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  [General]
  

1. Your tag and sourse in easy is different from other diffs.

1. 00:47:971 (1,1) - There should be at least 4 beats between spinner's end and the coming item in easy difficulty (150BPM).
2. 01:15:361 (1,1,2) - Same as above.
3. 00:54:214 - I suppose you can add a note here as there is a hit.
4. 00:57:437 (1,3) - you can delete one anchor point of each slider. x156y192 and x356y192 is redundant.

1. 00:12:323 (3) - Slider reversed for multiple times seems to be difficult for normal player.
2. 00:28:033 (4,5,1) - For normal player, it seems to be difficult as a triple or a double with a slider stacked together. IMO you can change its partern to a short slider or an one-time reverse slider 00:27:227 (1,2,3) - .
3. 00:29:644 (2,3,1) - Same as above. And following items like that.
4. 01:10:729 (1,2) - It seems you miss some sounds here. Besides, it is not suitable for a slider to begin at the red line in normal unless it is necessary.
5. 01:15:261 (1,1) - There should be at least 2 beats between spinner's end and the coming item in normal difficulty (150BPM).
6. 00:15:948 (1) - A clap is needed at the beginning of this slider.

1. 00:12:927 (4,1) - I suppose it's not a good flow. It is a little sharp. If I were to change , I 'll move 00:13:129 (1,2,3,4) - up a little.
2. 00:10:712 (1,2,3,4) - It should be a clap at the end of 00:10:712 (1) - instead of 00:11:517 (3) - .

1. 00:37:297 (1,2,3,4) - Is that a good idea to change SV here? I think it may be interesting. Same as 00:27:227 (1,2,3) -

1. Remove 'Letterbox during breaks' you haven't break time.

1. 00:13:531 (3) - next spacing not 1.10x around. so, move (x:292 y:228) can fix.
2. 00:33:269 (3,1) - not perfect symmetry. (1) delete and (3) cope and paste, and ctrl+H and ctrl+G. you can fix it.
3. 00:52:200 (1) - I think unrankable issue here. need spinner recovery time so, delete this. i was DQed this reason.
   

   I recommend to map the spinners. If you want you can also shorten them and start the new lines properly but make sure to leave ~1 measure between the spinner ending and the next note.

4. 01:17:577 (1) - ^

1. 00:17:157 (1,2,3,4) - (1,4) is symmetry, but, (2,3) Asymmetry. (3) delete and, (2) copy paste and ctrl+H can fix. seems more good.
2. 00:22:393 (1) - add whistle slider end fit this song imo. if fix, of course other diffs!
3. 00:25:213 (3) - move (x:276 y:296) is make symmetry. if fixed this, 00:27:227 (1,2,3) - move (x:379 y:241). fix spacing.
4. 00:36:089 (2) - It's Purposely spacing? not recommend normal diff imo.
5. 01:05:895 (4) - add NC? You was put NC same sound 00:59:451 - . please unity.
6. 01:15:261 (1) - i'm worry spinner recovery time... so, try spinner end 01:17:577 - . or you need ask QAT about this.

1. 00:01:045 (1,3) - really nazi. but, not perfect symmetry.
2. 00:10:712 (1) - not symmetry here? (x:416 y:172) seems nice symmetry.

1. OD bit low imo. try +0.5.
2. 00:51:596 (2,2) - perfect stack please.
3. changed bpm. i recommend add NC.

1. 00:09:101 (1,2,3) - not same DS? of course, it's haven't problem. just i want ask.

1. 00:16:250 (8,1) - What Lasse already pointed out, the transition here is pretty rough. Maybe you could rotate the second stream a bit so that the angle is more flowy?
2. 00:21:990 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - The jump before the kickslider played pretty forced and was unexpected. I would recommend you to do something similar to this 00:09:101 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
3. 01:14:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This pattern is an extreme difficulty spike. The spaced stream plus the giant jump with flow change afterwards are insane. I would recommend you to tone this pattern down a little bit, either by making the stream spacing smaller (so that the circles almost touch each other?) or by reducing the jump to the next stream.
4. 01:17:980 (1,2,3,4) - What Lasse said, these should be made into a repeat slider. There is no way to read the BPM change here.

