thank youSetz wrote:
[General][Easy]
- Like someone else said, I don't know about the BG being NSFW or what, I guess since there is no pantsu visible its fine? I dont fucking know anymore, the rules just become more and more stupid with time. you should ask some QATs about this.
[Normal]
- 00:12:671 (2) - I really don't know about using 1/2 in easy, this has been grounds for DQ in the past, I distinctly remember one of kibbleru's maps getting smacked down for this. although you might be able to get away with it due to BPM. but I wouldnt do it just to be safe. but, if you decide to keep, you should rotate this to improve flow and aesthetics, something like this
- 00:29:915 (4) - ^ same deal here, well, I will offer a suggestion that doesn't use the 1/2 slider. starting at 00:28:970 (3) -
well I will stop mentioning this now, its really up to you if you want to try your luck.- 01:06:529 (4) - the curve on this makes the flow after the reverse kind of uncomfortable, maybe remove the curve and re position 5 like this?
- 01:24:482 (2) - copy pasta? lololol same suggestion as before for flow yep, fixed on previous too for 1/2 sliders i think they are fine as long they have 1/1 gap to next/before objects
[Hard]
- alot of rhythms could be reworked here so that the strong beats arent on slider ends. example 00:07:947 (1) - 00:09:836 (5) - 00:11:962 (1) - etc hmm cant fix for 00:07:947 (1) - 00:09:836 (5) - but fixed for 00:11:962 (1) -
actually this is normal so it doesnt really a problem- 00:21:175 (2,3) - can make this overlap look nicer by moving 3 up some
- 00:38:183 (1,2) - ^
- 01:00:151 (5,1) - ^
- 00:54:482 (3,4) - would look nicer if 4 was blanketed with 3
- 01:17:395 (3,4) - ^
- 01:05:112 (2,5) - move 5's tail so that it is parallel with 2
Not much else to say about the rest, except that I strongly agree with pishi's points for both of the insane GDs
- 00:08:419 (2,3) - double here, but triple here 00:11:962 (2,3,4) - ? maybe some consistency would be nice here. since the trumpet pitch sounds are different ;_;
- 00:24:954 (1,2,3) - dont you think the triple fits better at 00:24:836 - where there's a strong sound on the blue tick? yep, i was thinking about that, thanks 4 reminding
- 00:32:277 (7) - slider end on strong downbeat makes me cry.
- 00:37:592 (3) - is this clap intended? o.O yep since the drum at here needs a hitsound.. maybe clap is just too weird.. changed to drum sampleset
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