작한다고 할 수 있을지 애매하다고 생각하기는 한데, 스타트릭 님도 지적하셨던 바가 있어서 대략 그렇게 고쳐봤습니다.
5. 01:11:153 (1) - dongseon from 4 to 1 is in some way weird imo. try this http://puu.sh/l1MKc/9f78712cb6.jpg or http://puu.sh/l1MLH/4cef77f996.jpg 전자로 고쳐보았습니다.

• Light Insane

1. 00:32:732 (3) - same. check the mod on insane 수정
2. 00:53:083 (1,1,1,1) - i think gradually increasing SV (about 0.25x) can be good too 앞뒤의 sv 차가 너무 작아서 넣는 게 크게 임팩트가 있을까 싶어서 안 넣었었는데... 0.25씩 차이나게 해서 앞뒤의 속도를 벗어나는 수준으로 하긴 좀 그렇고 앞의 sv에서 시작해서 뒤의 sv로 끝나게 해보았습니다.
3. and fix some of your blankets. I think your style fits with the strictly-put-blankets. 음 그건 저도 동의하긴 하는데... 고치라는 부분이 마주보는 1/2 슬라이더들이라면 사실 조금 애매한 게 그런 곳을 전부 상호담요로 만들면 커브가 너무 심해지는 느낌이 나서 별로 같아서요. 그 외의 부분이라면 잘 모르겠는데 어떤 곳들을 말씀하시는 건가요?

• Hard

1. 00:14:311 (2) - better overlap is here http://puu.sh/l1N1Z/bff3b50f99.jpg 슬라 중간 지점에 오버랩 되게 하는 걸 말씀하시는 거라면 수정했습니다.
2. 01:03:521 - sound definitely begins with here. considering the diff is hard, this one can be alternative http://puu.sh/l1N5k/79e76c94be.jpg 고쳤습니다. 덧붙여 라이트 인센도 고쳤습니다. 그런데 박자가 상당히 이레귤러해서 썩 마음에 들지는 않네요 ㅠ
3. 01:13:960 (3) - rather stack here at the end of 01:12:732 (1) - 그건 좀 더 생각을 해봐야겠는데 지금 이게 100% 거리 고정인 하드인지라 조정을 하려면 상당히 많은 것을 뒤바꿔야 하기 때문에... 일단 제 생각에 지금 상태도 큰 문제는 없으니 보류할게요.

nothing to write down 'bout easy and normal. gl

Fast wrote:

1:1 req

Hard:

1. 00:06:065 (3,1) - , 00:08:872 (3,1) - , 01:23:258 (3,1) - , 01:26:065 (3,1) - 리버스를 두개또는 그 이상 넣는건 개인적으로 추천드리지는 않습니다.. 노래에 맞다고 하더라도 저는 1/2 슬라 두개로 나누거나 노트 - 1/2슬라(+리버스) 박자정도로 배치할거같네요. 일단은 보류하겠습니다. 물론 첫 판엔 좀 헷갈릴 수도 있으나 이건 정말 딱 한번만 해봐도 (하드를 플레이할 유저라면) 누구나 적응할 수 있는 문제고, 무엇보다 음악에 너무 잘 맞기 때문에...
2. 00:53:609 (1) - 이거하고 00:54:662 (1) - 이거는 뉴콤 빼셔서 뉴콤스팸을 자제 (?) 최근에 어떤 청룡 맵을 모딩했었는데 노말이었는데도 1개씩 스팸해서 강조하는 것을 보았습니다. 그건 이거보다도 딱히 강조할 만한 그런 건 아니었던... 2개씩 묶기엔 리듬이 너무 1개씩 딱딱 나누어떨어져서 그다지 바꾸고 싶진 않네요.
3. 00:55:363 (2) - nazi지만 이전의 노트와 맞게 약간 꼬리를 올려보시는것도 좋을것같네요 http://puu.sh/l3kmD/6f223d6fac.jpg 수정

Light Insane:

1. 01:16:942 (1) - , 01:17:469 (3) - 약간 모양을 흐름이랑 이어가는건 어떤가여 http://puu.sh/l3kJ0/8a5e6adbb2.jpg 모양/흐름 지적이라면 달게 받겠습니다. 수정

Insane:

1. 00:14:311 (2) - 갑자기 아래로 확 내려간다는 느낌이 너무강한데 좀 올려주시는것도 좋을것같네요 음 슬라이더의 특성상 보통 끝까지 안 밀고 다음 노트로 건너가기 때문에 특히 이게 역방향인 경우는 더 작게 느껴지더군요. 실제로 플레이할 땐 그렇게 심하게 느껴보지 못해서 일단 보류하겠습니다.
2. 00:59:574 (4) - ctrl G 하고 00:59:925 (1) - 이거 위치를 x344 y160정도로 옮기는것도 나쁘지않을것같네요 수정

eINess wrote:

Legend

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Green = Strongly recommended
Bold = Unrankable issue

[Insane]