1. 00:23:904 (4) - 00:24:709 (4) - Clicking on the blue ticks and not clicking on the white ticks feels pretty unintuitive here. I would replace them with two circles.
2. 00:33:974 (8,1) - Hmm, this is the only real stream jump here (after a circle) so it seems pretty out of place in this difficulty... I would recommend you to use regular stream spacing here

• Consider to use OD6?

1. The only real problem I see here is the difficulty gap to Insane. While Insane has a lot of streams (excessive 1/4-tapping) Hard has no instance of 1/4-tapping. 1/4-tapping should atleast be a little bit introduced in this diff... maybe you can replace a few 1/4-repeat-sliders with streams? There is no need to do major changes, because all of the difficulty gaps in the mapset are pretty big, but this one stands out slightly.
2. 01:14:354 (3) - For example I would replace this slider's first half with circles, like this: http://puu.sh/luwgM/8675e36591.jpg Because at the moment it's weird that a multiple-repeat slider is following a single-repeated slider.

• Can you silence the sliderslide sound? It doesn't sound very nice for the kicksliders at high volume in the higher diffs, or for the long sliders in the lower diffs.

Desperate-kun wrote:

[Etude]

1. 00:16:250 (8,1) - Rotated by 5 degrees
2. 00:21:990 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Now it's like previous pattern (actually it has been to be like that, so fixed)
3. 01:14:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Changed.
4. 01:17:980 (1,2,3,4) - hmm... done in another way
   
   [Insane]
   
   00:33:974 (8,1) - Hmm, this is the only real stream jump here (after a circle) so it seems pretty out of place in this difficulty... I would recommend you to use regular stream spacing here Fixed
   [Hard]
   
5. The only real problem I see here is the difficulty gap to Insane. While Insane has a lot of streams (excessive 1/4-tapping) Hard has no instance of 1/4-tapping. 1/4-tapping should atleast be a little bit introduced in this diff... maybe you can replace a few 1/4-repeat-sliders with streams? There is no need to do major changes, because all of the difficulty gaps in the mapset are pretty big, but this one stands out slightly.
   I don't think converting repeat sliders into circles will change anything. Probably it will make the difficulty harder, but the difference between Hard and Insane will be left untouched. My own mappi ng system says that each level of experience allows to deal with only identical difficulties. Long story short, Novice can get only Easy, Middling everything till Normal, Advanced everything till Hard and etc. The difference is great, but fact is fact. Hard difficulty is Hard and Insane is Insane. I would agree with you, if my Insane would be closer to Exteme and Hard closer to normal, in this case yes, it is needed a difficulty inbetween.
   
   01:14:354 (3) -

gameuse wrote:

#modreqs m4m

00:57:437 (1,2,3,4,1) - we typically don't stack 4 times, change it to something like 00:59:048 (1,2,3,4,1) again
Who are "we"? And nope, i wish to keep it like that.

01:12:542 (5,1) - I do not like this jump, it is too far. change 1 position to somewhere like (x:260,y:142) that will make it easier to play
00:25:011 (5,1) - way to big of a gap
00:24:206 (5,1) - this part is a big gap as well at is is not very obvious for the player to see
I see no problems with these.

00:40:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is one example of the balls I do not like, it is very squishy and when you put it towards a combo like. I do not understand anything, what means squishy?
00:39:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it is super confusing and it feels weird. What made you feel like that?

Everything else looks good
Have fun and good luck!

[Overall]
Lead-in changed to 1500

[Etude]
00:22:595 (2) –Personally, I would start the stream here:
Done in another way. The example that you have given increases the spacing, so i made it less "weird".
01:09:521 (9) –New combo here? You did it in the previous parts of the diff and the combo also gets too long imo. I'll have to not agree, since it's a long chromatic scale that goes down, i want to keep the count.

[Insane]
Hp drain has been fixed.

[Hard]
oops. Fixed that end properly

[Normal]
Well. Fixed everything

Charles445 wrote:

You can hear the timing go off every few seconds.
The song is constantly changing BPM and resetting every measure.

The offsets and BPM chosen aren't even good averages of it all.
A more accurate average would be BPM 148.936 and offset 1033, but again that's not accounting for the numerous parts where it clearly goes off.