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good luck ~
edit : oh i started mod this from yesterday so im sorry if i already say what you had changed before
Insane
- Raise OD to 8 or 8,5.. this is insane diff afterall
- 00:09:364 (4,5,6) - somehow same spacings play a bit too easy and boring for me. i think just increase the shape a bit like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3898913
- 00:32:254 (6) - i would say move to 336,360 for give a movement to emphasize the vocal, it's high tone afterall so i think stack just play a bit weird
- 00:33:988 (2) - just for design i would say to curve the slider a bit down, just somehow see straight slider here suddenly a bit weird
- 00:38:150 - really not map piano here? altho you look following vocal here but piano is loud and important to map
- 00:46:473 - until 01:04:508 - somehow i cant understand about all your clap hitsounds here
- 00:50:635 (2) - hmm i kinda dislike your tail position here since it's near with previous slider's tail. look not really well for me. i would say move the tail position to 188,48 and if you agree with that, move 00:51:329 (3) - to 92,92
- 01:06:589 (1) - drum finish on head would be great
- 01:23:583 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - NC all of them because increasing the spacings
- 01:30:780 - add circle, the music is loud and important for dnb style
- 01:32:254 (4) - in tail sampleset soft please, the music has no music and hitnormal sounds annoying
- 01:32:601 (5) - same as above
- 01:36:242 (5) - 0,98x spacing after tail is so.. somehow not really well to play, after you did a jump to catch this slider. i would say move this slider like http://puu.sh/l5j0A/dec5eddb13.jpg
- 01:38:236 - the music is loud here so imo this time should be mapped. i would suggest a slider from here until 01:38:410 -
- 01:39:017 - same as above but for this time i will suggest add circle instead
- 01:41:098 - a sound tick for this time and blue tick is same so if you map that blue tick, i would say map the red tick as well , 01:40:924 (5) - end the slider at red tick and add circle in blue tick?
- 01:43:265 - just curious why you ignore to map drum here when it sounds so strong
- 01:49:942 (2) - hmm finish somehow sounds so loud and not really well to hear for me. i would say remove it since the music itself only a drum
- 01:55:838 (6) - this low spacing definitely plays bad for me, ugh, according your flow.. i cant suggest a better place here. let u to decide by yourself
- 01:57:225 (4) - same as 01:32:254 (4) -
- 02:28:179 (8) - cant read it because almost all body covered by previous slider
- 02:30:780 (7) - 184,268 to keep your stream flow pls
- 02:33:641 (4,1) - weird spacing gap, better make jump or normal spacing or stack them
- 02:44:652 (8) - 340,320 to make better flow on stream
- 03:18:554 - map pls. tick sound so loud
- 04:13:612 - 04:14:393 - are same with 01:38:236 - and 01:39:017 -
good luck ~
edit : oh i started mod this from yesterday so im sorry if i already say what you had changed before