1. 피니쉬를 강조하고 싶으신거라면 상관은없습니다만 01:06:592 - 01:06:679 - 이 두곳에서 들리는 드럼을 무시해서 많이 아쉽네요. 무엇보다 피니쉬를 강조하실 생각이셧다면 01:06:767 (6,1) - 이것도 떨어트려놓으셔야 좀더 명확한 강조가 됩니다. 음... 말씀하신 대로 피니시 강조용이고 지금 상태도 딱히 플레이할 때 별로 어색하지 않아서 그대로 두고 싶네요.
2. 01:31:855 (2,3,4) - 이구간에 강조할만한건 아무리 들어도 드럼사운드 뿐인데 드럼사운드랑은 전혀 어울리지않네요. 01:31:855 (2,3) - 의 DS 보다 01:32:030 (3,4) - 의 DS 가 길어야 노래와 맞습니다. 강조의 측면이라면 그렇긴 한데 여긴 그렇게까지 철저하게 구분하기보단 모양에 좀 더 치중하는 쪽으로 본다면, 지금 상태도 괜찮다고 생각합니다. 말씀하신대로 ds를 조정하면서 재미있는 모양도 생성할 수 있는 좋은 방법이 떠오르지 않네요.
3. 01:28:171 - 이 초록선 지우시고 01:27:820 - 이 초록선 변속 1.10x 로 바꾸세요. 앗 실수했네요. 수정했습니다.

[Light Insane]

1. 00:53:083 (1,1,1,1) - 이런식으로 짧은 콤보잉은 드레인에 너무 영향력이 심해 좋지 않습니다. 인센과 굳이 맞추실 필요가 없을뿐더러 리듬 자체도 다릅니다. 콤보 전부 풀어주세요. 그렇기는 한데... 일단은 각각이 다 슬라변속이 있어서... BN이 풀라고 하면 풀겠습니다.
2. 00:59:925 (1) - 이놈 테일이랑 00:59:574 (2) - 이거 테일이랑 스텍 다시 봐주세요. 의도하셧다고는 보기 어렵네요. 으 이거 이상하네요... 분명 에디터가 자동 스택해주는 게 좌표가 어긋나서 수동으로 조절한 다음에 나갔다 와보면 다르게 또 틀어져 있고... 그냥 에디터가 해주는 대로 놓고 놔둬볼게요...
3. 01:03:434 - 이쪽도 충분히 들리는 리듬인데 노트 비니까 리듬 자체만 두고봐도 엇박이라 난이도가 꽤나 올라가네요. 상위 인센난이도에서는 엇박이 아닌데 불구하고 인센에서 쓰실만한 명확한 이유가 있으신가요? 단지 ' 키라 ' 이것만 따라간다면 구맵에서 보컬만 따라가는 그런 이상한 패턴과 다를 바 없다고 봅니다. 01:06:241 (3,4,5) - 이쪽에랑도 비교 되고요... 흠 그것은 클로이드 님이 추천해주신 박자였지만... 바꿔보았습니다.
4. 01:21:855 (5) - 리핏 한번 뺴주시고 01:22:206 - 이쪽에 서클 추가하시는 방법으로 힛사를 사용해서 노래를 강조해주셨으면 더 좋았을탠데.. 많이 아쉽네요. 고쳐 보았습니다.

[Hard]

1. 텟플의 기준중 가장 중요한것은 첫플카로 100%가 가능한가 입니다. 그의 반에서 하드를 플레이하는 유저들( 대충 저랑 비슷한 랭킹에 플레이어 )에 한에서 00:06:065 (3,1) - 나 00:08:872 (3,1) - 는 사실상 무난하게 플레이하기는 많이 까다롭습니다.
   몇가지 이유로 들자면
   첫번쨰로 사진처럼 슬라의 헤드 및 테일이 붙어있습니다. 일정한 거리가 떨어져있다면 상관이없지만 지금에 SV에 한에서 매우 좋지 않습니다.
   둘쨰로 노래와 어울리신다고하셨습니다만 그건 어디까지나 보컬하나일뿐입니다. 배경노래에 깔리는 다른 소리 ( 00:05:890 - , 00:06:592 - 등등 ) 이소리와 함꼐 맞춰주신다면 휠씬 더 노래와 어울린다고 장담합니다.
   고치셧다면 뒷쪽에도 똑같이 01:03:521 (2,3,1) - 01:26:065 (3,1) - 리매핑해주시면 될거같네요. 정말 여기는 고치기 싫었지만... 왜냐하면 제가 오래 전에 기존 랭크맵(https://osu.ppy.sh/b/129510)을 플레이하면서, 저렇게 2회 리버스 슬라로 표현해준 것이 소름 끼치게 좋았고 무한 리트라이가 보장되는 오스에서, 시작하자마자 헷갈릴 수 있는 요소가 하나 나온 것이 문제가 되어야 한다니 그것도 개인적으로는 동의를 못 하겠지만, 요즘 매핑계에선 1회 시도 100%가 기준이 되는 것 같으니, 고쳐보긴 했지만 갠적으로 넘 재미가 없어보이네요... 그리고 저기에 그런 소리들이 있는 줄은 몇 번이나 다시 들어보고서야 처음 알았는데 사실 그런 거 플레이하면서 캐치할 사람은 거의 없다고 봅니다... 보컬만 제대로 따라갔다면 충분하다고 생각해요.
2. 00:23:434 - 앞쪽에선 보컬도 잘 맞춰주셧는데 갑자기 보컬을 무시하시는 이유를 모르곘네요. 거의 라이트 하드급으로 짠지라 체인을 끊느라고 거기 말고도 뺴놓은 곳이 좀 더 있는데 일단 메워보았습니다.
3. 00:53:083 (1,1,1,1) - 라이트인센과 동일한 이유입니다. 여기는 뺴보았습니다.
4. 01:03:521 (2) - 이것도 라이트인센과 같은 의견이라고 보시면 될거같네요. 결국 클로이드 님이 추천해주신 박자들은 저세상으로...

