1. ADVANCED - 4Key (3.01 stars, 791 notes)
2. EXHAUST - 4Key (4.42 stars, 1416 notes)
3. NOVICE - 4Key (2.01 stars, 414 notes)

NlHIL wrote:

[stable]
00:15:174 (15174|2,15841|1) - 00:04:507 (4507|2,5174|1) -
00:25:174 (25174|3) - remove? Removed
00:37:174 - add to 3? I prefer to add 2.
00:47:841 - ^ I prefer to add 2 here, also.
00:50:924 (50924|0) - remove Ummm... How about no? It makes sound there. :3
00:58:091 (58091|2) - I can understand this but what is 01:06:924 (66924|2) - ? 01:06:924 (66924|2) removed.
01:19:091 (79091|1) - I think it should start from 01:19:174 - on your style It starts from 01:19:091 (79091|1). So, still get into it.
01:22:174 - 01:22:841 - 01:32:841 - 01:33:507 - add? Added.
01:39:674 (99674|3) - remove Removed.
[Trembling]
00:29:619 (29619|1) - I hate this one Moved into here : | 0 | | | |
00:34:619 - add Added.
00:36:507 (36507|0) - remove (as 00:47:174 - Removed.
00:58:007 (58007|1,58341|0) - why not jack? Jacked.
01:25:174 (85174|1) - remove? Removed.
01:42:507 (102507|3,102619|3,102730|0) - how about 424? Feels better.
[Wobble]
00:21:841 - add? How about no?
01:01:174 - add ^ I removed another one like this due to consistency.

nice map... Owh.. Thank you.. (~^w^~)

jakads wrote:

Hi, Lam-! Requested from my queue!

Huh, this map doesn't have much mods
Try requesting more! I think this map has potential

Column: 1|2|3|4

OVERALL

Since this is SDVX music, try setting difficulty names to NOVICE, ADVANCED, and EXHAUST.

Also, mp3 should be either 128kbps or 192kbps. Yours is 256kbps.
Here is 192kbps version for you: https://online-audio-converter.com/d/s4AWhKI1cG.mp3

Ummm.. is it okay to change it ? Would the map be corrupted or not ?
I'll check the assurement by asking another persons. And anyway, why should it be 192kbps ? (just my curiosity)

Wobble

00:20:841 - This SV is little tricky, at least it tricked me
Please remove this SV or make it 0.9x or something For this one, I want the 1/3 beats to be the same space between the 1/4 beats. So I might consider it and will wait for another's opinion

00:01:619 (1619|3,1799|2,1813|1) - I think it should be all 1/8, so 00:01:757 - and 00:01:799 - I plan to use the piano sound, but this makes it better

00:05:396 (5396|3) - Move to 3 (unnecessary jack) If I move it to 3, there'll still be jack right after that beat. So, I prefer to change the pattern and it feels better.

00:15:841 (15841|0,15952|2,16063|0,16174|2,16285|0,16396|2) - Move some to 2 Moved.

00:18:841 (18841|1,18841|0) - Move to 3, 4 Some moved and prefer to change the pattern.

00:35:132 - Add (move some around it) How about No ? I don't hear a sound right there. :3

00:45:007 (45007|3,45007|1) - Move to 1, 3 Niiice.

00:45:174 (45174|1,45341|1,45424|0,45507|1,45674|1,45757|0) - Too much left hand, move some to 3 or 4 I felt that too.. :v It feels nice when it's balance rather than just pushing one side of your hand and let the other one rest :v Anyway, moved.

00:48:507 - ~ 00:49:174 - : SV Suggestion! Umm.. I think that wouldn't be challenging. So, I'll keep it in that way.

00:48:507 - 0.3x (minimum)
00:49:174 - 1x

00:59:174 (59174|3,59174|0,59257|0,59257|2,59341|1,59341|3,59424|0,59424|3) - Weird to play
How about changing like following?

Ok, changed.

01:28:174 (88174|3,88174|2,88257|3,88257|2,88341|2,88341|3,88424|2,88424|3) - Too tough
It seems like I heard nothing but just notes that are pressed the same for about 4 times. So I'll put it as a jack.
But I'll consider it and see what they think of it too.

That's all! Thank you for modding, jakads! Even a little of your modding could improve this map and I got something from it.

GL!! I think this map has many potential Thank you

Lam- wrote:

jakads wrote:

OVERALL

Since this is SDVX music, try setting difficulty names to NOVICE, ADVANCED, and EXHAUST.
It is recommended to follow this if you want it to be ranked

Also, mp3 should be either 128kbps or 192kbps. Yours is 256kbps.
Here is 192kbps version for you: https://online-audio-converter.com/d/s4AWhKI1cG.mp3

Ummm.. is it okay to change it ? Would the map be corrupted or not ?
I'll check the assurement by asking another persons. And anyway, why should it be 192kbps ? (just my curiosity)

If you just replace mp3 in the Song folder, it is fine.
But other people who have downloaded your map should re-download though. Make sure to write that in the song description.
Or not, your preference

Also, the reason that it has to be 192kbps is because of this tricky thing called Ranking Criteria.
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Audio
It says: The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps