Easy-00:59:645 (1,2) - We tend to make the flow in lower diffs a lot more linear. Try to move (2) so atleast players can see the follow points more easily.
Normal-00:47:511 (1,2,1) - would try something like this
http://puu.sh/l2Jw0/530c30cdc5.jpg Looks less messy i think
-01:07:061 (6,2) - would be cool if you avoid these random overlaps
-01:15:825 - i feel a bit lost in this section because you were mapping these sounds similar to trumpet so why arent you mapping 01:18:185 - 01:20:039 - Makes more sense if you map them i believe
-01:41:443 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think this is too much single tapping compared to the rest of the diff xd, converting notes into slider helps
-01:48:185 - another weird section because, 01:48:859 (2) - ,01:50:881 (1) - tail, 01:54:252 (2) - ,etc are mapping nothing imo. 01:48:690 (2) - should be at 01:48:690 - , using this rhythm may work too
http://puu.sh/l2KdM/1f1729760b.jpgHard-00:30:825 (1) - cancel nc?
-you could unify a bit more your distance so patterns like 00:56:106 (2,3,4) - use a single ds. Or 00:59:645 (1,2,3,4) - where every note uses different distance even tho sounds are similar
-01:12:117 (1,2) - sounds more like
http://puu.sh/l2KBI/81c7ec527d.jpg to me
Insane-01:10:937 (2,1) - Distance is a bit too large compared to what's next. Kinda annoying to play
-01:30:319 (5,6,1) - equal ds would be cool
-01:32:848 (3,4) - large jump into a linear short jump 01:33:185 (5,1) - doesnt feel too nice. Decreasing distance is fine
-01:41:106 (4,5,1) - similar to before, but what makes no much sense is that (1) is the closer to the prev object when it should be emphasized
-01:46:162 (5,6,7,8,9) - shouldnt this be 1/8 like 01:35:376 (3) - ?
-I pointed a few examples but distance could be more polished by using the same basis for instance
extra-00:59:645 (1,2) - little overlap is kinda ugly xd
-01:23:915 (1,2,3,4) - this is actually 1/4, dunno where the 1/3 came from
-01:29:308 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:40:095 (1,2,3,4,5) - stream feels so randomly placed. Like the whole map is triples at most, using stream just here is weird
-01:37:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 1 to 2 is too big compared to the rest of the notes, then suddenly distance is decreased with 5-6
-01:46:162 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/8(?
-Not sure how to mod this diff, jumps feel placed just to be hard. The first kiai uses a lot of 1/4 sliders while the rest doesnt do it as often. The flow of some patterns can be better, for example 00:59:308 (1,2,1,2) - you have to click in 180° angle which feels unconfortable in addtion that the slider shape doesnt flow correctly with the next pattern.
-01:26:612 - This kiai felt actually nice tbh
Also in general, a lot of sliders can be much neater, try not exaggerating sliders' curves. For example, the difference between these
http://puu.sh/l2J7I/ec1c800642.jpg is really noticiable. It's something subjective but easy to do better imo. This guide helps too in case you want to improve them
t/208596gl<3