1. Song Folder: Your mp3 has a bitrate of 320kbps which is unrankable. Even though the file identifier states that the bitrate is 160kbps, examination of the spectrum indicates that this is not the case. I whipped up a "true" 192kbps version, which you can get HERE
   
2. Song Setup: No issues
3. Metadata: You can add "Oreimo" to tags, as this is how most western audiences shorten the anime's title, as well as the literal(ish) english translation, "My Little Sister Can't Be This Cute" and "Kanako Kurusu", the character Tamura Yukari voices in the anime
4. Timing: No issues
5. Hitsounds: No issues
6. AImod: No issues

1. 00:12:381 (3,1) - The repeat feels a little weird here, since the prominent note is actually 1/2 earlier for the synth, rather than on the white tick as you have it currently. Plus, the prominent downbeat is underemphasised as an unlickable slidertail. You can get around both problems by shortening (3) to a 3/2 repeating slider, and then removing (1) and making a 1/1 slider at 00:13:785
2. 00:15:188 (3,1) - ^
3. 01:00:100 (3,1) - The vocal ends on the reverse arrow of (3), so it would be better to remove the repeat and then either add a circle at 01:01:504 or remove 01:01:855 (1) and make a 1/1 slider
4. 01:11:328 (3,4) - The tail of (3) and the circle (4) are equally prominent, so it seems strange for one to be clickable and not the other. (3) could be shortened to a 1/1 slider and a circle added where (3) currently ends
5. 01:18:346 (5) - An NC here would be nice, as this combo is a little long for an easiest diff.
6. 01:19:749 (1) - Arguably the most prominent note in the whole song and you made it a slider end! D: Try removing the repeat and extending this into a 3/1 slider, then adding a circle or 1/1 slider (by removing 01:21:504 (2) -) where the current slider ends. Two circles would be a nice added challenge to finish the kiai here if you didn't use it in the previous suggestions
7. 01:32:206 (1) - This spinner is really short at only 1.2 seconds long, and is likely to catch out a lot of newer players who will be unable to react to it in time and may even fail to complete it. Especially annoying considering this is the last object in the map! I know it's not ideal, but I'd recommend lengthening the spinner to start at 01:30:978 or simply replacing it with a slider instead.

1. 00:53:083 (1) - Not really wrong, but kinda plain for the buildup to a kiai, and it would be nice if 00:55:188 was clickable. Try splitting this into two 3/2 sliders and a circle to provide more of that "buildup" feel leading into the kiai, especially since the pitch increases at 00:54:135
2. 01:01:504 (1,2,3) - The quick change from stacked 1/2 to spaced 1/2 circles might be too difficult for a player of this level to read and hit accurately without slider accuracy leniency. Since 01:02:556 (4) is a relatively weak beat, t might be better to combine 01:02:206 (3,4) into a 1/1 slider, as this is a pattern you've used throughout the diff that will be familiar to the player
3. 01:02:907 (5) - Consider removing the repeat and adding a circle instead for the prominent vocal sound
4. 01:31:855 (2,1) - 1/4 beat spacing between note+spinner isn't really sufficient for a Normal diff, especially at a relatively high BPM like this and when the spinner is so short anyway. I'd replace (2) with a circle on the first red tick, then make the spinner start where (2) currently ends, but this may vary depending on what you did in the previous diff in response to the spinner suggestion there

1. 00:33:083 (2,1) - Some potential for confusion here, since up to this point all of your stacks have 1/2 beat spacing, NC'ed or otherwise, but this one uses a 1/1 space. Since (1) is a pretty prominent note, I'd recommend unstacking here for easier readability.
2. 00:43:258 (1,2,3) - The flow here is a little sharp since the pattern is somewhat "flattened", making the movement between (2,3) a little weird. I'd try making these into a more even triangular shape to improve the flow, something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3904668
3. 01:06:767 (4,1) - Same as 00:33:083 (2,1)
4. 01:26:065 (3,4) - Opportunity to create a blanket here without much change in flow or positioning

1. 00:10:978 (1,2) - Symmetry is a tiny bit out here, try moving the tail of (2) to [138,206]
2. 00:14:311 (2,3,1) - Flow is a little weird here, since you have to zig-zag up and then down again to move into the slider (1). I'd move (3) to the top instead, e.g. [312,20], then move (1) to the right and curve slightly more to maintain the original spacings and the flow into 00:15:539 (2)
3. 00:16:504 - You haven't used many triples in this diff, whilst there are quite a number in the Insane. Here would be a nice place to add one because of the guitar riff
4. 00:43:960 (4,5) - Might be nice to rotate this anticlockwise slightly so that the tails of (5) and 00:43:434 (2) stack
5. 00:53:083 (1,1,1,1) - Since you're not using any crazy patterns or greatly increasing the spacing here, I don't feel these NCs are necessary. It's very similar to the pattern you used in the Hard diff, just with slightly bigger spacing, and you didn't use an NC there
6. 00:58:697 (1) - Flow on this repeat slider changes quite sharply and plays a bit awkwardly. Since you're returning back the way you came and you have plenty of space to play with, it would be nice to reduce the curve on this for a less sharp movement
7. 01:28:171 (1,2) - Imperfect symmetry doesn't get past me, tail of (2) to [140,268] please (^:

1. 00:17:995 (1,2,3) - Reversing the direction of flow seems kinda weird here to me, something like this plays more naturally: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3904786
2. 00:26:767 (2,1) - 00:27:644 (8,3) - Might just be me, but it looks like these stacks are a tiny bit out. Small adjustments to the slider bodies should fix this if necessary
3. 01:02:381 (4) - Not sure why this note has such as large spacing, it has relatively equal prominence with the surrounding notes. Making a star with 01:02:206 (3,4,5,6) and the tail of 01:01:679 (2) might work nicely, but if you just want a quick fix, move (4) down and probably to the left slightly

JBHyperion wrote:

Mod by request

General Comments:

1. Song Folder: Your mp3 has a bitrate of 320kbps which is unrankable. Even though the file identifier states that the bitrate is 160kbps, examination of the spectrum indicates that this is not the case. I whipped up a "true" 192kbps version, which you can get HERE Thanks!
   
2. Song Setup: No issues
3. Metadata: You can add "Oreimo" to tags, as this is how most western audiences shorten the anime's title, as well as the literal(ish) english translation, "My Little Sister Can't Be This Cute" and "Kanako Kurusu", the character Tamura Yukari voices in the anime lol I wonder how I just forgot to add Oreimo lol I even search for maps with that name... xD Very long tags btw
4. Timing: No issues
5. Hitsounds: No issues
6. AImod: No issues

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Easy

1. 00:12:381 (3,1) - The repeat feels a little weird here, since the prominent note is actually 1/2 earlier for the synth, rather than on the white tick as you have it currently. Plus, the prominent downbeat is underemphasised as an unlickable slidertail. You can get around both problems by shortening (3) to a 3/2 repeating slider, and then removing (1) and making a 1/1 slider at 00:13:785 Yea, fixed.
2. 00:15:188 (3,1) - ^ ^
3. 01:00:100 (3,1) - The vocal ends on the reverse arrow of (3), so it would be better to remove the repeat and then either add a circle at 01:01:504 or remove 01:01:855 (1) and make a 1/1 slider Fixed.
4. 01:11:328 (3,4) - The tail of (3) and the circle (4) are equally prominent, so it seems strange for one to be clickable and not the other. (3) could be shortened to a 1/1 slider and a circle added where (3) currently ends But I don't want to make 3 succesive clicks here, so one of them should be clickable and not the other one. Will consider it afterwards.
5. 01:18:346 (5) - An NC here would be nice, as this combo is a little long for an easiest diff. NCed 01:16:942 (1) - instead.
6. 01:19:749 (1) - Arguably the most prominent note in the whole song and you made it a slider end! D: Try removing the repeat and extending this into a 3/1 slider, then adding a circle or 1/1 slider (by removing 01:21:504 (2) -) where the current slider ends. Two circles would be a nice added challenge to finish the kiai here if you didn't use it in the previous suggestions Yup, accepted this one.
7. 01:32:206 (1) - This spinner is really short at only 1.2 seconds long, and is likely to catch out a lot of newer players who will be unable to react to it in time and may even fail to complete it. Especially annoying considering this is the last object in the map! I know it's not ideal, but I'd recommend lengthening the spinner to start at 01:30:978 or simply replacing it with a slider instead. I want to put at least one spinner anywhere but seems like I have no choice. Moving that slider into earlier place feels too werid, so I just replaced it with a slider. (Now the first player gets a permenant #1 on this xDDDDD)

Normal

1. 00:53:083 (1) - Not really wrong, but kinda plain for the buildup to a kiai, and it would be nice if 00:55:188 was clickable. Try splitting this into two 3/2 sliders and a circle to provide more of that "buildup" feel leading into the kiai, especially since the pitch increases at 00:54:135 Ok, fixed.
2. 01:01:504 (1,2,3) - The quick change from stacked 1/2 to spaced 1/2 circles might be too difficult for a player of this level to read and hit accurately without slider accuracy leniency. Since 01:02:556 (4) is a relatively weak beat, t might be better to combine 01:02:206 (3,4) into a 1/1 slider, as this is a pattern you've used throughout the diff that will be familiar to the player Fixed.
3. 01:02:907 (5) - Consider removing the repeat and adding a circle instead for the prominent vocal sound Fixed.
4. 01:31:855 (2,1) - 1/4 beat spacing between note+spinner isn't really sufficient for a Normal diff, especially at a relatively high BPM like this and when the spinner is so short anyway. I'd replace (2) with a circle on the first red tick, then make the spinner start where (2) currently ends, but this may vary depending on what you did in the previous diff in response to the spinner suggestion there Fixed.

Hard

1. 00:33:083 (2,1) - Some potential for confusion here, since up to this point all of your stacks have 1/2 beat spacing, NC'ed or otherwise, but this one uses a 1/1 space. Since (1) is a pretty prominent note, I'd recommend unstacking here for easier readability. I think they should be able to read different stack gaps already. And I think 00:33:434 (1) - is less prominent than 00:33:083 (2) - so having same jumps (actually not even a jump) would be too soft. Instead I turned the flow there, and it works pretty okay for me.
2. 00:43:258 (1,2,3) - The flow here is a little sharp since the pattern is somewhat "flattened", making the movement between (2,3) a little weird. I'd try making these into a more even triangular shape to improve the flow, something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3904668 Umm I used different pattern here instead.
3. 01:06:767 (4,1) - Same as 00:33:083 (2,1) Same.
4. 01:26:065 (3,4) - Opportunity to create a blanket here without much change in flow or positioning Why didn't you point 00:08:872 (3) - this out as well? It's 100% copy&paste and just Ctrl+J xD Fixed both.

Other than that, really solid diff, nice work :3

Light Insane

1. 00:10:978 (1,2) - Symmetry is a tiny bit out here, try moving the tail of (2) to [138,206]
2. 00:14:311 (2,3,1) - Flow is a little weird here, since you have to zig-zag up and then down again to move into the slider (1). I'd move (3) to the top instead, e.g. [312,20], then move (1) to the right and curve slightly more to maintain the original spacings and the flow into 00:15:539 (2)
3. 00:16:504 - You haven't used many triples in this diff, whilst there are quite a number in the Insane. Here would be a nice place to add one because of the guitar riff
4. 00:43:960 (4,5) - Might be nice to rotate this anticlockwise slightly so that the tails of (5) and 00:43:434 (2) stack
5. 00:53:083 (1,1,1,1) - Since you're not using any crazy patterns or greatly increasing the spacing here, I don't feel these NCs are necessary. It's very similar to the pattern you used in the Hard diff, just with slightly bigger spacing, and you didn't use an NC there
6. 00:58:697 (1) - Flow on this repeat slider changes quite sharply and plays a bit awkwardly. Since you're returning back the way you came and you have plenty of space to play with, it would be nice to reduce the curve on this for a less sharp movement
7. 01:28:171 (1,2) - Imperfect symmetry doesn't get past me, tail of (2) to [140,268] please (^: Fixed all here, thanks

Insane

1. 00:17:995 (1,2,3) - Reversing the direction of flow seems kinda weird here to me, something like this plays more naturally: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3904786 It's fine for me, hmm...
2. 00:26:767 (2,1) - 00:27:644 (8,3) - Might just be me, but it looks like these stacks are a tiny bit out. Small adjustments to the slider bodies should fix this if necessary I know that, and many of those stacks are a little off, because the editor sucks and sometimes make those off-stacks. A weird thing is that sometimes it moves them by itself AFTER I fix them and save and quit. Fixed this one anyway.
3. 01:02:381 (4) - Not sure why this note has such as large spacing, it has relatively equal prominence with the surrounding notes. Making a star with 01:02:206 (3,4,5,6) and the tail of 01:01:679 (2) might work nicely, but if you just want a quick fix, move (4) down and probably to the left slightly Reduced it a little, but I think this amount of distance gap doesn't matter much when it makes a decent shape.

This is all from me. Hopefully you find this mod helpful, but if you have any questions, feel free to get back to me and I'll do what I can to help.

Good luck! (:

K i A i wrote:

늦어서 죄송...... 은 제가 좋아하는 노래여서 빨리 모딩 해드려야지 했는데 까먹고 있었네요 ㅠㅠ

단독 풀맵셋 위엄 ㄷㄷㄷㄷ 한 번 저만의 랭맵셋을 만들어 보고 싶어서... ㅎㅎ




[이지]
00:06:767 (3) - x축 중심으로 뒤집어놓은 모양은 어떤가요? 에 조금 흐름이 안 좋아질 거 같은데... 맵 자체가 대칭형이 아니라서요.
00:10:276 (4) - 굳이 상관은 없지만 슬라 끝 부분에 피니시 하나 추가해보는건 어떤가요? 그 다음에 바로 피니시 사운드가 한 번 더 있어서 조금 시끄러울 거 같습니다. 클랩만으로도 순간적인 강조가 가능하고 저 음 자체가 가장 세다기보다는 그 뒤로 이어지는 구간에 들어가기까지 최대로 긴장도를 높여주는 음이라고 생각해서요.
00:54:662 (2) - 슬라이더 마지막 부분에 피니시 사운드를 제거해보세요! 음 그것도 좀 이상한데요... ㅠ 다른 난이도들도 다 똑같이 이렇게 맞췄고...
01:27:469 (4) - 여기도 위에서 말한것처럼 슬라 끝 부분에 피니시 사운드 추가해보는건 어떤가요? 이것도 ㄴㄴ요...




[노멀]
00:05:363 (1) - 다음에 나오는 2번노트보다 아래에 위치하게 하는건 어떤가요? 커서 흐름에도 더 적당하게 맞을 것 같고, 해당 구간에서는 보컬의 음도 2번 슬라이더 시작점에서 가장 높은 부분이니까 이렇게 처리하는게 더 자연스러울 것 같아요 ㅋㅋ 넵 수정했어요~
00:10:276 (5) - 이 부분도 이지에서 언급한 것처럼 슬라이더 마지막 부분에 피니시 추가해보시는건 어때요? 이지랑 마찬가지로 ㄴㄴ요
00:19:399 (1,2,3) - 따로 드럼 사운드로 맞춘게 아니라 기본 사운드를 사용하는거니까, 노래의 강조 부분이랑 맞게 슬라이더 시작 부분과 끝 부분 다 피니시 사운드를 추가해주는게 좋을 것 같아요~ 이게 조금 애매한데, 거기를 다 추가할 경우 00:21:153 - 00:21:328 - 에도 같이 들어가야 어색하지가 않아요. 그런데 여기를 전부 피니시를 넣어버리면 또 너무 시끄럽고... 그래서 일단은 좀 보류할게요.
00:20:978 (4) - 이 슬라이더의 경우에도 슬라이더 마지막 부분에 피니시 사운드를 추가해주면 곡이랑 딱 맞아 떨어져요~! 글쎄요 저는 00:21:153 - 에도 같이 들어가야 쓸만하다고 생각하는데 위에서 말씀드린 것처럼 너무 시끄러워져서...
00:55:188 (3) - 피니시를 빼보세요! 전 있는 게 더 좋아보여요 ㅎㅎ
01:27:469 (5) - 언급했던 것처럼 마지막 부분에 피니시 추가는 어떤가요~? 마찬가지로 ㄴㄴ요~
01:31:328 (1) - 시작 부분에 클랩 추가!
또는, 01:31:328 (1,2) - 1번 슬라이더 마지막 부분에 클랩, 2번 노트에 클랩 추가도 괜찮아요~~ 이쪽으로 변경해봤어요~




[하드]
00:05:363 (1) - 얘도 일부러 이렇게 배치하신 것 같은데, 곡의 흐름에 따라서 2번 노트보다 더 아래에 위치하게 하는것도 괜찮아보여요~~ 대략 x:88, y:304정도? 일단은 화면 중앙 쪽에서 시작하고 싶고, 물 흐르듯이 흐르는 것보다는 보컬이 시작되는 00:05:539 - 를 강조해주기 위해서 흐름을 꺾어주는 것도 좋다고 생각해요. 그리고 이부분이 통째로 뒷부분과 복붙과 뒤집기라 이걸 바꾸면 뒤쪽 배치가 애매해져서요 ㅋㅋ
00:16:416 (1) - 곡과 크게 관련이 있는 부분은 아니지만, 히트사운드 자체가 노래에 딱 맞도록 맞춰진 사운드를 사용하는게 아니니까, 강조를 위해서 슬라이더 시작 부분에 피니시 사운드를 추가해주는것도 나쁘지 않다고 생각해요~ 음 이것도 제가 실제 칭 하는 소리가 들리는 00:16:592 - 에 노트를 넣었다면 그쪽에 넣었을텐데, 그보다 반 박자 빨리 조용한 곳에서 피니시 사운드를 튕기고 싶진 않네요.
00:19:399 (1,2,3,1) - 얘네들은 노멀에서 언급했던 것처럼 똑같이 해주시면 좋을 것 같아요! 노말에서 했던 것처럼... 거절을 ㅠㅠ
00:22:907 (3) - Ctrl + <를 적용시키는건 어떤가요? 물론 위치는 똑같이 해서여 ㅋㅋ 담요 때문에 살짝 더 틀었지만 수정했습니다~
00:55:188 (1) - 피니시 제거~ 여기도 거절~
01:22:556 (1) - 피니시 추가! 허허 여기를 빼먹었었네요... 수정
01:27:820 (4) - ^ ^^^^^^^
01:31:328 (2,3) - 얘네도 노멀에서 언급했던 것처럼 같은 사운드 패턴을 적용시키는건 어떤가요? 수정





[라이트 인세인]
00:10:627 (4) - 피니시 추가? ㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴ
00:12:206 (1,3) - 서로 대칭형으로 만들어보는건 어떤가요? 그러면 더 이뻐보일 것 같아요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ 수정~
00:19:399 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 마찬가지로 지금까지 언급했던 것처럼 같은 사운드 패턴을 넣어주세요~ 일~단은 쭉! 보류~
00:36:241 (1) - Ctrl + G는 어떤가요? 점프가 커질 것 같기도 하지만, 지금까지의 패턴들을 보면 그렇게 큰 편은 아닌 것 같기도 하고... 너무 높으면 00:37:118 (2,1) - 노트들을 조절해서 좀 낮추는 편이 더 좋을 것 같아요 ㅋㅋ 음 흐름이 별로 마음엔 안 드네요...
00:55:188 (1) - 피니시 제거! ㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴ
01:27:820 (4) - 피니시 추가? ㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴ
01:30:978 (1) - 시작 부분 or 마지막 부분에 클랩 추가
01:31:504 (2,3) - 바로 앞에 1번 슬라이더에서 시작부분에 클랩을 추가했다면 이 두 노트에도 클랩 추가 수정했고 이지 노말 하드도 다 똑같이 맞췄어요.






[인센]
00:10:628 (2) - 피니시? ㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴ
00:16:592 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시! 자꾸 이런 걸 빼먹네요 ㅠ 수정
00:19:574 (2,2,2,3) - 피니시 추가 마찬가지로 ㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴ
00:55:188 (1) - 피니시 제거~ ㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴ
01:01:504 (1) - 피니시 추가? 노래에서 별로 칭 하는 소리가 안 들려서 안 넣었던 건데 추가해봤습니다.
01:27:821 (2) - ^ ㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴ
01:31:328 (3) - 클랩을 추가하거나 또는 01:30:978 (1) - 클랩 추가
01:31:504 (1,2) - 만약 01:30:978 (1) - 에 클랩을 추가했다면 이 두 노트에도 클랩 추가 앞과 마찬가지로 수정!







허접한 모딩 죄송합니다..ㅠㅠ
잘 만드셨어요 bb
Good luck

MrSergio wrote:

M4M from my queue~

[General]

• Consider converting your BG into a jpeg file to use less file size But jpeg is a damaging compressed type, so doesn't it hurt the quality a little? o3o
  
  Into tags: "ED" isn't needed since you already have "ending" But en != ed lol

[Insane]

• 00:14:486 (3) - The repeat kinda slows down the whole pattern, so what about a circle stacked on 00:14:311 (2) - instead of the repeat? Nice suggestion
  
  00:23:960 (2,3) - Hm... this flow is really slow compared to the rest of your map. What about a Ctrl + G? Fixed.
  
  00:25:890 (4) - Again, that repeat makes you waste all the good flow on that part where the vocals play around a bit. I have a couple of suggestions here on how to remove the repeat and add a circle: Suggestion 1 Suggestion 2
  (I prefer the second one...) Yeah, followed the second suggestion.
  
  00:34:662 (5) - Putting circles stacked under the head of a slider is a bit unusual: first, because it isn't so easy to see as if it would be stacked under the tail; second, in this case you put more emphasis on 5 which is a red tick beat and less on the following white tick one.
  So, in short, imo you should stack 5 under 3's tail, not head Oh I planned to fix that but I kept forgetting lol
  
  00:42:732 (4) - Same as for all the other repeat sliders I pointed out till now. Using a circle stacked under 00:42:381 (3) - 's head would feel way better instead of the repeat The flow is going in a way that's not originally intended but yeah... fixed that.
  
  00:45:188 (2,3,4) - This pattern is really odd compared to the rest of your patterns: you used to emphasize better your notes till this point...
  Imo you should put first the reverse slider and then the circle (like this). As for the pattern, I dunno tbh, since it is a bit cramped there... I don't know if it works now... but remapped that part.
  
  01:15:013 (4) - Why this slider is with the curve pointing downwards? .-. Should it be like this? I still have too much to learn Thanks for the suggestion.

[Light Insane]

• 00:43:785 (3,4,5) - Why do you increase spacing here? It's too much imo Uhh reduced it a little, but I think it's worth to be emphasized?
  
  01:01:504 (1) - The movement from this note to the next one is a bit hard since the slider starts on a red tick. What about stacking 1 on top of the slider? I think both (1) and (2) has their own impact so I don't want to stack them, also it's a Light 'Insane', so hitting on a red tick shouldn't be that hard imo.
  Consider also adding a Finish on it Fixed that on all diffs.
  
  Hm.. nothing else to say here, solid and clean diff

[Hard]

• 01:03:785 (3) - I'd rather use circles here, otherwise the last beat gets wasted Since this is kind of an 'easy' Hard, having 01:03:434 (2) - already makes it a little hard to read. Putting 2 circles right after it would be too intense and not very worth emphasized compared to the rest of the map.
  
  01:12:732 (1,3) - Is this even readable? I don't think so... Please, move it somewhere else, since it is even unrakable probably I think I was too lazy to fix it lol... sorry about that. Stacked that on the tail of (1) and adjusted the distance again.
  
  01:21:855 (3) - Imo you should remove the last 2 repeats and add a circle, since you never used so many repeats on a slider before The five sounds are all important imo, with the first 4 being equally strong. I kinda want to keep this if it's not very dangerous. But maybe if a BN points that out I may should fix that...

[Normal]

• 00:05:363 (1) - Maybe move it to around 360,183 to give it a more curvy feeling with the next slider Hmm yeah fixed.

[Easy]

• Nothing relevant here

Ok, that's all from me
Good luck~

appleeaterx wrote:

Hi Doyak!
from in-game request :3/

:idea: General

* Found it a bit of a pity that you just copy-pasted the first 'meru' section to the last part of the song, it's tv-sized already so it was a bit disappointing ._. I know, but the song is really exactly the same... so it would be rather inconsistent to invent a different pattern for each parts... The whole part acts as a unique pattern, so making a 'similar' one is hard as well...
* Please replace your BG with this .jpg file instead, clears up quite a bit of file space. http://puu.sh/ltE1p/70e3047105.jpg idk, but jpg hurts the image quality a bit... but I guess people want that, so yeah.
* Uhmm not sure, but do you still want to add the video? I mean, if you want to, just do it xd. Not sure if that part at 0:42 is going to pass with that naked body of a 5-year-old girl... Umm let's discuss this on the bottom.

Normal

* 00:43:258 (4) - You sure you don't want to put a finish here? It's surprising how many of those hitsounds I missed lol
* 01:11:153 - Actually, the song has changed a bit and most of the cymbals/downbeat is placed on the red tick now, therefore it'd make much more sense to make (3) start here on the red tick instead, because that's where the current downbeat is. Ah ok, thanks for the suggestion.

Hard

* 00:16:416 (1) - Well, I understand that you might want to follow the guitar instead, but please don't skip the cymbal here. Umm would this be ok?
* 01:03:609 - Why did you put a slider end here? This particular vocal is clickable in every single difficulty (exception Easy & this one) because it's so loud. I hope you can make this clickable. But I can't... because those previous mods claim that the 'kira' sound starts at 01:03:521 - this blue tick and they suggest to represent it, so unless I make a triple there (which I don't like to put on this diff at all) or a 1/4 slider and a circle, it's imposible to do both.
* 01:12:732 (1) - Same comment as Light Insane. Uhh... I think your suggestion is good, but since that part is clearly more relaxing than kiais, I want to give players a good resting point. 01:13:258 - I don't think this beat is 'necessarily' clickable for this relaxing part.
* 01:15:188 (3) - 01:31:328 (2) - Optional, but would make the cymbal clickable here too? Will keep for 01:15:188 (3) - and changed 01:31:328 (2) - this

Light Insane

* 01:06:241 (3,4,5) - Would move this one a bit closer to (2), currently the spacing between (2,3) and (5,6) are almost equal and it can be a bit confusing with this low AR. Fixed.
* 01:12:732 (1) - Would prefer shortening the slider and adding a note here. The vocals already ended 1/2 tick earlier and that kick seems to be strong enough for a note. http://puu.sh/ltC1F/520049a768.jpg Same as Hard.

Insane

* 01:12:732 (1) - Same comment as Light Insane. Same as Hard.

Uhm, I have a bit of a problem finding metadata for this. I've got this so far:

Artist: メルル（CV：田村ゆかり）
Romanized Artist: Meruru(CV:Tamura Yukari)
Title: めてお☆いんぱくと
Romanized Title: Meteor*Impact
Source: 俺の妹がこんなに可愛いわけがない。 or 星くず☆うぃっちメルル

I know that 星くず☆うぃっちメルル is a fictional series within Oreimo itself, but the website and probably the only official source (http://www.oreimo-anime.com/1st/music/index.html) states that this track comes from that. It also doesn't say anything above TV Size, opening or ending at all, only 'theme song'.

I don't recall seeing this in the first season of Oreimo, but it has been while since I watched that and nor can I find anything that links to the first season.

The song does appear in episode 15 of the second season, which is 俺の妹がこんなに可愛いわけがない。, including that point at the end. It's used as an insert song rather than an opening or an ending tho...

Don't know where that video comes from either, so I'd definitely get a higher-up to have a good look at the metadata.

Mapset itself looks okay I guess, so after you got some reliable metadata confirmation, feel free to call me back.

1. 00:46:416 (2) - Any chance you could rotate this anticlockwise or curve it to the left a little? It will provide a slightly more even flow from 00:44:662 (1) and also remove any chance that it may overlap with some skinned life bars

1. 01:17:469 (4,5) - This spacing seems pretty excessive for the sound you're mapping here, it's similar in intensity to 01:17:469 (4) but has twice the spacing lol. Not sure how exactly you want to fix this since there's a lot of potential to create weird overlaps, but I feel moving (5) to [272,80] and (6) to [172,204] is more like the kind of spacing you'd want here. You may want to rotate/flip/do something else here as well/instead though

JBHyperion wrote:

I will check this tomorrow, it's quite late now and I don't want to do a half-assed job.

Soon (tm) The time is now.

Easy

1. 00:46:416 (2) - Any chance you could rotate this anticlockwise or curve it to the left a little? It will provide a slightly more even flow from 00:44:662 (1) and also remove any chance that it may overlap with some skinned life bars

Insane

1. 01:17:469 (4,5) - This spacing seems pretty excessive for the sound you're mapping here, it's similar in intensity to 01:17:469 (4) but has twice the spacing lol. Not sure how exactly you want to fix this since there's a lot of potential to create weird overlaps, but I feel moving (5) to [272,80] and (6) to [172,204] is more like the kind of spacing you'd want here. You may want to rotate/flip/do something else here as well/instead though

These are the only things that I could find, so once this is responded to we can get this qualified. /o/

Enon wrote:

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klonoa wrote:

congrats on the qualify!!

Doyak wrote:

klonoa wrote:

congrats on the qualify!!

thanks on the congratulation!!

dylanla12 wrote:

Yay! This creepy song just got ranked. Planning to do otaku lyrics 101 in the summer.

Enon wrote:

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